PORN THREAD

[Anonymous No.3149205]

Last Thread: >>3138965

Post your current erotic drawings and paintings here and provide helpful criticism and advice to others!

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Questions about references for drawing porn will be answered.

[Anonymous No.3149293]

[Anonymous No.3149294]

[Anonymous No.3149483]

>>3149293
The noses; especially the one on the girl, are very unappealing. The nostril is too high and the crease of the nose is unnecessary(and also too high.

The bodies look pretty good asides from the man's thighs, both of their arms being overly long, and the woman's breasts (unless they're meant to be implants.)

I do believe you have potential. A lot of the critique you receive at times is overly harsh, but it's true when they say you need to work on your faces and heads.

[Anonymous No.3149508]

Scanned sketch...transformed it a bit so her tailbone area looks messed up. Shes supposed to have shoes on but i wanted to get the feet drawn first. No ref so i'm just eyeballing proportions.

[Anonymous No.3149519]

>>3149483
i see what you mean, nezora's arm in particular seems really long, perhaps i might go back and fix that, and the noses could prolly be simplified so as to not distract, i wanna ask, because i tried to get it right, are the heads at least the right size, cause they seemed fine to me but as has been established, i can be a bit blind about that

[Anonymous No.3149580]

>>3149293
>>3149294
make your art a favor and break all mirrors in your house

no selfies too

[Anonymous No.3149587]

>>3149293
If you made the nose less witchy that woman's face would probably be the most appealing one you've done so far.

[Anonymous No.3149609]

>>3149587
so a more rounded end to it, ironic since she is a witch, but i get what you mean

[Anonymous No.3149847]

>>3149519
The scale of the heads you've been drawing recently have been getting better, but the facial features themselves are too big (. If you either made the head larger, or the features smaller it would probably look better.

[Anonymous No.3149852]

>>3149847
oooook, thanks, that's actually pretty usefull, cause i was making the features larger on purpose, i'll see if i can try and make em a little smaller

[Anonymous No.3149907]

>>3149293
>>3149294
i like you because you have determination, but seriously stop using yourself as ref or atleast use someone else for the head.lern how to draw attractive people and then make them ugly if you want to.

[Anonymous No.3149913]

only erotic thing I got right now

[Anonymous No.3150006]

>>3149913
why do you have the need to show it tho?
go to the beginners thread and show something non erotic.

[Anonymous No.3150012]

>>3150006
>porn thread
>post porn
>why do you have to post porn?
What?

[Anonymous No.3150089]

[Anonymous No.3150092]

>>3150089

>>3149332

[Anonymous No.3150152]

does this count as porn?
didn't plan ahead so framing an legibility in terms of what i wanted out of the image is a let down
not really into being the choker so much as the chokee so need to put more work into researching what the choker enjoys visually

[Anonymous No.3150153]

A trap's butt

[Anonymous No.3150166]

>>3150152
how do you live with yourself?

[Anonymous No.3150179]

>>3150153
Why's it so long

[Anonymous No.3150180]

>>3150179
Doesn't really seem that long, but other than that idk :/

[Anonymous No.3150182]

>>3150166
i have a roommate

[Anonymous No.3150193]

>>3150179
You know what? I just adjusted it a little and I guess it was a bit elongated. My bad.

[Anonymous No.3150230]

>>3150153
adjusted and repainted

[Anonymous No.3150235]

>>3150012
I was implying it's pretty garbage.

[Anonymous No.3150236]

>>3150230
acquire taste.

[Anonymous No.3150410]

>>3149508
Like the face and feet

[Anonymous No.3150563]

>>3150235
Yeah but why is it garbage?

[Anonymous No.3150698]

This will have to do. I'll get better next time.

[Anonymous No.3150878]

Leg is too long . I'd like to make the expression more interesting

[Anonymous No.3150885]

>>3150166

[Anonymous No.3150946]

>>3150152
then i went an sketched an infinitely better face in my sketchbook this morning lol

gonna try and study more of fishine and asanagi cause i love fishine's eyes to death and asanagi seems to love drawing people who love bein strangled to death

>>3150885
what you're doing is cute but nazis still make me :c
even if they're being strangled to death for sexual gratification

>>3150166
>>3150182
here's an actual serious non-joke answer as well: i've found excising my unhealthy desires through art helps alleviate much of my mental duress. it sure as hell won't work for everybody and if you've got problems please seek professional help but drawing a self representative character performing the actions my mind used to anxiously obsess over has helped me in my recovery from my eating disorders and issues with self harm. sorry for the blog post but hey, if this manages to help someone that'd be neat. or maybe they'll just develop some kind of fetish for being roughly manhandled and choked out... which isn't that healthy either but at least then we can kinda feel good about feeling bad ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

[Anonymous No.3151034]

>>3149205
Last digit

[Anonymous No.3151074]

[Anonymous No.3151081]

>>3150698
LOL

[Anonymous No.3151198]

>>3150698
Stop wasting your time on polishing turds. At least on the turds you know are turds. This is a complete waste of time. Spend more time doing perspective and gesture studies instead.

[Anonymous No.3151201]

>>3151198
>Spend more time doing perspective and gesture studies instead.

now that is a waste of time

[Anonymous No.3151209]

>>3151074
Not sure why it was deleted but you have solid drawing skills. You will get faster once you practice more on your shorthands.

[Anonymous No.3151211]

>>3151198
I disagree. I think finishing your work to completion is also a skill. I know lots of artist who don't know how to go beyond a sketch.

[Anonymous No.3151316]

>>3150698
i love the devils, great idea

[Anonymous No.3151382]

Doodeedoo

[Anonymous No.3151387]

>>3151034
Nice try, faggot.

[Anonymous No.3151407]

>>3151387
>>3151034
The plot thickens

[Anonymous No.3151454]

Something I finished recently. Anatomy's a bit wonky I think but I'll study some more.

[Anonymous No.3151468]

>>3151211
Oh, sure, it's a skill, but it's also a waste of time when your fundamentals are bad and you should reinforce them.
There's a certain sequence which is the best for quicker skill adoption.
1. Perspective study (still life and non organic geometry studies)
2. Lineart Figure drawing
3. Grayscale value study
4. Color theory

Sure, you can mix stuff up a bit, but this is the best sequence to learn fast.
There's a reason all atelier courses use this approach.

[Anonymous No.3151472]

>>3151454
Learn how a pelvis works.

[Anonymous No.3151480]

>>3151468
I agree with that approach. But I also think if someone want's to polish a piece of their work you shouldn't criticize them for trying. Criticize what they got wrong instead.

[Anonymous No.3151483]

>>3151472
Noted.

[Anonymous No.3151490]

>>3151454
I'm also a fan of that style of hatching, but maybe try to keep it away from the softer parts of the body like her breasts. It makes them look a big saggy or scarred.

[Anonymous No.3151494]

>>3151490
Thanks, I was a little uncertain about it as well once I finished the piece. I'll make sure to be mindful of it next time.

[Anonymous No.3151553]

>>3151387
i was trying to use this pick as my reference, but i went too far, be happy because im gonna kill myself.

[Anonymous No.3151568]

>>3151454
I'm not sure if this was intentional, but it looks less like she's flexing, and more like she's making animugirl nyan hands.

[Anonymous No.3152065]

>>3150878
Face is really cute but she looks kind of like somebody walked in on her and she's trying to think of what to say. What kind of feeling are you going for in the expression?

As a side note, the back feels a bit flat compared to the rest. It might be the angle.

[Anonymous No.3152125]

>>3152065
I made some changes and tried rendering th back a bit. I don't have much in mind for the face other than "cute", but I like the scenario you built around it and might try to work with that

[Anonymous No.3152135]

>>3152125
Oh hey fisher. I like it, but as the other anon said, have an idea and make it resonate through your hands as you draw.
In the sketch the tail was flat with lighter outline but now you increased its contrast, which steals attention away from the actually important area, her back and shoulders.

[Anonymous No.3152140]

>>3152125
keep up with the pedo shit, sicko.

[Anonymous No.3152190]

I just got a tablet and finished this,
I need some critique please

[Anonymous No.3152424]

>>3152135
Thanks for pointing out the tail. I have trouble drawing with a clear purpose, usually I'll just mess around until something looks good. I need to try drawing with a clearer idea of what I want and stick with it until the end

[Anonymous No.3152519]

>>3152125
That's a nice butt, blog?

[Anonymous No.3152539]

I SUMMON KYLE

[Anonymous No.3152583]

Hey guys, this is probably my current end game. What do you think? I'd like to get some critique especially about the coloring and shading.

[Anonymous No.3152608]

is fur porn allowed here?

[Anonymous No.3152612]

>>3152608
i dont think it is.

[Anonymous No.3152621]

>>3152583
I'd say overall the values aren't too different so no particular part of the image pops. The most contrast in the image is from the rim lighting you have, but everything has a rim light so again nothing stands out.
I see the light is supposed to be behind her, but it probably wouldn't have hurt to bump the fruit forward (or whatever you wanted us to focus on)
The color is ok, but it's about 50% red 50% green, try for a little pop of complementary next time rather than equal amounts.

I hope that helps somehow.

[Anonymous No.3152628]

>>3152621
It helps a lot. Thanks!

[Anonymous No.3152670]

>>3152190
>...and then she farts!

[Anonymous No.3152672]

>>3152539
summon keppok, teal, simmon, or a mod

[Anonymous No.3152875]

[Anonymous No.3152878]

>>3152875

[Anonymous No.3153066]

>>3152583
Hows this?

[Anonymous No.3153071]

>>3153066
not the other guy but I think the colors in the original looked better. I think you could keep a bit of the color in the fruit she's reaching toward just to make it stand out a bit more

[Anonymous No.3153100]

>>3153066
Sorry anon, but I prefer my original version. I think the bad readability has more to do with brightness than saturation. I guess I could make the character pop out more with some depth of field. The composition is pretty poor and the branches combined with the light coming from the treetops make everything hard to read.
Lesson learned I guess.

[Anonymous No.3153799]

>>3151382

blog pls

[Anonymous No.3153825]

Apologies for this. I have a question on /beg/ and i thought since i am eventually going for porn you guys might be willing and able to give me some advice.

The post in question
>>3153012

As you will see i dont even know what exactly i am asking for, i have no direction in how to study painting believable colours / values and painting from reference is no help since i dont have any frame of knowledge where i could be placing any observations i do while painting.

pls halp

[Anonymous No.3153884]

>>3153825

you're on the right track. one thing you're missing is dark values; notice how much more contrast the photo that you're copying has than you're painting. you want to use the full range of values from dark to light. also, notice that, unlike a lot of things, skin color usually gets more saturated as it turns into shadow (due to sub-surface scattering). If you're painting flesh and it starts to look muddy and dead, it's almost always because your shadows aren't saturated enough - that's something you're running into there.

what you're doing looks pretty good though. keep going forward on that. most of painting is just mileage.

[Anonymous No.3154292]

>>3153884
Thanks. Outside input is invaluable when i spent too much time grinding away.

[Anonymous No.3154336]

[Anonymous No.3154337]

Pose is stiff and she looks like a doll
Torso doesn't align with the angle of the bed
Legs look a bit too big for the body
The shadows show that you're thinking of the light source which is good
I'm not sure if you're going for it or not but this feels more like artsy nude than erotic nude.

Keep it up and don't forget to work on those hands and feet

[Anonymous No.3154341]

>>3154336
Pose is stiff and she looks like a doll
Torso doesn't align with the angle of the bed
Legs look a bit too big for the body
The shadows show that you're thinking of the light source which is good
I'm not sure if you're going for it or not but this feels more like artsy nude than erotic nude.

Keep it up and don't forget to work on those hands and feet

[Anonymous No.3154462]

Guys what is this muscle that's sticking out?

[Anonymous No.3154467]

>>3154462

Adductor longus I think

[Anonymous No.3154468]

>>3154462
Boner

[Anonymous No.3154473]

>>3154462
It's a tendon.

[Anonymous No.3154521]

>>3154341
hey thanks! any ideas on getting less stiff poses?

[Anonymous No.3154529]

>>3153066
Human eye is built to associate high contrast with danger, and the last thing you want to do when in danger is the thing that makes you the most vulnerable - procreation (fucking).
There's a reason artists who want their work to have sex appeal aim for softer colors and smooth transitions.

>>3154462
>>3154467
It's gracilis muscle. You can remember it by the 'graceful' line it creates on the inner thigh when ready for sex.

>>3154473
There are no tendons without a muscle.

[Anonymous No.3154534]

>>3154529
>>3154462
Also, there are two pairs of tendons you need to remember to draw this area properly - one you have here, the adductors that insert to the inner thigh and create a plane change that makes vag look like a box, and a second tendon that sepparates vag and a-hole - the hamstring group that inserts under the knee. This one is important, 'cause it creates a funnel that makes the dick slide into either of the holes. Both tendons are more visible the more spread apart her legs are.
Look for those two landmarks the next time you browse porn pics.

[Anonymous No.3154542]

>>3154534
Can you name those two specific muscles? I want to look up more of it

[Anonymous No.3154547]

>>3154534
thanks...i'm studying hampton and he just groups all the inner muscles as a bubble or triangle so I couldn't tell

[Anonymous No.3155215]

i forgot to re upload the fix, i tweaked her nose, and her arm and hand>>3149847

[Anonymous No.3155320]

>>3154542
The adductors originate higher, at pubic crest. Gracilis is the outermost muscle, so it's the one most visible and least covered by fat.
The hamstrings originate on the part of pelvis that looks like spetacles, at the botom, with tendinosus being the most visible one when the legs are spread apart.

You don't need to know the latin names and individual muscles. The mistake most artists do is just have a very vague idea that hamstrings tuck under glutes - which won't work once the model spreads their legs.
Porn photos are a goldmine of reference.

[Anonymous No.3155323]

>>3155320
*semitendinosus
also a ref for hamstrings:
>http://www.dovemed.com/uploads/images/Pulled_Hamstring.max-1000x800.png

[Anonymous No.3155326]

Which should I go with? I like left as it's simple and right as it's more dynamic.

[Anonymous No.3155334]

>>3155320
>Also, there are two pairs of tendons you need to remember to draw this area properly - one you have here, the adductors that insert to the inner thigh and create a plane change that makes vag look like a box
Is this the gracialis?

>a second tendon that sepparates vag and a-hole - the hamstring group that inserts under the knee. This one is important, 'cause it creates a funnel that makes the dick slide into either of the holes. Both tendons are more visible the more spread apart her legs are.
Is this the hamstring (semimembranosus+semitendinosus+biceps femoris)?

Just confiriming

[Anonymous No.3155373]

>>3155326
I went with the left one

[Anonymous No.3155378]

>>3155334
Yea, you got it right homie.
Just learn the technicalities once, where all the groups insert, how they layer and how glutes swing over the thigh... Then filter out all that's unnecessary for drawing it well and look for that in real world reference.

[Anonymous No.3155538]

>>3155326
I'm shit at composing scenes but I would think the center one, as the left one has a tangent issue with the knee and the cheek. The right one might have a bit too much of an overlap with the face.

[Anonymous No.3155543]

>>3155538
>tangent issue
I see what you mean. I already went with left but maybe creating a gap will fix it.

[Anonymous No.3155817]

>>3150235
it a tower princess faggot

[Anonymous No.3155840]

>>3152125
I think a simple story for this scene is that it was "cleaning" itself when someone walked in and spooked it. If that were the case, thought, I'd recommend having the string of drool flow in that direction to give motion and better illustrate that story.

But it's also fine the way it is. I'm just throwing out shit that comes to mind. Your work is great.

[Anonymous No.3156141]

>>3152125
Blog please?

[Anonymous No.3156154]

>>3155817
more like garbage princess, scrub.

[Anonymous No.3156168]

any proportional changes before i go on trying to fix any anatomy in this one? i know left foot is too big and i'm gonna fix the hands in next section. is the raised arm too long? stuff like this. also tell me if i could improve the over all pose. (specifically in the hip region i'm not to sure about it. )

[Anonymous No.3156171]

>>3154462
>>3156168
thanks i was going to be looking for an image almost like this almost for my next section of this. it will be helpful.

[Anonymous No.3156230]

[Anonymous No.3156615]

>>3156168
I think you're right that the raised arm might be too long. I usually try to envision how the arm would look if it was placed at the subject's side -- the elbow should appear where the ribcage ends, about where you've drawn it for her right arm. I really dig the drawing, keep it up!

[Anonymous No.3156621]

practice stuff

[Anonymous No.3156625]

>>3156621
genuinely fucking disgusting

[Anonymous No.3156626]

>>3156625

crit?

[Anonymous No.3156628]

>>3156626
You can't teach aesthetic sense.

[Anonymous No.3156632]

>>3156628

k

[Anonymous No.3156633]

>>3156621
how tf is the humerus bone attached to that miniscule ribcage?

[Anonymous No.3156635]

>>3156633

I dunno. redline?

[Anonymous No.3156647]

>>3150698
>>3155215

[Anonymous No.3156673]

>>3156647
>>3150698

[Anonymous No.3156681]

>>3156647
thanks mate, i'll take the face thing on and try and use that

[Anonymous No.3156731]

>>3156673

wow that is really nice rendering. lots of soft round brushes? love the reflective lights as well on the waist

[Anonymous No.3156768]

>>3152519
>>3156141

sorry. thatfisher.tumblr.com

[Anonymous No.3156825]

>>3156615
thanks ! i will fix it up.

[Anonymous No.3156883]

I'm considering entering into the next futaket

[Anonymous No.3156934]

[Anonymous No.3156935]

>>3156768
Thanks!

[Anonymous No.3156944]

>>3156883
Orange what? Also cute drawing

>>3156934
Princess peach's forearm and/or wrist needs some adjustment

[Anonymous No.3156945]

>>3152583
Blog?

[Anonymous No.3156953]

>>3156944
Thanks! I will adjust it.

[Anonymous No.3156961]

>>3156944
>Orange what?
屋(や)

Turns a word into a store for that word. So 本屋 would be a book store and オレンジ屋 would be a place that sells oranges. I noticed that a bunch of other circles used that kind of pattern for their names so I just went with it.

[Anonymous No.3157022]

>>3155215
Pose and forms are stiff. Practice gesture and anatomy. It is clear you are simply copying poses from other porn works.

[Anonymous No.3157293]

I SUMMON KYLE

[Anonymous No.3157413]

>>3156768
How old are you? Who did you study? How long have you have been drawing? Any other tips? Sorry /beg/ here.

[Anonymous No.3157439]

>>3157413
go be a creep elsewhere.

[Anonymous No.3157446]

[Anonymous No.3157486]

>>3157446
overall anatomy could use some work but I love the gesture/shorthand in the hair pulling one.

[Anonymous No.3157490]

>>3157486
Thanks. Yeah, left one turned out better.

[Anonymous No.3157501]

my hairy loli oc

[Anonymous No.3157538]

>>3157413
ignore >>3157439
22. jjfrenchie, koki, jeffr, ban, and inoue kiyoshirou are the porn artists I try to learn from. 10+ years of fun and about 3 of more serious practice after I found this place. If you want advice other than practice I think it helps to surround yourself with good art, try to figure out whats wrong with bad art, and take some time to think what your trying to draw before starting

[Anonymous No.3157544]

>>3157501
blog?

[Anonymous No.3157547]

>>3157544
hope that wasn't ironic :/
http://yev-san.tumblr.com/

[Anonymous No.3157583]

>>3157501
Work on hour hands, bro.

Also, she looks more like a short-stack than a loli. I think it's because her legs are too short. Maybe this is what you want but I just thought I'd point it out.

[Anonymous No.3157605]

He's the best.

[Anonymous No.3157616]

>>3157605
Does he use references for these? I want to get good without references

[Anonymous No.3157640]

>>3157616
why?

[Anonymous No.3157689]

>>3157640
I should clarify that I want to get good to the point where I no longer need references. References are a necessary stepping stone.

[Anonymous No.3157693]

>>3157605
I think kyle's weakness is his faces, but it's very very good otherwise.

[Anonymous No.3157912]

[Anonymous No.3158001]

>>3157912

[Anonymous No.3158007]

>>3157547
thanks, no I find your stuff very erotic

[Anonymous No.3158011]

>>3150230
>>3150153
your shape design lacks appeal. too many of the elements have similar sizes. i struggle with the same thing, so i cant give much useful advice beyond that, but check out this clip for a primer: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZluGXgpdJj4

>>3156230
careful with the value range. you don't need huge jumps in value to make hard edges register. also, lighting can easily start to look blown out if you don't use highlights sparingly, which i think is an issue with your pic.

hopefully the partial paintover helps illustrate both the form and the lighting crit. notice how the hard edges of her breast and armpit disappear as forms flow into each other.

[Anonymous No.3158014]

colors look okay? i'm trying to be a bit more careful with my use of saturation.

[Anonymous No.3158023]

>>3157605
the best at what? feet? debatable. porn art in general? don't make me laugh, pleb. his faces are hit and miss all the time.

kyle's good, period.

[Anonymous No.3158024]

>>3157640
because being unable to draw without strongly relying on references is the worst thing for any porn artist that wants to make good stylized art.

[Anonymous No.3158091]

>>3157605
Kyle if you're reading this please draw girls getting fucked by black men. Please, you'd be so good at it.

[Anonymous No.3158144]

>>3158014
Looks good! if that blue thing is supposed to be glowing you could probably use more light around the left shoulder area, but if it's not just keep at it.

[Anonymous No.3158181]

>>3158014
Her left breast appears to be growing a tumor.

[Anonymous No.3158212]

>>3158144
yep, its supposed to glow. ill add some more lighting to make it clear.
>>3158181
hmm, guess i can rein in the spillage a bit.

thanks anons.

[Anonymous No.3158249]

Does this Mei face look ok? I've been staring at it for so long i cant tell anymore. She's got an odd fucking face. I had extreme trouble with her lips, jawline, and eyes. Shes supposed to be Chinese but has giant Disney eyes. I'm not trying to duplicate the game version exactly, just kind of get a more realistic impression. Haven't done the hair yet and there's more finishing touches i haven't added yet.

[Anonymous No.3158268]

>>3158011
thank you, that paintover is supercool

[Anonymous No.3158279]

>>3158014
You follow Rupert Everton?
You might like Rupert Everton.

[Anonymous No.3158297]

>>3153066

I agree with >>3152621 that the values should be worked on. You need to start thinking more about your composition as well.

The first version definitely reads better than the second, I don't think you needed to darken the branches or boost the saturation so much.

Take the whole image into black and white tones, and look at it that way. You have the exact same grey tone everywhere, and the highlights and shadows are all the same value.

I tried to quickly show here what I think would help. You should try to establish a background, foreground and mid-ground with tones. Make everything that you want to go away from the viewer lightest (the branches), and what is close to the viewer darkest (the lemon). Also make the tones feel more unified, one area of shadow/highlight shouldn't be equally strong as all the rest.

To establish a focal point, one part of the piece should have the strongest contrast between light/dark tones. You may also want to give that area a bit more saturation and desaturate the background.

Hope this helps a bit!

[Anonymous No.3158303]

>>3158279
oh yeah, i follow him. even did some studies of his work. he's so good. can't think of anyone that is able to convey fleshy softness like he does.

[Anonymous No.3158428]

>>3157538
Do you ever blend?

[Anonymous No.3158661]

Requesting porn of lizard stripper.

[NoseBro No.3158664]

>>3158014
blog?

[Anonymous No.3158677]

>>3158661
I don't think request are fulfilled in this thread.

[Anonymous No.3158930]

Can I get some advice on where to improve? Pretty /beg/ and I've really only practiced full body gesture drawing up to now. Is CTRL+Paint a good place to learn digital painting even if I'm using SAI? What do you think of Reiq and his tutorials?

[Anonymous No.3158940]

How does this pose/angle look so far?

[Anonymous No.3158945]

>>3149205
Was told to come here from /aco/

Just a little something I whipped up in my spare time. I've been trying to get more into porn drawings recently, drawing my fetishes and what-not.

For some reason whenever I scan my drawings in, they lose a lot of their luster/saturation and look more "washed out". Not sure why.

Anyway, here's Mulan's grandmother.

[Anonymous No.3158948]

>>3158940
blog?

[Anonymous No.3159014]

>>3158940
very interesting, I like it

[Anonymous No.3159052]

>>3158948
https://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=2564922

[Anonymous No.3159131]

I'm trying to practice different angles so I don't keep repeating the same poses. Feet are also something I struggle with.

>>3158940
That's looking fantastic so far.

[Anonymous No.3159167]

>>3159131
>>3159014
Thanks. I'm not sure how I feel about the hair at this point since I'm not really used to doing upside down hair, though.

[Anonymous No.3159174]

>>3158297
Helps a lot. Thanks so much for taking the time for this!

[Anonymous No.3159177]

>>3159167
A bit to much detail on the dick, perhaps?

[Anonymous No.3159180]

>>3151211
I am one of those guys, do you have any advice for us lowly folk cursed with pergectionism and incompetence?

[Anonymous No.3159183]

>>3159177
Maybe. I kind of want to turn it into something mechanical to make the situation more in-character but I can't think of something other than just a robot dick.

[Anonymous No.3159287]

>>3159183
That would be cool.
You could just draw smth like an air drill handle, or pic related stuck to a pipe for her to sit on, or maybe if you make it subtle, it would be up to the viewer's imagination whether she's looking for some fun or just a tool she lost (which might require to give her a skirt).

If you do choose to simply go with a robot dick, just don't make it a human dick made out of metal. Think about construction tools, a car shift lever or something a bit bulbous and alien-looking. Here's some reference:
>http://images.esellerpro.com/2921/I/126/59/lrg68181C.jpg
>https://images-na.ssl-images-amazon.com/images/I/41FEw6RW%2BpL._SL500_AC_SS350_.jpg
>https://images11.palcdn.com/hlr-system/WebPhotos/82/826/8264/8264699.jpg

[Anonymous No.3159363]

>>3158091
Degenerates like you belong on a cross

[Anonymous No.3159587]

>>3158249
She looks beautiful anon greatly done!

[Anonymous No.3159601]

>>3158249
Airbrush is cool and all, but there's several places that demand a hard edge - shadow under her lip, around her nostril, around her eyes...

[Anonymous No.3159744]

>>3158249
>>3159601
I've spent all day reworking her face. Shes got a type of face i usually dont paint...it's all rounded edges and even under her lip its a soft value change so if i add a hard edge it'll look odd. I might mess with the glasses a bit more, but i don't think i can spend much more time fixing her face anymore it'll just have to do.

[Anonymous No.3159816]

>>3159744
You sure? I think it kinda works.

[Anonymous No.3159952]

>>3159601
Airbrushes piss me off. I was using one just five minutes ago and it's irritating how much I have to fiddle with it because the cone is cracked or the siphon is plugged or some bullshit.

Sorry I just needed to get that off my chest because half of my time is spent babying my tools rather than using them to get the job done.

[Anonymous No.3160161]

I did a messy comic.

[Anonymous No.3160265]

>>3159287
Thanks a lot for these references. This would actually be the first time I've drawn something more mechanical so it's not really turning out all that well so far.

The image at this point feels kind of ruined and awkward. Does anyone have any advice? I find that coloring clashes a lot with the rest but I don't really know how to represent metal otherwise (or at all, really).

[Anonymous No.3160321]

>>3160161
not hamtaro ;-;

[Anonymous No.3160365]

[Anonymous No.3160435]

>>3160265
the dong really doesn't need that much emphasis, its really distracting from what should be the highlight of the image

[Anonymous No.3160441]

>>3160435
Yeah, I wanted to make it metallic but maybe that's just too much. Here's an alternative attempt. Does the vibration look weird?

[Anonymous No.3160486]

>>3160441
This looks way better, getting rid of that vibration effect and keeping it otherwise the same would look great as far as I'm concerned

[Anonymous No.3160493]

>>3160365
Those noses

[Anonymous No.3160496]

Feed back? Should I finish it?

[Anonymous No.3160500]

>>3160496
Regardless of the the subject matter, It's pretty good. The head could be a bit bigger.

[Anonymous No.3160512]

>>3160496
Your faces are improving a lot. gg.

[Anonymous No.3160543]

Ref image was an old pic of my ex. This was from a couple months ago when i first got watercolors.

Any tips for watercolor? I just have the cheap tubes of primaries mostly, from wally world. I've been trying to delve into more traditional learnings, like knowing more about proportions and values and all that jazz. I've always gotten complements on shit i doodle, but I'm trying to get to where I'll be able to use that natural liking of fucking around, in combination with actual knowledge.

[JJBD No.3160546]

quick sketch of Summer!
Let me know if you want to see more! :)

[Anonymous No.3160585]

>>3160543
>>3160546

>>3160508

[Anonymous No.3160589]

>>3160585
You're right. My bad.

[Anonymous No.3160824]

>>3158930
unless she's supported by something she'd fall backwards. i think for that pose to work without support, you'd need to have her upper body lean forward.

drawing people from straight on is difficult, especially when you're starting out, and the results can often look flat and boring. i'd recommend avoiding those angles for now.

practice perspective and foreshortening; it will help you start thinking of your drawings in terms of forms in space.

[Anonymous No.3160984]

>>3159744
>>3159816
Well, shes got a really soft chin with hardly any protrusion to speak of. And the sharp shadow for the nasolabial makes her look aged....i try to indicate it a bit usually but it's a fine line between having it and it making the character look old. I'll work on Mei some more specifically her eyes because i just cant get them right, but i think i did a better job on Mercys face cause it's the type of face i actually like painting. It's a large group painting of 5 of them. Mei, Mercy, Sombra, Symmetra, and Pharah.

[Anonymous No.3161050]

>>3149205

[Anonymous No.3161061]

>>3161050
HORSE
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[Anonymous No.3161088]

trying apply perspective
how I do

i would go to the beg thread but they told me to go here last time

[Anonymous No.3161089]

>>3161088
I'm retarded

[Anonymous No.3161103]

>>3160161
Blog?

[Anonymous No.3161144]

I guess this tread has become horse themed huh?

Any advice I can get on this would be good

[Io No.3161155]

I start today this picture. I'm going to colour it. Post the progress later.

[Anonymous No.3161300]

>>3150946
pretty good, would jerk off to if it was a completed image

[Anonymous No.3161315]

WIP. Any glaring issues?

[Anonymous No.3161323]

>>3157583
It's the calves and feet. They need to be smaller, or she'll look like a hobbit

[Anonymous No.3161326]

>>3158024
This. You end up spending an hour or more looking for just the right pose you imagine in your mind.

[Anonymous No.3161332]

>>3161326
this is why i almost never use reference unless its for a specific part.

[Anonymous No.3161335]

>>3158212
Or if she's leaning more to the left, move her right breast over more in the cleavage.

[Anonymous No.3161339]

>>3160365
Rather nice looking dick, but everything else looks so sharp. Sharp and sex don't mix well, unless that what you're into

[Anonymous No.3161342]

>>3161332
Basically all you can do, unless you just watch porn for reference instead of fapping.

[Anonymous No.3161347]

[Anonymous No.3161349]

>>3161315
- lower left girl, left arm goes too straight up like a tube, fix the right arm length and shoulder. looks a little crushed to the torso
- the upper left girl has no feet and looks like floating to hi for the grab

good to see u around

[Anonymous No.3161411]

>>3160496
Kyle is a animal fucker. How shocking.

[Anonymous No.3161488]

Can't stop drawing Constanze

[NoseBro No.3161490]

>>3161315
this is really triggering. i dont know why. just fix it.

[Anonymous No.3161492]

>>3161488
I really like your linework, what brush/program do you use?

[Anonymous No.3161493]

>>3161492
Thanks, I use Krita. I took one of the default pencils (2B, I think) and modified it a bit. I think what I mainly changed was increasing the opacity to 100% and setting the flow to a constant 100%.

[Anonymous No.3161495]

>>3161493
I had a feeling, I started using krita over photoshop a few weeks ago and the brushes are a thousand times better.

[Anonymous No.3161498]

>>3161495
I switched from Paint Tool SAI the not too long ago. I didn't have a problem with SAI but I really wanted to ditch Windows. Glad I switched.

[Anonymous No.3161510]

>>3161349
Thanks.

>>3161490
Not sure what you mean. That's supposed to be a piercing. If you mean it's badly readable, I'll try to make it look better with the inks.

[Anonymous No.3161568]

>>3161510
I'm pretty sure he's referring to that long line in between the bellybutton and outside line. Is that her pelvis crease? Cuz that does look funky as fuck if that's the case.

[Anonymous No.3161575]

>>3161568
That's her belly crease. I see what you mean. I'll use shading and no lines for that. Thanks.

[Anonymous No.3161577]

>>3161575
I meant belly bump*

[Anonymous No.3161595]

>>3161315
The throne girl's ribcage is tilted to the left, so her breasts shouldn't be in equal height.
Make her right breast hang lower.

[Anonymous No.3161597]

>>3161488
Dope. Does the tail have a plug at the end? You didn't make the base larger, so it looks like the tail could slide in or out too easily...

>>3161493
>>3161498
My nigga.

[Anonymous No.3161613]

>>3161595
Her right shoulder is raised tho.

[Anonymous No.3161756]

reworking an older drawing. are the values alright? is her head contrasting too much with the background?

>>3161335
thanks for the suggestion. i ended up just making them sag a bit. that fixed it well enough.

>>3161089
try adding some environment, even if it's just a ground plane or a bounding box. it helps when judging perspective.

[Anonymous No.3161946]

[Anonymous No.3162015]

>>3161613
Uh.. no, it's not? Breasts attach to pecs which attach to clavicles. Her clavicles are both level, so no raised breasts there.

[Anonymous No.3162043]

>>3162015
the clavicles are level cause the shoulder is raised compared to the inclination of ther torso. the right breast follows that, and hence they are level.

[Anonymous No.3162044]

>>3161756
sexy!

[Anonymous No.3162150]

>>3160824
Thanks for the advice! I hadn't even thought about it but in my reference photo the girl was leaning against a pillar, so your comment makes total sense.

[Anonymous No.3162312]

And yep

[Anonymous No.3162778]

>>3162312
blog?

[Anonymous No.3162789]

>>3162778
Increase your standards or leave, dickbrain.

[Anonymous No.3162800]

>>3158024
>>3161326
I like to call this proko syndrome

[Anonymous No.3162806]

>>3152125
the bandaid isnt colored and the collar looks out of place by having a different shading style and no color

[Anonymous No.3162808]

>>3157616
Of course he does. He fucking traces.

[Anonymous No.3162813]

>>3161946
holy shit those are some flat weigths

[Anonymous No.3162955]

How do you go about drawing a muscular woman and still making her sexy? I got a commission request for a strong buff woman with big natural tits (I guess like an amazon).

Was very specifically told NOT roid rage superweightlifter tier

[Anonymous No.3162961]

>>3162955
theres 2 main ideas when it comes to this.
you could either do some really toned muscle,or some large muscles.
i think he wants a beefier looking girl with next to minimal toning.
cause the steroid thing has both

[Anonymous No.3162970]

>>3162961
Do you suppose is muscular, but not with 0 body fat?

Sorry to keep asking but ive never drawn a girl this way.

[Anonymous No.3162972]

just got into inking,can i get some advice please?

[Anonymous No.3162981]

>>3162970
i think he wants some body fat if im being honest,just give certain parts a bit more muscular padding than usual but not too much.
so long as she doesnt look like a chiseled balloon i think youd be fine

[Anonymous No.3163011]

>>3162955
look at how frank cho draws women.

[Anonymous No.3163042]

>>3162955
Check out how ez6 draws em.
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2122855

[Anonymous No.3163049]

>>3162789
>reeeeee stop enjoying things >:C

[Anonymous No.3163068]

>>3162778
zedarkpenguin.tumblr.com

>>3162789
Or you could give critique instead of bitching at people for stupid reasons.

I suppose I forgot to note theres still a bit of work to do on the pic, mostly post work. But I'd love any critique.

[Anonymous No.3163155]

>>3149205
not really porn but whatever
i'm lost at the arm

[Anonymous No.3163269]

[Anonymous No.3163292]

>>3163269
id be curious to see what your drawings look like in the sketch phase. how do you construct the heads?

[Anonymous No.3163298]

>>3162972
it looks pretty cartoony to say the least

[Anonymous No.3163310]

>>3163269
Please stop posting.

[Anonymous No.3163347]

>>3163298
no
>>3163292
pic related is the simple form of how i do loose pics like this

[Anonymous No.3163358]

>>3163298
oop, sorry, meant the 'no' in >>3163347
for>>3163310
, sorry

[Anonymous No.3163519]

>>3162808
Prove it.

[Anonymous No.3163527]

>>3163347
The eye line should be in the middle of the whole head (circle + jaw), not in the middle of the circle.

Also, I did some coloring. Maybe I'll finish it, but I'm not sure. And I just realized I drew her a huge right hand.

[Anonymous No.3163534]

>>3156673
Nah i liked the harder edges way more, yours doesnt really fit the original imo.

[Anonymous No.3163544]

>>3163527
They're a lost cause BBC, people have told them before. They unironically enjoy having their characters look like mongoloids.

[Anonymous No.3163552]

>>3163347
>>3163527
>The eye line should be in the middle of the whole head (circle + jaw), not in the middle of the circle.
Probably the sole reason your heads look weird, the thin hair might contribute but the eyes mistake robs your men of any forehead they could have had.

[Anonymous No.3163558]

>>3163527
i'm aware of the middle rule, and have been trying to aim for more of the middle of the head as you can see in the finished pic, since on one i aim to do proper i'll actually edit, as opposed to a first draft image like the basic construction pic on the side, tho i realize i sometimes wind up going a little more above the middle line than below it

[Anonymous No.3163568]

>>3163527
It doesn't look like there's a well defined light source.

[Anonymous No.3163587]

>>3161498
>I really wanted to ditch Windows.

Did Windows 10 automatic updates make you want to kill yourself too?

[Anonymous No.3163783]

>>3163527
pouring girl is holding the bottle in an awkward way.

do you do value/color sketches before jumping into coloring?

[Anonymous No.3163869]

>>3163347
Fuuck man. Why can't you name fag or keep your file names consistent, so I can filter your shit out.

[Anonymous No.3163906]

>>3163568
Yeah, you are correct. I just wanted to put some colors on the main character. This was never meant as a wholesome finished colored illustation. I would have started with a defined light source and the background otherwise.
>>3163783
I disagree about the pouring girl.
Sometimes I do grayscale before coloring, but I realized I spent way too much time on those artworks and the results usually aren't any better. Here I jumped straight at colors.

[Anonymous No.3163914]

>>3163906
i always have trouble keeping a consistent look to the colors/lighting when going straight from sketch to colors.

how early in the process do you have a clear idea of how the lights and colors should look? is it something you plan out or do you wing it?

[Anonymous No.3163930]

>>3163914
I pretty much suck at color theory. I know how shading and light are supposed to work, but I always wing color picking. I usually plan only the position of my light source and then try to stick to it. Here I was just trying to give a nice appealing form to the character so the lighting is not very consistent. Mainly it's coming from the viewer, but there is also a high light source that casts some shadows on the chair, which would make for a very different lighting irl.

[Anonymous No.3164004]

>>3163527
IMO the rendered girl would look a lot hotter if the larger forms were more defined than her details.
Her abdominal muscles bulge too much individually and not enough as a unit, same with her vulva.
Interested in what other people think or if this is just my taste.

[Anonymous No.3164039]

>>3164004
The one that drew it here. I totally know what you mean, and I agree. I went too hard on the details on her abs and I lost track of the main form. You are abs-olutely right (yeah, I know, bad pun).

[Anonymous No.3164059]

>>3164004
Glad to hear it was just me being a dunning kruger.
I'm always wary of this when critiquing someone better than me.

[Anonymous No.3164060]

>>3164059
meant for you >>3164039

[Anonymous No.3164074]

>>3163558
How do you "aim" to go for the middle of the head unless you fail to do construction? I think you should practise construction on a basic head shape in different positions/angles

[Anonymous No.3164075]

>>3163527
The pouring gorl's arms are really short. I also think in general you should make her entirety smaller so it looks like she's more in the background. She looks like she shouldn't be pouring behind the cup because she's so large in comparison to the center girl.

[Anonymous No.3164139]

>>3149205

were can I get some help with loli art? it is banned everywhere nowadays! and I really need some help, clear and concise help.

[Anonymous No.3164140]

How can I learn to render like this?

[Anonymous No.3164145]

>>3164075
No matter how much I look at it I think what you are saying here is pure nitpicking. If anything the front left elf is too big, the cat's left leg and the elf that is holding her foot are too small and the cat's left arm holding the cup too big.
The elf in the background is of the right size imo. Keep in mind these elves are supposed to be bigger than the cat.

[Anonymous No.3164161]

>>3164140
Learn fundamentals of light and shadow and color theory.

[Anonymous No.3164178]

>>3164140

[Anonymous No.3164212]

guys how do i make this shit look good. The face is messing me up and also yeah that hand is kinda fucked to. How into coloring?

[Anonymous No.3164243]

>>3164212

>>3164035

[Anonymous No.3164262]

Fuck the guy uploading pics to other sites without permission, some of us post in this thread exactly because our pics suck ass!

[Anonymous No.3164277]

pinup junk

[Anonymous No.3164293]

>>3152621
>or whatever you wanted us to focus on

Probably on her big stripper titties

[Anonymous No.3164294]

>>3164262
whats this about?

[Anonymous No.3164307]

Is good

[Anonymous No.3164311]

>>3164277
Is good

[Anonymous No.3164345]

>>3164277
not sure if nipple piercing or a face

[Anonymous No.3164384]

>>3163906
Ultimately you make all the decisions, but try to do an experiment and hold the bottle like this without it falling to the floor.

>>3164140
>doesn't bother with growing children inside the womb
>splurts them out-of-the-box ready straight outta the nutsack
The future is here.

[Anonymous No.3164406]

>>3164384
I wanted to make it look like an elegant ritual kind of thing. I mean, if I wanted to draw it in a normal way, I would have done so. I guess you don't like it. I think it looks nice.

[Anonymous No.3164410]

>>3156621
You seem like your right on the cusp of having something good here, especially with your stylistic anatomical choices. however, you need to take a step back and look at how unappealing certain aspects of it look, and take a look at your proportions/placements. a lot of the issues your art is suffering from can be remedied through real life studies. don't start pushing and pulling the levers of anatomical structure until you fully understand how to draw a regular looking body.
>>3156625
ignore this guy.

[Anonymous No.3164411]

>>3164384
I wanted to make it look like an elegant ritual kind of thing. I mean, if I wanted to draw it in a normal way, I would have done so. I guess you don't like it. I think it looks nice.

tho I see what you mean, I should have put her hands in a more balanced position.

[Anonymous No.3164438]

>>3161144
I like it a lot personally. From what I can see, take a look at the width of the chest cavity/ lat area, it looks excessively wide. tried to redline it best I can.
everything else looks good to me.

[Anonymous No.3164497]

>>3157605
Digital crap at its finest. Best recognition this fucker's going to get is some anon posting his shit work on 4chan claiming he's the best.

>>3157605
Well,shit. lol.

[Anonymous No.3164500]

>>3164384
>>doesn't bother with growing children inside the womb
I was assuming it's cockvore.

[Anonymous No.3164508]

>>3164411
It's not a matter of what I like, I was pointing out it's not physically possible, hence the experiment.
But it's okay, it's hardly noticeable.
Love your art btw.

[Anonymous No.3164588]

>>3149205
Hey guys. i'm new. This is my first animation and first time working with digital art. I'm normally a business man, but I wanted this hobby. I like the simplicity of what I have right now because i'm lacking in art department and wanted to just work with the tools and more system like things. well here it is. I want to continue with very simple adult animations, but using tweening and minor hand changes. that way I have to to do this on my off time. recommendations on how to cut time would be nice as well. this is unfinished and I'm using adobe animate 2017 (it tends to lag a bit)

[Anonymous No.3164599]

>>3164508
Haha, great pic. Yeah, I totally see what you mean. I'm dumb like this.
If I'll ever come back to coloring this, I'll fix it. Thanks dude.

[Anonymous No.3164616]

>>3164508
jesus ur patience and effort to help someone out is outstanding

[Anonymous No.3164622]

>>3164616
>there are cool people on this planet
>unbelievable

[Anonymous No.3164663]

>>3164145
Okay kid.

[Anonymous No.3164686]

>>3164663

[Anonymous No.3164868]

[Anonymous No.3164870]

>>3164294

pics from this threads being uploaded to paheal.

[Anonymous No.3164873]

>>3164870
no

[Anonymous No.3164956]

>>3164616
I saw bbc redraw an entire picture for some beginner in the previous thread. Seriously, this guy deserves all the time and help we can offer

[Anonymous No.3165010]

>>3163527
Do you use manga studio/ clip studio for your stuff? If so what brush are you using to line your work?

[Anonymous No.3165092]

>>3164663
Jello detected.

[Anonymous No.3165252]

>>3164663
I wish.

>>3165010
I use clip studio. Here are my brushes
https://www.dropbox.com/sh/holsxtrcg7qgiu6/AADaHPZmXNU6TksiEpZKD6Eba?dl=0
For this lineart I used sketching-inking

[Anonymous No.3165289]

on the topic of brushes: anyone know if tarakanovich ever released a brush set?

[Anonymous No.3165395]

>>3164139
Literally everywhere, on Hentai-foundry or here...
The trick is not to specifically mention lolis,
learn to draw girls sexually and regular children non-sexually (at least on the net), then combine.
Learn to draw females (specifically differences fom males) and chilldren (specifically differences from adults)

literature advice: Loomis, Head and hands
(mentions children, youths etc)

[Anonymous No.3165615]

First time actually uploading art here, critique is greatly appreciated. It's rough but there is a lot wrong with this. Sme of it i can't put my finger on, nor how to fix it. I know the breasts and tentacles around them don't feel right and her left hoof is bugging me too. In honestly just fuck me up, I'm super new to actually taking my work seriously.

[Anonymous No.3165643]

>>3164588
update it looks like this now, i scraped all the frames, about to re animate. I made the process a bit quicker by just learning some of the tools. how is this style?

[Anonymous No.3165653]

Any thoughts before I clean/color this?

[Anonymous No.3165724]

>>3165653
The tits? Pop out a little unaturally?

[Anonymous No.3165781]

>>3165653
The body clashes with the face. Its like their 2 different styles

[Anonymous No.3166221]

what you think anons...

[Anonymous No.3166304]

>>3165615
Learn to pussy

[Anonymous No.3166340]

>>3164868
her torso is too short, even with those mega tits covering most of it

[Anonymous No.3166543]

>>3165781
This

[Anonymous No.3166794]

new thread pls

[Anonymous No.3166808]

>>3165724
I'm trying to make them look flat but I can see what you mean. I'll try to change them.

>>3165781
>>3166543
This one's a lot harder. Do you think it's the shading that does it or is it just how simple the face is compared to the body?

[Anonymous No.3166873]

seconded.

[Anonymous No.3166910]

[Anonymous No.3166916]

[Anonymous No.3166918]

[Anonymous No.3166921]

>>3166910
stop doodling. study carefully with a purpose.

[Anonymous No.3166927]

>>3166921

[Anonymous No.3166931]

>>3166927
#youcanmakeitifyoustopdoodlingandstudycarefullywithapurpose.