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Post your current erotic drawings and paintings here and provide helpful criticism and advice to others!

Please make sure your posted image is clear, DOWNSIZED TO AROUND 1000 PIXELS WIDE, ROTATED TO THE CORRECT ORIENTATION, and that any unused space is cropped.

Reminder that if you do not want to view this thread, please hide it by pressing the minus button or by right-clicking the thumbnail on the catalog and selecting "hide this thread."

Questions about references for drawing porn will be answered.

>> No.3039097

>>3039094
BLOG!?

>> No.3039101

>>3039094
>prodigal son returns
>>3039097
http://bbc-chan.tumblr.com/

>> No.3039108

>>3039094
blogernio

>> No.3039122

>>3039094
Ayo muh dick muhfugga gibsmedat po mo blog muhfuggin DICK

>> No.3039270

>>3039101
Damn how'd he get so good

>> No.3039271

>>3039094
BLOG??!

>> No.3039294
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3039294

>>3039094
Hi BBC

>> No.3039297

Anyone else have trouble thinking up what poses to use? It's starting to all feel the same, but if I go too far out there it stops feeling erotic.

>> No.3039334

>>3039297

There's like more porn on the internet than atoms in the universe. The reference library of sexual poses is virtually endless. Just treat it like anything else and do studies.

>> No.3039439

>>3039297
>>3039334
This just use the Karma Sutra and then a pose program like Design Doll or something and show those positions in 3D

>> No.3039600
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Did this for a friend.

>> No.3039610

>>3039294
cute monster girl! I really like the rendering of the skin. very smooth

>> No.3039611
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Been working on the background after the initial fixing. Any other critiques? Thinking of having more going on in the background, maybe another girl passive to the scene, at the very least some strewn about clothes.

>> No.3039620

>>3039600
Did you lose that friend

>> No.3039680

>>3039620
kek
>>3039600
for real tho, you need to go back to getting some basics down before attempting something like this. Most NSFW art that is done well to moderately well has strong foundational routes. Appeal runs deeper than just the subject. For example, compair your linework to every other post in this thread and you should see the first spot you are lacking in. good luck dude

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3039774

>>3039680
the sloppy line work is basically what i conider my "style" but I've tried smoother lines. Is this any better?

>> No.3039883

>>3039774
Nice bait?

>> No.3039963

>>3039774
the sloppy linework is the aleast of your problems.
you have 0 fundamental skills all together. that's the problem here.

>> No.3039989

>>3039963
Different anon, but shad is an example of someone who lacks fundies and is still capable of being popular while making shekels; as well as appealing to ppl. If anything, anon should dabble in rendering, and line weight, if s/he wants it to look "better."

>> No.3039992

>>3039989
this is an art critique board. we are critiquing and giving advice to artists so that they can IMPROVE THEIR ART, not tell them how to be bad at it.
GTFO.

>> No.3040184

>>3039774
>sloppy line work is basically what i conider my "style"
lol

>> No.3040204

>>3039101
>prodigal son
u wot

>> No.3040206

>>3039611
You still haven't fixed the receiving girl's anatomy lol (neck and torso are too long cuz I know someone's gonna be a faggot and tell me to be specific)

>> No.3040234

>>3039774
Saying sloppy linework is your "style" this early in your development is not going to help you. And if you're doing anime, clean, confident line work is a must.

Compile some artists that blow you the fuck away, and start asking questions. Why does it look so good? Composition? Color choice? Understanding of anatomy? Do a study if you have to.

Then pick up an anatomy book at study the fuck out of that. Take classes. Etc.

>> No.3040251

>>3039774
you have to work on shapes boss, he head shape is different than the hat. , dont worry about shaky lines that goes away with time but you need form

>> No.3040253

>>3040206
Still? They both have been shortened and adjusted since the first, and nobody responded last time after I tweaked it.

>> No.3040452

>>3039094
What's a good place to find reference?
I want to try drawing porn but I have no idea were to start

>> No.3040491

>>3039774
You dont have a style until you learn to draw without one. Amazing artists that have a disrinct style didnt skip steps.

>> No.3040492

>>3039989
Shad understands fundies, he just ignores them.

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Beep bop
here is my fug bot

>> No.3040751
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3040751

https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=63614811

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>>3040751

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>>3039774
what you consider "style" is a crutch you're using to not create anything of value

>> No.3041126

>>3040751
For NSFW content of loli/shota, are you worried of the government/ISP knowing your activities?

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>> No.3041198
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3041198

i asked in the questions thread, but might get more help here

>Any tips on drawing the cock and balls?
Mine keep looking flat and inorganic. The shaft mainly.

>> No.3041347

>>3041198
If you can't draw a dick properly, I'm pretty sure you can't draw anything else properly either. In your case dicks aren't a problem, anon, drawing is a problem.
Another reason I think this is that you are afraid to post your work.

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>>3039094
Making a MILFy body. I always have difficulty drawing proper, organic breasts. Considering making them bigger.

Please give me criticism on my sketch before I ink and color.

>> No.3041352

>>3041351
The torso is too short.

>> No.3041363

>>3041351
Where's the penis?

>> No.3041365

>>3041352
Thanks. I'll have to check my anatomy.

>>3041363
You might have to help this guy, too...

>> No.3041366

>>3041365
This IS 4chan, correct?

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3041446

>>3041198
The other reply has a point but here's a tutorial I saved
The one thing I still don't know how to draw properly about the dick is the urethra

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3041479

just finished this, the scanner fucked my colours.

>> No.3041494

>>3040695
Every time I see that character I think of that dumbass pseudo-racism post that the one black chick made about "weaponized hair"

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>>3039774
>the sloppy line work is basically what i conider my "style"

anon...

>> No.3041535

>>3041126
i dont care, dont live in united states.

>> No.3041545

>>3041533
>>3039774

besides I see no style there, I see the "style of the horny 13 years old kid that just downloaded paint tool sai off youtube"

>> No.3041557

>>3041535
stop drawing that shit, moron.

>> No.3041558

>>3041479
pretty nice! i like thee hands in particular. you can try readjust the colors as you like them with gimp or photoshop and take the chance to fill the withe dots in the background coloring.

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3041808

I've been working on this. The background is still to be worked on as I'm focusing on the rendering. I would appreciate any critique.

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Something I drew yesterday.

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>>3041347
by your own argument, you're probably not an artist either.

1) you didn't post any of your work either
2) if you were actually an artist, or even someone who knew anything about what i'm asking for instead of someone feigning ability and knowledge, you'd talk about your own penis methods. but instead are a typical d/ic/k who yells but never tells anything of value.
3) you could have posted your own art with your demeaning comment to entirely demean me if you art was good, or even existent. But i have my doubts. I bet you're the dickbrains poster lmao.

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3041917

opinions?

This is the first time I've ever used a tablet so be gentle.... and ironically my second time drawing at all in 18 months so forgive the rust

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>>3041557

>> No.3041962
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>> No.3041973

>>3041917
Face looks okay but the body and lineart need a lot of work. Mainly proportion issues (sit down and compare your drawing with a standard anime girl, you will note big size differences in the ribcage and head compared to yours). I would also go on figure drawing sites and mix a shitton of figure drawing with anatomy studies. Also, collect sexy images in a folder that you can go to for inspiration later.

>> No.3042003

>>3041973

You were right about the lineart and definitely some anatomy issues around the boobs and shoulders but I prefer the proportions on this. I feel like these would be a lot more realistic on a person with boobs and hips like orihime. They would definitely have at least that much meat to them

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>>3041446
thank ya kindly

>> No.3042062

>>3042003
anon, the person who gave you crit is right.
the proportions are off. The head is small in proportion to the rest of the torso.

I'd argue it's mainly because of the mons pubis being really long.

Legit, anon, if you got your proportions down right you'd be collecting the pornbux for sure imo.

>> No.3042065

>>3042014
Her arm is at the wrong angle. The guy is holding her horns, but her right arm (on the left side of the picture) seems to be going out to the side, instead of up.
Also, you need to give her wider hips. Even with the perspective, they're way too narrow. If you can't fix it you might want to cut your losses and just keep the upper part of the picture.

>> No.3042117

>>3041962
THIS MAKES ME VERY HORNY ANON

>> No.3042149

>>3042014
>>3042065

ought to keep the hips if it's a boy tho

>> No.3042172
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3042172

>>3041973
>>3042062

Better?

I have to head to bed so forgive the rushed job (and the placeholder arm. I will replace that at some point.)

>> No.3042185

>>3041891
>>you'd talk about your own penis methods

okay okay, I'll talk about my penis method.
1. I learned to draw
2. now I can draw penises

>> No.3042197

>>3042185
>doesn't post his penis art
not
going
to
make
it
because
nothing
is
there

>> No.3042198

>>3042172
Not really desu.
the clavicles are wrong, the hips are still too long for a woman (mons pubis error) and the boobs are off seeming.

honestly anon you should start over, but don't think about your line work this next time, exercise anatomical structure and proportions.

your clavicles are waaaay off center to our right (her left). because you are using digital you need to flip your canvas horizontally to check your lean and center line.

>> No.3042203

>>3042198

Honestly you're right... it's a massive jump from traditional to this. I'm noticing a lot of errors that typically I can fix are perplexing me on this.

Still it's just day one. I'm excited to seeing how I develop with this.

>> No.3042235

>>3042197
>already made it
don't need to post it

>> No.3042237
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>>3042065
Thanks for the crit!
I tried fixing it up a bit.

Made the shoulders a bit more narrow too, since it was making the hips look slimmer in relation.

>> No.3042239

>>3039611
cunt is way too low. vulva is at the 'bottom' of the pelvis but when you lift up your legs like that it tilts the pelvis up

do the pose yourself. locate where your asshole is. the vagina (as in the actual vaginal entrance) is only a short distance up from that (such that were you to finger a woman while fucking her ass, you could feel your cock entering her other hole). testicles are homologous to the labia minora, feel where your balls are actually attached to your body to get a better idea of where the lower portion of the vulva would be. where your cock joins your body is a little bit higher than where the clit will be (so use that as reference to avoid going too high, the clit should never be too much higher than where your dick meets your body)

of course the structures are only homologous and it varies between body to body but if you aren't working from reference at least study your own body to get a better idea of where things should be. we all have assholes, start there. make as close to the same pose as you can manage. note not just the structures but general form- Make the pose and ask yourself where the 'floor' of your pelvis is, notice how your hips rotate.

>> No.3042579

>>3041446
>coinpurse balls
meh i dont like them but if they artist is good enough they are ok

>> No.3042704

>>3042579
I don't like them either, I think they look to simple, but the tutorial seemed useful regardless. Personally I prefer lopsided balls where one is lower than the other

>/ic/ - Penis/Testicle Critique

>> No.3042737 [DELETED] 

>>3042237
>flate chest

/ic/ isn't for pedophilles >>>/tv/

>> No.3042762

>>3042737

It's a 3000 year old vampire.

>> No.3042765

>>3042237
site? blog?

>> No.3042769

>>3042762
and this doesn't make you any less of a deviant pedo.

>> No.3042777

>>3042014
Where'd you learn the style?

>> No.3042824

>>3041479
The juxtaposition of simple fish mushrooms etc i can accept as a style vs the more realistic person it is centered on but you clearly need to work a bit more on her anatomy. Hips legs arms and feet more precisely.

1. Upper arms are longer than they should be or if intended to be lengthy the lower arms or too short for those proportions and they seemingly shrink the lower you go.

2. Waist/legs/feet you see the proportion issues.

i like it though keep up the good work

>> No.3042833

>>3042765
>>3042777
omg, what style are you talking about? this is pretty much shit lacking depth and proper perspective.
fucking dickbrain pedophiles. KYS.
wtf is wrong with your tastes?

>> No.3042841

Remember to report blatant shitposters.
I've noticed that the mod presence has increased slightly in the past few weeks and they've actually started to delete disruptive posts and ban shitposters.

>> No.3042881 [DELETED] 

>>3042841
also remember to report pedo shit like this >>3042237

thanks for the reminder anon. done.

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WIP, wouldn't mind a little anatomy critique before I develop it further

>> No.3042898

>>3041891
how about instead of complaining about what he said, fucking post a pic so we can see what to critique.

>> No.3042933

>>3042704
oh yeah those are great
especially when the artist has them flopping around and shit i love it
but it is easy and looks good enough if you dont have enough practice to draw more detailed balls

>> No.3042942

>>3042933
>especially when the artist has them flopping around and shit i love it
You pretty much have the same taste as me in balls. Thinking about it, it's kinda weird I'm having this conversation since I don't like dudes

Also thanks for the idea, that's what I'm gonna study now: how to make lopsided balls look like they're bouncing around.

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>>3042942
cant talk about balls irl so you gotta do it on the internet

>> No.3043071

>>3042762
See? Reporting works. The mods have finally returned.

>> No.3043197

>>3042765
Don't really have one right now sorry.

>>3042777
I don't think I really did anything to learn a certain style. I just draw some rough linework and do a more polished one on top with the sai pencil brush. Anything to do with style would be more closely related to just learning your fundamentals, and then some abstraction and simplification specifically for anime styled art I would think.

>>3042833
Why are you so angry my dude?
We're all learning here.
I never said I was perfect, I've got a long way to go still.

If you have any advice feel free to do a redline with proper perspective and depth instead of telling people to kill themselves.
It can still be pretty hard for me to see a lot of perspective errors I make, I don't have a great grip on it yet, so it'd be nice to get another persons view on it.

>> No.3043295

>>3041126
>>3041535
Lolicon/Shotacon isn't really illegal in the United States.

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>> No.3043576

>>3040695
>...and then she farts!

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Any notes before I get into rendering? I've never done comics before.

Also I could use some help coming up with some dialogue that isn't too cringey.

>> No.3043873

>>3043793
Futa is nasty as fuck, Rosalina's head and hands look dis proportionate, the bally on the bottom right panel from peach look retarded too

artistically it's alright even if the fetish is shit

>dialogue

don't most doujin just have moaning and most real instances of sex never have people discussing their afternoon or anything so I don't see a point in bothering, speech bubbles would just get in the way of the action and in porn that's all the viewer really cares about.

>> No.3043898

>>3043793
wait i think i've seen this style before, did you do the rosalina holding her balls or something like that ?

>> No.3043922

>>3043793
finally somebody with some skills, that isn't kyle or BBC.
props man. I wouldn't change a thing.

>> No.3043926

>>3043873
I love how these scrubs have to bitch about fetishes when they can't shit on people's skills.
just shut the fuck up, tardo. nobody cares what you think about fetishes you dislike.

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floppy boob study. is there anything i can do to make them look better?

it feels like i made the darkest spots too dark and contrasty, but when i adjust them to be brighter it looks worse.

>> No.3044022

>>3043926
>nobody cares what you think about fetishes you dislike.
Project elsewhere, thank you. However this isn't the place for fetishes to matter over art skill, but still refrain from projecting and generalizing.

>> No.3044041

>>3044022
you really think people that come here seeking and giving art critique cares if someone likes or dislikes a certain fetish?
anon pls.

>> No.3044138

>>3043873
The proportion thing is probably right, her hands are too big maybe?
As for dialogue I mostly want something just to help with the composition. there's a lot of blank spaces to fill. though I suppose a BG is an option.
>>3043898
This one right? http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/HardDegenerate/479397/Rosalina-prepping-to-masturbate
Yep that was me
>>3043922
Thanks man, Kyle's art in particular is quite inspiring.

>> No.3044214

>>3043951
Aside from it not making sense that the dick appears out of nowhere, perhaps you should throw in some reflected light from the light gray table, as you don't seem to have any.

>> No.3044218

>>3044214
the dick was a dumb afterthought. pretend it's a dildo. good note regarding the light. thanks!

>> No.3044243

>>3043793
Futa on futa or futa with a vagina is gay but not futa on female.

>> No.3044294
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3044294

is there any money in doing furry or cuckold/blacked porn like pic related? i need cash and i wanna pander to every fetish fag

i already have gay furry and feetfags in my weekly audience

>> No.3044299

>>3044294
yeah theres some cash in there
look at kennycomix, guy gets a couple hundred just for being a bbc ideas guy and shit
and then thepit has like 1k+ people on his patreon

>> No.3044303

>>3041479
I'd hang this as a poster in my room if it wasn't for the penis

>> No.3044311

>>3044294
or you can just be good at art and pick whatever fetish you want.

>> No.3044313

>>3044299
thepit is actually a good artist tho. you can't generalize like that kek.

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>>3044299
well i can draw black on white stuff and BBCs tomorrow after im done with the gay furry and if it gets views i´ll start doing that weekly

reminder that its nothing personal just business so if you think you gain any extra audience just do it. you´re not the one with fetish you´re the guy who sells a fetish. I can give you Iron Maiden from my CD store that doesnt mean i listen to them.
>>3044303
photoshop the penis out and do it my friend

>> No.3044320

>>3044313
the pit is good, but all he does now is interacial shit still
i miss when he was doing his comic on 7chan years ago, before they hurt his feelings
not trying to say hes a bad artist, hes good, but its obvious that hes doing blacked shit because thats where the money is

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>>3043793
>Any notes before I get into rendering?

>Hard-degenerate
>needing tips on rendering

No man you got this

>> No.3044332

>>3043793
I love your stuff, man! One of my fav artists

>>3044331
>reading comprehension

>> No.3044501

>>3044331
Inspired by Inoue Kiyoshirou, I take it.

>> No.3044535

>>3044317
Where are the nips?

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>> No.3044571

>>3044501
i dont get it, what it has to do with inoue kiyoshirou?

>> No.3044613

>>3043793
Give peach a bigger dick and let her fuck rosa in the ass or pussy.

>> No.3044768

So if an anon wanted to make some cash, where do you find a paying audience for this???

>> No.3044789

>>3044768
easiest is furaffinity, they pay top dollar for stick figures.

If you are already good then just go tumblr

>> No.3044969

How do I set up receiving payment for my work, without revealing my personal information?

I just want to make sure I can securely receive donations and payment without anyone being able to see my real name or anything.

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>>3041198
http://creamatorie.tumblr.com/post/12179673916/penis-tutorials-and-references-a-collection-of
https://thynsfwtutorials.tumblr.com/

>> No.3045005

>>3044768
If you don't give a shit about integrity then make an account on FA, start posting and then open commissions while being open to drawing most weird shit

>> No.3045026

>>3041962
I like it! Do you have a blog?

>> No.3045066

>>3044995
wow this is super good thank you

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>>3045066

>> No.3045097

>>3041808
T H I C C

>> No.3045192

>>3044969
You realize you wanting to get money for your work means you have to pay taxes? And you realize that if you have to pay taxes you can't be anonymous, right?

Kids shouldn't draw porn. GTFO.

>> No.3045218

>>3041198
>How do I draw x

Practise x maybe??

>> No.3045293

>>3044571
It looks like a page from his Mio doujin. It's obviously not copied, but it does seem inspired by it.

>> No.3045339
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Suppose you had a maid who's really into BDSM, but she's ashamed to admit it. She also really likes her master, meaning you.
Now, which face would you consider more inspiring if you knew of her fetish and, in good faith, wanted to reward your perfect and elegant maid for her services? I personally prefer the last one.

>> No.3045344

>>3045339
doesn't really matter imo. you should focus on the flaws in your fundamentals before you think abut appealing facial expressions.
fix your construction, perspective and gesture.

>> No.3045350

>>3045192
Really doubt the dude is trying to make over 10,000 a year

>> No.3045352

>>3045344
Mind doing a redline?

>> No.3045363

>>3045339
what are the things around her thighs?

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>>3041446
more from doxy
http://prismblush.com/tutorials/
http://prismblush.com/3d-penis-reference/

>> No.3045373

>>3045363
Throwing knife belts. She's a maid with the ability to stop time, particularly to set up a shit ton of knives flying at her opponent.

>> No.3045494
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3045494

Please help

>> No.3045497

>>3045350
1. you are assuming he's american
2. by law you have to report any penny you make above 400 USD. it doesn't matter if you reach 10k or not.

>> No.3045505

>>3045494
Sorry, I'm not a paramedic and I can't fix broken ankles. I can only say that it is impossible to bend the foot down any further than 170 degrees to the leg.

>> No.3045573

>>3044969
if people know youre that timid, they can steal from you

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>>3045505

>> No.3045626
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>>3045591
Hmm, it looks like the leg is dislocated at the knee now (actually it's more of an illusion, but anyone would perceive it like that, I suppose). I don't think I can describe it in words well enough this time, so here's a redline with two proposals.

>> No.3045653

>>3045026
Thanks, really. I have a pixiv, but there's not much in there:

https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=5221284

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>>3045653
Okay, even I felt some pity here despite it being well-deserved. Here, have a companion for that poor "like" (though it might have been a single star back then...).
Now please take my advice: you're an absolute beginner and you're better off not believing anybody who compliments your current state, or it will bite you in the ass later on. I suggest using pixiv as a honest measuring scale. When people start giving you at least ten likes per... well, let's say 500 views, you can consider yourself to be just a normal beginner who's learned at least something.

>> No.3045691
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I keep drawing girls with fit upper bodies, does anyone like this kind of body type?

>> No.3045714
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>>3045691
Not with your current skill set.

Go to danbooru and find hater_(hatater). No matter what I may think of him personally, he's good at drawing fit girls. Then there's this one, from my personal ref folder... basically, what you need is to learn how to draw girls, not trannies. But what you need before that is to draw at least okay faces and gain at least moderate anatomy knowledge.

>> No.3045749
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3045749

Just finished line art, anything to point out before I start rendering?
>>3045293
>Mio doujin
hot, not sure how I missed it

>> No.3045785

>>3043951
The nipples seem a bit off to me
Maybe it the colour or the smoothness, not too sure

>> No.3045953

is there an way to draw indentations on the skin using only lines?

like if you press a finger into flesh?

>> No.3045955

>>3045339
move the eyes around

>> No.3046200

>>3045352
sorry but with your current level I think it would just be a waste of time.

>> No.3046222
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3046222

Quick lineart done for /r9k/. Anatomy not included.

>> No.3046238

>>3045955
To where, exactly? I tried playing with the face before to get a more anime-like look, and it looked less natural.

>>3046200
Wow, that was so unpredictable... *yawn*

>> No.3046243

>>3046238
Yeah, I'm sure you get told how amazing an artist you are all the time that a comment like that is completely out of left field.
Anyway, what I'm sure what he meant is you really just need to go get your fundies down, anything like a redline would do you no good because all you'd do is copy it.
You need to understand forms, proportions and perspective before you can get anything out of redlines. You should just go to the beginner general.

>> No.3046261

>>3046243
Nah, I'm usually told the opposite, despite receiving less and less crits with time.

And your assumption about redlines can't be less true. In regards to using references and visual libraries, I'm far past the stage where one can but copy blindly. Specific advice is what works for me. Besides, on /ic/, any non-specific critique can never be trusted, as proven by one of the threads (it was about shitposting by people who can't even draw) I saw here recently. That's why I left this board when I understood how meaningless it is to spend time here, posting helpful links or my drawings and arguing idly. So I'll just silently look for anything specific, including a redline, and bail the fuck out again after some time.

>> No.3046266

>>3039439
Man I thought I was so fucking clever for using Designdoll for exactly this purpose and now I'm suddenly seeing everyone on /ic/ recommending it.

>> No.3046267

>>3046261
Do you have some kind of mental problem?
This is not meant as an insult.

>> No.3046268

>>3046261
Specific advise to you: No one gives a fuck if you stay on this board. Stop being so full of yourself. You have no idea how to draw so you're in no place to try to correct anyone. You're not past the stage of blindly copying, it's obvious in how you drew that picture you have zero idea on what you're doing, I'd put money down you have no idea how to even set out a perspective grid.

>> No.3046280

>>3046261
Learn Japanese and get a proxy so you can start posting on 2ch's art board. They redline everything and are generally much more helpful and less needlessly insulting.

>> No.3046282

>>3046280
Pathological altruism isn't good for anyone, particularly when the artist in question is oblivious to his own skill level. The guy above needs to work on his fundamentals, and no amount of redlining would help him at his current level.
Redlining is directed at people who have a basic grasp of drawing and specific problems that can be improved upon. When your entire drawing is flawed, redlining serves very little purpose.

>> No.3046295

>>3046238
>Wow, that was so unpredictable... *yawn*
sorry, but I really don't have the time to redraw your entire picture. yes, it is THAT flawed.

>> No.3046317

>>3046282
Sounds like you're just rationalizing your laziness/inability to give meaningful critique.

>> No.3046320

>>3046317
It would have taken me the same amount of time to write a critique as it took me to write my previous post, so your assertion that it's because of laziness is absolutely idiotic.

>> No.3046341

>>3046320
Your critiques must be pretty bad then.

>> No.3046374

>>3046280
Hey, that is an interesting idea. I wonder why it didn't occur to me yet, as I know Japanese enough to converse in the Internet and have in fact been to one Touhou rakugaki thread before. Thank you. Why would I need a proxy though? Do they ban foreigners?
By the way, which board is it? They have a fuckton of boards and I got kinda lost. Doesn't seem to be 創作発表 or 美術系学校.

-------

>>3046267
It depends. In this age, there is a high probability of any kind of behaviour being designated as a mental problem by guys who want to make a good buck. Even bothering to reply to people like you and the poster below you might indeed be a sign of a mental problem.

>>3046282
Yet so far there is no proof that your words have any value to them. There are only false accusations and stuff that may or may not be true. So far it seems like you're just an ordinary shitposter who likely never draws anything himself.

>>3046295
You're so mean, anon, I really thought you were going to redline me! This response is totally unpredictable, and I'm very offended!

>> No.3046378

>>3046341
Not as bad as your art.

>> No.3046409

>>3046374
>this level of cringe and dunning kruger
all my sides.

>> No.3046427

>>3045339
>see all the autism in this thread while scrolling
>follow the conversation chain up to see the source

Oh wow, being this butthurt over art this shity. The 1st guy was right about everything you need to study the basics dude your proportions aren't even right

>> No.3046455

>>3046378
Ah see now that's more your style. Stop trying to act like you actually know what you're talking about and stick to petty insults.

>> No.3046474

>>3046409
You_keep_using_that_word.avi.

>>3046427
Ok, since three different guys in two different places were telling me the same thing, I inspected the proportions again, this time very carefully and using craniums as a basic unit. In addition to the already known issue about her head being kinda small, I realized the issues of her lower leg being too short and her neck not being thicc enough, although one can write the latter off as anime style. A few hours ago I also tested the pose and found it to be very uncomfortable and requiring bending forward a little to ease the pain (well, BDSM does not really ask to ease the pain...), and the angle of the arms has to differ a bit as well. In addition, I have to redo some of the ropes before I continue to draw her vampire mistresses and start rendering. I think that's all.

>> No.3046513

>>3046474
I'm pretty sure it's not that hard do google dunning kruger, anon. do it and stop making an idiot out of yourself.

>> No.3046518

>>3046474
>I think that's all
not even close. after you fix all the proportions and anatomy shit (uncomfortable, unnatural and, most of all, unappealing pose), you have to learn some proper perspective and construction. T your current skill level, you are unable to add proper depth to your drawings. on top of that your lineart is stiff as fuck. add some gesture training to the list.

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>> No.3046573

>>3045714
the person who made that picture is hews_hack though
(im not the guy you replied to)

>> No.3046588
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3046588

doodle, ik horn and hands messed up. is there like a guide online how to start a hentai tumblr or getting commissions? i know that there are some shady rules on paypal like no porn art and chargebacks, hfoundry removed loli, characters have to be stated 18+, etc. i need a guide to know all that shit n stuff

>> No.3046722
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>>3045749
How can I make my colouring sexy? Would a warmer palette look more enticing? It's a bit dark too

>> No.3046731
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A latex dress

>> No.3046734

>>3046722
warmer hues, less contrast, soft values in the right places, red where blood shows most (like cheeks)

>> No.3046834

>>3046722
look at what you find sexy and apply it to your art.

>> No.3046914 [DELETED] 

>>3046513
>>3046518
>>3046573
Gotta love the unintentional irony of this board.

>> No.3046918

>>3046513
>>3046518
>>3046573
>>3046588
>>3046834
Gotta love the unintentional irony of this board.

>> No.3046921

>>3046722
I thought this was Widowmaker fan art from the thumbnail and was disappointed.

>> No.3047059
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3047059

ding dong bannu

>> No.3047388

>>3046588
>>3046918
if you're implying im the other posters, im not. if youre implying i already stated the rules to start one, thats far from all to know on how to start one.

>> No.3047450
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>>3046722
>>3046734
Thanks m8, warmed the colours a bit and tried to make it look softer, pretty much done with the body now except for the ugly ass nipples

>> No.3047721

>>3047059
Not today Bosssasaurus

>> No.3047834

>>>/trash/10257699

better make them accounts if you want to keep seeing stuff from BBC-chan


or kyle if you're a faggot

>> No.3047928
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3047928

how do you guys get smooth lines that look nice and natural even when drawing extreme curves?

>> No.3047942

>>3047928
tons of mileage.

>> No.3047949

>>3047059
Answer my tumblr ask bud

>> No.3048149
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>> No.3048169

>>3041808
link to blog??

>> No.3048178

>>3046267
it's bait, for fucks sake

the more people stop replying the faster he'll stop shitting up all the threads

>> No.3048245

>>3044138

as soon as I saw your picture I knew who you were. big fan of your stuff, when I first saw the rosalina and peach futa I was hooked. keep up the good work man (and draw more zelda)

>> No.3048974

Any tips/tutorials for coloring stuff like vag and anus so it looks nice and pink and wet, I can't manage to capture the look some artists get of blood-engorged, ready-to-fuck bits.

>> No.3049056
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3049056

I suck at painting, can someone color that?
I can give you the .sai file, just there : https://mega.nz/#!0C5zHY4R!K8azbmkUdtm7eSkFGx8z-gFKwC1ryacabhoGvfEnvr0

>> No.3049089
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WIP

>> No.3049290 [DELETED] 

>>3049056
KYS

>> No.3049320
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>>3041533
Why the fuck did I giggle so much at this image

>> No.3049347

>>3049056
That bird would not have a vagina and a butthole. They have one hole.

>> No.3049411
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3049411

>>3039094
>>3046588
>blog
Would also like to know this.

Also, aside from master studies and general fundies, how do you guys specifically study for porn?

>> No.3049417

>>3049411
Are you referencing LMSketch?

>> No.3049424

>>3049347
Yeah I know, it's just a drawing

so nobody for painting?

>> No.3049439

>>3049417
Nah, these were adapted from pixelovely. Actually haven''t heard of him but thanks for the new ref.

>> No.3049454

>>3039094
Anyone doing porn as a transitional stage for $$ before going in-house/freelance as a professional illustrator or concept artist? Would you just start doing less and less porn as you settle in the new job? How do you keep porn work and professional separate if you keep them side by side? Not in Japan or in animation, so HR will probably care.

>> No.3049495

>>3048245
Just for you I will do more zelda.

>> No.3049505

>>3049454
COLD TURKEY
change handles
change fucking styles
leave no traces etc. etc.

>> No.3050095
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3050095

Pretty new to drawing. And I have a big problem. I hate reading and doing excersices. Fuck. Do you guys just force yourselves trough them? If so don't think there's hope for me to git gud. Gib power guis. We are all gonna make it right?

>> No.3050129
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I can't tell if this pose is too stupid.

>> No.3050142
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Help me guys

>> No.3050147

>>3050129
i like it

>> No.3050187

>>3050129
I hate it

>> No.3050188
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3050188

Posting here as well just in case.

Need help creating a back end for this taur-lady thing. The taur part is some sort of spider/scorpion/lizard but I can't get an arse-end and tail to look right with legs. Any mock-ups people could create would be nice to see what looks 'right' to you.

>> No.3050215
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>>3050188
Why are you doing lines before you've even planned things out

Also have you tried finding a ref

>> No.3050221

>>3050215
These are my planning lines, but the wat I sketch is incredibily inefficient because I try the best lines I can for a sketch. Something I'll fix eventually.

Also yes, of course I have. Spider-taurs don't have the same sort of back-end nor can I actually get my head around how thick spider legs could connect to a semi-human style arse with a lizard tail also stuck on.

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What do you guys think of this piece I made?

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What do you guys think of this piece I made... had to repost because the image was flipped the wrong way.

>> No.3050273

whats up with the average porn artist slowly but surely turning into a furry or a futa guy? do you just love dick or are you just following the market?

>> No.3050307
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>>3049424
as you can see, i am bad at colouring too... i am practising ^^'
as an excuse i am too tired to continue, i have to go to bed.

>> No.3050315

>>3049495

you're the best

>> No.3050394

I cannot draw an ass for the life of me. What could help with this?

>> No.3050418

>>3050394
>find a picture of an ass
>draw it while referencing it
>draw it again without referencing it
>repeat until you can draw ass

>> No.3050745

>>3050142
Very stiff, try to convey some emotion and movement.
They look like that 3d model hentai i avoid like the plague on e-hentai

>> No.3050851

>>3050273
If you are talking about good artist, in most cases it's probably the second one.

>> No.3050852

>>3050394
then most likely you cannot draw anything else either.
learning to draw in general would definitely help.

>> No.3050860

>>3041446
Fuck Doxy. Fucker can barely draw

>> No.3050876

amazing drawings in here guys (-:

>> No.3050928

>>3050860
fucker can probably draw better than you with his eyes closed. right, anon?

>> No.3050936
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3050936

crits appreciated. should probably not be able to see his nutsack from this angle -- will fix.

>> No.3051005
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>>3050129
Finished

>> No.3051044

>>3051005
I'd splat that toon

>> No.3051082
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3051082

>>3050307
Wow ty !
Still better than mine.
Do you guys have a good tutorial how to begin the painting (light, shadows...)?

Sorry if my english is bad

>> No.3051283

>>3050215
I honestly like his better than this ref. His has some imagination.. This drawing is literally a woman bursting out from a spider LOL

>> No.3051289

>>3050936
I want to draw porn too. Im awful at composition. You have a guide or something?

>> No.3051291
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3051291

Well since this is the porn thread and my thread got deleted by some queen. Can someone help me start with the composition on her?

>> No.3051296

>>3051289
me? im hardly an authority on composition. look at how porn movies and popular porn artists compose their shots. that's what I do

>> No.3051317

>>3051296
Maybe im ignorant but isnt composition when you make stick figure to help you draw a body followed by shapes?

>> No.3051329

>>3047928
Swift, confident gestures or a line stabiliser.

>> No.3051335

>>3051296
Yes, I meant to say construction not composition lol

>> No.3051348

>>3051291
Meant to say construction

>> No.3051464
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>>3051082
Just grind references until you get good. Here's a shitty example.

>> No.3051512

>>3051464
What about construction mate

>> No.3051660

Talk you fucks

>> No.3051837

>>3051660
cry more

>> No.3051880

>>3051283
if you really think that, then I have bad news for you.

>> No.3052027

>>3051317
you might be thinking of gesture, anon. composition deals with arranging all the elements in a picture.
http://www.elementsofcinema.com/cinematography/composition-and-framing/

>>3051335
im hardly an authority on that either. following along with loomis and vilppu helped me a ton when i first started out. there's a reason why those two names keep popping up. and steve huston has been an eye-opener for me lately in terms of head construction.
https://youtu.be/2T7cDY7YDsg

>> No.3052212
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I'm having a lot of trouble with the skirt folds. Any suggestions?

>> No.3052214
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>>3052212
It's a different type of skirt but this may help.

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>>3042239
if you don't wanna touch yourself or don't have a mirror or otherwise, pic related is what anon is talking about.

>> No.3052501
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>>3042239
Incidentally, I think it's misleading to say lifting the legs tilts to pelvis. You can "lift" your legs without tilting the pelvis.

>> No.3052502
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>>3052501
Similiarly, you can tilt your pelvis without lifting your legs. The muscles groups will work in tandem so it can give that illusion, but I do think there's a difference that's worth recognizing.

>> No.3052543

>>3041479
Are her eye's open or closed?

This isn't really porn per-se but you did a good job it's more of a museum piece.


the arms are either too long or the hands too short OR the head too big for this stylization to make since but it's still groovy

Don't get a big head (like her) keep practicing you show potential

>> No.3052597

>>3052543
napoleon famously fapped to the mona lisa
fucking normal fag

>> No.3052675
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3052675

any glaring errors that I missed? I haven't drawn in awhile, so I'm gonna let it set before rendering.

>> No.3052784

>>3051880
Dude come on, the ref photo is "better" sure but it's a total fucking cop out. The woman's torso is sitting on top of the spider, with jagged edges where it connects. No imagination at all. They look like two very seprrate things.

>> No.3052789

>>3052784
Thats pretty much how most monster girls are

>> No.3052811
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3052811

Does anyone know of a brush similar to this one? Artist's a dick and won't tell.

>> No.3053076

>>3043793
Holy fucking fap! I didn't expect you to draw my favorite fetish!

>> No.3053079

>>3052811
what part of that looks like some special brush that isn't bog standard hard round ?

>> No.3053080

>>3053079
Ignore them, they're just an idiot who thinks its the brush doing the work and not the artist themselves.

>> No.3053100

>>3052811
you are a fucking retard.

>> No.3053175

>>3052675
most glaring issues are bad foreshortening (her right leg is broken in many areas) and a gesture that looks like shit.

>> No.3053217
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3053217

>>3052675
I would remix the pose a little, mostly.

>> No.3053220

>>3050129
>>3051005
The face screams intentional, but the pose conveys unintentional. If you added some sweat drops on her face it would make it look like she's trying to play it off cool with an obvious facade.

But as it is right now, there's a conflict between the two. Either change the pose like she's SHOWING her privates by "accident", or change her expression to something more logical.

>> No.3053285

>>3053220
with all the more fundamental problems his art has, you pick a fucking subtle thing as the contrast between the pose and the face? seriously?

>> No.3053343

>>3053217
hello jadf

>> No.3053365

>>3053285
And? Better than nothing like in your post.

>> No.3053439

>>3052212
Will she fart at some point?

>> No.3053510

>>3052811
It's colored pencil on CSP, don't listen to these autists >>3053100
>>3053079

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>>3053217

Thanks for the redline, that leg was bothering me but I didn't know why.

how's this work?

>> No.3053718

>>3053715
She looks like she's offering her right foot. Not exactly a natural pose for that foot, but it's not something I would be surprised to see in foot fetish imagery.

>> No.3053731

>>3053718
Haha, you got me. I wanted a little bit of foreshortening to draw the eye there and kinda move upwards, but the angle of the foot needs to be flatter .

>> No.3053738

>>3053731
You might also want to consider how far you turn her left ankle. In realistic terms, with that steep angle the ankle would already be considered broken and even passing it off as stylization is going to raise some eyebrows.

>> No.3053781

>>3043197
If you don't have a blog, can you post more of your work?

>> No.3053836

>>3053365
>Better than nothing
actually, you are wrong.your post is as helpful as nothing. at least to that scrub.

>> No.3053845

>>3053836
>do literally nothing
>I-I'm still helping...

>> No.3053951

>>3053845

don't bother, he's too busy trying to be cool on the internet.

It's way easier than being knowledgeable or talented.

>> No.3054234

>>3053951
>all this salt

>> No.3054264
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Need opinions on composition, which works best?

>> No.3054268

>>3054264
composition aside, the penis on the bottom left is extremely flat.
and her neck is stressed and pulled forward

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>> No.3054290

>>3054264
that left nipple LOL
fix that embarrassing shit son

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>> No.3054311

>>3054264
The dicks(shape of the glans and veins) and the nipples(shape and position) could use some fixing. Don't be afraid to look at references, specially when it's about anatomy.

>> No.3054325

>>3039774
You don't know enough about art to have a style. Ignore that mindset, practice basic poses, study anatomy, look at references, try to not let your mind fill in the blanks. A lot of young/beginning artists do that and it takes them longer to catch up. Improve by doing the boring stuff. You'll naturally gravitate towards a style after you've mastered the basics.

And there are only a handful of situations where sketchy lines are fine.

>> No.3054329

>>3054264
composition is the least of your problems at this skill level.
1st problem is bad lineart
2nd problem is that you are drawing kids

bottom line, kys.

>> No.3054330
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I wanna do some Marioxpeach stuff but I duno what type of guys I should model him after. I was thinking pic related is good but I duno if is considered the hottest type of men or should I just go with random muscle man but Mario.

>> No.3054331

>>3054305
your mom isn't going to put that on the fridge. you should consider drawing sfw if you want that to happen.

>> No.3054347

>>3054268
>>3054290
>>3054311
Will try to fix.

>>3054329
Oh fuck off, art is art, I don't tell you what you can and can't draw

>> No.3054380

>>3054347
>Oh fuck off, art is art, I don't tell you what you can and can't draw
what you are doing isn't exactly art. nothing in this thread is art, to be honest.
and yeah, you are drawing underage characters. if you are drawing this because you enjoy it, then you have a problem. and if you are drawing pedo shit to pander to pedos for money gain, then you have less of a problem, but you are still a piece of shit, anon.

and no, tardo, pedo shit isn't the same as other consensual fetishes and kinks. of course you can't tell others what they can or cannot draw. you on the other hand should fucking kys.

>> No.3054393

>>3054380
not him but fuck off return in time and tell them to stop drawing naked babes, you fag

>> No.3054395

>>3054380
>and no, tardo, pedo shit isn't the same as other consensual fetishes and kinks
There is no logical way you can defend this statement. Go ahead and try. You can't.

>> No.3054396

>>3054331
No.

>> No.3054430

>>3054395
consensual vs non consensual kinks.
which is worse?
there. sorry for bursting your bubble.

>> No.3054435

>>3054430
>as other consensual
>pedo shit and other consensual
You already stated pedophilia is consensual, so you can't back down on that any more.

>> No.3054441

>>3054264
Are you influenced by Asanagi/victim girls ?

>> No.3054452

>>3054435
other as in other than pedo not as in other consensual.
even if you misunderstood, you exactly know what I meant. now stop acting like a retard please.

>> No.3054453 [DELETED] 

>>3054441
stop enabling this fucking shit already.

oh fuck it. reporting this.

>> No.3054456

>>3054452
>I ACTUALLY MEANT SOMETHING COMPLETELY DIFFERENT FROM WHAT I ACTUALLY SAID AND ONLY A RETARD WOULD NOT BE ABLE TO READ MY MIND
learn to english cocksucker it's not hard

>> No.3054468

>>3054456
I know enough english to function perfectly fine, so no, I have no intention to actively learn it better than this.
sorry for triggering your autism, anon.
will you now GTFO already, pedo?

>> No.3054506

>>3054468
No, I still need to hear an apology from you for posting patent falsehoods on the internet.

>> No.3054563

>>3054506
>autism
>bad sense of humor
you are marvelous.

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>>3039774

>my lack of confidence in my work is my style

>> No.3054650

Wasting the last bump because I am a bad person.

>> No.3054651

Why have these threads gotten worse as more people from the style thread have wandered in?

>> No.3054982
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>>3043793
I LOVE the way you colour/render already, it's exactly wut I'm looking for

On that matter, will you be doing commissions ever? I'm actually looking for just colouring, and, again, yours is exacty wut I want (pic related)

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>>3054441
You're right
>>3054380
I don't exclusively draw girls who look underage. It's a force of habit, small breasts are easier to draw, if I slap big ass tits on her would that make a difference.

>> No.3055476

>>3054982
brace yourself anon, he is up there in price

>> No.3055482

>>3055025
Sadly this would trigger the other side of the autism Tumblrina scale, even though this would sadly be what it would take to not trigger moralfags.

Basically, although you do need to go up a bit on them fundies, don't give a shit about subject matter. It's bullshit tripe. You're not drawing people that exist, you're being God and creating things yourself, the entire point to art.

>> No.3055544

>>3055476
>poorfags crying on the internet
>>3055025
>It's a force of habit, small breasts are easier to draw
worst excuse I ever heard kek
>if I slap big ass tits on her would that make a difference.
of course it would.
>>3055482
>triggering easily offended people
>drawing pedo shit
hmmmm, I wonder what is worse. really tough choice there, anon. really tough.

>> No.3055667

>>3055544
who give a fucking shit? the last thing I as a human would do is conform to others. Fuck people, especially people like you for real. Ya'll type of humans don't do anything useful, you just bitch like the cunts you all are. Get shit done has been my deal, you ain't going to do jack shit to honestly stop someone from doing something because of your opinions.

All that other nigga have to do is actually draw better shit, then he'd be good.
>>if I slap big ass tits on her would that make a difference.
>of course it would.
And like I said before, proving my point. Really you're just a kid, only little boys obsess over big balloon tits. Any tit size is good, as long as you make a good looking curvy, voluptuous woman it doesn't matter.

>> No.3055688

>>3052811
if you're using photoshop
make a square brush, size and opacity to pressure (minimum 10-20%) and set flow to 25-50
maybe with angle to direction

>> No.3055703

>>3055667
>And like I said before, proving my point. Really you're just a kid, only little boys obsess over big balloon tits. Any tit size is good, as long as you make a good looking curvy, voluptuous woman it doesn't matter.
you are just retarded lol. I said it would make a difference as in it would make the character look more adult.
you just can't follow a train of thought that is longer than a sentence, right?
KYS dumbass.

>> No.3055713

>>3055703
Not every damn adult has balloon tits you underaged moron. Go outside and look at some tits sometime, you'll notice 24+ year olds with some ironing boards strapped to their chest while kids at fucking 12 have DD cups. Tit size does NOT make you an adult, the curvature of the whole female body typically does overall.

>KYS
Last time I'm posting to you retard, you're clearly shitposting for (You)whoring.

>> No.3055717

>>3055713
how the fuck can you be so damn stupi?
how?
I am saying that a character that looks like a little girl in every possible way, will look less like a kid if she has adult looking boobs. that's all.
fucking dumb retard.

>> No.3055971
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lead

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>>3055971
color

>> No.3056032

>>3055971

I know the pit gets your rocks off, but I would veer away from using him as a reference.
Until you get a better sense of anatomy. Look how narrow your shoulders are.

The Pit's faces are grotesque without the right symmetry and decent looking bodies.

>> No.3056074

>>3050142
Needs perspective distortion. Looks too orthographic to me.

>> No.3056076

>>3054264
pls tell me that's a boy.

>> No.3056082

>>3055971
stop mindlessly copying other artists and learn some fundamentals, tardo.

>> No.3056464

>>3056082
>taking drawing porn seriously
wew lad
still better than you can draw as well :>)

>> No.3056577

>>3054982
Sorry man but I don't think I'll color someone else's work, but you can add Degen#2009 on discord if you want to try your luck.

>>3055476
I value my time, what can I say?

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3056639

Not really good at drawing this kind of stuff but I'm trying to get better. The nips were a bit a hard for me to try to get looking decent.

>> No.3056717

>>3056577
>Degen#2009
added, hopefully we can think of 'something'

>> No.3056819

>>3056464
>drawing porn for a living
I probably shouldn't project myself onto others, you are right. just keep being bad at art, guys. you're all gonna win the participation medal.

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New thread soon? Thread seems dead

>> No.3057784

>>3057584
Damn son, can we see some more? DA/HF/Tumblr?