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2983654 No.2983654 [Reply] [Original]

Show us your style

>> No.2983657

nice try

too bad these types of request threads have been done three times before

>> No.2983764
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2983764

>>2983654

>> No.2983766

>>2983764
C-cute!

>> No.2983893

>>2983764
W-wait aren't you simon? Had God returned?

>> No.2983915

>>2983764
How do you get your fucking lines so immaculate?

>> No.2983921

>>2983764
How did you get so good?

>> No.2983924

>>2983764
Blog please!

>> No.2983953

>>2983764
B L O G P L Z

>> No.2983956

>>2983764
This anime and cartoon hybrid style is one of the few things I like about post-modern art

>> No.2983957

>>2983764
I love you

>> No.2983961

>>2983654
>>2983766
>>2983893
>>2983915
>>2983921
>>2983924
>>2983953
>>2983956
>>2983957
How can one human being samefag so hard

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>>2983961

>> No.2983965

>>2983764
I want your diiiiiiick

>> No.2983968

These threads need to fuck off. Stop doing free work for these autists

>> No.2983969

>>2983964
html??

>> No.2983982
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2983982

>>2983654

>> No.2984012

>>2983982
>>2983764
Hmm, I didn't realize there were people on this board who were actually good.

>> No.2984015

>>2984012
not everyone is blowing hot air around. just most people.

>> No.2984016
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>> No.2984101
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2984101

Terrible thread. At least squidward was funny

>> No.2984104

>>2984016
HOLY SHIT KAILE'S ALIVE!!

>> No.2984118

>>2983969
U just jelly senpai baka

>> No.2984127

>>2983764
M-MASAKA

>> No.2984130

>>2983764
Very Yoshinari-esque

>> No.2984408

>>2983982
I'm in love with this version

>> No.2984410

>>2983764
teal guy?

>> No.2984420

>>2984016
pretty cute

>> No.2984787

>>2983764
teal? TEAL!

>> No.2984791

>>2984410
>>2984787
Literally doesn't look dick like anything Teal's ever done.

>> No.2984794

>>2984791
You're dumb, he tweets everyday and his stuff looks exactly like that.

>> No.2984822

>>2983764

you asshats are going to ensure we continue to get like 3 of these fucking request threads a day.

>> No.2984825

>>2984822
A glorious new era in /ic/ baiting :')

>> No.2985008

>>2984822
At least this one is mildly challenging, with subtle foreshortening and an interesting pose.

>> No.2985024

>>2985008

can confirm, sadly been struggling with the foreshortening broken leg on this one. God I suck.

>> No.2985105

>>2983982
You captured extremely well the feels of the original, but what happened to her right leg?

>> No.2985124
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2985124

I tried.

>> No.2985131
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>> No.2985141

>>2985124
Her torso and her legs look like 2 separate drawings

>> No.2985154

>>2985141
yeah...mah bad....kinda struggled with it...changed it up, forgot to change up other stuff....ect. I am not worthy.

>> No.2985160
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>>2985154
It's all good, I'm not an art master so ye

>> No.2985161

>>2985160
huh....was half expecting a loomis comment...that's a first....thank you???

>> No.2985176

>>2984825
The irony of being baited into actually drawing something instead of shitposting

>> No.2985215
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>>2983915

The more developed and unambiguous the sketch/under drawing is, the less uncertainty there is when doing line work.

It is easier to work with only variable brush size, or variable density. Variable size emulates pen/brush (manga), while variable density feels like mechanical pencil (anime cel). Decide what look you want.

>> No.2985219
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2985219

loli magical girl or something

>> No.2985222

>>2985219
her head is like, 3 times too big man. it doesnt look like a loli. it looks like she has a giant brain tumor and is going to die of it soon.

>> No.2985519

>>2984794
Wait where's his twitter?!

>> No.2985524

>>2984016
>>2983764
>>2983982
blogs fellas?

>> No.2985596
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2985596

>> No.2985663

>>2984101
Best version so far.

>> No.2985671

>>2983764
Lines too inconsistent, legs are oddly proportioned compared to the rest of the body. Completely lacks the feeling of the original.

I'd say a solid 3/10?

>> No.2985673

>>2985131
This is perfection

Her left hand could use some work but I don't really give a shit, solid work anon

>> No.2985724

>>2985671
post your version

>> No.2985847

>>2985131
>>2985124

Something to consider. A lollipop stick is very thin, so it should be held either by fingertip, or in a tightly closed grip. Use fingertips for a person with finesse. Use grip to express brutishness or childishness.

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>> No.2985954

>>2985596
this one captures her likeness the most. good job

>> No.2985964

if i post my oc will you guise draw him too?

>> No.2985968

>>2985950
t rex hands

>> No.2985969
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2985969

Oh no, the tiny teetering princess slipped in an act of carelessness! Will prince Charming swoop in and keep her fragile visage from hitting the rough gravel?! (tune in next time...)

>>2983764
This blew me away.

>>2984101
This made me chuckle.

>>2985131
You made her into a fine woman.

>>2985219
And don't kill me, desu.

>> No.2985972

>>2985968
yeah I see they're shit now

>> No.2985973
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>> No.2985990

>>2985973
do you have a blog please?

>> No.2986053

>>2985964
well...in theory...I guess people would do it...and there is nothing stopping you from posting....sooooo

>> No.2986072

>>2985964
>Trying to moderate people on what they should draw on not
weaponized autism

>> No.2986178

>>2983764
>>2985131
>>2985596
>>2985969
>>2985973
blogs

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>> No.2986272

>>2985973
>>2986257
blog?

>> No.2986288

>>2985973
triggered

>> No.2986529

>>2985131
How long did it take for you to draw this?

>> No.2986579
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2986579

>>2983764
>tfw i never will get that good
I feel like giving up

>> No.2986679
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2986679

>>2986579

You can make it too, anon. Just follow the steps.

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2986895

>>2986679

>> No.2986908

>>2986679
The path... I can see it!!

>> No.2986910

>>2983915
digital line art is cheating.

>> No.2986921

>>2986910
tradbabby btfo

>> No.2986929
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2986929

>>2986895
>>2986908
don't worry I fixed it

>> No.2986931

>>2986929
You had one job and you put loli hentai in the middle. Beyond retarded.

>> No.2986934
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>>2983654

>> No.2986944
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>>2983654
no bully plz i did my best

>> No.2986952

>>2986934
cute

>> No.2986961
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2986961

>>2983654
R8 me please.
3 hrs

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2987002

i-if someone would be so kind as to redline me, pls...

>> No.2987022

>>2986995
what do you call this masterpiece?

>> No.2987024

>>2987022
Bold and brash.

>> No.2987037
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2987037

>>2987002

>> No.2987047

>>2987037
cute!!!!

>> No.2987071

>>2987024
more like: would bone and smash

>> No.2987163

>>2985596
Underrated best version

>> No.2987198

>>2983956
>This anime and cartoon hybrid style
animays are cartoons you fucking dingus

>> No.2987212

>>2987198
I obviously meant the combination between the western and eastern style you sperg

>> No.2987227

>>2986944
>>2986961
>>2986995
blog?

>> No.2987332

>>2985596
>Her legs
Thicc

>> No.2987334
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ayo

>> No.2987345

>>2987334
wow anon great style what's it called, "fucking up the proportions and pose for no good reason"?

>> No.2987346

>>2987334
Shes cute

Thats all that matters

>> No.2987351

>>2987345
>wow anon great style what's it called, "fucking up the proportions and pose for no good reason"?

i usually just shorten it to "fucking up" but you can use the long name if you want

>> No.2987356

>>2985950
Always that one guy

>> No.2987380

>>2986257
2 smug 4 me

>> No.2987386

>>2987227
yes, blogger.com

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>>2987334
>>2987002
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>>2985596
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>>2984016
>>2983982
mandatory blog

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2987414

15 minutes of shitposting well spent

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>>2987414
>>2987387
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>>2985673
>>2985671
Blog?

>> No.2987439

>>2987387
>>2987426
^ This is just shitposting, I genuinely want to know the blogs of a couple of posts here.

>> No.2987443

>>2987439
what are they?

>> No.2987448

>>2987443
They're >>2983764 and >>2985973

>> No.2987459

>>2987439
Shit paint drawings and massive blog posters are just shitposts, report them and hope the mods do something

Its sad we cant have a confy productive thread without those down syndrome cunts ruining everything

>> No.2987465

>>2987459
>mods

What are those?

>> No.2987474

>>2987465
Just a oldfag legend, they say mods are capable of moderating the board by removing shitposts and baning shitposters

>> No.2987477

>>2987474
How much are they paid for this?

>> No.2987483

>>2987477
They aren't jews, they do it for free

>> No.2987494
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decided to shade this turd for the lulz.

>> No.2987543
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>> No.2987556

>>2987543
A bit on the nose there, don't you think?

>> No.2987579
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2987579

>>2983654
i tried

>> No.2987589

>>2987579
Not bad. Did you use any construction before you outlined it?

>> No.2987596

>>2987589
Nope, I only measured the heads/proportion thing, does that count?

>> No.2987604
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>>2987596
That's not what construction is.
What's surprising is you somehow managed to put in rhythm and flow into your drawing just in the outline phase and the proportions still look relatively fine. How long have you been drawing anon? You should try learning about light and color basics if you can draw sketches like this consistently. You still have a few areas that could be pushed more, like giving the knees jut out just a little more to give them volume but you're on the right track.

>> No.2987611

>>2987604
ahh, i see, I've been drawing since i was a kid, 18yo now, but i've only had a proper guidance since a few years back, 3 or 4 maybe.
Thanks a lot for the input, i tried to pick up on colour, painting, etc, a bit lazy about it though, any books or videos you'd reccomend?

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>>2987611
First off. I'd recommend Bridgman's Constructive anatomy and Bridgman's Complete Guide to Drawing from life. His drawings are very planar and structural which will help you immensely with shading because if you know where the planes are, you know where the values of shadows go. After that I'd also reccommend Scott Robertson's How To Render book, as well as maybe Color and Light by James Gurney. That should teach you everything you need to know. I'd reccommend also Kienan Lafferty's series on coloring on Youtube. You'll learn shit like:
>paint dark to light
>every change in plane is a change in value and every change in value means that there's a change in plane as well
>desaturate shadows and lights, saturate midtones, hue shift colors when they get lighter or darker

>> No.2987632

>>2987611
Hey, your drawing is great but avoid what this deceiver is telling you. Bridgman will mess you up if you don't know how to study from it.

If you want to get better at lighting the figure and construction, michael hampton has a series on this and vilppu is bleeding with lighting the figure.

>> No.2987634

>>2987621
Damn, those guy's works are really amazing.
Alright, i'll download these books, thanks a lot.
>>2987632
Thanks, guess i'll see if i'm able to understand/learn from bridgmans and check out those you mentioned as well.

>> No.2987640

>>2987632
As long as you copy the planes of the drawings and read the text you should be fine. His drawings are really well drawn, but they are very rough. Really the important things it will teach you is how the muscles wedge into each other and how to simplify the masses of muscles into blocky forms. If you don't already have a decent idea of where muscles are supposed to like or go, look at Hampton to see what the shapes and names of the muscles are first and then try Bridgman if it's too difficult to understand. I already knew the basic shapes of the muscles and vaguely knew where they went but I had trouble drawing them in different angles and making them not flat, so copying all of Bridgman's drawings did wonders for me.

>> No.2987642

>>2987640
Yeah Bridgman is a great source for study I just don't think it's a good starting point but that's just me.

>> No.2987650

>>2987634
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nap7dwHjD9Y
Also maybe check out Marco Bucci

>> No.2987657

>>2987650
He makes it really easy to understand, nice

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>>2983654
Here's my piece of shit

>> No.2987823

>>2985673
>>2985847
Thanks, I'll try to improve on that!
>>2986529
Almost two hours, I'm slow af.
>>2986178
https://kval0.tumblr.com/

>> No.2987856
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Here's my crap.

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>>2983654
I needed a ref, I couldn't wrap my head around the perspective.

>> No.2987896

>>2983654
>>2983764
The craziest thing about this post is that it took less than 3hrs (an upper bound) from when the thread was made.

>> No.2987908

>>2987002
She looks fine just give her more hips

>> No.2987911
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it looked better in my mind

>>2983764
good shit

>> No.2987913

>>2987892
tryhard/10

>> No.2987924

>>2987707
She looks hot af

>> No.2987935

>>2987002
this is giving me hazel vibes

>> No.2987936

>>2987725
Work more on her lower body it looks like the legs are just there no natural flow at all

>> No.2987937

>>2986579
Don't cry, accept failure and start to draw in a better mood. You willl improve but it takes time and work. And if you don't like the word work, just draw. Draw what you like then when you are facing a problem, look at what's wrong and how it is in real life and how other people draw it.

>> No.2988010

>>2985596
I like this one a lot desu

>> No.2988038
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2988038

i also tried

>> No.2988078

>>2987892
You're the anon that made that crazy shark penis thing, right?
Wish i was as creative as you.

>> No.2988086

>>2987856
I like it.

>> No.2988114

>>2987892
This is awesome, blog?

>> No.2988115

>>2987856
It's not crap, anon.

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>>2983654

>> No.2988282

>>2987908
thanks, i won't clutter the thread with another repost but that did make it look a bit better.
>>2987935
idk who/what that is, everything i know about art i learned from tracing anime screenshots

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>> No.2988348

>>2985950
Beautiful and lewd.
Underrated

>> No.2988437

>>2988282
Don't be shy anon, you can't polute the thread by contributing, if anything use imgur

I wanna see how she looks like now

>> No.2988595

>>2988038
Senpai, stop scribbling. Stick to a line. If you can't seem to get a line right, turn your canvas and try from another angle.

>> No.2988605

>>2983764
oh for fuck's sake

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>>2987892

>> No.2988665
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2988665

>>2985969
Thank goodness, prince Charming is here to save our princess!

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2988669

>>2988665
But what's this? A fierce dragon appears, here to steal our princess and make her his involuntary bride!
How will the prince get out this sticky situation?

>> No.2988671

>>2988669
>sticky situation

a 2-way with the dragon don't let me down

>> No.2988677

>>2988669
She's about to experience the pleasure of being cummed inside.

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2988708

Don't feel like polishing this turd any further.

>> No.2988710

>>2988708
also forgot to apply the "my style, your style" meme... whatever

>> No.2988713

>>2988708
People have a lot of fat in their hips and legs anon specially women, just remember that when you are drawing to give them a generous lower body

>> No.2988718

>>2988713
welp, I totally see your point. i knew there was something odd about it, but I couldn't put my finger on it..... fuck

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2988843

>>2988437
o-ok, if you say so.

>> No.2988847

>>2988843
WHAT THE FUCK STOP CLUTTERING THE FUCKING THREAD I'm kidding nigger she is cute.

>> No.2988863

>>2988843
cute

>> No.2988991

>>2984101
you... I like you...

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2989069

I don't really know what happened, but a reference was not one of them

>> No.2989082

>>2988843
She definitely looks better now, if you have a blog post it so I can drop a follow there

>> No.2989143
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I know there's a bunch shit wrong but I just cant for the life of me find what they are specifically

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>> No.2989207

>>2989082
>>2988847
>>2988863

sorry I don't have a blog since I'm just learning, but thanks for the support <3

>> No.2989395

>>2987707
Blog? I love your style!

>> No.2989845

>>2987332
Shes sucks that lolipop all day, of course the sugar is gonna make her thicc

>> No.2989870

>>2986995
This is oddly nice

>> No.2989899

>>2985950
made me lol

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2989935

>>2983654
messy

>> No.2990260

>>2985973
I need to inquire of your borg.

>> No.2990319 [DELETED] 

>>2989845
But eventually she will grow up and the thiccness will be stored in the right places
>>2987334
>>2987579
>>2985131
>>2987334

>> No.2990322

>>2989845
But eventually she will grow up and the thiccness will be stored in the right places
>>2987707
>>2987579
>>2985131

>> No.2990323

>>2983764
>>2987892
Fucking blog?

>> No.2990359
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>>2983654

>> No.2990373
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2990373

Is this a style?

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2990374

coudnt draw her fkn rasing her arm

>> No.2990403
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2990403

So many mistakes..

>> No.2990407

>>2990373
Everything you do little bits of your personality goes in it, the way you walk, you talk, you draw, you write

This is all style

>> No.2990409

>>2990359
blog?

>> No.2990419
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>>2983654

I don't have skills so here's my seal instead.

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>>2983654
Only the best for you

>> No.2990460
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2990460

New here, hey y'all

>> No.2990555

>>2990460
I feel like her feets could be a bit bigger and more volume to the hair but good shit nonetheless, specially the perspective

>> No.2990561

>>2990420
oy vey

>> No.2990592

>>2990403
This looks amazing don't you dare talk shit

>> No.2990596

>>2990403
S-Shinobu-chan?!

>> No.2990622
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2990622

Painting practice and my regular manga style. Need to study the fundies more.

>> No.2990651

>>2990622
i think you need to study not being so boring more

>> No.2990652

>>2990622
Really impressed with your work anon, the way you have 2 different styles in such a solid level is amazing

How long have you been drawing and how long did it take for you to draw those? also blog

>> No.2990653
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>> No.2990664

>>2990651
somebody's jealous

>> No.2990666

>>2990373
hello nile

>> No.2990667
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2990667

Here's mine

>> No.2990729
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I apologize for getting lost on the way to the /beg/ thread

>> No.2990805

>>2990652
Thanks. First one was about 4 hours since I don't know what I'm doing just yet. Second took 25 mins(I'm more comfortable with lines and manga in general.)

Been drawing since I could hold a pencil. But that doesn't mean much. Don't have a blog, most of my stuff consists of studies anyway. And my older stuff is pretty bad haha.

>> No.2990825 [DELETED] 

>>2990805
You should do a blog man not for the money or anything but more as an archive for your work and if it happens to create a following thats just a bonus

I'm stupidly way worse than you, but I made a blog for the sake of it, I haven't posted yet because I got sick but gonna post it soon as I recover and its nothing fancy since I'm just a shitter who draws on my free time with pen and paper and loves to write about stuff

Also I know my advice may be wrong because I'm far from any professional, but you should draw for fun more often even if you ain't gonna blog, not only it helps to stimulate your imagination but its also what art is about at the end of the day, to create something, you are too good already to fall for the /ic/ trap to achieve some unreachable perfection

Anyways, take care

>> No.2990827 [DELETED] 

>>2990825
You should do a blog man not for the money or anything but more as an archive for your work and if it happens to create a following thats just a bonus

I'm stupidly way worse than you, but I made a blog for the sake of it, I haven't posted yet because I got sick but gonna post it soon as I recover and its nothing fancy since I'm just a shitter who draws on my free time with pen and paper and loves to write about stuff

Also I know my advice may be wrong because I'm far from any professional, but you should draw for fun more often even if you ain't gonna blog, not only it helps to stimulate your imagination but its also what art is about at the end of the day, to create something, you are too good already to fall for the /ic/ trap to chase some unreachable perfection

Anyways, take care

>> No.2990830

>>2990805
You should do a blog man not for the money or anything but more as an archive for your work and if it happens to create a following thats just a bonus

I'm stupidly way worse than you, but I made a blog for the sake of it, I haven't posted yet because I got sick but gonna post it soon as I recover and its nothing fancy since I'm just a shitter who draws on my free time with pen and paper and loves to write about stuff

Also I know my advice may be wrong because I'm far from any professional, but you should draw for fun more often even if you ain't gonna blog, not only it helps to stimulate your imagination but its also what art is about at the end of the day, to create something, you are too good already to fall for the /ic/ trap to chase some unreachable perfection

Anyways, take care

>> No.2990844

>>2990666
hiya anon

>> No.2990850
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>>2990729
Lol brilliant

>> No.2990857
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2990857

i got bored but that's almost my style.

>> No.2990869

>>2990830
Thanks for your thoughts anon. I'm keeping an archive of my progress, but don't think it's worth uploading. Not striving for perfection, just efficiently and speed with my technical knowledge. I'd like to freelance since I'm bored with just drawing for myself. But don't think I'm ready yet.

>> No.2990931

>>2988078
That was tableguy, I've never seen him do digital so I doubt it's him but I could be wrong

>> No.2990956
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2990956

>>2987892
scanner is such a piece of shit, it's like it can't see pink - her lolipop was fun

>>2987913
>>2988614
i spent too much time on this one

>>2988114
>>2990323
blog is here >>2990621

>>2988078
>>2990931
yea that was me, i sketch in digital then print and ink/color

>> No.2990964

>>2990956
Fuck, maybe it's my monitor. The colors look insane on my iPad

>> No.2990975

>>2990403
Right shoulder isn't connected to the body. Draw the right shoulder without the poofy garment and you will see why it doesn't make sense, I normally would redline it but this is something you will easily see yourself.

>> No.2990993

>>2988665
>>2988669
Oh, you advanced the plot. Interesting! I love how casual the prince is looking at the dragon. Seems like the princess won't have time to catch her breath for a while.

(Don't think I'll be able to draw a continuation, though. Might go to jail for that etc.)

Thanks for the entertainment!

>> No.2991000

>>2990592
If you thinks so, but i can see so many mistakes caused by my laziness.

>>2990596
Who?

>>2990975
Ah yes is see it, but this isn't the only mistake.

>> No.2991003

>>2983764
yoshinari, is that yoh?

>> No.2991005

>>2991003
kek
Yeah that person got very close to Yoshi's style

I'm super jelly.

>> No.2991155

>>2990667

Got any critiques for mine? I feel like it's just... boring. The only touch I feel like I'm putting to it is giving her sharper teeth.

>> No.2991254

>>2991155
Work on those proportions, her head is way too big compared to everything, like other people in the thread you are giving her no hips at all, the arms and hands are way too small work on making them bigger and don't forget arms aren't just noodles coming out someone's body, they are meat so they have form but on this character in particular shes is wearing some clothes so you aren't gonna work on making muscles or many curves in her arms, also remember her outfit has some pluff thingy in the shoulders

>> No.2991544

>>2986260
underrated post nice work anon

>> No.2991637
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2991637

A bit late to the party but here's my /beg/ attempt

>> No.2991641

>>2991637
Reminds me of children cartoons, nice. Like Pixar meets Dora the Explorer.

>> No.2991644

>>2985950
winrar

>> No.2991646 [DELETED] 

thanks! I was going for a certain Pixar character

>> No.2991647

>>2991641
thanks! I was going for a certain Pixar character

>> No.2991783

>>2991637
Surprisingly cute and familiar

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>>2983764
Reminds me of this one

>> No.2992078

>>2990622
the pillow shading and overblending on the first style hurts me

>> No.2992314

>>2986260
i actually think this catches the likeness the most
fucking nice

>> No.2992317

>>2987725
>give me compliments

>> No.2992354

>>2991917
lel can't belive that someone would repost my shitty art... and my try was >>2990403

>> No.2992390

>>2991917
>>2990403
>>2992354
Have you got a blog?

>> No.2992393

>>2992390
I have DA but i don*t upload stuff.

>> No.2992399

>>2992393
aw

>> No.2992411
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>>2992078
I was being a retard and painting with the soft brush. Tried a different brush and got a better effect. You're right about the shading. lol Thanks for the pointers!

>> No.2992419

>>2992411
far right looks horrifying

>> No.2992430

>>2992419
Yeah, was probably not a good idea to try to keep the eyes as big. Was trying to draw Tsu from My Hero Academia. Not the smartest choice for practice.

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2992441

er yeah

>> No.2992448

>>2992354
You version was one of the best in that thread of course I saved

I did my own version of the twintails girl, but the thread 404 before I could post it

I wonder how that anon is doing
nowadays...

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2992455

er yeah

>> No.2992477

>>2992411
theyre called guidelines for a reason, dont emphasize them like that jesus christ

>> No.2992484

>>2990956
>>2990359
>>2985596
Solid work anons

>>2991917
I remember this thread

>>2990857
Her pose doesn't really feel natural

>>2992411
Right is too spooky

>> No.2992497

>>2992448
Thanks but it could have been better.

>> No.2992593

>>2992411
>I have two personalities

>> No.2992736
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Cant make the meme on my phone, well here is my attempt

>> No.2993100
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>>2988669
>>2988671
>>2988677
>>2990993
Turns out our prince is no ordinary gentleman, he's the courageous unmatched captain Kolbjorn (or cuck for short), and so he escapes with style, strategically leaving princess behind as a bait for the dragon.

Splendid tactic, well done captain!

>> No.2993102

>>2993100
>inb4 she's swallowed/eaten/mauled/killed in some fashion
RIP

>> No.2993108
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>>2993100
*obligatory dramatic shot*

>> No.2993111

>>2993108
N-NOT THE LOLLIPOP!!?

>> No.2993117

>>2993108
YAMEROOOOOOO

>> No.2993125
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>>2993108
Aaand we finish with a thick curtain of viewer's imagination.

That's all from me, if someone feels like giving the princess a different fate, feel free to do so.

>>2993102
Sorry senpai, I have promises to fulfill.

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2993129

>>2993125
And here's one more if anyone feels like going apeshit over her looks.

Good night /ic/.

>> No.2993131

>>2993129
noooooooo

>> No.2993132

D:

>> No.2993133

>>2993125
>we finish with a thick curtain of viewer's imagination.
I hope the dragon's finish was more satisfying.

>> No.2993143

>>2993131
>>2993132
>>2993133
What would you like to happen next?

>> No.2993145

>>2993143
her licking a delicious, large lollipop

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2993151

fug it. My turd I mean my turn.

>> No.2993197

>>2993108
DELETHIS

>> No.2993207

>>2993151
you should make your own thread. on second thought, maybe not.

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2993213

>>2983654
Ignore how bad the left side is, practicing perspective. Tips would be nice.

>> No.2993219

>>2993207
>on second thought, maybe not

what did he mean by this?

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2993243

Sequel time!

>>2993129
But what's this?
It looks like all the pure love - also autism, but mainly pure love - from the anons of this board are charging the little princess with magical power!

>> No.2993246

>>2993243
:D !!

>> No.2993247

>>2993243
GET THEM PRINCESS

>> No.2993248

>>2987892
where do you get your lsd from bruh

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2993250

>>2993243

>> No.2993255

>>2993250
She needs her lollipop, like Sailor Moon uses her magical thingy

>> No.2993259

>>2993250
aw shit nigga

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>>2993250
The dragon is rekt beyond repair. It looks like things might start getting back to normal.

>> No.2993269
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2993269

>>2993262
>>2993145
The princess was awarded a giant lollipop as a reward for slaying the beast and restoring harmony all throughout the land.
The bitch ass prince was hung the next morning.

The end.

>> No.2993270

>>2993269
YOU FUCK, THIS WAS SO SWEET

>> No.2993273

>>2993219
>>2993207
so this is the power of a slow board

>> No.2993274

>>2993243
>>2993250
>>2993262
>>2993269
Exceeellent!

>> No.2993276

>>2993269
She looks so happy and cute in this last panel

Would buy it again

>> No.2993278

>>2993269
bravo

are you a storyboard artist?

>> No.2993299

>>2993243
>>2993269
I know it sounds silly but those made my heart so warm, thank you anon I was needing that

>> No.2993303
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2993303

>>2993213
I'm no master, but I'd start with simple forms that are easier to manipulate with, so I use them for figuring out the composition.
Fleshing it out with muscle can be difficult, but as you practice form and perspective, your canvas will turn into 3D space you can reach into and pull your forms out of.

Good resources are Drawabox/Dynamic sketching, Vandruff's perspective (there's a thread about it right now, don't miss it) and exercises from Scott Robertson's How to draw.
Good luck.

>>2993270
>>2993274
>>2993276
Thanks guys, you mean a lot to me.

>>2993278
Nah, I'm a 19yo IT student. Thanks for the compliment.

>> No.2993304

>>2993269
never mess with a girl and her lollipop

>> No.2993308

>>2993303
not him, but thanks for the help anon

>> No.2993311

>>2993299
That was all I ever wanted.

>>2990993
Also thanks for letting me borrow your design, you'd deserve a large portion of the (You)s I've been getting here.

>> No.2993313

>>2993303
We need more people like you, have a good night anon and sleep tight

>> No.2993431
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2993431

Gave it a quick try

>> No.2993491

>>2993303
What brush is tha?

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2993546

>>2993431
Nice.
Pic related, just a little mouse redline for those knee overlaps, they keep bugging me.

>>2993491
David Revoy's charcoal pencil. It's supposedly for Krita, but basically it's just an oval stamp of grainy texture.
>https://www.davidrevoy.com/article326/krita-brushes-charcoal-pencils

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>>2983654
Just got my reference

I think we need to give our girl a name since eventually she will fade into the 404 void

>> No.2993563
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2993563

sorry, i made her too feminine D=

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>>2993546
Got it, thanks Anon
the knees kept bugging me too, so I'll keep this in mind

>> No.2993943

>>2992411
This is quite possibly one of the most fucked up things I've ever seen on 4chan.

So tell me. Why do people insist on using realistic rendering techniques on anime. Is this on purpose? Do they not understand where the line between appealing and uncanny valley is? Do they just have a shitty sense of design? Like does anyone think this is acceptable?

I genuinely want to know.

>> No.2993998
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2993998

>>2993943
well it's pretty obvious why someone would attempt things like that: they want to draw anime, but they also want to render (i.e. take their drawing further/apply knowledge of form)
artists that developed their skills attempting to represent reality but also have an interest in anime will usually attempt to fuse the appealing anime style with a higher sense of realism: of course it's a desirable idea, cute waifus but MORE real!
but, of course, you can't create true 'anime girls' without a very strong abstraction from reality. and like you said, the uncanny valley is difficult to avoid while rendering such highly stylized forms.

i think any artist that is raised on the '/ic/ mindset' (large focus on fundamentals, less of a focus on appeal/stylization) has to kind of re-learn how to draw things purely based on appeal, and that includes going through a phase where they're attempting to use their 'skills' on stylized things, resulting in spooky uncanny valley and largely unappealing drawings. creating and understanding appealing stylization is of course a whole separate skill that has to be trained and developed, and it's usually underestimated by /ic/.

>> No.2994025

>>2993998
So many people on /ic/ have trouble rendering that it's almost strange. You go anywhere else, and you'll see beginners/intermediate artists that are able to render a nice looking piece, but they need to work on fundamentals. Here it's the opposite, and its a big reason why a lot of people here aren't able to truly see how they're improving. It's like you see people getting better at anatomy and perspective, but they have nothing to show for it.

>> No.2994058

>>2993998
>>2994025

Ok I get that but who would do fuckin draw >>2992411
and think "Yes, that looks nice". Do you go temporarily blind form staring at boxes from practicing "muh fundies" all day or something?

The thing that absolutely baffles me about this particular monstrosity is that the unrendered drawing in the middle is really quite good. Why the "just fuck my shit up bruh" rendering on top of it? Why didn't they just instead add hair and called it a fucking day?

>> No.2994068

>>2994058
Oh and no one don't give me that "tHeN SHoW Ur weRK" bullshit. I'm not claiming to be some artist blessed with the god hand but I have at least enough sense to know that kind of shit wouldn't fly no matter how many wings and propellers you hammer into it.

>> No.2994178
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shmumsh

>> No.2994222
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2994222

>>2993943
>realistic rendering techniques

I wouldn't call the rendering on this "realistic." Realistic rendering should respect the actual form. What people like >>2992411 do is apply a rote memorization of some face rendering that doesn't fit the form. They end up with something that has the geometry of a bisque doll, and just as creepy.

Anime figures are as real as you can get, and they "render" just fine.

>> No.2994240

>>2994222
I guess the biggest thing to realise about animu faces is that they don't really even *have* any features that you would need to shade. Just look at that pic you posted, it's just a flat wall with eyes and a mouth painted on.

So if you leave the face almost featureless and render everything like you would normally and you'll probably get something that looks ok

>> No.2995223
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2995223

How do I improve?

>> No.2995248

>>2995223
youre not using form.

>> No.2995625

>>2995223
Use construction also sketch more it feels like you did everything in just one line of work

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>>2983654
leave it to me to come up with the most boring poses

>> No.2995873

>>2994222
Yeah rendering cartoons should look like toys and figurines. 3D molders also have the problem of shoehorning in random "realistic" details that aren't in the original 2d designs, it baffles me that some people want things to look ugly.

>> No.2995945

>>2983764
>Teal in /ic/
>2017
Fuck off reee

>> No.2995958

>>2995873
makes me wonder if that'd be a problem with figurines too if the material would support it

>> No.2995988

>>2995871
cute though

i have a funny sort of tip about poses, i think some people when they draw they primarily imbue their figure with um life i guess, like try make it look like there's a person in there. and if you're that kind of artist and you want to do dynamic poses you can try thinking of a dynamic personality for your figure and it can make it a lot easier to think of those kinds of poses.

>> No.2996204

>>2995988
Definitly sounds good. I'll try that. Thanks for the tip!

>> No.2996249
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2996249

Anatomy is a meme.

>> No.2996310

>>2990622
Nice stuff

>> No.2996411

>>2988344
>>2989935
Slightly Underrated

>>2988124
Definitely Underrated

>> No.2996602

>>2994178
cool

>> No.2996888

>>2996602
>Wasted the last post before thread going on bump limit with that

you cucklord

>> No.2997186

>>2996888
Fuck you and your stupid trips, nigger.