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Draw a face from imagination.

>> No.2967715

>>2967709
Gosh darn it I swear it wasn't rotated when I took the picture.

>> No.2967730
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>> No.2967748

>>2967730
>that feel when finally hair

>> No.2967765

>>2967730
Amazing how consistently he draws these ayylmao faces.

>> No.2967771

>>2967748
>>2967765
Finlay here; guess its gender

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>> No.2967846
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It's some kind of face.

>> No.2967850
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made me a waifu

>> No.2967865

>>2967709
>>2967730
>>2967836
>>2967846
>>2967850

to /beg/ with you
>>2967279

>> No.2967966

>>2967865
Offer more insightful critique instead of shitting up the thread.

>> No.2967981

>>2967865
TRASH

>> No.2967998

>>2967709
Do you guys get stumped when drawing the hair sometimes? I sometimes tend to draw weird straight line triangle hair, and I need to pull up a few references of hairstyles.

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>>2967865
I refuse!

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>>2967709
OP here. I rotated it.

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>>2967709
It better fucking rotate this time.

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>>2967709
It better fucking rotate this time.

>> No.2968104

>>2967966
wrong porportions and symbol drawing

>> No.2968107

>>2968104
proportions*

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>> No.2968123

>>2968104
Who specifically?

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>> No.2968196

>>2968130
What type of chimera is this?

>> No.2968198

>>2967730
I am so sick of seeing this guys slanted faces in /beg/

>> No.2968201

>>2968198
It unnerves me a bit

>> No.2968202
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>>2967709
Weird ugly face attempt

>> No.2968231
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No ref or eraser
I just grabbed a black coloured pencil and tried rip

>> No.2968360
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Why is it always after you finish you notice everything you did wrong?

Am I ever gonna make it, guys?

>> No.2968363

>>2968123
Buzzwords apply to everyone, don't reply to shitposters.

>> No.2968427
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Yes I frequent /beg/

>> No.2968431
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Actual critique is hugely welcomed

>> No.2968432
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>>2968431
Ih, uh, posted the wrong one

>> No.2968433

>>2968427
Hey there
>>2968360
You'll make it. Is that a niggress

>> No.2968434

>>2968432
The face feels flat to me. I like the hair tho. You should read the sticky.

>> No.2968436
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>> No.2968440

>>2968434
Will do, thanks for the heads up

>> No.2968454

>>2967865
>doesn't even post his own work

>> No.2968489
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Critique my garbage please

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>> No.2968507
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A face.

>> No.2968511
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>>2968507
Oh fucc, meant to post the smaller version.

>> No.2968529

>>2968489
I'm mainly talking about the ones on the right

>mouths too low
>foreheads too small
>all of the ears too low
>distance between eyebrow line to bottom of the nose is larger than the distance between bottom the the nose to the bottom of the chin
>eyes are not in the middle of the face

In other words, more Loomis

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>> No.2968855

>>2968603
Yoshikage Kira?

>> No.2969407

>>2967730
>>2967836
>>2967850
>>2968130
>>2968202
>>2968231
>>2968427
>>2968431
>>2968432
>>2968489
>>2968502
>>2968603
>>2968851

Study Hampton and head anatomy in general.

>> No.2969410

>>2967730
ayy

>> No.2969450

>>2969407
yes sir

>> No.2969489

>>2969407
Useless post

>> No.2969538
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I tried ;-;

>> No.2969578

>>2969538
Cross-eyed.

>> No.2969579

>>2969578
Eeek, I was trying to figure out what looked so funny about his eyes. thanks for pointing that out.

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>>2967709

>> No.2969642
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>when your pencil is blue but the walls are lime green.. the cast though

>> No.2969645

>>2969642
dat piece of weed stem

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>>2969645
DUDE

>> No.2969652

Why can't you draw from imagination /ic/?
Wasn't Loomis meant to help you with this?
Have you been wasting all this time?
Are you finally gonna give up?

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>>2969645
kush is good, but eraser dust is dankest

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>>2969662
#3

am I gonna make it?

>> No.2969742

Is this a /beg/ honeypot?

>> No.2969746

>>2969742
Yes

>> No.2969754

>>2969742
Yea why the fuck are there so many /beg/ people in here?

>> No.2970221

>>2969754
>>2969746
>>2969742
post yer work

>> No.2972004

They're not all bad

>> No.2972515
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>> No.2972558

>>2968502
What's wrong with my head other than the shorty hatching and lips

>> No.2972559

>>2972558
*shitty

>> No.2972678

>>2972515
is this a troll?

>> No.2972684
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>ITT people who bought into the whole only draw from reference meme

>> No.2972769

>>2968360
Oh shit homie it's kinda good and kinda bad at the same time.
You wrapped her cheekbones up towards her forehead instead of pushing them to her ears, the neck doesn't quite connect to her head (cylindrical form, scm doesn't insert anywhere) and it looks almost as if you merged the clavicles into one form - you know they move separately, right?

It's good enough to impress, but I wonder how you'd tackle a full body pose.
Be aware of how human body works, not just how it looks, that is my advice.
Keep it up.

>>2969664
Depends.
Do you want it?

>>2972515
Wrong perspective, no simple forms. Learn to draw the head first, then you can start to add the individual features. Read the sticky, it's all in there.

>> No.2972770

>>2972678
don't bully him like this

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>>2972885
took some inspiration from you to build my face better senpai

>> No.2972933
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Don't post your shiet fucking art on my board ever again

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>> No.2972974

>>2972959
*DEPRESSION INTENSIFIES*

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>>2972923

>> No.2973032

>>2968433
It is a niggress. Thanks anon

>>2972769
Thank you for the help and words, based crit-anon. I never really thought about the clavicle or the cheeks.

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>> No.2973079

>>2973066
gross

>> No.2973092
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Yerp

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>> No.2973139

>>2973130
>draw face from immgination
>face is least notable part

gg anon

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I really need to study noses and ears

>> No.2973168

>>2973130
Neat. Post ur blog.

>> No.2973180

>>2973066
i like it a lot, blog?

>> No.2973190
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meh. i need to do head studies pretty badly

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just fuck me up

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>>2973168
Have deviant but it is empty cos I post only "finished" works there. Also don't like drawing people

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I gotta study some fat people

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fug

>> No.2973997

>>2973314
terrifying

>> No.2974025
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>>2967709
Thoughts?

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crit pls

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>> No.2974294

>>2974025
Decent overall head shape. Would focus nose and hair studies.

>>2974043
Style aside, hairline and mouth are flattening the whole thing.

>>2974276
Like the hatching. Would focus more contrast on inner eye lids, and mind the roundness of the mouth "mound".

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Mobile WILL flip this

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>>2974411
reminds me of catherine from gintama

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>>2967730

>> No.2976186
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Can someone point out what is bad? I'm blind to my own inadequacies,and bad at critiquing in general

>> No.2976274

>>2976186
Try making caricature-esque proportions, play with different distances between hairline, brows, nose and chin.

>> No.2976292

>>2976186
looks fine.

>> No.2976301

Good fucking god... you all draw like you're five years old.

>> No.2976472

>>2976301
So?

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>> No.2976615

>>2967850
its my waifu now

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that I can

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aherpaderp

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>> No.2976779
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Yo

>> No.2976810

>>2976292
die

>> No.2976836

>>2976779

vetyr PLS GO

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b-bls

>> No.2977008

>>2974497
Fucking kek, I knew it reminded me of something.

>> No.2978826

>>2976779
You're getting sloppy

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>> No.2979445

>>2968115
wtf is wrong with your imagination mate?

>> No.2979453

>>2974276
nice
though the hair is kinda generic, considering the good hatching you did on the face ,maybe studying how andrew loomis draws hair could benefit you

>> No.2979456

>>2974411
>>2974493
reminds me of he-man

>> No.2979457

>>2976186
the nose and the mouth seem to be slightly unalined with the chin

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>>2979453
thanks yeah I need to study hair real bad...

>> No.2979620

>>2979601
I like this one. Very real expression and the v neck frames it nicely. Can you show teeth?

>> No.2979629

>>2979519
His mouth is closed, so how is he speaking? You need to study Loomis, he covers basic topics like this so in a nutshell swap to furry porn or kill yourself youll never make it as an illustrator which should be your goal because money is what its about how will you support a mail order bride or get her wet unleas you can draw perfect comic strips


Desu

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>>2979620

>> No.2979691

>>2968115
Jesus Christ draw something new

>> No.2979708

>>2979629
if his mouth is open, how can he enounciate?

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Done

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Pls no bully

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I drew way more than a face because I really liked how it look but here's just the face

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>>2979888
damn windows auto correcting the view, here

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>>2979730
Did it again

>> No.2979939
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this is sad

>> No.2979943

>>2979687
Ha nice. Youre good!

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>>2967709

>> No.2980398
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>> No.2980431

>>2980113
you've already made it haven't you?

>> No.2980433

>>2980113
mooobel~
Good luck with moving

>> No.2980444

>>2979890
Takes time to rotate, but not to resize, kek.

>> No.2980454

>>2979923
Work on cleaning up your linework. Looks like short scratchy strokes. Do smoother, longer movements. Even as a sketch, get looser and relax your hand movement

>> No.2980471

>>2979867
cute blog pls

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I've come prepared. Her face bugs me but I haven't bothered to fix it.

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>> No.2980590

>>2979867
waardenburg syndrome?

>> No.2980788

>>2980433
hehe thanks dude
JiboJabo here I come

>> No.2980791

>>2980431
nawww

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.......

>> No.2980867

>>2973300
i like it

>> No.2980868

>>2980113
blog?

>> No.2980921

>>2980398
i like it a lot\

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From a while ago.

>> No.2982593

>>2982576
No way

>> No.2982608

>>2982593
thx, I guess ? it's just practice dude, and doing heads/bodies from imagination is just in my comfort zone, so i'm pretty good at it by now.

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>>2967709
meh

>> No.2983705

>>2982535
I really like it! He looks badass. That guy would get shit done!

>> No.2983972

>>2973276
Alex?

>> No.2983990

>>2983972
Gertrude?

>> No.2984002

>>2968436
Nice but 1.5 mb

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>> No.2984048

>>2983990

Jacques?

>> No.2984364
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Kinda wonky. I kinda like how it turned out though.

>> No.2984388

>>2984364
But why did you give him a fuccboi haircut?

Would've looked better shaved all the way.

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I was proud of my blue dude until I saw this>>2984364 Really great skin tone and value control

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>>2984364
fixed

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the one in the upper left was the first I drew... save to say I fucked that one up royally, the rest I don't know. Lighting is pretty bad, but it was the best I had available at my dorm.

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>>2984915
not fat enough

>> No.2985011

>>2974411
>>2979456
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZZ5LpwO-An4

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2985064

>>2985011

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Gotta work on open mouths among other things.

Please don't be a huge file.

>> No.2985074

>>2985065
teeth are a bitch, it takes a while to get them right at first!

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>> No.2985927
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First one.

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>>2985927
Second one.

For some reason I feel unable to draw females. I started this one as a female then I reach a point when it becomes a male and I give up on redoing it.

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>> No.2986041

Fucked something up with this one I'm afraid

>> No.2986043
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>>2986041
Forgot the fucking image for a start

>> No.2986056

>>2985953
Looks neat. Blog?

>> No.2986186

>>2980232
Niiiiice.

>> No.2986188

>>2982576
Saw these before. Still think the bald guy in the kinda Batman animated series style is the best one. The more realistic ones are not pleasing. Too tight, and uniform with the marks maybe. Of the realistic ones, the asian girl is probably the best but half of her face is hidden. From what is seen she feels drawn a little more loose and alive though. The lines on the face feel more like tonal shapes too I suppose. Maybe a more painterly approach is necessary for realism past a certain point.

>> No.2987333
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Feedback please

>> No.2987337

>>2987333
looks gay and shitty

>> No.2987360

>>2967865
Post your merc.wip faggot

>> No.2987364

>>2968489
Attack On Titan/10

>> No.2987367

>>2986056
sorry, don't have one

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>>2967709

>> No.2987422

>>2987337
How do I fix that?

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>> No.2987779

>>2987422
dont be gay, maybe?

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pretty abhorrent, but best imagination head ive done so far

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tablets being weird so heres an old one

>> No.2987852

>>2987333
The crown/top of the head seems too high. The features are pretty good, but the mouth is crooked. The chin bugs me the most since it throws off the entire perspective of the face. If I was to draw a straight line down from the nose, both the mouth and the chin are shifted more on the right side of this centerline. The entire chin is on the right side of this centerline.

Remember, the line of the eyes, bottom of the nose, mouth line, and bottom of chin determine the perspective of the face. In your drawing, the eyes and nose are linkes pretty well together. However, it seems as though the mouth and chin are sliding to the right of her face. Also she doesn't have enough Trapezius on the far side. I would even indicate with a line the sternocleidomastoid on the neck.

Other than that, it's pretty good. You might have just had an off day or something. However I really like how you've handled the eyes and nose (I draw my eyes always fuck huge) so I've actually saved this pic as a reminder to draw smaller eyes.

>> No.2987910

>>2987337
somebody's jealous

>> No.2988155

>>2987852
Much appreciated and noted. Thank you