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take a look at my god awful art style and give me your worst.
(this was a rough sketch of something i plan to do digitally, but its still a good representation of how bad my style is.)

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2964567

for comparison and to see what it could look like when finished, take a look at this fucker (it's more anime-styled here, but the shading and coloring job would be the same for this and the rest of my art)

>> No.2964572

>>2964566
There are way too many things wrong. Just read the sticky, no one is going to do the exhausting job of listing every single little thing you fucked up.

*smack*

>> No.2964573

>>2964572
knowing this hellsite, that's probably the best answer im going to get in this entire fuckin thread. thanks anon.

>> No.2964574

>>2964566
>*SMACK*

>> No.2964576

>>2964573
Thank me by improving your fundies. That's the best advice i can give you.

>> No.2964624

>>2964567
looks like you got some basics down, g/j

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>>2964566
YOU DID IT AGAIN?!

*closes the door and locks it*

WHAT DID I TELL YOU, NEWFAG? WHAT THE *FUCK* DID I TELL YOU LAST TIME?

*undos belt*
*grabs you from behind*

STOP SHITPOSTING!

*throws you on the couch*
*starts beating you with the belt*
*smack*
*smack*
*smack*

STOP *smack* SHIT *smack* FUCKING *smack* POSTING!!!

READ THE FUCKING STICKY! *smack*

POST IN THREADS THAT ALREADY EXIST!!! *smack*

*you're bleeding and crying now*
*smack*
*smack*

GET *smack* IT THROUGH *smack* YOUR SKULL!! *smack*

YOU'RE WHY MOMMY LEFT, YOU FUCKING IDIOT!! *smack*

STOP MAKING ME DO THIS!! *smack*

*smack*
*smack*
*smack*
*smack*

FUCK!!

*throws you to the ground*
*you lay in a heap sobbing*
*reties belt*

I HAD BETTER NOT SEE ANOTHER *FUCKING* SHITPOST FROM YOU AGAIN. YOU POST IN THAT GODDAMNED /BEG/ THREAD WITH YOUR RETARD FRIENDS AND YOU DON'T COME OUT AGAIN!! YOU UNDERSTAND ME?!!!

*unlocks door*
*leaves you to find the loomis books*

>> No.2967165

>>2964566
we already told you to post in the begginer thread (>>2964915 ) instead of creating your own threads because there are more chances of you getting an useful critique there. if you dont care enough to respect how the board functions dont expect people here to spend their time helping you improve. You´re probably not posting here legally anyways.