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Hey this is some art work done by a friend of mine, what could be improve upon it? This is just a early sketch by the way.

>> No.2960693

>>2960680
something something YOU DID IT AGAIN? something something *hits you with a belt* STOP SHITPOSTING something something

>> No.2960694

>>2960680
nice epic I like it

>> No.2960706

>>2960680
Very cool. Very cool.

>> No.2960714

wow bloog?

>> No.2960716

Come on guys, I want to help improve on his craft.

>> No.2960718

>>2960714
Sorry, he doesn't want attention.

>> No.2960732

>>2960718
>he
bitch you aren't fooling anyone
tell "him" to stop watching kid shows and get better taste

>> No.2960738
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>>2960732
Are you implying he's a she?

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2960756

Anybody?

>> No.2960761

>>2960680
Lower body's too skinny in contrast to the upper body. Nose should be a tad higher, hand doesn't really look like it's exactly on her body, right arm looks poorly connected at the elbow joint, and her hips look nonexistent.

Otherwise, I like the expression. Good job there.

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>>2960761
Actual critique? Wow!

>> No.2960790

Bump.

>> No.2960805

Bump. Again.

>> No.2960820
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2960820

>>2960680
YOU DID IT AGAIN?!

*closes the door and locks it*

WHAT DID I TELL YOU, NEWFAG? WHAT THE *FUCK* DID I TELL YOU LAST TIME?

*undos belt*
*grabs you from behind*

STOP SHITPOSTING!

*throws you on the couch*
*starts beating you with the belt*
*smack*
*smack*
*smack*

STOP *smack* SHIT *smack* FUCKING *smack* POSTING!!!

READ THE FUCKING STICKY! *smack*

POST IN THREADS THAT ALREADY EXIST!!! *smack*

*you're bleeding and crying now*
*smack*
*smack*

GET *smack* IT THROUGH *smack* YOUR SKULL!! *smack*

YOU'RE WHY MOMMY LEFT, YOU FUCKING IDIOT!! *smack*

STOP MAKING ME DO THIS!! *smack*

*smack*
*smack*
*smack*
*smack*

FUCK!!

*throws you to the ground*
*you lay in a heap sobbing*
*reties belt*

I HAD BETTER NOT SEE ANOTHER *FUCKING* SHITPOST FROM YOU AGAIN. YOU POST IN THAT GODDAMNED /BEG/ THREAD WITH YOUR RETARD FRIENDS AND YOU DON'T COME OUT AGAIN!! YOU UNDERSTAND ME?!!!

*unlocks door*
*leaves you to find the loomis books

>> No.2961513

>>2960761
Hey, my friend will like to thank you for providing critique.

>> No.2961664

>>2960732
men LOVE peridot

or used to

>> No.2961665

>>2960693
>>2960820
pottery

>> No.2962485

Post in the fucking Drawing thread.
The head is the ONLY salvageable thing about this sketch. Everything else is as flat as old soda.

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2962596

>>2960820


>POST IN THREADS THAT ALREADY EXIST

good for me


first draw in 15 years, ignore the disproportionate arms, i did it on purpose, i keep asking myself why

I've been doing lines and circles as explained in /beg/ but doing that is just depressing

Does it look like shit because of symbol drawing?, should i try to correct that or to start with some other thing?

>> No.2962600

>>2962596
Considering you took such a piece of shit to completion I'd focus on cultivating the ability to see why your drawing is flawed and how to fix it. Which is the most important skill to actually get better.

>> No.2962846

>>2960680
He should read the sticky.
also post in a beginner tread there you will get some critique newfag.

>> No.2962871

>>2960680
study hands

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