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This thread is meant for artists who might want to try to make anime works in-between their studies. It is strongly recommended that you use this thread in conjunction with learning the elements and fundamentals of art. You can also discuss the visual elements of various professional artists as well if you keep it relatively articulate and civil.

Submit your drawings, receive feedback or critique others! Share your knowledge and remember to thank those who've critiqued or red-lined your drawings. Most importantly, have fun!

Fresh off the Mayflower? Then do yourself a flavor and check out /ic/s complementary subordinate sticky here:
>https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uwaXKU7ev6Tw_or__o8ARpUb6r2rCZYJGqwSFV9AD98/edit#bookmark=id.15jx3pyuimvj
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>Hitokaku Index
http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
>0033
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317
>List of active livestreams
Use twitch #creative
>fellowBro's books
http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
>Tutorial/Reference Collection
http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
>Japanese Tutorials
http://iradukai.com/
デジ絵の文法 playlist - https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLKZrlE6oUGx4Mh1zJLnKLc1SDPJfsoxnS
https://www.palmie.jp/ - twitter required for assigments
>Figures
http://reference.sketchdaily.net/
>Pose Practice
http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html

Have any suggestions on helpful resource links? Leave a comment anytime ITT and I will look into it.

>> No.2919315
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2919315

Been trying to get that 80's anime aesthetic down.

>> No.2919316
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Where is redjuice guy?

>> No.2919329

>>2919315
Reminds me of NoseBro but better.

>> No.2919332

No judgement but why are these threads mostly anime? How come I don't see more cartoonish stuff?

>> No.2919333

>>2919332
>How come I don't see more cartoonish stuff

Anime are cartoons how more cartoon could you get.

>> No.2919334

>>2919333
Let me rephrase: how come these threads don't see more western stylization as opposed to eastern?

>> No.2919336

>>2919334
Because you're on 4chan, not tumblr.

>> No.2919341
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Took a little break from realism, free some more cartoony stuff.

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I can't get tight linework on SAI with my Intuos. Is there an approach that wouldn't just require taking an extra long amount of time doing it painstakingly or are you only ever going to realistically manage professional level finesse with a Cintiq?

>> No.2919349

>>2919341
Fuck, it rotated

>> No.2919352

>>2919344
her hair is tilted too far to the left

>> No.2919356

>>2919352

yeah. will modify. thanks

>> No.2919385
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I'm gonna take a break now

>> No.2919428

>>2919344
Buy Clip Studio Paint. Not a shill, I just used to ink in SAI too and thought "this is as good as it gets with an Intuos" but then I bought CSP on a whim and HOLYSHIT it's so much more natural and comfy to ink in! Seriously worth it if you do a lot of line work and much cheaper then a Cintiq!

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>>2919428
A shill is a shill is a shill is a shill.

>> No.2919442

>>2919344
Man that forehead is way too big

>> No.2919494

>>2919428

I will do as you suggest despite your liberal usage of exclamation points indeed making you sound like a shill.

>>2919442

yes. you are correct.

>> No.2919500

>>2919385
cute

>> No.2919511

>>2919494
Sorry about the exclamation points, I got carried away... It seriously is a very comfy program to ink in, tho. How ever, I still use SAI for sketching and coloring/shading, and PS for after effects. SAI is still much faster and intuitive on my old computer and PS has more options. CSP I use strictly for inking and comic pages. Just save your files as psd and you can fiddle around with them in most programs.

>> No.2919537
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>no porn thread
>no draw thread

Well guess it's sort of alternative.

>> No.2919539

>>2919537
disgusting

>> No.2919541

>>2919539
Maybe but I wasn't going to make a new thread just to post an image

>> No.2919563

>>2919537

SPOOKY

>> No.2919571
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>> No.2919608

>>2919511

Wow. What a difference. CSP >>>>>>>>> SAI. Thank you for the recommendation.

>> No.2919632

>>2919608
Seriously how much are they paying you?

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>> No.2919640
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back to my roots

>> No.2919647

>>2919640
I love this. keep it up anon!

>> No.2919686

SOMETIMES DRAWING JUST MAKES YOU WANT TO SCREAM AHHHHHHHHH FUCK

>> No.2919687

>>2919635
lol...

>> No.2919688

>>2919686
post your work.

>> No.2919693
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>>2919688

>> No.2919710
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Posted this last thread. Guess you guys didn't see it.

What I'm going for is a look that bridges animated feature films and comics.

Beautifully rendered backgrounds and bold characters.

What do you think?

>> No.2919720

>>2919710

Looks nightmarish. The torso is all sorts of fucked, if you used a ref you need to study it more closely, if you didn't use a ref you need to get a ref and figure out what a torso looks like. What's going on with her ribs? What's up with her hips? Her tits are a mess, they don't look like they have any form or weight. Her bellybutton is way too high. Her lips look like a watermelon or sliced tomato, the weird chin doesn't help. The shading is pretty crap, what's your lighting direction supposed to be? Bottom right? You abused the soft round brush for the coloring and it shows, the 'armor' on her legs looks better compared to the skin for this reason.

The background is beautiful though.

>> No.2919727

>>2919635
Feels different than your usual style of faces

>> No.2919745

>>2919332
There are times when it was mostly western stuff posted. But most posters/lurkers here post "anime style" since originally it was that kind of thread before they combined it.

>> No.2919751

>>2919316
redjuicefag or redjuice guy?

>> No.2919792
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I messed this up really bad I was wondering if one of you could blue line to help out please

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>>2919720
Here's a page from my graphic novel, so you better understand what I mean.
You say the torso is a mess, but don't say exactly how. What's wrong with it? Just like most your critique...

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>>2917501
Here's my take on it. Lower center of gravity, visible arms spread to make it look more stable, less stiff yoga pose, more relaxed. Noticed emphasis on the legs so made the hair lead to it- emphasis on curves, curves, curves. Hair was asymmetrical so made it even more asymmetrical - to my taste really. Noticed a hair near the face and dot on the breast - thought they would look better repositioned as a strand near the mouth and a mole. I'll see if I can make a process of my coloring as well. Hope this helps.

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>>2919827
wow I really enjoy this piece nicee

>> No.2919847

>>2919827
Good shit, lines and flow are nice.

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>>2919793

If you don't see what's going on with the torso, the ribs in particular, you need to take a long hard look at an anatomy book.

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>> No.2919863

>>2919792
what a qtie
id work on the eyes, stomach, feet and thighs and a lil bit on the hands. also the neck might be a lil thick? cant really tell with the hair in the way

>> No.2919866
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is this good advice?

>> No.2919870

>>2919632
You don't even have to pay for Japanese CSP version (which can be patched to have English characters for most text, and you can manually rename the tools you use by copying their names from the English version), if you know what I mean... Paying for it ultimately means that you simply want to show gratitude (or are a modest, honest, and law-abiding citizen).

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>>2919792

>> No.2919882

>>2919793
Unless your writing is godlike you're gonna have a hard time with that graphic novel...

>> No.2919885

>>2919635
Good job, I've always been a fan of empty eyes in anime. To me, they're much more expressive than light spots everywhere, so that's why I try using them. Now, it may be the angle combined with bad parting, but her hair looks like a toupee, over a big forehead. I recommend you take a break from pure construction, and reference something. Break it down until you get it again. Lapses happen to everyone.

>> No.2919894

>>2919866
Vaguely, yes. But its just the intermediate artist's version of scribbling something out and writing "LOL FAIL XD" next to it.

>> No.2919904
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>>2919727
I don't aim for a style, I prefer to seek whatever rings more true even if that makes me look inconsistent, I suppose style in my case is just a byproduct

>>2919885
Thanks, I'm actually doing more studies but I mostly post them on the DT,

I tried fixing some stuff, hopefully it looks less worse now

>> No.2919915

>>2919871
Thankyou so much Anon!

>> No.2919918

>>2919863
Thankyou Anon :)

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>>2919904
Here, the errors should be more obvious when rotated. If you're still around, I'd appreciate a critique, though.

>> No.2919970

>>2919959
LOL FIREZ REGRESSION IS NOT A MEME

>> No.2919976

>>2919537
Those tits are a sin

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>>2919959
It'd be a great help if you gave input on smoothing this out, as well as overall critique. I've heard my poses and general work is "too stiff" often. Yet, I keep trying, and my lolis don't draw the eye. It seems ingrained in my life in general, so I'd like to be more flowing here.

>> No.2919987

>>2919851
I'm liking the style and look, but you fell for the THICC meme so hard it's affecting your anatomy. Her breasts remind me of a hunchback, but in the front, and the thighs get arbitrarily thicker. Like glass soda bottles.

>> No.2920107
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I EAT ARSE

>> No.2920108

>>2920107
Probably best in the thread

>> No.2920110

>>2919863
Too bad he's an ugly fuckface in real life that won't be able to get bitches because he's homebound most of day

>> No.2920116
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FIREZ REEEEEEEEEEEEGRESSION

It's the new spaceman meme.

>#Neverforget

>> No.2920121

>>2919984
Are you the anon who drew the girl laying on her back getting fingered by a dozen cut-off hands? It was a couple months ago, I'm glad to see you still drawing.

>> No.2920139
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I just don't know when i'm finished, I guess I rather move on and do something else. forever wip.

>> No.2920140

>>2920139
I know i went overboard with that noise filter lol.

>> No.2920146
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I sort of see where the big mistakes are, but I'd be ecstatic if someone could redline or give advice.
Working traditional is hard.

>> No.2920163

>>2920146
well i know that when your mother sees you SHE can immediately see a big mistake

>> No.2920238
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What's the standard blend technique to achieve a result like this? just a color pick and soft brush?

>> No.2920278

>>2920238
is this guy even human? how does one even draw like that? Is there a blog I can follow?

>> No.2920294

>>2920278
U fukn srs

>> No.2920295

>>2920294
i fukn srs

>> No.2920318
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Here we go. Give me some critiqueage.

>> No.2920320

Lol ^

I thought I was naming the document.

>> No.2920321

>>2919693
careful about that neck on the bottom sketch, anon

>> No.2920323

>>2920278
Here brah maybe you will have better understanding than me.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gPGy3MpDKvc&t

>> No.2920343

>>2920238

What stands out to you particularly about the shading? I think I can do a demo of it, but it looks like generic anime shading to me.

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>>2919792
Throwing in my 2 bits. Hope it helps, but I see others have chipped in, too.

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>>2919882
Read for yourself! Ten years in the making, Most of it writing the script.
hybridzero.com

>>2919849
I study all day every day... Where is the flaw? You can't just say "it looks bad"

>> No.2920520

>>2920455
Why are you pretending to be retarded?

>> No.2920527

>>2920455
I really hope this post is ironic.

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>> No.2920562

>>2920549
Good stuff mango! Keep working on it so it doesn't just look like a quick scribble. My only real critique would be to render more of the hand, it's a little hard to tell what shape exactly it's making.

>> No.2920566

>>2920549
love this!

>> No.2920570

>>2920549
you got a pixiv?

>> No.2920585

>>2920549
So good, blog?

>> No.2920589

>>2920562
>>2920566
thanks. i'm currently trying to work on base color layout in general, so this one isn't going any further.
>>2920570
>>2920585
http://sladkiy-pirozhok.tumblr.com/ (pixiv link inside, but i rarely update it)

>> No.2920593

>>2920589
You must be new here.

>> No.2920595

>>2920566
>>2920570
>>2920585
are you guys meeming again?

>> No.2920598

>>2920595
im not actually i like his stuff

>> No.2920599

>>2920593
im not really familiar with this place.

>> No.2920600

>>2920589
followed, i dont have tumblr and i dont feel like creating one anytime soon

>> No.2920607

>>2920595
:^)
>>2920599
They are being sarcastic, it's shit.

>> No.2920610

>>2920607
ignore this guy

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>>2919315
I did this too, copying em.partridge's designs to test out out some highlighters I don't know I was bored.

>> No.2920612

>>2920607
no? i just now followed him, he can confirm

>> No.2920614

>>2920589
Oh you're that guy, neat

>> No.2920620

>>2920612
This is some next level trolling

>> No.2920632

okay i think i should stop post there to not trigger this troll circus again.

>> No.2920658

>>2920595
>>2920607

I love how there's always this one samefag getting triggered whenever people post appreciative comments towards nicely drawn sketches.

>"bu-but I put way more effort into my work, why does no one ask ME for my blog, I'm way more deserving!"
Because you're shit, anon. Because you're shit.

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>>2920658
stop using words you don't know the meaning to

>> No.2920670

>>2920658
Blogposting is frowned upon, 99% of the posts are samefagging 99% of the time. Even if it isn't, this is a CRITIQUE board, stop shilling your shit taste and let people use >>2883744 for their "blog" shilling plz. Also using the term "blog" to describe an anon's art gallery should be a red flag it's bait and should be ignored.

>>2920632
plz do, it's off topic shitposting.

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>>2920520
>>2920527
Wow, you guys should lighten up a tad. Learn to laugh and enjoy the simple pleasures.
Spank the monkey, smoke some herb or listen to Alan Watts.
Life is too short not to laugh once in a while.

>> No.2920689

>>2920670
You gotta look at the quality of the image in question for context. 99% of the time when good art is posted, someone asking for a blog is just someone asking for a blog. Obviously if someone like you were to post his work, any "blog?" posts towards it would either be ironic or samefag shilling.

>> No.2920691
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i was trying to do that perspective thing but i gave up and ended up just pushing the proportions instead

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>> No.2920719

>>2920691
Middle top is nice but the legs doesn't feels like it belongs to the same body and angle.

>> No.2920720
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I want friends to draw with

>> No.2920721
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Any tips?

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>>2919303
Going for that 90s cartoon aesthetic

>> No.2920761

>>2920721
Looks like its stuck in the middle of two different styles at the moment. Moebius comic landscapes and concept art. I think you should either ditch the outlines and try and render it more or make the colours flatter and more of an original textured feel.
(Or do what you want)

>> No.2920770

>>2920756
I thought the naked dude had white anime eyes for a second.

>> No.2920779

>>2920707
>>2920707
Vicky looks good. Nice proportions, good line work, cute face.
What program do you use?

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>>2920599
not really familiar eh? You post here almost as much as a camwhore posts on their instagram, only to be then praised by illiterate layman's who don't know better than to be wow'd by shit like pic related. Tbh It's always two rectangular boxes for the eyes a comma for the nose and a tiny parallel line for the mouth. Do you do anything else?? She's also looks incredibly fat, and the arm is broken

>> No.2920790

>>2920770
Mango 4 beginners

>> No.2920791

>>2920549
Why don't you actually try to communicate with the viewer instead of having the figure look off at some fucking random corner I swear I see this shit way too often what the fuck is the deal with this shit is this some sort of fad?

Stop avoiding the eyes and draw them in a manner where you could read them, instead of looking away have you ever spoke with someone that awkwardly looks away at you and avoids looking at your eyes? It pisses you off right? Same thing here.

>> No.2920792

>>2920791
It's easier to draw eyes looking at the viewer because it's a crutch due to not knowing how to draw eyes in the first place. That coupled with 3/4 quarter view makes you feel like a master.

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>>2920792
Yeah and drawing a thousand yard stare takes a lot of skill too; not only are you subtly trying to look at the viewer but at the same time they're not able to read what you're trying to convey leaving a mystique and mysterious visage that allures!

>> No.2920814

>>2919710
Before drawing a figure, try making their planned pose yourself in front of a mirror, in this case, your character's doing some sort of pelvic thrust while her upper torso and legs remain straight. This is not a comfortable pose for anyone with a normal-shaped spine.
Partially as a result of the pose, her torso is fucked. Her hip bones appear to be different heights on the left and right sides, and she has a similar problem with her ribs. Her waist narrows too drastically, and the torso is too long overall. The extra lines you've put in don't enhance the picture at all and really only serve to highlight the mistakes.
The hand you've drawn is nice, shame you so obviously hid the other one. I'm assuming that green spike is being held in her other hand, but if so I don't think said hand should be hidden so neatly behind her leg.
The knee and calf of the (stage) left leg are at a completely different angle to the thigh, while the right appears to twist as it goes down.
The two different shading styles are disconcerting (Is it unfinished) and in particular the soft shading on the skin appears inconsistent. The torso suggests an overhead light source for the most part, but there are no cast shadows and the hand is lit from below, as well as the fact that her left side is shaded with grey while her right is shaded with red. Also, go easy with the red blotches everywhere, the ones on her face are creeping into the whites of her eyes, making them look bloodshot, and the one on her vag looks like an embarrassing rash.

>> No.2920819

>>2920720
Me too, friend. Me too.

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fuck weeabu anime shit, we roling in style

>> No.2920834

>>2919608
No prob, enjoy the comfy inking!
>>2919632
Just test out the trial version for free if you don't believe me about the inking. As I've already mentioned, I don't think the program it self is better in every aspect then other programs, but the feel of the inking really is very different from SAI and PS.

>> No.2920861

>>2920721
Work on your perspective. The horizon is way at the bottom of the image, but none of the lines seem to go where they should be going. Judging by the buildings, what vanishing points you might be using are way to close together.

>> No.2920890

>>2920779
sai

>> No.2920893

>>2920380
I love this, but is she suppose to look so derpy? Maybe you should reposition the eyes.

>> No.2920897

>>2920720
Make a post on Reddit /artbuddy

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20 min

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>>2919959
I think besides breaking his tórax and making the neck too thin I didn't notice much. However thanks for the tip

>> No.2920934

>>2920905
GYUTE! BLOG!

>> No.2920942

>>2920707
resize your shit.

>> No.2920956

>>2920819
anon, give me info I WILL ADD and we can draw together!!

>> No.2920969
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2920969

fuck my shit up. Something doesn't feel right.
>>2920720
have you tried discord, yet? I'm sure you can find a couple of servers

>> No.2920978

>>2920969
Would her waist really be able to turn that much? Also, there seem to be very little twisting in the mid torso, I would expect there to be quite a bit. Human torso, I mean.

>> No.2920985

>>2920978
ye. I'm gonna go back to the sketch and fix

>> No.2920993

>>2920985
>>2920969
i like the palette(?). what's it for?

>> No.2921010

>>2920993
Thanks, anon.
It's not for anything in particular. I'm just practicing/ experimenting

>> No.2921020
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>>2920318
Sorry if my english or my handwriting isn't the best.

Also i tried to maintain as much from your drawing as possible.

>> No.2921024

>>2921020
wow do you have a blog?

>> No.2921028

>>2921020
Anon, it's still wrong.

>> No.2921035

>>2921020
That's actually really really good. The style reminds me of those few mangas with exceptional art style, it's very clean and neat and I could totally see a grade A anime coming out of a character like this. Mind sharing any tips on how to get good from one anon to another?

>> No.2921042

>>2920784
>getting butthurt over stylization
>in a stylization thread

>> No.2921047

>>2921028
I never said that its 100% correct. And if you don't mind tell me pls my mistakes so i can fix it.

>>2921024
Sure i have but i don't upload that often.

>>2921035
I only tweaked a little bit, this isn't even close to my original style. And i can't say how you can get good because im not good either.

>> No.2921064

>>2921047
drop that blog m8

>> No.2921075

>>2921064
There is only old stuff from the time where i didn't pay attention to fundamentals. I'm currently trying to learn that stuff.

http://jesterhd.deviantart.com/

>> No.2921108
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2921108

tfw when you're bleeding but you don't wanna stop drawing

also, why are expressions so hard

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>>2921108
>tfw you're drawing but you won't stop bleeding
>in the heart
>figuratively

>> No.2921160

>>2921108
u should be more loose i think you could make some neat expressions

>> No.2921162

>>2920825
>that file name
not sure if its yours but this is hella qt

>> No.2921164

>>2921160
loose is what way?

>> No.2921166

>>2921164
well since its animu just break some rules and make the mouth bigger or small yeknow? should be easier to convey some emotion that way. just trying to help

>> No.2921171 [DELETED] 

>>2921020

Are you talking to me or the anon that critiqued my drawing?

>> No.2921175

>>2921162
i just draw from that pick of Joel

>> No.2921178
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>>2921020
that torso is still way too long i hope you don't mind me tweaking it even more

>> No.2921181
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2921181

Also a cleaner lineart version of my earlier post that I forgot about. Not sure if it's really an improvement, though. There's something pretty off about the anatomy.

>> No.2921182

>>2921181
shes missing a bit on the back of her head maybe?

>> No.2921191
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>>2921178
Ah i see what you mean. I think the body seems longer than i intended it to be, Maybe it's because i made a mistake with the clothes.

>> No.2921192
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2921192

Here's another example of my work.
This is Aralea. She's my other characters (from my previous post) mother and she is a race designed for sexual pleasure. But, she has transcended societal stereo-types by working for rhe government and marrying into a rich aristocratic family. Her husband's name is Ian Able.
I'll post a picture later.

>> No.2921193

>>2921178

It's really not, it just looks long because I didn't do an underdrawing, I just jumped into drawing clothes without any actual structure underneath it. That's my bad.

Her crotch is higher up on her body than it looks. I also don't want to commit too much to anime proportions, because anime proportions just don't appeal to me that much.

>> No.2921280
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Progress from >>2920784

>>2921042
Seriously but he was not so worthless this time, it saved me the hassle of linking from the previous thread

>> No.2921284

>>2921192
>...and then she farts!

>> No.2921291

>>2921280
>childs face on an adult's body
WTF r u doin m8. Also his neck and face would have more face on them, get with it.

>> No.2921294

>>2920121
Well, you're going to have to be unglad, sorry. I haven't drawn anything lewd yet.
>>2920930
No problem! Mind looking at >>2919984 and showing me where to smooth things out? I fixed the face to be more appealing and adjusted the shoulders like an anon said. And as for >>2921280, the main problem I see is that the fat guy's face is too feminine and not double chinned for his weight, and is at an awkward angle. He's in front of the girls, and staring at them from his peripheral and down, kind of. Just have a more upright head, with eyes looking down, maybe.

>> No.2921297

>>2920893
got too tunnel visioned, thanks for pointing that out!

>> No.2921300

>>2921192
This is a nightmare, plain and simple. You tried doing something with the lighting, but neglected it on the damn back bun and tail end. Andthe back looks more like a veiny mess. The face looks like a blend of Roman bust and tumblr. The story also sounds too gross and typical.
>muh empowered sex worker

>> No.2921310
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>>2920791
chill out dude

>> No.2921314

>>2921280
firez why is every single one of your pieces so fucking MUDDY

>> No.2921316

>>2921192
BRAAAAB

>> No.2921317

>>2921314
I don't dislike muddy pieces. If it's good, as long as it isn't in fucking sepia, I wouldn't care.

>> No.2921319
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>>2921192
>Oh heavens above! What time do you call this my pretty?
>What's that you say? A protest?
>Why of course my dear. One must fight for what is right.
>To think that this protest involved a throng of radiant young ladies, all with bounteous bosoms bared?
>And my dear, I do indeed chuckle heartily, for it is clear to me that your own bazoomas place first in the gallery of magnificent milkpuffles
>For, m'lady, were a young man to lay eyes upon you and not immediately remark on the potency of your heavenly orbs, one might safely assume that this man is indeed, a boob!
>Yes m'lady, a pun. Occasionally I simply must indulge. Chortle!
>Come closer to your valiant protector. Oh my goodness gracious, you truly are in fine fettle.
>I simply must encounter these blessed globes once more.
>Oooh the feeling through me, like electricity as I glance upon these pink tips, awaiting touch of a chivalrous hand.
>I must return to these givers of life, m'lady. Every man must know his roots, if he is to be any kind of man at all.
>*Gently nibbles on nipples*
>M'lady, why do you shudder at my touch?
>Why, each lick of these rosy jumperbuttocks is like a tender caress with Athene herself.
>*Slurps spittle over breasts*
>The taste, my God, the taste. M'lady, I fear you may find me a terrible beast, but I simply must beg. Wouldst thou proffer a drop of nectar?
>*Sucks drop of milk from breast*
>As sweet as a Summer Dahlia housing a bumblebee. I truly am alive.
>*Snorsh sluuuurp nyom sllllrp*
>M'lady. m'lady, I live for this.
>*Begins to ejaculate in pants*
>Oh, my own fleshrod. It's pulsating prowess silences all! The force of this is enough to make a kind sir void his bowels! >M'lady, m'lady. Prepare! Prepare I say. For the harvest has failed and God yet might make his response be known! Ooh GRRP UUMP
>*BRAAAAAAAP PFNAAAAAR BOWLLLLLT POOOOOOOOOFFFAAAAAARRP CRRRRRRRRRRRRRRPOWPOWPOW SQUUUUUUUUUUUOOOOOORP BRRRRP PFNARSCH PFNARP BRRAAAAP BOOOOOOOOORPP*

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>>2920139
its like you took all the most cancerous memes and shoved them together in one picture

>chromatic aberration
>"hurr durr bright colors are better so I'll use ONLY BRIGHT COLORS"
>overlay filter to make bright colors BRIGHTER
>random blush
>random diagonal cast shadow

>> No.2921334

>>2921317
it's not muddy as in: the pallette looks like dirt,
it's muddy as in: he's shaded almost exclusively with black you goddamned fool

>> No.2921339

>>2920720
give blog?

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>>2920907
bro you like this?

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>>2920907
Very nice, but I wish there was more so I could critique. With the magic of drawing software, however, I can fill in your lines!

>> No.2921357
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>>2920720
ill be your friend
i only have one besides me

>> No.2921361
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>>2920825
papi you like this?

>> No.2921376
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>>2921361
>>2921340
you like ths?

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>>2921376
you like this?

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>>2921331
dude idk, i was just trying new stuff, and I'm still learning how to paint, this is like my 3rd painting ever. but i guess i'll take a break to work on my fundamentals for now. pic finished picture, i guess it's slightly better?.

>> No.2921495

>>2921319
Are you one guy who does these paragraphs or is it a concerted effort?

>> No.2921501
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>>2921446
>third painting ever
I'm more pissed than impressed

>> No.2921509

>>2921446
Kill yourself.

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I think I'm done with this, some features were still misaligned, Damn it


>>2921294
Sure, just wait a sec.

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>>2921495
Tee hee. Wakey wakey, anon. Do you know what time it is, hmm?
BRAAAAAAAAAAAAAP
Oh my! It seems that this mornings batch is quite stinky, wouldn't you agree. BRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPPPP. UGHHHHH!!!!
I can't believe how much is coming out just from all the McDonalds we had last night. You're really enjoying this, are-Ahhhhhhh~ BRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAP
*gasp gasp gasp*
Oh dear, I couldn't control that last one. I think I may have soaked my panties a bit with a little drip of caca, sweetie. Do you want to get a bit closer and inspect?
*sit on your face*
Hmmm yes this is the perfect position to give my good bu his treats. BRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPPPP!!! Tee hee your heavy breathing has made my poopoo hole twitch and rip in excitement. Don't be shy and do it again for me, honey bun, I have plenty of stinky dinky in reserve for you
BRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPPPPP!!!!! Ohhh that must have been the 20 peice chicken nuggets I had for a midnight snack! BRRAAAAAPPPPPP!!!!!!!!
HMMMMMM what a dirty little boy you are! Take it all in and whiff my Big Mac special! Tee hee!Oh lookie here, your willy got all stiffy just from my poo poo treats. I'm going to give you a nice brapping you'll really get off on.
BRAAAAAAAPPPPPPPPFFFFFFFFFFFFFFTTTTTTT!!!!!!! UGGGGGHHHHHHH! YES YES THIS IS IT! THE MOTH-UGHHHH BRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPP!! HMMMM SO DELICIOUS AND EXQUISITE!

*pant pant pant*

Oh my, it looks like I'm all tapped out this morning. Did you like my breakfast I cooked up for you, sweetie? Maybe we should try some Taco Bell and Chinese food next time for an even bigger meal, m'kay?

*kissu*
*BRAP*

Oooh!

*BRRAAAAP*

tehehehe, sorry, I like to fart a lot... Wait, wait

*pushes harder*

*BBBRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPPP*

Aaaaahhh.... It feels sooo good to release the gas... Wait, another one is coming...

*BBBBBBBBBBBBRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPP*

>> No.2921523
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2921523

I think I'm done with this,


>>2921294 #
Sure, just wait a sec.

>> No.2921537

>>2921523
your stuff just kills my boner everytime

>> No.2921540

>>2921537
Are you the same guy pissing on Pops? I smell a sweaty Malaysian.

>> No.2921544

link to the new thread fuckos I've been staring at the dead one for ages

>> No.2921550

>>2920791
>Why don't you actually try to communicate with the viewer instead of having the figure look off at some fucking random corner

I don't think this qualifies as art critique.

>> No.2921562
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>>2921523
is this firez??? anyways your eyes are too close senpai and head construction is wrong

>> No.2921565

>>2921562
damn nice that went from alien mongoloid to sexy as fuck

>> No.2921566

>>2921562
wow you managed to make firez's art appealing

>> No.2921572

>>2921562
this feels so much less painful to look at now. thank you for protecting us.

>> No.2921575

>>2921565
>>2921566
:)

>> No.2921577
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>> No.2921579
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2921579

How does my art look?

>> No.2921586
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>>2921577
Are you ayy lmao guy? I'm stunned.

>> No.2921587

>>2921586
no im not ayy lmao guy who dat

>> No.2921589

>>2921579
So good, blog?

>> No.2921595
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>>2921589
No, I have a instagram

>> No.2921598

>>2920720
i know its you alpha uprising

>> No.2921600
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>>2919984
>>2921294
I hope it helps

>>2921291
>>2921317
>>2921314
Obvious bias aside I don't think every single of my pieces are muddy I don't shade with black but maybe I got a bit overboard with chiaroscuro there because I need to render faster since I still have a lot of semi illustrative panels to make.

thanks for the remarks

>> No.2921602

>>2921598
>tfw NoseBro will probably get an art job in a couple of years just cause he's making friends with everyone who comes to /ic/
your contact game will probably be unreal sometime down the line

>> No.2921607

>>2921600
That is not how the Torso works.

>> No.2921609

>>2921607
Do yours then

>> No.2921612
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update

>> No.2921614
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>>2921562
original is way too skewed and bad placement for everything (ears and neck)

first redline is s till bad. the cheeks have no shape to define the sheeks or chin especially with this angle. placement is still wrong.

yall both lack obvious proportions, and im no professional but you need to focus on the bigger and most important things before details. get a general idea. thats my 2 cents

>> No.2921616

>>2921614
who gives a shit as long as the normies love it xD

>> No.2921619
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2921619

Thoughts?

>> No.2921623

>>2921562
I appreciate the attempt but while it may be true that the eyes are too close how are too far apart seems a bit alien, you also mention construction but Idk if you are only mentioning of you fixed it because besides the obvious change on the yes I don't see the difference. Sorry if that sounds Dickish but I do appreciate the remark

>>2921614
That's more like it, thank you

>> No.2921626

>>2921616
work on your "construction" just saiyen

>> No.2921629

>>2921623
they kept the rest of your drawing to be polite. if you can't see how the small changes make the second a big improvement, you need to learn to open your eyes.

>> No.2921633

>>2921629
this guy gets it, didnt want to spend 3h on it, the eyes are not only moved apart but also raised, cheek bone also riased

>> No.2921636

>>2921629
If you say something is wrong while presenting a red line but don't explain it, that is not politeness it is just laziness.

I do agree with him that the second looks ayyy lmao-ish while keeping the same construction, thirds one is definitely a solution to the original problem

>> No.2921637

>>2921633
He never listens/improves. Just let his fans circlejerk him

>> No.2921640

>>2921636
he has eyes doesn't he? he can just overlay it in photoshop if he wants to get into the details. the third uses essentially the same construction as the second, it just looks better because it has none of the original drawing.

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>> No.2921686
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2921686

thoughts?

>> No.2921691

>>2921686
Best so far

>> No.2921702

>>2921673
i kinda like the design of the dress and the amount of detailed you put on the entire thing, but those knees and face need some fixing up

>> No.2921770
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2921770

Sorry for spoiling.

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>>2921340
>>2921361
>>2921376
>>2921383
its belisimo guys, love u

>> No.2921818

>>2921602
I have never used an in. I actually had a higher up from ubisoft tell me to show him my portfolio 6 months ago ( Had sold him hardware). Told him id apply anonymously.

I absolutely refuse to be indebted to anyone. clearly though, if you do believe this to be true, you can befriend me and try to reap the alleged benefits.

>> No.2921820

>>2921818
>Told him id apply anonymously
*EVENTUALLY

>> No.2921821

>>2921818
I knew befriending you was an easy meal ticket into the indus-- I mean, that's nice dude.
>>2921686
cutest itt

>> No.2921865

>>2920677
>Life is too short not to laugh once in a while.
Life is too short not to treat art seriously. Faggot.

>> No.2921888
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2921888

welp i tried

>> No.2922008
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2922008

thoughts on this?

>> No.2922041

>>2922008
I want to fuck the squid

>> No.2922045
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>>2922041

>> No.2922056

>>2921619
resize, faggot

>> No.2922249

>>2921619
I think things would be easier if you drew things right side up

>> No.2922404

>>2921784
It has a lot of appeal, and seems unique, but the lips look too big for my tastes, with that kind of short hair and perky look.

>> No.2922649

>>2921175
oh, do you post anywhere?

>> No.2922657

>>2921598
wait what

>> No.2922699
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>>2921509
>>2921501
for sure, I'll kill myself if I hit 30 and still haven't make it. in the meantime I'm just gonna keep practicing.

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>> No.2922728

>>2922699
did- you draw these?

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>>2921446
>>2922699
is this what happens when you hyper focus on anatomy and nothing else. im glad you finally started branching out but- fuck, dude

>> No.2922738

>>2921784
Who is draw this? Bloggings? I am really to like it.

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>>2919851

>> No.2922758

>>2922755
dont do contour lines for the knees/muscles it makes it look weird, save it for the shadows intead

>> No.2922759
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2922759

Finished this.

>> No.2922816 [DELETED] 

>>2921600
I much appreciate the effort you took to do this, thanks! I don't agree with the shifts in pose, anatomically, but I can clearly see where I need to add curves to the limbs, and the face is more appealing with those details. Thanks!

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>>2921600
I much appreciate the effort you took to do this, thanks! I don't agree with the shifts in pose, anatomically, but I can clearly see where I need to add curves to the limbs, and the face is more appealing with those details.

>> No.2922862

>>2922755
aren't the arms a bit too short?

>> No.2922869

>>2921612
cute

>> No.2922874

>>2922728
yeah, I study action poses from manga/comics.
>>2922731
I don't feel like I have, in fact i feel like my anatomy is kinda weak, I try to focus more on getting the pose/gesture right.

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>>2919315
Keep going

>> No.2922891

>>2921818
>. I actually had a higher up from ubisoft tell me to show him my portfolio 6 months ago
How'd you run into someone like that? Give me some advice on networking Nose-senpai.

>> No.2922932

>>2922738
Pops, pls...
Stop using Google translate

>> No.2922940

>>2922891
I cant be specific because his title was moderately exclusive, but long story short: Sold a Cintiq and was a nice person while doing so.

IE: non reproducible 100% luck.

If I really wanted to network i'd go to one of their open house figure drawing sessions. Besides, I'm more of a believer of just applying to a company until they mistakenly or accidentally hire me. I've had 7 different interviews with the same company (3 sets, unrelated to art) and will just apply until they pick me. Because they can go fuck themselves.

>> No.2922962
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I'm in a bit of a slump right now, so I've decided to draw eggs with legs. Anyone got any good tips or studies I can use to improve my line weight and quality?

>> No.2922981

>>2922738
I am to like it as well also! Pops is draw of this.

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>>2922726
this is pretty cute, but shes basically floating. her legs just dont really work.. im not great at this either but maybe this shows it a lil bit!

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Not sure where I want to take this

>> No.2923030
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This is a work in progress, please let me know what you think. I'm planning on adding more detail and painting on it. Trying to get a good portion of stuff down by using the pen tool C:

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>> No.2923033

>>2923032
It's soothing to look at this.

>> No.2923057

>>2923030
>pen tool
You're a masochist.

You're pretty good at avoiding tangents (which is great for so many characters and design elements in one comp), but you've got stylistic decisions I disagree with and anatomy issues. Your limbs are looking pretty sausage-y, especially on the arms of the wolf and the birb on the left, and birb and Ichigo's legs.

Also, that file size is massive. Resize next time.

>> No.2923068

>>2923030
gives me cancer, go back to tumblr where you belong

>> No.2923070

>>2923057

Agreed, OP, let go of the pen tool.

If you are having trouble getting the shapes you want digitally without the pen tool go traditional. I was trapped for a couple years after being seduced by mathematical pen tool perfection. I couldnt replicate it any other way on the computer but I found that I could on paper with a pen.

Take all your efforts and attention to detail outside your digibox.

If you are already drawing on paper. Then learn to channel what youve learned about pen tool shapes to the design of your paper drawings.

>> No.2923107

>>2923057
Yes! I will rework the limbs, thank you. And apologies for the huge file size, forgot :V Thanks for the great advice though.
>>2923070
great advice, thank you! I will be working on letting the pen tool go, :T Thank you!

>> No.2923232

>>2923032
Bretty nice scetch, are you going to finish it?

>> No.2923234
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Hi. Crit?

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>>2923234
His left biceps looks like it is trying to move into his armpit.

I tried illustrating what I mean with some quick colors.

>> No.2923271

>>2923234
deltoids feel asymmetrical, the far one rising up super high where i think the trapepsi should be

also biceps don't depart from the forearm like that usually unless the palm of the flexing hand is facing towards it

i will be pissed if this just turns out to be one of bengus' sketches of balrog

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stupid sexy sonic

>> No.2923289

>>2923239

Noted. Will modify.

>>2923271

Thanks for the observations. Nah, Bengus actually knows his anatomy, despite what his SFV work might suggest.

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A bunch of girls.

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been drawing random people all day
>>2921577
inspo level

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>>2922699
Teach me your ways senpai. I've invested hundreds of hours into all kinds of courses but nothing touches on the stuff your drawing

How did you learn to draw figures like this?

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>>2923272
had to fix the way the neck was connecting to the head, was bugging me

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>>2923590
perspective helps a lot, and also taking inspiration from the artists you like, look at their sketches and try to do it the way they do it. Imo practice is way more important than watching or reading a tutorial. tons of references.
also I still pretty much think I'm a beginner so I shouldn't be giving any advice. hehe

>> No.2923682

>>2922699
>>2923678
Blog please!

>> No.2923687

>>2923678
That's definitely not beginner-tier anon. What artists do you take inspiration from?

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Sombra incomin

>> No.2923704

>>2923682
my blog kinda suck but ok.
http://horangehex.tumblr.com

>>2923687
yoshinari, hideaki anno, krenz, shinku kim, etc.
but mostly like gainax animation.

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>>2923697
keep going, can't offer any real assessment at this stage other than things feel a lil not symmetrical enough (nose/nostril placement, eyes/eyebrows etc) tho you may fix that by the time you start rendering the entire face

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progress, gonna play some OW for a bit

>> No.2923812

>>2923704
I definitely got a krenz/yoshinari vibe from your figures. Keep it up anon

>> No.2923818

>>2923780
blog?

>> No.2923823
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Is there some eastern artist that speaks english and has documented his journey? I want to know what they did and compare with western's people.

>> No.2923824

>>2923823
Go read Kakukaku Shikajika.

>> No.2923825

>>2923824
I've actually already read that and found it really good. It was some time ago tho.

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Please redline, I can't tell what's making it look really wrong.

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>>2923841

form is flat, use more curved lines

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>>2923841
I think the way her front is bent doesn't match her back.
The front appears like she's hunched over while the back appears like she's leaning forward

>> No.2923927

>>2923802
i love you grant, add me and we can ranked together

>> No.2923935

>>2923871
>>2923926
Damn, thank you, both of you. Your redlines helped a lot. I'll make sure to work on improving my form and posing in the future.

>> No.2923952

>>2923871
>>2923926
Stop giving redlines.

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>>2923952

>> No.2923965

>>2923964
That is not how perspective works.

>> No.2923975

>>2923965
it is how isometric view works

>> No.2923980

>>2923965
"perspective" as a word can mean a lot of things though.

>> No.2923983

>>2923964
kek

>> No.2923988

>>2923964
anon you had one job to make that rectangle perfect and then you go fuck up one a straight line on one side. u dum kid

>> No.2923996

>>2923964
kek

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>>2923927

what's your battletag nose

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>>2924003
xnosebro#1285 even if youre not as cool as grant you can add me.

pic unrelated, mouse drawing to close thread at 300.

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done for now

>>2924027
i'll add you, its grant btw

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It's a little late, but how about this?

>> No.2924200

>>2923980
You could say it's a matter of perspective.

>> No.2924364

>>2924097
Her nose and mouth make it look like she's facing slightly to the right but everything else is looking forward

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noodling to the extreme. I'll probably look at these tomorrow and cringe.

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I am not really an anime style expert. Do this for a friend.
Something is bothering me here dunno if its a perspective issue I cant fix.
Any Ideas? Feedback? thanks!

>> No.2924438

>>2924429
i really like the girl but yes the perspective is off, it's ok for her lower body but the walls and floor imply a much more extreme angle of her upper body/head. like someone looking up at a camera

>> No.2924459

>>2920791
This is legit autism

>> No.2924847

>>2924429
Change the background so she's up against a hill, and you'll be fine with that perspective.

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Just trying to get myself to finish stuff.

>> No.2924911

>>2924429
got a blog senor?

>> No.2924934

New thread >>2924930

>> No.2925579

>>2922869
She ain't cute enough, anon

>> No.2925687

>>2921818
>I absolutely refuse to be indebted to anyone.
Sadly I share the same sentiments and I can't go against it despite knowing that's not healthy.

>>2921577
This is amazing, yet somehow feels off. I can't pin point exactly what it is but something about the face is throwing my off. Not an issue of the structure or anything, but the likeliness of the character seems off. Only other thing I can say is it's kind of a shame that you put all that effort into the face/hair but not as much with the rest. I still really like it though.

Also do you have a website you don't mind sharing?

>>2923032
Really like this but it got kinda spooky after seeing that bald head at the bottom left.

>> No.2925783

Does anyone have that image where there's a sort of tier progression of drawing a touhou girl?