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Old Thread: >>2847941

Immortalize your girl at:
http://tower-girls.booru.org/

Dice rolling tool:
https://www.random.org/

Book Mobile: https://mega.nz/#F!es1BSKQR!spODyd0iaQmMelGA2GscFw

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qcmm7_5AYRw

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Some highlights

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>> No.2882913

Roru

>> No.2882915

roll

>> No.2883045

>>2882723
Bowling

>> No.2883120

>>2882723
rollu

>> No.2883202

>>2882723
Tfw I made the highlights, also rolling for later

>> No.2883232

>>2882723
New OP chart when?

>> No.2883321

>>2883232
i know right? it's been over a month now

>> No.2883354

rollang

>> No.2883355

r o l l

>> No.2883359

>>2883355
I want to do an Eldritch princess but I'm not exactly sure what it is

>> No.2883364

>>2883359
Just google images of "Lovecraftian" and princess it up, nigga.

>> No.2883370

roll

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>>2882723
>>2883355
welp there was an effort

>> No.2883415

rolllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll

>> No.2883416

another roll for my depraved soul, i'll post em both i swear

>> No.2883680
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>>2883202
Rolling again

>> No.2883855

roll

>> No.2883861

>>2883855
don't want to choose myself. rerolling

>> No.2883864

>>2882723
roll

>> No.2883865

>>2883864
confirming if this is me

>> No.2884013
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>>2882723
I drew this a few days ago. Now I hate it.

>> No.2884034

>>2882723
Roll

>> No.2884084
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how am i doing

>> No.2884324
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>>2882723
Lines, how is it so far?

>> No.2884381

roll

>> No.2884568

>>2882723
Roll

>> No.2884578

>>2882723
ROLLLE

>> No.2884931

>>2882723
rolling

>> No.2884980

roll

>> No.2885017

rolling

>> No.2885438

raul

>> No.2885588

rrrrooolll

>> No.2885624

Rolll

>> No.2885781

>>2882723
rolliru

>> No.2886428

>>2882723
babi

>> No.2886454

rollan

>> No.2886487

roru

>> No.2886514
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>>2886487

first time drawing after half a year of procrastinating

>> No.2886777

>>2882723
Roll

>> No.2886778

Roll

>> No.2887131

rollo

>> No.2887133

roll

>> No.2887357

>>2886514
blog?

>> No.2887694

>>2882723
roll

>> No.2887706

>>2882723
rolling

>> No.2888647
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raider princess

>> No.2888728

>>2882723

I actually feel kind of good about myself.

Time to make that disappear.

Princess Get.

>> No.2888907
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>>2882723
Did a redraw!

>> No.2888911

Rowlang

>> No.2888919
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>> No.2888921

>>2884013
saved

>> No.2888954

20% chance I actually draw what I roll

>> No.2889088

>>2888907
are you sure the dates aren't mixed up? Or did you have some kind of stylistic epiphany

>> No.2889612

roll

>> No.2889721
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>>2889612

>> No.2889750

>>2889088
his new one is definitely better

>> No.2889863

>>2888907
>Two years for this

>> No.2889888

roll

>> No.2889899

>>2889750
I'm inclined to agree, I just don't usually see artists who become more cartoony over time instead of striving for really complex shit, especially on /loomis/

I probably came off sarcastic but I really do want to know what goes into a change like this

>> No.2889912

>>2889899
I can not speak for the anon, but for me cartoon drawing is a lot funnier because I can play a lot with expressions, body types and all that shit.

Realism can be very beautiful and impressive some times but for me it is not as charismatic.

>> No.2890154

>>2882723
roll

>> No.2890677

Roll

>> No.2891314

>>2884084
fucking awesome

>> No.2891613

rpolliin

>> No.2891676

rolling i guess

>> No.2891679

>>2891676
damn, so close to cat. oh well faerie it is

>> No.2891682

>>2882723
erm.. roll.

>> No.2892118
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>>2891676
no references, feel free to redline. looking at it now, the left thigh looks long
put my pen down to look for kinds of leaves and wound up browsing memes so i'm done for tonight

>> No.2892545
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I've done a lot of these and I don't think I've ever posted them here.

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>>2892545

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>>2892548

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>>2892550

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>>2892551

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>>2892552

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>>2892553

>> No.2892555

Roll.

>> No.2892556
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>>2892554

>> No.2892575

>>2892118
my dick

>> No.2892683

Roll for when I'm done with typing up bullshit.

>> No.2892699

>>2884324
Properly proportioned and cutely posed. Maybe move the figure a bit to the side to throw the balance off? Great work either way, though. Keep it up, Anon.

>> No.2892764

>>2882723
Roll

>> No.2892786

>>2892545
I like your art style

Your Merchant Princess is best

>> No.2892787

>>2892556
why is her thumb on the wrong side?

>> No.2892904

>>2892787
>eldritch

>> No.2893113
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2893113

i took some liberties with her outfit, as ya can see.
redlines/crit appreciated

>> No.2893117

>>2882723
WAIT

>> No.2893121

r o l l

>> No.2893261

>>2882723
r-r-r-roll!

>> No.2893539

>>2882735
>>2882744
>>2882749
would fug

>> No.2893684

Roll

>> No.2894346
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2894346

So I took a stab at creating an updated roll chart with new princesses but the file size became huge. Had to shrink it to be able to upload it so hopefully it will end up readable still.

>> No.2894669

rooll

>> No.2894718

roll

>> No.2894764

roll

>> No.2894931

>>2891314
well took forever to get a reply for it so i put it aside and going to try another one.

Rolling

>> No.2894948

rol

>> No.2894977
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2894977

A 5 minute drawing because I fucking hate myself

>> No.2894981

>>2894931
>>2884084
i feel like you're copping out with that pose because the jacket covering the majority of her body. it's just a big shape with no definition.
the fur on her collar looks stiff in comparison to the fur on her sleeves. also in the original image it looks like her arm isn't really in her sleeves, and she more has the jacket around her shoulders? idk maybe that's just my interpretation
overall not very interesting

>> No.2895123

roll

>> No.2895139

>>2894346
Roll

>> No.2895142

rerollah

>> No.2895214

>>2894346
rull

>> No.2895233
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Isn't quick enough to call it a sketch, isn't good enough to call it a painting...

>> No.2895881

>>2882723
I'll do my best!

>> No.2895931
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2895931

moth princess is pretty cute tho

>> No.2895979

>>2882723
rollid

>> No.2895984

rooooooooooooooooooooooooooool

>> No.2895992

>>2895931
lol

>> No.2896008

Roll.

>> No.2896097

Holy crap you guys have been busy. Rolling.

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>>2896008

>> No.2896300

roly poly

>> No.2896349

>>2882723


roallan

>> No.2896359

>>2894346

rorru

>> No.2896372

Rollerino

>> No.2896373
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>>2896349

>> No.2896419

>>2894346
rool

>> No.2896447
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>>2896419
gave up orz. I suck enough at the human figure, horses can fuck right off for now.

>> No.2896449
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2896449

>>2896372
My shot at the Crystal P. Hopefully it turned out well!

>> No.2896451

>>2894346
Roller ball

>> No.2896454

Roll

>> No.2896619

>>2896449
i like it

>> No.2896764
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2896764

This took me forever

>> No.2896794

Rolleerrrr

>> No.2897254

roll

>> No.2897456

>>2893113
This is cute but then oh my god what in the blue blazes is that leg.

>> No.2897477

rool

>> No.2897488

Roll

>> No.2897685
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2897685

>>2897477
Symbiote princess done and done. What does /ic/ think?

>> No.2897705

>>2882723
roll

>> No.2897994

roll

>> No.2898025

>>2882723
roll

>> No.2898033

>>2882723
roll

>> No.2898066

rol

>> No.2898086

>>2882723
roll

>> No.2898581

>>2882723
>https://www.random.org/
roll

>> No.2898618

roll

>> No.2898718

roll

>> No.2898720

rrolll

>> No.2898721
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2898721

>>2898033
many legs princess

>> No.2898723

roll..

>> No.2898730

>>2894346
rolls roice

>> No.2898734

>>2894346
ok

>> No.2898739

>>2894346
rrol

>> No.2898789

>>2882723
rolling baby!

>> No.2898795

>>2898789
>flat surfaces

too boring. Rolling again

>> No.2898813

Roll

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>>2898618

>> No.2898981

roll

>> No.2899192
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2899192

>>2892118
posting prog. gettin real fuckin sick of drawing leaves desu

>> No.2899214

>>2899192
Hey, lookin' pretty sweet! Whats your process for drawing the leaves?

>> No.2899216

rolling

>> No.2899230

rollllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
lllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
llllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll

>> No.2899236
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>>2899214
i guess the best way i can describe it is
>draw leaf shape with curves, determine if i want "folding" parts
>adjust curves to make it look better
>shade areas with shadow (eg. edges? places where other leaf would be over it)
>touch up (outlines, highlighted areas)
>draw more leaves
all while trying not to kill myself. also eventually
>add slits/cuts

>> No.2899244

>>2899236
That interesting. I can never get the folding effect down in my work. Why are you drawing in magenta-pink btw?

>> No.2899263

>>2899244
i like drawing in color. black seems boring and a bit too dark to me (plus if i want to emphasize some parts later, i'll add black). and it's the faerie princess and she's pink in the OP image. i know it's more of a red/blush-pink, but i just picked this pink from the swatches

>> No.2899280

>>2899263
Oh I see. I colored the outline on mine(Symbiote Princess) and it looked a bit weird in retrospect. Any tips on better looking linework, because you seem to have that down.

>> No.2899298

>>2899280
i think this is probably bad habit, but i always have my left hand on ctrl + z and hit it whenever i'm not happy with a line (not smooth) which is like 95% of the time. if it's a line i can work with, i'll adjust it by going over it again and/or thinning out areas
i've also been using a solid brush for a lot of the leaves, but i pulled the lighter pinks from the parts where i use a translucent brush. was thinking maybe i should go over the linework and make a vector but i'm probably too lazy to do that

>> No.2899306

>>2899298
I guess I kinda screwed myself out of good linework because I use Corel for my stuff, and its not very good with fine lines

>> No.2899308

>>2899306
i'm using photoshop cs6 but paint tool sai has a good stabilizer tool

>> No.2899312

>>2899308
I hear a lot about that program. Is it more of an app, or a full on seperate program?

>> No.2899315

>>2899312
full on separate program. good for people who draw anime, i think.

>> No.2899319
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2899319

>>2899230

>> No.2899322

>>2894346
Glad to see people are making use of the time I put into this

>> No.2899326

>>2899315
That sounds pretty neat! Im more partial to painting, but I could always use better linework. Is it free or where can I buy it?

>> No.2899330

>>2899326
i think you have to crack it. just google paint tool sai english

>> No.2899331

>>2899330
Sheeit Im no Russian, but Ill try. Thanks!

>> No.2899332

>>2899322
remembering the extra digit was almost too taxing on my mental energy though

>> No.2899336

>>2899322
Its a bredy gud chart man. Much cleaner and easier to use that the OP chart

>> No.2899341

rollio

>> No.2899863

>>2899319
now that's lewd

>> No.2899925

Roll.

>> No.2899971

>>2899319
cute

>> No.2899999

>>2892554
>>2892553
>>2892552
>>2892551
>>2892550
>>2892548
>>2892545
really cool drawings.

>> No.2900004

>>2894977
its rough, but lines and style is neat.

>> No.2900013

>>2899999
really cool digits.

>> No.2900015

>>2882723
Rollan

>> No.2900424

roll for the day.

>> No.2901088

Rollerino

>> No.2901092

Rolando.

>> No.2901400

>>2882723
Road Rolla-Dah!

>> No.2901460

>>2894346
roll!

>> No.2901608

>>2894346
Been a long time since I've done this, glad to see an updated chart! Appreciate the effort.

Also, rollin'

>> No.2901662

rollio

>> No.2901763
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2901763

>>2882723

>> No.2901793
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2901793

>>2898795
It feels like understanding shading is just a reach away but I'm fumbling in the dark trying to catch it.

>> No.2901992

rolling

>> No.2902167

rollllllll

>> No.2902170

roley poley oley

>> No.2902172

consider it rolled

>> No.2902376

>>2882723
rooll

>> No.2902750

>>2901793
Oddly appealing

>> No.2902832

>>2894346
roll

>> No.2902985

>>2894346
Roll roll - fight da powa

>> No.2903283
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2903283

Certainly real princess done

>> No.2903936

>>2882723
rolling

>> No.2904478

Been a while, but look at all this lovely stuff that could use some words. Gonna do the words things. Take the words with a grain of salt.

>>2883409
And what a good effort it was! Lovely clothes, lovely face structure, lovely hair, especially where the crown seems to be growing out of her head. I love the linework around the ears and nose, but a touch more weight variety can have more of a pronounced effect, especially around the hair. Also maybe add more of a slope around where her ribs are visible to show the connection to the upper chest and arms, but that could just be me. Wonderful overall!

>>2883680
Fukken cute/10 like always. Lovely perspective shot, lovely use of color, especially on the body, but the background feels a little empty for all the action and definition going on around the subjects. Change it up whenever you'd like, the subjects themselves are beautiful.

>>2884013
I wouldn't hate it, anon, a lot of the elements are really striking. The use of contrast is fantastic, and you drew her thighs and spine incredibly. Her arms, face, and hands could use a little bit more detail and motion though, and just a bit of the proportioning, like around the right arm, could use touching up. Don't give up, ms elmntal!

>>2884084
Doing great, love the general linework, eyes and hair. Adorable smol smile, fantastic fabric definition. Could use color when you want to experiment! Otherwise, keep it up.

>>2884324
Lines looking good, her fingers are my favorite, liking the crown balance. The stiff pose works, she looks regal and commanding, but the cloth could use a bit more flow and dynamism, especially around the bottom. A simple face but it works with the style. Overall, bretty gub!

>>2886514
Waifu/10. Fukken love her cute little expression and shoulders, two of my favorite parts of any drawing. Wonderful hair, eyes, overall composition. I'd love to see more of her body drawn!

>> No.2904502

>>2904478
cont.

>>2888647
Dem abs. Spear seems too thin and flimsy given the heft given to every other aspect of her gear and body. I love her thighs, her cloak, pose, everything! You've captured her wonderfully. The shield, especially, looks fantastic. Play with a background when you start to feel adventurous!

>>2888907
It's a style alright. The eyes are a little too big for my taste, and it feels like the face and head are incongruous with the flow of the rest of the body, but everything else looks lovely. I love the positioning of her fingers and the slope of her hips. Good variety in line weight, and keep experimenting with style!

>>2888919

AW/10! Absolutely in love with her dress, and those flowers are top notch. Very good pose, her arms look amazing, but I'd take a look at the anatomy around her clavicle, sternum, and neck. Those sections have little depth compared to the rest of the body, but nothing a bit of rearranging can't fix. Overall, wonderful use of color. Gonna aspire to draw my flowers as well as you.

>>2889721
Dat batshit expression. I love the eyes and nose. You've definitely got a style down, but it loses recognizability from the neck down. The neck and body feel out of place with the linework present on the face, but then the hands pick it up again. I think just a bit more detailing and rendering could make it more unified. Great teethchest!

>>2892118
>>2899192
Amazing pose and fantastic detailing on the leaves. You can really feel the dynamism present in her action and the leaves are just absolutely stunning. I'll be using this as a reference for my own leaves because it's just phenomenal. The variety to the leaves especially makes them all the more believable. I can't find anything wrong with it! Damn my eye or your incredible drawing. Either way, keep it up!

>> No.2904529

>>2904502
cont.

>>2892545
AW!! I love your use of color, posing and general grasp of anatomy. You've got a style down for sure and you absolutely own it. I especially love the background. The gold, chests, everything just feels so natural back there. The hair just coming out of her head feels a little stiff, especially given the body and motion around the bottom, but it could just be me.

>>2892548
Love your use of color. Her outfit is fucking fantastic and oh my god dem clothes details. Her anatomy feels just a little bit off, especially around the length of her arms, but is it there to give her more of a simian quality? Overall, great work.

>>2892550
Dat backpack/10. You give so much life and personality to each princess. I love the pack and the tremendous arrangement of everything. Feels like something already out of something established. Can't see anything to criticize here, this is fantastic.

>>2892551
Daww. I love her pose, clothes, everything. The positioning of her feet is especially endearing and oh my goodness that hat. Keep it up!

>>2892552
This is an incredibly hard perspective shot to master, and you took it on valiantly. The legs seem just a little too thin and out of position for the rest of the torso, but overall the motion is very well translated. Fantastic use of color and fabric like always, but I'd just play around with the legs a bit more to get the pose down.

>>2892553
I love how the ground for each character is so unique and adds to the personality. This is another great example of your style. I'd add just a bit more heft to the thighs, but that could just be me. Overall, very well done!

>>2892554
I think my favorite so far. I love the pose, the expression, the definition of the chest, everything. Her body language is perfect, the colors are so fukken adorable. There is nothing about this I don't love.

>> No.2904554

>>2904529
cont.

>>2892556
Or is this my favorite one of yours... Close tie. This one's fantastic in its simplicity and complexity. Lovely expression, lovely use of posing and weird squish elements. Lovely colors! This is perfect and unified. I love it. Looking forward to seeing more from you.

>>2893113
Fukken adorable/10. Her face is my favorite part. The outfit is fantastic, the colors and upper body anatomy works great, but the legs are a little out of place. Just taking a closer look at the proportioning and arrangement there can make the piece perfect, otherwise it's wonderful.

>>2894346
Very neat, but does the board move quickly enough for the inclusion of third digits? Rolling regardless, just for fun.

>>2894977
What the other anon said! It's a good attempt! Lines are fine, style's there. Just needs more detail and refinement! Don't give up!

>>2895233
Oh fug that's cute. Look at her little face. Wonderful use of shading and value overall. I love the softness and life you've lent to the breasts especially. The hair seems flat and the colors blur into her headgear there, but, otherwise, I love it.

>>2895931
Pfft cute. This is a great setting and feels complete with the addition of the background. Cute subject matter too. As far as color choices go, I think the moth princess should have been a different color, because otherwise the foreground becomes too muddied together. Experiment with colors a bit more to define your subjects more clearly, but otherwise this is lovely!

>>2896103
CUTE! CUTE!!! Love her expression, love her horns, love her hair. LOVE IT. Would like to see more of her body, but otherwise, for what it is, it's fantastic. Not bad use of value either. Her left arm seems just a touch out of position, but it's a minor detail. Or it could just be me. I like it.

>> No.2904576

>>2904554
cont.

>>2896373
SO CUTE. Love the style, the little heart, the pose. You've captured her character in just a few smol body figures and that's terrific. Love how unique the chibi style seems as well. Would love to see more in the future.

>>2896447
Don't give up! The linework looks fine and that horse is, well, a horse. The definition's there! Even incomplete, all of the princesses have interesting body language that I would love to see developed further.

>>2896449
Will it work? Hmm... I like it! Some of the lines and elements seem to clash against each other in terms of flow and rigidity, given that she's crystal princess and all, but a little bit of experimentation can go a long way. Job well done, I think! Play around with at your convenience!

>>2896764
Definitely a good attempt. I think the best advice I can give here is to not be afraid of using a reference. The anatomy and cloth doesn't match up, but using a strong reference can help you get your practice in for proportioning, placement, pose. It's a good start! Stick around!

>>2897685
Fukken cute. Love her breasts, arms, and thighs. You can tell you've got a strong grasp of value and color, but it seems incomplete because her face and feet do not have that same touch of TLC. They seem flat in comparison, but it's nothing a bit more definition can't fix.

>>2898721
Yep. Many legs/10. Such legs. So spider. Wow. Kidding aside, this is lovely. You've got your style down and I fukken love the spider body. Her face and expression is so fukken adorable too, but her torso feels just a bit too meaty. It could just be me too though. I like it! Gonna be using this as a study for linework, because wow those are some lovely lines.

>>2898930
Love the weird eye tentacles, love her body language, love the composition overall! Her face could use a bit more proportioning and placement work, as the eye feels like it's going a bit too far to her left, but otherwise this isn't bad at all. Keep experimenting, anon.

>> No.2904590

>>2904576
cont.

>>2899319
Dat's fukken lewd. You've been improving tremendously all this time. Same criticism as I always have: make those pupils smaller, anon. We gotta see the whites of her eyes for her to convey further character and expression. When the pupil dominates the entire eye, the effect is doll-like and inexpressive. Everything else though! Keep it up!

>>2901763
I'd cow her bell/10. Lovely work. Lovely pose, expression, the arms especially, I adore how you rendered them. Some of the features, like the eyes and hands, feel just a touch too small given the huge nature of her everything else, but it's not that bad in terms of a stylistic choice. Play around and see how you feel!

>>2901793
Drunk baby, o no. Honestly, very not bad in terms of shading. What you want to do is use lots of references and define the light source. Always. That is the most important part because it unifies every other aspect of the drawing. I like this one a lot, her abdomen especially looks fantastic. Don't give up, anon, you're getting it.

>>2903283
That's a real princess if ever I've seen one! I'm gonna go walk over and say hi right now! I adore the mouth on the mimic part. The tongue, the teeth, the salivating, it's fukken perfect. This is a fantastic style as well. Her face seems a touch too simple given the depth and highlighting on elements such as her breasts, but, well, it's something you can tackle at your own pace. Love it overall!

>> No.2904600

>>2904478
>>2904502
>>2904529
>>2904554
>>2904576
>>2904590
you fucking saint
thanks so much for feedback as always, am >>2883409
and>>2896447
<3

>> No.2904638

>>2904600

Aww, thank you, anon! I'm really, really glad these are helping.

>> No.2904865

rollin

>> No.2904980

>>2894346
roolin

>> No.2904986

rollo

>> No.2904989

roll

>> No.2905373

>>2894346
ro
ll

>> No.2905445

>>2904576

you tha real mvp

>> No.2905499
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2905499

>>2904576
>>2904590
Thanks man! Feedback on /ic/ is always welcome! I'm the anon from >>2903283 and
>>2897685 and >>2896449. I agree with your Crystal P assessment, it didn't turn out that well. With the Symbiote P, I actually have updated it with feedback from the drawthread, and it looks slightly better. For the Mimic P, I'm a bit nervous to put detail into the face considering how simple and cartoony the style I was trying for was.

>> No.2905562

rollllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll

>> No.2905565

>>2882723

reelin

>> No.2905576
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ghost princess

>> No.2905581
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i figured on what the head and face will look like.... havent figured out the body position yet.
but i still want to know what yall think.

>> No.2905765

>>2905499

I do like the changes. It's okay to be nervous, anon, especially if you feel like you like too many of the drawing's other elements to really mess with it. Play around with things on new drawings and see what comes out. You can always revisit and change whatever you'd like.

Gonna post words on all the new things tomorrow. Gonna also upload the thing I've been working on and reroll. Exhausted af.

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2905767

>>2904554
>>2905765

Flayer princess from the new roll listing. Gonna use it again for my next roll. Rate my bb pls.

>> No.2906030

>>2905765
I see what you mean. Do you have any suggestions for putting more detail and texture into stylized faces? Im worried that if I do, it may come off as symbol drawing, not stylization

>> No.2906033

>>2905767
Looks good man! Noice colors and style, fits right into the look of the chart

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>>2901608
Rough sketch, not sure if it clearly shows she's blowing on her hands.

>> No.2906186

>>2906064
Only problem with this one is that it doesn't look that much like the Yeti P. Other than that, looks pretty good, besides a kind of awkward posing in the face and legs

>> No.2906355

>>2906186
Also, not the guy giving feedback or chart op

>> No.2906391

>>2882723
rolly polly

>> No.2906417

benis

>> No.2906434

Roll

>> No.2906502
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2906502

>>2906186
You're right, I seem to have gotten to carried away in redesigning her. Here's an edit to get her closer to the reference pic.

Also, reroll.

>> No.2906555

Gonna jump on this quick before I get to my lichcess princess. Like always, take with a grain of salt.

>>2905576
Cute and simple, reminds me of something out of Paper Mario. Some of the linework is a little messy and could benefit from smoothing out, but generally a good start. Play around with more shapes as well, as some of the lines feel out of place.

>>2905581
Also very cute, love the mouth, nose, eyes, the general chibi composition is fantastic, but it feels as though a few basic changes to the anatomy and proportioning could give the piece more character.

>>2905612
Gorgeous eyes, gorgeous values, I like it a lot. What I would personally try to do is follow up on that lighter linework from the neck and move up to give her face a woodier appearance, just to stay in theme, but otherwise this is lovely. Can't wait to see more.

>>2906064
>>2906502
FUKKEN ADORABLE. I think anon means that the face and neck could be arranged differently to give her gesture a bit more dynamism. But the style is fantastic. I love both the original and then the changes. You've given her so much personality, and the style for both reminds me of Monster High. It's cute af and extremely recognizable. Keep it up. I'd love to see more from you.

>> No.2906904

>>2894346

roll

>> No.2907456

ROAD RORRA DA

>> No.2907464

Roll

>> No.2907481
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2907481

>>2907456
sphinx princess

>> No.2907531

roll

>> No.2907541

Rollin

>> No.2907858

>>2894346
Trying this

>> No.2907945

>>2894346
roll

>> No.2908021

rell

>> No.2908283

rolling rolling

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2908383

I only did a headshot because I didn't really want her. Going to re-roll...

>> No.2908743

rollan

>> No.2908819

roll

>> No.2908841

roru

>> No.2908869

>>2904576
T-thanks anon

>> No.2908894

>>2894346
Rollin

>> No.2908957

>>2907481

really like this, the wing thingies are a bit flat tho blog?/10

also roll

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>>2906555
Glad to hear that you like it! I've been told my art looks a bit uninteresting so I'm trying to improve that.

Also, here's the Sword Princess for my roll >>2906502. Rerolling again!

>> No.2908972

forgot my number so roll again

>> No.2909010

>>2894346
it's been forever. lets give it a shot

>> No.2909037

>>2894346
roll rollin

>> No.2909078
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2909078

Dude, I never draw cute anime things I dont know why I thought that this would be a good idea

>> No.2909402

>>2894346
princess GET

>> No.2909594
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2909594

Feels... I dunno. I forced myself to finish it but there's a lot of elements that look wrong. Oh well. Lichcess princess. Hope you guys like it. Rerolling.

>> No.2909931

Roll

>> No.2909958

>>2908957
didn't really know what to do with the wings so I just left it like that

https://twitter.com/itsyatsu

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>>2908969
Delivering the Ghoul Princess. Though it'd be good to practice traditional drawing again, and it seems I clearly should.

>> No.2911656

>>2894346
Sure I'll try it. I'm a complete rookie tho. Just got into art a week ago.

>> No.2911669

>>2911656
Oh dear

>> No.2911740

row-lan

>> No.2911989
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2911989

i had to google what a kobold is

>> No.2912207

Okay let's get on it. Like always, take with a grain of salt.

>>2907481
Das a cute fukken princess. I like her bored expression and seemingly disinterested pose, but I feel as though a bit of the body language may be better translated. Her arms feel a touch too long and the wings seem stiff, compared to the rest of the body, but nothing a second go couldn't fix. Love the hands, love the feet, I'd love to see more!

>>2908383
You'll have to teach me how to get that glow effect anon, I absolutely love it. Great style, simple yet effective linework, and the gesture and colors breathe life to the piece overall.

>>2908969
Dynamism makes for interesting art. Add character to little touches and think about what would breathe life to a scene. In this one, though everything is proportionally and anatomically gorgeous, maybe play around with how her skin would behave. I'd make her cheek squished from where she's laying and add some movement to her hair, as a start. Fantastic platform to go by, though. I love the sword especially.

>>2909078
Daw/10. Love her eyes, love the blush, love the pose, but it's rough, anon! The sketchiness works for this, but playing with the space within the lines can make for an even more interesting piece. Also, adjust her stein-hand in relation to the stein, as the positioning looks a touch uncomfortable. Great work overall.

>>2911338
Very cute. Love her clothes and face especially. Great positioning on her toes and fantastic work conveying the crouch itself, but some of the proportioning seems off. If she stood up, she'd seem too long for her legs, and her hands are comparatively small to the rest of her, but this could just be me. Keep it up!

>>2911989
That's a kobold alright! Lovely coloring, lovely proportioning, I really like the lean she's got going, but adding just a bit more gesture could make the picture spring to life even more. Expression a cute, eyes a cute, this a cute. Great work, hope to see more.

>> No.2912227

roll for quickie

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>>2912227

>> No.2914273

roll

>> No.2914274

rolling for some practice

>> No.2914275

rolling

>> No.2914281

roll

>> No.2914394

>>2912264
I like it

>> No.2914488

>>2894346
roll

>> No.2914537

>>2894346
roll

>> No.2914538

>>2882723
rolling

>> No.2914544

>>2894346
roll

>> No.2915857

I've been gone for a while.
Did that breast size comparison chart ever get done?
Last time I checked there was only mean to be, like, four mega-tiddy canon princesses.
Now I'm seeing hyper goat udders.
wtf is going on?

>> No.2915863

>>2915857
/ic/ Tower Girls is not canon with the /tg/ Tower Girls brand, it's about artists approaching a subject with their own particular idiom in mind. If they want to draw huge succulent goat tits it is their God given right to do so!

>> No.2915868

>>2899192
I'd consider making the nose a little bit smaller, though that's up to you mostly. I'm just a fan of small button noses.
Other than that, it's looking pretty slick, great line weight and use of perspective.

>> No.2915885

>>2915863
>huge succulent goat tits
my nigga
>now I'm thirsty ;_;

>> No.2915890

>>2882723
roll

>> No.2915909

>>2894346
rolling

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>>2894346
filename probably unrelated

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>>2915890
Idk why but the elemental princesses just takes the inspiration out of me.

In any case headpats delivered so roll

>> No.2916434

>>2915857
>>2915863
Yeah no cannon or whatever but seriously did that breast comparison chart ever get posted?

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>>2882723
landsknecht

also roll

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2917870

I'm so proud of how much participation this thread has gotten without me. Thank you anon for giving the participants the critiques they deserve, and thank you all who've participated thus far-I can see this thread is in good hands. Unfortunately I still don't have the new chart done as I've been uncharacteristically busy as late, but it won't be long, now®. Keep it going, guys. I-...I'll be back!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vf-GY3ezkHU

>> No.2917882

roll

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2917992

>>2917792
jester princess

>> No.2918098

>>2894346
rollll

>> No.2918111

>>2917870
Look at >>2894346

>> No.2918435

>>2916434
>but seriously did that breast comparison chart ever get posted?
What the fuck are you talking about? There's never BEEN one, there's never BEEN discussion about making one.
Make it yourself.

>> No.2919261

>>2894346
ROLLAN

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>>2917992
>>2919261
nomad princess

>> No.2919872

roll

>> No.2919998
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2919998

birb princess

>>2912207
thanks for the feedback anon! youre right i really gotta push gestures a lot more (among other things)

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Birb princess

>> No.2920406

rollin'