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I'm new to drawing and this is my second attempt at a character.
Where do I need to improve?
Also, do I need to thicken the lining to match the hair?
Is the lighting and shading enough?

I just wanna make some porn.

>> No.2878700
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2878700

First attempt is here and unfinished, I'm unsure where to put the lightning.
Same shit about maybe thickening the lines.

My anus is ready.

>> No.2878701

youalreadyhaventmadeit.jpg

>> No.2878702

>>2878701
I want to make a free trainer incest game, but my art isn't good enough.
HTG are ruthless.

>> No.2878703
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>>2878698
Literally better than 95% of /ic/ desu senpai

>> No.2878707

>>2878698
>learning on your own
read the sticky, read some books, watch youtube lectures, and study fundamentals everyday

>actually learning
save up some cash and go to an atelier

>> No.2878711

>>2878698
You have the spark

>> No.2878714

>>2878701
>>2878703
>>2878711
It's so friendly here that it's making me doubt I'm on 4chan, kek

>>2878707
Thanks a lot, I'll look through that.

>> No.2878719

>>2878707
and end up like proko?

>> No.2878770

For a beg drawing from imagination, it's actually pretty good.

>> No.2878781

>>2878714
>friendly
>sweats profusely

>> No.2878892

Ah Ha! OP
I See you took my advice to check out /art/

>> No.2878910

nice tracing
read the sticky

>> No.2878911
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2878911

>>2878892
Yup, thankye.

>> No.2880186

Learn how to draw lines. Yours are too shaky.

I highly recommend using a different art program. Photoshop is industry standard. I use Sai and find it alright, I've also heard good things about Clip Studio pro or whatever it's called.

Check out the sticky. You should learn perspective and proportions and such, for example, in >>2878700 her hips are facing forward at an impossible angle.

>> No.2880556

>>2880186
Sai's line editor is the best!