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2817868 No.2817868 [Reply] [Original]

Rate my art
I'm new here so if I mess anything up please forgive me
I just want to some critique and opinions on my work.

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>>2817870
Fuck sorry posted the wrong version.

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>>2817876
this is very new

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>>2817909
This was inspired by a manga.

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>>2817916
The image size limit on here is killing me.

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>> No.2817923

trash / 10

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>>2817878
>>2817911
>This was inspired by a manga.

I can tell, junji ito must be your inspiration. Thats cool and all but just don't tread in copy cat territory (pic related)

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>>2817868
You're beyond help.
Now the actually important question, why the fuck did you need 15162342 pixels for this piece of shit? >>2817920

>> No.2817935

>>2817933
And i'm actually worse than you, can't even quote correctly, I meant this piece of shit >>2817922

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>>2817929
I should of mentioned that picture and a few others were a little thing I did were I mixed a kids show with some famous images made by Junji Ito
I admit fully that some of these pictures were straight up copies on my DA

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>>2817944
This one was inspired by scary stories to tell in the dark
most of my art when I copy something I admit that I coped and dont take fully credit for originality

>> No.2817949

>>2817935
Can I ask what's wrong with it?
I came mostly for critique and thoughts on my work.

>> No.2817955

>>2817944
>>2817946
Well, I'm glad you admit to it. Some people won't even go that far when they rip off original material. Good job anon.

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>>2817955
Thanks, Back when I begun all I did was copy from others work but I'm trying to change that I want my art to be mostly original I still look at other forms of media like films comics and other artists for inspiration.

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>>2817966
A little gif thing.

>> No.2817977

I'm kinda feeling your stuff honestly. Gotta say I like the original stuff more than the ones with inspiration.

>> No.2817980
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Even though you don't have many skills with anatomy, I find your work very interesting, and it looks like you put a lot of effort into it.
Keep it up OP, draw a thousand more.

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>>2817977
Unless I want to do it for fun, I try to do most of my art original now using my own creativity.
I'm almost done with Uni and plan on putting all my focus into making original art (That and going to gym and losing weight.)

>> No.2817994

>>2817868
Be honest
Do you have autism

>> No.2817997
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>>2817980
Thank you man anatomy is another thing I seriously want to improve on I cant draw feet for shit, and Uni didn't really help with learning anatomy.

Also another old piece mostly inspired by the movie the Mirrors poster.
Like I said I want to avoid coping now for the most part.

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>>2817994
I'm on the spectrum.....

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>> No.2818012

this is legitimately creepy, bravo op

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>>2818012
That's just what I wanted my art to do thank you anon.

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>>2818020
Inspired by Jacobs Ladder best movie ever made.

>> No.2818023

>>2817868
I really like these. They're rough, but that somehow adds to the appeal

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>>2818023
Cheers man.

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>>2818047
I'm fucking shit at backgrounds and need to improve on that.

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>> No.2818730

No understanding of perspective, anatomy, proportions, line weight, or rendering; blatant copying under the guise of "inspiration," and symbol drawing everywhere. You just appeared to have bullshitted your entire way up to this point.

Read the sticky and start over.

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>>2818730
I understand your criticisms.
My work is not professional and I haven't had any real teachings about how to draw in ages I want to improve very badly, like I said I want to avoid copying and make my own work for now on.
I saw the sticky and it seemned interesting ill give it a read and see how I can improve with it.
I have been drawing for only 3 years but I still feel very much like a beginner and I want to get as good as some of the artists on this broad and learn how to draw properly.

>> No.2819188

>>2818910
listen, man.

just keep doing what you are doing, I guess.
Just make up your own characters and give it a story.
Make a blog of an ongoing story that involves those characters. Honestly, it can be mostly words and then just punctuate it here and there with an image.

Get a group of fans going and start a patreon.
Legit, as bad as the art is, I think you could actually monetize it if you follow the above steps.

Call it creepsville or edgetown or whatever the fuck.

Just make it yours.