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ITT we critique people who post their beginner work! A Beginner Wed Dec 14 12:36:18 2016 No.2777344 [Reply] [Original]

I've just drawn an eye, any suggestions. Trying to draw elements of a face in realistic detail and fast.

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 14 12:41:18 2016 No.2777354 File: 31 KB, 361x691, nottoday.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >ITT we critique people who post their beginner work! >>2776397

>>	Anonymous Wed Dec 14 12:41:19 2016 No.2777355 >>2777344 gee if only there was already a thread with that exact purpose known as the beginner's thread! sage mage

>>	A Beginner Wed Dec 14 12:43:40 2016 No.2777360 Ah, new here.

>>	A Beginner Wed Dec 14 12:44:47 2016 No.2777361 >>2777354 Please don't hate me 4chan anon. Just take a walk and it'll be at the bottom soon.

>>	Anonymous Fri Dec 16 08:44:25 2016 No.2779963 bump

>>	Anonymous Fri Dec 16 09:09:32 2016 No.2779969 >>2779963 WHY WOULD YOU BUMP THIS CRAP???

>>	Anonymous Fri Dec 16 09:31:06 2016 No.2779990 File: 3 KB, 321x182, the reality.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] bump

>>	Anonymous Fri Dec 16 11:26:43 2016 No.2780108 >>2779969 critique the eye please

>>	Anonymous Fri Dec 16 11:28:29 2016 No.2780111 >>2780108 it's shit, read sticky sage

Sage Fri Dec 16 11:58:37 2016 No.2780142

Sage

It is a symbolic drawing, not accurate to a real eye at all. Drawing a shitty inaccurate representation "fast" is not improving your art.

The sticky gives you advice on how to stop drawing symbolicly. READ IT.

Your iris is smoothed on the bottom.

Your line weight is too constant, non pressure sensitive soft circle brush is shit tier digital.

The browser is too low, they would have hairy eye socket.

You have no grasp of how skin folds around the sphere of the eye, the zygomatic arch, or any other ocular anatomy.

It's bad. Do more basic shapes practice.

Happy you got lots of attention?

>>	Anonymous Fri Dec 16 14:26:33 2016 No.2780256 >>2777354 new thread >>2778223

>>	Anonymous Fri Dec 16 16:20:41 2016 No.2780362 hey guys bump

>>	Anonymous Fri Dec 16 17:04:47 2016 No.2780409 >>2777344 shitty even for a beginner

>>	Anonymous Fri Dec 16 17:08:31 2016 No.2780414 >>2780409 bump

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