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Anonymous Thu Oct 20 18:55:59 2016 No.2720117 [Reply] [Original]

Critique would be appreciated =)

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 20 19:17:32 2016 No.2720126 File: 6 KB, 250x249, 1475627392391s.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2720117 Ima about to nut to this, hold on senpai

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 20 19:55:15 2016 No.2720156 >>2720117 to flat

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 21 13:26:07 2016 No.2720730 >>2720117 It looks like you tried your best to photo copy. Try not to get too worked up on detail, and focus on fundamentals.

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 21 13:34:27 2016 No.2720738 >>2720117 Just darken the shadows around the creases on the ears and nose. They kind of blend in together making the image flat. From what I can see the ear creases look good, just hard to see. It's got a lot of potential.

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 21 13:55:46 2016 No.2720749 File: 129 KB, 724x611, 1476859814281.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2720156 I think her boobs size is fine anon

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 21 14:05:28 2016 No.2720755 File: 264 KB, 1316x1067, 1470906297445.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2720117 Where are the fucking mods for this type of shit GO TO THE DRAW OR BEGINNER THREAD DIPSHIT STOP MAKING THREADS FOR YOUR OWN SHITTY "ART" PLEBS

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 21 14:06:51 2016 No.2720756 Do some asaro heads. I can tell you're trying to get the values, but you've just ended up with a flat, soupy sort of look. There isn't enough contrast and your edges are non-existent. Everything is way too soft and blended out.

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 21 16:44:17 2016 No.2720842 >>2720117 Push your values. Work on shading.