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What do you think so far?

>> No.2648021

nice colours
i like it
i like it a
lto

>> No.2648025

thanks mang, i will hopefully have it finished tomorrow. potentially less drunk.

>> No.2648036

>>2648021
at least fuckin say it correctly

It's nice. The colors are epic. I gotta say man, I like it, I like it a lot.

>> No.2648037

>>2648019
It's nice. The colors are epic. I gotta say man, I like it, I like it a lot.

>> No.2648038

the concept is stupid, I've seen the same picture in the notebooks of thousands of other angsty teenagers. as for the coloring, its unfinished and it looks like basic pencil coloring

>> No.2648041

work in progress dumbass, otherwise fair enough.

>> No.2648050

There is a thread for drawings. Please post there next time instead of making a new thread. Its rude.

As for a critique: on the spectrum of every drawing i have ever seen, yours is not great. It is not completely horrible either. The abstraction and rearrangement of facial features, while a tired trope, shows creativity. It cannot cover your glaring lack of anatomical knowledge, though. I would recommend using a reference for your next one.

>> No.2648051

Ok I can work with that, honestly, I never was too concerned with accuracy, more like the suggestion of a thing, hopefully it comes accross in the finished product. Also completely plastered at the moment so I will hopefully check threads in the future.

>> No.2648059

my eye likes to move through the whole picture, id say thats good

>> No.2648061

So I'm in the marines and don't work computers well, so I almost eclusively do tattoos for my cavemen, but I figure it's time to get some of my cronenberg angst out. I will post more crap soon hopefully.

>> No.2648067

>>2648019
Blog?

>> No.2648070

Should but I've never really interneted since 2006 but I could realatively soon.

>> No.2648072

Reminds me a bit of the final boss in Castlevania: Dawn of Sorrow. Keep going, anon!

>> No.2648088

Fuck yeah man, that was my jam

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this is the most surreal thread

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Ok this is now my dump thread, already made the thing so...

>> No.2649071

>>2648038
this

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>> No.2649077

>>2649072
jesus christ,
use references for fucks sake.
You tattoo this kind of shit on people?

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No stuff like this

>> No.2649083

>>2648019
I think that you have potential and like to draw, however I think that you aren't really capable of understanding how to draw three dimensional objects on two dimensional space, so in order to make an interesting drawing you just drw what you knew how to draw from muscle memory and connected it with some lines you'd say were muscle tissue.
Wanna know how I know?
I did the same shit until I learned how to draw.

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Yeah pretty much, I do need to get better, why I ask for opinions, but I have a real patience problem. So I keep switching media, so most of those are like crayon and shit, so the recommendations help.

>> No.2649086 [DELETED] 

>>2649084
Lost to my own pic

>> No.2649089 [DELETED] 

>>2649084
Lost to my own shit, damn.

>> No.2649093

>>2649084
>moonman
Lost

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Last one, again I need a damn better camera

>> No.2649173

>>2649137
This is like one of those sketchbooks that makes me say, keep going. I want to see where you're at in 3 years. I like your flow of lines/anatomy blending. You have good understanding of color (when you use color. You get too carried away with black sometimes, and it overpowers the rest of your composition.) You definitely made it clear that you create with emotion, most of us have gone through that phase so no one has a right to tell you that you can't be there either. But when you get past emotion and evolve that into passion, your work will start getting to a better place too. Work through the dark and find the light and embrace it. That will probably sound like meta bullshit right now but its real and you'll know when you get there. For now, dont look up trying to find it. You're going the right direction, don't worry. Keep digging away and put it to paper.

One thing from a more technical side, i cant tell how big most of this work is but try to fill one page per composition if you normally work smaller (if that's difficult for you, good. Keep going that direction)

Unless you're looking for inspiration, keep off the chan. Put on some headphones and throw down some work instead. You've developed a unique style, now you just need to put in the hours. Work on size and doing more reference at least once a week. Yeah, you'll have to slow yourself down for that. Its frustrating at first but learn to mix the pace. Everyone is fast at what they do well. Dont expect that pace when you're doing something different.

Like i said, stay off the chan and let's see where you are in 3 years.

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A portion of what i'm working on

>> No.2649256

>>2649173
thanks man, really appreciate the input will do. see everyone in a few years.

>> No.2649258

>>2649178
also cool as fuck man, love it.

>> No.2649637

>>2649258
Thanks bro, i'm almost done with it

>> No.2649643

What the fuck? Since when did shit like this become acceptable? Two years ago you would have been torn to shreds by the first reply and then a mod would have deleted his travesty.

Seriously, what actually happened? The whole vibe of this board has changed. Does Teal still post?

>> No.2649647

>>2649643
don't think so, you got fireres noesbro and chunbum mostly, sometimes some other come and go, but shit sucks here most of the time!

>> No.2649650

>>2649643
But that would be cyberbullying.

>> No.2649657

>>2649647
I'm so disappointed. I seriously thought the OP pic was some new meme I had missed out on at first.

>Ctrl+F
>No Loomis

Make /ic/ gud again

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>>2649084
>>2649093

>> No.2650435

>>2648019
>>2649137
>>2649178
These are really cool man. You should check out Cam de Leon's art. i think you might really like it.