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Post what you drew within the hour

Critiques welcome

>> No.2635767

>>2635763
That beetle is amazing. The subtle lines are something I could never do.

>> No.2635769

looks good, but you'll have a much better time with those scott robertson exercises if you draw bigger and use a ball point or a hard pencil with a very fine point. It looks like you are using a sot lead that is a bit blunt which is the wrong tool for that sort of thing.

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>>2635763
Critiquepls

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>>2635770
I hate shitty iphone cam quality

>> No.2635777

>>2635770
>>2635771
Great fluidity, but goddamn that nigga's legs are short af.

>> No.2635779

>>2635770
>>2635771
Yeah, your proportions look weird.

>> No.2635781

>>2635770
>>2635771
wow i'm impressed with these pham, especially the torso structure. what are you studying these from?

but like the other anon said, i think the best thing for you to work on is proportion

>> No.2635783

>>2635777
>>2635779
Thanks a bunch.
>>2635781
These are the models:
http://www.artmodeltips.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/02/48db0c673458201c5a06c2a3323c00e2.jpg

http://www.artmodeltips.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/02/120.jpg

I'm learning from Vilppu's Drawing Manual, I'm still on the 7th/8th chapter so I'm still analyzing and not paying too much on proportion and measuring.

My drawings are pretty off when you look compare it with the models.

>> No.2635821
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2635821

you boys like thanks?

>> No.2635822

>>2635821

tanks* even.

>> No.2635825

>>2635821
It's so slick, I love the fuck out of it.

>> No.2635858
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2635858

head i just sketched

>> No.2635876

MODS

Please delete this Malaysia thread. It's getting worse.

>> No.2635916

>>2635821
holy shit these are so goddamn clean

>> No.2635917
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>> No.2635924

>>2635821
neat
did you use any kind of ruler when making these?

>> No.2635929

>>2635876
whats wrong with this person?

>> No.2635930

>>2635917
is this really in one hour?

>> No.2635935

>>2635917
amazing
you're a career artist?

>> No.2635982

>>2635930
ya definitely in one hour

>> No.2635983

>>2635858
Even if its stylizied, the ear is way too high

>> No.2635984

>>2635917
Don't make me cryyy this is sketching goals

>> No.2636007

>>2635821

b-blog!?

>> No.2636009

>>2635858
ayyyyy

>> No.2636020

>>2635825
>>2635916
>>2635924

thanks anons, no rulers for these tanks.

>>2636007

itss a mee, http://chromatinker.tumblr.com

>> No.2636026

>>2635821
Good shit

>> No.2636029

>>2636020
>draw amazing things
>15 notes

>draw shitty overwatch doodles
>5000 notes

this is real life

>> No.2636134

>>2636026
Thanks breh, take this (you)

>>2636029
>is this real life

It is what it is. The thing with fanart is that fans have a pre-established emotional connection to the subject matter and are generally more inclined to fav/follow fanartists because of that. For that reason I don't care about how well fanart proliferates on the web. They're separate categories with different rules.

>> No.2636137

>>2636134
Pass on those class notes senpai. I wanna follow along the classes you are attending to/do the homework but I'm a poorfag in a fifth world country

>> No.2636153

>>2636137

There's not anything besides demo images to show and theyre just drawings, no text, I dont even save the images for myself. The drawings on muh blog are pretty much what the demos look like. Patrick Ballesteros & Peter Han are the two CDA viscom instructors, if you want someone to look up.

>> No.2636267

>>2635858
That chin is smol

>> No.2636269

>>2635763
Did you actually draw this mal or did you snatch someone else's art again? The way those lines are drawn don't look like yours

>> No.2636383
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box more box

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>> No.2636423
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Hmm

>> No.2636481
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2636481

Been workin' those gesture muscles. Any suggestions?

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2636528

Not from the last hour but it's my most recent drawing and I need critique.

>> No.2636530

>>2636481

pretty shit mate but that's fine, keep grinding

>> No.2636582
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2636582

Trying to break through an art block with a self port

>> No.2636628
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i drew this yesterday but here

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>>2635876
>>2636269
i'm OP. not Mal though kek

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Not bad I think, for a cockpit drawn from memory

>> No.2636824
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Finished character casting page. Trying to learn to convey personalities.

>>2636528
I remember you from the last thread.
My recommendation to you is to focus more on the initial gesture that you make, if only because this looks rather stiff. The lines are really clean, but it's undefined and formless, as if she's made of jell-o. While that's not terrible, it doesn't look very pleasing. Face looks meh, would benifit from some angle practice. Did you use a ref?

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2636842

I need to draw more faces

>>2636683
Try to ignore those salty fucks. They've been derailing threads all day by shitposting about this dude whenever someone posts a trad drawing.

>> No.2636857

>>2636683
You draw and shitpost just like Malaysia

>> No.2637034
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2637034

my first digital drawing

>> No.2637055
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Porn thread is pretty dead, so posting here.

Turns out drawing sex is really, really hard. Forget the last hour, this took me all night and it still needs work.

>> No.2637067 [DELETED] 

Hey guys me and my cousin are trying out our luck with some comedy shorts. Here is our first. Feel free to give us advice and feedback. Enjoy. Like and share.

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=L-mB4gNVX04

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hate my camera

>> No.2637132
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>>2636824
Only two references, my actual character, and a pic from the Console-tan Tuesday threads on /v/ to figure out what to do with the right hand. It took a lot of effort to get the pose right. Tried to copy the facial features from my actual character reference and since the actual character is younger than what I draw, I have to age up the features, but I kept in the button nose. I'm not too sure what you mean when you say she looks like she's made of Jell-O, though. I also plan on using this as a reference for my next piece, with the person facing back being my character and the person facing forward being one of my Warframe (haven't decided which yet.)

As for your drawing, since you're obviously more experienced than me, I can't say much, but I really like your style. Everything looks fine to me, and you have very expressive faces and body language.

>> No.2637516

>>2636842
>tfw never thought anyone would bother to save my pics
Pretty suprised to see it

>> No.2637595
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>>2635821
I want to be able to do confident strokes like those.

>> No.2637599

>>2637595
do gestures first

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2637625

made a tiger a bit ago

>> No.2637649
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:^)

>> No.2637655

>>2637595
Get good with using a pen. Practice executing lines in one swift stroke.

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>> No.2637760

>>2637625
cute/10

>> No.2637873
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don't know how to look for references of people pulling swords it from this angle. Not sure if I should go stylized it looking for something realistic

>> No.2637897

>>2637649
why is she shitting in front of those masks

i don't understand

>> No.2637901

>>2637655
not him but do you know of any specific methods to improve on that area?

>> No.2637933
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>>2637595
>>2637901
>>2637655

>>2635821 (tank guy here)

Drawing mileage is the main thing. Based on those constructions you seem to be on the right track. You're getting the grid and eye-lines placed properly and it seems you unddrstand ellipses in perspective. Right direction, more practice. Just keep doing observational drawing and applying those lessons to imaginative drawing. And do warmup excerises for 10-20 min when you start drawing for the day. Scott Robertson and John Park warmups are my typical go-to.

Another thing to consider is using only pens, preferably ones with no pressure sensitivity, like felt tips and microns. Ive personally found it to be helpful in getting cleaner and more accurate. I save pencils, ballpoints, and markers for finished work and study mostly with felt tips or g-tec pen.

>> No.2637974

>>2637933
tankbro what do the vertical rule lines signify in the construction? Some times they look like corners of a perspective box, but others I can't tell

>> No.2637981
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2637981

ye

>> No.2638010
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>>2637981
>Hiding hands
>Out of sight feet

>> No.2638014

>>2635821
>It's on paper
I'll suck your dick

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>>2637974

Grid markings to keep verticals in correct perspective, or sometimes markers for proportion along a centerline. For tanks its usually the former. Sometimes I use them to set the width of the drawing to keep it on the page or to fit between other drawings.

>> No.2638032

>>2638029
cool thanks. killer work man

>> No.2638033

>>2638029
any artists in your genre you took inspiration from? or took points from or whatever

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>>2638010
you caught meee. but thank you for calling me out, i really have no excuse other than being a bum. hands and feet for you, fampai. how did i do?

>> No.2638060

>>2638045
Triangle feet and cartoony hands.
Normies wont notice but you wouldn't be so lucky with the trained eye. Keep studying.

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>>2638014

>s u c c (you)

>>2638032
>>2638033

Thanks. There's a lot of artists. Patrick Ballesteros and Peter Han for viscom specifically, Scott Robertson, Kim Jung Gi, Wes Burt, John Park, Darren Quach, Andrew Mar, Sparth, John Liberto, Ian Mcque.

>> No.2638073

>>2638064
Wew lad that's some nice stuff

>> No.2638093

>the OP starts his thread with stolen art
Why?

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>> No.2638127

>>2638104
A good start anon

>> No.2638219

>>2638093
His thread gets deleted if he posts his own work as OP, but he still feels the need to have his own incognito thread

>> No.2638428 [DELETED] 

>>2638093
>>2638219

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>>2638219
>>2638093

>> No.2638452

>>2638073
Destiny fan pls

>> No.2638453

>>2638431
Haha jealous fags get btfo!

>> No.2638462

>>2637981
got a blog mang?

Obviously looks inspired by Akira Toriyama, which is a cool thang

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I'm trying to improve senpai
Critique please

>> No.2638609

>>2638452
Who?

>> No.2638705
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Just wanted to relax and play a game. There's no escape.

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>>2637933
Thanks, it helped.

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>>2638452
>>2638609
Liberal retard who only latches on to drama, mostly to games he used to be relevant in but now hes just lonely and withering.

>> No.2639082
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Figure practice. Long way to go yet.

>> No.2639085

>>2635821
>no ruler
Truly a master.

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>>2639082

>> No.2640001

>>2637933
>John Park
nor sure if you're still around, but warm ups does John Park advise? I've been using a mesh of Scott's and Peter's warmups but I'm curious what else is used

>> No.2640008

>>2638712
Nice work, I can definitely see the improvement.

>> No.2640013

>>2639082
Your linework is really nice, and this is honestly better than a good portion of IC already (myself included).

My main advice would be to watch out for proportions, as some of the torsos and legs tend to be too short, and try to train yourself to visualize in 3d even more, as some of your elements (some forearms, elbows, hands) have too much focus on the outline rather than the underlying 3d shape.

These are your only major flaws, I'm really digging the level of detail-vs-abstraction you've got in those sketches.

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>>2638073
>>2638452
>>2639085

Wew lads

>>2638712

Yea nice job. Also, don't worry about how mucch construction lines you use, if you need to use more then use more.

>>2640001

John's are pretty close to Scott's and Peter's, if not the same.

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more imagination of a fatass and a lean guy.

>>2638712
>>2640014
dayum these are sexy, keep it up. I really need to get started on vehicles and this made me want to even more.

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>> No.2640118
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I spent more time wrestling with photoshop than painting

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2640213

my best artwork yet

>> No.2640220

>>2640213
pls be open for commissions

>> No.2640258

>>2640220
i'll be anything you want me to be baby ;)

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Holy shit gesture is fun. When I get them right I feel like a God.

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>>2640280

>> No.2640285

>>2637111
>>2638497

Daaaamn.

>> No.2640287
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2640287

drew myself. not done yet.

critiques would help

>> No.2640334

>>2638705
What game is this?

>> No.2640349

>>2640287
Some side shading on the jeans legs would be nice, those aren't flat planes so you're gonna see some side shadows like you do on the arms of the jacket.

Not much to say otherwise, looks solid.

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~40 minutes
wanted to just relax witha single brush and layer

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>>2640349
thanks senpai, i'll keep that in mind when i get to them. i did some more work on it just now. not sure how to even begin doing the folds

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>> No.2640446

>>2635821
this is fuckin sick brah

>> No.2640452

>>2640334
Last Window: Secret of Cape West

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First time drawing on a tablet.

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Here's some furry.

>> No.2640613

>>2640558
>First time drawing on a tablet.
have you tried turning pen pressure on?

>> No.2640620

>>2640560
Can't tell if serious

>> No.2640623

>>2640613
I-I don't know, sry

>> No.2640648

>>2637599
bad advice for that kind of construction drawing.

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2640693

Okay, not literally the last hour, it was 50 min at 3 this morning. Mirror selfie.

>>2635821
oh yes

>>2638519
find a real dog and draw it from direct observation 10 times. Spend at least 30 minutes on each drawing. Pick an old sleepy dog and pray it doesnt move.

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trying to draw digitally more

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Need a haircut

>> No.2640979

>>2640898
>this is the man that molested my daughter, officer

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>>2635763
I know I am complete shit
someone just put a bullet through my head

>> No.2640995

>>2640774
looks like a screenshot from a tv anime or something from the thumbnail. opening it was disappointing

>>2640898
use a softer lead

>>2640984
just keep learning your fundamentals pham, we're all shit until we've worked enough so that we're not

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look at how utter fucking shit i am at drawing and laugh

>> No.2641006

>>2640995
Here is a thing, I was offered internship at a new game dev studio published by EA canada (I know, selling soul to the devil) because I broed up with my lecturer who works there.
I fear that I might have no time to practice if I will be there, but at the same time knowing my lazy ass maybe it will be a chance to force myself to practice daily? Just with assignments?

It will mostly be environmental art too, something I am complete shit at as you can see...so that will improve, right?

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Kinda tumblr nosed this one

>> No.2641054

>>2641050
oh god fucking dammit phone

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>>2640095
done with this page

>> No.2641099

>>2636383
I like it, anon

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PAINting

>> No.2641154 [DELETED] 

PAINting

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faces are hard

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i think the file was too big :<

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finished this polished turd, not happy with it
ples Critique

>> No.2641212

>>2640898
are you me?

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Is there any improvement in these at all?
I feel like I've been getting no where

>> No.2641226

>>2641217
you've got more line confidence which is nice
also reminder that while people's bodies in general may form curves, BONES DON'T

>> No.2641230

>>2641078
damn nigga, you have some great anatomy if that was all from the mind

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>>2641230
>probably b8 but mfw

read the sticky

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lads

>> No.2641286

>>2641281
Hey, I remember you
Yer testicle was in the frame of that one pic a while back, that was funny

>> No.2641287

>>2641286
i don't remember posting a picture with mine testes in them anon. probably thinking of a different guy :^/

>> No.2641290

>>2641287
aw shucks
well you draw doggos just like him senpai

>> No.2641352
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fuck this gay earth i just want this assignment to be done already

>> No.2641383

>>2641352
>Assignment

Can you show me where you're getting assigned to do things anon?

>> No.2641384

>>2641352
Wow, really good.

>> No.2641392
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2641392

What do you guys think of my gorilla?

>> No.2641396

>>2641392
Your line art is fucking amazing. That's fucking what.

>> No.2641420
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2641420

Burdz

>> No.2641424
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>>2641396
Thanks bruh.

>> No.2641434

>>2641383
https://www.gnomon.edu/

>> No.2641513

>>2641392
>>2641424
*unzips*

>> No.2641593
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>>2635763
some stuff from imagination

>> No.2641594
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>>2641593

>> No.2641606

>>2639182
made me raff

>> No.2641623

>>2641230
Thx, they all are.

>>2641278
Why would it be bait?

>> No.2641631
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>>2635763
Warming up

>> No.2641644

>>2641155
Qt teeth

>> No.2641646

>>2641281
More pls

>> No.2641712

>>2641002
I think we should be seeing more of the front of the stout. See how the eye gives the impression that the face is slightly turned toward us?
but then the nose and mouth are directly to the side, or in profile. That flattens it, to me anyway.
Boxes and perspective should help.

Draw lighter with your underdrawing, that can be sloppy but those darkened lines are chicken scratch, be smooth and presentation will look much better.

>> No.2641714

>>2641712
snout*

>> No.2641912

>>2641631
Can you explain the reasoning behind using dotted paper?

I've seen others do it too.

>> No.2641965
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2641965

quick doodles

>> No.2642199
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>>2641155

>> No.2642300
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>> No.2642307

Drew some furry porn but posting it here would only spread some eye cancer

>> No.2642359

>>2642199
I think you're reaching pure white too fast anon, your values are overexposed which is making your metals look muddy and like they're not possessing their own color to tint the reflections with. I think having your midrange be more saturated as well as doing a huge shift (from cool to warm, or in the case of the blue mat, from blue to cyan) would help represent some of that metallic color.

>>2641965
I really like these

>> No.2642366

>>2642307
Nah, don't worry, I assure you we have seen worst and is kind of common asking for advice for furry shit in here.

>> No.2642422

>>2641434
Can you drop some assignments?
I'd love to be able to have an education like yours for free, but money will always be an issue for me.

>> No.2642424

>>2641078
it's good anatomy. it just seems visually boring to me though, i can't explain why though

>> No.2642427

>>2641912
It's pretty much easy proportion checking.

>> No.2642510
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>> No.2642525

>>2642424
the 99% white in the page and the faceless thing should explain it. I do agree the result is boring, but I tried to do a fat guy just to see if I could do it to be honest. boring practice.

>> No.2643376

been doing studies and trying to find myself in terms of a style, whaddaya guys think?

>>2642510
please give me that blog sir

>> No.2643380
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>>2643376
fuck i forgot the image

>> No.2643686

>>2642510
nice

>> No.2643749
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2643749

I've been fucking with this for about an hour.

I think there's something wrong with the faces but I don't know how to fix it

>> No.2643778

>>2640334
O shit I didn't know there was a sequel to hotel dusk I gotta get on that

>> No.2643792
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2643792

I don't know if I want to go the painting route or the line drawing route. The practice is fun though.

>> No.2644094

>>2639182
/b/ BTFO

>> No.2644168
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My wife said she wanted me to draw something with colored pencils, with the theme being 'true crime' thinking it would be like us both as detectives. I misunderstood and she said it terrified her, but had good detail.

>> No.2644170

>>2644168
sorry, posted from mobile which showed image was upright when I selected it, and now wont let me delete my stupidity.

>> No.2644190
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Today was a head day, but I got side tracked and didn't get nearly as much as I wanted done.

I thought drawing skulls might help with my proportioning and perspective, but I doubt it. Then I drew some anime girls and now I'm going to bed. Give it a proper go in the morning.

>> No.2644193

>>2644190
Fucking phones. Always flipping shit.

>> No.2646640

>>2644190
you have the skull structure about right , connect your lines abit more

>> No.2646648
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last thing i did

>> No.2647106

>>2641099
whoa somebody likes my art, thanks

>> No.2647145

>>2646640
Thanks for the feedback. I'll double down and give it another go.

>> No.2647190

>>2638064
I follow you in Tumblr, seeing how often you post and get shit done helps push me onwards in my own studies. Unfortunately don't have the time some people here do working full time so no chance of classes.

>> No.2647194
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>mfw i secretly haven't been drawing for 20 hours per day

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>>2637981
>>2638045
(same loser who did this)

>> No.2647671
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>> No.2647834

>>2643749
did you draw?

>> No.2647837

>>2647834
i thought you died

>> No.2647917

>>2647837
I recently got promoted at the dildo factory

>> No.2647957
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2647957

lazy, but I'm still postin

>> No.2647966

>>2647917
grats

>> No.2647967
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2647967

how is this

>> No.2647983
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just fuck my wheels up

>> No.2648011

>>2642199
I agree with
>>2642359
but those are super cool

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>> No.2648098

>>2647967
for a sylized face they'd look great, but if you were going for anatomically correct the faces are quite long

>> No.2648120
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i did this lewd dragon for a thread on /v/ how'd I do?

>> No.2648121

>>2648120
did you just draw that?

>> No.2648123

>>2648121
yeah, well. the thread's for stuff within the past hour so yaknow. i'd say i spent an hour exactly on it.

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2648128

Thoughts?

>> No.2648129

>>2648128
sorry, it flipped itself

>> No.2648148

>>2648129
>Fill Bleach into a glass
>Put phone on table
>pull down pants
>shove phone up your ass
>Find a computer
>use a scanner
>resize and flip your scanned drawing
>Post on /ic/
>proceed to drink glass of bleach.

Phone-users please, pleeeeaase consider killing yourselves.

>> No.2648150

>>2648148
anon, sometimes phones are the only things people have to upload their stuff online.

>> No.2648153

>>2648150
>Take picture
>transfer to computer
>resize + flip
>transfer back to phone

how hard can it be. why should anyone bother to look at a picture that the need to put effort into viewing. Its your job to go through the minimum effort to actually give a shit. If you dont give a shit about uploading properly how can you expect feedback (btw, your pic is shit, learn basic anatomy).

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>>2641631
>>2641912
There is no reason. I just found this little notebook that changes pattern every couple of pages.

>> No.2648168

>>2648148
I dont believe i broke any rules for posting what i had. thanks for the feedback.

>> No.2648257

>>2648153
it's not my pic though, i'm just sayin.

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>> No.2648296

>>2648278
neat what are you using

>> No.2648308

>>2648296
Borrowed ipad pro & apple pencil it's so fucking cool

>> No.2648311

>>2648278
>>2648308
>Filters
I do not believe you are from around here

>> No.2648317
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I am bored at work and i made this

>> No.2648319

>>2648317
I love it.

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>> No.2648660
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>>2648317

>> No.2648691
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>> No.2648747

>>2641392
Dicks out

>> No.2648913

>>2648660
neat

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>>2635763

>> No.2649047
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>> No.2649112
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2649112

I'm gonna make it guise!

>> No.2649248
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2649248

Took more than an hour but I just finished it. Still trying to develop a unique style.

>> No.2649501

>>2649248
i like it within what it is
>>2648278
blog
>>2648123
i dont like it

>> No.2649536

>>2647983
Anon, how could you cripple that poor woman just to avoid having to draw a hand?

>> No.2649572
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This was fun

>> No.2649575
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>> No.2649581

>>2649248

>>2649501
holy shit nosebro the shitty face looks like something you would do, no wonder you like it

i always thought you'd get over that shitty style of yours but you actually like it. you're doomed to fail

>> No.2649584

>>2649572
>>2649575
That's pretty cool.

>> No.2649603

>>2649575
>axe in some dude's ass
I like it

>> No.2649614

>>2649575
hey, thats pretty good!

>> No.2649628

>>2649584
>>2649603
>>2649614
Lol thanks guys. Had to find a fun way to spruce up my practice with figures. Apparently this works.

>> No.2650494

>>2649575
that guy doing to christian bale bateman dance from american psycho made me kek.

>> No.2652423
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>> No.2652516

>>2652514
That is fucking awesome. I want to strive on my value studies and get to your level.

>> No.2652521

>>2652516
>Study

Oh I did it from my head. It's not that good though, so much messy values and shit everywhere. I want the concept to read but Its probably going to take ages to where I want it to be.

>> No.2652522

>>2652514
Very nice, anon. You got a blog?

>> No.2652526

>>2652522
Yeah, though my other work looks flat as shit and generally sucks.

http://karlricardo.tumblr.com/

>> No.2652680

>>2648691

I like it.

>> No.2653565
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2653565

more balls

>> No.2653566
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2653566

and the thing i made the balls for. don't think i'm capable of finishing this, need to do more photo studies

>> No.2653572
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just comfy zone doodles

>> No.2653582

>>2637034
pretty slick bro

>> No.2653596

>>2653582
heh

>> No.2653605
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>>2635763
Meh

>> No.2653607
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2653607

Forgot to post here yesterday..

>> No.2653611
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warmup gone doodle

>> No.2653612

>>2653611

that looks like shit.

>> No.2653613

>>2653612
FEEL FREE TO PAINTOVER LOVE

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>> No.2653656
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>> No.2653657
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>> No.2653659

>>2653656
you got a blog anon?

>> No.2653660

>>2653659
flattered you ask but no, i don't really make anything worth showing off yet

>> No.2653666
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2653666

Haven't drawn from imagination in years, but getting back into it now. Also testing out the Surface Pro 4.
So far this seems to be on track to the image I had in my mind

>> No.2653724

>>2653666
what's going on with your lines mate

>> No.2653738
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2653738

Mostly practicing character design.

>> No.2654462
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>> No.2654469

>>2653607
I love your lines. They're great

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2654643

>>2643380
heres today's doodle page,i feel like im doing something right ish

>> No.2654738

>>2654643
Salamander is ok, everything else needs work

>> No.2655057
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>> No.2655067
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2655067

Cribbing from Miller by memory.

This is really the first thing I've drawn since I quit sixteen months ago.

My nib is a little rusty and so am I so it's ugly but it was fun to get back in the saddle.

Gonna paint it up tomorrow when the ink is fully dried.

>> No.2655194

>>2654469
Thank you!

>> No.2655448

>>2654738
i agree,been doing these in between drawabox lessons they help me all around

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2655579

>>2655067

Finished the colors with Dr Martins paints.

Could have done a cleaner job but I'm happy with it.

>> No.2655596
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>> No.2655615

>>2648128
I like it but you won't be able to draw the head fully because it's too close to the border

>> No.2655620

>>2641195
It's not terrible

Why don't you try to paint each one of the effects with a brush instead of using filters?

>> No.2655623

>>2641078
I like it. Check your anatomy and try to practice on volumes, so it doesn't look flat

>> No.2655632

>>2652423

Gotta watch out for tangents.

The bottom of her chin is touching the top of her collar and it makes them look weirdly meshed together, which makes them look flat and confusing. Same with her arm and her leg.

There should either be a gap between these things or a clear overlap.

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>> No.2655940
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2655940

fuck spelling fuck drawing fuck me
>>2655935
Those thumbs seem off, like they're missing a joint

>> No.2655945

>>2655935
Wut happens next

>> No.2655969

>>2640979
kek. reminds me of the sex offender shuffle.

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>> No.2656107
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2656107

Quick environment
inb4 photo textures

>> No.2656162

>>2656107
*cough*phototextures*cough*

>> No.2656176

>>2641006
I know that feel, senpai. Kinda. Though I'm pretty sure I blew it. I was offered a chance to do a storyboard test for TTGO! for Cartoon Network this summer and whadda ya know, my storyboarding skills really just aren't up to par. I made several mistakes, such as not referencing the show's layout style enough, not doing thumbnails before doing the full-size animatic in flash, blah blah, just bad stuff. I say, if you still have time, study the shit out of your environments. Do whatever you can, and really earn that position if you can--even if you get hired. -Earn- it. Try new techniques, and fall back on the old ones that have never failed you. Watch people paint environments. Watch people render. Watch people lay-out. Study their works, study photos. Study the best in your field, learn the names. Hope you make it anon.

>> No.2656190

>>2656103
holy shite, blog? Love how you did that hair, I always struggle with really light/blonde hair

>> No.2656453

>>2656162
>>>/r/eddit

>> No.2656475

>>2637132
do u draw lewds?

>> No.2656509
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Here is some sketches

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>>2656509

>> No.2657738
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Did the exercises from keys of drawing book; just finished chapter 1,pretty excited

>> No.2657749
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>>2635763

>> No.2658552

>>2655067
>>2655579
I like it, the line art is good but isn't very miller-y

>> No.2658572

>>2658552

Thanks a lot!

>> No.2658573
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2658573

My Nightmares are full of edgelords

>> No.2658578
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Was playing with poses, somehow turned into this

>> No.2658579

>>2658578

That's really cool.

>> No.2658580

>>2658579
Thanks Anon :)

>> No.2658581
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2658581

Still learning the ropes when it comes to copics. (still learning the ropes in general tbqh)

>> No.2658611

>>2655596
nice

>>2656107
very cool, i feel like the light beams should be parallel though

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>> No.2659891

>>2655057
Goddamn man that face.

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:)

>> No.2660582
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2660582

Bridge designs for my vidya

>> No.2660825

please check out Siddik Rahman for drawing tips :>

>> No.2660827

please check out Siddik Rahman for drawing tips bros