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Old Thread: >>2574714

Immortalize your girl at:
http://tower-girls.booru.org/
(please!)

Rolling tool:
https://www.random.org/
(good for re-rolls)

Book Mobile: https://mega.nz/#F!es1BSKQR!spODyd0iaQmMelGA2GscFw

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7kH5T7Lv1Ds

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>> No.2609847

roll

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Well fuck, I decided to try and do him with a slightly Japanese feel mask for fun, now I want to transform him into a fucking forge samurai with a giant ass katana... do I keep it as a knight or do I go full weaboo ?

>> No.2609851

>>2609473
Nice style!

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>>2609850
>now I want

Right there, that's how you know what you should do.

As much as I like the little characters and enjoy them immensely when they're drawn well as such, this thread and any like it have to be about 'you'. It's your time and your work, by all means make the character look however you'd like them to look, do whatever you want them to do etc.

That said, if you're going to be changing a whole lot you might just want to make a new picture altogether. I don't know man. You've gone this far with the current aesthetic-it's really up to you.

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>>2609473
I like it. It kind of looks like you lasso tooled it and pasted it for some reason though and the sharp contrast between those areas and the background can be a bit off-putting. Also, something really seems a bit off about the torso to me for some reason.

>> No.2609915

>>2609461
blog?

>> No.2609997

>>2609414
am roll

>> No.2610002

rheull

>> No.2610027

ROLLIN'

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>>2610002

>> No.2610064

Rollin'

>> No.2610398

>>2609874
well that was convincing, thx, I went with it. I'll post the progress in the draw thread.

>> No.2610442

>>2609417
Not bad; I feel like the thickness of the tree kind of looks a little unnatural and robs the monster of some of his relative size, along with those smatterings of tall grass.

>>2609419
Cute as h*ck, well done.

>>2609420
Cool design; head is about a third bigger than it ought to be in my imho

>>2609421
Stage right leg looks a bit shorter than the other, but the thigh portion looks a bit longer. Sword and shield are flat but I'm sure you can tell.

>>2609422
Looks like she has lazy eye, definitely some stuff to work on, here.

>>2609426
Well done.

>>2609430
>brushi brushi brushi

There's potential in there somewhere perhaps, but it's quite messy.

>>2609437
Gorgeous rendering for the most part. She seems to be missing a few fingers though

>>2609439
head is pretty tall and narrow; wouldn't be much of a problem but her body seems disproportionately thick.

>>2609441
Reminds me of a mexican chick for some reason. Would fug.

>>2609446
Not bad; the eye on the face looks a tad low to me, though. It's probably because of how high the ear is.

>>2609449
Very good; nice detail and perspective

>>2609453
Cute. Keep in mind the iris is like a rounded-but mostly flat-disc. I feel like it would like slightly more compressed towards the front of the face at that angle.

>>2609461
Awesome linework

>>2609465
I like it, but also her arms are nearly as thick as her torso.

>>2609468
Looks real nice.

I feel like her leg in the background should extend out a bit farther than the leg in the foreground though. It looks like the planes of the box form she's sitting on might be receding into a vanishing point towards the right side of the image and, if that is the stage-right plane of box that we're seeing, consider how the form of the pelvis and the legs along with it would follow suit.

>inb4 reference that btfos me

>> No.2610575

>>2610442
hope you palm doesn't smell too bad

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>>2609997
Well i messed up a lot but I know what I want to study now.

>> No.2610587

>>2610579
qt, I'm really feeling those forms, fambino.

...Her arm/wrist/hand in the background is FUCKING HUGE though.

>> No.2610605

>>2610587
Thanks m8, and yeaaaah. Will pay better attention to the perspective next time.

>> No.2610612

>>2610442
didnt mention >>2609473

>> No.2610617

>>2610612
I ran out of characters and then I forgot about it. It's honestly very appealing and pretty well done, but it looks like it was cropped and pasted onto a different background or something and those sharp edges of contrast are kind of jarring. Also the torso could use some suggestion with regards to anatomy; her torso kind of looks like a featureless hotdog. Just a subtle impression of a small portion of the ribcage or really anything like that would do. I think the silhouette is mostly correct but without even any implied anatomy there's sort of a flattening effect. I do dig the piece as-is though, don't get me wrong.

>> No.2610644

roll

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>> No.2610776

>>2610726
>Angle

>> No.2610797

>>2610776
:^)

>> No.2610799

roll

>> No.2610826

roll

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>>2610726

>> No.2610945

>>2610579
pretty good, but the outstretched hand is too big, and the boob on her left is defying gravity

>> No.2610953

>>2610945
Oh yeah it is, thankyou for the crit!

>> No.2610954

rolll

>> No.2610975

Roll

>> No.2610987

>>2609414
roll

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>>2610954

>> No.2611054

>>2609414
roll

>> No.2611077

roll

>> No.2611527

rollin

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>>2610644
I just realized that I was suppose to do dubs...

>> No.2611886

Aaaaaaaaah

>> No.2612263

>>2610726
I feel like the featureless noodle arms and legs kind of clash with the, perhaps excessively, articulated anatomy of the torso. Consider her general shape; she's quite boxy, with her shoulders and hips being pretty much equal in width which is a mannish trait. Generally with a female character, particularly one drawn in a cartoon style, it's a good practice to emphasize feminine attributes like narrow shoulders, even narrower obliques and slightly wider hips etc.

>>2610850
One thing with this piece is that you could consider using the wrappings as a way to give the character "form" and implied perspective through the use of subtle curves.

>>2611021
Not too shabby. Your drawing of this static pose is fairly competent, it could be time to experiment with more "esoteric" subjects like expressions and more difficult viewing angles.

>>2611869
Very cute. The stage right eye looks a bit smaller than its counterpart on the left, I think if you increased its size by like a millimeter, extending it on the bottom it would more consistently follow the form of the skull. Or not, I don't know, you're better than me, famb!

>> No.2612453

>>2612263
Thanks for the feedback :)

Though I'm not sure how to fix that eye but I see what you mean.

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>> No.2612634

rollerino

>> No.2612801

roll

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>>2611869
>>2612453

The more I mess with it the more it's apparent I should probably just kill myself. Jus b urself bb

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>>2612468
Great rendering as usual, you've definitely got that going for you. I especially like the relationships between the hard and soft edges in the folds in her cowl and elsewhere on her clothing.

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Thoughts? I think I went a bit overboard with the greyscales

>> No.2613137

>>2612908
thanks!

>> No.2613159

rollinio

>>2612985
it looks bad anon.the actual drawing is ok!but the contrast is what's killing it.Remember to simplify
it's important to have a good distinction between >blacks/mids/whites

>> No.2613244

>>2612985
The line weight is too thick and uniform my man; I think it's holding back your ability to add details. There's also the matter of chicken scratch-definitely work on your manual dexterity (Youtube: Dynamic Sketching). Proportions could use a little adjusting, too. Her torso and shoulders are bit too broad relative to the size of her head and stage right leg looks a bit long (if you were to stand it on its foot next to the reclining model it would stand almost over her head!)

Keep workin' fambino

>> No.2613254

>>2613244
Oh my goodness gracious, actual constructive criticism on /ic/. You're giving me faith again, man, thank you so much!

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>>2613254
No problemo

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>>2613257
Consider the parts of the arm: Deltoid (shoulder), Humerus (the solid bone connected to the deltoid) and then the radius and ulna (the two bones that form the forearm, elbow and wrist.

The humerus, radius and ulna meet at a point just below the base of the (visible) ribcage; the tenth rib. Right around the belly button. With that in mind, it'd probably be best to bring those pieces of her arm that aren't covered in stone just a bit lower.

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I should try to refine it further and try some anime styled cell shading, although I afraid it might not work so well without clean line work..

>> No.2613384

>>2613159
>>2613244
Thanks family, will work on it.

Roll

>> No.2613401

rowling

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Here's my shit princess. I don't know what to work on right now to improve. Anatomy? Perspective? Form? Value?

>> No.2613556

roll

>> No.2613638

roll

>> No.2613665

>>2613512

Clean it, you cover everything else decently enough.

>> No.2614091

rolling

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>>2613289
Time to call it a day I guess

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Here's an assassin and shade princess making out.

>> No.2614341

Rollin'

>> No.2614346

>>2614129
Unf

>> No.2614542

rollino

>> No.2615162

rollo

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i fucking suck
brb going to kill myself

>> No.2615753

>>2614111
Nice numbers fambawumba.

tbqph the drawing is fairly solid but the sharpness of the details of the face, contrasted with the ubiquitous use of the textured brush elsewhere throughout is a bit jarring

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cz387Vy0Ps0

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Slime princess.
What does a skeleton even look like

>> No.2615793

>>2615779
Pretty close to how you've drawn it, bruh. She's missing a few ribs but I'm sure no one gives a crap. Very well done, I love the subtle details and folds of the slime volumes.

>> No.2615825

>>2615779
Boobs on skeletons are great. Cool that you drew her.

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>>2615274
back to loomis i guess

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>>2615274
>>2616556
Indeed. Keep practicing. Mind your proportions, you've made her like 12 heads tall with ridiculously long arms and short legs.

Remember the 8 heads rule.

Head 1: Head
Head 2: Bottom of Chin to Sternum
Head 3: Sternum to Belly Button
Head 4: Belly Button to Gooch
Head 5: Gooch to Mid-thigh
Head 6: Mid-Thigh to base of knees
Head 7: Bottom of knees to Bottom of Gastrocnemius
Head 8: Bottom of Gastrocnemius to Bottom of feet

>> No.2616657

>>2615753
Thanks, I started painting digitally not long ago so those few texture brushes I downloaded are the only brush I'm comfortable with right now. I will take these tips in mind and try to use less obnoxious brush more next time.

>> No.2616661

>>2616556
Seems like the torso's too long, too. You probably could try the bean method next time you try to draw figure. It's simplified but that might save you some headache early on.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0660Fuih7qo

>> No.2616833

>>2609414
they see me rolling.

>> No.2616862

>>2616833
They hat in'

They wanna catch me PRINCESS GET-ting

>> No.2616994

rolling for first drawing in forever (read:4/6 moth princesses)

>> No.2616999

roll again

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>>2616999

>> No.2617082 [DELETED] 

>>2617065
I love the use of colors in this one, the gray-green for shading looks great.

Drawing-wise the shield looks more like it's just floating in front of the arm and obstructing it from view than actually being clasped by it. It could just be me, but as a neutral observer I'm having a hard time visualizing the construct of the arm from behind the shield. Also, the keep in mind the elbow will usually land around where the bellybutton does, as it's drawn the elbow appears to bottom out above the gooch, just above where the wrists would otherwise be, normally.

Keep it up famalamadingdong

>> No.2617088

>>2617065
I love the use of colors in this one, the gray-green for shading looks great.

Drawing-wise the shield looks more like it's just floating in front of the arm and obstructing it from view than actually being clasped by it. It could just be me, but as a neutral observer I'm having a hard time visualizing the construct of the arm from behind the shield. Also, keep in mind the elbow will usually rest right around where the bellybutton does. As it's drawn the elbow appears to bottom out above the gooch, just above where the wrists might otherwise be, normally, making it so that her arms would extend down to her knees if they were left in a relaxed position.

Keep it up famalamadingdong

>> No.2617101

>>2617088
thanks for the crit!
sure! drew this in 40 min,so I had to sacrifice some things and didn't bother to fix them.I especially don't like the tilt of the shield.btw,she is supposed to be holding the shield with the back of her hand haha.if that makes any sense

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>>2616994
Guess that's what I get for frequent surrendering and half-assed commitment in the past.

Took around three hours, is there anything in particular to keep in mind when it comes to efficiency, or is it more a matter of just getting fluent? With that I'd be grateful for overall guidance or critique to start off.

>> No.2617335

Ok

>> No.2617451

>>2617323
One thing you really want to do when drawing even cartoon-style characters is to not only consider those 3D forms (the breasts do not appear to interact with the arm crossing under them), but also anatomy and proportional relationships (Both arms are just a bit long. With the stage-left arm traversing well past the base of the pelvis and how the stage right arm would be in a similar position were it to be brought to a relaxed position as well). When doing a pose you don't completely understand, try looking at yourself in the mirror and noting any phenomena regarding the placement of your anatomical features. Just remember the old master's axiom: Wrists = Gooch.

Also don't forget other important peripheral artistic principals as well. There are many line tangents in this piece. The clavicle and thumb, the stage-right breast and that outside contour, the cleavage and the forearm etc. Watch out for that kind of thing, make sure any lines you have on close proximity cleanly and clearly overlap each other.

>> No.2617468

>>2617451
sorry about the word-salad; kind of in a hurry rn, hopefully you know what I'm trying to get at fambo

>> No.2617499

roll

>> No.2617503

>>2617499
reroll

>> No.2617517

>>2617451
>>2617468
No worries, and indeed I can only hope to have understood properly, hah. Nontheless, thank You kindly, I'll gladly make use of Your word.

>> No.2617561

Why did you have to add so much stuff since the last time I check up on these threads, you make my job so much harder

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>>2617561
S-sorry...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nBrRF_j7M_k

>> No.2617636

>>2609414
roll

>> No.2617656

rollin'

>> No.2617698

>all these princesses
>no idol princess

>> No.2617701

>>2615779
>What does a skeleton even look like
spooky

>> No.2617823 [DELETED] 

Roll

>> No.2617824 [DELETED] 

>>2617823
Aight reroll

>> No.2617825

>>2617824
Reroll again jfc

>> No.2617955

>>2609414
Rolling.

>> No.2617962

roll my weed NIGGEREREEREERAERAASD ASD AWD

>> No.2617994

>>2609468
Arm/hand position makes no sense, try to copy it in front of a mirror, you'll see its awkward. It also feels like the arm is stuck into her leg because of the dress lines and shadows near de end of the arm.
It seems like her left breast had been cut.

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First sketch, Going to do a clean one now and fix boobs.

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Kill me

>> No.2618082

>>2618074
*kills u*

heh, nothin' personnel, kid.

>> No.2618198

>>2618082
kek, unoriginalloramalallala though

>> No.2618265

>>2609414
won't draw anything probably, but still...

>> No.2618513

>>2609414
rawl

>> No.2619263

raw

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Ugh, every time I try to do something like this for fun It just reminds me how bad I am.

>> No.2619640

roll

>> No.2619822 [DELETED] 

>>2619616
In my mind I consider that the primary functions of threads that instigate us to produce a completed image of some sort. To remind ourselves why we continue to study. Not a half-bad birb btw tbhfam

>> No.2619830

>>2619616

I consider that the primary function of threads that compel us to produce a completed image of some sort. To remind ourselves why we continue to study. Not a half-bad birb btw tbhfam

>> No.2619899

roool

>> No.2620001

roll

>> No.2620016

this is a roll

>> No.2621395

roll

>> No.2621425

>>2609414
Roll

>> No.2621427

>>2609414
Will draw a prince if I can ever get my shitty tablet to work. rawlan

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too lazy to finish

>> No.2622627

>>2621633
Not gonna make it

>with that attitude

Be strong and defiant, princess-man. Without you, there is no future. At your level it appears that you shouldn't be finishing much of anything anyway. Keep working.

>> No.2622649

>>2609414
Rolling

>> No.2622660

legoo

>> No.2622666

roll, disregard

>> No.2622704

ayy

>> No.2622707

blip

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>>2622666
i chose to do the fairy, no color because i give 0 shits

>> No.2622816

>>2622751
that face ruined the whole thing

>> No.2622818

roll

>> No.2622840

Rollerino

>> No.2622846

>>2622751
what the actual fuck is up with that nose?

>> No.2622887

Plz no doubles

>> No.2623352

rolling like a dirty shitposter

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Pretty happy with this. Roll for another

>> No.2623652

no dubs please

>> No.2623769

It's kawaii roll time Towergirls thread

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>>2623769

Who else /gotlazy/ here

>> No.2623840

rollllio

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>>2623650
This is fun. Rolling

>> No.2623951

roll

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R8 my bee pleez

>> No.2624291

roll

>> No.2624455

rollah

>> No.2624470

rolla dollah!

>> No.2625011

rollyoniturhfg

>> No.2625015

>>2624265
readthestickty/10

>> No.2625247

>>2625015
Oh fuck off with that, the guy was clearly going for something stylized.

>> No.2625252

rolll

>> No.2625258

fgfjf

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>>2625247
>stylized

>> No.2625271

>>2625260
What you think he/she actually believes feet are fucking triangles? wew lad looks like you need the sticky more than this dude

>> No.2625281

>>2622751
What is this tumblr dirt? Stop drawing faggy deers and get onto some life drawing.

>> No.2625527
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2625527

>>2625247
No.
There is a difference between style, and not competent enough to make the drawing consistent.

Pic is a style, >>2624265 is just incompetent (clearly no confidence in the linework, no signs of guides or erasing, stiff, erratic anatomy, etc.)

>> No.2625535

roll

>> No.2625561

roll

>> No.2625575

role

>> No.2625580
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2625580

>>2622751
As others have said, that nose is a grotesquerie. With that out of the way, the lines are pretty clean and the eyes have an appealing shape. There are other problems like the formless rake hands, the eyebrows not quite lining up in size or position and the height and width of the ears being inconsistent as well. Keep practicing.

>>2623650
feelin' those forms fäm

>>2623837
That huge, staggered maw of a mouth transitioning into an almost nonexistent, flat chin as well as that intense furburger is pretty unappealing in my humble imho. The subtle shading is pretty good though as is the drawing in-general. Keep workin'

>>2623912
Looking good again, though perhaps it'd be better to show more of the chin and the forehead, as-is it kind of makes it look like she has a neanderthal-style sloping skull. Also, tame that nostril. From the side, even a very big nose will generally have very understated nostrils due to the "ala" covering them from the side. Even ethnic groups famous for their big ass noses like negroes, dinarics and jews won't typically have a big circle in the side of their nose like that.

>>2624265
Cute bee. There are inconsistencies in proportion (wings, breasts, eyes) and other problems though (headband). Keep practicing.

>> No.2625691
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2625691

>>2624455
There is many good designs in the dub's dungeon.

>> No.2625702

>>2625691
Impressive and economical rendering. It could stand to be pushed further of course but it's been brought to the point where it's pretty apparent you have a pretty strong idea of what to do and how to do it. The only potential under-drawing flaw I can see is that the stage-left breast is a bit smaller and lower than its counterpart on the right.

>> No.2625708

Roll

>> No.2625711

Roll la roll.

>> No.2625716

butts

>> No.2625721

>>2625702
It was sort of experimental. Result is not than I wanted but pretty fine, I guess. Yeah that boob is kinda wrong, I'll fix it. Thanks for feedback.

>> No.2625746
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2625746

>> No.2625758

roo

>> No.2625862

>>2625527
Hi, bee guy here. How exactly do i go about being more consistent?

>> No.2625872
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2625872

alright boys@!!
l e t' s g o

>> No.2625879
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2625879

>>2625711
Done. God bless dubs.

>> No.2625909

>>2609414
Rollerinos

>> No.2625987

>>2625580
>that intense furburger is pretty unappealing

B-But Gats' design!

Thanks for the critique anon, I definitely see what you mean. I had some difficulty with the mouth area due to me not being used to this angle, yet anyways

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2625996

>>2625535

>> No.2626155
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2626155

not sure what to do but ye

>> No.2626164

fruit roll ups

>> No.2626169

rollllllllliin'

>> No.2626173
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2626173

>>2625872
picture on the right is irrelevant
[also roll again]

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2626218

>>2609414

>> No.2626253

>>2626218
Jesus christ what the fuck is wrong with her head
Kys trollchan

>> No.2626262

>>2626253
flap your work sempai

>> No.2626343
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2626343

>>2626218
This is.... like... really... really bad.

>> No.2626362

>>2626253
>>2626343
leave Trollchan alone...

LEAVE HIM ALONE!

>> No.2626575

>>2626362
"trollchan" cringeeeee

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2626589

>>2625708
Eh

>> No.2626930
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2626930

>> No.2626948

>>2626930
>(((merchant))) princess

>> No.2627021
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2627021

>>2622751
oh wow

>> No.2627060

>>2626930
cute, loving those lines

>> No.2627094

pffffth

>> No.2627250

rool

>> No.2627252

roll

>> No.2627267

rool

>> No.2627300

>>2609414
just gonna roll here

>> No.2627375

i still care roll

>> No.2627707

>>2609414
rollolin

>> No.2627766
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2627766

>>2609414
How did I do? I'm not so good at coloring/shading, so I'd appreciate some feedback.

>> No.2627785
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2627785

>>2627766
I tried fixing your proportions, also your hands are pretty fucked. but solid effort with the gesture, just make sure you can always take a step back and evaluate the structure of your piece even while you are burying yourself in rendering

>> No.2627789
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2627789

i think the enormous bear arms in the sprite for sphinx princess are hilarious

>> No.2628402
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2628402

mouse princess

>> No.2628403
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2628403

>>2628402
What is going on those legs

>> No.2628773

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2KPplYp7K7M

>> No.2628774

>>2626930
blog?

>> No.2628975

Rollio Polio

>> No.2629095

roll

>> No.2629827
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2629827

>> No.2629863

>>2628403
hoyl SHIT i hate this image so much actually

>> No.2629920

>>2629863
I feel your pain, also roll

>> No.2629943

>>2628403
What the fuck this pic makes no sense

>> No.2629960
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2629960

>>2626218

>> No.2630041

>>2629960
You draw like those american-made "how to draw anime" books

>and I love it

Good rendering, cute face. It's not perfect, but I'm surprised to see this level of effort out of you TC. I like it!

You have this habit of really delineating the nips from the tits with thick lines and it makes them look like they're stuck on with an adhesive, the way the contour of the stage-left breast arcs around that big ass saucer nip exacerbates this phenomenon. Also, that big toe on the contact-making foot is monstrous. Keep working fampaizano.

>> No.2630046

roll~

>> No.2630049
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2630049

>>2630041
Forgot muh tits

>> No.2630108
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2630108

>> No.2630183

>>2628403
This is causing me actual distress.

>> No.2630192
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2630192

>> No.2630797

>>2609414
rol

>> No.2630930
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2630930

pls help me with anything you can...
anatomy, colours or anything...
kill me

>> No.2631044

>>2609414
rollan

>> No.2631065
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2631065

>>2630930

>> No.2631068
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2631068

>>2623912
Had no idea how to design the "back hand hair" thing. Rolling again

>> No.2631107

>>2631065
>backed

>> No.2631377

>>2609414
rol again

>> No.2631449
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2631449

Can I get some help with the hands specifically?

>> No.2631559

rolling!

>> No.2631560

>>2609414
role, but ill try my best to finish it. doubt it though...

>> No.2631562

roll

>> No.2631789
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2631789

>>2631065
t-thanks anon...
im done fuck this

>> No.2631857

>>2631449
check the head size family and try using a reference

>> No.2631866

>>2631065
>backed some cookies
>backed some
>backed

>> No.2631913

h-roll

>> No.2632075
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2632075

rolled bird princess

>> No.2632077
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2632077

>>2631789
You're doing okay anon. NEVER GIVE UP!

>>2632075
I love this. Your cat princess from a couple of threads back was good too. Awesome colors and rendering with no real stand out drawing flaws in dire need of correction.

>> No.2632081 [DELETED] 

Rollan'. Hope I get a good one.

>> No.2632083 [DELETED] 

Roll, roll, roll your boat, gently to a meme. If you see a pack of trips, don't forget to leave.

>> No.2632084

Roll.

>> No.2632112

>>2632075
I luv u, wormy

>> No.2632240

Roll

>> No.2632252

>>2632075
those eyes tho

>> No.2632424

one mor

>> No.2632675
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2632675

Nomad princess up in this bitch.
Also roll

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2632798

help I have been infected with chinese rendering disease
what have you done to me /ic
also elf princess

>> No.2632819

>>2632675
Araki pls stay.

>>2632798
That's a good disease to have. the rendering is almost hauntingly beautiful, but the underlying drawing could use some work. That very round jawline almost looks like a double chin, the bridge of her nose appears to divert slightly from the center line of her face, and her breasts are off center as well (or rather her sternum appears to be). Keep it up.

>> No.2632823

>>2632819
Hmmm, maybe it's not the shape of the chin itself, but something is throwing me off at any rate; I could certainly be wrong either way.

>> No.2632854

>>2632819
>Araki
Who? I don't speak chinese :U

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2632868

>>2632854
You don't know Hirohiko Araki? He's a famous Taiwanese artist from Vietnam who uses hatching a lot

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hirohiko_Araki

>> No.2632896

>>2632868
Ah, the JoJo guy. I don't know all the cool trendy artists by name.
I remember liking his women. However, so far you're the first person who compared my art to his.

>> No.2633264

g

>> No.2633286

rolling!

>> No.2633304
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2633304

>> No.2633350
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2633350

>81
Moth Princess

>> No.2633362

>>2609414
roll

>> No.2633378

>>2633304
Well done; a few forgivable flaws here and there like slightly asymmetrical ears, eyes, legs and shoulder things. Keep practicing famagotchi

>>2633350
That looks great. Fantastic job, really. Some of the best 8-bit style art I've seen in some time; I'm not sure if you're the same guy that'd posted similar stuff in these threads in the past, if that is the case I'd almost say you've outdone yourself, but truth be told that other stuff was damn good too. Whether you're that person or not, keep it up.

>> No.2633388

ROLLERINO

>> No.2633664

>>2633378
Thanks. The other pixel princesses were some other guy.

p.s. roll

>> No.2633815
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2633815

Faerie Princess is done.
Roll.

>> No.2633868

>>2633815
I feel like I've seen your stuff on imgur or something. is this your stuff? http://imgur.com/account/favorites/kB5o4

>> No.2633880

>>2633868
Yup. Is me.

>> No.2634736
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2634736

>> No.2635654

>>2634736
Nice gesture. Her lower body looks very slightly disproportionate to her upper portion to me for whatever reason, but that could be because I'm on a small tablet and can't really see everything at once.

>> No.2635704

entropy roll

>> No.2635831

>>2634736
What happened to her left Arm ?

>> No.2635884
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2635884

Wasn't really sure how to do yeti princess

>> No.2636025

>>2630108
sorry sir but im gonna need a blog

>> No.2636198
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2636198

>>2633350
Moth Princess update + Pirate Princess

>> No.2636340
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2636340

>>2633815
You don't need to save Skeleton Princess. You need to save yourself, your women and your young from Skeleton Princess.
Also roll.

>> No.2636352

>>2636198
Holy fuckballs I love you

>>2636340
I can "dig it", gnomesaiyan?

>> No.2636374

>>2636352
>dig it
>gnomesaiyan
You nigaz have some strange accents in here. Dig what? Gnome who? :c

>> No.2636522

ROLL

>> No.2638016

rollin

>> No.2638054

>>2609414
rrrolling

>> No.2638187
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2638187

>>2609414
Rolled a 34
(been trying to upload this days ago.)

>> No.2638190

>>2638187
This is cute. Got a blog?

>> No.2638199

>>2638190
http://domned4.tumblr.com/

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2638474

>>2636340
Kobald princess is the worst princess. I hate this furry bullshit.
Also roll.

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2638494

>>2631068
Rolling again.

>> No.2638525

>>2638187
Exquisite. Her ear looks a tad far back.

>>2638474
Lizard girls need love too tbqph. Looking pretty fly once again at any rate

>>2638494
Not bad fambrosia; keep it up. Her stage-left foot looks a bit small though.

>> No.2638529

rollzinga

>> No.2638619
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2638619

>>2638529

>> No.2638623

Break from studies
roll

>> No.2638624

Roll

>> No.2638625 [DELETED] 

rollerino

>> No.2638629

Rollio

>>2638474
Love yer lines

>> No.2638632

>>2609414
yo

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2638653

>>2638619
didn't like the head

>> No.2638673

>>2610726
The texture on her body makes her look old or like she has weird bumps on her body, and the hair could use some more detail, but I like the colours and interesting shape of her hair, especially the bangs.

>> No.2638681

>>2613512
Her hands should be bigger, it feels like she has no weight in the leg area.

Fix the hands, and, unless the pose was on purpose, I'd add weight by making her butt rest on her heels, and she would be standing on her toes, not the tip of the toe.

I like the colours on it though, and the hair is pretty cute.

>> No.2638688

roll

>> No.2638691

>>2614111
The line on the left side of the boy's mouth makes him seem like he's old, the girls right hand is messed up, you're hiding her other one, and the boy's left hand is too small.

There is a natural shadow at the corner of the mouth, so just make it less pronounced, and draw her hand flatter or get rid of the upwards bend the fingers have.

Otherwise, I like the palette and their designs.

>> No.2638803

RRRRollin'!

>> No.2638856

>>2609414
fruit roll up

>> No.2638858

>>2638856
already did this one recently so

>>2609414
double roll

>> No.2639065

Rooooooooooooolan

>> No.2639075

rooolll.....

>> No.2639177

role

>> No.2640126

Roll

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2641417

48 critique me work

>> No.2641819

rolling for any weeb princess