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been drawing one everyday. what ya think?

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>> No.2592498

There's definitely a demographic for this.
I don't wanna meet those kind of people, but they exist.

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>> No.2592502

>>2592484
Thanks for crashing my browser

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>>2592498
lol whats that mean?

>> No.2592504

I respect the fact that you crank these out full force.
I like the art but your consistency is more appealing than anything.

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>>2592502
youre welcome :)

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>>2592504
my consistency?

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welp thats all so far

>> No.2592520

>>2592508
You said that you do one each day.
That's consistency.

>> No.2592521

>>2592520
oh got ya, thanks

>> No.2592929

I like steven universe.
:-)

>> No.2592945

>>2592503
>>2592505
>>2592519
the males looks kinda neat. the rest aren't pleasurable for the eye

>> No.2592973

stop with the copy of the drawing at low opacity in the background, it's annoying and fucking retarded

>> No.2592985

>>2592973
Don't listen to this.
It's better than having a figure just floating in a white void.

>> No.2592996

Tumblrcore.

>> No.2593000

>>2592973
this

>>2592985
don't listen to this retard, he also suggests chromatic aberration

>> No.2593013

>>2592484
When I saw that shit in the catalog, I thought "another autistic sperg comes to trigger /ic/ with his filth, let's go laugh at the shit flinging".
But your thread is not even funny, you degenerate subhuman scum. You even fail at entertaining me like a proper monkey would do.
Go away, disgusting creature! Go back to tumblr, or the unfathomable depths that spawned your unholy kind, you wretched abomination!

>> No.2593038

>>2593013
The fuck dis nigga talking

On the subject: these look good. About the background I dont have any strong feelings, but i do feel is better than a white void
>is like chromatic aberration
How so? These arent ruining the picture or asaulting my eyes with sharpen blue and red everywhere. You should try with other backgrounds too tho. Not necesarely drawn, but just something to fill the void.

Also i wrote like shit cause mobile. In not sorry

>> No.2593039

it's alright, can see some future potential. I just wish you wouldn't waste your talent on fanart for a shit tier show.

>> No.2593165

>>2593039
I doubt he would have been doing this in the first place if it wasn't for that show tho

keep going op

>> No.2593198

look, even if we find disgusting your work, is no discussion that you have the right attitude drawing every day, now you need to practice more the basics things, work that lines, work that colors, while still drawing every day, and you can make it.
Op this time you can make it, don't ruin it.

>> No.2593203

>>2593013
Saved lol

>> No.2593367

Pretty good, dude.

>> No.2593376

Not a fan of the subject matter but..
You draw more than most people on /ic/ great job

>> No.2593385

came here to laugh but the art actually isn't that bad
>>2592518 is pretty neat imo

>> No.2593407

>>2593013
Flash your spark.

>> No.2593416

They're not bad but it's obvious that you don't draw a lot of muscly, svelte, young or chubby people. I think if you keep going and not try to mold the character to your usual stuff (ie. drawing older Connie, adding boobs on sapphire, giving Greg a chiseled face) that you could be pretty good.

>> No.2593456

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>>2592519

there is no god

>> No.2593576

>>2593456
god was never here

>> No.2593589

>>2593013
Fresh pasta for me, oh yes

>> No.2593864

>>2592484
You're the speglord that did the anime face and asked if it was good, then you ragequitted the thread. Your lines are HORRIBLE, absolute trash. Stop copying other people stuff

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>> No.2593876

>>2593864
i didnt ragequit the thread.. i was drawing

what are you talking about?

copying other people's stuff?

>> No.2594477

>>2593876
These are gay as fuck, and also, using the character as a background image is fucking lazy and stupid. It just makes the entire presentation even uglier than if you just had them on a flat background.

>> No.2594482

>>2592487
brachioradialis on the inside of the forearm what the fuck hahaha

>> No.2594516

>>2592484
Perspective and design are pretty good, but there are also some major issues. Mainly
>your linework sucks ass. Look up what line weight is. No, it's not a meme. No, it's not a detail. It's what makes this look so unprofessional.
>faces look like mongoloids, study Loomis head and Reilly abstraction.
Keep drawing.

>> No.2594518

>>2592484
Also, resize before posting. Trust me, you don't want us to inspect those lines closer than needed :^)

>> No.2594967

>>2592519
You art is cool.

>> No.2594968

>>2592519
*Your

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>>2594518
thanks but i want you guys to see the lines so i can get good feedback

>>2594516
i am studying those guys thanks
>>2594477
im glad you like them :)

>> No.2595139

i think you'd have a more appealing final product if you didnt exaggerate the boobs so much. (nothing against big boobs, but its borderline grotesque when you're not doing it well) like on >>2592517, >>2593875 and especially >>2592506
Also learn how to draw toes correctly
>>2592490
>>2592500
those mashed playdough feet ruin the entire image, im not exaggerating

>> No.2595147

Your Background reminds me of tim and Eric for some reason

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>>2595147
that's strange
>>2595139
thjanks ill work on that

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>>2596243
a bigger version

>> No.2596642

why steven universe?

i feel like you are wasting your talent on these

>> No.2596661

>>2596642
Well, I'm one to presume that he likes them, based on the evidence. Why post on 4chan? I feel like you are wasting your critical eye on shitposting.

>> No.2596664

>>2592985
I agree with this anon.

>> No.2596851

>>2595020
you've got pretty decent anatomy, but man your lines suck pretty bad. You should also try colors that aren't always true to the on-model version of characters. It makes it less boring.

>> No.2596853

>>2594482
I'd focus more on the absence of the right wrist

>> No.2596861

Adding a copy to the background doesn't get away from the fact that these characters aren't placed into a scene, it just draws attention to it. Stop using cheap tricks to hide your flaws and either leave them raw and obvious or actually work on fixing them. Do a scene. Fill the canvas with stuff. Even if it's just a hasty few lines of wall, a horizontal surface beneath their feet, a featureless concrete room, give them something to stand on, lean against and exist within.

People floating in space is like just doing faces without bodies. Too many artists stop and try to get really good at doing an incomplete picture. But you aren't developing the skills you need to be an illustrator. Hardly anyone wants simple character portraits. Learn to make a complete drawing, then worry about getting good.

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>>2596851
that makes sense, ill try this on the next one
>>2596861
fair enough, just dont have need for a background as these are almost exclusively practice on line weights and anatomy, but i may work something into the next one :) thanks for the good crit

>> No.2597360

>>2597229
Yeah. Gotta echo the others here. Your backgrounds are the most horrible thing here. Your other stuff needs work, but the enlarged low opacity copy really makes the entire thing look like shit. But keep going, for real, there is potential in your current skills though I'm not a huge fan of the subject matter.

>> No.2597628

>>2592506
Try changing the color of the lines inside of her hair to a dark pink
it just looks like hairy tubes right now

>> No.2597636

>>2592484
The little circle rose on his shield should be flatter/ more oval. You need to study perspective and facial anatomy imo. Steven looks really odd here.

>> No.2597663

>>2597229

Line weight can be practised on anything and your anatomy is good enough for the stage you seem to be at.

Drawing only what you are comfortable with means you only develop a few skills at once. Your lines will look better, but your perspective and composition will probably still suck. Drawing complete scenes will challenge you in many more ways and your line work will still improve just as much.

Also, really good anatomical painting involves awareness of the environment. People pose with purpose when they have a scene to exist in. Flesh presses against objects. The bones and muscles hold the body relative to what they are standing, sitting or lying on. The shading and colouring of the skin depends on light sources and scattering from nearby surfaces.

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>>2597360
i agree, gonna work on this, plan to see more environments in upcoming ones. Planned to do it with this one, but had to work a double at work

>>2597628
thanks, ill keep it in mind for future ones
>>2597636
agreed, im getting better

>>2597663
thanks, im gonna try that more with others for sure. thanks for the good crit

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I think your drawings would get better if you left them in black and white and just focused on the initial sketches. Pic from Rebecca Sugar.

>> No.2599207

>this thead still up
>OP literally rendering turds

>>2599017
These handful of sketches have more appeal and garner more interest than any of your "just get it out of the way" pin ups.

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>>2599017
thanks, I tried this with this one to see how it went with a very VERY simple background to see how it went

>>2599207
sorry you feel that way dude, but she's like 5 years older than me, and was able to go to a very expensive and prestige school specifically for cartooning and animation... Im working 2 jobs and barely able to keep my loans down. she is good, but we had different opportunities and comparing me to her is like comparing me to someone trained by Michelangelo However I do not appreciate calling my hard work"just get it out of the way" pin ups and that Im "literally rendering turds" is really not cool dude. I want criticism, not random insults

>> No.2600365

>>2599207
How is it possible to live with that much salt?

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I'm going to do a couple of posts to try and help you out. Your drawings are fine for now, there are some design and appeal choices being made that I think could be changed but that's something you'll figure out as you keep studying art you like and why you like it and through practice.

It's mostly the clean-up work that is killing your stuff. If you are going to clean-up, you need to figure out the right movements with your hand to get that good line quality. If you're using a mouse, it's going to be difficult no matter what so you might want to use a vector program to do clean-up work until you get a tablet.

If you have a tablet, don't draw in all one big motion. It looks like you're trying to draw one line at a time in one slow motion so it's causing a lot of jitteriness, a lot of uncertain jaggedness vs. purposeful textured brush jaggedness. Also, try using pen pressure so your brush thins out at the end.

Also, as mentioned, line weight. I quickly went over portions of your drawing to show you the difference in power alone when you use line weight in areas of the body that have more fat and actual weight. So, hands and tiny joints? Very light. Big fat legs and boobs? Heavier line work. Nice thin stomach? Thin line, but big ass? Heavier line. Etc. A nice general (But not absolute) guideline is that if one line if heavy, the parallel line on the other side of the form should be light.

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Second, if you're going to present your work, resize it. By showing it at the full size, and by showing it at anything larger than HD resolution (Unless it's a highly detailed picture that benefits from it), you showcase your mistakes way more. Your missing color in between things, your shaky lines, etc. And for the backgrounds, I recommend not having a low opacity version of the character in it. But if you don't want just a white BG, maybe try doing a graphic design just to fill it up. Triangles and squares to give the illusion of a landscape or ground space. I did it quickly to try and show off what I mean.

I'm going to try and make a third post about your coloring if I can get around to it.

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Your coloring and color theory could use work. First, if you use flat colors, don't use an airbrush or don't smudge your shading because it comes across as "pillow shading" and makes the drawing look flatter than if you hadn't shaded it at all. Second, for the shading, use more contrasting colors rather than just a black opacity version of the original color. I tried to quickly throw together an example of what I mean, using mostly filters. But you can see the difference between a picture that has just black shading vs. a picture that has colored shading. What happens if you use orange shading on a character with pink skin rather than "a darker pink"? Here's a good guide that better explains it:
http://stuff.veekun.com/pkcolor/

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Finally I'm going to share some SU pictures to try and inspire you. If you ever feel uncertain, you should try to copy how someone else does linework or coloring to learn from them then apply those learned techniques to your own work. Like, see how this one doesn't even have shading and some of the color is slightly missing around some of the edges?

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Compare this pic of Alex to the first one. Notice the differences, not just in coloring, but in the linework. Different brush tools, slightly different pen pressures, even this one doesn't have solid black lines. It's slightly dark grey.

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Done by Jeff Liu. The lines aren't 100% perfect, they don't all connect, but it's still nice. And look he uses solid white as light to his advantage. The white does not cut into the middle of the drawing either, they all touch the edges of Pearl's outline. Compare it to how you do lighting where dashes of white appear in the middle of the character and it doesn't really feel like it's being highlighted that well.

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Power of line weight.

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Line weight, sketchiness, not even colored, only uses tone to help separate shapes, and white bg is better than her being copied on low opacity.

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However, Becky uses almost no line weight in her digital sketches. Why? Because she uses very thin lines and uses them sparingly. Big thick lines aren't very appealing. Line weight is still slightly visible, though subtle. Look at how the bottom of her hair is "heavier" than her nose.

That's all I've got for you for now. Hope it helps.

>> No.2600413

>>2600357
Also as a final mention, this is the best of your bunch. I would recommend doing this style of inked shading for a few more pictures to see if you can consistently make something this nice. Sometimes when you do good art stuff, it can be a "fluke" because then you're unable to replicate it and you go, "Dammit, why is this the best thing I've done and can't do it again?". So you want to look at your own work and try to do the best again and again until you know for certain, "Yep, I've got the formula down".

>> No.2600415

>>2592486
just wanted to point out that bending your leg this way is impossible in midair (try bending one leg all the way while standing on one foot). this only happens when you're straddling against something.

>> No.2600465

>>2600415
it can happen when you're jumping, anon

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>>2600465
sorry i wasn't very clear, but this is what i mean. your heel will never touch your butt if you bend your leg in midair.

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>>2600378
>>2600393
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>>2600409
>>2600413
these are great im screen capping all of it thank you so much for the advice and will be adding these to following drawings

>>2600415
>>2600476
thanks i cant believe i missed that

>> No.2602029

>>2592484
Nice grasp for attention

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>>2602029
Im glad you like it :)

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>> No.2603454

>>2601882
>adding these to following drawings

>>2603346
>>2603347
>>2603349
>all around 2.5Kx3K

You really need to listen to the bit about displaying your work at the right resolution.

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>>2603454
lol youre right, i posted the wrong file haha my bad

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>>2604582
god dammit... wrong one again

>> No.2604602

>>2604601
how do i resize these things cause they are posting huge even though im changing the dpi

>> No.2604637

>>2604602
Image > Image size/alt+shift+I

Make sure to constrain proportions

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>>2604637
hows this? better

>> No.2605879

>>2592508
nice timing

>> No.2605883

>>2605879
meant for this>>2605836

>> No.2605983

>>2592484
nice, but your signature looks like something from highschool

>> No.2606037

>>2605883
why nice timing?

>> No.2606168

>>2592484
Your art is almost identical to chambas early work

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>>2606168
who is chamba? ill have to look him up

>>2605983
how in the world can i improve a signature?

>>2605879
nice timing?

>> No.2607338

>>2592484
Dear god, summer is here...

>> No.2608539

>>2607338
summer is here?

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>>2607338
what do you mean summer is here?

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>>2608539
>>2608540
It's true >>2607338 was right

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>>2608541
funny, i love that meme lol

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>> No.2611191

OK, you seemed to take the advice people gave you and put a couple of characters in white rooms, which is better than floating in space. Then you went back to your old style and started putting the faded copy in the background again. Why?

>>2607338
>>2608539
>>2608540
>>2608541
>>2609956

I remember when it was September which had a reputation for drawing in clueless youngsters.

>> No.2611630

>>2592484
Why are you still posting this garbage?

>> No.2611979

It looks like shit. I know oldschool cartoons looked like shit on purpose, but we do mostly porn here.

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>>2611191
and you are 100% correct, however that night i had just worked a double shift but still wanted to do a piece for the day. youll notice that. If i work a super long day no Bg. Im off, i can experiment, see if i like something

>>2611630
better than the garbage your posting...oh wait...there isnt any. ;)

>>2611979
aww thanks im really glad you like it. also thanks for your advice here chief

>> No.2612010

>>2606037
>>2607329
>22:22:22

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>> No.2614095
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>> No.2614170

stop signing these they're fucking terrible. it's just cringey dude. just put a link to your tumblr at the bottom if you want them to know where to find your art, the sig is so cringe.

>> No.2614530

>>2613019
This is sick. In a bad way.

>> No.2614534

>>2614170
I think they are pretty good

>> No.2614536

>>2593456
and there was steven

>> No.2615240

>>2614095
Nice

>> No.2615248

I hate your drawings, your style, steven universe and fanart as a whole. I hate them deeply.

On the other hand i admire your dedication and i think you will enjoy success in the DA fanart community. God pity your soul.

>> No.2615326
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2615326

>>2614170
what is wrong with my sig? what do you think i should do to improve it?
>>2614530
what nakes ya sick

>>2614534
thanks

>>2615240
thanks

>>2615248
what do you dislike about my drawings? and pity my soul?

>> No.2615434

this is a very interesting thread

>> No.2615442

RESIZE YOUR PICS REEEEEE

>> No.2616380
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2616380

>>2615434
interesting how?

>>2615442
i did? what dimensions should i be using

>> No.2616400

why is this thread still up

>> No.2616435
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2616435

These are very nice, anon. I have been coming back to this thread daily to see your newest improvements.
I may also add that your style is epic

>> No.2616474

>>2616380
Are you 17?

>> No.2617720
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2617720

>>2616400
cause im actually updating it everyday unlike alot of these summer guys
>>2616435
thanks man

>>2616474
old enough

>> No.2617736

>>2617720
16?
Art is alright I just think you can do better pushing your "style"

>> No.2617746

>>2617720
Please stop adding a larger, transparent version in the background. Its distracting.

>> No.2618904
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2618904

>>2617746
i had just worked a double shift but still wanted to do a piece for the day. youll notice that. If i work a super long day no Bg. Im off, i can experiment, see if i like something

>>2617736
what does "pushing your style" mean?

>> No.2618934

>>2617720
>>2618904
ew

>> No.2619831

holy fuck man keep it up

>> No.2619916

>>2592515
>>2592517
>>2592518
>>2592519
>>2592505
>>2592499
I actually kinda like these. The problem with the other ones is awkward lighting, weird proportions, and odd lineart choices. But these, these are alright mate.

>> No.2619929

>>2600378 >>2600380 >>2600393 >>2600398 >>2600401 >>2600402 >>2600404 >>2600407 >>2600409

God's work was done on this day.

>> No.2619930

>>2618904
You're 16?

>> No.2619931

>>2615326
You have such a classic comicbook artist feel to your art. Keep going mate. Do you have a blog?

>> No.2620113
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2620113

>>2618934
glad ya like it

>>2619831
thank you

>>2619916
thanks for the advance could you explain a little about odd lineart choices?

>>2619929
he really did help me out

>>2619931
yea here ya go
www.mikejc.com
http://mikedjc.tumblr.com/

>> No.2621120
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2621120

>> No.2621581

Keep making nice things

>> No.2622098
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2622098

>>2621581
thanks man

fanart of one of my favorite cosplayers Stephanie Michelle

>> No.2622104

>>2599017
this style is so ugly imo. youre obviously talented but this is so ugly, especially the head on the left and top right.

>> No.2623316
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2623316

>>2622104
thanks i think, that picture you responded to is a drawing by Rebbeca Sugar.

>> No.2623322

>>2595020
Instead of looking if your image passes as a representation, you should also concentrate more on if it looks good as a 2dimensional abstract drawing. Like where are the lines moving, how do the lines look themselves, where are they congegrating etc. For example the hands are a mash of lines compared to the rest - you could have made em thinner or just hinted at where they're going be.

>> No.2623350

why is this thread still up?

>>2623316
can you fuck off and post your sub-par tumblr garbage somewhere else?

>> No.2623614
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2623614

>>2622098
I'll admit that when you first made this thread I was rolling my eyes at those faggoty Stevens Universe characters, but you're alright. Keep going friend.

>> No.2623617

>>2623350
Is everyone here a dick or are there like 5 extremely vocal dicks?

>> No.2623619
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2623619

>>2623614
>"I'll judge the subject matter rather than the art itself"

>> No.2623641

>>2623617
>5 extremely vocal dicks
this.
SU is popular to hate here because it's seen as too lefty and popular with the "wrong" crowd.

Had you drawn equally cringy shit like Warhammer 40,000, all these shit's would still laugh but suck yer dick too.

>> No.2624375
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2624375

>>2623322
thats good advice thank you
>>2623614
thanks i think lol
>>2623617
feels that way sometimes
>>2623619
lol
>>2623641
i hear ya on that

>> No.2624380

ok you can stop now

take a while to study or else your art will look this shitty forever. you're not getting better doing this btw.

>> No.2625653
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2625653

>>2624380
no i dont think i will. cause i do practice during and practice anatomy and other things... but i make time to do finished pieces every night... so no, i dont plan on stopping anytime soon. no one ever stayed bad by training everyday.

want my thread gone? do your own thread and post new art everyday. push mine out friend!

>> No.2625679

>>2625653
you're doing the same things over and over again, don't expect to suddenly get better

that nigri's fanart has loads of mistakes anatomy-wise for someone who's been training every day for a month already

ps: you're stuck up your own ass, that's how we know you won't get better than this

>> No.2625690

>>2625679
okay friend, guess im stuck up my own ass.

now if you're done, help out and point out those mistakes chief so i dont make them next time. otherwise you're wasting my time. I need all the criticism i can get. I would love to see some of your work if possible

>> No.2625732

>>2625653
jesus christ.
Study anatomy please.

>> No.2625782

>>2592484
this is so fucking ugly I want to kill you with my own hands

>> No.2625790

>>2592484
So much anger ITT.
At least this guy is completing something consistently everyday regardless of skill level. That's more than most people here do.
Just cause someone's actually trying to work hard doesn't mean you fags have to tear down their moral in order to make yourselves feel better over your own lack of self discipline.

>> No.2625812

>>2615326
The shadow here is actually cool.

>> No.2625935

>>2625653
what even is going on here.

that back. those ankles, that nose, those tits, that garish, tacky arrangement of nigri pics in the background, max cringe my dude.

>> No.2625945

>>2625782
*unleashes katana*

>> No.2625961

>>2625945
that's katana of the elven steel for you mister.

>> No.2626074

>>2625790
Consistency doesn't mean dick if there's no sign of improvement or trying to get out the comfort zone.

>> No.2626090

>>2626074
>>2626074
Seems he is getting out of comfort zone. He isn't doing Steven universe drawings anymore and not doing that faggoty transparent background thing as much anymore. Just saying, you can't say he is staying in a comfort zone when he is clearly doing different stuff. Regardless of skill

>> No.2626813
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2626813

(background art for this one is from Becky Cloonan

>>2625732
i will thanks for the sound advice friend

>>2625782
glade you like it then :)

>>2625790
thanks

>>2625812
thanks man

>>2625935
thanks for pointing those out, means alot... anyother advice?

>>2626074
im trying new stuff all the time recently what are you talking about?

>>2626090
thanks, yeah

>> No.2626815

>>2626813
go post somewhere else and take your autistic fan art with you

>> No.2626829

>>2626815
why? if you dont like it dont look man. Ive done nothing wrong and I'm not harassing anyone. all i am doing is posting artwork for feedback... why does that anger so many people?

>> No.2627178

>>2626829
/ic/ isn't your own personal platform for self promotion, dipshit.

>> No.2627188

>>2627178
He didn't post his blog or anything though. I like seeing this progression, and he's definitely listening to what anons are saying and trying to branch out while staying generally consistent.

I don't know how calling him names helps the board in any way. I'd say people like you are more detrimental to the quality of this board, which isn't high to begin with.

>>2626813
I don't think using others' work as your BG is a great idea, but glossing over that, I think paying more attention to certain details like where her pocket is (looks arbitrary and not well planned out) and refining the patterns on her pants and look of her tattoos will help.

I like the somewhat restrained shading technique you used here >>2598990 which reminds me a little bit of engraving techniques. I think it could be very cool if you take it further.

>> No.2627197

>>2627188
>He didn't post his blog or anything though.
It would of been better if he had just done that instead of making an entire thread dedicated to himself. He doesn't deserve to have endlessly bumped thread of his own boring, derivative work. How many other threads on this board are like this? What if everyone who came here made threads about themselves?

Fuck off.

>> No.2627950
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2627950

>>2627178
im not using it for self promotion, im using it to get advice and try new things

>>2627188
thank you all valid points

>>2627197
sorry you feel that way... but im learning and im not hurting anyone. so im here to stay friend

>> No.2628067

>>2626829
It doesn't anger that many people, it just angers three or four people who are legitimately mad they don't draw enough to sustain their own thread and take it out on others. Most of these bitching people are samefagging.

Just keep drawing dude, I like seeing a progression thread like this.

>> No.2628139

>>2627950
could you post your art daily over on the art/stylization general instead of making a thread dedicated to your own shitty art?

>> No.2628262

>>2628139
Didn't you read his post?
>but im learning and im not hurting anyone. so im here to stay friend
He's too busy being an insolent little faggot.

>> No.2628555

>>2627950
What on earth is that? A queer? If that was supposed to be a lady you failed immensely cause anatomically it looks like man. If it's a man, why did you add massive tits on him?

>> No.2629017
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2629017

gonna switch gears, and try more detailed characters and tech... so doing overwatch for now. Any advice going forward will be great
>>2628067
thanks
>>2628139
cause i would artistic critique
>>2628262
sorry you feel that way... would very much love to see you art
>>2628555
good advice. the character was fairly androgynous to me and that was what i tried to go for by mixing it. it clearly didn't work.. Ill remember that going forward thank you

>> No.2629050

>>2629017
Sorry I meant I don't post elsewhere cause I want a genuine Art critique

>> No.2629052

just hide this thread and be on with your lives

/beg/'s can stay in here and boost this idiots ego even further if you wish

>> No.2630089
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2630089

>>2629052
thanks for the advice, love you to

>> No.2631323
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>> No.2632266
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>> No.2632272

>>2629052
thanks for the hide button, looking at this shit is giving me prostate cancer

>> No.2632275

>>2629017
>>2630089
>>2631323
>>2632266
i like these better than all the other stuff posted so far

>> No.2632699
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2632699

i've been ignoring this thread for so long and now i regret actually looking at it

>> No.2632736

I thought I was in for pure shit just by seeing the OP, but the rest are pretty good. Then I realized that Step-child was completely on point in looking like a downy.

>> No.2632738

why has this thread been up for 33 fucking days?

>> No.2633402
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2633402

>>2632272
glad youre enjoying it so

>>2632275
thanks

>>2632699
thanks for the great critique

>>2632736
thank you

>>2632738
no signs of slowing down... ive posted a new drawing everyday

>> No.2633427

>>2633402
stop fucking replying to people who arent helping

>> No.2634235

>>2633427
STOP NOT BEING ANGRY REEEEEEE

Keep it up man, this is good Shit

>> No.2634317

>>2633402
Stop bumping your shitty thread and promoting yourself

>> No.2634810
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2634810

>>2633427
awww do i have to :)

>>2634235
thanks :)

>>2634317
thanks for the insightful critique

>> No.2634817

>>2592519
These are dope.

>> No.2634837
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2634837

the way you respond to every fucking reply jesus christ. Can't you just post your shit in the " post your art" generals instead of attention whoring? your art looks like dog shit, it doesn't need its own thread

>> No.2634845

>>2593456
>waaaaa why do people like things I don't like

I really like the concept OP, but something is missing. they all look too much alike, there is something unpleasant for the eye.
I wish I could help you more but I am shit.
maybe play around with more styles?

>> No.2635920
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2635920

>>2634817
thanks

>>2634837
aww thanks for the interesting critique. it means alot

>>2634845
thats actually interesting, ill try to work that in to these upcoming overwatch ones

>> No.2635999

>>2634837
i wouldnt say it's dog shit. it's more than i see alot of other anons posting

>> No.2637048
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2637048

>>2635999
i keep asking them to post links to their art, no takers yet

>> No.2637285

>he draws this shit for free
w h y

>> No.2637299

>>2637285
Why not? If it's something this guy enjoys doing, then there isn't much stopping him. Making money from producing art would be a bonus of course but the creativity behind it should be the driving force.

>> No.2638201
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2638201

>>2637285
for the hot pockets

>>2637299
bingo, i do it to get better

>> No.2638255

>>2634810
One issue I have is with the coloring here, the wsy you mixed soft shading (the skin of his arm) with the more graphic one (beard). If you stuck to just the graphic one I think it would look more cohesive.

>>2637048
I like this one a lot because it doesn't mix the two styles. It feels more 'grounded' in a way.

As fie suggestions on taking your work forward, I think you already do some great stuff with shapes and you're clearly having fun with these, which is more than I can say for a lot of art out there. I think refining your coloring technique will really give your work that special something. Don't get me wrong, it's already pretty cool, but in addition to the coloring techniqe, how about refining your palette (to suggest the environment or lighting more, for example).
Also, the drapery in >>2635920 is weird, her crotch area looks like it has a bulge.

Also your line weights are decent, but you can decide where you want to go with this, introduce more variety or refine a personal style.
Just my suggestions, keep up the good work OP.

>> No.2639381
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2639381

>>2638255
Thanks is is all great! I'll fry them in some more knboether places

>> No.2639431
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2639431

whatcha guys think? this is a quickie i did, so i know it could be better, just pen and paper.

>> No.2639432

>>2639431
oh its Rose x Garnet, fusion

>> No.2639438

>>2639431
i really need a fucking tablet. ugh

>> No.2640374
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2640374

>>2639431
looks good keep drawing :)

>>2639432
yep

>>2639438
just save up like i did

>> No.2640584

>>2639431
Looks good your hair needs to be more fluid, though.

>> No.2640589

>>2637299
Because his line thickness,anatomy, and subjects are terrible, and he isn't even bothering to learn.

Look at the tiny legs on,
>>2640374

>> No.2640640

can someone delete this cancerous thread already please
there are threads where you can post your art and you come here and make your own fucking thread like you are some special snowflake with special needs or something
just cut it out already
the art isnt even good, its barely mediocre

>> No.2641418

I love SU and I think these are nice. you put your own spin on it, and it fits the slightly more adult themes that register in the show. I think it's cool. keep drawing.

>> No.2641521
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2641521

>>2640584
agreed

>>2640589
aww im glad you like it baby :)

and yea, i was going more for a coming/raising from the ground type feel, so looks like it clearly didnt go work, will try better for next time

>>2640640
Aw thanks for the in depth critique, i would love to see some of your daily art sometime :) it would really help me out

>>2641418
thank you very much

>> No.2641525

>>2639381
>>2638201
>>2637048
>>2634810
>>2631323
>>2630089
HOOOLY FUCK.
how can one be so different in different drawings/characters.

I left /ic/ somewhere at the beginning when you posted your Steven drawings and i didnt liked them.
THESE however are so good. It's like almost drawn by a different person.

I really love the variety of poses you using. Not just "girl standing from left to right". Damn those poses are good.
I also like tiny details.

this what practice does to your brain - started with weird Steven Universe fanart. Ended with one of the best Overwatch fanart i've seen.

>> No.2643072
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2643072

>>2641525
aww thanks man

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>>2641525
please stahp samefagging op.

>> No.2643579

>>2641525
kek

>> No.2643611
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2643611

>>2641525
>Op sucking his own cock through samefaggotry

How can one person be this pathetic?

>> No.2644260
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2644260

>>2643076
sorry big boy, its not me.

>>2643611
nope, sorry not me but youre welcome to keep trying.
we all know its just you 3 guys again samefagging so you'll excuse me if you accusing me of it is rather hilarious

>> No.2645302

>>2644260
Comment "Stop samefaging OP" or your mom will die in her sleep

>> No.2645305

>>2645302
Stop samefaging op

>> No.2645310

>>2644260
>>2641525
>>2641418
stop samefagging op

>> No.2645311

>>2645302
>samefaging
Stop samefagging OP

>> No.2645312

>>2644260
>we all know its just you 3 guys again samefagging
Projecting this much

>> No.2645313

>>2645302
>>2645305
>>2645310
>>2645311
>>2645312
Just report and hide the thread dumbasses. Stop bumping it

>> No.2645451

>>2605836
I like this one

>> No.2645455

>>2645302
Stop samefaging OP

>> No.2645483
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2645483

>>2645302
too late lol
>>2645305
sure
>>2645310
yep
>>2645311
guess so
>>2645311
uh huh
>>2645312
who knows lol
>>2645313
i think they are trying lol
>>2645451
thanks
>>2645455
meh okay

>> No.2645577

>>2645483
>he still doesnt know how to draw ridge muscles

oh boy nice improvement op!!!!

>> No.2645581
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2645581

www.mikejc.com
"Fantastic, Amazing & Abnormal Comic Book Artist"

Holy shit, I think OP is the definition of Dunning Kruger- I can't fathom how someone like this could really keep thinking their work is good enough to dedicate a whole thread and website for themselves.

>pic related
>4 years

4 FUCKING YEARS

>> No.2645590

>>2640589
Practice practice practice

>> No.2645646

>>2592484
It's cool, keep up the good work anon. I don't know why people are so fucking pissed, god this board is toxic. For your own good, don't return.

>> No.2645647

>>2645646
i agree. please dont return OP. go away.

>> No.2645652

>>2592484
>Steven Universe
>samefagging
>shilling your art this hard

Kill yourself my dude.

>> No.2645857

>>2645581
What's the point of this? It looks like he's improving. Outside of a cringy OC, it's okay. Do you guys hate this dude so much you're art shaming his stuff from 6 fucking years ago now.

I'm like OP now, post your shit and show you can do better.

>> No.2645873

>>2645652
Wow, you're so triggered. Haha, dumb tumblr kid.

>> No.2646014

STOP RIGHT NOW OP

YOU HAVE BEEN DRAWING FANART OF A *NON-4CHAN-APPROVED-SHOW*

ANON, THE ESSJAYDUBBULYUUS LIKE THIS SHOW. IT HAS LESBIANS IN IT. DON'T TELL ME YOU DIDN'T KNOW. IT'S ALL PART OF THE *GAY AGENDA*

RE-SUBMIT TO THE HIVEMIND OR YOU WILL BE BANISHED TO REDDIT IMMEDIATELY

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2646036

>>2593456
>>2614536

>> No.2646191

>>2645857
/beg/

>> No.2646197

>>2646014
are you retarded? you do know that /co/ which is -oh my fucking god- a 4chan board is obsessed with that show? the reason people want this thread gone is because its just one guy thinking hes important enough to take up an entire thread for his own shitty art.

>> No.2646266

>>2646197
People on co ban su generals at the drop of a hat, you've clearly never been there.

>> No.2646385

>>2627178
how does it feel to be a bitter piece of shit making no progress of his own?

>> No.2646409 [DELETED] 

>>2646191
>>2646197
>>2646266
>>2646385
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=430qrbCelOs

>> No.2646473

>>2646266
Just because mods hate it doesn't mean the threads don't get hundreds of individual IPs posting during new episodes, especially ones revealing a new gem or fusion.

They're generals reach thousands of posts in just an hour or two during a big special.

>> No.2646564

I would suggest taking a break from the kind of drawings you're doing and shake it up a little. Every single piece looks almost EXACTLY the same, there's no diversity in the style.

Try doing something else! You don't always have to make a finished, inked picture. You can do sketches and it'll still count. Try changing mediums or brushes or something. Do watercolor, or crayon, or pixel. Try doing just a background or headshots.

I find expanding your boundaries is better than pinpointing when it seems as if your pinpointing isn't getting far. Try changing bodies too. They all seem super muscular, try making a skinny loser with undefined muscles, I think you're doing better in your later pictures.

It gets very boring VERY QUICKLY looking at the same generic piece over and over again. Non of your pictures stand out to me, because I already know what it'll look like from previous posts.

Try mixing it up a bit. Dabble in areas you're not comfortable with; focus on a specific body part you're not great at drawing, try completely different styles of drawing, like maybe a more animated feel with exaggerated expressions. Your pictures right now remind me of comic books of super muscular heroes or something.

Anyway, I think you're doing well OP and I wish the best for you. Just try shaking things up a bit! It's really fun to try different mediums and brushes, I love changing styles; it keeps things fresh.


>>2638201
This I feel, really shows improvement in your art/

>> No.2646623

>>2645302
Stop samefagging OP

>> No.2646884
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>>2645577
thanks

>>2645581
i like that you went through 6 years of my blog to find that. thats adorable haha
>>2645590
agreed agreed agreed
>>2645646
naw, im here to stay, but thank you

>>2645647
nope sorry bro ham

>>2645652
naw cant kill whats already dead

>>2645857
thanks man, even im a bit embarrassed by that old design lol

>>2645873
right? lol

>>2646014
haha
>>2646036
ha

>>2646191
/beg/ ?

>>2646197
i dont think im that important, im just looking for critiques of my art, im not hurting anyone

>>2646266
meh

>>2646385
i keep asking to see other peoples art
>>2646409
awesome lol

>>2646473
?
>>2646564
thanks man, that makes alot of sense, thanks for the reasonable and well thought out post

>>2646623
again, not me bro ham

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>> No.2648066

>>2648057
You should drop the cheap effects mang. Also, I hate this thread for existing, instead of posting in a draw thread, but props to OP for actually drawing every day, more than lots of people on /ic/ does instead of shitposting every day.

>> No.2648074

Alright, just stop bumping this thread and he'll go away, he's just pandering to people he thinks care at this point.

The hide button is opened with the small arrow next to the thread image by the way.

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>>2648066
i agree, i wont be doing it again, idnt come out well
thank you
>>2648074
go ahead and hide, im here to stay and become better... i just want art advice

>> No.2649278

This whole thing is just really sad, don't you have any shame or humility op?
You come off like an autistic child. not in a meme way either, like actually autistic.

As far as your Art, a lot of it's is just really bland, not bad and not great. But that's just my opinion. only thing you can do is draw more.

I think you need to grow up a little op, and realize that no one wants you're see your art, keep it to your blog, and if you want "advice", go to the draw thread, or just analyze you own drawings. No need to have your own special snowflake thread.

>> No.2650076

>>2645581
holy shit that's terrible

5 years later and still hasn't improved much. if only he spent less time drawing and more time studying.

>> No.2650119

>>2646884
literally 1 click away

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Shame on all of you for making fun of this crippled person.
>>2649210
Can you tell me why you don't just post in a draw thread or something? I admire your consistency and determination by the way, and you have improved, even if it's been slow.

>> No.2650146

>>2649210
>>2646884
>>2592484
OP, please work on your line economic.
you'll thanks me later

>> No.2650148

>>2650146
economy*

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>>2649210
It's really ballsy of you to be such a high level troll while all your info is on google, I'd be worried about someone ordering 50 pizzas to my house. I guess /ic/ isn't as autistic as /b/ or something.

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>>2649210
Michael plz stop shilling your work

>> No.2650159

>>2650146
Agreed. Your lines look pretty shitty OP.

>> No.2650163
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2650163

Kek which one of you autists did this?

>> No.2650167

>>2649210
Do some studies, some other anon said to get out of your comfort zone, do that too. Other than that keep up with the consistency and determination.

>> No.2650174

OP here, please leave your comments on my website: http://www.mikejc.com/2016/08/overwatch-reaper.html?m=1 I'd much rather have you critique them there than continually shit up this board. Ive seen the errors of my ways and realize now that I'm not more important than everyone else

>> No.2650185

can someone compile this for future cringe threads

thanks

>> No.2650197

>>2650185
how about you do it you clownfuck

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>>2649278
not a special snowflake thread, im just posting my work looking for advice, im doing nothing wrong pal

>>2650076
well what should i work on?

>>2650119
?
>>2650146
line economic? could you please explain a little more?

>>2650153
meh, if people want to threaten and harass someone for just posting artwork thats on them i guess, seems like a big waste of time since im not bothering anyone and they can just hide the thread.

>>2650156
im not, im looking for advice to get better

>>2650159
how can i improve them then?

>>2650163
cool, thanks for commenting

>>2650167
seems fair, what would you recommend i try?

>>2650174
not me, sorry guys, i only comment with my art work.

how is me posting artwork looking for advice in the art critique thread so annoying to everyone when they can just hide the thread

>>2650185
that would be awesome lol

>>2650197
lol

>> No.2650392

DESU his art is pretty alright, odd line weight and colours etc but it's pretty good for one year. So sad to see so much unnecessary salt in this thread.

>> No.2650426

>>2650391
dat pro genji ass

>> No.2650440

You're a nigger, or at least you draw like one.

No sense of perspective; it seems like you try to do these dynamic poses most of the time and fail, because you lack the proper balance of size between body parts/objects. OP pic, of course, highlights your lack of understanding about where things should be placed in a a space to be appealing in a cartoony 2D picture.

You're highlights are what's really cringe however. Don't half-ass your highlights with that "hatching" effect you sometimes do with your line work as well because chicken stretch makes art look deeper than what it is.

Minus the "hatching" your linework is nice, your color choice is boring, Steven universe is gay, and I don't like your art (6/10)

But hey, I'm just some faggot on the internet, born like you're going to listen to me :^)

>> No.2650555

OP it looks good and especially good considering its a once a day thing, nobody itt giving criticism but no advice has any level of art that they can produce consistently that is anything close to this, keep it up it will just get cleaner and cleaner each piece

>> No.2650561

>>2650440
7/10 good post but dont be apologetic at the end, i agree with most of your points

>> No.2650579

made me lose my lunch

>> No.2650615

>>2650391

Get out of your comfort zone you dumbass, do still lifes, master studies, go outside a draw people walking, get a fucking figure drawing book, study drawing everything from tanks to insects. You keep doing the same shit hoping for some kind of improvement without putting the work in. You need to more drawing everyday, as far as I know all you do are these characters.

It also seems like you're trying to avoid any criticism by asking more questions than actually doing things anon's recommend. Google what they're tell you it's not fucking hard.
Try learning what you need to improve on your own, no one's going to hand hold you to the top. Look at other people's artwork critically, and more importantly look at your work critically.

I swear to god if you respond with a fucking "what should I do first?" you have zero hope of making it anywhere.

>> No.2650618

>>2645302
Stop samefaging OP

>> No.2650703

>>2650391
>seems fair, what would you recommend i try?
>Do some studies, some other anon said to get out of your comfort zone, do that too. Other than that keep up with the consistency and determination.

>> No.2650732

>>2650391
You rely too much on one single style of line art. Everthing is bold and sturdy, this is what happen when you refuse to use anything but one medium. You cant stick to one style and think you can get better at it as you do more. Your characters lost its organic form and it looks like a sticker

>> No.2651632

>>2650391
>not a special snowflake thread
Holy shit are you not reading the replies? Despite everyone telling you to stop you keep shilling your shitty fan art you keep posting away. I have also yet to see you take any advice and you continue to post the same cartoon drawings with virtually no improvement.

>> No.2651636

>>2650555
Stop samefagging Op

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>>2650392
meh it sucks but oh well

>>2650426
lol thanks

>>2650440
how exactly do i draw like a "nigger"?
what do you mean my art looks deeper?

>>2650555
thanks man i will

>>2650561
i wish i understood some of the points but overall what i can understand makes sense and i agree

>>2650579
better find it

>>2650615
>Get out of your comfort zone you dumbass, do >still lifes, master studies, go outside a draw >people walking, get a fucking figure drawing >book
I am getting out of my comfort zone by drawing more complex and detailed characters (i mean look, at my other stuff ive never even drawn mechs or robots before and my next thing after overwatch doing old master studies.

>It also seems like you're trying to avoid any >criticism by asking more questions than >actually doing things anon's recommend

BULL FUCKING SHIT!
said i should stop using transparent versions of the character in BG -check

said i should lower the resolution - check

said i should work on shading - check

said i shouldnt do steven universe - check

said i should at shadows to the bottom of the characters to ground them more - check

work on my color theory - in progress

anatomy errors and cleaning up anatomy - in progress

I listen to every Damn thing and take it to heart and try and improve and i have

>Google what they're tell you it's not fucking >hard.
i do
>Try learning what you need to improve on your >own, no one's going to hand hold you to the >top. Look at other people's artwork critically, >and more importantly look at your work >critically.

i dont expect it and i do do work outside of these but they are more lose sketches and i just dont post... i will start doing more detailed one with the upcoming old master studies
>I swear to god if you respond with a fucking >"what should I do first?" you have zero hope >of making it anywhere.
Hey better question... What have you done?
>>2650703
thanks

>> No.2651982

>>2650732
>>2650732
that seems fair, only a few more the overwatch and im gonna start experimenting and see waht happens thank you

>>2651632
again, bullshit, when have i "shilled" my art? I never once promoted my site or any other sites Im on... Someone asked and i answered. read the thread

>> No.2652000

>>2651981

You keep doing your thing anon, it's looking good, those others anons are jelly that they either don't have the discipline to work on their art daily and/or that you are actually improving slowly but surely.

>> No.2652164

>>2652000
>>2650555
>Stop samefagging Op
Nice trips tho

>> No.2652166

Yeah they're quite good

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>>2652166
Michael plz

>> No.2652425

>>2592519
I love it but i feel like it would look even better with thinner lines but thats just me.

>> No.2652427

>>2593013
>Hates Tumblr
>Triggered

kek

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>>2592484
Look, I didn't think I would ever be replying to this thread but it's been bugging me more and more over the past few weeks.
Please, god, stop posting so often on here and just do your work on your own for a while. Don't tease other people such as >>2611630 for not posting their work- it doesn't necessarily take a competent artist to see that your work is amateurish and aesthetically unpleasing. Your colors are garish (and don't remind us that you're learning color theory- we get it, just show some fucking results), your shading is abysmal, your linework is astoundingly ugly, and your anatomy is noticeably awkward.

It's great that you're creating full pieces and that you're trying out different things. Really, it's fucking terrific. But stop showing them off here, because many of us here are very much tired of them. You say in >>2650391 that you're "just posting your work looking for advice," but rarely if ever does this board see an artist who feels the need to post 73 FUCKING PIECES (yes, I was autistic enough to count them, and yes, I don't think even Illustrat or Chunbum have ever posted that much in their threads) over the course of a month and a half.
People who dump masses of their own work in threads dedicated to themselves are seen as annoying, because it actually only takes one or two pieces to see that someone is clearly unskilled. The 23-picture dump at the very beginning was already grossly unnecessary, and the 50 pictures that proceeded after them were not much better. We can give you all the critique you'll ever need just from a few select pieces in this thread.
Just because you're giving this board a little more traffic because of all the posting doesn't mean you're making it any better. You can do work and improve your art without giving this thread a daily update about it and making more anons mad.

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>>2652540

Not him, but this board is kinda a wasteland of talent anyways. There is little to no help, more of anons screaming it looks like shit and git gud, or Loomis meme. With a huge swathe of crap artists to mediocre who are trying, to a few hidden gems of some true masters and professionals.To me it doesn't really seem that bad or matters. I doubt that actual good artists are bitching about him, more so, the normies and plebs who probably can't do the same or are just here as lurkers.

Again, it is kinda retarded that he's turned a thread into his own personal blog, but whatever. Half the other threads are usually meme shit anyways, or people asking vague questions about art schools, or if they'll make it, etc.

Either way, I could care less about this daily upload anon, at least he is working and doing something as a hobby, rather than sitting around playing v-games all day.

>> No.2652568

>>2652559
Fuck off, Malware.

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>>2652000
thanks

>>2652164
nice trips?

>>2652171
lol that pic is awesome, who is that handsom devil?

>>2652425
that makes sense, line weights is something im always working on thank you

>>2652427
kek indeed

>>2652540
i reapeat, as others have, just hide the thread man, there are good people coming into this thread and giving me good advice on the different pieces i do. Like i said im hurting no one. Also, why isnt there this level of vitriol on the more stupid threads on here?

>>2652559
fair enough, i agree with several of your points

>>2652568
malware?

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>>2652540
watch out guys, it's the po-po

>> No.2653556

Holy shit this thread is hilarious. Guy posts his work literally every day and then a bunch of little shits come in criticizing his work to hell while posting literally nothing. Fuck you guys. He probably draws more than most of you niggers and you have the fucking gall to act like you know ANYTHING. Suck a fucking dick.

>> No.2653887

>>2653556
>Replies 293
>Posters 132
OP are you actually autistic? Pretty much half of this thread is you talking to yourself and shitting on people when they don't think your crudely cartoons are the best things ever. In b4 post your work, Op isn't the only one who draws everyday - atelierfag

>> No.2654064

>>2653526
>>2653556
Stop samefagging op

>> No.2654304
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>he drew for 9 years for this level of quality
Christ

This is barely high end /beg/ shit op

>> No.2654818

Op this is important

Are you, by any chance

Alioto?

>> No.2654862

this thread is far better suited for /i/

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>>2653526
lol

>>2653556
meh it happens

>>2653887
not me, i only reply with my art. sorry people disagree with you

>>2654064
cute that guys that have been samefagging are accusing me of it

>>2654304
>aww thank you means a lot

>>2654818
nope sorry, who is that?

>>2654862
why

now that im done with the overwatch characters moving on to the master studies

>> No.2655038

>>2655029
keep on trucking anon,
I want to see everybody get pissed off

>> No.2655226

>>2655038
Kek I can't believe people are still falling for this b8 thread.

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>>2655038
thanks i will, i hate that "everyone" is pissed about it

>>2655226
i guess they still are

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