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Critique?

>> No.2579282

>>2579280
The 'R' looks cute
Don't sign sketches
Shade the cloak to give it more definition

>> No.2579283 [DELETED] 

>>2579280
Please don't make threads just for your own stuff. Look for the beginner thread or the draw thread.

>> No.2579289

>>2579283
Why when it will just be deleted anyway?

>> No.2579344 [DELETED] 

>>2579289
What the hell are you talking about? You won't get deleted from the beginner thread, it's where you belong.

>> No.2579347

I want to SEXUALLY FUCK Raven!

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>>2579347
Is there any other way to fuck her if not sexually?

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>>2579344

>> No.2579435 [DELETED] 

>>2579280
I mean, I like it, but you really shouldn't make your own thread for just own drawing.

I feel like your lines aren't confident enough.

>> No.2579441

>>2579435
You mean for just one drawing?
I have more of course. I chose this one because it's one of my better sketches that I'm confident in.
I guess I'll post more.....muh

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(Personal project promo plz donut steal)

>> No.2579459

>>2579280
>that bird shaped like a R
terrible

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2579543

>>2579280
How bad did I fuck up /ic/ (that was my final piece for my gcse art, unfortunately)

>> No.2579553

>>2579441
>>2579443
>>2579449

Why do you think your art deserves its own thread? Do you actually think you're good? Go show off on failbook.

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2579577

All of you can eat me
I saw someone do the same shit not too many days ago
I have no shame for wanting critique on a critique imageboard
If I thought my art was good I wouldn't even waste my time here

>> No.2579580

We have a beginner thread for stuff like this, I'd suggest you post it there

>> No.2579589

>>2579577
OP here, that's not me.

>> No.2579595

>>2579577
>>2579589
Please stop impersonating me

Sorry for making my own thread, all the dicks in my mouth made me confused

>> No.2579598

>>2579589
What's to critique about a copied anime drawing anyway? How well you can copy symbols? You could try buying a loomis book for starters.

Good luck anon.

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>>2579589
Lol how did you do that?
>>2579580
I don't intend to sift through someone else's thread for critique on my shit. Seriously what does it fucking matter, this thread isn't bothering anyone. I don't post often because I know how cancer this site is. I thought maybe I could get some quick focused criticism.

>> No.2579610

>>2579589
>>2579595
>>2579603
I'm really sorry about what's happening here.

I'll post in the beginner threads from now on.

>> No.2579611 [DELETED] 

>>2579603
You want criticism of shitty anime face sketches? As in you want us to analyse symbol drawings and copies with no composition, dimension, understanding of light, anatomy or anything of interest going on that anyone could make?

>> No.2579614

>>2579456
Anatomy
>>2579449
Tumblr
>>2579443
That's nice and all, but should be a random practice sketch, the sort you should be doing 10 times a day, every day, not displaying as work
>>2579280
I like the R and the lines. Keep practicing! You have a lot of potential.

>> No.2579615

>>2579611
He's not me, but yes, I wanted criticism on my sketches. I guess I should study mre.

I didn't know this thread was going to turn out like this. This is my first time being on /ic/.

>> No.2579619

>>2579611
Shape, spacing, lining, nuance, originality, technique, style y'know things of that caliber.
>interest
You mean your own interest

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>>2579615
Fuck you asshat if the mods have a problem with my thread they know damn well how to delete it. I'm not here to pander to petty desires. And I know damn well how to speak for myself.

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2579631

kek this thread

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>> No.2579674

>>2579543

>GCSE

underageb&

>> No.2579716

>>2579655
>>2579651
>>2579647
>>2579645
What are you doing?

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>>2579716
Whatever calls to me at the time m808

>> No.2580086

Finish it, then ask for critique (if you really think you need it)
Starting your own thread just for the critique of one unfinished little drawing is rude to others using the site. It's called shitposting. Post in a draw thread and ask from there if you don't want negative reactions.

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>>2579543
those hand. My dear god.

>> No.2580318

>>2579543
Holy FUCK you posted this last year, how fucking long does it take you to draw?

>> No.2580321

>>2579456
hahahahaha wtf

>> No.2580350

Holy shit all these impersonators here!

>> No.2580407

Could you stop signing your shitty lazyass sketches?

>> No.2580432

>>2580407
Nope sorry. It helps me practice my signature

>> No.2580442

>>2580086
And what would be the difference from here and a draw thread?
The beginner thread is full of people drawing other shit and that's not what I'm here for. And I'm sorry if it doesn't look finished to you but believe me I'm not going any farther with these. I want to know what I could've done better, what looks off, what I should stop doing, and what I should be studying.

>> No.2580458

hey laddy that loks realy boring finish up the details fag

>> No.2580462

>>2580169

How is the negro okay and I'm here getting crucified???

>> No.2580711

>>2580462
Because you don't actually want critique. You want us to tell you that your shitty anime drawings are epic.

>> No.2580772
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>Because you don't actually want critique. You want us to tell you that your shitty anime drawings are epic.

Mkay, I think I'm done here.
I haven't read much of anything constructive and this is becoming frustrating at the least.
I don't know what it is or what I said that put everyone on red alert but this isn't working out for me.

>> No.2581048 [DELETED] 

>>2580772
Good. Get out, faggot. You'll never make it with such thin skin.

>> No.2581050

>>2579456
nobody's gonna steal that.

>> No.2581405

I hope summer ends soon

>> No.2582711

Barely anything there to critique. Buy multiple sketchbooks, Fill them all with studies of faces and then Come back

>> No.2582748

The moral of the story is that if you're going to post with a name, at least use a tripcode so your thread won't be derailed by imposters.

>> No.2582797

>>2580772
>I don't know what it is or what I said that put everyone on red alert

You're not looking very hard, are you?

>> No.2582799

>>2580772
You don't seem to understand, this is constructive. Everyone here is telling you you're bad, and it's true. Just because you don't want to hear it doesn't mean it's not true. What's also true is you need to post in the beginner thread if you want to get better feedback.

>> No.2582803

>>2579456
No one will steal this ever don't worry little trip.

>> No.2582809

>>2582799
>>>2580772 (You)
>You don't seem to understand, this is constructive. Everyone here is telling you you're bad, and it's true. Just because you don't want to hear it doesn't mean it's not true. What's also true is you need to post in the beginner thread if you want to get better feedback.

>it's bad = constructive criticism

Holy shit I think 4chan just hit a new low.
I'm not defense cause anyone thinks it's bad; I don't give a shit who thinks my art is bad. I'm defensive because instead of actually getting critical advice and thoughts, I'm just getting shitposted.
I shouldn't have to post in a specific place for people to be even half decent.

You think my art is bad? Cool. TELL ME WHY.

>> No.2582810

>>2582803
Guys chill it was just a joke
I know no one wants my shit ideas lol

>> No.2582811

>>2582809
You should work on ALL basics, just look at the sticky and start posting in beginner thread instead of making your own unneeded threads.

>> No.2582812

I see some comments here and there about "practice" or "add detail", but I already intend to do those things so I disregard it.

>> No.2582817

>>2582812
Whats the point of this thread if you have it all figured out.

>> No.2582822

>>2582812
Gesture studies, your work is extremely rigid.

You're not feeling the form

>> No.2582829

>>2582817
Because that's not specific
Practice doesn't mean shit if i don't know what or how much I'm lacking
You could list millions of things to practice on.
I'm challenging anyone to give me in depth criticism or advice on anything I've posted so far.
I always have more sketches and works.

>> No.2582831

>>2582822
Holy shit, finally a modicum of insight.
I'll put gestures on the list.

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>>2582829
>I'm challenging anyone to give me in depth criticism or advice on anything I've posted so far.

You could've gotten that if you posted in the beginner threads, idiot. But because you act like an entitled little cunt, no one's going to help you.

No one is going to work with you if you act like this on this board.

>> No.2582837

>>2582829
Practice millions of things then. Also you really shouldn't/don't need to be this reliant on /ic/'s advice people have gotten far on their own (although at this rate seems like a far off dream for you slicko).

>> No.2582841

>>2582835
If this anon can't help you understand then just delete this thread and burn everything art related you own.

>> No.2582842

>>2582809
You're getting shit posted because this board gets a fuckton of threads a week just like this where people ask to crit their work when other threads are getting deleted that weren't based on "r8 my art.'
That's why we have designated threads for beginners and draw threads in general so this board isn't just riddled with "crit this and crit that" threads.
>go to beginner thread
seriously go, people are much kinder there and will actually critique your work rather than shit post you.

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>>2582831
if you read the sticky you would already know that

>> No.2582844

>>2582835
I've seen the comments for posts in those threads.
At most they only get 3 comments. 1-2 of them aren't criticism. I want to get somewhere, not stuck in a chat full of other people who don't know what they're doing.

>> No.2582850

>>2582844
well fucking deal with it, if you can't be patient then go find another place to post your shit.

>> No.2582852

>>2582844
people will critique shit there if it's worth critiquing. If you don't get any critiques that means you still suck and need more work on everything.

>> No.2582854

>>2582842

>>2580169
That would make sense except when this guy isn't getting shitposted yet I am.

But okay I get it cool. Next time beginner board.

>> No.2582858

>>2582843
Wtf is a sticky
My computer is broken so I have to use an android phone

>> No.2582859

>>2582844
People don't exactly have an obligation to critique every piece, but even aside from that your work isn't worth critiquing at this level. I recommend practicing for half a year or so and coming back to post in the beginner thread. Also lose the trip it doesn't help your reputation with other users.

>> No.2582861

>>2582854
Yeah they either get a bunch of shitposts like this one or go relatively ignored like the other one.

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>>2582858
>Wtf is a sticky
It's that one thread that shows up on the front page at all times. Have you never been on any kind of forum or image board before?

>> No.2582868

>>2582854
Stop citing that anon, look at the difference in the amount of text accompanying the image, yours in one word theirs is a paragraph detailing what they'd like advice on. Either way both yours and their post should be in the beginner thread, your post is just shittier.

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>>2582867
Is that what people call it?
I'm not an avid 4chan user (if you couldn't easily tell), but they mostly just say what not to do

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>>2582854
If I go to his thread and then call him a cunt, then will you be happy?

The only reason we're calling you out is because you don't act like how you should on this board. You don't go into someone else's house and pretend like you own the place.

You don't do that, people will call you out on that shit because we don't give two shit's about your feelings.

>> No.2582882

>>2582878
it's called a sticky on every fucking forum I've ever been on.

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>>2582881
This is an image board
Meant for images
With threads
That are constantly being deleted
If it's such a federal fucking issue then why is not posted in the sticky hmm?

>> No.2582888

>>2582885
>That are constantly being deleted

That's where you're wrong. There are no mods on /ic/. That's why we self moderate.

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>>2582888
Therein lies the where your problem begins
No wonder why you'd have a thread clot problem

If it's self managed, these are the kinds of things that should be mentioned outright in the sticky. Don't go blaming people for not abiding to invisible rules m8

>> No.2582891

>>2582889
Therein lies the where your thread should be deleted.

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>>2582891
K

>> No.2582905

Look, guys! My name is Slick Rick! You can really count on me being OP!

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>>2582899

>> No.2582923

>>2582858
>Wtf is a sticky
REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

>> No.2582927

>>2582923
Asinine amphibian associate

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>>2582888
>There are no mods on /ic/
Is that why the porn threads where getting assblasted by mods over loli and furry porn?
>>2582889
>>2582885
Read the rulez and lurk /ic/ for a week or two before posting, this generally is something you'll want to do for other boards.
At least you didn't post on a board like /a/, if you think we're bad, those w/a/ps and f/a/ggots would have torn you a new one
http://www.4chan.org/faq#whatbasics
Read the sticky
http://hubpages.com/art/how-to-draw-learn
If you have questions post it on the questions thread
>>2575331
Post your art on the Beginner thread
>>2580387

Stay the fuck away from other boards and bump your own posts, this is a slow board

>> No.2582943

>>2582937
> and bump your own posts
I meant DON'T bump your own post. Damnit, forgetting one word is all it takes