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2463812 No.2463812 [Reply] [Original]

Ill start

>> No.2463981
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2463981

idk

>> No.2464001

>>2463981
for once the blank stare can be attributed to artistic intent! The shape of her hair seems to imply an odd skull btw.

>> No.2464002

>>2463981
Whoa, wasn't expecting you to post.
Nice work

>> No.2464010
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2464010

Hi.

>> No.2464018

>>2464010
Nice!

>> No.2464127
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2464127

>>2464010

>> No.2464178

>>2463812
>>>/i/

>> No.2464278 [DELETED] 
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2464278

>>2464001
>>2464002
Thank you guys <3

>> No.2464283

pls stop this
this is /ic/.

>> No.2464284

>>2464278
You gotta do some proportion studies, brother

I think the bow in her hair is cute though

>> No.2464291
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2464291

>>2464001
>>2464002
Thank you guys!

>> No.2464295

>>2464284
Sorry, could you be more specific? What's is wrong with the proportions?

>> No.2464401

>>2464291
you legit made it so much worse, im just bumping it to see how you fix it tomorrow so i can participate as well.

>> No.2464409

>>2464291
He said spooky, not terrifying.

>> No.2464422
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2464422

>>2464291
I was just going to explain it but I'm not very good with words, so here's a redline. I made her cranium smaller and her arms thicker. Wasn't sure what was going on with the hands so I had a little fun, hope that's not too out of line.

>> No.2464436

>>2464422
The arms look too long on your redline drawing. Just look at them. She's like inspector fucking gadget lmao

>> No.2464441

>>2464436
Fair enough

>> No.2464445

>>2463981
You fucked up a potential Nibru moment.

>> No.2464803

>>2464401
I probably should had keep using the pencil tool but besides that ihdk how I made it worse. :/

>>2464422
Thanks for that, I feel you made her face a bit more masculine though, it probably it's because the jaw

>>2464409
my bad

>> No.2464866
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2464866

Thats fun

>> No.2464867

>>2464803
when will u make a patreon???
i love your art

>> No.2464921

>>2464866
Nice work

>> No.2464960

>>2464291
FiRez-senpai

>> No.2465039
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2465039

>>2463812
Well, i try
fuck

>> No.2465104
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2465104

Wicked! I get to post this again. It's more witchy than goth but whatever floats your boat

>> No.2465147
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2465147

>>2463812
Don't be scared, she gives great hugs.

>> No.2465164
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2465164

why not

>> No.2465278
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2465278

Bleh

>> No.2465294
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2465294

>> No.2465301

>>2465164
Nice stuff, program/technique?

>> No.2465305
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2465305

Hopefully, this is the less shitty one, I will leave it for a while and see if it's worth to resume later.

>>2464867
Thanks anon, that's probably still some months away. Living here means it's harder for me to receive funds for my work and my process is still not efficient enough :/

>>2464960
Hi anon senpai <3

>> No.2465329

>>2464010
It's like satsuki went through a goth phase

>> No.2465362

>>2465294
I really find this cute. Needs the background fixed though. Blurring it a bit may help.

>> No.2465364

>>2465301
PS, just painted with a hard rectangular brush on 50% flow

>> No.2465400

>>2465305
breddy gud.
If you meant for the eyes to be a little cross eyed for the spook factor, then that part is fine. If you didn't, then look at the white part of the eyes to help balance and position them.
Is there any chance that you started out planning for the head to be vertical? If so, it really shows up in the way that the hair looks like it is for a vertical head and is not aligned with the face. It looks like you had the face upright and then just rotated it instead of tilting the entire head which makes it just look awkward.
Also, your arms seem to be a lot weaker than your faces with both the forms and what you do when placing them. I would think about what she is doing more so that you can construct an idea instead of hiding things like the hands.
Good job though

>> No.2465657

>>2465294
CUTE

>> No.2465852
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2465852

bumping

>> No.2465863

Damnit, i wish i had my tablet

>> No.2465870

>>2463981
>>2464010
>>2464291
>>2464866
>>2465164
>>2465278
>>2465294
I want to wreck them all

>> No.2465897

>>2465400
Thank you and yes the spooky gaze is intentional, it surprises me that the hair comes off as misaligned, I will review it as indicated.

As for the arms, the only excuse I may have is that I did not want to use much tone for this iteration, but even so you are right their form could be much more convincing.

>> No.2465977
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2465977

I drew one but I'm not sure it's goth enough. It said spooky so I thought of witches. Oh well.

>> No.2465992
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2465992

>>2464127
Not quite the definition of Goth in mind, but I figured the Skulls and impalement added some spookiness

>> No.2466060

>>2465977
Looks quite good so far!

>> No.2466495

>>2466060
Hey thanks anon. I was pretty happy with how it was coming along, maybe I'll get some more in depth critique on it in one of the drawthreads and work on finishing it.

>> No.2466499

>>2465977
looks more like a cabaret dancer than a goth chick, I like it.

>> No.2466565

>>2466499
Holy shit thank you, I was trying to figure out what kind of look this was like. I kept thinking of not quite steam punk and not quite gothic lollita. After googling caberet I found all kinds of nice details I can add to this to make it complete. I still need to make her more witchy but this gives me a good frame to work in and keep it cohesive. Thanks anon!

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>> No.2468183
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2468183

Take this tangentially related fan art I made a few months ago.

>> No.2468196

>>2465294
Really nice.

>> No.2468585
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2468585

im sad venture bros is over already, so here's triana

>> No.2468594

>>2468585
Nice and good choice.

>> No.2468731

>>2464422
Nice redline, feels like it has a lot more solid foundation, the features are also a lot better aligned/not off-center, and the pose is a lot more natural looking, although like >>2464436 said, the arms seem a little long/disconnected.

>> No.2468732

>>2465039
kind of cute, anon

>> No.2468741

>>2465977
please share with us when you are finished, it's looking gorgeous so far

>> No.2468758

>>2464803
>I probably should had keep using the pencil tool but besides that ihdk how I made it worse. :/
Wut? Are you drunk.

>> No.2468784

>>2468183
oh shit YN

you got a blog?

>> No.2468804

>>2468784
Yep, happy someone recognized it! I have a blog but I don't really post as much as I should though. http://koselo.tumblr.com

I was trying to do a Yume Nikki themed illustration every day during October because I wasn't terribly interested in Inktober or any of the Halloween challenges. I only got less than halfway through and some of them were "cheat" days lol.

A little nervous putting this out there but you can click on the "YN-a-day" tag on the side to see the rest of them. I will probably put more stuff out there like this in the future once I get back up on my feet.

>> No.2468877

>>2466739

i like this one

>> No.2469157
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2469157

>>2468804
oh man i've seen your stuff in the tag, thank you for posting good content there.

>> No.2469191
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2469191

oh this thread

>> No.2469374

>>2469191
Bretty good, would sodomize

>> No.2469423

>>2465294
i love your colors

>> No.2469461

>>2464422
>redlining it to be worse
>/ic/

>> No.2469465

>>2465977
Sorry to butt in my personal feelings, but somehow I just find this pose utterly dull and totally uninteresting. It's not just your drawing, I mean it looks fine on a technical level but that pose is just so god awfully overused and just plane unsatisfying

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2471195

>>2466739
jane?

>> No.2471222

>>2468741
Thanks so much anon. I need to practice finishing things because I've been very bad about not doing that lately. If I do any more with it, I'll probably post it in the alt style or draw thread, this thread will probably be gone before I get around to it.

>> No.2471225

>>2471222
Finish it for us, anon.

>> No.2471231

>>2471225
I'll do my best o7

>> No.2471237
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2471237

I-is this okay?

>> No.2471239

>>2465294
blog pleaaaaseeee

>> No.2471245

>>2469191
Those fucking ugly little hats
Nobody wears those

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2471298

>>2471225

>> No.2471334

>>2471245
I've seen goth lolitas wear them in the street

>> No.2471711
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2471711

>>2471245
>little hats
>ugly
appalling taste, appalling sir

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