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Looking for advice on this, I plan on redoing it. I noticed a lot of my proportions are off, this is one of my first time drawing without a real reference, just a cartoon.

>> No.2456614
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>>2456612
Reference if anyone wants it

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you've got the spark my friend

>> No.2456624

spark detected

>> No.2456626

>>2456612
oh god, i thought those spots on her chest were nipples
>too high
>one too many

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Stop looking up ' grunge girl tumblr' in goodle and start developing your own style
i cannot stress this enough

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Well lets turn this into a full advice thread since i need some help. When doing muscle groups on the torso what muscle groups tend to stand out where should my lines be darker express more form etc and general critique plz.

>> No.2460400

>>2456612
Pay attention to tones and textures, do more studies from life, Study Art history.

>> No.2460442

>>2459437
Loomis and vilppu

>> No.2460521

>>2459437

It's time to pick up Hampton. You need to learn more gesture and form inbetween anatomy studies.

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>>2460442
>>2460521
definitely taking a step out of my comfort zone with vilppu that guys got the most gesturesque drawing ive ever seen. But i also would like to see a little more stability in the drawing as im still trying to fully understand anatomy atm. any recommendations for an artist that defines the muscles a bit more?

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>>2456612
Looks pretty nice imo, might wanna work more on the chest in terms of shape of the ribcage and slant of the back.Also the breasts seem a bit... Off directionally.