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/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

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Does writing count? I'd really like some critique of my story, thoughts and insights. What could be improved or built on, what could be removed or added. Do I have talent?

http://archiveofourown.org/chapters/9674682?show_comments=true&view_adult=true&view_full_work=false#comments

Yes I'm a grill.

>> No.2447346

>>2447340
is there a joke at the end? cause if not im not gonna read all that

>> No.2447347

>>2447340
ever hear of /lit/?

>> No.2447351

>>2447340
1. No
2. Too bad.
3. You should remove yourself from this planet
4. No.
5. I'm not giving your shit pageviews for you to masturbate over
6. Unnecessary to add and we don't give a shit

>> No.2447358

>>2447347
/thread
>>>/lit/

>> No.2447359

This reeks of someone trying to get a troll army on a fanfic author they don't like.

Take that catty bullshit back to /cgl/

>> No.2447360

>>2447347
Lit does not take anything seriously unless it's been published. Honest thoughts please.

>> No.2447368
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2447368

Haters gonna hate

>> No.2447378

>>2447368
You understand!
Still won't read it, but good job figuring out tits or gtfo

>> No.2447471

>>2447360
honestly? fuck off to /lit/.

>> No.2447537

>>2447471
What part of lit only cares about published BOOKS don't you understand?
This is not a full length book this is my story, only the first chapter.

>> No.2447558

>>2447368
Disgusting.

>> No.2447560

>>2447340
Literature is art. Maybe I'll read in 10 mins

>> No.2447562

>>2447558
Homosexual.

>> No.2447565

>>2447537
Literature is not art, it's literature. Both terms are vague as fuck, but you can still differentiate between art and literature.
Your fanfic doesn't belong here, go cry a river at >>>/lit/.

>> No.2447568

>>2447562
Close enough, pedo though.

>> No.2447577

>>2447565
If you love lit so much maybe YOU should go there.

>> No.2447586
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2447586

>>2447568
Ugh. Seek help.

>> No.2447587

>>2447568
go back to your granny porn

>> No.2447591

>dragon age fanfiction
>lit doesn't like it
>wonder why
maybe actually try next time

>> No.2447601

>>2447577

He's not the one shoving his story down people's throats you moron. I hope you're a shitposter at this point.

/ic/ is pretty much entirely visual art, not literature. That's what the literature board is for. If you're butthurt that the literature board won't take you seriously so you're posting it somewhere you hope to get more praise you're in the wrong place.

>> No.2447608

>>2447586
Seriously, how do you like that.
That girl is so unnatural, ungenuine, impure.
I'm sure she has a great personality though.

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2447630

>>2447608
Perfection. Out of your league little boy, you shouldn't hate for that.

>> No.2447638

>>2447630
She tries to achieve perfection, maybe, fighting her age.
That just shows that young is perfection. Puberty and age destroy that perfection.

I don't hate on the girl. I would probably like her. I like the effort.

>> No.2447655

>>2447537
Doesn't fucking matter

Wrong fucking board, gtfo you dumb cunt.

>> No.2447656

>>2447601
>/ic/ is pretty much entirely visual art, not literatur
not pretty much. it IS entirely visual arts. had faggot OP read the board rules he'd have already known this.

>> No.2447658

>>2447638
Wrong, your opinions are stupid and you should feel stupid.

>> No.2447664

>>2447656
By the rules there is no place to post amateur literature other than /b/.

>/lit/ - Literature
>All literature discussion is welcome, however >fan-fic is not allowed.

>> No.2447676

>>2447340
It's so flowery, it's a chore to read. You're a shitter. Read more.

>> No.2447722

>>2447676
Flowery how? Elaborate please, this is the best response so far, actual constructive criticism

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2447724

>>2447664
You understand, have some more.

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>>2447724
These type of people are the worst.

Stashing pictures of chicks and them flaunting them on 4chan like your that chick so that thirty virgins can lust over them.

That shit ain't going to work here, anon. Not in /ic/.

>> No.2447734

>>2447664
not all amateur literature is fan-fic you massive retard. that's just steamy frodo/sam sex stories and shit.

>> No.2447741

>>2447729
>pretending to be someone else on an anonymous board

Do you really do that?