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>>2442908

Not so much imo. It's always super mid-centered. Not so interesting I think. Also your pieces are quite repetitive. I don't know what you are trying to do but personally I also really dislike seeing faces in these types of work. Adds an element of non-abstractness that ruins the whole.

I really really like this one though http://i.imgur.com/fQZxFlt.png

Have attached one of my abstract doodles so you get a feel for where I'm coming from (I jus ttry to entertain the eye and play with texture, temperature, angles and value)

>> No.2442926

Is there even any compositional thought behind this?

Seems to me that you just slapped a lot of shit into the middle.

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>>2442908
i was also just about to say its all in the middle.