Alternative Art/Anime General

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Alternative Art/Anime General Chicocalte Fri Mar 4 20:08:26 2016 No.2427906 [Reply] [Original]

Last Thread >>2407246
This thread is meant for artists who might want to try to make anime work in-between their studies. It is strongly recommended that you use this thread in conjunction with learning the elements and fundamentals of art. You can also discuss the visual elements of various professional artists as well if you keep it relatively articulate and civil.

Submit your drawings, receive feedback or critique others! Share your knowledge and remember to thank those who've critiqued or red-lined your drawings. Most importantly, have tanoshi!

>Fresh off the boat? Get back on the boat and read THIS:
http://www.squidoo.com/how-to-draw-learn

https://sites.google.com/site/ourwici/
>Proko
http://www.proko.com/videos/
>Ctrl+Paint
http://ctrlpaint.com/
>Hitokaku Index
http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
>0033
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317
>List of active livestreams
http://livestreamstatuslist.appspot.com/
>fellowBro's books
http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
>Tutorial/Reference Collection
http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
>Risingsun Anime Tutorials
http://iradukai.com/
>Figures
http://reference.sketchdaily.net/
>Pose Practice
http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html

Remember the words of our good friend Glen Vilppu: “No rules, just tools.”

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>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 4 22:39:16 2016 No.2427988 alt thread is dead as a motherfuck

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 04:13:39 2016 No.2428157 >>2427988 draw thread is pretty slow too Isn't it because everyone is at the LAS thread these days?

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 04:25:10 2016 No.2428164 >>2427906 Who made this?

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 07:10:41 2016 No.2428256 File: 190 KB, 690x1000, tsola.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Thoughts on this/CC before going any further.

Anonymous Sat Mar 5 08:18:40 2016 No.2428288

>>2428256
neck is connecting way too far to the right, also the clavicles are pointing the wrong direction, foreshortening on her right (our left) arm is mucked up to where it looks way too short, overall the pose and drawing feels very stiff, the boobs are facing toward the viewer while her ribcage is facing almost at a 3/4ths view, also look into arm anatomy, you're making a classic mistake on the shoulder muscle of the arm holding the whip handle, whole thing feels flat

tl;dr go and study how to think and draw in 3d as well as do more overall anatomy studies, also study faces, basically just keep studying everything, you've gotten this far, you will only become stronger still, and remember
NEVER GIVE UP

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 08:20:12 2016 No.2428289 File: 118 KB, 630x626, smart water.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] also, i cleaned this up so i could hopefully post it hear and maybe get some feedback since the pron thread's gone nuclear

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 08:29:02 2016 No.2428293 original drawing ? searching purposes

>>	Chicocalte Sat Mar 5 08:43:35 2016 No.2428306 >>2428164 >>2428293 anon from last thread

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 10:28:59 2016 No.2428352 File: 105 KB, 1419x1100, larmekei4.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I keep trying to over render simplistic kawaii anime faces and then it looks like nightmare fuel

Anonymous Sat Mar 5 11:14:09 2016 No.2428384
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Is there any resource simmilar to that 0033 stuff but in english? I like the way it looks but I can't speak alien so it's hard to make much sense of it, sometimes I can get what it means from context but usually it's just random drawings with alien symbols next to it.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 11:33:16 2016 No.2428393 >>2428164 tenhit.tumblr.com

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 11:45:36 2016 No.2428403 >>2428384 Some of those are translated to english Anyone have them?

Anonymous Sat Mar 5 11:50:30 2016 No.2428411

>>2428352
You have the same problem that is and i'll tell you what we both need to do to fix it: Learn facial structure. It'll help. It's helping me already. Study that, study faces, then go back to stylization.

Cause your coloring itsself is not the problem here, your understanding of facial structure is what's giving the colored version that uncanny valley feeling.

Anonymous Sat Mar 5 11:55:58 2016 No.2428421
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2 of the 6 protagonists from my future experimental comics.

Depending on their current appearance, is there any assumption you might have? and why? ( for example, right one has weird orange arm, she must be neo-nazi. )
Yes. I know they are muddy and generic, I'm working on it.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 12:00:38 2016 No.2428427 >>2428421 I like your style. The one on the left is a slut because of the gym shorts and loose top. Right has some bs magic armor shit that makes her skin indestructible.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 12:27:30 2016 No.2428466 >>2428421 The one on the right looks like she fisted a bag of cheetos

Anonymous Sat Mar 5 12:33:54 2016 No.2428477
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Fuck snow, I'm done. Onto the next one.
>>2428421
First off, I've been a fan of your style since I saw the drawing with the girls gathered around the table playing poker or something, can't remember.
Anyways, the left one looks like your unlikely neet protagonist with hallucination problems that gets picked out of her zone of comfort zone.
The right one looks like a mercenary rave girl that's bout to detonate an EMP and take everything electronic [cyborg or w/e] down with her in an act of heroic insanity.

>>	Lienum Sat Mar 5 12:40:34 2016 No.2428484 File: 986 KB, 718x898, we.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] well, whatever

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 13:20:35 2016 No.2428581 when did /ic/ became a rabid haven of circlejerking

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 13:28:23 2016 No.2428605 >>2428581 When you last posted and no one gave you any attention.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 13:31:16 2016 No.2428609 >>2428605 poor little babby cant handle a slice of real life aww... ;-(

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 13:47:45 2016 No.2428649 File: 178 KB, 1050x700, roks2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] studies were getting a bit boring, so i added some scale and a loli

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 13:51:03 2016 No.2428652 >>2428649 wow this is so amazing i have no critique its perfect like all the works here. id give you an ilama if /ic/ allows it

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 13:51:52 2016 No.2428654 File: 54 KB, 377x330, Untitled-1 (2).jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2428652

>>	aNONYMOUS Sat Mar 5 13:52:01 2016 No.2428655 >>2428649 That's a intense fetish...

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 13:52:25 2016 No.2428656 >>2428649 Is it a city within a giant cave next to a giant loli, or is it a normal loli and cave with a miniature city and people? Very interesting.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 13:53:28 2016 No.2428658 >>2428649 She's about to have her way with those poor people and their cities, isn't she?

>>	gwyn Sat Mar 5 14:11:04 2016 No.2428677 File: 215 KB, 873x947, goomebella pink.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] drew a goombella

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 14:21:04 2016 No.2428690 >>2428677 this is the best in the thread one ilama for u

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 14:31:08 2016 No.2428701 >>2428649 the dept makes it look like it's a normal girl, in a normal sized cave, with a small town, and knowing you that's not what you wanted to show look into some atmospheric dept, since I am not good enough to teach you, just to notice it

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 15:55:26 2016 No.2428820 File: 137 KB, 1015x1004, dragons crown.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I just want to say that I adore the header pic. It kind of reminds me of Dragons Crown.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 16:02:25 2016 No.2428827 File: 50 KB, 620x227, vanillaware2011.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2428820 I'm pretty sure that's Odin's Sphere Kamitani is pretty awesome

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 16:06:31 2016 No.2428834 >>2428827 anime style is so refreshing when there is actual dimension and movement in the pictures

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 16:30:22 2016 No.2428878 File: 242 KB, 807x720, Photo on 3-5-16 at 4.26 PM.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2428820 Thanks man :)

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 16:56:59 2016 No.2428940 >>2428878 very nice! do you just post here or do you have a blog somewhere?

Anonymous Sat Mar 5 17:09:04 2016 No.2428966
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>>2428421
nice drawings, the only things that stick out to me is the rifles. The one on the left is a hk416, usually the ejection port should be on the right side. The one on the right the optics dont make sense. You drew the eotech then the magnifier, its should be the other way around, then again this can be a stylized choice. Its subjective but alot of gun and /k/ fags will notice the attention to realism. Little details will go a long way.

Anonymous Sat Mar 5 18:11:37 2016 No.2429088

>>2428427
>>2428466
lol. No!! but fair enough. thanks.

>>2428477
You are one of the very first fans of mine.
I'm not bragging about it and I'm not a pro, but knowing there's someone likes my stuff gives me chills.
I've been making fictional characters for comics but your assumption is very convincing and interesting.

>>2428966
Actually, the left one is HK416A5 16.5" + NcSTAR CPO + Magpul AFG.
the right one is M39 EMR + Holographic Hybrid Sight II™ EXPS2-2 with G33.STS Magnifier + Crimson Trace MVF-515.

So basically, you are correct. DEAD CENTER correct. even your eotech ref image is identical as mine. thought my drawing is not big enough to identify small things such as sight, but you did it.

My ref photo for HK416 was in wrong direction, so I mirrored image, then drew from that. without knowing that ejection port is also flipped. I know it's not generally correct to draw like that, but it's easy to miss. Also, HK416 in my drawing is little bit short. don't you think? too short.

I laughed myself that I've been misunderstanding how magnifier works in hybrid sight. so apparently, magnifier comes closer to my eye, not further. silly me. Thank you for mentioning.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 18:24:35 2016 No.2429108 >>2429088 autism

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 18:49:46 2016 No.2429130 File: 1.00 MB, 1920x1200, Plug.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Shitfuck i give up. When i was sketching it up i knew i will fuck up the background and so i did. Nobody can stop me from fucking everything up.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 18:53:12 2016 No.2429133 File: 87 KB, 540x482, 1457207675395.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2429130 >Nobody can stop me from fucking everything up. Atta boy.

>>	Tyrell Scott Sat Mar 5 21:16:18 2016 No.2429376 Whoever drew this is God. I hope they are still in this thread. I am an assistant recruiter for Ringling College of arts and design, and would like to see more of your work for a potential scholarship of up to $10,000

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 21:20:22 2016 No.2429384 >>2429376 >My dad works for Nintendo.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 21:25:17 2016 No.2429390 File: 23 KB, 500x352, princessbride.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2429376 $10,000 exactly? You arent willing to negotiate more?

>>	Iain Cadwell :^) Sat Mar 5 21:29:10 2016 No.2429393 >>2429376 works perfect thanks I now earn 100 dollars from home every day!

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 21:38:47 2016 No.2429396 >>2427906 >that construction What type of method was use to measure those face features?

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 21:52:42 2016 No.2429404 >>2429396 Probably just intuition and eyes at center of face, bottom of nose 1/2 between center and chin, bottom of lips at 1/2 that.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 21:59:04 2016 No.2429414 >>2428393 Thank you.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 22:01:27 2016 No.2429418 File: 233 KB, 500x750, tsuki_bak.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2427906

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 5 22:29:15 2016 No.2429435 File: 520 KB, 600x800, gintoki doodle.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2429418 also tried experimenting with random colors

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 06:53:58 2016 No.2429807 File: 79 KB, 800x609, pixie.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] raw sketch lf any crit

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 07:15:37 2016 No.2429818 >>2429807 looks good my dude

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 07:16:13 2016 No.2429819 >>2428966 Thank you good spirit of /k/ for pointing out disgusting inaccuracies in gun drawings. You never fail to warm my heart.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 07:51:17 2016 No.2429843 >>2429807 the muscles of the arms don't "flow" together too well, so when you tinker with it further I'd pay attention to that since they're a bit blocky right now.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 09:33:18 2016 No.2429942 File: 624 KB, 680x944, oni bamboo.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Done but in the monkeyhouse. If there are any glaring mistakes lemme know. (right hand is supposed to be much bigger)

Anonymous Sun Mar 6 09:38:27 2016 No.2429948

>>2429942
Even if you're going for big hands try and make a curvature more apparent in the wrist holding the mace.

Right now the hand is jutting out, but if you moved the tops of the knuckles down and to the right a bit, then adjusted the hand accordingly, it would look better.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 09:49:47 2016 No.2429966 >>2429807 ankles could be a bit thinner

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 09:51:50 2016 No.2429968 File: 549 KB, 907x674, NiznqfQ.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2429948 Ty for feedback, this does feel a bit more natural. I realise I have a habit of drawing hands in the same angles. Gonna work on that for my next pic

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 09:58:25 2016 No.2429979 >>2428411 Thanks buddy, I'll get back to the grinding stone for faces.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 10:10:19 2016 No.2429990 File: 116 KB, 800x609, pixie1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] thx for the feedback I might go for shadowing with a bit of hatching so forms don't get lost any feedback? >>2429968 make left hand giant too

Anonymous Sun Mar 6 10:24:49 2016 No.2430007

>>2429990
really cute, but i do think the hatching makes the flowers look a bit flat, especially the one in the background. I also feel like the flowers would look more realistic if you'd make the petals overlap a bit more with the brown middle part they're connected to

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 10:25:56 2016 No.2430009 File: 46 KB, 609x712, ss+(2016-03-06+at+05.23.41).jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2429968 I think the anon was talking about something like this. Like the rhythm that comes from the wrist to the thumb.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 10:29:43 2016 No.2430014 >>2430009 SDhit fuck I messed that up cause it was mirrored in my drawing software. That looks many times more fluid than either of the things I did.. Thanks for the extra effort on my part.

Anonymous Sun Mar 6 10:41:13 2016 No.2430037
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>>2429990
your sketch was much better than this. Almost everything about it was more appealing, line wise.

Try experimenting with concave shapes for the arms, they'll make them look more feminine and the muscle transitions smoother (and again more feminine)

>>	M Sun Mar 6 11:12:13 2016 No.2430083 File: 196 KB, 900x685, pixie2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] thx senpaitachi

>>	M Sun Mar 6 11:13:15 2016 No.2430085 >>2430037 will try that now

>>	M Sun Mar 6 11:33:40 2016 No.2430114 File: 162 KB, 862x656, pixie3.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 13:41:27 2016 No.2430273 File: 230 KB, 1260x840, roks3.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2428701 is this better?

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 14:03:12 2016 No.2430297 >>2430273 I think she should be affected by atmospheric perspective more.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 14:52:10 2016 No.2430340 >>2430273 That fucking CIA guy

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 15:15:43 2016 No.2430379 >>2430340 He wasn't alone.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 15:25:45 2016 No.2430388 File: 41 KB, 320x240, 1329561922081.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >when you're drawing a cute anime girl but you have to switch to boring landscape study every time your parents enter your room

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 15:27:26 2016 No.2430391 >>2430388 >not hanging up cute anime girl posters in your room to condition your parents it as a normal thing Grow some balls.

>>	Poetic Sun Mar 6 15:54:07 2016 No.2430411 File: 428 KB, 708x1000, serenredrawsmall.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Last time, I screwed up my anatomy and my rendering was too flat. So I focused on those this time. What should I work on for the sake of improvement? Also, how's the girl?

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 15:59:05 2016 No.2430415 >>2430388 >10 years later >you are now a pro landscape artist >oh and you still live with your parents

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 16:40:36 2016 No.2430458 >>2430388 mfw my family actually likes cute animu chicks

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 16:44:05 2016 No.2430461 File: 199 KB, 1000x872, Morrigan.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] other than the fact that it's not done, is there anything odd that stands out?

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 16:52:23 2016 No.2430473 >>2430461 the right boob for some reason

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 16:55:43 2016 No.2430479 File: 46 KB, 683x936, 10005351_489270127918212_1387342935_n.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 16:57:43 2016 No.2430482 >>2430458 your family might be autistic

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 17:02:40 2016 No.2430490 >>2430482 idk about that, but I know for sure one of them is gay

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 17:04:45 2016 No.2430495 File: 943 KB, 866x575, quickfix.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2430273 Why is there so much empty/redundant space in this picture?

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 17:16:59 2016 No.2430520 >>2428677 If there was a book on Goomba anatomy then I would tell you how your drawing is complete shit, but there isn't, so I'll say that it's pretty good

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 17:21:56 2016 No.2430533 >>2430461 Yeah, somethings def wrong with the boobs

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 17:26:02 2016 No.2430542 >>2430473 >>2430533 Well fuck. I'll go back to the sketch with some reference then. Ty

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 17:28:13 2016 No.2430546 File: 572 KB, 734x1007, cliff.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	FiRez !!tndrCZJHE+I Sun Mar 6 18:03:12 2016 No.2430635 File: 218 KB, 576x1024, sketch1457305191330.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Finished my 1st stream. I will upload the video later.

>>	Nose feratu ¢π Sun Mar 6 18:54:14 2016 No.2430707 >>2430635 her left eye is drooping and her nose mouth isnt following the angle and need to be slightly separated

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 19:01:02 2016 No.2430724 >>2430495 Oh wow, I started this as an environment pic at first, but it never crossed my mind to do that. this is looking like a good idea, thank you, anon.

Anonymous Sun Mar 6 19:10:31 2016 No.2430754
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I feel burnt out with this. I didn't have any particular direction to start with which might have something to do with it, but I've come to a point where I feel like now I'm just polishing a turd. Any thoughts or paintovers would be appreciated.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 19:36:30 2016 No.2430790 >>2430495 how did you realize that mistake, is it even possible to get to your level

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 19:38:46 2016 No.2430794 >>2429418 Is there anything wrong with those proportions and anatomy?

>>	Nose feratu ¢π Sun Mar 6 19:40:34 2016 No.2430795 >>2430754 were you following a cyarin tutorial?

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 21:16:25 2016 No.2430869 >>2430795 no tutorials, started with painting the nose from imagination for practice then just kept going from there. And just checked out Cyarin, looks decent so thanks for the ref ^-^

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 21:54:43 2016 No.2430884 >>2430794 yes, plenty

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 6 22:29:25 2016 No.2430923 >>2430884 Which parts please

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 00:08:39 2016 No.2431014 How long did it take for you guys to finish Drawing on the Right Side?

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 00:54:05 2016 No.2431045 >>2431014 a couple days

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 01:02:46 2016 No.2431052 >>2430635 ily firez bby pls have my children.

Nose feratu ¢π Mon Mar 7 02:13:59 2016 No.2431117

>>2430923
your drawing doesnt have a single correct aspect and its really annoying to go through works like that and say what is wrong. Thats the reason nobody bothers.

At your level, let go of extreme perspective and learn to draw things correctly at 0p

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 02:37:58 2016 No.2431126 >>2431117 Just general advice please, I need to see what youre seeing other than the arms

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 02:42:32 2016 No.2431130 >>2430546 I've been seeing your sketches for a little while now, do you have a blog anon? I like your buildings.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 04:57:23 2016 No.2431179 >>2430461 Flip the image dude something's fucked in the face.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 05:22:54 2016 No.2431199 >>2428649 giant loli anon is this you

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 05:58:45 2016 No.2431211 >>2431199 Yes hello

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 07:40:58 2016 No.2431260 >>2429942 >looking at this >Huh, I kinda like that >Go on my Tumblr later >turns out Im following you Small world

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 08:08:49 2016 No.2431275 File: 182 KB, 1403x992, laying down.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 08:19:55 2016 No.2431281 >>2431211 can i have the link to your pixiv?

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 08:36:51 2016 No.2431289 >>2431281 http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=304834

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 08:42:40 2016 No.2431293 >>2431289 How about a Tumblr?

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 08:54:06 2016 No.2431299 >>2428289 The upper leg is long af.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 09:29:08 2016 No.2431314 File: 94 KB, 800x533, haku.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2431293 ain't got a tumblr sorry.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 09:30:03 2016 No.2431315 >>2431314 You wanna make one? I follow U

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 10:01:38 2016 No.2431337 File: 54 KB, 361x636, Nozomi filia Cosplay.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] rate /ic/

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 10:03:45 2016 No.2431338 >>2431337 The Style I wish to emulate but still am learning to draw Prettygood

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 10:34:21 2016 No.2431353 File: 2.98 MB, 2201x2272, 20160306_211902-1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Got high and drew a purple dude last night

Lust Mon Mar 7 10:52:30 2016 No.2431365
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there is my true problem. i dont like the chinese cartoons style at all, is too flat for me, BUT, my "semi-realistic kr0npr1nz wannabe style" is fuckin disgusting, how can i fix this, help me /ic/

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 11:07:08 2016 No.2431372 >>2431365 >Study fundamentals >Study head and face >Understand how the face works >Stylize the face >Look at other artist and understand how they stylize >Replicate their style >Study some more >You can draw eyes now

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 11:18:10 2016 No.2431382 >>2430495 She's a big girl

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 11:19:24 2016 No.2431383 >>2431382 Bane?

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 11:46:09 2016 No.2431404 >>2431365 >i dont like the chinese cartoons style at all Because your face is terribly done and looks like shit. The problem comes from you in both cases, not from the style.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 11:52:00 2016 No.2431415 >>2431404 thats a chicken scratch lol

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 12:00:43 2016 No.2431421 >>2431415 Is that supposed to be an excuse? Because all I'm seeing is that you're complaining how you don't like "chinese cartoon style", then you show that you can't draw it for shit. Same for semi realistic.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 12:37:02 2016 No.2431455 >>2431130 http://waxnova.tumblr.com/

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 12:42:52 2016 No.2431460 >>2428649 look at the size of people close to that cylinder bulding they are way too big compered to taht bulding.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 13:22:16 2016 No.2431508 File: 241 KB, 1260x840, roks4.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2431315 nope sorry. >>2431460 i tried to follow >>2430495 's suggestions.

>>	FiRez !!tndrCZJHE+I Mon Mar 7 14:32:28 2016 No.2431614 >>2430707 It's quite subtle but you're right, I will try to be more careful >>2431052 ily too anon <3. I speed up the thing to 3 mins: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dl12flxAOd8 The music is also mine, sorry about that

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 14:42:04 2016 No.2431625 >>2431508 i like the prev version better it shows more environment knowldedge and loli is not the focus subject of the illustrat

>>	Nose feratu ¢π Mon Mar 7 15:13:46 2016 No.2431656 >>2431337 4.9/10?

Anonymous Mon Mar 7 17:54:34 2016 No.2431876
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This stylization thing is really fucking hard. I've been trying to make a stylized drawing of a girl from the dorm that I sometimes see in the halls. She is small and cute, she's like a cute mouse: Her face is sorta squashe like an elipsoid shape or something with button nose and she has those frizzy hair like hermione did in the first hp movie but black. Also wears glassess that literally are the same shape like her head. I've already fucking tore through 6 pages of sketches and I either make her into a rodent or she's not cute enough. How do I deal? I did not think this would be so fucking hard especially since she already looks like a cartoon character irl.

Pic related are my closest sketches. Messy, I know, It was already an hour of sketching and I was kinda mad and tired. The one on the right is a bit too sexy and bold but it's nice and round. The left one is really closer in cuteness but it's not eound enough. I feel like her cheeks should be higher to make it rounder but all attempts fail.

I guess I'm asking for advice? I don't even know, I guess I just wanted to vent my frustrations to someone.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 18:14:09 2016 No.2431903 >>2430495 Much better before sempai

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 18:14:43 2016 No.2431904 >>2431876 oh god this is terrifying

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 18:17:49 2016 No.2431907 somehow this >>2430495 looks better than >>2430273 >>2431508

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 18:30:54 2016 No.2431932 >>2431907 Sorry... I'll try to work on it more. I can't figure out why though...

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 18:32:14 2016 No.2431933 >>2431903 I much prefer the girl at a larger size, but is it perhaps the over-detailing of things that's making it look worse?

>>	Nose feratu ¢π Mon Mar 7 19:05:04 2016 No.2432016 >>2431614 how do i catch your streams bB? We should make a thread just for you so we can bump it when you're streaming, im sure that would go well with the community!

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 19:07:04 2016 No.2432020 >>2431337 would fug/10

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 19:11:49 2016 No.2432034 >>2431508 there's no way the water could be so deep that close to the shore, just saiyan, unless she's, you know, kneeling, in wich case it looks silly

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 19:14:00 2016 No.2432039 >>2431876 looks like the rugrats all grown up after meth

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 7 19:14:16 2016 No.2432040 File: 186 KB, 1050x700, roks4b.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2431903 >>2431907 Well, I did what I could quickly. Probably can figure out what to do with it more after work.

Anonymous Mon Mar 7 19:14:46 2016 No.2432043

>>2430546
It seems like you have a lot of trouble with hair and cloth, and I would soften the edge of the front plane of the face, considering it's a grill. Some line weight to make the image read better would do wonders here. I like this but it's hard to look at without line weight and anything to make it seem less crowded.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 8 06:59:37 2016 No.2432719 >>2431876 what is this thing

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 8 08:04:18 2016 No.2432764 I want to build some kind of device that sends a signal to my computer the moment someone opens the door telling it to switch workspace or something like that

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 8 08:22:31 2016 No.2432776 >>2431876 Nice muscle elves :^)

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 8 09:29:28 2016 No.2432841 >>2432040 Now she looks like a cardboard cutout. Try increasing the contrast a bit and add more shadow or something. >>2431876 Looks like something from a European cg cartoon

>>	FiRez !!tndrCZJHE+I Tue Mar 8 12:37:31 2016 No.2433104 File: 760 KB, 741x1300, odat3.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2432016 I have my doubts, mostly due to the usual trolls but if I ever were to stream consistently I will post it on my blog. <-Trying to find some good base colors

>>	Nose feratu ¢π Tue Mar 8 12:59:50 2016 No.2433129 >>2433104 I would like it to be a thing that exists, but i was obviously joking.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 8 13:17:28 2016 No.2433151 How the fug do you start drawing animu? I can never think of how to simplify stuff. Should I just study other styles and just pick shit I like from them?

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 8 14:01:57 2016 No.2433211 File: 250 KB, 882x496, maxresdefault.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2431876 Is she from whoville

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 8 14:06:23 2016 No.2433222 >>2431876 dude just learn your fundamentals, learn some character design theory, study other artists that have a style you like and you will have a better time

>>	fuckingtripfag !VDpnjBYkP2 Tue Mar 8 14:07:07 2016 No.2433225 File: 712 KB, 552x785, witchwoman.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 8 14:17:39 2016 No.2433256 >>2430479 Femurs as long as entire upper body

>>	M Tue Mar 8 14:24:09 2016 No.2433265 File: 440 KB, 1000x732, fox.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2433104 make her pelvis bone show more hngg her neck is too long right now, and her jaw is too big it seems jhon leno draw a bee around

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 8 14:25:26 2016 No.2433267 >>2431299 they're both long, the bottom one is just experiencing some foreshortening

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 8 14:26:50 2016 No.2433271 >>2432040 What if she is hiding instead. The environment study is dope.

>>	FiRez !!tndrCZJHE+I Tue Mar 8 15:29:49 2016 No.2433344 >>2433129 Sorry, I meant the stream but I appreciate the sentiment <3 >>2433265 Thanks I will try to fix those later in the process, I don't want to mess with the layer mask at this moment. Nice wolf btw, I just wish his fur looked softer

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 8 15:33:40 2016 No.2433348 >>2433267 To clarify, the upper part of both legs are long. Below the knees look fine

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 8 19:06:52 2016 No.2433695 File: 203 KB, 900x1114, DarkChylde_wip1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I kinda want to finish this, any major problems?

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 8 19:27:52 2016 No.2433738 >>2432040 I don't know if this will work but maybe create a focal point by blurring the front plane a bit?

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 8 19:38:17 2016 No.2433760 File: 8 KB, 298x71, greatadviceorgreatestadvice.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2433151

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 8 19:50:49 2016 No.2433784 >>2431508 the cave just looks like a normal cave tho. it makes it seem like those are just really small people. also the lolis design doesnt fit the environment but thats just me

Anonymous Tue Mar 8 19:59:33 2016 No.2433797
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>>2433738
I've always seen that being done, but I'm always not sure how much of blur is too little or too much.

>>2433271
It was one and then I added the girl lol

>>2432841
I'll try to define the left side of her form with a bit more light and add some more shadows to her body later.

I'm mainly trying to adjust the small city/her size so that she belivably fits in the body of water at the moment.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 8 20:51:57 2016 No.2433870 >>2433695 her left hand is flat like paper, unless you are fixng it later when coloring

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 8 21:04:33 2016 No.2433885 >>2433870 C-coloring, yeah... I'll definitely fix it up if/when I do finish it, thanks anon.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 8 21:15:54 2016 No.2433904 >>2433797 oh I really like it this way

>>	fuckingtripfag !VDpnjBYkP2 Wed Mar 9 00:47:21 2016 No.2434157 >>2428649 have some tiny bats fly near here head, just to concrete the scale of everything.

>>	Anonymous Wed Mar 9 02:26:14 2016 No.2434217 >>2434157 i doubt even the largest bat would be visible at that distance

>>	Anonymous Wed Mar 9 04:37:15 2016 No.2434305 >>2430546 really enjoying your drawings, keep it up!

>>	Anonymous Wed Mar 9 17:41:47 2016 No.2435033 File: 23 KB, 377x330, New Canvas.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2428654 Quick and dirty, but it should be helpful.

>>	Anonymous Wed Mar 9 17:43:43 2016 No.2435037 >>2431382 for you

>>	Anonymous Wed Mar 9 17:51:58 2016 No.2435058 File: 3.03 MB, 1260x840, Untitled-1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2431508 The cave is too bright.

>>	Anonymous Wed Mar 9 17:57:53 2016 No.2435072 File: 2.11 MB, 1050x700, Untitled-2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2435058 Shit, I replied to the wrong image. >>2433797 Try This.

>>	Anonymous Wed Mar 9 19:43:30 2016 No.2435261 >>2435033 i like the puffed cheek better desu

>>	Anonymous Wed Mar 9 20:40:40 2016 No.2435380 I dont draw as much as I wish I did. But I am just coming here to say that these generals usually produce some of the most coolest, creative, original art on /ic/. I hope that one day I can join the ranks of you guys.

>>	Anonymous Wed Mar 9 21:09:36 2016 No.2435419 >>2435072 >>2435058 fucks sake stop spamming

>>	Anonymous Wed Mar 9 21:18:06 2016 No.2435432 File: 19 KB, 500x367, carlos.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Can we just move on to the next giant loli? This one is getting old.

>>	Anonymous Wed Mar 9 21:50:10 2016 No.2435481 File: 602 KB, 1280x720, 1429731413846.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2435432 You cheeky little cunt,

>>	Nose Bro ¢π Wed Mar 9 22:05:47 2016 No.2435509 File: 501 KB, 1056x1080, me.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2435432

>>	Anonymous Wed Mar 9 22:06:02 2016 No.2435511 File: 1.15 MB, 5000x5000, 144155438529412.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2428649 >>2430273 >>2430495 >>2431508 >>2432040 >>2433797 >>2435058 >>2435072 >EIGHT FUCKING REVISIONS

>>	Anonymous Wed Mar 9 22:08:17 2016 No.2435516 >>2435432 i was about to say retard here someone please explain then i realize when lolis age theyre not lolis anymore lmao

>>	Anonymous Wed Mar 9 22:16:42 2016 No.2435527 >>2435511 You shut up your mouth I want the perfect giantesse loli showing her glorious scale and dominion.

>>	Anonymous Wed Mar 9 22:38:49 2016 No.2435544 File: 188 KB, 720x1280, download_20160309_193704.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] More alternative than anime, but could you guys rate my stuff? 1/3

>>	Anonymous Wed Mar 9 22:39:41 2016 No.2435545 File: 726 KB, 720x1280, download_20160309_193708.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2435544 2/3

>>	Anonymous Wed Mar 9 22:42:40 2016 No.2435548 File: 433 KB, 720x1280, Screenshot_20160309-194204.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2435545 3/3

>>	Anonymous Wed Mar 9 23:02:52 2016 No.2435574 File: 328 KB, 948x1004, CLIPStudioPaint_2016-03-09_21-56-49.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] who up hit that redline pls

>>	Anonymous Wed Mar 9 23:14:37 2016 No.2435591 File: 174 KB, 462x912, zpgPwok.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Previously posted to /tg/ but thought Id give over here a shot for any more critique. I know the eyes and hairline are a little wonky but cant fix it just yet.

>>	Anonymous Wed Mar 9 23:31:25 2016 No.2435606 >>2435544 >>2435545 >>2435548 get some glasses and a hard brush.

>>	Anonymous Wed Mar 9 23:42:07 2016 No.2435623 oh wow this thread went to shit real fast after someone complained about the rinfag spam

>>	FiRez !!tndrCZJHE+I Thu Mar 10 01:02:51 2016 No.2435692 File: 1.14 MB, 868x1300, odat2final4plain.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] It's almost over or so I hope

>>	FiRez !!tndrCZJHE+I Thu Mar 10 01:18:12 2016 No.2435719 File: 626 KB, 601x900, odat2finalfinal.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] .

>>	Nose Bro ¢π Thu Mar 10 01:26:13 2016 No.2435735 >>2435719 firez, midline, nose. you also lost your above view not sure if intentional. I would also recommend you change your hip escalation area if you change the perspective.

>>	Anonymous Thu Mar 10 01:40:57 2016 No.2435755 >>2435719 This isn't your best work, Firez. Nonspecific criticisms are basically useless, but I want to tell you that this is not pleasing to look at.

>>	Anonymous Thu Mar 10 02:11:05 2016 No.2435785 File: 631 KB, 601x900, eafe.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2435719 the background???why???

>>	Anonymous Thu Mar 10 02:23:29 2016 No.2435793 File: 724 KB, 601x900, swefe.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2435785

Anonymous Thu Mar 10 02:29:36 2016 No.2435795
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Fist post here, can anyone help me with her pose? it just seems so rigid...especially the legs, I've been working on the legs for about an hour and I just can't seem to get them right, so i'd like to take a break from the piece for a while and get some feedback.

Also, any tips on painting? My web browser blocks ctrl+paint for some reason

>>	Anonymous Thu Mar 10 02:43:13 2016 No.2435798 >>2435795 What is she supposed to be doing? Just posing with an attitude? Also, is it supposed to be a upshot or straight on?

>>	Nose Bro ¢π Thu Mar 10 02:49:41 2016 No.2435804 >>2435795 >>2435591 >>2433695 >>2429418 one foot in, one foot REEEEEEEEEEEEEE >>2430479 blog!

Anonymous Thu Mar 10 02:57:15 2016 No.2435809

>>2435798
I don`t know desu, I just felt like drawing Cammy since i`m not too good at people. I guess if anything it would be at a straight shot. I may just make this a portrait and see if I like it from there

>>2435804
I can only draw gundam-boots for feet :)

>>	Nose Bro ¢π Thu Mar 10 03:03:28 2016 No.2435815 >>2435809 you have no idea what "one foot in, one foot REEEEEEEEEEEEEE" means do you?

>>	Anonymous Thu Mar 10 03:06:39 2016 No.2435819 >>2435815 nawww i`m pretty new but i figure your triggered from the position of the right foot being retarded?

>>	Anonymous Thu Mar 10 03:12:43 2016 No.2435822 >>2435819 No he's triggered by himself being retarded. Apparently he thinks people need to be drawn with their feet parallel or some other stupid way that isn't the most common way people support their weight.

>>	Anonymous Thu Mar 10 03:23:20 2016 No.2435829 File: 160 KB, 607x465, CammyWhite.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Is something like this more interesting?

>>	Anonymous Thu Mar 10 03:28:51 2016 No.2435833 >>2435829 If you're struggling with poses I'd recommend you to take off some pressure on yourself. Invent less and steal more, i.e. study the works of accomplished artists such as Bengus

>>	Nose Bro ¢π Thu Mar 10 03:33:42 2016 No.2435835 >>2435819 >>2435822 actually im against the use of one foot in one foot out as a way to give faux-dynamism as it is the most common cope out for people who cant draw poses.

Anonymous Thu Mar 10 03:42:36 2016 No.2435838

>>2435835
It's not a cop out, it's how people fucking stand when they're just standing around. If you're going to draw a character standing and not doing much it would look awkward and unbalanced if you didn't have the feet pointing slightly away from each other. There's no reason to make the drawing look retarded just to avoid using a common pose that's common because it's how people really stand. Even if you draw them running or a number of other poses you're going to end up with the feet pointing away from each other often. It looks better, it occurs naturally, get over it.

>>	Anonymous Thu Mar 10 05:27:55 2016 No.2435896 File: 223 KB, 518x840, Red Queen.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2435804 Then I shall crop out my feet! because they were kind of unimportant to the neutral standing pose.

Anonymous Thu Mar 10 08:16:55 2016 No.2436021

>>2433797
The girl doesn't really fit in well with that pose. Might be because you just scalee her up and didn't change her pose. By the looks of it, she should be kneeling in the water instead of standing. Or if she is standing then we should see more from her legs.

Anonymous Thu Mar 10 08:36:09 2016 No.2436044

>>2435735
Sorry, you said something along those lines in the past thread, I forgot about it.

>>2435793
Is the tones/hues that bother you?

>>2435755
That is a real shame because I considerably revised it since the last time, I wish you could tell me why isn't pleasing too look at.

Anonymous Thu Mar 10 08:46:45 2016 No.2436056
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from a couple days ago

also, does anyone know how to make a brush in manga studio that emulates photoshop behavior with regards to keeping opacity? i haven't really been able to get similar function through my own efforts but i'm also probably just retarded

>>	Anonymous Thu Mar 10 09:25:14 2016 No.2436092 File: 13 KB, 210x106, 54343253654654.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2436056

>>	Anonymous Thu Mar 10 09:26:37 2016 No.2436095 >>2436092 wow wtf i've never even seen this option before, thanks family

Anonymous Thu Mar 10 09:51:17 2016 No.2436129
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Thanks to anon that gave crits last upload. Adjusted a few things, New lines with new brush. Any other things that stand out before I carry on? Also, i know face is shit, will re-do.

Anonymous Thu Mar 10 12:31:51 2016 No.2436265
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>>2435432
>>2435511
Sorry :( This is the last one of this piece that I'll upload I promise.

>>2435072
Definitely seems easier on the eyes, I took the suggestion.

>>2436021
I've tried to make the body of water seem deeper.

>>2436056
I really like this.

>>	Anonymous Thu Mar 10 13:00:52 2016 No.2436306 >>2436265 I never seen a cave that big

>>	Nose Bro ¢π Thu Mar 10 13:06:34 2016 No.2436314 >>2435838 its really not that common, youll notice that people are always putting a 90 degree angle to it. its really just a cop out.

>>	Anonymous Thu Mar 10 13:13:06 2016 No.2436328 >>2436306 i bet you havent seen a giant purple loli with horns either...

Anonymous Thu Mar 10 14:02:01 2016 No.2436390
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hook me up with some sai pencil brushes famolgas, or anything pertaining to pressure curves and how to cop a real traditional pencil look (pic related)

>>	Anonymous Thu Mar 10 15:37:19 2016 No.2436548 >>2435833 Thanks! Never knew his name was Bengus, you sure gave me a huge blast of nostalgia anon

Anonymous Thu Mar 10 15:40:19 2016 No.2436551

>>2436265
I really dont like how you have the light line all around the figure, it makes it suoer contrasting because the overall picture is going for realism when it comes to lighting, yet this is huge stylization thats out of place as its not repeated anywhere in the pic.

tldr: style inconsistency

>>	M Thu Mar 10 16:03:08 2016 No.2436578 File: 236 KB, 514x800, ink.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] idk what am I doin

>>	Anonymous Thu Mar 10 16:14:24 2016 No.2436589 >>2436578 Too symmetrical. Reeks of mirror tool.

>>	Anonymous Thu Mar 10 16:40:18 2016 No.2436619 >>2436578 UNITINU

Anonymous Thu Mar 10 17:30:56 2016 No.2436709
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Is my construction looking ok? I posted sometime ago and an anon mentioned that I kept drawing lowface. I tried to fix, but I'm not sure if I'm heading in the right direction.

>>	Anonymous Thu Mar 10 17:34:22 2016 No.2436717 >>2436709 >okay, I made a nice construction >now let's put some symbols on top of it you make me sad, anon I'd rather see no face than a flat one.

>>	Anonymous Thu Mar 10 17:34:56 2016 No.2436719 >>2436709 nope. you didn;t get a ball right, and the rest is based on a wrong ball. you need better fundamentals to start constructing faces.

>>	Anonymous Thu Mar 10 17:44:46 2016 No.2436745 >>2435785 >>2435793 Firez listen to this anon man. He has a GOOD point.

>>	Anonymous Thu Mar 10 17:52:05 2016 No.2436765 File: 1.23 MB, 3024x3024, image.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Designing a little deer character.

>>	Anonymous Thu Mar 10 17:55:29 2016 No.2436779 >>2436709 Draw cubes+rectangles of various proportions from many angles. like, a thousand, seriously. You think in 2d, gotta think in both.

>>	Anonymous Thu Mar 10 18:01:35 2016 No.2436796 File: 325 KB, 1000x1316, quiet1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I don't actually know where I'm going with this one, developing a style is a struggle for me.

>>	Anonymous Thu Mar 10 18:04:44 2016 No.2436801 >>2436765 Head is too big for a more realistically-proportioned body.

>>	Nose Bro ¢π Thu Mar 10 18:05:36 2016 No.2436803 >>2436709 beg thread

Anonymous Thu Mar 10 19:19:19 2016 No.2436928
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Operator-chan

>rip me a new one /ic/

And I'm aware of how messy it is. Pencil and paper for me tends to be that way and I'm not in the situation of digital art at the moment.

>>	Anonymous Thu Mar 10 19:19:43 2016 No.2436932 File: 211 KB, 1240x1754, rushy.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Wip something random. Any critique is welcome.

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 00:40:29 2016 No.2437275 File: 285 KB, 600x754, scar a shit.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2436928 i tried.. the gun looks a bit flat anon, try adding a little perspective maybe?

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 00:45:49 2016 No.2437284 File: 45 KB, 477x543, comanche.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] tried some loomis ..i'm still not really sure about my skintones

FiRez !!tndrCZJHE+I Fri Mar 11 00:59:25 2016 No.2437300
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>>2436745
Frankly, I'm probably missing his point that is why I was asking if he meant that the values were off or if the issue with the bg is something else.

I know this is a revision in the same thread but I think I made some considerable changes

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 01:03:16 2016 No.2437303 File: 101 KB, 477x505, Untitled-1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2437284 I'm not feeling too great about the structure around the mouth area, it seems like it's too far back so the nose and mouth central lines look misaligned.

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 01:20:55 2016 No.2437317 why are anime chins inverted curves at a profile am i missing something about real chins or is it just stylization

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 01:20:58 2016 No.2437318 >>2437300 It's not the values, it's the colors. She's in a totally different environment right now; his fixes make her more purple to fit the ambient light, or make the background more green to fit her.

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 01:32:40 2016 No.2437325 File: 43 KB, 488x556, comanche.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2437303 alright does it look better now anon?

Anonymous Fri Mar 11 01:46:58 2016 No.2437330

>>2437284
Thought "good cartoon head" until you said Loomis

Anyway the biggest problem imo is you've placed the neck too far to the front, like it's in side profile, in this angle the back of the neck should be closer to the same vertical line with the back of the skull

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 01:53:20 2016 No.2437340 >>2437325 I'm horrible with color myself but I think the areas that are blue-gray need a little more red in them.

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 03:18:05 2016 No.2437391 >>2437325 that ear is horribly placed. loomis will help you.

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 03:52:49 2016 No.2437403 File: 93 KB, 488x556, paintover.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2437325 i would say, learn to draw first before colors have a solid drawing and then you could start with values, and after that with colours

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 03:53:29 2016 No.2437405 >>2437391 It looks to be about in the middle of the side plane of the head, behind the jaw, and in line with the brow and nose. What's wrong with it?

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 03:54:26 2016 No.2437407 File: 39 KB, 300x1000, Cyberpunk designs.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 03:57:15 2016 No.2437409 >>2437405 you are fucking retarded if you truly believe that. please see >>2437403

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 04:02:04 2016 No.2437412 >>2437409 Literally the only thing the blueline changed was the angle, as far as the ear goes, and how the ear relates to the rest of the head due to other changes. The issue wasn't the ear, it was the rest of the head.

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 04:03:17 2016 No.2437413 >>2437412 Not him but the entire structure of the head was wrong, just moving the ear wouldn't have helped anyway.

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 04:18:23 2016 No.2437417 >>2437412 the blue line changed everything. the ear however was the most fucked up.

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 04:20:06 2016 No.2437418 >>2437412 wtf are you on about. in the original drawing the ear is literally 1 eye length away. i the blue line its 2 eye lengths away. learn to see faggot.

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Anonymous Fri Mar 11 04:24:39 2016 No.2437421

>>2437417
I meant changes specifically pertaining to the ear. The sentiment I'm espousing is that the ear only looked wrong because of the structure being flawed fundamentally, and that if you were to use an ellipse for the cup/connection of the ear on the original and the edit, they would be placed more or less the same.

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>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 08:23:35 2016 No.2437602 File: 235 KB, 2614x299, 1270478832838.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2437317 It's stylization

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 08:24:49 2016 No.2437604 File: 872 KB, 468x2395, 1278022456819.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2437340

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 10:43:48 2016 No.2437708 >>2430635 Still using the note 4 to draw?

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 10:51:19 2016 No.2437713 >>2437604 ?

>>	M Fri Mar 11 11:50:26 2016 No.2437783 File: 544 KB, 800x1064, dragon-ink2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2436619 >>2436589 tried to avoid that effect a bit with overlays but w/e, it's obvious but not a disgrace

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 12:11:34 2016 No.2437800 File: 389 KB, 714x700, gayanimu1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2427906 how is my gay animu /ic/

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 12:14:10 2016 No.2437803 >>2437800 where is harry potters glasses and scar

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 12:23:10 2016 No.2437815 >>2437803 lol it's from Haikyuu

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 13:49:41 2016 No.2437891 >>2437275 Your try was a success (in my eyes). And ye I haven't really ever looked at how clothes work, and I've only spent minimal time on lower body studies, I need work. Thx anon. >scar a shit It looks sexy though D;

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 16:05:34 2016 No.2438092 File: 1.59 MB, 2160x2308, ruby jacket.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Something about it really fucking bothers me besides the weird foot. I can't figure it out. Is it bad? Fine? Mediocre? Help please?

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 18:19:33 2016 No.2438284 >>2438092 Nose, proportions, etc

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 19:30:31 2016 No.2438403 >>2437815 stop fucking with one of my favourite sports anime pleaseeeeeee

Anonymous Fri Mar 11 19:45:24 2016 No.2438408

>>2438092
This reeks bad everything. During the construction phase, use basic shapes and the bean-bag method from vilppu.

>Vilppu
for gestures and an idea of human anatomy
>Hampton
For info on muscle groups
>Loomis
Every muscle for better anatomy and rendering

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 20:21:21 2016 No.2438438 >>2438403 No. Brb going to draw Haikyuu gay porn just for you, anon.

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 22:06:12 2016 No.2438507 >>2438438 gay

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 22:43:33 2016 No.2438545 >>2438438 Please draw first years orgy. Excluding Yachi.

>>	Anonymous Fri Mar 11 22:56:16 2016 No.2438555 i want /lgbt/ to leave

FiRez !!tndrCZJHE+I Fri Mar 11 23:10:12 2016 No.2438564
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>>2437318
Thanks for clearing it up, for some reason it was not that obvious to me, in some ways I felt the hues worked but now I see what you guys mean

This is an sketch I decided to resume, I hope it looks more or less correct

Anonymous Sat Mar 12 01:31:32 2016 No.2438692
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My first time posting, p-please be gentle

It seems kind of boring? I know it's literally just a head in profile, but I feel like it could be made more interesting within that scope, and I don't know what's missing

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 12 01:35:26 2016 No.2438702 >>2438692 Well you've drawn her with a snout for one.

Anonymous Sat Mar 12 01:38:06 2016 No.2438705
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>>2438692
>My first time posting, p-please be gentle

Fresh meat. It is boring because it is flat, learn how to draw in perspective. You will not achieve anything in that scope get out of your comfort zone stop drawing profile shots and front views nobody cares if you can draw perfect symmetry and stop copying anime and read the sticky and study loomis.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 12 01:40:15 2016 No.2438711 >>2438705 What can you even draw in perspective here? It's such a flat angle with no gesture.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 12 02:11:02 2016 No.2438739 >>2438705 Kek, echoing shit from /ic? I bet I can draw better than you, punk ass faggot.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 12 02:25:13 2016 No.2438750 File: 182 KB, 708x1133, YAMEROOOO_3.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Can someone help me out with this anatomy?

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 12 02:30:10 2016 No.2438753 >>2438750 the whole image has a lot of mistakes, first that right foot, fingers don't work on that way, i don't know where's the neck.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 12 02:32:31 2016 No.2438756 >>2438692 post more, I dig your lines.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 12 02:32:55 2016 No.2438757 >>2438753 The neck is inside the collar of the tabard. And what's wrong with the feet?

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 12 02:34:10 2016 No.2438758 >>2438750 wtf anon skirt doesn't work that way also >chickenscratching

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 12 02:37:31 2016 No.2438760 File: 348 KB, 1800x826, 1259206605567.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2438750 Not loving how big the head is

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 12 02:38:18 2016 No.2438762 >>2438758 >he only noticed the lines/drapery and not everything else lol

Anonymous Sat Mar 12 02:40:36 2016 No.2438764

>>2438702
Is the nose too upturnt, or is it too sunken near the eyes?

>>2438705
I know that profile headshot by itself is just super boring (and also would be my comfort zone, were I good enough to have one) but I still feel like there's something in the scope I'm missing (it being a shitty scope aside). As >>2438711 said I'm also not sure how I would apply perspective here (on the scarf?).

>stop copying anime and read the sticky and study loomis

I-I actually did this one without a reference, but maybe that's not what you mean. I have read the sticky and a few loomis books but if it doesn't show I guess that's my own fault. I'll try not to disappoint you next time.

>>2438756
Thanks. I thought I would get fewer replies with how dead this thread is but I really appreciate it. I was feeling pretty good about this but those two anons took me down a peg, which I think is a good thing.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 12 02:41:56 2016 No.2438765 >>2438760 Idk why I can't see it as big even though everyone says my drawings of head are too big compared to head is there any cure for that.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 12 02:43:04 2016 No.2438766 >>2437602 thank you for good chin

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 12 02:47:16 2016 No.2438770 File: 644 KB, 500x439, 1447467291293.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2438750 the head should be about half the width of rib cage. 1.25 - 1.5 for animu. animus also have small necks so the head looks larger than it really is.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 12 02:48:53 2016 No.2438771 File: 180 KB, 1053x1228, 124506015457.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2438765 Yeah, do anatomical studies. Learn the rules of proportion before you try bending/breaking them for stylizing.

Anonymous Sat Mar 12 02:54:45 2016 No.2438775
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>>2438092
Every day someone comes in with a "help me with this foot guys" and the answer is always the same, it's too goddamn small. Why are people obsessed with drawing tiny baby feet?

Anonymous Sat Mar 12 03:04:02 2016 No.2438779

>>2438775
I think it probably has something to do with the fact that people tend to assume feet are smaller than they actually are, because they're the furthest point of our bodies from our eyes when looking straight down at them. It sounds kind of stupid when you put it that way, but honestly, most people don't really think about it. If you tell someone their foot is the same length as their forearm, the most common response is surprise, and they try to check and see if it's true.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 12 03:16:12 2016 No.2438788 >>2438779 nah that's not true senpai >tfw i actually tried it i'm stupid aren't i?..

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 12 05:20:36 2016 No.2438823 >>2438788 It's pretty close for me. I have small feet.

Anonymous Sat Mar 12 06:22:27 2016 No.2438842
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>>2438775
>>2438779
>>2438788
It might be because of how you almost always see feet horizontally, so you won't really see it until you check it yourself, which people don't normally do unless they're really bored or curious.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 12 06:24:16 2016 No.2438843 >>2438775 Most people seem to forget that the ankle(bone) is a really big fucking wedge-like thing.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 12 06:38:55 2016 No.2438847 >>2438842 holy shit it works

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 12 06:52:38 2016 No.2438849 >>2438842 cute feet anon

>>	M Sat Mar 12 07:03:01 2016 No.2438854 >>2438842 omffffggg this is like a religious revelation to me my feet reaches to the back of hte elbow

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 12 08:00:05 2016 No.2438878 File: 1.50 MB, 1602x1602, camilla3.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] feedback appreciated

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 12 08:20:05 2016 No.2438886 File: 2.02 MB, 1602x1602, iunno.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2438878 The head looks a little bit detached from the neck, maybe change the angle and lower the head, like so?

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 12 08:30:05 2016 No.2438890 File: 150 KB, 744x1052, rushy.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 12 08:38:45 2016 No.2438896 >>2438886 Ear is placed too far it looks like she is missing too much skull and her neck doesn't attach to the head correctly. Your one mistake made you elongate her crown piece all the way to the error.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 12 08:58:23 2016 No.2438903 File: 191 KB, 744x1052, 1457789405036.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2438890 keep studying anatomy the face/boobs needs better form add reflections to the edges to show that the cloth material is reflective

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 12 10:35:40 2016 No.2438975 File: 14 KB, 867x542, z1133.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 12 11:48:25 2016 No.2439046 >>2435833 Stealing sounds so dirty

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 12 11:52:10 2016 No.2439051 File: 870 KB, 625x939, light.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I dont have money for a sketchbook so im using a random agenda i've found

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 12 12:11:21 2016 No.2439064 File: 557 KB, 1126x1859, Image (11).jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Chicocalte Sat Mar 12 12:12:30 2016 No.2439066 NEW THREAD >>2439065 >>2439065 >>2439065

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