[ 3 / biz / cgl / ck / diy / fa / ic / jp / lit / sci / vr / vt ] [ index / top / reports ] [ become a patron ] [ status ]
2023-11: Warosu is now out of extended maintenance.

/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

View post   
File: 64 KB, 554x985, Screenshot_2016-01-08-20-51-06.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2343199 No.2343199 [Reply] [Original]

Post em now.

Rules:
-Commenting is OK but do not expect much from an hour's work.
-Posting WIP's, studies, "doodles", and random sketches are highly encouraged.
-The art must be fresh. Like you just drew it in the past hour.
-Go fast

>> No.2343224
File: 1.48 MB, 2592x1944, 20160108_191613.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2343224

Getting there... slowly.

Oh please sir, tell me more about the land of Gud. Is it true that Bouguereau girls sharpen your pencils with their feet and groves of graphite trees bear only the ripest Loomis heads?

>> No.2343231
File: 49 KB, 902x938, face.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2343231

Mouse/ms paint at work.

>> No.2343234

>>2343199
Damn it, I was just about to make one. I guess that Go Fast line is going to be a permanent addition.

>> No.2343242

>>2343234
Were you the OP of the past ones?

The last one was far on the last pages.

I really like the thread idea, however I disagree with the stance of not commenting by default, that's why I made the small edit

>> No.2343256

>>2343242
I was only the OP of the one with the Sonic drawings and I added "Go fast" to the op text. The past few OPs haven't gotten rid of it though so I was going to make a new thread to get a chance to take it out before it could keep getting copied over but I keep missing the chance.

>> No.2343274

>>2343199
is that firez or no?

>> No.2343289
File: 543 KB, 780x1000, elemental princess.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2343289

For the tower girl thread. Technically took longer than an hour and more like an hour and a half but I was also eating.

>> No.2343292

>>2343274
I would lean towards no because that looks like it was done on some kind of mobile device and Firez is pretty outspoken about how poor he is. Also he doesn't usually start out painterly, he seems to start everything with this really hesitant looking lineart.

>> No.2343325
File: 128 KB, 497x652, charhairstyle.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2343325

Just trying to get the hairstyle right before I move onto the actual drawing.

>>2343199
I recognize that style

>> No.2343333
File: 247 KB, 852x1136, image.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2343333

This took me a good 40 minutes.
Tell me what you think, just started taking drawing seriously, I'd really appreciate some feedback.

>> No.2343335

Just a heads up. The daily drawing challenge is now open. So if you would like to join in.

Here the links
>>2338138 (Cross-thread)

Main site
http://www.lavaflake.com/draw

Good luck have fun.

>> No.2343337

>>2343333
you're drawing symbols, stop
use reference and draw exactly what you see
go to the beginner thread for more advice

>> No.2343344

>>2343333
and maybe using pencil so you can have light weight stroke

>> No.2343350

>>2343333
Really try to conceptualize the form in your head. Don't draw the object as a 2D shape. Describe it as if you were discovering something in 3D.

>> No.2343352
File: 1.35 MB, 1271x7339, 1451452990918.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2343352

>>2343333
Read pic related. Also, read the sticky.

If you're trying to take drawing seriously. You should practice drawing shapes. Spheres/ellipses, cubes, pyramids, and cylinders.

Right now you don't really know how things look in 3d space. Your drawing is very flat. Drawing the simple 3D shapes I mentioned will help train your brain.

>> No.2343354

>>2343337
>>2343344
>>2343350
>>2343352
Thanks guys, I've read the sticky already but fuck it I'll read it again, it's really hard to get rid of the symbol thing. Anyways I really appreciate the feedback and advice that I can actually use and the fact that you're not being assholes

>> No.2343357
File: 133 KB, 832x960, Skeletits.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2343357

It's messy but I'm pretty happy with this.

>> No.2343366
File: 309 KB, 749x747, maid2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2343366

practicing from poses...

>> No.2343393
File: 312 KB, 750x1254, kjlhkljh.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2343393

no idea how to even begin shading this

>> No.2343394
File: 50 KB, 406x700, paz.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2343394

>>2343199
ill finish it sometime.

>> No.2343396

>>2343366
create linework anon. it's going to save you a million headaches. even if the lineart is rough

>> No.2343399

>>2343357
this is a cool ideal..stealing~

>> No.2343413

>>2343393
Decide on the light source(s) and colors. Also her left hand is a right hand.

>> No.2343417

>>2343394
blog?

>> No.2343430
File: 63 KB, 554x985, Screenshot_2016-01-09-00-44-00.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2343430

>>2343256
Let's leave it, I would say is a general good advice for sketches and learning to let go.

>>2343289
If you develop it further cross check with reference particularly for the lower part. I kind of like her expression so far.

>>2343274
>>2343292
You got me, I have already posted several sketches and doodles from my Note 4, using my work's collective plan it was cheap to get.

>>2343325
Love your retro anime style.

>>2343366
You should reconsider the way you do eyes they usually look very plain, don't forget that they are spheres wrapped by skin.

Pero sigue así y trata de no desanimarte.

>> No.2343431

>>2343399
Originalcharacterdonotsteal

>> No.2343506

>>2343289
>>2343430
Thanks! I probably should have used a ref. I definitely need to work on my lower bodies and will use a ref next time.

>> No.2343570

>>2343430

Gracias Firez sempai, no sabia que hablabas español :)

>> No.2343595
File: 35 KB, 567x704, Fishman.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2343595

Just did this then.

>> No.2343617
File: 263 KB, 1600x900, dud.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2343617

just random concept from future "project"

>> No.2343712 [DELETED] 
File: 2.56 MB, 1941x1456, weel.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2343712

Butts

>> No.2343726
File: 1.34 MB, 1341x1006, weehl.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2343726

Butts

>> No.2343728

>>2343726
riven ? post it on /lolgen/

>> No.2343769
File: 212 KB, 3000x3000, omake copy.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2343769

>>2343396

I was using a reference by the way. It felt like painting with oils you know, a big spot then defining the details.

About your coment on the linework. Is this better? (pic related)

>> No.2343776
File: 2.99 MB, 2976x2976, 20160109_174359.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2343776

What do you think?

>> No.2343798
File: 98 KB, 527x920, Bunnyofficerlookinassdude.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2343798

>> No.2343874

>>2343394
>paz
from metal gear?

>> No.2343881
File: 612 KB, 550x900, pic taken with a potato.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2343881

Scanning this once I finish painting it.

>> No.2343901

>>2343798
dope af man
>>2343881
looks nice i want to see the finished version

>> No.2343949

>>2343325
yours looks like the old daft punk anime videos..interstellar! that's the name. oh and the one with a space pirate dude.

>> No.2343987

>>2343881
Looks pretty great, my nigga.

blog?

>> No.2343998

>>2343352
fucking kek. beginners shouldnt be making retarded tuts.

>> No.2344083
File: 394 KB, 1440x2560, Screenshot_20160105-065903.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2344083

I started drawing on my phone recently, im not so good without references.

>> No.2344208
File: 102 KB, 572x949, 7e3081a6-255c-4e47-9f2d-67455fd568ca_20160109171308021.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2344208

>>2343199
Done with the rest of the hour.

>>2343570
Si, de hecho ya te había escrito en español hace un tiempo en el hilo de estilización pero de seguro no alcanzastes a leer mi mensaje :)

>> No.2344214
File: 453 KB, 2300x2500, IMG_1764.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2344214

Please rate.

>> No.2344220

>>2344208
el gato no es bueno

>> No.2344234
File: 623 KB, 846x1000, 1-9-16 sketches.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2344234

>> No.2344276
File: 581 KB, 532x800, 4c.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2344276

>>2343901
>>2343987
Thanks, folks. Got you covered.
lokki-lokki on tumblr, if you think you're interested.

>> No.2344316

>>2344276
nice man, definately gonna check your shit out

>> No.2344327
File: 313 KB, 747x747, omake4.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2344327

>>2343769

wasted too much time on this...

>> No.2344344 [DELETED] 
File: 2.77 MB, 1831x2296, scan2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2344344

hot off the press, pls no judge for doin a louie, he has a sexy dome

>> No.2344350
File: 764 KB, 916x1148, scan2 - Copy.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2344350

hot off the press

>> No.2344367

>>2344327
post your reference

>> No.2344406
File: 178 KB, 593x923, kek.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2344406

dis,

>> No.2344474
File: 503 KB, 480x800, orcgirlwip.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2344474

>>2343199
WIP. My attempt at an orc girl.

Please critique.

>> No.2344481

>>2344350
>black dicks
>yay
>white dicks
>booo
This looks realy nice anon.

>> No.2344482

>>2344350
Render the hand
Also lol @ those eyebrows.
But seriously, I really like it

>> No.2344485

>>2344350
cuck.

>> No.2344493

>>2344350
BIG

>> No.2344505
File: 94 KB, 941x608, draw.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2344505

r8 my monkey dwight

>> No.2344524
File: 23 KB, 475x641, samuraijack.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2344524

Drew this just now.

>>2344208
Looks cute. I like it.

>>2344474
Head seems a bit squished, no shape to it? The Torso is too long. Those are the major parts that I notice anyway. You can make her look beautiful, Anon. I believe.

>> No.2344526

>>2344524
Thanks anon <33

>> No.2344528

>>2344505
I r8 8/8 m8

>> No.2344529

>>2344524
I really like the way you draw muscles, do you have a site where you post your work?

>> No.2344533

>>2344529
Thanks. Here ya go. http://ketteiii.tumblr.com/

>> No.2344534
File: 431 KB, 596x617, squidward.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2344534

>>2344529
>>2344533
wait i thought that was a meme

>> No.2344632
File: 3.17 MB, 2432x4320, IMG_20160109_221256593.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2344632

Eh

>> No.2344633

>>2344534
It is but I was actually asking for his website, also why I didn't just say "blog?"

>> No.2344636
File: 64 KB, 650x650, test.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2344636

sorry its bad, my anatomy is terrible

>> No.2344887
File: 232 KB, 906x898, eye.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2344887

Eye eye captain

>> No.2344896
File: 71 KB, 638x722, Ran1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2344896

Just got a tablet the other day...shit is alot harder to use than i thought it would be. This took about an hour

>> No.2344912

>>2344474
Nothing about this drawing makes it look like an orc.
Just rename the file to "humangirlwip."

>> No.2345101

>>2344896
What app are you using to draw?

>> No.2345128
File: 343 KB, 892x1060, WP_20160111_01_32_46_Pro.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2345128

Challenging myself with perspective

>> No.2345179

>>2344896
one eye between eyes at most times/sticky

>> No.2345184
File: 1.23 MB, 830x860, canyon.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2345184

Trying to paint.

criticism please. I'm just making up the process as I go because I'm fucking clueless

>> No.2345187
File: 2.90 MB, 3513x4417, _20160110_121956.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2345187

Venom fav just need a good background, suggestions?

>> No.2345189

>>2345184
Nice work dude, I love it.

>> No.2345200

>>2344887
pretty sure it wasn't your intention, but that looks like a chicken wearing a knight's helmet.

which I find pretty fucking sick dude.

>> No.2345202

>>2345189
thanks man, just realized my mouse/brush outline is visible top left since I just screenshot it :\

>> No.2345206
File: 230 KB, 800x1100, huggare.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
2345206

>>2343199
wipwipwip. thoughts?

>> No.2345209

>>2345206
love it man.

you might like Steven Sugar's work (http://stevensugar.tumblr.com/))

he has a few pieces on a similar subject.

Thumbs up.

>> No.2345215

>>2345184
People tend to just jump into "painting" as if it's different from drawing, but a good painting needs a good under drawing. Your paintings will come out easier and be better if you start with something solid and real instead of trying to just go at it.

Use ref too, I'm not really sure what the dark sploches are describing but I think you could do it better looking at real canyons and rocks and things.
>>2345206
The left foot (his right) isn't in perspective compared to the other one. The sword and shield are also drawn flat on. The chainmail done with a brush looks pretty lazy too.

Push yourself to draw these things in perspective and you'll elevate your drawings. The guy looks pretty cool you're just tripping up in places.