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Post em now.

Rules:
-Do not rate or give critiques unless if the artist specifically requests it.
-If someone is RUDE tell them to not expect much from an hour's work.
-Posting WIP's, studies, "doodles", and random sketches are highly encouraged.
-The art must be fresh. Like you just drew it in the past hour.
-Go fast

>> No.2335578
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>>2335552
thinking about giving him a tail, not sure yet
critique/rating welcome

>> No.2335582

>>2335578
You already have him with an accessory a tail be me another thing you'd have to draw and would make it look too busy .

>> No.2335585
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2335585

some drawns from ref

>> No.2335587
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2335587

I drew a robut

>> No.2335609

>>2335585
oh man anon these are nice

>> No.2335612

>>2335585
i'm gonna be THAT guy.. what program/brush?

>> No.2335616
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2335616

>>2335585
i dig it, you have a blog or gallery?


looking at leydendecker's for ref while using sargent ps brushes

>> No.2335628

>>2335609
thanks amigo

>>2335612
photoshop cs6, I don't remember where I got the brush from but here
http://www.mediafire.com/download/8539rtg1m4s8l3g/brushe.abr

>>2335616
cheers, I'm at miwao.tumblr.com but it's mostly anime garbage sorry

>> No.2335630
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I recently just got a drawing tablet so I drew this.

>> No.2335636
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2335636

>>2335552

>> No.2335641
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Check these scribbles

>> No.2335643

>>2335641
Thanks phone

>> No.2335644

>>2335643
what pen did you use?

>> No.2335645

>>2335552
What's the point of this rule?:
>-Do not rate or give critiques unless if the artist specifically requests it.

>> No.2335646

>>2335644
...a Pilot G2 07 that I got from CVS the other day

>> No.2335652

>>2335646
It looks great, I will use it too

>> No.2335660

>>2335652
They're really fucking cheap, too. Definitely my go-to means of doodling. I almost always have one in a pocket somewhere on me.

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>>2335408

>> No.2335809
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really quick

>> No.2335825

>>2335645
copied from the last thread

>> No.2335827
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2335827

Practice. Trying to improve.

>> No.2335834

>>2335825
Probably because it's only an hour's work.

>> No.2335849
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>>2335645
It's not the beginner's thread,
the purpose is to SHOW what you've done in the last hour, not to get critique to improve.

On another note, here's my drawing of a witch. I haven't done much full body anatomy, so any critique that improves my anatomy would be appreciated.

I am currently working through Loomis

>> No.2335853 [DELETED] 

>>2335827
Here are some pointers, anon;
>nose does not look like the roof of a house
>chins are not shaped like triangles
>eyebrows do not show through hair

If you stop doing these simple things, your work will improve considerably. Keep this in mind, and draw again!

>> No.2335855

>>2335849
Woops, was browsing through page 1 of /ic/ and didn't even think to look at OP's post. I've deleted my last post (>>2335853).

>> No.2335860

>>2335849
>any critique that improves my anatomy would be appreciated
Why are you asking for this in this thread?
You've just said that beginner's thread would be a better choice when looking for critique, since
>the purpose (of this thread) is to SHOW what you've done in the last hour, not to get critique to improve

>> No.2335868
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>>2335552
My faces don't seem to improve whatsoever

Thoughts on my errors? tips?

>> No.2335877
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>>2335827
Well heres what I've got.

I've assumed "Trying to improve" means I can critique a bit. 1 is your drawing, 2 is what I assume your construction was, 3 is how I would have done it, and 4 is just a comparison.

A - > Right Shoulder seems too wide
B -> Hip area seems very odd with how the thighs are placed
C -> Head doesn't seem to have space to fit inside the hair
D -> The bend here and the rest of the torso seems to imply 3/4ths, but the armor implies straight on?

>>2335860
I'm posting this here because *I actually did it in the last hour* which is the point of the thread. And, while the point isn't for critique, you're still allowed to ask for it. The OP doesn't say "No critique", just "None if they don't ask for it.".

I'll post this on the beginners thread and ask for critique there I guess.

>> No.2335878
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2335878

ecig and some faces

>> No.2335885

>>2335868

Drawing guidelines won't help if you don't measure at all. Either you cropped that photo really badly or that head is squished to hell. Not to mention it looks like you proceeded to ignore the guidelines you drew anyway.

Take a few minutes to actually plan your drawing out. The point of doing construction isn't to slap it down in 2 seconds to show everyone you tried, it's to make sure everything is in the right place before you add details.

>> No.2335913

>>2335868

practice loomis heads, then study the human skull. go through all of prokos videos on the head and do 100 drawings for each video

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1EPNYWeEf1U

>> No.2335924

>>2335877
you think it's a better idea change the rule for the next thread to where you have to say if you DON'T want a critique ?

>> No.2335930

>>2335924
IDK, the board Artwork / Critique.

It comes down to whether more people say "I want critique" than people who don't in pure efficiency terms, though.

>> No.2335931

>>2335924
Yes, that's exactly what I think.

>> No.2335932

>>2335877
Thanks, this is very helpful.

>> No.2335948 [DELETED] 

>>2335924
No. The idea is to have a no-pressure thread for just sharing art and doodles. Not everything has to be all academic all the time. Sometimes it's nice to just be able to look at people's doodles and things they do to cool off or warm up, it opens an avenue for other art related discussions. Anyone who has a serious piece they want help on can go to the beginner or draw threads to get full critique, but there's nothing wrong with having a place to just see what people are up to without worrying about getting ripped apart, feeling obligated to offer crit, or feeling discouraged if your pic gets ignored by critiquers. And having no crit as the default means a less cluttered thread. And a post with text asking for crit stands out more among just image posts than every post saying no crit and looking for one saying pls crit.

>> No.2335953

>>2335924
No. The idea is to have a no-pressure thread for just sharing art and doodles. Not everything has to be all academic all the time. Sometimes it's nice to just be able to look at people's doodles and things they do to cool off or warm up, it opens an avenue for other art related discussions. Anyone who has a serious piece they want help on can go to the beginner or draw threads to get full critique, but there's nothing wrong with having a place to just see what people are up to without worrying about getting ripped apart, feeling obligated to offer crit, or feeling discouraged if your pic gets ignored by critiquers. And having no crit as the default means a less cluttered thread. A post with text asking for crit stands out more among just image posts than every post saying no crit and looking for one saying pls crit.

>> No.2335967
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>>2335885
thoughts?

>> No.2335973

>>2335552
I was hoping I'd get a chance to do the next OP so I could get rid of the "Go Fast" part I added to the copypasta to go with the Sanic pics. Next OP will get it I'm sure.

>> No.2335985

>>2335953
>Not everything has to be all academic all the time.
Guess who's not going to make it.

>> No.2336003

>>2335985
It's really amusing how much that one little "rule" upsets people here. It's almost as if like a baby, the only way you can think of to understand things is by sticking them in your mouth and chewing on them or tearing them apart. Set it out of your reach and you only want to get at it more. You just can't accept that somethings just aren't for you, you just have to put your grubby little hands on everything. It's kinda cute. Kinda.

>> No.2336009

>>2335636
>Scumbag Steve
>90 minutes

Worst post in the thread.

>> No.2336014
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>>2335985
You? in the contemporary art world the academic is almost frowned on. Perfect 1:1 oil paintings aren't interesting any more. Not that anyone itt will make it, but don't pretend that it's the 1920's any more.

Pic related. Karin Mamma Andersson. One of Swedens most bankable artists. This painting is about 1x1.1 metres and is valued/sold at a million bux.

>> No.2336029

>>2335878
>we get it you vape
the angles look good. try to keep the lines in perspective, some parts slip out of it.
keep working on the heads anon,

>> No.2336043

>>2336003
not the person you're replying to but if >>2335849
is yours, you are in serious need of practice, study and fundimentals. calling something a doodles thread is the weirdest way to stave off judgement and beg to compliments. you dont just post art online unless you want a reply, and if you've made critique the uncalled for thing then what you're expecting is someone to come along and boost your confidence. Please, go be 15 somewhere else
regarding your drawing, its painfully obvious how bad you are at drawing. calling it a doodle doesnt magically erase the amateur quality of every aspect of it. and for the love all that is holy, don't redline things >>2335877
you are not helping, you have no idea what you're talking about

>> No.2336056

>>2336043
I haven't posted any art in this thread, nor any critiques or redlines yet, the post you just replied to was only the second post I've made this thread, the first one explaining the purpose of these threads being the first.
The bottom line is this: there are consistently half a dozen threads where people are humbly lining up their work for your target practice. If you want to whine that there's one thread that isn't for that and how much you feel oppressed by it (despite the fact that nobody is actually stopping you from criticizing things posted here) there are two Feels threads right now where you can cry over it, or you can take it to tumblr with the rest of the self proclaimed victims.

>> No.2336079

>>2336043
First off that's not me.

Second off, I was only answering a question for someone else, and actually asked for critique on my art, which I would appreciate rather than merely "work on fundamentals", which I'm doing because as you pointed out,
my work still has that sort of "amateur" feeling to all the fundamentals. Even telling me which specific fundamentals to work on.

Critique is meant to be constructive. If you can't add anything other than "Do more fundamentals" then at least say "Read the sticky".

And if no-one else is helping the guy at least I'll try to point out what I can. If you want to give him separate advice you're free to do so.

>> No.2336082

>>2336079
>And if no-one else is helping the guy at least I'll try to point out what I can. If you want to give him separate advice you're free to do so.
its like watching a blind person explain to another blind person what color is

>> No.2336092
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>>2336029
Working on it.

>> No.2336099

>>2336043
By the way, not leaving a critique doesn't mean the only other reply you can leave has to be a compliment. You can ask about what they've drawn, what materials they've used, and maybe suggest a good tutorial or book that talks about similar techniques as what they've used or an artist they might be interested in studying because of similarities you've noticed. Maybe someone posts some characters they're designing that interest you and you ask about the story or what they intend to do with the characters. There are more ways to discuss art than just technical execution, and these threads leave breathing room for that. Not seeing the value in that is truly short-sighted.

>> No.2336124
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2336124

i rlly like drawing torsos
>>2335809
niiice do you post your stuff anywhere other than fb?

>> No.2336174
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Playing with weird perspective and proportions, I still need to learn colors and values

>> No.2336184
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Head and face studies, sorry for the shitty picture.

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>> No.2336320
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>>2335552

>> No.2336401

>>2336320
was just going to ask if that was from life or a photo when i saw the image name. pretty good, but the ellipses at the bottom should be 'larger' and wrap around the form more

>> No.2336436
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2336436

i've been drawing on and off for a while, but i just came to the realization how bad i really am because i was trapped very early to depend on reference pics. i'm making an effort to draw from imagination. any tips? any type of feedback? any resources recommended?

i used a random noun generator, and it gave me 'soup'. i sat for a minute or two and thought of a scene. what are you guys' creative thought processes?

>> No.2336438
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same guy as >>2336436

feedback requested. pick my stuff apart please!!

>> No.2336465
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twenty minutes
Feel free to critique

>> No.2336467

>>2336465

wow this is cool. i love brushpen work and you've really make it work. the variety of line widths really makes things interesting. not much else to say from me. keep up the good work.

>> No.2336475

>>2336465
eyes look way too close together

>> No.2336480

>>2336475
Its the overall size of the forehead that throws the eyes off. Follows the standard 5 eyes across spacing.

>> No.2336493

>>2336401
Thanks man, accurate critique. I have trouble with round shapes, I'll just practice boatloads :)

>> No.2336504

>>2336465
witness me

>> No.2336559
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Heads

>> No.2336561 [DELETED] 

>>2336559
Forgot to add, feedback is appreciated.

I know the 2nd guy's eyes dont line up and the middle guy is poop.

>> No.2336584
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ignore the text my girl friend insisted. Anyways thoughts? must have only spent 5 minutes in total but this little doodle resonates with me.

>> No.2336615

>>2336436
There's some semblance of structure and figure. Just keep on studying (both from imagination and references) and you'll do fine.

>> No.2336616
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20 min. Been trying to add more colour.

>> No.2336637

>>2336438
those hips though, never told a lie

>> No.2336654

>>2336615

thanks man thats good to hear


>>2336637

oh shit i just realized how fucked up they look lol. thanks for pointing that out

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2336692

Working on this right now, I'm liking it so far but not sure where I'm going with it.

>> No.2336694

>>2336692
you fully rendered the face before the rest. it looks nice, but i'd like to see it done.

>> No.2336695

>>2336692
Remove the lines of face later

This type of rendering + lines = NO

>> No.2336698

>>2336694
This was mostly coloring practice and I wanted to jump into the face. Thank you!

>> No.2336702
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Here's some cringe

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A quick sketch of someone in one of my classes, messed up the braid a bit, critique/ advice would be cool

>> No.2336706

i can do gestures just, but going into detail is fucking hard.holy fug

>> No.2336707

>>2335878
I have that vape!

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>>2336706
forgot to put the pic

>> No.2336722
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Proportion practice for a child character.
Please feel free rate, critique, and call me a faggot

>> No.2336723
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>>2336722
And one I did yesterday of the same character and a friend

>> No.2336726
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2336726

Forcing myself to work on drapery and lighting. I suck at shading and differentiation between tones so it becomes sharper. So I'm working on it as much as I can to fix it.

>> No.2336727
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holy shit....


oppa gangnam style

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any suggestion anon ?
im i doing it right ?

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>>2336743
here another drawing ?
am i doing it right anon ?

>> No.2336752
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2336752

Arm's a bit skinny.

>> No.2336757

>>2336743
>>2336751
you're doing these anatomy studies but you're not focusing on just one thing for the study. bodies in tougher to draw positions, a few hands, a face.

focus on learning how to construct the body instead of drawing it how you think it needs to be. Once you're comfortable with that move into these harder to draw views like foreshortening.

also break free of the chicken scratching. it looks bad.

>> No.2336759

>>2336757
thanks anon

>> No.2336761
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>>2336751

It's great that you're playing with depth and volume.

You'll have an easier time if you base your perspectives on "real" objects. Mess around with shapes that correspond to body parts and build details from there.

>> No.2336763

>>2336757
>>2336761
thanks anon

>> No.2336776
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Icon I'm working on for my portfolio blog

which feels really weird to me because usually I just screencap a show I like, whatever

>> No.2336827
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So I guess I can just draw side faces now? I mean its still shit but I'm somewhere now

>> No.2336837

>>2336124
im about to open a tumblr account in this period

>> No.2336856
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Some quick brush pen doodles, still getting used to it.

>> No.2336887
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This is a friend of mine i drew

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>>2336465
And another
>>2336467
>>2336475
>>2336504
>>2336480
Thanks guys

>> No.2336985

>>2336827
Turn the lighting up, I can barely see it.

>> No.2337051
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From my doodle book.

>> No.2337063

>>2336707
joyetech evic vtc mini?

>> No.2337069
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Working on a poster right now, and it's gonna take me some time to finish(starting work again tomorrow). This hand looks weird and I even took pictures of me in the same pose to fix it but I don't know.... maybe it shouldn'tbe a fist.

What do you people think?

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Friend's car.

>> No.2337117

>>2337107
I like the perspective.

>> No.2337121

>>2336014
Normally, I hate that type of style, but I really like this

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2337123

Joints and hardsurface.

>> No.2337126

>>2337121
A local restaurant here has that same style all across its upper walls. Most people would miss it.

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>>2337123
That drawing style reminds me of this cover

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>>2336985
K m8

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2337169

lol

>> No.2337179

>>2336692
Shit I love the way you rendered the face. Got a blog or something?

>> No.2337182
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2337182

bloop

yeah i've just been messing around with brushes the past hour

>> No.2337188

>>2335552
i can´t. I drew innocent lolis getting ass fucked by fat horny big-dicked pedos.
And /ic/ doesn´t allow that.

>> No.2337192

>>2337121
i know, i also hate that kinda of type of style. man.

>> No.2337218
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2337218

my face

>> No.2337225

>>2336692
why are people impressed, he just did half work then copy pasted flipped, done.

>> No.2337229

>>2337218
missed chance to say something like: >mfw i see a thread like this.
You should keep on working on that by the way, try studying everything instead of hiding them with shadows.

>> No.2337235

>>2337218

Love it.

How many swatches did you use? Are you mostly just playing with opacity?

>> No.2337246

>>2337218
Dishonored/10

>> No.2337262

>>2337229
Well I did this in the dark with the flash of my phone directly on my face, so everything was actually too dark to paint. Not sure if I will continue to work on this one but I may do more with different expressions.

>>2337235
I didn't use swatches, I just use the eyedropper tool on the painting itself. For opacity i use the "tablet pressure controls opacity" option. Thanks btw.

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Master study im chuggin away on

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>>2337311
get out

>> No.2337361
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I feel like my shit is way better when I'm loose and don't give a fuck. It's hard to draw loosely over my construction layers without the lines becoming stiff or thick.

Little 5 minute doodle.

>> No.2337380
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>>2337361
Confident, loose, "I don't give a fuck" lines are the best.
Pic related is by Zooque, one of my favorite tumblr artists just because of how confident her lines are.

>> No.2337396

>>2336708
are they grabbing their ass or just looking over the shoulder? if this is some ecchi you should post the finished product later

>> No.2337422

>>2335578
That bottom face if hilarious

>> No.2337442
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How do I add contrast without just adding black lines?

I feel like the nose is working best because of the dark shadow, but where else can I put it? I guess I need to have a clearer light source?

Didn't mean for her to look like Roon Roon.

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>>2337442
Contrast is achieved by using contrasting values, the values on your picture are all very similar shades of grey, squint your eyes and look at your picture, do you realize that everything just looks kinda the same? Now squint your eyes at pic related, don't you see how even squinting, you can clearly see the shapes? You gotta make your values more extreme, the shadows darker and the lights lighter, I would recommend just doing studies of Sargent's portraits in black and white and it will start making sense.

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>>2337442
>>2337462

?

>> No.2337546
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>> No.2337557

>>2337491
Been wanting to redraw some Pokemon sprites as an ongoing thing.

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working on a portrait study but then I got bored....

>> No.2337573
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>>2337442
>>2337536
define a light source, then don't be afraid to go into the extreme darks and the extreme brights

>> No.2337583
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Doing some shitty sketches atm

>> No.2337603
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>> No.2337623
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wip

>> No.2337629
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Told myself that I would learn to draw this year.
Pic related. Second day of fucking around.

>> No.2337636
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Trying to get better at drawing full figures

>> No.2337639

>>2337182
the lines over the black parts on the squid is overkill for me.

>> No.2337646

>>2337218
Jo Shishido/10

>> No.2337650
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Beginner here. Trying out some lewd stuff. Wouldnt mind some critique, still need to get what i am doing wrong and how to make the paintings look interesting.

>> No.2337667
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like 15 min doodle, not that it matters.
I couldn't draw the hands, so i'm being a piece of shit and playing Minecaft instead.

>> No.2337700

>>2337629
you wont get anywhere like that. pick up a few books to get you on your way.
>read the sticky

>> No.2337701
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2337701

Yaaaay

>> No.2337720

>2337650

nice for a beginner very nice, i would like to see some more imaginative stuff but just as lewd, keep on painting, the only critique would be lighting and clean work, i like the blurry part but , if you are just beginning out i'd say your on one hellofa track

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2337797

sketched a robot/mech insect type thing

>> No.2337838

>>2337720
Thank you very much. I am still struggling to know how to "refine" the paitings.

>> No.2337856
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pick this apart please

its another draft of this >>2336438
since it was a fun concept

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sketching

>> No.2337861
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>>2337856
if I had to nitpick, that part of the arm is too fat, one of the blades is out of perspective unless it's supposed to be broken, and there MIGHT be something wrong with the horizon that could be fixed to make it look better but that's probably me being stupid. Otherwise I really like the pic and story

>> No.2337872

>>2337856
anatomy mistakes (arm and the hand on the wheel), goggles look flat, leg blends into the plane, bad perspective, cloud too similar to island, make futile for foreground objects thicker than background for depth, plane wings don't line up properly at the back etc.

>> No.2337873

>>2337872
*make lines for foreground objects thicker

>> No.2337884

>>2336752
Knees weak. Arms are heavy, he vomit on his sweater already, moms spaghetti

>> No.2337920
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trying to remember torso anatomy

>> No.2337926

Anyone for a trade? A sketch for books?

Is there a requests board anymore?

>> No.2338025

>>2337188
Thanks for sharing anyway.

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>>2337107
cool

>> No.2338083
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I was more focused in creating an outfit, so her eyes looks kinda weird.

>> No.2338097

>>2338083
Nevermind the eyes, why is she so out of balance? She looks like she is tilting forward.

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2338142

ok.

>> No.2338148

>>2336465
MEDIOCRE!

>> No.2338154

>>2338142
critique for this please.

>> No.2338155

>>2336982
>>2336465
Brushstrokes and style are very nice even if it has been done before, but you should really work on your fundamentals. You're style covers up some of your mistakes but not all of them

>> No.2338156

>>2337225
Because it's obviously not copy pasted, besides maybe the shape of the eyes

>> No.2338157

>>2338097
Yeah, didn't notice that, thanks anon.

>> No.2338166

>>2338142
Her head shouldn't be this big, the same goes for her eye, and it would be nice if you don't post giant ass pics.

>> No.2338167

>>2338142
>>2338154
looks like she has a huge skull, or a big wig

>> No.2338174

>>2337270
dayum

>> No.2338201

>>2338166
>>2338167

Tnx anons.

>> No.2338206

>>2338047
shit these are really nice

>> No.2338211

>>2337667
Damn.. That pic on the bottom left is great. These are nice.

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>>2337270
Finished (?) it, might come back to it at some point
Critique welcomed

>> No.2338227

>>2337861
thanks for the feedback. i actually bad my bro take a picture of me in that pose. i tried to make it all skinny so that it looks like an old guy. i need to learn the difference between old people bodies and younger people bodies. the blade looks fucked up now that you pointed it out. and the horizon is probably messed up because i free handed it. thanks again!

>>2337861
thanks for the feedback. how can i make the goggles not so flat? how would you shade the leg/plane so that they don't blend into each other?

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>>2335552
i can´t stop drawing in the bathroom.
i wonder if i am the only one?

>> No.2338260

>>2338201
No problem, don't let the difficulties bring ya down, if you can, practice everyday and you'll get better.

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>> No.2338272
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Just did a 20 minute gesture drawing.
Not my best work.
News print paper, 18 inchesx24, inches canvas, 2B graphite

>> No.2338276

>>2335585
Good use of implied lines

>> No.2338278

>>2338272
Shouldn't be a comma after 24. Just meant 18x24

>> No.2338316

>>2338272

if it took you 20 mins it ain't a gesture bruh, it just bad

>> No.2338318

>>2335868
fucking kek. its like something out of a cringe thread

>> No.2338319

>>2336465
pretty shit. as in it's really shitty

>> No.2338353
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2338353

mfw i've been badly painted

>> No.2338361
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2338361

Any thoughts? http://www.deviantart.com/art/Fire-Blood-Outlines-582364110

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>>2335552
My waifu.

>> No.2338427

>>2338353
looks sorta like a teletubbie.

>> No.2338463

>>2338427
He is a teletubbie then.

>> No.2338471

>>2338316
I use a website that generates figures to draw, and they have a timer, and they expect you to use up your timer.
Also, it's not bad.

>> No.2338513
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2338513

Been working on this turnaround of a knight character. I was hoping to get it done and mostly cleaned up tonight but I'm starting to feel run down as fuck and don't wanna work.

Consistency is the goal here so feel free to go nuts on any errors I've made.

>> No.2338526

>>2338272
obvious b8

>> No.2338616

>>2338206
Thanks

>> No.2338624

>>2338513
Feels like the design is missing something. I would give him a shield or a cape or something. just to bring in another shape and break up all the thin swooshy shapes you have because his entire body is monotonous.

>> No.2338639

>>2338624
Thanks that's a good point. I was trying to go for some contrast between the armour and cloth but looking at it you're right I'm using the same shapes for both.

>> No.2338686

>>2336184
the space between your eyes is an eye length, just a heads up

>> No.2338889
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>>2335552
>>2337920

another shitty page trying to work out figures :////

>> No.2338910
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i keep being told i draw faces wrong. The fuck am i fucking up?

>> No.2338927
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Trying to create these characters, how can i improve in making they look the same every time?

>> No.2338930
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Feel free to rate

>> No.2338931
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>>2338927
Also i know some people dont like lined paper, but this is what i got.

>> No.2338932
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2338932

doodel

>> No.2338937

>>2338931
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rrgS9AEnxiA

same concepts as in the video but identify what is unique about the character and repeat it, keeping in mind the distances of features in the face

>> No.2338948

>>2338937
Yeah, i think most of the problem is just lack of pratice.

>> No.2338950
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>>2338948
Just gonna post some more things

>> No.2338952
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>>2338950

>> No.2338954
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>>2338952

>> No.2338958
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>>2338954

>> No.2338963
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In beginners thread, want to see how well I'm doing, c&c welcome. Will post reference after this

>> No.2338964
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>>2338963
Reference.

>> No.2338973
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I doodled my crush :o

>> No.2338975
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Also this

>> No.2338976
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My current wip

>> No.2339004

>>2338963
i cant believe you were laughing at me honestly.

>> No.2339013
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2339013

First time poster, long-time lurker. Just got a intuos for christmas. still trying to get used to it and corel painter. critique is welcome.

>> No.2339114 [DELETED] 
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well shit

>> No.2339120
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>>2338889
quick 20 min sketch still working on poses. man i can't wait to focus on clothing, i have no idea about it at the moment :/

>> No.2339123

>>2338155
You're right, I'm using it as a crutch. Thanks man

>> No.2339136
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2339136

Grindin'

Feel free to r8/h8.

>> No.2339146
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2339146

fug, i'm really bad with pen, when i can't draw 1000 construction lines like with pencil.

But this thread is inspiring, gonna spend a few more hours trying to draw something confident like >>2338932 >>2336124 >>2335552 .

>> No.2339171

>>2335552
That guy in the middle reminds me of David Day-Lewis on Gangs of New York. Take off the beard but keep mutton chops and moustache, and it really looks like him.

>> No.2339173
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2339173

im i doing it right please anon ?

>> No.2339179
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2339179

any critique?

>> No.2339246
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A friend said something about how this one other drawing I did looked like a creature that was assembled from a hundred fragmented worlds. This came out of that.

>> No.2339257
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Kinda meh, but meh, ya know?

>> No.2339308
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Shit, but it's my shit. Sorry for whatever angle it comes out with

>> No.2339319
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Another master study im working on. Who painted the orginal? i think he was from /ic/ but i cant remember

>> No.2339332
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2339332

Sketched from the statues thread. Still just beginning. The faces are weird, but I was focusing more on body placement. Critiques welcome.

>> No.2339358

>>2339319
Jonathan Mathiasen

>> No.2339387

>>2339358
Thanks

>> No.2339441
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>>2338268

>> No.2339443
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>>2339441

I also did this for a friend but the body was traced

>> No.2339525

>>2337051
new meme

>> No.2339534
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2339534

Just pooped this out.

>> No.2339631
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my dog's feet

fucker kept moving

>> No.2339635
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>> No.2339642

>>2339631
nice fetish bruv

>> No.2339704
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Painted count?

>> No.2339712

>>2339704
shitty vandlism behind, shitty art in center nintendo 60meme on top. what a faggot you are.

>> No.2339723
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drew this at work while some downtime. I really was practicing because I have a large vinyl poster I plan to spraypaint(the mall threw away a bunch of vinyl posters and I copped them all).

Thoughts?

>> No.2339747
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2339747

Please rate and critique while being rude

>> No.2339763

>>2339747
i feel like the hair should be thicker in the back and her forearms are a bit short especially the left one

also the angle her face is at doesnt make sense in relation to the neck

>try making your head tilt like that

other than that

>> No.2339765

>>2339763
*other than that its pretty good

>> No.2339766

>>2339635
do a full body

>> No.2339767

>>2339443
>traced

get off /ic

>> No.2339771

>>2339332
nice

how long have you been drawing?

i really want to know

>> No.2339775

>>2339173
the one on the left is fine exept for the head and im not too sure about that right arm

>go look up 'one punch man'

>> No.2339779

>>2339136
i like it

*saved for ref

>link to a thread w/ your work?

>> No.2339781

>>2339013
i like it

how long have you been into art?

>> No.2339785

>>2338975
learn more about muscles and anatomy

especially facial anatomy

>> No.2339788

>>2338973
i like this

>> No.2339789

>>2338932
lern 2 boob

>> No.2339794

>>2338927
first of all study a little bit of anatomy and realistic construction

i know its annoying and hard and it feel like you dont need to, but if you put a little bit of effort into anatomy every day it will go a long way in your cartoons.

>i like do toons

>> No.2339795

>>2338910
learn to draw more (it doesnt have to be completely) realistic faces first

youll see the change trust me

>> No.2339800

>>2339120
i really like it exept for her legs

wats goin on there? you should learn the construction of the induividual parts of the limbs (especially legs)

when you find out exactly what shapes arms and legs are made of, then your symbol drawn joints and messy legs will evolve into more professional looking ones

>> No.2339802

>>2339800
i figured that shes wearing clothes but you should still regard the advice

>> No.2339803

>>2336184
remember the difference between pillow shading and real shading

im not saying you are pillow shading here but i can see it happening to you in the future

>> No.2339808
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>>2336174
same here

this still looks nice but i dont think this id what you want it to come out as

a good set of exercises to do is coloring with different 'moods'. sad, happy, intense, etc.

plan your color pallette ahead of time and THEN incorporate it into the drawing


this is how the pros do it

>not implying i am one

>> No.2339809

>>2335809
nice

post more?

>> No.2339811

>>2335780
remember to play with shapes, angles, and defined light sources

that will greatly improve your art

>> No.2339813

>>2335630
learn to anatomy and contruction plz

>> No.2339866

>>2339781
ive been drawing since kindergarten(im 20), but i started drawing people(mostly dbz characters) in first grade. i know people love to hate it but Naruto really got me into art and i draw more than just weeb stuff now because of my studies(still has that eastern/manga-esque feel to it though).

>> No.2339884
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i cant do it..

>> No.2339902

>>2339884
you gotta, anon

>> No.2339905
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>>2339884
man the fuck up you fucking coward!

>> No.2339963
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2339963

Practicing digital inking. Taken from Batman Unwrapped: Dark Knight.

>> No.2339968

>>2339771
Thanks! I've been drawing/doodling since I was a kid. But never anything serious. I started fundamentals a few months ago but stopped within a month... So I just started up again this week.

>> No.2340017

>>2339963
Fiddle with your brush/tablet settings, you're getting shoelacing on your strokes (where they suddenly get thinner at the end instead of tapering off properly)

It's pretty ugly and brings your inking down. I'm afraid I don't actually know what causes it so I can't be of any more help than pointing it out.

>> No.2340029

>>2339884

JUST

>> No.2340032

>>2339884
you don't have to start with blank canvas, anon.
kr0n doesn't
sakimi doesn't
i'm pretty sure crab mullins doesn't either

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crit?

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>> No.2340278

>>2339775
it not meant to be "one punch man" anon
im trying to practice with the hands

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nothing really to show, gave up on this. stipling takes too long

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i posted this in draw thread but it only took an hour so i guess it can go here too. please crit me guys

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spent more then an hour but fuckit. study focused on the face only, worked on understanding forms and rendering them. Won't finish since the rest is detail/texture stuff. Suggestions and crits are appreciated.

>> No.2340305

>>2340297
the under sketch looks like a mess. I'd work on being able to get a good and confident line drawing before working on colour. try getting good at drawing faces in pen traditionally and force yourself to not go over a line more than once

the nose and ear are pretty incorrect. i'm not too sure about the shoulders either

>> No.2340308

>>2340305
thank you, i'll keep it in mind

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ok /ic/, tell me what went wrong.

>> No.2340662

>>2339968
curious, when you say "I've been drawing/doodling since I was a kid. But never anything serious" do you mean you never meant to make money, or that you drew like anyone else in class and such?

>> No.2340664

>>2340278
if you want to get gud at hands, do a whole bunch of realistic.

this pic's hands dont look bad tho

>> No.2340666

>>2340262
lern how to construct boobs. also your arms and legs are anorexically skinny

>> No.2340667

>>2340506
not reading the sticky and using the beginner thread

>> No.2340670

>>2336315
eyes are freakishly small for the heads. even real eyes arent that small

also fix the ears or make the face bigger and match the angle of the head

>> No.2340688

>>2339179

love the middle stance and perspective.

left is good too.

rightmost looks off balance. third from left looks a little unnatural but I can't exactly say why.

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>>2335552

>> No.2340744

>>2340304
stop using soft brushed for the next 6 months
>>2340274
neat

>> No.2340752

>>2340304
the eyes are a little fucked

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for draw thread on /a/, but I can't finish it.

>> No.2340795

>>2340758

That looks so sweet I'd like to watch you drawing it to learn from you senpai.

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I was feeling some type of way

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>>2340806
Thanks phone

>> No.2340824

>>2340811
HIGH TEST THREAD REPORTING IN
The little bits left after you erased (what are those motherfuckers called?) make her look like she has hairy thighs.

>> No.2340836

>>2340758
Please be my friend Andrae

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The daily face study

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does this perspective makes sense?

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i'm horny

>> No.2340869

>>2340836
message me on tumblr, nile.

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Did this.

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Procrastinating drawing full bodies by doing a turnaround.

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I call this "I realised her arm was stupidly fucking long so now she just doesn't have one"

>> No.2341281

someone make a new thread, i'm too lazy to get a photo

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eh

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I started to can into letters, comments and suggestions are welcome

>> No.2342212

>>2340824
Lol

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didn't finish it because im a fearful piece of shit

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>>2342346
We should meet , we have the same thing in common

>> No.2342919

>>2340304
Why so much blurr ? Try to use some blending , not blurr , it will challenge you

>> No.2343768

>>2338243
Da Troll-chang!

>> No.2344190

>>2337603
Not bad, I always worry when I try to do really dense, colourful abstract art that it's just going to come out looking brown, but I think you left enough white so that didn't happen.