PORN THREAD

[Anonymous No.2228227]

Post your nsfw, critique work and so on.
Furry is allowed, however do not over indulge on the subject of furries or their culture. Unnecessarily reporting these anons are strongly discouraged. This thread is dedicated to helping anons improve their erotic drawings and paintings.

Do not start flame wars.
Do not reply to funposters.
Please stay on topic.

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Questions about references for drawing porn will be answered.

[Anonymous No.2228246]

What can I do to make this hotter?

[Anonymous No.2228256]

>>2228246
learn what form is and not rely on contours
>inb4 post your work
>inb4 jelly, mad, salty etc

[Anonymous No.2228257]

>>2228256
>learn what form

Like, learn fundamental anatomy?

[Anonymous No.2228258]

I want to physically rape mikufag

[Anonymous No.2228260]

>>2228257
yes

exactly what I said, you understood it right to the point. Oh man, you are by far the smartest fellow here.

[Anonymous No.2228284]

>>2228260
Sure you're not salty? You seem a little salty.

[Anonymous No.2228312]

>>2228257
Form is more than anatomy. Form is the anatomy of the universe.

Figure out spheres, cubes, cylinders, cones, pyramids.

[Anonymous No.2228398]

I've been commissioned to draw some smut and the commissioner asked for some intricate as shit poses for the characters, but there's something off about the whole thing but I can't tell exactly what. If someone notices and point it back to me it would be really helpful!

[Anonymous No.2228403]

>>2228398
where do you learn line weights

[Anonymous No.2228404]

>>2228398
he looks disgusted

[Anonymous No.2228408]

>>2228398
her body looks a little shifted to the side, as if some one had pulled the smudge tool over her entire body slightly to the left. Other than that it looks good, to me at least.

[Anonymous No.2228410]

>>2228403
Why? There's something wrong with the line weights?

>>2228404
I know, but it was the commissioner's call.

[Anonymous No.2228412]

Anybody know who did this? >>2224721

[Anonymous No.2228425]

>>2228398
Is this bbc?

[Anonymous No.2228427]

>>2228410
teach me

[Anonymous No.2228466]

>>2228425
are you blind?

[Anonymous No.2228472]

>>2228398
>there's something off about the whole thing but I can't tell exactly what.
tl;dr
anatomy and perspective are shitty

[Anonymous No.2228473]

>>2228227

any tips on advertising and promoting your porno biz?

[Anonymous No.2228478]

>>2228425
all my sides

[Anonymous No.2228481]

Posting again because last thread died before bump limit.

[Anonymous No.2228483]

>>2228408
Yeah you are right, thanks! I balanced more the weight of her torso and I think it works better now. Please tell if there's something more you'd fix.

>>2228425
what is 'bbc'?

>>2228427
lol, I don't even know. It flows naturally while I draw, there's not a complex mind process really.


On another note: how much would you pay to commission a piece like this?

[Anonymous No.2228490]

>>2228472
okay, redline it please?

[Anonymous No.2228491]

>>2228483
AYY PUTASO

[Anonymous No.2228492]

>>2228473
it's really not that hard
option a:
1. practice
2. practice
3. practice
4. get good
5. show your art around
6. get commissions

option b:
1. be mediocre/bad
2. show your shit around
3. keep showing your shit around
4. show some more of your shit around
5. still showing?
6. get (underpaid) commissions

[Anonymous No.2228496]

>>2228490
>spoonfeed me plz
not a chance lol

[Anonymous No.2228498]

>>2228481
if you look closely you can see another face

[Anonymous No.2228503]

>>2228483
Her legs look short. Breasts seem too far apart as well.

[Anonymous No.2228508]

>>2228491
'the fooq?

>>2228496
lol why so edgy anon.

[Anonymous No.2228509]

>>2228483
>lol, I don't even know. It flows naturally while I draw, there's not a complex mind process really.
yeah, it's pretty obvious you should have put more time into the construction phase. the feet and palm are pretty bad, and these are only the more obvious mistakes. there are a lot of other small errors throughout the whole piece.

On another note: how much would you pay to commission a piece like this?
for this piece as it is? maybe 5 bucks lol. you have a somewhat good line-art, but the bodies lack weight and presence, mainly because of your lack of basic perspective comprehension.
normalfags that don't have an "artistic eye" wouldn't notice most of the stuff I mentioned, so you could get more money out of them.

[Anonymous No.2228515]

>>2228509
Somebody woke up on the wrong side of his dakimakura

[Anonymous No.2228519]

>>2228509
Oh good thing I got paid considreably more for it then.
(still I agree with you over the feet and palm, they look kind of shitty indeed. I'll fix that.)

[Anonymous No.2228527]

>>2228515

[Anonymous No.2228533]

>>2228519
I suggest you to start agreeing with me on the lack of weight and presence thingie too. As soon as possible.
Also, there are tons of people with shit taste that will pay good money for stuff worse than this you showed here. Just so you don't start thinking that the money you made out of this shows how good your art really is.

[Anonymous No.2228536]

>>2228515
>googles dakimakura
>tfw the guy already knew what that is

[Anonymous No.2228541]

>>2228533
>being this jelly when someone else is making money

[Anonymous No.2228549]

>>2228541
I'm not really jelly, since my art is better than this and I do commissions too.
You should really stop implying shit.

inb4 show your art
inb4 mercwip.jpg

[Anonymous No.2228550]

>>2228515
>has to google dakimakura
>tfw realizes the guy trying to burn him knows what a dakimakura is

[Anonymous No.2228562]

>>2228549
>being this much full of himself

[Anonymous No.2228563]

>>2228533
>>2228549

You seem to have had a rough day, please treat your self to a nice cup of tea, you favorite show or what ever makes you happy tonight..

[Anonymous No.2228566]

>>2228550
>Googles dakimakura
>They come in hot anime dudes as well??

[Anonymous No.2228567]

>>2228563
I'm not mad at the guy or anything. I simply gave him some advice. If he's smart, he'll take it and make his art better, if not he'll probably sound like you thinking I'm jelly of not really sure what and won't learn anything.

[Anonymous No.2228570]

>>2228566
>being 2015
>using homosexual jokes to degrade someone
>being my sides. melting.

[Anonymous No.2228575]

>>2228567
I never called you jelly, but your attitude comes off as quite.. edgy, for the lack of a better words, so I thought you where upset about some thing.

>>2228570
Now you are the one making the homosexual jokes, I really wanted one!

[Anonymous No.2228577]

>>2228570
>It's 2015!
>Being homosex is totally not degenerate and degrading guise! It's perfectly healthy and normal!

So brave and heroic, how progressive!

[Anonymous No.2228589]

>>2228577
gr8 b8 m8 I r8 8/8

[Anonymous No.2228683]

>>2228398
tumblr?

[Anonymous No.2228928]

I'll fucking do it.
Yeah
yeah I'm-a do it up.
Hold me back.
I'm-a do it.
Hold me back nigga

[Anonymous No.2228942]

>>2228227
This guy looks like my friend and it's really uncomfortable.

[Anonymous No.2228979]

ARKOMEDA SAVE US!

[Anonymous No.2228980]

>>2228942
>cartoons are your friends

[Anonymous No.2229064]

>>2228398
his hand looks like a nutsack.
And his fingers look like ryukishi07 drew them.
Maybe you should try drawing blobs over his mouth and see which parts look the most attractive because i think his mouth is the weirdest part.
plus his face is wide, thats generally pretty ugly.

[Anonymous No.2229443]

"muh anatomy" and other buzzwords aside, what can I do to make this not look disgusting as shit? The midriff is killing me, as is the proportions of pretty much everything else. If someone could provide a drawover or just point out what looks wrong/needs to be fixed, that would be helpful.

[Anonymous No.2229447]

>>2229443
Make the shoulder blade area back farther. The way it is now, the character would be perpetually leaning forward, even when standing up straight.

Arms too thin.
Stomach too long vertically.
Belly button too low.
Waist too skinny (?)
Ribcage too long vertically.

[Anonymous No.2229508]

>Havent been drawing for a while
>tfw forget own methods

[Anonymous No.2229510]

>>2229508
That's a good thing. You might also want to hit your head hard enough so you can forget how to pillow shade and then you'll be on a clean slate for the beginner thread.

[Anonymous No.2229513]

>>2229510
>Still using buzzwords
>2015

[Anonymous No.2229518]

>>2229513
>saying the word buzzword
>3 months from 2016

[Anonymous No.2229529]

>>2229518
>counting the extra 6-7 days as a month
>2015

[Anonymous No.2229531]

>>2229529
>unable to count

[Anonymous No.2229538]

>>2229513
>pillow shading
>buzzword
An hero.

[Anonymous No.2229664]

Bunch of autistic idiots greentexting like anybody cares.

[Anonymous No.2229671]

>>2229664
seriously.

>Still using X meme
>haha anon ur such a square dont you know X meme is in now?
>Like Oh-Em-Gee anon is so out of the loop xD
>So then i told tiffany about pepe frog and she was like suuuch a normie about it xDD

[Anonymous No.2229674]

Just started this, gotta let it rest until tomorrow
what do you think?

[Anonymous No.2229685]

>>2229674
beginner's thread material. sry.

[Anonymous No.2229687]

>>2229685
No one would want to see that in the beginners thread. It belongs in this containment thread.

[Anonymous No.2229690]

>>2229685
Oh, I didn't know, thought this was just for porn no matter the skill, sorry.

[Anonymous No.2229695]

kinda first time doing something like this just to try what I've learned with vilppu today, it's random and probably won't finish but any crits are welcome

[Anonymous No.2229696]

>>2229690
It is. Don't listen to that faggot.

[Anonymous No.2229698]

>>2229695

[Anonymous No.2229699]

>>2229698
You desperate for replies?

[Anonymous No.2229705]

>>2229674
Head's too small and the vagina shouldn't be spread unless something's spreading it.

[Anonymous No.2229709]

>>2229699
Yes, I want feedback, karma is not working, sigh. :/

[Anonymous No.2229747]

New set I finished, the rest can be found here :
http://imgur.com/a/M7yht

[Anonymous No.2229748]

>>2229747
Honestly, it kind of looks like an edit. The dick just doesn't fit.

[Anonymous No.2229752]

>>2229698
>>2229695
If I fapped to drawings, I could probably fap to yours. Like it.

[Anonymous No.2229755]

>>2229695
I'd give that right arm another try from zero and neck and torso are way too long (her hips look also abruptly thick in comparison with her rather thin back)

>>2229698
Again, her torso is too long and I'd short the distance of her head to her shoulders a little.

Still, do not demotivate.You have a sense for body gestures, so with practicing daily a lot more realistic anatomy (even if you plan to keep drawing in anime style) you can get a lot better in rather a short period of time.

[buttons No.2229762]

Rough sketch, thought I'd post it

[Anonymous No.2229770]

>>2229762
rotate+resize godamn.

As for the pic itself, there are so many problems I'm not sure where to begin.

[Anonymous No.2229788]

>>2229770
then why post

[buttons No.2229806]

>>2229770
Well, help me improve. The only thing intentional is the forearms being large.

[Anonymous No.2229899]

>>2229770
lots of anatomy problems, torso muscles dont work like that, she has a broken back, her leg has no volume, im sure there are other problems

[Anonymous No.2229925]

Not sure if this is going on the right way.

[Anonymous No.2230071]

>>2229687
>>2229690
He can post it here as much as he wants. I just gave him a critique.

[Anonymous No.2230289]

Is there a list of the laws regarding drawing pornographic cartoons in the US or UK anywhere?

Pretty sure the loli stuff can get you some hard time. What about violent stuff? Snuff and rape based stuff?

If someone commissions some messed up stuff I don't want to have my life fucked up for drawing it.

[Anonymous No.2230301]

>>2230289
If in doubt, don't do it. What's the problem? Are you so desperate for money, that you are afraid of refusing a commission?

[Anonymous No.2230312]

>>2230301
What this anon said. You don't NEED to do a commission unless the guy's already paid for it, heck you could even turn it down purely for personal tastes, though that's not going to get you a good rep.

But loli can get you in prison, don't believe violent stuff can, though. I think that only applies to actual porn, not drawn stuff. Might wanna just double check it, though.

[Anonymous No.2230328]

>>2230312
just state what you won't do upfront in your commission info along with a statement that you also have the right to turn down any work if you don't feel comfortable doing it

[Anonymous No.2230418]

>>2229508
>what are edges

[Anonymous No.2230421]

/ic/ is no doubt among the unprovoked angriest boards I have ever witnessed. People here don't just mock what they deem to be bad, they berate them with such involvement that you normally only see after some autist gets trolled for half a thread and snaps.

Here, people are constantly on that kind of edge.
Perma-autists, if you will

[Anonymous No.2230422]

>>2230421
>abloo bloo bloo

[Anonymous No.2230487]

>>2230421
It's for the best really, /ic/ has also forged some decent artist

>“The two most harmful words in the English language are ‘good job.’ ”

this is /ic/ I believe it is justified how many tumblr/DA/generic animu pics do you see here daily? now multiply that the world over. Some people on /ic/ really want to make it big in the art industry but they're not going to make it if /ic/ is a hug box like other sites.

This board is the kitchen (Hell's kitchen) if it's too hot for you i'm afraid you'll have to leave.

[Anonymous No.2230521]

>>2230421
>/ic/ is no doubt among the unprovoked angriest boards I have ever witnessed

You have clearly not visited /3/.

[cool anon No.2230524]

a blowjob, quick study

[Anonymous No.2230532]

>>2228491
Argentino o Uruguayo?

[Anonymous No.2230579]

>>2230487
>/ic/ has also forged some decent artist

Who? Who came to /ic/ as a beginner and left on pro level?

Most of the people who regular here are beginners or amateurs who let cheap internet fame get to their head.

[Anonymous No.2230580]

>>2230524
>name
>'study'
I'm sure.

[Anonymous No.2230629]

>>2229674
Still with this, thoughs?

[cool anon No.2230636]

>>2230580

lol... sure of what..?

[Anonymous No.2230656]

>>2230629
resize it for previews it's annoying to look at at that size.

The pose looks unstable and uncomfortable. It doesn't read well and she looks unbalanced.

Also her vagina is about as large as her head and half of her body is hips. It looks very wonky.

[Anonymous No.2230670]

>>2230656
Well, I wanted to exaggerate the proportions, maybe I went a little to far.

I think turning the drawing a little makes it more stable. Well, gonna start coloring, hope next time I'll make a better drawing.

[Anonymous No.2230673]

>>2230670
Well, that's a pretty admirable attitude dude!

At least you can finish shit. If I notice something overwhelmingly wrong and I'm not skilled enough to fix it I give up and go back to studying.

[Anonymous No.2230675]

>>2230670

your lineart needs work man, or your pressure curve on your tablet needs calibrated.

Would've been okay if not for babby's first tablet digital inking job

[Anonymous No.2230682]

>>2230673
Well, don't be so hard with yourself, not every drawing has to be perfect or even finished, draw a lot of sketches without worrying, nobody has to see them and they are just for you. To make a good drawing you have to do 1000 shits before.

[Anonymous No.2230683]

>>2230675
I know, I'm a total begginer with the tablet, I mean, how the fuck do you do this >>2229695 I wouldn't even know how to make the same brush.

Any advices for digital inking? some tutorials?

[Anonymous No.2230715]

>>2230683

Truth be told, it's going to take you hours of experimenting and chewing up and digesting what other people do until you get to a point where you're comfortable with your own drawing workflow (brushes, etc.)

There's some yeah no shit rules like in the stuff I'm about to post but it's mostly your personal journey

[Anonymous No.2230718]

>>2229925
>...and then she farts!

[Anonymous No.2230722]

>>2230715

http://cottonbun.tumblr.com/post/118392841715

http://helpfulharrie.tumblr.com/post/101734715361/do-you-have-anything-good-on-line-art-in-sai-ive

http://keppok.tumblr.com/post/129750352790/i-really-love-the-lines-you-make-so-clean

[Anonymous No.2230728]

>>2230722
thank you!

[Anonymous No.2230777]

>>2230718
>Even better

[Arkomeda No.2230837]

>>2228979

Soon

[Anonymous No.2230856]

Would like some critique on this one please.

[Anonymous No.2230859]

>>2230856
Broken spine

[Anonymous No.2230865]

>>2230859
Does still looks broken ?

[Anonymous No.2230887]

>>2230865
Looks acceptable now I think

[Anonymous No.2230889]

>>2230865
>tfw you will never be boned by a skellington

[Anonymous No.2230976]

>>2228567
You just act like an insufferable cunt, that's all. That's why the other anon thought you were upset.

[Anonymous No.2230999]

how do i learn to make proper highlights/choose the right colors? I know the reflections are there and I know they are very sharp but I can't seem to render them properly. It just looks like white spray paint on the skin.

[Anonymous No.2231003]

>>2230999
The shape of everything in your study is completely off.

Switch up using a hard and soft brush for different highlight sections.

[Anonymous No.2231014]

>>2230976
whatever rocks your boat buddy
I don't really care about being a nice guy or anything related to that.

[Anonymous No.2231016]

>>2230999
first learn a bit more of anatomy and perspective. like the other anon said, it's obvious from your study that you don't understand how to shape objects and put them into an environment/space so that they look convincing. you should stop skipping basic steps of your learning process. if you don't understand the fundamentals you can't just try to hide it by trying to get good at even more advanced stuff.
tl;dr you are polishing a turd. stop doing that if you want to get good.

[Anonymous No.2231029]

>>2230999
that's not even reverse cowgirl

[Anonymous No.2231268]

>>2230579
I think TehMeh started here and now makes $450 a day animating. Of course that's only one person.
>>2230487
I actually used to post on the reddit art boards until I realized that none of them were ever going to be more than hobbyists. It was refreshing to come here and see the unyielding criticism.

[Desmeme No.2231293]

this just a doodle though kinda interested in at least some feedback

[Anonymous No.2231359]

>>2228481
the gracilis on the left doesn't go there.

[Anonymous No.2231360]

>>2231268
Yehmeh lives hand to mouth between commissions. He doesn't even have his own place. He goes from sofa to sofa between friends. He's a druggy that likes to hear the sound of his own voice.

[Anonymous No.2231373]

>>2231360
Is there a link to that info?

[Anonymous No.2231410]

>>2228483
Her:
The boobs look strange, like she has been flattened backwards
Given her hips, there is no way that her knee could be there, or you need to redraw her right hip. Hide the lower leg and just look at the hip, you'll see your brain fills in with a sideview of the leg.
She litterally cannot stand this way, get her left feet flat at the very least

Him, the way he is leaning back looks weird, like the surface is inclined towards us
Look at his left shoulder and arm and where the torso connects, something is off
There is an area just under his balls, I don't get what is happening there
the leg folded under him is wrong as well

Must also add I like the way you do linework.

[Anonymous No.2231500]

>>2229447
Thanks, I adjusted all of those things. Anything else I can do as far as shapes/volume/silhouette goes?

[Anonymous No.2231727]

Minus the feet, which I haven't gotten to, how is the anatomy?

[Anonymous No.2231730]

>>2231727

[Anonymous No.2231734]

>>2231727
Face looks wrong. Stomach is poorly centered. Her right leg looks disconnected.

>>2231730
You're not helping. If you don't have anything useful to say, don't say anything at all.

[Anonymous No.2231736]

>>2231734
>You're not helping. If you don't have anything useful to say, don't say anything at all.

[Anonymous No.2231737]

>>2228425
you mean bbcuck-chan?

[Anonymous No.2231738]

>>2231734
Dumbass, he literally didnt say anything.

[Anonymous No.2231756]

Hey, since Halloween is around the corner I decided to make a lewd poster for the theme.

I made this pic a while ago and it's a similar theme I want to keep in the new poster(chained up, collar, alone, pumpkins, ect.warning furry).
https://e621.net/post/show/173249/all_fours-amber_eyes-ass_up-bear-black_nose-breast

I really didn't move improve much, but would like to know how could I make things hotter for the new poster? My idea is to not fully show all naughty bits, and emphasize on softness, textures and maybe a color pallete on the warmer side.

Thoughts?

[Anonymous No.2231760]

>>2231756
How about a furfag impaled on a spear and stuffed with hay?

[Anonymous No.2231774]

>>2231737
Just ask him if you can bare his children already.

[Anonymous No.2231876]

[Anonymous No.2231898]

>>2231876
>TOLBEROOOOONE

[Anonymous No.2231902]

>>2231756
Her face lacks femininity. I like the overall image, though.

[Anonymous No.2231903]

>>2231876
doujin when?

[Anonymous No.2231912]

>>2231730
>>2231736
Oh God, I stopped browsing /3/ to get away from you. Fuck this place too.

[Anonymous No.2231922]

>>2231727
we already told you to learn your damn fundamentals about anatomy and perspective, before you try to learn shading and coloring. do you have comprehension problems?

[Anonymous No.2231923]

>>2231737
obsessing like that over someone is really unhealthy dude

[Anonymous No.2231924]

>>2231923
Shut up BBCuck.

[Anonymous No.2231926]

oh wow, these threads are always so fun to read. it's somewhat flattering that I'm making such an impact on people lol.

also, wat do when script says "foot long cock; buried balls deep; filling womb with cum; x-ray"?
I like challenges, but seriously, FML.

[Anonymous No.2231930]

>>2231926
That looks painful as fuck man, jesus.

[Anonymous No.2231931]

>>2231926
I guess some people get turned on by stuff like this. I don't know man.

[Anonymous No.2231938]

>>2231926
Take it from the side, stomach deformed, so that instead of like, breaking the anatomy, you just stretch it outwards.

[Anonymous No.2231941]

>>2231926

You have a bad same face problem.

[Anonymous No.2231942]

>>2231938
That could work better, I agree. But this is supposed to be a frontal shot of her. However I think putting the cock more in perspective towards the viewer would just make everything look less readable.

[Anonymous No.2231944]

>>2231941
Well, sure, but it's not like I can't draw different faces. It's just that I try to draw faces that are appealing to me, so I end up making the same features that I like. In comics this turns out to be a very good thing since you have to draw the same 2-3 characters constantly.

[Anonymous No.2231952]

>>2231926
lotta manga have shots like this that you could check for reference, my suggestion is just to do it from the side as >>2231938 said so you can show the distention, and then have an x-ray to the side that shows the cock pressing against/maybe popping into the womb (not possible in real life but people draw it a lot) while bustin

[Anonymous No.2232014]

>>2231902
I will keep that in mind. I will actually use women in reference to the next project l make as well.

[Anonymous No.2232037]

OMG, all my sides, all my sides. You guys are sooooo funny hahahaha oh shit.

[Anonymous No.2232047]

>>2232037
There's nothing funny about making a lewd poster of your waif and hanging it on your bedroom wall for parents to marvel in shame.

[Anonymous No.2232059]

angle of insertion feels like it might be off
anybody got any good tips for large insertion?
i assume the largest you can go is the diameter between the pubic bone and the sacrum and that once through there, the additional length would spill out through the abdomen?

then again, things usually inserted into the vaginal opening tend to have an amount of give, kinda bending to the path a bit, where as more rigid bodies wouldn't, hmm...

[Anonymous No.2232101]

>>2231876
>Tail torture.
That's fucking genius, its the second time i am utterly surprised by a fetish along with the first time i saw ovary piercings.

[Anonymous No.2232107]

>>2231926
Nice one, BBCuck. Whats your tumblr i cant find it anywhere.

[Anonymous No.2232177]

>>2232059
f-fuck feet, man, fuck em

[Anonymous No.2232462]

>>2232107
You don't need it.

[Anonymous No.2232471]

¿?

[Anonymous No.2232483]

>>2232471
Looks like she's blowing two midgets with super girth cocks

[Anonymous No.2232497]

>>2232471
i love the way you draw her right hand
you are truly the master of drawing hands holding something

[Anonymous No.2232630]

>>2231926
>my vagina when seeing this image

[Anonymous No.2232639]

>>2232630
i want my dick in ur vagina
bby pls show me ur tits
oh yeah i love attention whores

[Anonymous No.2232645]

>>2232639
lol chill out

[Oxnard Montalvo No.2232647]

>>2232471
Shadman, is that you?

[Anonymous No.2232648]

>>2232483
Are they really out of proportion? I was going by the legs and it seems the same. But I dunno, didn't focus too much on them either way.

>>2232497
As long as it isn't a tiny hand I'm chalking it up as progress.

>>2232647
Ouch.

[Anonymous No.2232656]

SQUID
I FINALLY GOT 2000 VIEWS IN MY SITE
I AM SO HAPPY

squid i love u dont u forget that.
we are gonna b happy 2gether. pls live a happy life
i always pray for ur success
*kisses
*hugs
*pokes ur tight butthole with my erection

[Anonymous No.2232658]

>>2230670
Hi again, I finished the piece. I think aside from the lineart has turned up well. Not sure how to make her lactating thought, any tips? or it looks well enough?

[Anonymous No.2232660]

>>2232658
welp
im not planning to sleep tonight anyways

[Anonymous No.2232662]

>>2232658
>
It looks likes she's vacuuming air into her tit.

[Anonymous No.2232665]

>>2232658
Very poor anatomy, gross rendering, half-assed background.

[Anonymous No.2232672]

>>2232660
Not sure if you're saying it because you are horrified or because you're going to fap but I'm glad with both possibilities.

>>2232662
Yeah, it definitely looks too pointy at the end, don't know how to do it...

[Anonymous No.2232676]

>>2232658
Please tell me this is a nurse from Silent Hill 2

[Anonymous No.2232680]

>>2232676
Of course, I didn't think there would be place for doubt.

[Anonymous No.2232697]

>>2232662
Pretty rough but I think is better now.

[Anonymous No.2232752]

>>2231944

Do you actually want help or are you just going to keep making up excuses?It's every damn time.

[Anonymous No.2232810]

>>2232752
dog, he's here for people to pick apart his anatomy, not nitpick his character designs

[Anonymous No.2232939]

>>2232177
i like your toes

[Anonymous No.2232948]

>>2231944
It's also good to leave one's comfort zone and show some range. Otherwise your work becomes redundant pretty quickly.

[Anonymous No.2233068]

>>2232752
I explicitly wrote what my concerns were about that illustration. I really don't need "help" that tells me I make samefaces, when I know that's really not an issue I should care about.

[Anonymous No.2233069]

>>2232948
I agree, but that's not what I'm looking for in these comics.

[Anonymous No.2233090]

>>2233068
>I really don't need "help" that tells me I make samefaces, when I know that's really not an issue I should care about.
That's a really bad attitude to take.

[Anonymous No.2233092]

>>2233090
Maybe I said that the wrong way. I meant to say that's not an issue I should care about in this specific illustration/comic.

But as always it's going to be misinterpreted or forgotten and all that /ic/ will remember is I have a bad attitude, or that I have a cuckold fetish lol.

[Anonymous No.2233096]

>>2233092
It's not like you're not guilty of both counts.

[Anonymous No.2233106]

>>2233096
nah. cuckold isn't a fetish of mine. I actually find it really hard to draw these comics, since I can't relate to them. as for attitude, I'm simply being honest and say what I think. If that results in a bad attitude, I guess I can't really do anything about it.

[Anonymous No.2233110]

>>2232177
nice

[Anonymous No.2233122]

>>2232471
the perspective is, again, all over the place, dude.
you should really practice more of that.

[Anonymous No.2233143]

>>2229695
please do finish it, the pose and the softness of the body are very pleasing. Could look great with just a bit cartoon shading.

[Anonymous No.2233145]

>>2231926
that uterus is about twice as high as it should be...

[Anonymous No.2233146]

>>2231926
are you draw this?
please draw indian girls in this position please?
sorry for bad english i am from bangladesh
i love your art my friends also like it too.
do you have more place you put your work i want to collect and print

[Anonymous No.2233158]

>>2233145
sherlock, is that you?

[Anonymous No.2233274]

really spiffy character.

[Anonymous No.2233275]

>>2233158
Not him, but it bothers me as well because instead of being drawn as if it's being stretched and forcefully pushed up it's drawn as if it just got transported there or is naturally so high.

[Anonymous No.2233278]

>>2233274
>That potato face.
9/10 would operate with if she wears a fullface.

[Anonymous No.2233297]

>>2233274
Why did you make her hair red? Serious question.

[Anonymous No.2233320]

>>2233274
The face is weird and the feet are enormous but pretty good.

[Anonymous No.2233323]

>>2233297
probably their monitor has weirdish colors

[Anonymous No.2233329]

>>2233297
its brown

[Anonymous No.2233349]

>>2233275
Nice. That's something I will definitely use. I'll stretch the uterus much more. Thanks!

[Anonymous No.2233366]

>>2233274
damn, kyle, the only thing you are good at is drawing feet

[Anonymous No.2233382]

>>2231876
i fucking love you season

[Anonymous No.2233387]

>>2233274
Why did you give that woman a toddler's face?
Also, gigantic feet.

[Anonymous No.2233395]

>>2233387
Because anime.

[Anonymous No.2233438]

>>2232939
>>2233110
danke, i hope i managed to improve this some

>>2233274
you seem to be the feet guy, may i ask if these look decent?
also, cute~

[Anonymous No.2233440]

>>2232939
>>2233110
danke, i hope i managed to improve this some

>>2233274
you seem to be the feet guy, may i ask if these look decent?
also, cute~

[Arkomeda No.2233491]

Part 2 of the tutorial is done. Time to draw the insides of the shaft.
Also, this isn't furry-bait (mostly), I just added them because its not as fun to draw real humans.

>>2231924
I have to ask, why are people shitting on BBC-Chan. Is this shit trolling or something?

[Arkomeda No.2233493]

>>2233491

Devided into two parts because file is over 6000px in height.

[Anonymous No.2233496]

>>2233491
Yes. Just like everywhere else on 4chinz there's a few assholes hellbent on ruining things for everyone. Scaring away good artists seems to be how these shitters operate in /ic/.

[Anonymous No.2233497]

>>2233366
you fucking what u pice of shit i will fite u hes good at everything u fag

[Anonymous No.2233499]

>>2233491
Is this the Lackadaisy lady's?

[Anonymous No.2233503]

>>2233491
>>2233493

the yellow tint makes me think you are some disgustingly greasy fat fuck. you really should get rid of it if you want to have fappable porn

[Anonymous No.2233521]

>>2233440
Different anon, went through kyle's titty blog, found this

[Anonymous No.2233525]

>>2233491
I guess some people are offended by the cuckold nature of his comics, and the fact that he's so good at what he does irritates them even more.

[Anonymous No.2233528]

>>2228398
You frequent tumblr don't you?

[Anonymous No.2233535]

>waiting for the "how to draw farts" tutorial

[Anonymous No.2233538]

>>2233491
>>2233493
I love you.

[Anonymous No.2233539]

>shit anatomy
>animu rip-offs
>franco serb rip-offs
>attention whores

Yep! Just another pornthread.

[Anonymous No.2233557]

>>2233539
the immense amount of not giving a fuck about posts like this is indescribable lol

[Anonymous No.2233563]

>>2233539
post your art :^)

[Anonymous No.2233580]

ITT: Talentless hacks

[Anonymous No.2233596]

>>2233539
>>2233563
>>2233580

[Anonymous No.2233614]

>>2231500
Yo, this looks amazing now. Really good job!

[Anonymous No.2233620]

>>2233580
>>2233557

[Anonymous No.2233658]

>>2230722
>>2230715
Fucking nice. Thank you anon.

[Anonymous No.2233713]

>>2229770
>yiff
got 80% of your troubles there buddy

[Anonymous No.2233894]

The struggle.

[Anonymous No.2233899]

>>2233491
>>2233493
you're doing great keep it up stay focused

[Anonymous No.2233931]

>>2233894
those veins are looking better.

[Anonymous No.2233962]

>>2233894
>mfw

[Anonymous No.2233973]

>>2233894
My sides.

[Anonymous No.2234005]

>>2228515
https://youtu.be/V_hNTGpL7ns

[Anonymous No.2234008]

>>2233440
They look fine too me. Try adding the ankle bone.

[Anonymous No.2234165]

>>2231730
The smug lil duckling

[Anonymous No.2234169]

>>2233146
This is the cutest post.
not him but ill consider it

[Anonymous No.2234199]

>>2230532
es medio de trolo decir putaso así que seguro es uruguayo

[Anonymous No.2234215]

would appreciate some redline, thanks

[Anonymous No.2234217]

>>2234215
>b"b"m on loli
fucking garbage-tier.

also, the way the loli's hand is just laying there open makes it look like she's dead. And the vagina looks weird. The angle of the top of her right foot is also weird, the foot should look somewhat like an acute triangle when viewed from the side, not like an L.

[Anonymous No.2234244]

>>2234215
>the way the loli's hand is just laying there open makes it look like she's dead
obviously intentional anon geez

[Anonymous No.2234254]

Hows the perspective on this?

I know its not overtly pornographic at this stage but it will be rather fetishistic when I finish it.

[Anonymous No.2234279]

>>2234215
is there a reason why youre drawing disgusting shit like that

[Anonymous No.2234283]

>>2234215
you are fucking scary

[Anonymous No.2234286]

>>2234215
loli anal fat guy necrophilia

mmm

[Anonymous No.2234287]

>>2234283
What are you, some kind of faggot?

[Anonymous No.2234288]

>>2234254
shaded gigantic speech bubbles are kind of distracting but i like her face

[Anonymous No.2234293]

>>2234254
my thought process when I saw your lovely drawing ignore this if this is shitty advice, Im learning the drawing skill with you friend
well...

head is too big friend, I used the transform tool. if you imagine the camera going up to a normal eye level perspective her head would be huge compared to her body. with this camera angle you have maybe make it converge like a rectangle. I showed that using the awesome transform tool just how I vishuali it you dont have to do it like me do it like you imagine it friend
dont hide the hands bro I can tell what youre doing you sneaky dog
shes not sitting on the chair man shes gonna fall. is that even a chair?? why is the front so curvy make it a square. dont show her vagina in this angle. I fucked up the legs haha. wait is that stairs shes sitting on, please answer. im sorry its a drunk sunday night and im talking about drawing online. good drawing brother

[Anonymous No.2234296]

>>2234215
woww she is young, feds coming, your going to jail

[Anonymous No.2234298]

>>2234296
ever consider that they guy might just be really big?

[Anonymous No.2234300]

>>2234293
>>2234293
whats going on here, why does half of this sound normal and the other half is gibberish? Is there a reason why you're acting drunk on an anonymous board, and yes it IS shitty advice

[Anonymous No.2234304]

i seriously hope everyone here is just pretending to be retarded

[Anonymous No.2234315]

thoughts on her design?

[Anonymous No.2234318]

>>2234300
>its a drunk sunday night

[Anonymous No.2234319]

>>2234318
>believing that

[Anonymous No.2234322]

>>2234319

[Anonymous No.2234357]

>>2234215
I feel like the perspective is weird, it feels like from the top of their bodies that they were meant to be looking a bit more away from the viewer and
then you wanted to show the pussy and dick so you tilted it a bit too much.

[Anonymous No.2234360]

>>2234300
>tumblr

[Anonymous No.2234361]

>>2234296

[Anonymous No.2234363]

>>2233894
haha, dear sir, you just won an internet

[Anonymous No.2234364]

>>2234360
>caring about someone getting easy gif sources

[Anonymous No.2234368]

>>2234364
Tumblr gifs are literally all complete garbage because everybody chops them down to skeletons to fit the site's pants on head retarded file size limit.

[Anonymous No.2234396]

>>2234293

oh dude thats for the quick reply and critique!

To answer your question she is suppose to be sitting on a rather cartoony trash can so it will be a rounded object. As for hands, you're right I'm totally hiding them but I don't know where I would put them that would feel right when the feet, legs, and face were the main focus.

thoughts?

[Anonymous No.2234449]

[Anonymous No.2234472]

>>2228483
I am a swimmer, and the whole point of wearing a swimcap is to not have hair hanging out of it.

[Anonymous No.2234474]

>>2233894
Your art looks very late 90s early 00s.

[Anonymous No.2234480]

>>2234449
What's with the big round nose? Is she supposed to be some character in particular? Either way it's pretty good.

[Anonymous No.2234484]

>>2234474
Well, that's not exactly my normal style of art, but yeah, these comics are pretty "old school" or something.

[Anonymous No.2234490]

>>2234449
Her neck is broken. There would need to be a twist in her torso if she's going to be looking back like that. If you want to keep her torso facing forward, the most we'd get is a profile view.

[Anonymous No.2234504]

>>2234490
source?

[Anonymous No.2234510]

>>2234504
Have you ever wondered what that blue little arrow next to the post number does? time to find out.

[Anonymous No.2234514]

>>2231293
smh, right leg is complete WIGO (WHAT IS GOING ON) mode, tbh fam.

[Anonymous No.2234515]

>>2234510
screw you, I already tried and it didn't give me any results

[Anonymous No.2234520]

>>2234480
thanks


>>2234490
I tried it, wasn't hard, but to your point

[Anonymous No.2234522]

>>2234515
Use iqdb retard.

[Anonymous No.2234524]

>>2234504
St. Retcher

[Anonymous No.2234537]

>>2234520

[Anonymous No.2234578]

>>2234293
what have I done

[Anonymous No.2234772]

>>2234215
tumblr?

[Anonymous No.2234851]

>>2233440
Tumblr?

[Anonymous No.2234879]

>>2234851
Tumblr?

[Anonymous No.2234894]

>>2234879
tumblr?

[Anonymous No.2234895]

>>2234894
tumblr?

[Arkomeda No.2234973]

You know, I am beginning to like paint too sai the more i use it. It lacks certain features Photoshop does, but at least it allows me to draw as well as I do in traditional mediums.

Enjoy the Goatmom I painted while you hate for part three of tutorial.

[Anonymous No.2234985]

>>2234973
Go home and quit shilling a shitty indie game.

[Anonymous No.2234996]

What the fuck did I do to make her upper torso come out so fucky looking?

[Anonymous No.2235008]

not sure if applies, but I'd like a critique on my edgyness.

[Anonymous No.2235009]

>>2228246

look into expression and also details within the context of what is to be determined as what outlines the action and feeling the body is expressing, both chicks in your pic look like they want it, not bored out of their mind lol

i dunno h2crit

[Anonymous No.2235013]

>>2228398
c;

[Anonymous No.2235036]

>>2234996
heeere ya go, hope this helps a bit, your torso planes were off and the boobs didn't feel soft and obeying gravity. There are just weird lines in places and also your face planes were weird

[Anonymous No.2235041]

>>2235036
Shit thanks anon thats really helpful. The weird tit lines were supposed to be the fabric of her swimsuit.

[Anonymous No.2235187]

>>2234973
This is probably one of the most in deph tutorials on a penis

[Anonymous No.2235190]

>>2230289
>Pretty sure the loli stuff can get you some hard time.
In the UK, yes. Not sure about violence/snuff/rape though.
In America? No.

[Anonymous No.2235217]

>>2234851
not yet, maybe later once a got a body of work

[Anonymous No.2235225]

>>2230289
It depends on the state but it isnt outright illegal to draw cartoon children in sexually compromising situations. If it's something like babby rape necro and someone reports it they can get you on archaic indecency laws.

[Anonymous No.2235263]

Trying to get my fur-game on!

[Anonymous No.2235337]

>>2235036
stop doing redlines, dude. putting it bluntly, you suck way too much to be able to do this shit.

[Anonymous No.2235339]

>>2235263
your illustrations are still so damn flat. i'm pretty sure that's because you lack construction. it's a shame such good linework goes to waste like this.

[Anonymous No.2235350]

>>2235339
I agree, the all look kind of ironed.. I'll try to work on not braking anatomy/perspective, guess that's still the main issue.

I'm happy you like my lines though, I'll keep that up!

[Anonymous No.2235356]

help me with the anatomy please, idk about the back and im sure theres stuff i didnt see that i didnt do good

[Anonymous No.2235358]

>>2235356
forgot pic

[Anonymous No.2235379]

>>2235358
Lasso ass

[Anonymous No.2235405]

>>2235379
did requests dis be request plz help

[Anonymous No.2235426]

>>2235263
i like it
post more please

[Anonymous No.2235428]

>>2234520
i like your style anon
keep postin updates

[Anonymous No.2235432]

>>2235426
I got this one fresh out of the oven!

[Anonymous No.2235466]

>>2235358
I tried but gave up, ive never really drawn a naked girl yet but since you put the reference I tried, Really messy but yeah, your shoulder on that order side is too long to me and your head is too big compared to the body and some other small stuff that really should be easy fixes with the reference literally right there, pay more attention

[Anonymous No.2235469]

>>2235466
its sloppier than I thought, hopefully I didnt just redraw it and made it worse

[Anonymous No.2235598]

>>2234215
I wanna see his ass

[Anonymous No.2235601]

>>2235466
make it bouncier, more popping
CURVY

[Anonymous No.2235630]

>>2235466
<3333 u anon

[Anonymous No.2236165]

>>2235337
Thanks, man. Really made me think for a bit and that got me back into the swing of anatomy studies.

[Anonymous No.2236383]

>>2236165
it's more a problem of perspective than anatomy. so yeah, get to the basics.