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Post your nsfw, critique work and so on.
Furry is allowed, however do not over indulge on the subject of furries or their culture. Unnecessarily reporting these anons are strongly discouraged. This thread is dedicated to helping anons improve their erotic drawings and paintings.

Do not start flame wars.
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Please stay on topic.

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Questions about references for drawing porn will be answered.

>> No.2221107

>>2221089
fucking disgusting

>> No.2221123

Can we please not start a porn thread with fur or pedoshit.

>> No.2221140

>>2221123
>can 4chan pls cater to my tastes
lurk moar

>> No.2221178

>>2221089
tutorial guy your rendering reminds of the girl who keeps drawing comics about cats in Alabama, there's an innocent charm to your depraved drawings, i love it.

>> No.2221193

>>2221089
the lighting is the best bit. It implies the dick is glowing pulp fiction brief case style

>> No.2221194

>>2221140
>defending furfaggotry on 4chan

Just leave. I have no words for this level of insanity and newfaggotry.

>> No.2221198

somebody please post lolis

>> No.2221201
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>>2221198
Why wont you draw one instead faggot.

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2221205

>>2221194

>> No.2221220
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>>2221089
Gotta say pencil drawings as a medium are absolutely uncondusive to that degree of styleization

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Somehting I'm working on and I'm just winging it right now. Thoughts while I'm in the middle of laying down hard shadows?

>> No.2221242

>>2221220
the drawing sucks, it has nothing to do with "stylization" you faggot.

>> No.2221247
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2221247

Whutchu fags got for me?

>> No.2221248

>>2221224
Is she getting fucked hard?
cuz those tits are up there

>> No.2221251

>>2221224
The shadows make it look like there's a light source somewhere in the guy's torso.

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2221287

Show me what you got.

>> No.2221342

Guys I need to make 300-400$ a month with porn drawings. What do I do? Can someone give me the tldr version of how to tap this goldmine reasonably fast? I know 300-400$ a month is doable, right? I'm a fairly decent artist I want to add.

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2221369

hey people I very rarely draw but for some reason I decided to mess around with sai the other day and ended up spending around 6 hours drawing this with a mouse what do you think

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>>2221123
>pedoshit.

>> No.2221467

>>2221292
>I wanna see if we have similar tastes first.
We probably don't, i draw niche things like like scat, armpit hair, ryona with vomit play etc.

>> No.2221469
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2221469

too much after effects

>> No.2221471

>>2221469
IM HAPPY
IM FEELING GLAD
I GOT SUNSHINE IN MY BAG

>> No.2221472

>>2221469
this feels too real and alive

>> No.2221473

>>2221469
I kinda like it and i kinda don't, the power of the movements are so big on her ass and her tits but
her torso is pretty much completely still, she should at least move a bit forward as if she is a about to fall from the impact
but then keep herself standing or something, right now it reminds me of those animated manga pages some people do with distortion programs where only the boobs movie.

>> No.2221475

>>2221473
I can move her around a bit with ae, but I am way too deep in to reanimate her torso

>> No.2221478

>>2221475
Doesn't matter at this point, just keep it in mind, love the way you do the boobs at least, especially the previous one with the saggy ones.

>> No.2221480

>>2221478
thanks

>> No.2221482

>>2221469
Why does her rib cage extend with each hump?

>> No.2221486

>>2221469
holy shit do you work for gorillaz

>> No.2221515

>>2221482
someone already asked me, she's Inspector Gadget's niece.

>>2221471
>>2221486

what's with all the jamie hewlett references? I don't see that much resemblance with his work.

>> No.2221533

>>2221198
or otherwise what? you are gonna lose your job, fbi-boy?

>> No.2221537

>>2221469
don't use motion blur on frame by frame animation, friend

>> No.2221557

>>2221469
Really nice. How long have you been animating for?

>> No.2221573

Why do mods randomly delete pictures?

>> No.2221575

>>2221342
Post your work
What kind of following do you have?

>> No.2221581

>>2221575

I have like 150 watchers on FA, doing mostly generic furries that are only slightly sexual.

Please send help, quick! Not comfortable posting work though.

>> No.2221582

>>2221581
>Not comfortable posting work though

Then you're not good enough

>> No.2221585

>>2221581
I post furries here all the time, no one really cares not even the mods

You really need around 1000 watchers to get commissions on a consistent basis, more if you want to make a living off of it

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2221722

Still not satisfied with how his dick looks but I don't know.

>> No.2221728

>>2221722
did you not read the crit you got? the fingers are all the same size as the others

>> No.2221730

>>2221728
I thought you meant the hand on the ground, which I fixed. Uh yeah the other one looks meh too, I'll work on it. Thanks.

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2221746

Trying to satisfy /b/, attempt nr 1:

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2221747

>>2221746
Attempt nr 2:

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2221748

>>2221747
Attempt nr 3:

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2221749

>>2221469
Ass should bounce more

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2221751

no ref. how are the eyes this time.

>> No.2221754

>>2221751

i swear your stuff is so fucking sexy

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>>2221751
its illegitimate son of kromz! you will be judge by a jury of your peers ..you make me sick.

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>>2221751
It's better than your past attempts, on another note, full/detailed eyebrows instead of just a line are really coming into anime/style fashion aren't they?

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2221767

>>2221761
>coming.
they've been here for years.

>> No.2221769

>>2221751
is this kyle?

>> No.2221773
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2221773

>>2221767
>Tumblr

>> No.2221785

>>2221769
Dennis?

>> No.2221788

>>2221785
Then dennis is a kyle rip off, both in his rendering and his uncanny valley anatomy.

>> No.2221877
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2221877

Eh

>> No.2221891

>>2221877
Anatomy looks pretty forced, resize, also is that a tampon? Looks pretty small.

You got those dubs going though, which is nice..

>> No.2221942

>>2221369

anything for this?

>> No.2222025

>>2221089
SOURCE?!

>> No.2222032
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2222032

>>2220641

>> No.2222049

>>2221751
This is great man.

>> No.2222055

>>2221891
>Anatomy looks pretty forced

Yeah... Didn't quite get what I was originally going for.

>also is that a tampon?

I would've made it smaller, with an applicator and a string if it were. I have a Ph.D in tamponology.

>Looks pretty small.

Maybe for you.

>> No.2222094

>>2221287
>...and then she farts!

>> No.2222157

>>2221751
why is this in a porn thread?

>> No.2222203

>>2221751
This is giving me the creeps. Her face looks a little low. If you cut out those bangs she'd have a huge forehead.

>> No.2222275

>>2221369
Why did you change the way you shade from the bust and up? Makes the rest of her body look less colourful and dull.
Also, her belly seems to have no shape and her boobs seem to just be placed on her chest, not growing from it.
Where's the light source coming from? Each section of the body seems to have a different idea for it.

Texturing your work with the "canvas" option doesn't make it better in this case. It's like you're trying to hide your bad shading.

Use a body reference next time and study posture as well as anatomy more.

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>>2221123
>>2221194
>muh taste newfig

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2222310

wip

>> No.2222407

>>2222310
>futa
>meh/derp expression
>literally only has pantyhose from Quiet's design
>big boss doesn't look like big boss and no sign of shrapnel

Like, in addition to being underwhelming art wise, you really failed at the very concept of this drawing.and the characters involved. or the attitudes they have.

Quiet has zero of her danger sexiness or alien attitude and once again, is a shitty futa.

>> No.2222409

>>2222407
>all that hate when he wasn't able to fap to it because it's a futa

kek

>> No.2222423

>>2222407
keep your tastes to yourself sperg

>> No.2222425

>>2222407
He's the requested ref I was working from
http://104.223.3.196:4647/h/dbbab9bdde391adc3943a9592a69f92935587153-688578-1250-1750-jpg/keystamp=1442467800-b24e4aed3d/shentai.org_Megasweet_WFAY_18.jpg

>> No.2222426

>>2221751
The anatomy of the skull is a bit messed up. The deepest part of the face are the eye sockets in your image it looks like her eyes are too much on the surface and thus bulging out. Also, the brain part of the skull is a tad too big.
I have no other critique to give you. I really like the rendering.

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2222427

>>2221722
I think you rotated the weenie about 90 degrees off it's axis
Otherwise it looks like you're on the right track!

I drew a boy, thread needs more boys.

>> No.2222446

>>2222427
I wanna suck his nipples

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2222456

>>2222446

>> No.2222457

>>2222427
das nice anon. Po-ju?

>> No.2222471

>>2222409
>>2222423
The futa part isn't even the most damning part of this. Its the actual subjects and them being unappealing regardless of who they're representing, and the minor problem of them not looking like the characters.

Jesus Fuck, why do you idiots come out and defend anything but good stuff that rarely makes it on here.

>> No.2222477

>>2222427
boys are only good for their big cocks
(he's cute tho, i'll admit)

>> No.2222481

>>2222471
yea, the futa doesnt look appealing. Atleast the anon tried, I guess.

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2222482

>>2222457
Are you asking if I am Po-ju? Don't be ridiculous.

>>2222477
and their big hearts, too!

>> No.2222491

>>2221089
>ITT: Sausage rolling-pin dong

>> No.2222524

>>2222482
i will add addendum, they are also good for cuddles... and i guess their "hearts"

>> No.2222541

>>2222471
>Jesus Fuck, why do you idiots come out and defend anything but good stuff that rarely makes it on here.
Because they feel threatened by good artists. They try to make good artist look bad and nitpick about he most ridiculous insignificant things. They don't do the same with "lesser" artists because they are not jealous of them.
/ic/ artists psychology in a nutshell.

>> No.2222560

>>2222541
>try to make good artist look bad
different anon, but everyone can be considered bad. Nit picking is okay, sometimes

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^v^

>> No.2222572

>>2222560
I wasn't talking only about the bashing of their art. I was talking also about how people try to depict good artists as assholes. BBC-chan and Kyle come to mind.

>> No.2222576

>>2222572
Like attacking someones' personlity? Literally everyone irl does this. Yea its annoying, but does it matter? Especially on the internet. Sometimes you have to be arrogant and brush it off. Or pick and choose which comments have value

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>>2221751
Cannot unsee!

>> No.2222579

>>2222576
>does it matter
it does
not only does it harm the community to kindle such childish mentality, threads keep getting derailed

>> No.2222586

>>2222579
>the community
please define the /ic/ community

>harm
do you have any examples of "harm" being done to the community

I can appreciate your thoughts and opinions. For me, I find it rather difficult to value an anonymous image board. If your issue is shitposting, well, I have some bad news

>> No.2222592

>>2222586
the sole problem is that stuff like this drives away good artists that could contribute a lot to these threads.

>> No.2222595

>>2222579
>harm the community

The "community" of this thread is shit and comprised of "mah style" faggots obsessed with japanese garbage. These threads are containment threads so they rest of /ic/ doesn't have to deal with idiots like that.

>>2222592
>this drives away good artists

Good artists aren't "mah style" faggots.

>> No.2222598

>>2222595
>Good artists aren't "mah style" faggots.
your point being?

>> No.2222636

>>2221877
we can rebuild it

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>>2222541
it's more "you're technically skilled but you draw in a style i don't like and i have no reason not to yell at you for doing something on purpose that i've deemed wrong because anon, lol", and also a lotta people who just want to shit on everything cause that's what's fun to them

that combined with the fact that you can't really be anonymous if your art has a recognizable style, and you've got people treating artists like trippers

hence why my art posts only have a sentence or two asking for help with something i'm stuck on, completely separate from any critiques, comments or jokes i feel like making in the thread

>> No.2222851

>>2222707
>you've got people treating artists like trippers

With the way some artists act in this thread when it comes to posting their work, replying to critique, and giving critique, they might as well be tripfags.

>> No.2222857

>>2222851
That's what I was talking about.
In the last few porn generals there were basically no tripfags, but people still tend to think the opposite.

>> No.2222869

>>2222857
Different anon, I havent seen the mods do anything about it, so I guess its fine. You should get a spine if internet comments hurt you. They hurt me too, but you can walk away anytime you want.

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>>2221751
still too close

>> No.2222879

>>2222869
>mods
>on /ic/
I wouldn't count on it, i haven't seen any kind of mod interaction or post getting deleted in months, and there has been a huge
amount of blatant shitposting in various threads.

>> No.2222884

>>2222879
Well they did delete the get post and that one miku thread.

>> No.2222892

>>2222879
>yesterday
>mods deleted a thread

Ive been here for a year now. It hasnt been too bad. Was it worse in 2009?

>> No.2222900

>>2222892
For me it's gotten worse, i just lurk of the occasional interesting book/tutorial or redline at this point, lots of tumblr people came and many interesting people left, there was always
tripfags without trips on /ic/ but there used to be some fun personalities around at least, now it's just obnoxious people everywhere circling the exact same conversations and
arguments about style, fury, lolicon and commissions, its like watching a re-release of a very boring tv series.

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>>2221469

>> No.2223110

>>2223060
Her ponytail is reeally stiff man. Get that secondary action going.

>> No.2223233

Why is everybody using chromatic aberration now? It looks fucking disgusting.

>> No.2223249

>>2223233
K R 0 N
R
0
N

>> No.2223254

>>2223233
It gives a strong 3d effect very cheaply

Should be done more subtle tho

>> No.2223258

>>2223060
awesome work. but for future reference, the elfs hand is really popping around on her hip/ass area, and is rather unrelated to the shifting meat of her body. :]

>> No.2223261

>>2223254
it literally does not add any 3d effect whatsoever

>> No.2223266

>>2223261
Combine it with some blur here and there and it realy fucking does

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>> No.2223289

>>2223266
Wrong.

>>2223267
Nothing.

>> No.2223333

>>2223249
that's
>kuvshinov-ilya

to you now mister!

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2223388

So I have no idea how to draw porn...
Anytips?

>> No.2223391

>>2223388
how to porn
>1) remove name
>2) draw characters with 5 fingers
>3) stop chicken scratching
>4) work on your perspective

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>>2223391
Okay, three of those are completely irrelevant.

>> No.2223395

>>2223392
stop chicken scratching

>> No.2223396

>>2223392
What is going in the knee area?
Why is her eye half the size of her head?
Where nipple?

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2223398

Just finished this. Taste my tastes.

>> No.2223400

>>2223398
yakui?

fuck off

>> No.2223411

>>2223398
still trolling, ha?

>> No.2223415
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2223415

Made this account 3 weeks ago, been shillin mlp and furry shit.

This is great so far, I get a little cash from commissions and starting to learn anatomy slowly, anatomy is fucking hard and im garbage,

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2223416

one mo

>> No.2223418

>>2223415
horsefuckers and furries are that fucking desperate that they would pay people who have only been around for 3 weeks for drawings? What the fuck?

>> No.2223419

>>2221089
This year weather made grow sum pretty strange crop son

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2223421

Most recent shit, thought id put this one up for critique. The nipples are off, background character is slop.

Ive been taking turns doing Michael Hampton studies, then swaping and out and just cranking out some art.

People will buy just about anything, but I still wanna improve.

>> No.2223422

>>2223418
I really don't get it, the porn is of pretty phenomenal quantity and variety. Maybe whoever is commissioning anon is just doing it to encourage him

>> No.2223428

>>2222427
Where can I follow you?

>> No.2223433

>>2223421
shading on the tits is fucked up, why is there a shadow above them?
Same thing for the thighs, they look like doll joins.
Serving platter is just an orange disc.

Shin/calf area is weird because the area where the kneecap should be looks like it crumpled inward, and the bump on the inside is too pronounced.

Inconsistent lighting. Why is most of the front of her, and especially her feet illuminated if the area she's in is in shadow?

Sign looks bad, just hand write the text so it fits the style.

Overall boring rectangular room, try doing it from another perspective or just cluttering up the room a lot more.

Character looks 8 feet tall because the legs are so much larger than the rest of her.

>> No.2223435

>>2223428
pretty sure it's just doxy

>> No.2223453

>>2223435
>doxy

Your eyes are shit. It's Keppok.

>> No.2223459

>>2223418
more than being desperate, a lot of people don't have taste or knowledge to see that what they are looking at is shit.
a lot of times these beginners also tend to lie about getting commissions just to artificially hype up their art.

>> No.2223463

>>2223453
oh, i actually meant keppok. i juat mixed up their names. i'm not a pornthread regular here.
actually i forgot how doxys art looks like kek

>> No.2223467

>>2223400
>who.png
>>2223411
If I was trolling, I wouldn't bothered to resize a bit

>> No.2223474

>>2223459

Exactly, Also not lying

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2223476

meant to post this pic. there is no justice.

>> No.2223484

>>2223476
Oh, I see. Low tier prices make you get commissions. Seems plausible.

>> No.2223520

>>2222407
You talk like a fag and your shit's all retarded.

I'm sorry you were born a little bitch. It must be hard being such an immense faggot.

>>2222310
I'm sorry to be nebulous about this but: work on gesture and perspective, 'cause right now the poses are stiff and the perspective's boring. The two figures are barely interacting beyond the penetration going on, and all your funbits aren't bouncing around and having fun like funbits should be, and as a consequence your balls and breasts don't have any evident weight or particular volume.

Same goes for the cum: s'just kind flyin' out despite the lack of action, and it's coming out in stiff shapes that don't follow any kind of dynamic line of action.

I think your drawing is at least okay, but your seriously lacking a lot of animation, and I'm not sure if that's because of what you're drawing or how you're drawing.

>> No.2223559

did bbcuckchan posted his art?
whats the drama in this thread all about

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2223566

Just finished this. And I like it quite a lot, so I thought it would be a good idea to post and have someone tear it to shreds so I don't get too satisfied with it. ConCrits on any aspect of it are loved. thanks

>> No.2223593 [DELETED] 

>>2223559
do you want me to stop posting my stuff here?

>> No.2223594

>>2223566
the overall composition of this is pretty bad. technically though, this is a pretty good illustration imo.

>> No.2223599

>>2223559
still obsessing over bbc? you must really hate the fact that he's better than you or something.

>> No.2223607

>>2223593
>>2223599
different anon, but thats obvious bait, its better to ignore it.

>> No.2223611

>>2223566
That looks so incredibly uncomfortable but I like the touch of his hair being wet. Honestly in a realistic scenario he'd have his entire face wet. Also red skin is surprisingly very aesthetic.

>> No.2223615

>>2223566
He looks very cutesy and young; was that your intention? She looks great! The guy's bent legs don't read well in your thumbnail. I thought he was an amputee at first.

>> No.2223620 [DELETED] 

>>2223566
pros
- good color and values
- nice faces

cons
- bad composition
- anatomy is hit and miss (her right leg is too long, her tits are placed very weirdly)
- too sketchy and muddy for a "finished" piece

>> No.2223621

>>2223566
pros
- good color and values
- nice faces anatomy wise
- interesting style

cons
- bad composition
- anatomy is hit and miss (her right leg is too long, her tits are placed very weirdly)
- the expressions convey no pleasure at all
- too sketchy and muddy for a "finished" piece

>> No.2223674

>>2222427
This is hot as fuck. I wish I could foreshorten this nce.

>> No.2223687

>>2223674
Her style is very good imo (yeah, muh opinion n shit), but technically speaking it has a lot of flaws. This isn't a very good example of proper foreshortening tbh.

>> No.2223696

>>2223687
As long as it looks pleasing I don't care, I ain't an architect.

>> No.2223700

>>2223696
Yeah, I understand what you mean, but generally speaking someone who has a good visual library (artists for example) will always see these kind of "flaws". It's a typical example of "cannot unsee".

>> No.2223826

>>2223415
faces are flat af

>> No.2223830
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2223830

>>2222032

>> No.2223859

>>2223830
>that cameltoe

>> No.2223916

>>2223826
heyyy, non, i forgot to do that redline, i'm sorry, do you still want it?

>> No.2223917

>>2223566
The guy's legs should be longer and thicker.
His chin and facial hair needs more detail, as faces are important points of focus.
Speaking of focus, just crop the image until the center of the picture is somewhere between the characters, maybe even a bit closer to the juicy part.

These are easy adjustments that would improve the picture.

Also, a subjective idea of mine: slightly resize and move the background objects (assuming you are working with layers) until the far, lighter shaded space is surrounding the space behind the girl's head from our perspective, thus putting a zone of contrast around her head.

>> No.2223958

>>2223916
for the meerkat girl? sure

>> No.2223967
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2223967

i need to quite starting a sketch before i actually know what i want to do with the arms, lol

anyways, do the boobs read like the one on the left is being supported by the strap and the one of the right slipped off or do they jus look funky?


>>2223958
kaykay, i'll do it while i wait on responses

>> No.2223985

>>2221089
wait...isn't artwork an sfw board?

>> No.2223986

>>2223985
nope, check the default style, it's yotsuba

>> No.2223987
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2223987

>>2223986

>> No.2223991 [DELETED] 

>>2223987
global rule 5

>> No.2223992
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2223992

>>2223987
global rule 5

>> No.2223994

>>2223991
then why is it marked sfw

>> No.2223995

>>2223992
I've memorized the rules.

>> No.2224040
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2224040

>>2223599
>bbseecuck still mad

>> No.2224041
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2224041

>>2223958
sorry this took so long, hahahahaha (also hope this isn't a big jumbled unreadable mess)

basically, you wanna pay extra special attention to the shape/silhouette of the head, yours was a gettin a bit streched/slanted back, not quite mayan-skull-binding level, but it was lookin a little off and i think was overall causing you to slant the features of the face a bit much.

slanted the neck more because head leans forward in position like this, straightened bottom of jaw a bit, then left an implied line into cheek fluff. also made hair floofier cause it looked a lil limp before, tho that's just a personal preference

blue line is more or less where the nose ridge would be, you don't have to draw a line for it, you can get away with implying it by using the near edge of the far eyebrow and the bottom part of the nose, the important thing to remember is that it overlaps the side of the eye when turned to the side far enough because 3d

heel is more bulbous than you'd expect in how it sticks out behind the ankle/where the shin connects, it's important to know how the calf overlaps as well, it should be rather noticeable from the angle you're going for. also take note of the shape of the elbow when the arm is straight, the top/outer side (from this angle) always starts curving before the bottom

hope this helps nwn

>> No.2224052

>>2223696
>As long as it looks pleasing I don't care

It looks pleasing because your eyes are shit. As you grow as an artist, your eye advances so things that used to look good to you now look like shit because you can see the flaws. You aren't at that level yet so you think it looks nice.

>> No.2224080

>>2224052
>look like shit
oh come on.
That drawing is fine, no one is going to put in the effort to make something 100% accurate to reality.

>> No.2224097

sorta off topic but does anybody know how to go about hiring someone to work with you on a comic, like an inker? i hate inking my own work, i just lose all drive, makes me wanna fall asleep which is weird because i'm perfectly fine when inking someone else's work. maybe i just burnout from staring at the same piece so long (that or i really need to go back on adhd meds)

>> No.2224130

>>2224040
I nailed it, ha?

>> No.2224133

>>2224097
To me inking is the best part. It saves time on refining your pencil sketches.

The most annoying part for me is the post processing and inserting dialogue.

>> No.2224139

>>2224133
you don't like writing, or you just don't like the process of lettering and the such? i find lettering really relaxing cause it's super thoughtless, i can just be in a skype call or whatever, where as with inking it's like trying to preserve what i like of the pencils and it's a pain in the ass. i clean my pencils so much anyways i'd just use them but i never sketch at a high enough resolution

>> No.2224140
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2224140

>>2224040
I'm not really sure what your problem is. Why would I be mad? Because you keep distorting my pseudonym? lol
Here, enjoy some cuck porn. I guess you really like it.

>> No.2224145

>>2224140
the way you draw lips is really offputting.

>> No.2224148

>>2224145
I like them. I don't think he cares about people's personal taste.

>> No.2224150

>>2224140
>these tits were designed for my dick
hahaha, i really do like cheesy dialogue like that (not trynna hate)

also, i'd maaaaybe put an ellipses after that "No." so it reads like "No..." but that's jus me, keep up da goo work

>> No.2224152

>>2224150
I don't write the scripts, so I try to mess with the text as less as possible.

>> No.2224165

>>2224140
Yo bbc, if you kept getting mad at people misusing your name, its gonna stick.
Just be cool and play along with it. Youre old enough to ignore assholes

>> No.2224169

>>2224165
shut up bbcuck

>> No.2224172
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2224172

>>2224165
It's like you want them to keep misusing his name. I see through your ruse.

>> No.2224173

>>2224165
honestly, having a "nickname" that you don't like being called is p helpful for instantly finding out if you should ignore someone because they're just trying to annoy you

>> No.2224247
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2224247

I don't know what the hell I'm doing

porn is hard

>> No.2224719

>>2223559
don't make me do it
I'll fucking do it
I'll do it bitch
I'll fucking do it

fite me

>> No.2224771

>>2222427
that perspective is all kinds of fucked up. the upper torso is good, but then the hips are practically drawn from the front, and would have to be absolutely massive to match the shoulder width while being foreshortened

>> No.2224787

>>2223566
I don't see as many issues as others say, I want to be as good as you. /ic/ praises mediocre shit like >>2221751 (ugly and not even porn) and >>2222427 (okay but nothing that deserves 6 answers) and finds all kinds of errors in actually good pieces like yours.
Just work on making them more expressive but the rest is great.

>> No.2224801

>>2224787
>I don't see as many issues as others say
You just have a bad visual library. Build that shit up and you'll be good.
>praises
Stop lying lol.

>> No.2224813

>>2224801
My visual library is fine. His drawing wasn't the best ever but it's much better than most stuff that receive positive comments here. I almost feel like the popular namefags here samefag and praise themselves to build a name.

>> No.2224833

>>2223967
Juicy.

>> No.2224846

>>2223967
They mostly look funky, but since you didn't do anything with the arms yet, slap a surprised face and place hands accordingly. Make her look at the boob/strap that slipped and it will read.

Also, pretty sure someone that needs a D+ bra wouldn't have such a small waistline.

>> No.2224847

>>2224813
I was talking about the two examples you posted. Kyle's picture is anatomically pretty bad, and people mentioned this. He was praised only because of his rendering (which is a masterpiece compared to the one showcased in the illustrations you are over-praising here). That's why I said you should stop lying. Also, no, your visual library isn't fine, dude. Just the fact that we are discussing this is proof of this.

>> No.2224861

>>2224140
the eyebrows look like theyre drawn on like that, even though its a sketch its still something to keep in mind when you start fleshing it out
>>2224041
(no problem, it was worth the wait), pretty helpful, thanks c:

>> No.2224874

>>2224861
>the eyebrows look like theyre drawn on like that
Hm. I really don't know what you mean. This is a sketch, and the whole illustration looks pretty much like crap, not just the eyebrows.

>> No.2224932
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2224932

stuff i need to fix before putting clean lines ?

>> No.2224945

>>2221471
IN A BAG*

>> No.2224949

>>2223060
>>chromatic aberration filter
NO, STAHP

>> No.2224953

>>2223266
>>2223254
Different anon here.
No it fucking does not.
At all.
It gives the impression of tinted lines, that's it.
Nothing to do with looking "3D".

If anything it looks like a poorly printed halftone image in an old comic, but that's it.

Fuck off.

>> No.2224958

>>2224953
Ya seem mad about people being wrong. All you have to do is correct them. Sheesh.

>> No.2224994
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2224994

>>2224833
fresh squeezed and aimed to please

>>2224846
yeah, i always tend to draw super small ribcages with short torsos and it makes larger boobs like this (part of the design) super fuckin awkward for me. friend suggested to show the fallen off strap, i hope that makes it read better? do you think it works better now? face and hand are possibly temp, not really feelin em (i drew them last night when about to pass out, could barely lift my head high enough to properly see the screen). also giant bow (cause design) that i'm gonna make see through cause it covers toooo muuuch

sorry for posting such an incremental update tho, i'm just at a crossroads where i might rework major parts of the sketch

>>2224861
happy it helped nwn

>> No.2225057
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2225057

>>2224958
Unfortunately you can't correct shit taste.

>> No.2225099

>>2224932
nice, I want to see the finished render of that one

>> No.2225137

>>2223060
It looks like she has some chafing or a rash around her nipples. Is that supposed to be blush or something? Also, the hips are moving way less than the rest of her even though that's the point of impact; it makes it all look disconnected.

>> No.2225222

>>2224953
All CA does is to add the impression it was taken with a camera because of lens imperfections.

>People pay fucktons of money to take pictures not to have CA

>> No.2225632
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2225632

Oh... I have to admit, I wans't expecting that to show up as the OP pic.

>>2222025
I have a preview I print screen right before Photoshop went to ass. This has turned into a way bigger clusterfuck then I expected, it isn't at all easy to write and make a nicely designed tutorial. This is part 1, the glans, I still have 6 more parts to do this...

I'll have this posted as soon as its done.

>> No.2225647

>>2222561
-face in general looks too flat
-eyes and mouth are way too big
-tits look bizarre
-shading needs heaps of work
not very good, but keep practising my man

>> No.2225651

>>2222561
Literally looks like Jet Li as the Monkey King in The Forbidden Kingdom

>> No.2225756
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2225756

>>2221089
Could you rate? I know it's not finished (The guy, anyway), but what's in it, how would you rate it? What could I do to fix it? Any tips?

>> No.2225805

>>2225756
That you, Andy?

>> No.2225811

>>2225805
No I'm Patrick

>> No.2225818

>>2224787
ha thanks, but it's all good, harsh criticism really helps me see things I otherwise wouldn't. Especially if I get too attached to a drawing. So I appreciate them all.

Still, I appreciate the kind words! And also yeah I agree, definitely need to get more expressive. It does feel like a rather 'sterile' image.

>> No.2225896

>>2225756
Oh, is it already troll time again?

>> No.2225902

>>2225896
[checks watch] well wouldya look at that
we're past the 200 post mark, settle in boys, it's all downhill from here

>> No.2225904

>>2225902
>くそポストーはじましょう
Do people prefer stylized porn over realistic drawn porn?

>> No.2225908

>>2225904
ofcourse, hahaha, why would you look at a drawing of porn if it's just attempting to be a picture, dog, we got actual fuckin camera's for that shit

but that's jus my two cents

also, you gotta tell me what your like, reference point for stylized versus "realistic" is for me to give a more accurate answer.

>> No.2225937

>>2225904
I like 2D because i hate 3DPD, why would i like realistic porn?

>> No.2225966
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2225966

>>2225904
I like both and fap to both.

>>2225937
>3DPD
It's stupid how people are actually serious when they say this shit now.

>> No.2225968

>>2225904
There are degrees of stylisation much as there are degrees of realism. It's not a clear binary choice yo.

>> No.2226065

>>2224932
What are those big red/blue lines for? Perspective? In fact, what is the purpose of all of those other shapes and lines? Not shitposting or anything, I'm just a curious beginner.

>> No.2226092

>>2225966
>now
Its stupid how people think it's only an epic meme, but this board is tumblr 2.0 so i am not surprised.

>> No.2226098

>>2226092
>tumblr2.0
Holy fuck, im not the only one, why are tumblrians coming to 4cuck

Does animated porn go to here or the animation thread? It probably doesnt matter, but im curious

>> No.2226106

>>2226098
A lot of people here think using tumblr as a gallery is acceptable even though tumblr is not a gallery but a shitty blog that can
get you autobanned if any small group of people decides to abuse the report function, so they feel right at home.

>> No.2226139

>>2226065
nothing just the surface shes lying on and place for text guy wanted.

>> No.2226165
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2226165

Not actually a fan of Winx Club - but was a request from a friend. Critique please. Thanks.

>> No.2226185

>>2226106

Let it go, doxy

>> No.2226201

>>2226185
Can you be more of a stupid troll?

>> No.2226218

>>2226185
>doxy replying to me
I'd cum

>>2226201
>stupid troll
you're new, right?

So, did we bully bb too much?

>> No.2226225

>>2226165
It feels like i am going to cut myself if i touch her.

>> No.2226375 [DELETED] 

>>2226165
It looks like a still from a zelda CDI cutscene

>> No.2226376

>>2226165
It looks like a still from a zelda CDI cutscene

>> No.2226558
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2226558

This took me way too much time in terms of writing. but very well, it had to be done. I present to you the tutorial.

>> No.2226562
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2226562

>>2226558

Tutorial split into two due to size. Tumblr has it even more split up.

>> No.2226563

>>2224247
he's way too high, he wouldn't be able to stick his dick into her vagina very well this way

>> No.2226567
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2226567

gonna let this shit bake here for a bit before i decide if it's ready 4 ink

she's supposed to have a pony tail and i'm still on the fence as to how to represent it here, if at all

>> No.2226570

>>2226567
It's impossible to see anything with that bright blue on stark white colorscheme.

>> No.2226572

>>2226570
i can see everyhing.

>> No.2226576

>>2226570
>it's impossible to see anything

No, you're just blind.

>> No.2226667
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2226667

Any errors?
Not sure I fucked up one of her legs, can't put my finger on it.

>> No.2226679

>>2226667
>any errors
vikingofdisapproval.jpeg

>> No.2226682

>>2226679
Can't be all bad
Can it?

>> No.2226710

>>2223566
Was this based off that comic incase did with the nympho aliens?

>> No.2226750

>>2226563
I had a feeling, thanks.

>> No.2226752

>>2226750
Honestly - its sometimes easier to draw the cock before the rest of the guy, so at least the hips are in the right place :P

>> No.2226797

>>2226667
That breastplate m8, how did she even fit in to it?
Go back, and analyse where you think the errors are, mark them, then post that.

>> No.2226798

>>2226558
>dat sneaky Dick Butt

>> No.2226803

whats the best way to offend the people in this thread?

>> No.2226808

>>2226803
Draw cartoonish furry porn and ask for genuine critique.

>> No.2226822

>>2226808
all they've complained about is that my sketches are too light

>> No.2226848

>>2226803
draw dickgirl interracial porn

>> No.2226854
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2226854

>>2226570
here, is this better?

>> No.2226859

>>2226854
Yes.

>> No.2226875

>>2226803
Interracial loli porn. A white, blonde haired, blue eyed loli being a cock sleeve for a BBC and enjoying it.

>> No.2226878

>>2226875
do the folks here really go apeshit over loli artwork? pathetic.

>> No.2226882

>>2226878
no, but if you say anything negative about the fact that it's loli then people lose their shit cuz reactionaries

>> No.2226885

>>2226878
The interracial part is for /pol/. The loli part is for tumblr. Kill two birds with one stone. This thread is littered with faggots from both.

>> No.2226887

>>2226885
wouldnt tumblr be fine with that, since tumblrites are libcucks who let blacks do whatever they want?

>> No.2226906

>>2226887
>/pol/tard detected

>> No.2226927

>>2226562
>>2226558
gj m8, now a vagina tutorial and you'll be set

>> No.2227022

>>2226797
Yeah I guess I fucked up the breastplate size

>> No.2227032

>>2226854
right foot doesn't match the direction of the shin, looks uncomfortable. Also the right hand is absolutely massive, but you may have been going for that

>> No.2227053

>>2226906
you fucking pay respect to /pol/ there boy.

>> No.2227070

>>2226875
Or 18-19. century slave owner with his little back loli on a leach.

>> No.2227134

>>2226808
I posted around 5 furs in these threads and get normal replies.
In other threads however they tell me to fuck off, heh.

>> No.2227168

>>2227134
just dont draw weird fuckign shit like that horrorfurryfag and u fine by me.

>> No.2227200
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2227200

>>2226927

Vagina tutorial will be right after this one, both because its a nice continuation, and both because there are so few vagina tutorials its scary. I mean, there has to be atleast a 1:10 ratio in this regard in terms of material to draw.

If I were to guess, this would be either because a significant more amount of artists here are male, or that its just way easier to draw cock compared to a vagina.

Anyways, enjoy a butt I drew.

>> No.2227211

>>2227200
get rid of the disgusting yellow tint

>> No.2227225
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2227225

Something I've been working on. Thoughts anyone?

>> No.2227229

>>2226854
the right leg looks 2long
>>2227225
looks flat af

>> No.2227316

>>2227053
>autism detected

>> No.2227325

>>2227316
dont fuck with me boyo.

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2227332

>>2226875
Can you not?

>> No.2227334

>>2227200
What's your tumblr and did you draw any more qt's like in the OP?

>> No.2227345

guys i cant see my activity on my paypal
i ve send the invoice now and its not even showing there.
i got email about it being send tho.

>> No.2227484

>>2227225
preggo is disgusting

>> No.2227494

>>2227200
Yeh you better believe that's a fucking watch, I like the way you use hatching looks like those old school childrens books, you're definitely going to make it up and coming artist

>> No.2227502

>>2227484
You're disgusting

>>2227334
they posted the link to it at the bottom of the dick tutorial

>> No.2227598
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2227598

My, my.

>> No.2227599
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2227599

>>2227598

>> No.2227613

>>2227598
this post makes my nipples itch

>> No.2227663

>>2227225
>dat belleh
muh dick

>> No.2227778
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2227778

>>2227663 I worked on the shading some more. Enjoy. ^^

>> No.2227789

>>2227225
looks motherly so i guess... goal reached?

>> No.2227817
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2227817

Please help. I don`t think im improving.

>> No.2227821

>>2227817
tits, tongue, and mons pubis area look fucked up. And shoulders and arms.

>> No.2227826

>>2227821
Thanks, i can see the problem with her shoulders, arm and tits( i failed on make them in motion) though, i can't see whats wrong with the tongue and pubis area.

>> No.2227827

>>2227826
Tongues generally aren't that mobile, unless the character is like Mileena or something, and should be thicker at the base and less bumpy on the underside. As for the mons pubis, it looks too sharp for that angle - You see on the left where it merges into the thigh, where the line is really thick? Remove the excess so that the line is normal thickness and you should be fine. I just noticed that the crease at the top of the thigh, where the leg rotates, goes almost to the back, which doesn't seem right to me, but I could be wrong.

>> No.2227834

>>2227827
Oh ok, now i get you, though i'll have to seach for some tonge reference because it still looks fine to me. Either way thanks for your help mate.

>> No.2227877
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2227877

Thoughts?

>> No.2227882

>>2227877
add 90's hair

>> No.2227883

>>2227877
kek

>> No.2227895
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2227895

Please help me fix the perspective on this!

>> No.2227922

>>2227895
>Until Dawn
>not Sam
You had one job.

>> No.2227929

>>2227895
perspective looks fine to me though that background looks like it isnt doing you any favors tbh, very confusing

>> No.2227943
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2227943

>>2227922
I'll draw Sam next just for you, Anon.
>>2227929
Yeah, I think that was the issue. I can't seem to figure out the right angle for the wood and all so I guess I'll leave it out.

>> No.2227969

>>2227943
The perspective it's still totally fucked up dude.

>> No.2227985

>>2227969
Okay, tell me where it's fucked up then. It's why i'm here after all.

>> No.2227995

>>2227985
Not the same anon, but I'll try to make a quick redline for you later today. The perspective is really off because the foreshortening isn't consistent throughout the entire pic.

>> No.2228459

>>2221089
This thread hasnt hit max yet. Why is there a new thread?

>> No.2228465

>>2228459
Because the OP of the new thread is a faggot who wanted to use a dumb picture in the OP.

>> No.2228769

>>2228459
Because this board is shit.

>> No.2228785

>>2226667
Is her left leg made of dough?

>> No.2228803

>>2227778
you shouldnt be allowed to use soft brush until you know what the fuck you are doing

>> No.2228804

>>2228459
because that one shitter that makes the christ chan comics wanted to use his own art as the OP

>> No.2229017
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>>2228785
That's just the leather

>> No.2229190
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I used a photo for reference. But don't have a realistic style yet

>> No.2229194

Now the thread has hit max bumps. Are the Newfags to blame?

>> No.2231216

where can i download full galleries of artists ?

like ishikei he has like 1000 pic it would be a pain in ass to donload all of them by one.