Alternative Art/Stylization General

[Anonymous No.2215135]

This thread is meant for artists who might want to try to make stylized work in-between their studies. It is strongly recommended that you use this thread in conjunction with learning the elements and fundamentals of art. You can also discuss the visual elements of various professional artists as well if you keep it relatively articulate and civil.

Previous Thread: >>2207977
Submit your drawings, receive feedback or critique others! Share your knowledge and remember to thank those who've critiqued or red-lined your drawings. Most importantly, have fun.

>Fresh off the boat? Read the fucking sticky!
http://www.squidoo.com/how-to-draw-learn

https://sites.google.com/site/ourwici/
>Proko
http://www.proko.com/videos/
>Ctrl+Paint
http://ctrlpaint.com/
>Hitokaku Index
http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
>0033
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317
>List of active livestreams
http://livestreamstatuslist.appspot.com/
>fellowBro's books
http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
>Tutorial/Reference Collection
http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
>Japanese Animu Tutorials
http://iradukai.com/
>Figures
http://reference.sketchdaily.net/

Remember the words of our good friend Glen Vilppu: “No rules, just tools.”

/ic/: "Daily reminder that Artists can now make up to 20k biweekly"

[Anonymous No.2215143]

how do you draw clean lines using a laptop's trackpad

[Anonymous No.2215160]

r8

[Anonymous No.2215170]

>>2215143
you don't.

[Anonymous No.2215176]

>>2215160
i like the atmosphere. madotsuki a cute

[Anonymous No.2215213]

>>2215160
My new steam avatar/10

[Anonymous No.2215218]

>>2215135
I wish she had a nose.

[Anonymous No.2215219]

>>2214127

You can (not ) be trigger

[Anonymous No.2215220]

i should probably wrap this up soon

[Anonymous No.2215227]

should probably wrap this up soon

[Anonymous No.2215230]

>>2215227
that castle (who builds a castle on a cliff face?) is about to fall over.
banners could be taller/longer
could use more foreshortening on the giant imo
not bad overall.

[Anonymous No.2215236]

>>2215227
its not over yet you stupid fuck
put more detail on
lazy piece of shit

[Anonymous No.2215261]

>>2215143

pen tool in photoshop

[Anonymous No.2215281]

>>2215236
"more detail" dosent make picture better you have to know where to put detail and where not.

[Anonymous No.2215290]

>>2215227
definitely one of your better pieces. you finally started thinking about "size" in a more visual way.
keep pushing that thought

[Anonymous No.2215298]

>>2215227
I love your giants anon

[Nile No.2215304]

Experimented a little bit with my style today, what should i push next time i do this?

[Anonymous No.2215307]

>>2215304
i like your work so far, it shows alot of expression. You need to draw full bodies more i cant really judge with just this.

[Anonymous No.2215309]

>>2215227
I think I'm more jealous of that beatiful landscape than anything. armor guys are kinda blobby, and giant generic animu grill sticks like a sore thumb.
but I'm jelly nevertheless

[Anonymous No.2215338]

>>2214115
Ignore the horrible paint over; I only have a trackpad atm

Your colors are all way too saturated, so I toned them down. I pushed up the brightness of the flowers so they look like they're glowing, as well as lit the underside of the guy so he looks more menacing. Not sure if that's what you were going for, but just a suggestion.

[Anonymous No.2215347]

>>2215304
If you want us to actually judge your stuff you need to stop doodling and do some full bodies that take more than 15 minutes to draw. Also I can tell Sushio is an influence but you gotta keep an eye on that before your style becomes a straight-up rip of his.

[Anonymous No.2215350]

>>2215304
Perspective

[Nile No.2215352]

>>2215307
>>2215347
Yeah i totally agree with what you guys said, ill try only doing full bodies tomorrow

[Anonymous No.2215546]

Will something like this be enough as mascot of a local comic convention? well, actually it misses the other character but that comes tomorrow
ChanxCo forgive me, I need to sell

[Anonymous No.2215572]

>>2215546
Denmark?

[Anonymous No.2215601]

>>2215572
Nope, a backwater corner of north italy
>>2215160
pretty gr8 m8

[Anonymous No.2215612]

>>2215601
Her boots look like Denmark flags; I'd change that. The design is a good start, but add more color.

[Anonymous No.2215617]

>>2215612
Well, there's a problem about the color palette: the city symbol is a grey bear, and the traditional color of the ciy is fucking grey
its extremely fitting considering its covered in peanut butter-thick fog nine months a year
anyway, I'll tweak it around tomorrow
finally I can sleep now

[Anonymous No.2215641]

>>2215135
two drawings for today trying to understand the female body, any sugestion guys?

[Anonymous No.2215644]

>>2215641
Learn how to draw boobs.

[Anonymous No.2215645]

>>2215641
lol. read the sticky.

[Anonymous No.2215646]

>>2215641
necks and heads are misaligned and/or lopsided

[Anonymous No.2215672]

>2215101

I was retarded and posted in the old thread.

[Anonymous No.2215674]

>>2215672
Hard round brush.

[Anonymous No.2215675]

>>2215672

>>2215101

Jesus christ.

[Anonymous No.2215678]

>>2215674
Thanks.

[Anonymous No.2215681]

>>2215646
yeah I think all my drawings have the same problem, it is hard to place correctly the head in the body, I suck in that. I´ll try to practice the placement in my next drawings.

[Anonymous No.2215718]

>>2215338
It gave me some idea I think. I darkened the character more now im thinking of trying the glow.

[Anonymous No.2215741]

I just wanna fucking draw cute anime girls but I've stuck in a rut of mediocrity for 3 years barely drawing and putting off important foundational shit like ctrl+paint. All I did was take a drawing class at university that taught me jack shit about composition, perspective, and lighting.

I'm so angry and I don't think I've ever felt this before, how do I channel this anger and keep fueling it? I don't want to be mediocre anymore. I wanna get my ass moving. I want to learn. I've had enough with stagnation.

I'm just afraid I'll lose this hateboner.

[Anonymous No.2215758]

>>2215741
Pirating ctrl paint made me better because I watched it all to spite the creator.

[Anonymous No.2215795]

>>2215227
Nice work dude, do you have any formal training/ study tips?

[Anonymous No.2215897]

>>2215230
thanks, i'll try to incorporate those suggestions.
>>2215236
anon pls
>>2215309
not sure what you mean by blobby... is it their round-ness?
>>2215795
no formal training, just really forced to git gud or die trying because of work. studying alot at home too

[Anonymous No.2215927]

>>2215227
this is brilliant, you did a great job painting all those knights together and the impact where the girl is stepping looks awesome! You dont see cute anime girls in good paintings like that often!

[Anonymous No.2215977]

>>2215641
jesus. learn how to draw boobs and it looks weird when you make them that skinny. also try toning down the shoulders a bit.

[Anonymous No.2216014]

>>2215227
Would look great without the fagenay girl and that's coming from someone who likes anime.

[Anonymous No.2216024]

>>2215741
>>2215758

Hatred and spite aren't good motivators.

Effective in the short term? Maybe. But everything burns out eventually. Even Gut's rage at causality gave way into a desire to protect his newfound family.

Try to be more Zen.

[Anonymous No.2216025]

>>2216014

Buff loli GTS is literally all rinfag wants to use his talent on, ignore him.

[Anonymous No.2216027]

>>2216024
what does fagenay even mean

[Nile No.2216281]

I thought that the 3 hours of figure drawing i did in art class today would improve my work a tiny bit.
I was wrong though

[Anonymous No.2216354]

>>2216281
Well look, if you do figure drawing in class and doodle randomly like I did up there in private its pretty strange to expect some improvement.
I mean, fish sticks will always taste the same even if you become a master chef. try to put it inside your drawings manually

[Anonymous No.2216357]

some sketches

[Anonymous No.2216367]

>>2216357
Are these all the same person? Cause that's what it looks like

[Anonymous No.2216386]

>>2216367
different variations/exploration of what will eventually be the same person

[Anonymous No.2216394]

Any potential as a character in a sad moody video game?

Baggy eyes y/n

[Anonymous No.2216401]

>>2216357
Are these digital or did you play with levels or something to clean up your inks?

Pretty nice overall. I think some of the stylization choices are a bit inconsistent though, and some proportion things are not as pleasing as they could be.

The poses and expressions can be pushed a bit more too.

[Anonymous No.2216414]

friends oc

[Anonymous No.2216420]

[non No.2216422]

chara design, thoughts?
>>2216394
its p plain and it looks sorta like an expanded lego, baggy eyes looks like blushing

[Anonymous No.2216423]

>>2216422
The idea was that he's a video game character that fell down a pit but didn't die when he was supposed to, so now waking up weeks later he's withered away, his clothes have rotted off, and he has half a "heart" of life left for the entire game

[Anonymous No.2216425]

>>2216422
show what's under the cloak

[non No.2216426]

>>2216423
oh well thats cool

[Anonymous No.2216436]

>>2216394

Pixel art uses the same fundamentals of light and form as other mediums.

at least try..

[Anonymous No.2216454]

>>2216436
I'm in my first week of doing any sort of pixel art at all, I haven't quite learned how to translate lighting to a small amount of pixels. Any advice for the pic above?

[Anonymous No.2216464]

>>2216422

I like it. Can you show more?

[Anonymous No.2216472]

I need help. When it comes to line work I feel like my lines are always bad. I was wondering if anyone here can help with how to improve.

This is the line

[Anonymous No.2216474]

>>2216472
And this is with the colors. Is it something that has to do with liking to paint more than line?

[Anonymous No.2216479]

>>2216474
If you don't like outlining, don't do it.
You can also paint on top of lines.

[Anonymous No.2216489]

>>2216479
>If you don't like outlining, don't do it

I would but I hear linework is essential when working with clients.

[Anonymous No.2216492]

Here's the other one
guess I should make them look more similar, these clothes won't do

[Anonymous No.2216503]

>>2216401
i just scan them in b&w. most scanners have the capability to scan in color, greyscale and b&w. the b&w mode is typically for scanning text and usually these options can be found within the scanning software that probably came with your scanner along with what program the files open in, where they're saved, etc. its different for every scanner but i'm sure some diggin will procure something

which ones in particular are less favourable? these are only my favourites of the sketches and its good to know how what i thought was the best appeals to others so i can make a more informed decision of what final design to go with.

and ok, i'll keep that in mind, thanks

[Anonymous No.2216583]

>>2216394
Needs more viking nigga

[Anonymous No.2216589]

>>2216583
we pixels now?

[Anonymous No.2216603]

>>2216454


Firstly up your resolution. It's hard to manipulate pixels and define forms at such a small size.

Second, learn painting with values. Pixel art has more in common with painting than digital painting because it looks it's best when you choose and apply blocks of color, instead of relying on fancy textures and filters. (Look at the difference between Owlboy and Superbrothers/Hotline Maimi).

There are plenty of tutorials on youtube and resources in the sticky about grayscale painting and defining value.

I more than understand if you're a developer trying to keep workflow smooth, but if you want to stick with pixel art in the long run, learn the ins-and-outs of traditional art in the mean time.

[Anonymous No.2216619]

>>2216589
Unless this is supposed to be at night, the colors you picked are too dark.
Work with a grey background

[Anonymous No.2216633]

>>2216619
love these

[Anonymous No.2216634]

>>2216619
who's the artist for this?

[Anonymous No.2216646]

>>2215741
stop trying to draw cute anime girls. Get good at drawing in general, don't limit yourself to just one thing. Once you have improved you can come back.

[Anonymous No.2216667]

>>2216603
>>2216589

Not a great example, but you can see what I mean by blocking in rough values to get the lighting right.

[Anonymous No.2216733]

>>2216281
You can only get so far if you're ONLY doing drawings like that bro.

[Anonymous No.2216737]

>>2215741
Learn to draw cute, realistic girls before trying to draw cute mango girls. You'll see for yourself how big a difference that makes, especially when it comes to expressions and angles.

[Anonymous No.2216755]

I have no idea what I'm doing, been more than a year since I did any studies and I'm severely lacking in foundation.

[andrae No.2216890]

>>2216634
me

[Anonymous No.2216896]

>>2216890
blog?

[Anonymous No.2216899]

>>2216896
I think his name is andrae, not blog.

[Lefty !/IsMOEc4mo No.2217239]

>>2215160
hella cute

-------
Just finished this, left leg is super weird!!

[Anonymous No.2217247]

>>2217239
maybe because it doesn't have a knee

[Anonymous No.2217290]

>>2215135
Anybody have tips on how to draw good bad drawings?

[Anonymous No.2217294]

>>2215135
thanks for the fap OP

[Lefty !/IsMOEc4mo No.2217306]

>>2217247
i know, i couldn't draw it. how would you solve it?

[Anonymous No.2217314]

>>2217306
Different anon from before... Do you start with basic shapes when you draw? I used to hate using shapes first but now it helps me determine where all the joints are going to go.

[Anonymous No.2217520]

Getting near finishing the first double page for my comic project (first one done I mean also, story-wise it should be placed in like the middle).
Began drawing some quick storyboards to see how many pages that would do, I guess that should be around 60, while including the double pages as one. Man, that will take me some time to do the whole thing.

[Anonymous No.2217521]

>>2217239
Keep it up, you are doing God's work.

[Anonymous No.2217586]

>>2217520
make sure to post it in its own thread so i can see it since this seems like its gonna be decent.

[Anonymous No.2217609]

>>2217520
That blur looks awful imo

[Anonymous No.2217617]

>>2217520

The debris coming out of the explosion looks very haphazardly drawn and ruins it. The lines should follow the path of the particles/rubble that are being blasted out yet you've drawn them looping back,probably from quickly scribbling it down.

[Anonymous No.2217637]

>>2217609
I agree

[Anonymous No.2217749]

>>2217520
It feels like the first isn't connecting very well with the face somehow, a little floaty. I feel like the fist is just "there", rather than punching the face. Maybe it's the angle?

I'm no martial arts expert but perhaps the fist should be rotated.

[Anonymous No.2217792]

>>2217609
Looks better with it.

>>2217617
I planned to rework on the particles and add more debris since that part was unfinished, but it doesn't bother me as much as you seems to say it, what would you change for example?

[Anonymous No.2217796]

>>2217792
>I planned to rework on the particles and add more debris since that part was unfinished

I was referring to the lines you've used that come from the impact of that person and the wall. Debris was probably the wrong word.

>What would you change for example

I'd go with something closer to the explosion near the puncher. It looks a lot less scribbly. Its a lot better near the centre of the impact but as it reaches into the distance the loose lines look strange.

[Anonymous No.2217928]

>>2217520
Its shit man. do it again from scratch and avoid that fucking blur and those shitty elliptic lines

[Anonymous No.2217929]

>>2217239
the feets are too long

[Anonymous No.2217931]

>>2217929
That's really the only thing that bothered you?

[Anonymous No.2217934]

>>2217931
you make it sound like yeti feets are not a bad thing.

[Anonymous No.2217940]

>>2217934
> you make it sound like yeti feets are not a bad thing

I don't, but the lenght of the feet is really minor. Just compare the size of the lower and upper parts of the body. Most parts have a problem.

[Anonymous No.2218127]

saw a vid of wynn-chan absolutely wrecking a guy who summoned 3 obelisks, drew this on impulse, so it's probably quite sloppy...

just needed to get it out of my system.

[Anonymous No.2218142]

>>2216357
love the hands

[Anonymous No.2218143]

[Anonymous No.2218155]

[Anonymous No.2218160]

>>2218143
I like it as a base, but without values or line width figuring out what her legs are doing is a straight puzzle.

[Anonymous No.2218168]

>>2218127
kek

>>2218143
nice, color it!
i still find your heads too large though

[Anonymous No.2218169]

>>2218160
she has no legs, unless you mean the scaly parts

[Anonymous No.2218171]

>>2218155
very nice

[Anonymous No.2218175]

>>2218143
>there are actual good artists posting on /ic

[Anonymous No.2218190]

>>2218143
Wow anon, this looks great! I love her smug expression.

[Anonymous No.2218192]

>>2218175
>newfags will keep saying this

[Anonymous No.2218194]

>>2215227
This image confuses me, is that anime a man or girl because they have a girls face and hair style but a mans body.

Still is technically impressive thought.

[Anonymous No.2218197]

[Anonymous No.2218199]

>>2218194
it's a muscle loli. that's hist schtick lately

[Anonymous No.2218207]

>>2218197
This is pretty fun. I'd love to see something like this animated.

[Anonymous No.2218212]

>>2218207
thanks. I'm actually trying to make a comic with this approach

[Anonymous No.2218219]

>>2218212
Sweet, it's a nice style. I think the hatching on his arm looks a bit sloppy the way you squiggle and sometimes overlap a bit. Looks better when it's a bit cleaner like on his shirt. Have you tried out different hatching styles? Whether it's a more decorative thing like Toppi, or a more simple thing like Moebius, or maybe you don't need it at all and can do with flat shapes.

[Anonymous No.2218222]

>>2218175
you're a faggot harry. people don't post due to being doxed, if this place had less vitrol they would post more shit. from all the up and coming ones i really like mike.

[Anonymous No.2218229]

>>2218199

>Lately

[Anonymous No.2218236]

>>2218229
well, i don't remember well but they didn't used to be THAT muscular in the beginning.

[Anonymous No.2218246]

>>2218212
I hope the whole comic's not like that. Used sparingly, it's cool. Used every panel it's just annoying.

[Anonymous No.2218248]

>>2218246
using always those perspectives is pretty boring, I would not be able to end drawing a single chapter

[Anonymous No.2218289]

>>2218142
>love the hands
>hands are malformed doodles

[Anonymous No.2218291]

>>2218155
Its not very nice, its cool as fuck.

[Anonymous No.2218293]

>>2218212
scolta, fa cagare. le robe stlizzate falle su una base realistica. la prospettiva del braccio cosi e tutta sminchiata
e poi falli bene sti tratteggi

[Anonymous No.2218300]

someone told me to draw a badger

[Anonymous No.2218303]

>>2218293
ho deciso di lasciar perdere i tratteggi, dovrei ripensare tutto il lavoro se decidessi di usarli sul serio. Sto anche rivedendo un po le forzture prospettiche (mi son fatto prendere un po la mano) puntando su qualcosa di più pulito.

[Anonymous No.2218309]

>>2218155
I think /d/ will like this.

[Anonymous No.2218320]

>>2218300
its a nice badger.

[Anonymous No.2218321]

>>2218300
Eeeeeeeeeeee!

[Manic No.2218325]

Terrible anime deformed style

[Anonymous No.2218334]

>>2218325
aint this thing like 4 days old? dont be lazy you cuck.

[Manic No.2218345]

>>2218334
This isn't finished though

[Manic No.2218393]

>>2218345
Getting closer though

[Anonymous No.2218394]

>>2218303
Pretty cool

[Anonymous No.2218396]

>>2218303
>>2218197
>>2218212
Really reminds me of Yuasa. I'd love to see this being worked on, like on a tumblr or something. Hopefully you'll release it in english.

[Anonymous No.2218400]

>>2218127
Fuck I really love your stuff, where did you get the interest in giant stuff from?

[Anonymous No.2218450]

>>2217520
And done.

[Anonymous No.2218508]

>>2218143
I'm having trouble figuring out her form, but I absolutely love that smug.

[Anonymous No.2218517]

>>2218508
shes siting in giant snake dogs that look like cocks. c'mon man.

[Anonymous No.2218519]

>>2218517
but they're also part of her body and stuff.

[Anonymous No.2218522]

>>2218519
thus confirming that you can see the image.

[Anonymous No.2218532]

>>2218194
she's just a really strong loli anon.

[Anonymous No.2218545]

>>2218450
It still looks bad. learn how to draw a unch before putting it into a panel of a story
also those dinamic lines looks good only for half second before your eyes recognize that's some riff raff walla walla tool-something and not actually drawn

[Anonymous No.2218548]

>>2218545
>that's some riff raff walla walla tool-something and not actually drawn

What?

[Anonymous No.2218552]

>>2218303
Quello va gia meglio
comunque, se vuoi un consiglio da uno che ha provato a diventare un profesionista e l'ha presa in culo, se vuoi che la gente legga la tua storia STAI SUL SEMPLICE. le cose sperimentali come inquadrature azzardate usale con parsimonia, e solo nel momento in cui sei piu che sicuro di quello che stai disegnando. stai ancora imparando, non devi strafare perche si capisce quando vuoi fare il figo anche se sei appena in grado di disegnarlo in modo "noiso"

[Anonymous No.2218555]

>>2218143
>>2218155
Wait, are you the baseball lolis guy?

[Anonymous No.2218556]

>>2218548
It looks bad, that's the important part.

[Anonymous No.2218571]

>>2218552
>>2218303
L'italia è un paese meraviglioso.

[Anonymous No.2218577]

>>2218571
That must be the reason most italians want to emigrate somewhere else.

[Manic No.2218589]

>>2218450
I think it looks cool. It's simple but that makes it easier to understand. If it was dynamic it would be much better though.

>>2218545
You just called it a punch. So you understand it IS a punch. You just don't like it, that doesn't mean anything is wrong with it.

[Anonymous No.2218597]

>>2218589
Don't pull word sophistry on me, I'm saying that the hand looks like shit, and since you seem skilled anough you could try redrawing it with a reference picture.
but if you're taking this as a personal insult of sorts, then keep your bouquet of obese caterpillars man, its your problem

[Anonymous No.2218623]

>>2218597
don't reply to it anon, filter it.

[Anonymous No.2218641]

>>2216357
kill urself now

[Anonymous No.2218643]

>>2216394
>sad moody video game?
lol

[Anonymous No.2218644]

>>2216422
be more original, faggot

[Anonymous No.2218689]

>>2215304
>>2216281
try thinking of your art as "pieces"(pieces as in a piece of work) rather than drawings. try for a single subject were you have the forces of the world apply to it (lighting, gravity, perspective, ect) instead of just a head or a body "floating in space"
>>2215718
where is the light coming from?? the highlights are all over the place. choose a direction and stick with it
>>2215546
>>2216492
tighten your lines a bit. add some more shadows ans perspective too. maybe try cell shading as it will give your chibis a tighter look to them. choose more dynamic positions
>>2215641
pic related. pls try more realistic poses
>>2215741
try breaking down all the components of what you want your art to be like and focus on them individually. it'll help you not get overwhelmed and its a low stakes kind of deal (ex if youre focusing on eyes, one bad drawing isnt too bad and you can always try again as opposed to a complex invested piece), also life drawing always helps, take what you learn and practice stylizing it.
>>2216472
try adding more line weight and variety. use the lines to define completely black shadows (thicker lines under the neck or where the hair is). think of your lines more as a definition of shadow rather than a color separator. also they dont have to connect so leaving spots lineless were the light hits strongly is ok.
>>2216422
like it! need to see more to give crit but it looks pretty cute
>>2216755
dont try to combine animu with realistic until you understand how to stylize the human body correctly. use a bigger, solid brush and paint in blocks and just erase what you dont need.
>>2217239
the feet need to be farther apart for the legs and hips to look like that
>>2217520
the blur is hiding your anatomy and perspective problems. try again
>>2218155
super solid, but if you want try adding a bigger range of shadows (darker darks lighter lights)
>>2218197
>>2218212
love the use of line and extended perspective
>>2218393
calves are too long

[FiRez !!tndrCZJHE+I No.2218710]

Tried to make a chibi, not sure if the proportions look ok

[Anonymous No.2218711]

>>2218689
Don't give critique when you're a beginner.

[Manic No.2218715]

>>2218597
But what is specifically wrong with it. I can't see anything and I can only tell you don't like it.

Not liking something for no reason isn't a critique.

[Anonymous No.2218722]

>>2218710
I liked you better when you stopped posting.

[Anonymous No.2218725]

>>2218711
Put your trip back on, firez.

[Manic No.2218744]

>>2218710
The head, body, and hands don't match. The head looks like a normal adults head, the body looks a little kid, close but not quite chibi, lastly the hands are goofy and cartoony not matching the chibi/anime style ya got going on.

That hand isn't grabbing she should be on the ground cause gravity. Look up some chibi and copy what they're doing. Or just learn to draw children instead, it would suit you better.

>>2218711
Those are basics, So really they aren't completely new, They are confident enough to do a redline and show their knowledge. So far I agree with most of their critiques.

[Anonymous No.2218754]

>>2218744
>So far I agree with most of their critiques.
oh thank GOD you agree! that means it's good redline!
shitlord.

[FiRez !!tndrCZJHE+I No.2218756]

>>2218725
I honestly feel so insecure about my own stuff that I am afraid of giving critique, unless it is regarding very basic stuff

>>2218744
I see thanks for the feedback

This is something with more proper proportions or so I hope

[Anonymous No.2218768]

>>2218754
>shitlord
That not a critque. Go back to /b/ retard

[Anonymous No.2218779]

>>2218756
>FiRez
i thought you killed yourself..you cuck there's a faggot that keeps posting your work asking people if they are upset.. its your fault make him stop.

[Anonymous No.2218781]

>>2218779

[Anonymous No.2218782]

>>2218781
REEEEEEEEEEEE

[Anonymous No.2218798]

>>2218300
do not mean to bump own image but i forgot to ask if anyone had any suggestions for other cute animals I should draw

[Anonymous No.2218801]

>>2218798
A bunny!

[Anonymous No.2218823]

>>2218801
I actually already drew a bunny, posted it in the drawing thread tho. Only realized this time it would probably be better here.

[Anonymous No.2218892]

ive been redrawing and editing the anatomy for a while and i need some help

[Anonymous No.2218893]

>>2218711
ive been going to an art high school for 4 years. i know my basics. i mean my handling of the medium (digital) isnt superb but i generally know how anatomy works and things like light and shading

[Anonymous No.2218902]

[Anonymous No.2218937]

>>2218689
Well its nice to see someone else actually trying to give a hand. lately the trend is to shitpost or ignore

[K No.2219018]

>>2218197
The perspective is pleasant, but what on Manara's name is going on with that face?

[K No.2219023]

>>2218892
Get your linework right before any kind of detailing. The right hand is in an almost perfect pose, but use that square as the back of the hand. You never held a backpack strap that way; we should see nothing but backs and knuckles. Turn the right hand inward.

Someone correct me if I'm wrong, but are the shoulders, ribs and legs too thin?

[Anonymous No.2219046]

posted on drawthread for crits, droping it here 2

[andrae No.2219052]

>>2218902
check her neck's length

>>2219018
Avoid chicken scratching. Use a larger brush or make you strokes constant if you want thick lines.

[Anonymous No.2219059]

>>2218400
i guess it's a fetish

[Anonymous No.2219069]

>>2219046
She is balding, but for whatever reason the hair she has left goes robbon mode right out of her scalp.

[Anonymous No.2219072]

>>2219052
He may be chicken scratching, but you've got problems too. Learn to connect the lines, ffs.

[Anonymous No.2219091]

>>2218127
i really think you should abuse digital tools, textures and effect layers more. it could up your game.

>>2219052
agree partly with >>2219072
of course, not connecting is a technique in itself, but you could be more thorough sometimes. it may become a bad habit.
do you ever finish stuff?

[Anonymous No.2219133]

>>2219091
>>2219091
do you mean the basic stuff like overlay/multiply/etc or stuff like levels and such? i'm getting the hang of selective colour and gradient maps at the moment.

[Anonymous No.2219135]

>>2219072
>>2219091
Thanks. Never noticed that I tend to do that with my lines. I'm paying attention to that next time.

>>2219091
Not yet. Until I get decent with anatomy, maybe.

[Anonymous No.2219142]

>have a painting assignment due tomorrow
>drawing my Japanese anime instead

[Anonymous No.2219151]

>>2219133
i mean all of it. including textures, brushes and blurs and filters.
well, try to experiment. it's just a suggestion.

>>2219135
anatomy isn't everything, don't forget that.

[Anonymous No.2219262]

>>2218303
english please though.

[Anonymous No.2219266]

>>2219133
take a whole day just for messing with layer effects and tools, just do it

[Anonymous No.2219281]

>>2219052
>check her neck's length
you're right. Fixed and updated

[Anonymous No.2219282]

>>2219091
> filename
Did you get this from a torrent with others pictures of this artist? I'm interested.

[Anonymous No.2219287]

>>2219282
nah, ripped directly from pixiv. artist is ASK, like the filename says. there is no batch as far as i know.
here, have one more.

[Anonymous No.2219296]

>>2218902
Wish he would update Emma already.

[Anonymous No.2219303]

>>2219296
tbf he's giving us good tutorial videos and actually has a likable personality to listen to.

[Anonymous No.2219346]

Oh god how do i make it not flat? how do i make it actually appealing and not just furry/anime tier shite?

[Anonymous No.2219353]

>>2219346

sticky has resources on animals and 3d drawing.

[Nile No.2219354]

[Anonymous No.2219363]

>>2215227
is it inspired by this?

[Anonymous No.2219365]

>>2219346
>"werewolf" with scarf
Nice try sparkledog maker. Anyway, use a reference. Construct with primitives to help you see your image in 3D. Also, try different angles. Full profiles don't convey depth as well.

[Anonymous No.2219369]

>>2219354
try again.
the back of her head is caved in and she lacks form all over. especially obvious when you look at the tail.

[Anonymous No.2219401]

>>2219363
Oh wow. Big surprise - this weaboo nerd would be an unoriginal hack.

[Anonymous No.2219425]

>>2219401
stop being retarded, there are tons of pieces like that, especially by chinese artists.
also it really doesn't hurt to copy. you'll eventually learn that.

[Anonymous No.2219472]

>>2219425
>it really doesn't hurt to copy. you'll eventually learn that.

post your work.

[Anonymous No.2219482]

>>2219472
after you.

[Anonymous No.2219690]

[Swegman No.2219707]

>>2215227
I love the shading and colors, but the buildings are kinda slanted, and her facial expression is a little too generic for my liking

[Anonymous No.2219714]

[Anonymous No.2219717]

Fanart of Vocaloid Ruby, I did the lineart in just one day which is a new record for me, gonna start coloring soon.
Thoughts?

[Swegman No.2219740]

>>2216472
Linework is one of those things that you have to practice to get good at.

[Swegman No.2219771]

>>2218756
Much better. just a bit of advice, the contrast needs to be bumped up a bit, and your faces are a little too generic for my liking

[Swegman No.2219777]

>>2218892
The mouth needs a ton of work. try relearning mouths from scratch.

[Swegman No.2219780]

>>2218902
Great colors, but the pose could use some work.

[Anonymous No.2219789]

>>2219777
i love how you single out the mouth even though that isnt even close to being the problem.

Eyes too close, ear is wrongly place, not a single thing is executed almost correctly

[Swegman No.2219798]

>>2219789
Fuck you, bitch.

I'm actually a professional artist compared to the rest of this shithole

[Anonymous No.2219804]

>>2219780
Thanks. I didn't use a reference but I think it came out good besides the neck which i already fixed here >>2219281

[Anonymous No.2219812]

better than not drawing anything all day I guess

[Anonymous No.2219815]

>>2219812
http://www.alexhays.com/loomis/Andrew%20Loomis%20-%20Fun%20WIth%20a%20Pencil.pdf

[Anonymous No.2219829]

>>2219815
What is that supposed to mean

[Anonymous No.2219833]

>>2219829
it means learn to draw

[Manic No.2219839]

>>2219833
you don't know how to draw. Why listen to you

[Anonymous No.2219840]

>>2219833
I'm just bored and tired, and loomis is useless anyway

[Anonymous No.2219846]

>>2219839
>>2219840
Two beginners acting retarded

Why am I not surprised

[Anonymous No.2219860]

>>2219829

that boy needs therapy.

[Anonymous No.2219869]

[Anonymous No.2219874]

>>2219869
Holy shit this is pretty cool

[Anonymous No.2219876]

>>2219869
one punch man is nice.

[Anonymous No.2219880]

>>2219876
Yup. Mosquito girl was the only OPM girl I didn't draw yet until then mainly because of her complex design, but drawing her ended up being pretty fun after all. The fact I gave her human arms probably helped as well.

[Anonymous No.2219881]

>>2219880
lets hope the anime last. one is killing himself with so much work haha

[Anonymous No.2219919]

>>2219869
>>2219880

blog?

[Anonymous No.2219930]

>>2219919
Search TheGoldenSmurf on Pixiv, it's the only one where I post stuffs for now.

[Anonymous No.2219965]

how bad is the anatomy proportions? The one half is larger than the other right?

[Anonymous No.2220016]

Better?

[Manic No.2220022]

>>2220016
I thought you drew the last picture the way you did on purpose. I think this one has better anatomy but the other has more style.

[Anonymous No.2220033]

>>2220022
It was on purpose, but I couldn't draw decent banana tits and got depressed. I learned a new hands pose though

[Anonymous No.2220034]

Hi. Can you guys please, tell me, what is wrong with this piece? Also, if you could have some tips for the future, I have problems to find out, if the picture I have drawn is better or worse than my previous artwork, in fact, I have problems determining if I have drawn a piece of shit or not.

[Anonymous No.2220035]

>>2220034
Arm foreshortening is wrong. that's the only real issue if you ask me, try changing the arm pose with a easier one because shit's hard.

[Anonymous No.2220036]

>>2220034
It looks ok
The perspective is kinda off
Lots of small issues but work on the perspective first

[Anonymous No.2220041]

>>2219363
yeah, it is.
>>2219401
if you think like that, you'll find it difficult to improve, and like >>2219425 said it's not an uncommon composition.

[Anonymous No.2220067]

>>2219690
use a big brush to block in sum bigger areas

[Anonymous No.2220069]

>>2219717
hands too big and right arm too long.

[Anonymous No.2220112]

i wanna make this painterly but idk how
just gonna wing it eventually

[Anonymous No.2220127]

>>2220112

>i wanna make this painterly

50 percent opacity

eyeball the colors and values. no filters.

[Anonymous No.2220140]

>>2219869
>TheGoldenSmurf
that you Murata?

[Manic No.2220147]

[Anonymous No.2220152]

>>2219840
>loomis is useless
you're fucked.

[Anonymous No.2220165]

>>2219023
i actually tried to make him less of a shota waif but i can flesh him in even more

[Anonymous No.2220166]

>>2220165
>>2219023
heres what ive got so far. flipped it cause his hair was on the wrong side. i still need to add more clothing detail + sleeves

[Anonymous No.2220172]

>>2220069
Thanks for the reply
I measure the arms and they seem to be the same length but it does appear like the right one is a bit longer, I think I might've made her left forearm a bit too long in the sketch but I'm glad that didn't translate into the final drawing.
I should be more careful about proportions.

[Anonymous No.2220192]

[FiRez !!tndrCZJHE+I No.2220200]

>>2219771
Thanks, I will definitely bump the contrast and try to work on her face more.

It is sad to know you find my stuff generic, while rendering I try to find characterization but maybe that still scapes me :\

[Manic No.2220243]

>>2220147
Is this too refined for a thumbnail?

[Anonymous No.2220255]

>>2220147
>>2220243
Just kill yourself already, you fuck

[Manic No.2220267]

>>2220255
You didn't answer the question. Do you know what a thumbnail is?

[Anonymous No.2220269]

>>2220243
A thumbnail can be whatever you want it to be but it's better not to labor over it for too long.

[Anonymous No.2220279]

>>2220243
Your forced meme won't be the next merc_wip.

[Anonymous No.2220289]

quickie stuff - gotta get that momentum back

[Anonymous No.2220290]

>>2220289
forgot to mention these were from ttgl artbook #2

[Anonymous No.2220303]

>>2219281
I actually really love this pose, I feel like there can be some way to make the head on the ground more dynamic though

[Anonymous No.2220304]

>>2219965
Head should be a lot bigger, legs are pretty skinny but idk if that what youre going for

[Anonymous No.2220356]

>>2220152
Can I see your drawings? if you're right, you should be pretty good thanks to Loomis books

[Anonymous No.2220358]

>>2220290
>>2220289
Do you have physical opr digital copy? if the latter, do you mind sharing?

[Anonymous No.2220370]

...is this pose even fucking possible
help me pls anons

sorry if i asked on the wrong thread btw. i was going to ask the porn thread, but then again, this one isn't going to be a porn

[Anonymous No.2220377]

>>2220370
I don't get what's wrong with the pose.

[Anonymous No.2220384]

>>2220370
Lift your arse off the chair and get on the floor in that exact position to judge for yourself.

[Anonymous No.2220425]

>>2218823
>>2218798
Draw a Kirin

[Anonymous No.2220444]

>>2218798
wombats are pretty cute

[Anonymous No.2220446]

>>2220384
eh, yes i did

>>2220377
i can't tell why exactly but the thumbnail looks kinda funny

[Anonymous No.2220448]

>>2220172
he means the arm is too long overall, not that it doesn't match the other. The wrist should be about crotch height when the arm hangs straight.

[Anonymous No.2220450]

>>2220192
sundry, are you ever gonna learn how hue and saturation works?

[Anonymous No.2220512]

>>2220446
>looks kinda funny
The only thing I see is the foreshortened leg being too short. I don't really see big deals with the picture

[Anonymous No.2220542]

>>2220358
Sorry It's the physical copy

[Anonymous No.2220556]

>>2220542
You don't have any scan or you're willing to do a photo of every page, am I correct?
jeez.

[Anonymous No.2220563]

>>2215135
What settings did you use to draw the lines clean like that?

[Anonymous No.2220569]

>>2220556
The books are hundreds of pages. I don't have enough free time to digitize the whole thing and draw...

But next time I will photograph the pages that I studied off of - my scanner sucks and would probably ruin the book

[Anonymous No.2220575]

>>2215227
One of your better paintings, I dig it!

[Anonymous No.2220576]

>>2216357
Nice, but a lot of the exact same facial expression around.

[Anonymous No.2220623]

>>2219860
I'm gonna kill you

[Anonymous No.2220657]

I wish I was good with digital. drawing on a tablet feels like driving a bike with the tires made of butter

[Anonymous No.2220666]

>>2220657
These abs looks like they have pussies between them.

Also, if that's the problem, just sketch your drawing on paper, scan it and clean it digitally.

[Anonymous No.2220669]

>>2220657
learn proportions.

[cool anon No.2220701]

I tried I fucked up...

Going back to Loomistown...

[Anonymous No.2220702]

>>2220669
I know proportions >>2220016
wasn't this thread about stylization? or by stylization you guys intend only animu and disney faces?
>>2220666
yeah, guess its time to buy a scanner

[Anonymous No.2220711]

>>2220666
Also

[Anonymous No.2220716]

>>2220702
> I know proportions

Those two drawings clearly shows you need more training, that's for sure. it's just one example, but the breasts lacks lots of volume and the tits are badly placed, besides not looking good, for example. Work more on your linearts as well. The hatching for the clothes of >>2220016 are just bad

[cool anon No.2220732]

guys need some help

Which one looks better 1(more anime style) or 2 (western style so to speak)???

[Anonymous No.2220738]

>>2220732
both look like you need loomis in your life fam

[cool anon No.2220743]

>>2220738
>fam
thanks bro... back to loomis then

[cool anon No.2220758]

>>2220738

is this better?

[Anonymous No.2220765]

>>2218143
I LOVE YOU SEASON

seriously though, you're the best on /ic/ right now imo

[Anonymous No.2220774]

>>2220732
What kind of stupid question is that?

[Anonymous No.2220787]

>>2216423
fuckin' neat

[Anonymous No.2220878]

>>2220657
Main dude fan art?

[Anonymous No.2220899]

>>2220878
Don't tempt me in drawing one every day and plastering them on /ic/ man

[Anonymous No.2220901]

>>2220878
I'm glad I'm not the only person who was thinking that. My absolute sides.

[Anonymous No.2220928]

>>2220450
Can you explain yourself without passive agressive jabs?

[Anonymous No.2220929]

useless doodles for wasting time

[Anonymous No.2220941]

[Anonymous No.2220946]

>>2220941
cute touch with fubuki's little keychains.

[Anonymous No.2220969]

>>2220929
never useless, great lines and fuck you for hug box fishing.

[Anonymous No.2220971]

>>2220941
more mass on her arm and have it overlap the neck a bit more, either way you're totally nailing the style.

[Anonymous No.2221031]

>>2220929
r-redjuice?

[Anonymous No.2221075]

>>2219717
What's your deviantart? I remember asking you quite a while ago but I forgot it

I really love your art

[Anonymous No.2221094]

>>2220929
you don't understand the neck very well at all. study the trapezius from various angles, that helped me a lot.

[Anonymous No.2221116]

I always feel like my shading is kinda flat and bland, although it only seems to happen when I'm drawing in an anime style.

>>2221075
Thank you! I decided to make a pixiv and tumblr account where I'll be uploading most of my work, butter7103 on both

[Anonymous No.2221120]

Wanted to go for a finished work, but decided to drop it and go back to the grind.

Is the perspective at least passable?

[Anonymous No.2221207]

>>2221120
The head and hair feel very flat compared to the rest of the body, probably due to the lack of rendering. I have the exact same problem in my pics too.

the hair especially though, it looks very haphazrdly put on. try to make it follow gravity better.

nice abs.

[Anonymous No.2221210]

Lots of good stuff this time. It was hard to pick art for the new thread

have fun kids
>>2221209
>>2221209
>>2221209

[Anonymous No.2221351]

>>2218689
Thanks anon.

[Anonymous No.2221461]

kay faraday

trying to practice inking so the line weights are not so all over the place. :/

[Anonymous No.2222003]

>>2216394
yes

[Anonymous No.2224221]

>>2216394
ayy lmao