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Post your nsfw, critique work and so on.
Furry is allowed, however do not over indulge on the subject of furries or their culture. Unnecessarily reporting these anons are strongly discouraged. This thread is dedicated to helping anons improve their erotic drawings and paintings.
Do not start flame wars.
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>> No.2188740
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Started the pen & color process. I haven't much experience in this area. Be gentle!

In other news, I need a better scanner. Had to crop two different scans for the best result.

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>>2188740
One day, I will have a better scanner. I'm happy and grateful for what I have now, but I need one with a bigger screen that can scan a sketchbook page without shadows.

Also, I'm sorry if I broke an unspoken rule by starting a new porn thread myself. The last one was over the post limit, and nobody else was making a new one, so I stepped up to bat.

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I suddenly decided "Rosalina".
So have a sketch
>I don't actually like her

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>>2188740
>>2188745
Anon, chill. We don't need your life story.

>> No.2188797

>>2188795
Yeah, brevity isn't my strong-suit. I'd delete and rewrite if it didn't fuck up the order.

>> No.2188803

>>2188773
Anon... sticky. Really. Just read the sticky, learn to draw, and then come back. I don't say this to be rude, but there's really nothing else to say.

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>> No.2188868

>>2188740
>>2188745
>>2188859
HTAM
breh
8x6
>you're doin' the lords work son.

>> No.2188870
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Old friend asked for Midna and Link, so decided to accede that.

Not happy with most of it, but what can you do.

>> No.2188883
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>> No.2188885

>>2188883
Next thread's header

>> No.2188890
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sketch from yesterday

>> No.2188892

>>2188890
Why did she die

>> No.2188906

>>2188870
Work on visualizing the image in 3d; parts look flat and so does shading. You're over-rendering and it's making everything look like solid objects (worst offenders are Link's clothes and the hair on both of them).

>> No.2188911

>>2188892
Someone pulled off the mask.

>> No.2188919

>>2188906
>parts look flat and so does shading
That was a goal. It's why I left the shitty linework in instead of painting over it.

Can't really jack off to 3D-looking drawings.

No clue how over-rendering makes stuff look flat, though. Or how I'm over-rendering at all with my shitty half-arsed drapery. Less drapery for more boners? I can do that. That's less work.

>> No.2188926

>>2188919
>Can't really jack off to 3D-looking drawings.
That's not what i meant, read up on art theory or lurk some more to figure out what a flat drawing is and why it should be avoided.
>Or how I'm over-rendering at all with my shitty half-arsed drapery.
Answered your own question there m8.
>Less drapery for more boners? I can do that. That's less work.
Pretty much.

>> No.2188961

>>2188926
You know, call me a retard, but I don't see how lurking more is going to help me when you don't even tell me.

I've lurked. A lotta Loomis. I've been reading Loomis lately, nothing about flat drawings. But I'm looking more stupid with every post so I'm just going to stop. Self-awareness at work, that.

>> No.2188974

Is there a decent market for 100% anime-looking porn illustrations? Most things I see here are either vaguely western, completely western, or furry/whatever else.
I tried browsing hentai foundry but I don't quite understand how to specifically find artists who do commissions to check their prices/works. Even then, most things I saw there didn't look animu at all.

>> No.2188987

>>2188974
Pixiv?

>> No.2188997

>>2188987
People sell things over pixiv? I've seen some western artist link back to their site/HF/patreon, but not much in terms of commissions. Not even in Japanese, which I can read, though admittedly I didn't look too hard at their introduction since it's mostly "please don't use my images to make money" etc. or "thanks for viewing my profile". Do they just happen via private messages?

>> No.2189003

>>2188868
>HTAM
>breh
>8x6
>>you're doin' the lords work son.

If only I could translate this to English, then I'd know what it means!

>> No.2189060
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Trying into animu, not really working out tho

>> No.2189067

>>2188997
Are you looking for people to commision or a place to sell commissions?
These are some people that do/used to do commissions that are western or at least speak english, i don't follow many western artists.

http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=3068113
http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=13309051
http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=1961560

It would seem that most people are running away from commissions towards patrion, and why wouldn't they?
I always found commissions to be a very bad idea to make money from, i mean who starts drawing to draw other people's ideas?
Most people naturally want to draw their drawings and make money by drawing their ideas.

>> No.2189071

>>2189060
Her torso from neck to pelvis is not even two heads, even if she was a loli it would still have been to short, she looks like a midget.

>> No.2189074

>>2189067
>i mean who starts drawing to draw other people's ideas?

Fan-artists.

Even with patreon, you're restricted to being fan-art focused if you want any kind of moderate gain. Not to mention there are plenty of patreons that allow their patrons to enter polls to decide what gets drawn.

>> No.2189077

>>2189074
That has nothing to do with what i said, commissions are literally drawing someones elses ideas, poses, compositions etc.
Fan art is drawing a character you like in situations that you like.

>> No.2189083

>>2189067
Yeah I meant as a place to sell. I was just wondering if there's enough people requesting animu stuff or one has to go down the furry/scat/etc. route to make some money.
>It would seem that most people are running away from commissions towards patrion
I thought only people who had already a big fanbase could do this to any profitable extent. It's probably not a great option for someone starting out, is it?

>> No.2189090

>>2189077
>That has nothing to do with what i said

But it does. Fan-art deals with IPs you don't own. It's not your OC. Your drawing characters that don't belong to you. They aren't your ideas.

>> No.2189092

>>2189083
Probably not, it's also probably not a great idea to think that you can start a gallery and have commissions tomorrow
people have to start stumbling upon you enjoy your free art and then start having urges
to give you money for more make sure to tag only popular japanese tags because even westerners don't search for western tags except for some really popular ones.
Then make it obvious that you are a westerner by adding english titles etc and after you have a following you can either start commissions or take it to patrion for full
original works or semi commision things that they do with monthly rewards.

>>2189090
Are you pretending to not understand the i am drawing this because i want to vs i am drawing things because someone else wants it? even if it's not your characters
you are drawing then because that's what you want to draw, with your own ideas your own fetishes and your own compositions, by doing commissions you are pretty much
just a printing machine for someone else.

>> No.2189096

>>2189092
Thanks for the suggestions anon, will keep them in mind.

>> No.2189097

>>2189092
I'm not pretending to anything. You asked "who starts drawing to draw other people's ideas?" The answer is fan-artists because they draw content dealing with intellectual property they have no rights to and it's the main reason why they get traffic. That's just a fact.

>> No.2189103

>>2189097
This has nothing to do with the way i used "other peoples idias" in my post so i don't see why you would say that.
Also many fan-artists draw very original stories using borrowed characters and settings in doujinshi, it's tremendously
more creative than drawing even original commissions.

>> No.2189112

>>2188740
>>2188745

Something about the faces in these two bother me. The first one, I can't really put my finger on it but something just feels off. The second one has a really flat looking face. Otherwise though, good stuff, I like it.

>> No.2189113

>>2189097
If you don't own the IP of the content your drawing, that means it's dealing with ideas that aren't yours. You might like them, which is why you don't mind drawing them, but they aren't yours. That's my point. The issue is you're trying to demonize the concept of drawing other people's ideas as if a commissioners can't choose what commissions they accept. There's a reason artists have rules when it comes to commissions.

>doujinshi storys
>very original

Thanks for the laugh.

>> No.2189114

>>2189113 was meant for >>2189103

>> No.2189120

>>2189113
http://exhentai.org/g/564437/8878ce5375/ this is a story that someone wrote upon playing demon's souls because that's what he wanted to do, live his fantasies through his art.
It's his idea, his fetishes, his story and his taste.
All you can say about a commision is that someone paid you to draw their idea and you did it.

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>>2188890
My understanding of the body in general is very shallow, so I'm sorry if this isn't very helpful.
Please, always draw the whole skeleton first before making a drawing with a somehwat difficult pose/angle, that way you won't get lost and you won't have to redo everything.

>> No.2189131

>>2189120
The setting and lore his "ideas" take place in doesn't belong to him, because it's dealing with and is reliant on the Demon's Souls IP (someone else's idea). I'm not even saying there is anything wrong with drawing someone else's idea and/or heavily relying on someone else's idea (ie fan-art and fan-fiction), so I've got no idea what you're trying to prove. You're pretending commission artists can't have rules for the commissions they take.

>> No.2189140

>>2189131
I don't understand what are you trying to prove because you were the one that brought fan art in the conversation,
and no you can really have commision rules on the lines of ask me to draw what i want to draw today, no matter what you do
you will be drawing someone's else's ideas instead of your own.

>> No.2189142
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2189142

I'd like some advice on how to make her look appropriately chubbier? Just a little chub, not over the top.

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>>2189142
Uh, like this?

>> No.2189148

>>2189140
You asked a question and I answered it. That's how fan-art got brought up. Fan-art deals with drawing IPs you don't own, that makes them about drawing the ideas (characters, setting, etc) of other people by default. The difference is the people who own those ideas aren't paying you to draw them because you like them enough to do it for free. If you honestly wanted to make your own content that's entirely your own, you'd make OC.

>> No.2189151

>>2189112
Thanks for the notice. How's my linework and coloring? Do the figures look like they have volume or are their bodies flat, too?

Also, link me to yours so I can return the favor by helping you out.

>> No.2189155

is there such a thing as "begginer hentai tutorial"?
i wanna get into it,but i have no idea how to draw the poses correctly,so im asking if theres anything out there.
even freaking pose studies will do

>> No.2189156

>>2189148
>that makes them about drawing the ideas
No it makes them your ideas based on some else's ideas, the story that you will write will still be your own story and what
you wanted to draw, commissions on the other hand will always be what someone else wants you to draw.
Even if you restrict your commissions to i only do touhou doujinshi commissions you will still be drawing the characters, setting, and story
that your commissioner will tell you to draw, but if you draw your own touhou doujinshi then they are your own and what you wanted to draw, this is the difference, anything
else has nothing to do with my point.

>> No.2189158

>>2189155
Pick your favorite hentai doujinshi/manga. Draw a page each day.
Repeat for 3 months.

>> No.2189172

>>2189155
but drawing hentai is basically learning to draw naked people and anime faces.

shit man, if you can't learn to put it together you're not cut out for drawing anything.

>> No.2189173

>>2189142
rounder upper arms.

poofy vagina (especially mons pubis)

a little bit of tummy.

>> No.2189190

>>2189156
>if you draw your own touhou doujinshi then they are your own

The characters and setting aren't yours. You doing it of your own volition does not make them yours. They belong to an already establish IP, making the subjects of the story in the doujinshi dealing with characters and ideas from other people, not you.

>> No.2189223

>>2189172
my problem isnt the characters themselves,and them being naked(though i dont like to draw naked)is easier do draw.
my problem is the poses,ive never really done erotic poses before,mostly action-y or just "normal everyday things" poses

>> No.2189234

>>2189223
not the guy you were replying to, but jfc watch porn then. get a couple of screenshots. do gestures.

don't copy poses from doujins. findings ones that don't have shit anatomy isn't easy unless you don't care about your poses being anatomically correct

>> No.2189301

>>2189146
This is great! Thank you

>> No.2189323

>>2189142
add some meat to those thighs and calves.

>> No.2189338
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yep, still working on this, i think im making some good progress

>> No.2189348

>>2189338
I know the first one was a gesture, but this is coming out NICE! Love the hair on the tall boot lady.

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commission wip, he's going to be wearing clothes so I didn't detail the crotch too much

>> No.2189378
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Hows that look so far? Even if the lighting and shadows make no sense.

>> No.2189393

>>2189301
I'm so glad I could help! yur lineart is amazing and so is your drawing! If you want to draw more chub in the future, please pay close attention to where it usually fat is located. Belly, around the armpits and under the breasst to make it cutely noticeable~
Good luck!

>> No.2189436

>>2189393
Wow anon, thank you!
I'll keep that in mind definitely, chubby characters are cute as heck. <3

>> No.2189467

>>2189003
Just browse /fit/ for long enough...

>> No.2189472

>>2189146
>dat chubb
>I want to squeeze and cuddle her
fuuuuck my dick

>> No.2189476

>>2188911
small kek

>> No.2189477

>>2189467
Or you could just answer the question...

>> No.2189509

>>2189378
You've got some big issues with proportions. The bottom girl's head is just as big as the top's torso. Kinda hard to believe the two figures are interacting this way.

>> No.2189517

>>2188870
Without getting into anatomy flaws and a "muh stylization" argument.

The rapoza shadows work in a lot of areas and fail hard in a lot of others (buckles mostly). Think more about form in 3d and if you see that a style is not working in a lot of areas(one single high color multiply layer for every shadow), have the balls to change it up as needed.

>> No.2189526

>>2188739
artist?

>> No.2189527

>>2189517
>(one single high color multiply layer for every shadow)
Hah, nice call but I don't use layers adjustments.

I'll step up the studies. Haven't drawn anything in a long time so I wasn't too chuffed, just getting back on the trike.

What's a rapoza shadow?

>> No.2189545

>>2189509
>Kinda hard to believe the two figures are interacting this way.
Not at all you fucking crybaby. Goddamn.
>>2189378
My dude, the drawing is fine. I'd make the bottom girl's thighs longer though, and fix the hand and forearm of the gil on top.
THAT IS ALL.

>> No.2189546

>>2188870
Bro, I could redo some parts of that drawing if you'd like tho show you how'd i'd make it look more natural. It's basically Link's face

>> No.2189550

>>2189546
I'd appreciate it, bruv. Don't waste too much of your time, I'm not a great student.

>> No.2189555

>>2189526
http://fdssn3411.tumblr.com/

Take caution. The guy apparently has loli shit on there, too, if that bugs you.

>> No.2189561
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>>2189550
Okay dear anon, here it is.
As you can probably appreciate, JUST by changing the face a bit the whole "stifness" changes. That's because Link's face was the most noticeable thing about the drawing. I know keeping an original style is important, but more important is trying to mimic the features of the characters you're drawing the best of your ability. Link's eyes are big, his face is round and his nose is pointy. Always try to see what's the most noticeable feature of the character and try to draw that, no matte how you do it, it'll always end up looking like the character.

Now your highlights!
Your anatomy is great.
Your colors are great.
Your composition is gold
Anon, you've got amazing potential and you musn't waste it by any chance. Keep drawing, keep practicing, but for the love of god don't post it here on /IC/. This board is full of faggots whose drawings can't get more than 5 notes at tumblr and will want to pull you down and point out meaningless bullshit.
Next time, just look at your drawing long and hard an try to identify what's wrong with it, I'm sure you'll be able to tell.
And always use reference!

>> No.2189568

>>2189561
Huh, that looks way better. I see what you mean about avoiding the stiffness and mimicking the original character, thanks for pointing it out. And for taking your time, much appreciated, I'll try to incorporate it into future illustrations.

As for not posting on /ic/, I've found that keeping part in a community is vital for taking part in any hobby (from fitness to paper mache (and honestly, I've looked around and there isn't much in the way of art communities around)). It gets a bad rap - problem is that most of the critique on this board is via text, which is heavily dependent on your interpretation.

Which means there's a lot of miscommunication if you're not in the assumed knowledge pool (I mean just look at the previous comments on the image, haven't the foggiest what was going on), and things can turn nasty if you're too insecure and think you're being attacked.

But anyway, thanks for taking the time, that's a real help. I'll keep at it, anon!

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how do you into a "sexy" style.

>> No.2189571

>>2189568
Always, anon.
As for the art communities, I suggest tumblr, devianart, pixiv or twitter. I've been doing great in the latter.
I can't think of 4chan as a place to keep communities going. There's no restriction nor rules, and you're open to the judgment of people that might know less than you.
Shitty stuff man.

>> No.2189573

>>2189571
I also can't stand when fags say "read loomis m8". If you're going to give advice like that you mention the title of the specific book PLUS the page, otherwise it's meaningless, cocky advice.

>> No.2189627
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Postin a comic page. P-pls no bully ;_;

>> No.2189698

>>2189627
Looks ok but pls rework the foot... it looks super weird

>> No.2189757

>>2189627
the cable should come out from maybe a bit closer to the asshole, now it looks like it's plugged into her uthera

>> No.2189759

>>2189627
virgin spotted. Clearly never experienced a vagina.

>protip: the fun hole is at the bottom of the vagina, not at the top. It's currently plugged into her clitoris.

>> No.2189761

>>2189759

autist spotted

>> No.2189766

I hope it's OK to ask this here. What is a good way to approach drawing a no testicle futa? I see some where they make the clit=penis and some where the penis is separate on top. Anywhere I could find a good tutorial for this?

>> No.2189769

>>2189761
How is he an autist? For pointing out a glaring mistake on a critique board?

>> No.2189790

>>2189766
Find doujinshis and copy that until you can manage to do it on your own.

>> No.2189802

>>2189769
>>2189627
If i wasn't on /ic/ i would really think that it was urethra play, but since there is also no indication of the actual urethra it's probably a mistake.

>> No.2189819

>>2189569
Just follow your dick/clit/whatever.

>> No.2190018

>>2189142
Fat is located a bit everywhere, especially hips and thighs for women, then upper arms, belly indeed, but you sorta get a "bigger" feel on every body part, like calves, neck and face.
Also, the chubbier, the less visible the collarbones.

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i have really weird fetishes

>> No.2190062

>>2190050

mental illness =/= fetish

>> No.2190064

>>2190050
Expected a cute deer boy from the thumbnail. Disappointing.

>> No.2190124

>>2189142

Teach me the secret to drawing boobs, I seriously can't draw em for shit.

>> No.2190309

>>2189627
Not anatomy related, but I'm not really liking the pacing so far. I know you're only a page in, but at a glance I didn't assume that the girl was woken up by a vibrating alarm. It's not very well structured and feels like you just wanted to shove a big, poorly drawn vagina in the reader's face ASAP.

Good porn comes from drawing with both hands, if you catch my drift.

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>>2189627

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>>2188918

more pervert dreams of the shyest nerd

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i geeve up

>> No.2190421

>>2190402
hmm... that's not jesus...

>> No.2190423
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2190423

yep

>>2190402
I want you to finish this.

>> No.2190425

>>2190402
This is kinda neat

>> No.2190455

>>2190425
yeah, if you like shit

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2190487

more of this

>> No.2190499

>>2190487
Whoa you are working extremely slow I remember this from like 2 weeks ago.

>> No.2190502

>>2190499
I work on multiple things at once, I finished a fully painted bust and did a flat sketch commission before returning to this.

>> No.2190509

>>2190487
Right thigh is fucked up. Didn't someone help you with that?

Also, the face looks pretty flat.

>> No.2190526

>>2190487
>>2188740
>>2188745
When were furfags allowed to post on /ic/

>> No.2190538

>>2190526
Read the OP text, dude. Been like this for a while, now.

Also, monstergirl, futa and loli has been accepted before now, so why does this piss you off?

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2190553

>furry still raising eyebrows

Good thing I don't draw furry. I draw manimals. It is easy mistake to make for the untrained eye though.

>> No.2190571

>>2190553
>manimal

That looks nothing like Simon MacCorkindale. Scrap it and start over.

>> No.2190574

>>2190050
hi there, meatbag

>> No.2190586

>>2189569
Fight or flight, should I start over?

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2190652

you know i useto feel weird

but then i saw lilo and stitch hentai

yall mofos nuts

>> No.2190653

>>2190402
>>2190423
>dat plumpness
Fug m8s, I miss her ;_;

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2190677

succubus

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2190682

First time every doing a pornographic painting. Critique would be help.

>> No.2190704

>>2190682
Is it a portal to the netherworld

>> No.2190708

>>2190553

Hey this is pretty goo-

>4 fingers

>>2190571

>> No.2190711

>>2190704
It was supposed to be a shiny purple dildo. I'm glad it looks like a portal though, that made my day. I'll have to work on my dildo drawing skills.

>> No.2190712

>>2190682
its great, you do commissions?

>> No.2190719

>>2190708
Hehe, all right, I'll fix it.

>> No.2190728

How triggered will ttumblr get if I post anthro noncon/rape?

>> No.2190733

>>2190682
I'm not sure if I like the mouth and nose quite that much, other than that it's great!

>> No.2190734

>>2190728
Unless you are quite famous, only the porn blogs will see it, and they are probably already filled with that kind of stuff.. Just be sure to flag it, otherwise you can be banned.

>> No.2190735

>>2190373
Wow, that was cool to see how some subtle changes by a skilled artist made the whole piece come together!

>> No.2190736
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WIP

>> No.2190738

>>2190735
literally nothing changed.

>> No.2190740

>>2190738
foot, arm, ass, shoulder.

>> No.2190756

>>2190736
this is sooo tumblr
>paint tool sai sketch
check
>cheap cum everywhere
check
>face that has no emotions (may be he's just being overly casual over it though)
check
5 points for doing homoerotic porn thought.

>> No.2190757

>>2190756
You guys should stop being paranoid of tumblr.

>> No.2190758

>>2190502
people that commission you must be blind or something

>> No.2190759

>>2190757
but its tumblr right?
>dat paint tool sai sketch tho
if it wasnt tumblr it was a detailed photoshop sketch without blurry paint tool sai sketching

>> No.2190760

>>2190677
stop replicating symbols and learn to draw. you suck.

>> No.2190762

>>2190759
What's wrong with using sai?
It is very efficient for making hentai.

Also I'm not that guy but I have been following him.

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>>2189627
>mfw such an amateur has a patreon acc

>> No.2190766

>>2190736
I've already told you that and I will repeat. You are using reference the wrong way.

>> No.2190768

>>2190764
You'd be a fool not to, if people are willing to shell out cash to you.

>> No.2190770

>>2190728
Since you are posting here and asking that, I'm pretty sure you are nowhere near being famous enough for that to happen.

>> No.2190771

>>2190768
Even though I draw porn, I still have a dignity.

>> No.2190772

>>2190677
I like it, I want more.

>> No.2190773
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2190773

spot mistakes plz.

>> No.2190775

>>2190770
ofc, i was just wondering if it is a problem since raep is becoming controversial in porn

>> No.2190776

>>2190771
You should ditch it and set up a patreon.

>> No.2190778

>>2190776
nope

>> No.2190787

>>2190773
girl on the left:
- shorten her thighs so that the knees are correctly aligned with the ground plane with the objects in the bg and the legs of the girl in front
- torso is way too long and anatomy too broken (look at the distance between her left hip and left shoulder)
- put the fisting hand deeply in perspective, so that her forearm is aligned with the receiving girl's spine.

girl in front:
- again torso too long for such a pose. the front of her thighs and mons pubis are flat on the ground which implies that the same is happening with the front of her pelvis. I would just rotate her pelvis slightly so that she'd sit more on the back of her thighs and vagina.

otherwise it's some cool shit. dig the linework.

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>> No.2190793

>>2190792

>>2190760
>stop replicating symbols and learn to draw. you suck.

>> No.2190795

>>2190787
thanks

>> No.2190831

>>2190766
How useful is your comment if you don't offer a way to fix the issue? Not that anon, Btw.

>> No.2190843

>>2190758
Furfags have no taste

>> No.2190848

>>2190843
>Not everybody likes broccoli

>> No.2190855
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>>2190487
Fix the face/muzzle, angle doesn't look right.

>> No.2190858

>>2190682
Is this from reference or imagination?

>> No.2190859

>>2190855
Nice, thanks!

>> No.2190862

>>2190756
When did sketching in SAI become "Tumblr"? And what the heck does "cheap cum everywhere" even mean? (it's porn... it's a wip... I don't see the problem)

>> No.2190864

>>2189555
His art seems under appreciated.

>> No.2190865

>>2190773
You know, as much as i dislike the whole "Esher girls", where everyone complains about every single pic that has hips and boobs showing at the same time... the girls that's doing the fisting is just so seriously fucking broken, I can't get over it! She NEEDS to be fixed or the drawing won't be hot, it'll be hilarious!

>> No.2190866

You guys are so awful at this. I could do the work a million times better. Why so uninspired?

>> No.2190867

>>2190866
What an original troll.

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>>2190866
Then provide some crit instead of being a faggot

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>> No.2190915

>>2190831
I've already explained more in-depth what I mean the last time I told him about this issue.

>> No.2190920
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Guys, it's hot lovemaking between beautiful girl and handsome guy. Why not inspired to make great works of art? There are like 100 replies and 5 images.

>> No.2190944
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I am not going to work more on this. You guys need make something decent in order to have a dedicated porn thread.

>> No.2190947
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>>2190944

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>>2190858
Reference.

>> No.2190987

>>2190756

This was sketched in photoshop.

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>> No.2191191
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Here have some old porn.

>> No.2191196

>>2191184
Do you have a tumblr? hot damn

I wish his hole was a little more ruined from use though.

>> No.2191199

>>2189569
this is breddy hot anon, nice ;D

>> No.2191206 [DELETED] 

>>2191196

Had one for awhile, but just started a new one.

http://skittleslams.tumblr.com/

>> No.2191207

>>2190915
you sound angry. that anon did a fine job, i don't see you doing any better. not to mention instead of saying what you don't like about it you just bitched and said you've already given him advice. if you were going to point out that he was doing something wrong a second time then you might as well have said what was wrong with it as well

although i don't think the anon who drew it did anything wrong, you can use a reference however the fuck you want. you can even photobash should you wish to. there's no wrong way to use a reference.

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>>2191191
Wow this is like 5 years old...

>> No.2191228

>>2190855
hahaha, when I scroll up and down it looks animated. It's really fun to mess with. Nice.

>> No.2191230

>>2191196

Just started a new one.

http://skittleslams.tumblr.com/

>> No.2191238

>>2191207
Try rethinking what you were thinking about how to wrongly use a reference. Maybe you'll understand what I mean. Good luck.

>> No.2191295

Can anyone post the tutorials on how to convey realistic cum? I saved them but had an accident in deleting files.

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>>2191295

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>>2191295
and coloring

>> No.2191336

>>2191238
>continues to give no valid critique

lol

you can use a reference however you want buddy. instead of continuously avoiding the question maybe you should give a straight answer. good luck. :^)

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>>2191295

>> No.2191398

>>2190682
Vag is a little high, look at where it is compared to the legs. It looks like you tried to draw some of her arms when really you see the ankles and then they go down to the bed so can't be seen. Also her lips (mouth this time) are a bit high, shouldn't be as close to the nose or she can look like she's retarded or sneering or both.
Keep it up.

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2191422

fixed celestia's left leg, i think, hopefully.
Overall, i think it's turned out okay, but I could use some fresh eyes on it before I move on to the next stage.

>> No.2191450

>>2189545
actually it is you goddamn retard

Unless I guess if anon is into abberations.

>> No.2191453

>>2191422
hands and feet are really tiny, feet should be equal to forearm length, hands should be half as big as the face

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>>2191453
i get the hands, but does that the feet are in high heels.

I'm not saying your wrong, im still weak in my proportions, just asking a question

>> No.2191464

>>2191422
The girl with the tiara has a really long arm, but I like how this is coming along. Keep it up!

>> No.2191466

>>2191464
you're a menace

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>> No.2191475

>>2191466
THE ONLY MENACE HERE IS SPIDER-MAN!

>>2191464
i'll recheck her proportions

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>>2191453
>>2191464
okay yes, the proportions on the cowgirl are fucked, and crown woman arm is wrong too..

Thanks for bring these things to my attention

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>>2191453
>>2191464
yep, thanks for bringing this to my attention, their proportions are def wonky.

I enlarged the hands though.

>> No.2191720
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2191720

ruh roh

>> No.2191721

>>2191720
Did sunibee invent the donut asshole?

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2191728

Can you draw me as a girl getting the D?

>> No.2191730

>>2191728
Do I fuckin' know you?

>> No.2191731

>>2191728
If you pay me $60.

>> No.2191732

>>2191730
Yes.

>> No.2191733

>>2191728
BAZINGA!

>> No.2191743

>>2191336
Oh, just go fuck yourself. If he's intelligent enough and did read my critique, the first time I explained why he's using reference in a bad way, then it's all cool. If he's not, then I have no intention in backing up a shitty artist.
As for you, why would I bother giving you an explanaition? Who are you lol?

>> No.2191746

>>2191720
>>2191721
seriously though, who invented the donus?

>> No.2191756

>>2191728
>Disgusting 3DPD.
Not even if you pay me.

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>>2191746
>>2191721
I'd say sunibee is at least inspired by nezumi but who knows.

>> No.2191764

>>2191763
I wonder if she gets off on it.

>> No.2191769

I just started posting my lewd art on tumblr. How do I get my first views and watchers without any connections to the community? Are there any tumblrs I should submit my artwork to?

>> No.2191778

>>2191763
This is moderately terrifying.

>> No.2191782

>>2191778
Your shit taste is moderately terrifying, nezumi's human drawings are especially great and also one of the few kemono
artist that i can actually take, even if i don't really like kemono.

>> No.2191787

>>2191782
It's little wonder you don't like most of them if it takes an infected, bulbous, sagging assholes to get your rocks off.

>> No.2191802

>>2191787
I just know good art when i see it, even if i am not into the fetish.

>> No.2191812

>>2191769
just pander and tag smartly, thats really the only way. do fanart of popular OCs and tag the creators

>> No.2191813
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Please?

>> No.2191817

>>2191812
> do fanart of popular OCs and tag the creators

Damn, are people on tumblr really this autistic?

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>>2191813
Get your 3DPD out of here.

>> No.2191833

h33UuX

>> No.2191849
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2191849

trying to get into coloring. any tips?

>> No.2191850

>>2191849
i see a dick

>> No.2191854

>>2191850
yes sherlock. you spotted the elephant in the closet

>> No.2191860

>>2191769
Post tumblr, if it's good, I'll give you a reblog for a boost.

>> No.2191861

>>2191854
actually it was hard for me too to notice it, the file name on the other hand...

>> No.2191866

>>2191817
>Damn, are people on tumblr really this autistic?

Yes. and if you brown nose enough you can form superficial friendships with strangers online.

>> No.2191873

>>2191802
>good art

Nezumi's art is nothing special in comparison to other artists out there. You aren't fooling anyone. Your fetish is shit.

>> No.2191880

>>2191861
do you think its too subtle?

>> No.2191883

>>2191873
I am not surprised, i have been here long enough to read posts that shit on literally every popular or unpopular artists and also long enough to see
that there is no one here better than those who they like to insult, i like good art when i see it and i enjoy it regardless of context, it's not "my fetish", there's literally no fetish
that i refuse to enjoy when it has good art, you might want to give it a try, maybe you will start liking art as well.

>> No.2191885

>>2191849
Hey sailor?

>> No.2191896

>>2191885
sailor?

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>>2191519
Alright, fixed some of the proportions, redid some faces and feet.

How does it read? better?

>> No.2191913

>>2191883
stop talking about "art" and "enjoyment" you retard. if anything, it is well drawn. but beside that, it's plain repulsive.
not that anon btw

>> No.2191918

>>2191913
But thats what i am talking about, there is nothing that i find repulsive when its well drawn, not a single fetish, if you don't enjoy everything you are missing out on good art.

>> No.2191954

>>2191849
I have one. First try to get into the whole drawing thing, and leave colorw for when you'll actually have something good to color.

>> No.2191976

>>2191954
could you elaborate: the whole drawing thing ?

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>> No.2192073

>>2191743
>why would I bother giving you an explanaition?

because you sound like you're talking shit and have no knowledge or even OPINIONS to support your claim. you can't expect people to blindly agree with you, especially when you're so ambiguous and withholding

i like how you have to resort to swearing because you so clearly have nothing valid to say

>> No.2192098

did you guys saw that tumblr post listing some porn artists and saying stuff like they are transmysoginistic,pro this and that and how its bad yadda dadda standard tumblr retardation. It had so many likes I bet they are being nuked by sjw right now. I cant browse this fucking shit I get so fucking mad.

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>>2192059

>> No.2192148
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>>2191743

So how should I use reference? This is what I used for the last pic. I didn't follow it exactly and changed what I felt like changing.

Sometimes I follow a reference closely, sometimes I don't.

>> No.2192150

>>2192148
Do you have a non porn blog?

>> No.2192164

>>2192118
for a second I thought that nun is this guys dick and shes cumming from her head into bagina.

>> No.2192193

>>2192164
Nah, guess I wanted to mix some estethics with common porn symbols, not sure how it reads though.. biggest issues for me are anatomy and perspective, so if any of you have any thoughts on that they would be very welcome!

Still, thanks for sharing your thoughts!

>> No.2192194

>>2192098
>it has so many likes

And a lot of reblogs of people giving their two cents. It's all dumb internet drama. It's wasted energy to get pissed over morons on the internet, over tumblr no less.

>> No.2192198

>>2192098
Even the more SJW-y artists I follow are mocking it or denouncing it. It's ridiculous to have a list that puts drawing dick girls and refusing to tag fruit as gore on the same level as kid fiddling.

>> No.2192199

>>2192194
ye but some of us might be on that list now or in the future. Its a witch hunt that have consequences its not nothing. See doxy almost lost his stuff. Its a mob that can fuck you up whenever they feel like gang banging you.

>> No.2192202

>>2192199
Doxy didn't lose his blog over that list, it happened before that when some teenager reported him for drawing porn.

>> No.2192205

>>2192202
well yes the point is they can mob on you whenever they want.

>> No.2192219

>>2192205
If you want to live your life in fear of a bunch of bored 15 year olds, go right ahead. I'll keep posting my porn on tumblr.

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>>2192198
>on the same level as kid fiddling.
I hope you mean actual kid fiddling with real people or you are not really any better than them.

>> No.2192253

>>2192219
That's why i don't use tumblr, it's so incredibly stupid to use a service that can get you banned automatically as a professional platform.

>> No.2192276

>>2192205
>they can mob you

Yeah, on tumblr. No where else. Those fuckers have no real power. Your problem is you're too reliant on tumblr knowing how shitty that site is instead of working to create a safe space for yourself and your work. If tumblr is the only network you know how to market your work, the problem is you. There are other venues you can use and make a presence in. Tumblr is a shit blogging site, not an art gallery.

>> No.2192289

>>2192249
I misremembered, it was attempted kid fiddling and (real) child porn possession, did some jail time too.

Guy by the name of Griddles, he's like the 3rd one on that list with bleedman

>> No.2192296

>>2192289
That's more reasonable then.

>> No.2192323

>>2192289
>Griddles
Apparently all that guy did was chat with a 14 year old and she sending him nudes, 14 is the age of consent here and in many places in europe, people still bothering him about something like that is pretty stupid.
That guy is also deviantart tier for all intensive purposes, what's even the point, it's not like he's going anywhere with his art. Tumblr, not even once.

>> No.2192345

>made terrible looking commission
>guy dosent care or is too nice or dont see it
>hope he wont ask me to post it on my sites
>he did

FUG

>> No.2192359

>>2192345
Real d/ic/ks always tell and show~!

>> No.2192367

>>2192059
>>2192118

Do you guys think this could turn out fappable, or should I just call it quits?

>> No.2192373

>>2192367
It looks like she's shitting out of her vagina

So, it depends on your audience

>> No.2192377

>>2192373
That will have to be fixed then, I'll look into some references!

>> No.2192396

>>2192377
it can be a good picture go for it.

>> No.2192401

>>2192198
Why not just "false reporting" them back? Or hack them?

>> No.2192405

>>2192401
woah good idea there champ. One false report vs 1000 on you

>> No.2192408

>>2192405
Ask your followers for help.

>> No.2192412

>>2192408
more then half of my followers are some tranny/faggots/sjw/kids/retards people they will make sure im dead too.

>> No.2192415

>>2192412
*than, onta, than

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>> No.2192447

>>2192408
>>2192401
because we're adults who i'd like to imagine aren't terrible people

>>2192412
i guess not

>> No.2192508

>>2192417
I love your stuff, I hope your here to stay cuz I'm saving these just to be safe if you do vanish out of nowhere.

>> No.2192536
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I've never spent so long painting a titty

>> No.2192565 [DELETED] 

WIP

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WIP

>> No.2192571

>>2192536
those horns are the most delicious thing in that image.

>> No.2192602

>>2192536
those legs are super mucked up, do some muscle studies along with foreshortening/perspective of those limbs

>> No.2192614
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2192614

H-hello..
I'm a traditional artist (pencil/paper or bust) that dabbles with ink, markers, and digital stuff.
I like big hips, big boobs, tentacles, and demons. Lots of things, really. Please be gentle, this is my first time posting on /ic/.

>> No.2192617

>>2192276
Decent sites for hosting art porn?

>> No.2192619

>>2192602
Now that I've had some time away from the canvas, I see it too now.
Thanks for pointing that out

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>>2192536
I feel alot better about this one. Are there any more glaring mistakes?
I want to be good at this

>> No.2192681

>>2192662
shad the calves/breasts so we can actually see the muscle/fat.

>> No.2192683

>>2192681
*shade/

>> No.2192724

>>2192617
Pixiv, no one will brother you no matter what you draw, if you get a censorship warning which is rare it's safe to ignore, your drawing that got the warning just wont appear in the frontpage toplists if it makes the numbers.

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2192834

Eh.

Messed around in Paint Tool Sai some. S'alright. The main advantage is that zooming in doesn't blur the picture, it pixellates it.

No transform tool sucks, though. Maybe that's just because of the version I nicked.

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2192839

I like my sketches more than my finished pieces.

>> No.2192856

>>2192345
you want to redeem yourself? post the com here so /ic/ can slay you where you stand

>> No.2192946

>>2191906
the arms are insanely long and the hand on the one with the cowboy hat is bad as well. the one thats licking the balls has like half a face. their torsos are really wide too.

>> No.2192973

>>2189378
Perspective is off, the top girl is closer so the head of the bottom girl should be smaller than the top's not bigger.

>> No.2192975

>>2192839
His right nut is floating away.

>> No.2192977

>>2192839
i like both of your stuff its too bad its homoshit. Like seriously stop being a homo and draw boobs you homo.

>> No.2192978

>>2192977
Shut up there are enough straight artists around anway.

>> No.2192980

>>2192978
stop
homo

>> No.2192989

>>2192980
I don't think you understand. We need MORE bara and kemonobara, not less.

>> No.2193004

Why is furry art so disproportionally homosexual when compared to non furry art and its straight-gay ratio? Is being gay just far more likely when you're into furry?

>> No.2193031

>>2193004
When you are already a "degenerate" such as a homosexual, you no longer have to try to comfort to society's expectations so you experiement more freely.

Aka: I am gay, I might as well get it on with a sexy wolf man from space.

>> No.2193156
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>>2192978
>>2192839
Gay asside it's solid, your style is sick, it's like TF2. But gay. Which is cool.

>> No.2193196

Where do you guys go to get reference for cheesecake poses? I never find anything cool on tumblr and etc

>> No.2193200

>>2193196
just take inspiration from the work of artists you like and study their compositions and poses.

>> No.2193201

>>2193196
I look up pinup girls, some are already drawn but I get a few hot models.

>> No.2193203

>>2193156
Even though the animation looks cheap, but the smoothness keeps me hard.

>> No.2193205
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>>2193203
Would you be even harder if you knew it was a school full of futa lolis?

>> No.2193221

>>2193205
>>2193156
source?

>> No.2193286

>>2193221
I'm pretty sure it's from a game called Rondo Duo by some Tinklebell guy.

>> No.2193352
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my new char :3

anyone want to draw her doing lewd things pls do
or any requests of what you want to see ??

>> No.2193354

>>2193352
draw her breasts shrinking and her looking horrified as it happens

>> No.2193359

>>2193352
Draw her 100 lbs. heavier

And then give your tumblr/dA/whereveryoupostthings

>> No.2193361
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>>2193354

have a loli instead

>> No.2193366

>>2193359

>>2193359
http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=15474875

gonna make lewdpachinko da and tumblr in a sec

>> No.2193373

>>2193196
/y/ /u/ /s/ /hm/ /hc/ /h/ /d/

>> No.2193378

>>2193352
what are you drawing on/with the lines look like they were made by Micheal J Fox.

>> No.2193379

>>2192839
Give him red hair and he could pass as /ic/ tan. Bueno!

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>>2193361

>> No.2193405
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2193405

its that process of the picture i hate the most, inking/penciling.

all my life is gone and everything is flat and bad.

I also tried to do this in single strokes instead of tiny ones.

>> No.2193410

>>2193405
applejack looks like dean venture in drag

>> No.2193411

>>2193405
Work on that man jaw dog.
also cowgirl's right arm is proper fucked.

>> No.2193412

>>2193405
why do you keep posting this if you have no intention of listening to our critiques? The hands, heads, and feet are still too small, the arms are weirdly jointed and their torsos are too wide.

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2193415

Drew this earlier today, what you guys think of the style (overall, the drawing, color etc...) I think the gesture is weird but I had to run with it, needa finish what I start.

>> No.2193420

>>2193415
her torso is not in perspective at all, makes it look like she is broken in half

other than that, I like it

>> No.2193421

>>2193405
That pose on the cowgirl is TERRIBLY PAINFUL
Hands/Arms proportions are still off
either reverse the hand holding the reins or shorten the reins and lower the arm, because as it is now that pose is impossible to strike, maintain and exert any kind of force with

>> No.2193438
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Nearly finsihed. Hesitant to color in the rest of the above pic with a yellow tone for the light.

Also, Captcha, waffles are not pancakes. You are dead to me.

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>>2193421
>>2193411
>>2193410
>>2192946
>>2193412
>why do you keep posting this if you have no intention of listening to our critiques?

first of all i do listen to your critiques, If you look up back at the thread you will see that I do make adjustments. I ask questions, i ask for reasons why something needs to be fixed. Not in a "my way is better" way, but in a "why is it wrong" kind of way.

"arms are too long" Okay, I posted here
>>2191519
>yep, thanks for bringing this to my attention, their proportions are def wonky.

I even posted my measurements to confirm that yes, the arms were too long. as some anons said.

I posted my last fix here >>2191906
wednesday at 10 pm est, I literally did not get anything back until maybe a day and 8 hours later here (which I did not see until a few moments ago So I do apologize I could of nipped that in the bud before I busted my ass here)

>>2192946

most of the time, i might 1 or 2 replies back, but at this time it seems like i got a flood. I do try and respond and fix every single critique and suggestion I get. You can look back up the thread and see that. 7/10 times I wont get a "looks better" or a "okay still wrong" so I have to assume I did it correctly.


That being said I will be reworking all I can from your critiques (as I always do)

>> No.2193452

>>2193443
You got to inking without actually fixing the problems, it gets progressively harder to fix shit from then on because you are modifying something without completely redrawing it, and if you do end up redrawing you have no underlying sketch to base yourself off

Try and strike any pose you are trying to draw before you finalize it. Don't need the whole pose, in this case try and pull something by keeping both your deltoids relaxed (elbow down) and your vambrace pulling the weight with that wirst twisting going on.
You'll find out that if you want your elbow lowered, you'll have to lower the vambrace too, same with rising and pulling with your vambrace, you'll end up rising your whole arm outwards while your dorsals do the heavy lifting
It's a good habit

>> No.2193457

>>2193415
>...and then she farts!

>> No.2193472
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>>2193452
well, okay. i got a little salty so I apologize again.
I was just under the impression that i did fix said problems because of lack of anyone really calling me out on it (before just now)

i dont mind re-inking, because im never 100% satisfied.

I also want to say that, I do actually save nearly every critique I get, and I tried to again, put in the changes that was brought to my attention.

>> No.2193475

>>2193472
Applejack's elbow should be lining up with her waist, her forearm is too long.

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>>2193475
alright, i'll fix it. . i'm still in the process of memorizing landmarks and proportions.

that being said, i save all my help.

>> No.2193499

>>2193415
DAN!??

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>> No.2193519

>>2193503
Again, your shit is nice. I'm not sure if this is the same character all I'm worrried about is you succumbing to samefacing.

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>>2193499
Ese es mi nombre, no lo gastes!

>> No.2193698

>>2193438
How much coin for two hours with this high-test Khajiit?
I have some wares for her to parooz...

>> No.2193699

>>2193286
thanks

>> No.2193726

>>2193698
>HTAM dude again :)
Usually around 1500 for two hours (she's VERY experienced) but since she'll be too drunk and high to remember you, she'll settle for a critique. If it's a good critique, she might let you go three hours, anal included.

>> No.2193740

>>2193205
I'll check it out when I fap today

>> No.2193819
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>>2192118
Polished some more and tried to make her partner look a little bit less like a turd.

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Another WIP

>> No.2193898

>>2193519
Samefacing, samebodying, sameposing, samereferencing.

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ENGAGE

>> No.2194079

new thread?

>> No.2194137

New thread!

>>>2194105

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>>2192198
Tom Preston was on that list. He was listed as "anti-sj."

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Where to post my lewd artwork besides hentai-foundry and tumblr?

>> No.2195153

>>2193503
Nice face, but his shoulders are sloping a lot and look like they have no construction behind them. There's no thought about musculature or how they connect to the necks, arms and chest /pits. Also, the cock head looks botched.

>> No.2195154

>>2193503
And i forgot to mention: compare the lengths of his upper arms, you should be able to spot the error.