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Post your nsfw, critique work and so on.
Furry is allowed, however do not over indulge on the subject of furries or their culture. Unnecessarily reporting these anons are strongly discouraged. This thread is dedicated to helping anons improve their erotic drawings and paintings.
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Questions about references for drawing porn will be answered.

>> No.2176619
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1/4

>> No.2176621
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>>2176619
You cheeky cunt

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2/4

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3/4

>> No.2176624
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4/4

These might look like shit now, but ill improve as time goes on.

Any crits are welcomed though.

>> No.2176631

Yeah, they look like shit.

>> No.2176632
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2176632

>>2176624
You can do it. You're starting off way better than when I first did.

>> No.2176633

>>2176631
Theyre better than yours tho

>> No.2176635

>>2176633
He's not going to post his work and there's no point in having a dick measuring contest on /ic/ they'll just merc_wip you.

>> No.2176637

>>2176633
Interesting. Which ones are mine exactly?

>> No.2176639

>>2176637
The ones that looks shittier than the comics posted.

>> No.2176640
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2176640

shawntay

>> No.2176641

>>2176639
Cmon, quote them. Let me laugh some more.

>> No.2176642
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2176642

I see the porn thread is off to a great start.

Anyway, does anybody have any tips on drawing lubrication/ladyfluids?

>> No.2176644

>>2176641
Nah, i might die from laughter due to the sheer ugliness of it.
Dont post them though. I dont want to die young.

>> No.2176650

>>2176632
Your bodies are getting better, now if you would actually finish something and manage not to color it like a rave party as i remember you did
back then it might even be fappable.

>> No.2176655
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2176655

>>2176642
>lubrication
Check out this motherfucker, you might get some ideas as to how to stylize lube.

>> No.2176656

>>2176633
>tho
Get back to studying cocksucker

>> No.2176659

>>2176656
>No period at the end of the sentence.
How's summer school?

>> No.2176660

>>2176619
>>2176622
>>2176623
>>2176624
Shit's flat yo. All the hatching/crosshatching does is highlight the lack of perspective and structure. It's pretty lazy for a salty /ic/ pisstake. Perhaps you should follow the squid loli's advice.

>Vilppu
>No "FEEL IT" anywhere
Come on now.

>> No.2176661

>>2176655
That's honestly slightly terrifying. Source?

(also nice dubs)

>> No.2176662

>>2176659
>replies
>grammar focused reply
I'll bite, you're lost aren't you anon? Check out the sticky; and get back to studying

>> No.2176681

>>2176621
You are improving~! Please put sime effort into cleaning this up nicely.

>> No.2176684

>>2176640
The only thing that bothers me is that the tounge of the ghost might be slightly off center, otherwise good as always!

>> No.2176872
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2176872

I have no idea what I am doing.
can anyone give me any advice on the face? I am getting better at anatomy and other things, but faces stay the same. This mostly shows on females, their faces end up looking too masculine.

>> No.2176874
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2176874

>>2176872
Head perspective is all off

>> No.2176892

>>2176874
I will try to change it somehow, thank you

>> No.2176901

>>2176874
has someone made those for other species than canine?

>> No.2176904

>>2176874
Wow that's realy cool.

>> No.2176951
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2176951

>>2176642
Here's the redline I was talking about yesterday. I hope it's understandable enough without me needing to explain where the problem is with your illustration.
Also, nice render.

>> No.2176961

>>2176901
No idea, snagged it off of /furry/ a few days ago

Here have some more
2 big for 4chan
imgur.com/J6dGHBV

>> No.2176963

>>2176961
Full link
imgur.com/J6dGHBV,ACxTwfr,yk6lqsg,AAGHmuL#0

>> No.2176976

>>2176961
Much apreciated!

>> No.2176992

>>2176951
The fuck is this?
How?
Where?
Can you make more?

>> No.2176993

>>2176642
>Mew is genderless
suspension of disbelief shattered

>> No.2176996

>>2176951
the pose is correct but I don't think that you took into consideration perspective warping
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Perspective_distortion_%28photography%29

Since the vagina and ass are so close it'll make the head appear farther away. I'm pretty sure that's why the picture is cropped so close.

>>2176992
It's manga studio

>> No.2176998
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2176998

Dark and gloomy picture to go with my mood.

>> No.2177004

>>2176951
Damn, thank you! I wasn't actually expecting you to go through with redlining it, which is why I went ahead and rendered it. Kinda regret that now.
Though I do think >>2176996 is right too, wouldn't the head be at least a little bit smaller? Even if just to emphasize the weird perspective?

>>2176993
Cmon man, anything is possible if you just BELIEVE

>> No.2177021

>>2176622
>>2176623
>>2176624

At least build a story don't just go straight to sex it's a turn off have something romantic go on first like he asks her on a date and she says no but he's persistent and does stupid things to get her attention and he makes her laugh at his clumsiness until finally she says okay or something.

>> No.2177023

>>2177021
I'm not following close on /pol/ drawthread drama but i think the squid represents some guy that the comic creator hates.

>> No.2177032

>>2176951
Oh that thing!
I completely forgot that ms could do that.

>> No.2177044

>>2177023
I'm just saying if he's going to involve sex in our banter at least make it romantic.

>> No.2177062

>>2176996
It's not a matter of emphasized perspective and warping. The torso isn't aligned correctly with the lower body. I tried to explain that in the thumbs on the right.

>> No.2177067

>>2177044
But the whole point of it is to not be romantic, he just wants to rape mikufag in his fantasy.

>> No.2177073
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2177073

>>2177067
No, he's just being incredibly lazy and did a half assed attempt in telling a story.

>> No.2177075
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2177075

Wip update. I could really use some critique about the colors, guys. Right now I think I'm on the right track, but I might be missing something.

>> No.2177085

>>2177075
I suck at coloring, so I can't really help with the how-to, but the cum looks like rocks

rest of it looks really nice though

>> No.2177087

>>2177085
Yeah, the cement cum was already mentioned. I still have to render that properly.

>> No.2177088

>>2177075
The horns look weird as fuck, get some references for how to make them look more like wood and less like poo. The cum looks like clumpy glue. Could add different shades of green to the grass and make the closest tree look better. It has no brown in it and we would be able to see more detail with it being so close.

>> No.2177091

>>2177088
Meant to say more like horns not wood

>> No.2177097

>>2177075
Cum looks like plaster, everything else is perfect. Maybe add some gloss to their skin for a sweating effect.

>> No.2177104

>>2177091
Then I'm spot on since his antlers are made of wood.

>> No.2177105
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>>2177087
Yes it looks like paint man, semen is a combination of different fluids, here you go.

>> No.2177114

>>2177104
They don't look like wooden horns

>> No.2177115

>>2177105
How many times must I say the sperm is just blocked in and I haven't even started rendering it yet?
I asked you to criticize the colors (and values). If I wanted to hear critique about rendering, or anything else I would have asked.

>> No.2177122

>>2177104
>how to make them look more like wood and less like poo
he was saying your horns look like feces, and i agree.

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shadingpractice in the evening.

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>>2177130

>> No.2177138
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2177138

Oh i dont know we're posting comics
Dumping mine
1/9

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2177139

2/9

>> No.2177141

>>2177115
>If I wanted to hear critique about rendering, or anything else I would have asked.
I am sorry, i didn't know that you selected something specific from the critique menu, but keep it just in case,
judging by how you rendered the cum in your previews drawings you will probably need it.

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2177143

3/9

>> No.2177145
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2177145

4/9

>> No.2177149
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2177149

5/9

>> No.2177150
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2177150

6/9

>> No.2177151

>>2177075
I like the super-solid cum, but those horns really look like shit, literally.

>> No.2177152

>>2177145
Why is this so funny?

I mean, the faces are just comical and I don't know if that was intentional, but I'll at least say that you gave me a decent laugh

>> No.2177153
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2177153

7/9

>> No.2177156
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2177156

8/9

>> No.2177157

9/9
Thats it. Didnt bother finishing the rest because i dont know how to pick it up from here.
All done with Paint tool SAI and mangastudio
Any crits welcomed.

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2177159

>>2177139

>> No.2177162
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2177162

>>2177157
Shit forgot image

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2177163

>>2177145
>>2177153

Your drawings seem a bit trapped in their panels, for example those were good chances to pull something like this off,
so the readers can admire her body while the not so visually relevant panels stayed as a background.

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2177166

>>2177159
You know these faces remind me of something Troll-Chan would do but I don't know if it's the same Anon or not. I think they're intentional

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>>2177162

>> No.2177233
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2177233

something wrong ?
should it be in the basement or in the salon ?

>> No.2177273

>>2177233
the anatomy is fucked up
erase, read the sticky and draw it again

>> No.2177276

>>2177273
dont see it bra.

>> No.2177278

>>2177233
>>2177273
Your anatomy isn't nearly as bad as anon is making it seem, it's just really uncomfortable looking. The bottom girl's spine is definitely broken, for example. I can't imagine holding these poses for a couple of seconds would be very pleasant, let alone trying to fuck like this.

>> No.2177287

>>2177278
alright will think of something.

>> No.2177292

>>2177233
anatomy is fine. but like that other anon said, the pose is the problem. it looks uncomfotable, especially for the blue one. i dont see how it works.

as for details, the blue ones feet are too close together. it makes her look even more unstable
add some distance between them and apply some perspective.

>> No.2177296

>>2177292
I seem to think of the moment in my poses not like a continuous activity. Like you make some wired pose in sex when you cum for 1 sec and capture it. Well you guys never like it and i always need to correct it. Im kind of let down ppl dont dig my autism. I will try to fix it.

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2177336

>>2177296
Honestly i disagree with them and i don't know what's with the obsession with orthopedic approved poses as if they will be having sex for 8 hours in some
office environment, power poses or "uncomfortable" poses to have their place when you have to show exaggerated action, now how exaggerated they will be
it's up to the artist, the situation and a matter of taste.

>> No.2177427

>>2177114
>>2177122
I'll tone down the glossyness, you are right.

>>2177141
Well, I exactly asked what critique I was looking for. But probably you are right, and it's better to get as much feedback as possible. Didn't want to sound snobby, it's just that I've already explained that the sperm wasn't an issue. I am aware the cum in the FF14 drawing was too transparent, yes. I should have thought about the shadow because of the window in the back.

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2177442

>>2177075
The problem is the lack of difference in tone, not the color itself. Characters have pretty much the same tone as the background they're at. Exceptions are satyr's horns and hooves, they stand out and are readable. Everything else blends with the background. Ideally, for a pic to look good and make an urge to click for a full resolution, sihlouettes of characters should be readable on a thumbnail. Btw thats how most of pros work - do a lot of thumbnails for tones and composition, choose the best one and start adding detail after.

2nd problem is perspective on the background. According to characters, the horison line is roughly somewhere between saryr's balls and dick, theres quite a low POV. If thats a horizon line at the top of the pic, where faraway trees get small, it is fucked up a big time. If they're at the base of the hill and thats a slope with trees behind them, it's still fucked up, cuz trees go out of perspective that way. That way trees go perpendicular to the slope, and grow at some angle to the ground. With a low POV like that you'll see it as if you were under a tree, see all the branches from below. My english is bad, hope you get it. Everything thats above horison you see from below. Like Alika's face and ass, you see it from below.

So the solution of both problems, that might be time consuming and not worth to make the commissioner wait.
You put the horizon line where it should be, delete all those trees behind, make a sky there, so characters will pop out being a darker tone above a brighter one. I know a forest is a must there, so add some trees affected by perspective, ones you actually see from below, and aerial perspective.

>> No.2177460
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2177460

What do you guys think? Made this in about 20 minutes or so.

>> No.2177462

>>2177075
Dont kno. I liked the bubble butt more

>> No.2177463
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2177463

Help, can't into perspective. I ain't see this shit with Loomis.

>> No.2177465

>>2177442
Great post. I will absolutely try to fix all that you mentioned. I will probably keep the sloped background, but will position the trees and bushes better. Thanks so much!

>> No.2177468

>>2177462
Sry, I'm not sure what you are referring to? The sketch?

>> No.2177477

>>2177465
The main thing is to add tone difference, so characters are readable, don't blend with the background and it doesn't look like a mess on a thumbnail. Keeping it simple it's either dark characters on a light background, or light chars on a dark bg. Rim lighting also helps, in case you find a place to fit a light source there.
Keep up the good work

>> No.2177489

>>2177477
Yes, I didn't mention it because I had nothing to relevant to say in regards to that. You are totally right.

>> No.2177503

>>2177489
Just turn it grayscale time to time to see if you're going the right direction.

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2177524

havent posted in awhile, but I'm trying to work in simpler shapes and smaller brushes. I usually work with a 20-35 brush, but I'm trying to stick to 17 or 15.

I'm trying to work with simpler shapes and just trying to improve on construction.

I'm personally having a few problems with this piece. Adding abs, and the vagina among the many
I'm using a variety of reference so maybe thats the problem (i'm trying to not use just one reference) but I'll include them with the picture im working on.

>> No.2177528

>>2177524
That peridot looks awkward as fuck, don't be afraid to make her look feminine too considering she's a girl.

>> No.2177533
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2177533

>>2177528
yeah, i am having trouble with how I want her torso. Since she has a very slim waist on her model sheet. I am having a problem on how I want it. At first you can see I tried a more angular bend to her torso but then i also tried a more smooth one.

as for the feminine part, I wouldnt know how. are her shoulders too broad? or her legs not curvy enough?

I'm really not sure on how I want to position her, but that is the general pose.

>> No.2177540

>>2176660
yea i was pretty lazy.
i just find a reason to rape mikufag
and im gonna do these forever until he reach kyles level

>> No.2177546

>>2177540
Nobody is going to spoonfeed us here if you want to learn and improve and reach levels of other artists you aspire to you do it by yourself.

>> No.2177554
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2177554

Domo arigato mister robotu.

>> No.2177555

>>2177130
Seriously though, are you posting from hell? Is Satan commissioning these?

>> No.2177556

>>2177524
rough it out try different thing shapes and sizes, you are thinking of the shapes and not potion of the shapes, objects change as you turn them. the chest and hip are both squares with connecting lines

>> No.2177577
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2177577

I've just asked this on /r/ but I'll give it a shot.
any drawfag up for a quick hentai request? kinda simple like the pic.
Pay via paypal half up front half once the work is done.

>> No.2177594

>>2177130
THIS IS SWELL. Where can i find more from you.

>> No.2177668

>>2177577
A sketch like that is gonna cost you 120 dollars
Agreed?

>> No.2177669

>>2177668
you have a gallery?

>> No.2177670

>>2177556
any tips on that or just go back to the sticky?

>> No.2177675

>>2177668
lel, 120 for a sketch? I hope that guy doesn't agree to that because that is total horseshit. I paid 100 for a full color picture w/ background, granted it wasn't porn, but it had more bare skin than that.

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2177679

>>2177675
fuck you asshole

>> No.2177681
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2177681

I've made a mistake

>> No.2177683

>>2177679
the fuck does that even prove? The industry rate means you're going to work on that shit with a microscope to ensure every line you put down matches shit their concept artist already did, and if you're doing the concept get ready to put down 10 amazing ideas and have them choose neither.

You're not getting paid industry money because you're not industry level gud doing industry level work. Cry moar.

>> No.2177684

>>2177679
There is a reason why people in a market start slowly to drop in prices.
Those prices depends on you being a proper professional artist, i don't think people who come to /ic/ still because of fear
of their perspective or anatomy being off are that. If the prices where unanimously like this pretty much no one but big projects
and companies would commision people and those who will still be getting some commissions from fans would be those 2-3 crazy popular ones and
hobbyists/part time artists like most of you here won't be getting shit.

>> No.2177691

>>2177555
Kek'd.

>> No.2177743

>>2177679
Most artists in fandoms aren't industry level good even the popular ones. So they shouldn't be charging industry level prices.

>> No.2177746

>>2177679
>>2177743
Quality is only part of it. It's about the people they are selling to. If you're expecting industry money when your customers aren't even business or industry people (aka people with real money), you're a dumb fuck. This is where fandom artists fuck up, they sell to the wrong people and it's because selling to a fandom is easy. Generally, they don't have the proper skills to sell to people with good money.

>> No.2177747

>>2177746
How are you going to sell porn to people with good money?

Or is this discussion no longer about porn but about selling work in general?

>> No.2177749

>>2177747
>How are you going to sell porn to people with good money?

You really can't. But that's the life you chose m8. No sympathy here.

>> No.2177750

>>2177749
Who is asking for sympathy?

>> No.2177752

>>2177750
The people who make drawing porn for poverty tier internet dwellers anything but a hobby.

>> No.2177755

>>2177752
BBC chan does this for a living tho.

>> No.2177771

>>2177755
BBC chan is basically employed by someone to draw the kind of interracial porn that triggers /ic/. I doubt porn commissions from fandoms is his main source of income.

>> No.2177785

>>2177771
he also draws for some (mobile?) game now.

>> No.2177793

>>2177771
He draws porn comissions, not every porn has to be fandom related.

Gabe also lives off of his furry anuses.

>> No.2177799

>>2177752
>poverty tier internet dwellers
You judje everyone by yourself, sure you wouldn't pay anything for something you can steal on the internets or get something alike for free, but not everyone are like that.

I draw porn for living for several years already, whats the problem with that? Its all about how popular and how good you are. You can make some good income if both. And you can get popular relatively fast if you're good.
I just got an agreement on a 800$ commission with my regular customer, whos been commissioning me for about three years, spending fuckloads of money on illustrations. A typical basement dweller, eh? My patreon have already hit 1k per month, w/o any exclusives or shit there, just cuz fans love me and I love them. InCase's patreon is almost 5k, also no exclusives, everything's free, people just like him and want to support.
Calm gets 1.8k per finished illusration. Animeflux - 1.6k per illustration. Shadman - 1.6k per month. Reiq 2.7k per month. Etc etc etc.

Also
>anything but a hobby.
All those people mentioned above including me got successful because they made it their job, not a hobby. An actual job you do everyday and dedicate yourself to. Thats also one of the reasons of success in this case, everyone knows TNA is important there.

>> No.2177802

>>2177460
cute, fix the lines and learn how body works, just make same thing with more time and better understanding and it'll look much better to your eye, then you can start distinguishing what's not good and what works.
>>2177463
I think her butt needs yo start from above her elbow. Her torso looks bit long.
>>2177524
>SU tumlr shit
>>2177554
looks traced
>>2177681
her head could be wider, not her face tho, her face looks ok.

>> No.2177808
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>>2177752
>>2177771
I don't think you're speaking from experience because its really not that hard to make decent money drawing porn as a job. I just work a couple hours a day and make around 3k a month

>> No.2177812

>>2177808
Hey gabe, you talked about wanting to get a "real job" eventualy on your blog. What do you mean by "real" job? I thought what you are doing is as real as it gets.

Loving your dawgs btw.

>> No.2177815

>>2177808
tumblr?

>> No.2177820
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2177820

Critiques on colors, anatomy, anything else?

>> No.2177821

>>2177808
I think he speaks from experience like "if I wouldn't pay shit for porn, no one else ever would"

>> No.2177825

>>2177820
I've seen something like this b4...
Carroll Dunham?

>> No.2177832

>>2177802
Nothing wrong with su stuff. I like the show and money is money.
Su Fandom is like any tumblr fandom that is to say it's awful. They even ruined Jojo for me

>> No.2177833

>>2177812
Did I say that? It's not that surprising, sometimes I get feelings like I should be doing something else since I have a BS in chemistry. That would be more of a 'real job' for me since its in the field I majored in, but when I compare salaries and shit, it comes out to about the same. Plus I get to work from home and generally for less hours and I like drawing a lot.

I could get lost in my head with 'maybe I should do this, maybe I should do that' all day, but in the end I think I should just pursue the thing I like doing, especially when it pays a comfortable living wage already.

>> No.2177838

>>2177833
I want to see more of your work, please!

>> No.2177878
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>>2177799
>1~3k a month
>limited clientele
>success

>> No.2177921

>>2177878

In the majority of the world 2k a month is above average.

Sure you are not a millionare from it, but if you enjoy drawing dick girls and anal ants, getting that much for doing something you enjoy is pretty damn nice.

>> No.2177927

>>2177921
Just ignore the shitposter, I want to make some money through drawing porn aswell, can I see some of your stuff?

>> No.2177935

>>2177878
I guess it's you making 30+k per 2 weeks with your drawings?
Or well, nevermind, you're just another kid living off your parents' money who didn't work a day yet.

>> No.2177949

>>2177935
You can project whatever you want to make yourself feel better, but calling 1-3k per month success is laughable. That's called just getting by.

>> No.2177952

>>2177949
That depends where you live.

I'm not that guy, but if I could make that in my country I would be rich.

>> No.2177954

>>2177949

In Hungary(where i live) the minimum vage is about 250$/month, 1k would be a dream in this shithole of a country...

>> No.2177961

>>2177927
What does "my stuff" have to do with it? Check hentai-foundry's "popular" section or something.

>> No.2177963

>>2177961
Just interested how/what you draw.

>> No.2177964

>>2177949
Ok then, how much a month do you earn off drawing? And I mean drawing only.

>> No.2177968
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>>2177949
>1-3k per month is laughable
You are laughable.

>> No.2177969

>>2177949 not who you responded to

But 2-3k a month is decent money if you don't live a big city. If you live in a small town you only have to spend about 1000$/month on living expenses. Than have 1k-2k after for whatever you want, its def more than getting by.

>> No.2177980

>>2177954
Haha, poster above you is Hungarian too. You draw the p0rnz?

>> No.2177984

Geez guys you sure like to bite bait lol
And while i agree that 1-3k is fine.
The question is for how long?
Retirement? What if 10 years from now it goes down and is no longer viable.
Look up for a regular job?
Is there any old porn artist?
They are all in their 30~ at most right?
What about vacations?
Healthcare? Taxes?

>> No.2178002 [DELETED] 

>>2177984
Not exactly a porno artist but Luis Royo is 71 years old.

>> No.2178004

>>2177984
>Is there any old porn artist?
If you want to count Manara, granted it's more softcore.

>> No.2178005
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>>2177984
Luis Royo is 61 years old.

>> No.2178007

For some reason a lot of artists that draw porn just end up quitting, deleting their accounts or just randomly stop replying. Just too many damn people disappear from the map.

So I decided to draw my own porn, made my own accounts for commissions, only to realize that I end up feeling like that too. I have deleted at least 3 DAs in the past 2 years.
It's certainly not lack of motivation. I really want to draw.

Why does this happens?
Drawing porn is fun and there is money in this. It doesn't makes any damn sense no matter how much I think about it.

>> No.2178013

>>2178007
most because of getting a "real" job or just something alittle more known. What would happen is that someone could look up their stuff and see their H Stuff.

The smarter thing to do would just separate your Clean stuff from your NSFW stuff.

We all remember the scam Shoogerbare did 5 or 4 years ago

>> No.2178032

>>2178007
Many pixiv artists do this, it's usually because they just got much better and their old art seems embarrassing to them now so they want a fresh start,
otherwise i wouldn't know why you would do this, except if you are paranoid about it or something.

>> No.2178036

>>2178013
>Shoogerbare
I don't. Story time?

>> No.2178041

>>2178036
he suddenly to go "legit", and instead of telling anyone he just deleted his accounts and wiped out his dA, HF, fa, and nything else that had his art.
He didnt return any of the money for commissions he never finished and basically stole maybe 1k from people.

there is a thread about it in the HF fourms

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>>2177556
you think I'm still stuck symbol drawing?

>> No.2178047

>>2178044
at least you're not free from it. not that anon btw

>> No.2178059

>>2177984
you are required to make a business in my country so your earning would go for retirement too.
regular jobs are for normies
idk
you can make vacations whenever you feel like it
you get the health care cause u are paying taxes.

>> No.2178078 [DELETED] 

>>2177577
Would you be interested in a ballpoint pen/Photoshop hybrid?

I'd love to hear what you have in mind, send me a message on tumblr if you're interested or have questions!

http://puskinart.tumblr.com/

>> No.2178082 [DELETED] 

>>2177577
Would you be interested in a ballpoint pen/Photoshop hybrid?

As a fellow SM-fan, I'd love to hear what you have in mind, send me a message on tumblr if you're interested or have questions!

http://puskinart.tumblr.com/


>>2176614
Also, great honor to be in the OP!

>> No.2178086

>>2177577
Would you be interested in a ballpoint pen/Photoshop hybrid?

As a fellow SM-fan, I'd love to hear what you have in mind, send me a message on tumblr if you're interested or have questions!

http://puskinart.tumblr.com/

Also, I might add that I've never done a commission before, but I think I have what it takes, and I'm sure we can agree on a good price if you are interested!


>>2176614 (OP)
Great honor to be in the OP, thank you!

>> No.2178125
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>>2178047
hm yeah, maybe I will try and read more of the sticky.

That being said, >>2177528
im still trying to fix how awkward her torso is bending
for some reason, for something that is basically simple shapes it is giving me a hard time. I even tried to over lay some construction over her character sheet...

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>> No.2178128

>>2177968
I love how they just couldn't include Switzerland. We're obscene.

But that aside 1k 3k a month is perfectly fine if you live alone.

>> No.2178171

How dose rebloging your own post works ?

If i reblog my sketch replacing it with finnished picture will I have old likes ? Will i get my post to be "fresh" in tags ?

>> No.2178221

>>2178171
nope
Reblogging your own picture will still give you the same likes you had, and it does not appear in the tags in the search. You have to REPOST it with the tags for it to appear again

>> No.2178280
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2178280

Been a while since I've drawn.

>> No.2178300

>>2178280
legs a bit too short arms a bit too long

>> No.2178371

>>2178125
>maybe
kek

>> No.2178387

>>2178007
Adding to what the other two anons said, frustration of not receiving the praise you want, crushing feelings of wanting to give up, having fear of not being good enough, feeling they don't deserve to draw things they like, fear of responsibility, etc.

>> No.2178409
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Some of my first porn.

>> No.2178425
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2178425

Can someone tell me how to into perspective and lineart...and values, annnd light source.

>> No.2178432

>>2178425

These are things that have to be studied individually and come with a lot of hard work.

I'd suggest get scott roberstons book on perspective, study it for a month. than move on to values for a month and so on.

There's not gonna be a quick fix however.

>> No.2178440

>>2178432
Oh obviously not, but these are things I never studied and I'm shit at it atm. Is the book a free download because I don't mind buying anything.
Aside from the fucked up abs, anything on the anatomy?

>> No.2178451

>>2178440

Its free if you know how to use torrents.

The anatomy is pretty flawed, but if your a beginner anatomy shouldn't be focused on, you should be focused on basic proportions and drawing in perspective first.

>> No.2178482

>>2178409
>Orc porn

Good taste

>> No.2178744
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2178744

I drew that yuri yuru comic in 2012

I had just started drawing back then.

>> No.2178746

>>2178744
Are you the guy who made that centaur miku.
Please post more of your old stuff.
I need to show them in class.

>> No.2178748

>>2178746
sure, give me a minute

>> No.2178749

>>2177949
Is there really that much money if you git gud at drawing hentai?

Damn I'm going to buy a tablet right now

>> No.2178750

>>2178748
>old kyle work

of this gun b gud

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>>2178750
the real kyle, here I found a picture of mami tomoe that I did in 2012 that is so bad it will literally rape your eyes. are you sure you want to see it?

>> No.2178756

>>2177984

How does a regular job take care of retirement, healthcare and taxes? The same way any job does, and the same way porn drawings should. As you see >>2177968, in many countries 1k already is way above min wage. And if you are getting this kinds of money on your bank account you do have to pay taxes, and you do have to open up a buisness. And if you did that you can already pay into the retirement fund and your healthcare plan. With 1k in most eu countries, you would be living quite a decent life. 2k+ would be pretty amazing. And if you reach 3k, you would be swimming in dosh as the expenses are lower as well compared to expensive countries like australia.

>> No.2178760

>>2178754
DO IT FAGGOT
I already have my breathalyzer next to me just in case.

>> No.2178761
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2178761

Trying loli for the first time, am I doing a good job? I'm not very good at drawing kids.
If it's crazy messed up like with anatomy, head size, body size, limb length... etc. I'd like an in depth critique. But I'll take anything to improve it.

>> No.2178764

>>2178761
Is this a character concept for a horror comic?
I just love the way you cant tell which way the torso is facing.

>> No.2178765

>>2178761
In the deep anon, in the deep noone can hear you scream ^_^

Fix the tank top, it doesn't look right.

>> No.2178769

>>2178754
>so bad it will literally rape your eyes
Call the feminists, they'll get raped for real at last.

>> No.2178771

>>2178764
>>2178761
while youre at it fix the fucking spine

>> No.2178773

>>2178771
I can't see anything wrong with the spine.

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>>2178761

>> No.2178801

>>2178756
>How does a regular job take care of retirement, healthcare and taxes? The same way any job does and the same way porn drawings should.

So you're saying porn is a low end job, which I would agree. Either way, it ultimately depends on where you live. 1-3k a month is the equivalent of a shit low end job in some places that will get you buy if you have little to no responsibilities or expenses worth a shit.

>> No.2178809

Dose SJW buy porn ?

>> No.2178812

>>2178744

>just started drawing
Still better than I'll ever be..

>> No.2178820

>>2178809
If you do what asanagi does but exactly the opposite, maybe.

>> No.2178822

>>2178785
>Porn thread.
a-are those holes on her head lewd? do i stick my dick in them?

>> No.2178825

>>2178822
Why are you asking me?
Why did you green text Porn thread?

>> No.2178827

>>2178825
Because yours was closer to my cursor and he'll see it anyway.
Because even if it's the porn thread she is not lewd, so maybe the holes on her head are supposed to be the lewd part.

>> No.2178832

pixel art is allowed right?

i know the bellybutton is high. when i have access to it again i'll fix

also, the blue in her hair is due to my reference having haphazardly done blue highlights

anything other than the bellybutton glaringly bad?

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2178833

>>2178832
forgot image

>> No.2178934

>>2178832
I think the pussy is slightly off center but it might be because it looks a bit saggy ?
I suppose you were going for a puffy vulva but the inner thigh area on the right looks off to me.

>> No.2178950

>>2178280
body is too realistic, i like her face and hands, legs are horrible, would look better if flat chest.

>> No.2178997

how do i draw good sexy stuff?

>> No.2179017
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>>2178997
Study and grind on fundamentals, then research and study sexy stuff you like.

>> No.2179021

>>2178833
the foot looks wrong, tits appear to be floating and I am not sure about her left knee
Vagina looks weird too

>> No.2179039

>>2179017
is dat u kyle
dude how much do you charge for commissions?

>> No.2179044

>>2179039
i hope you are not thinking that that art is from kyle.

>> No.2179052

>>2179044
looks like something that he would make
wheres his old stuff? he promised to share.

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>>2178760
>>2178769
I warned you

>> No.2179058

>>2179052
>looks like something that he would make
it doesn't, that's kind of my point.

>> No.2179066
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>>2179039
>kyle

Kek, wrong. That isn't even my work. It's the work of an artist I like and study a bit of, tomoyuki kotani.

>>2179052
>looks like something that he would make

Your eyes aren't functioning properly.

>> No.2179111

>>2179052
Yes i am sure kyle censors his art because he is known to be japanese.

>> No.2179194

Will we ever find out if Mikufag is a girl?
I want to fuck Mikufag.

>> No.2179239

>>2179194
me too I get the pussy tho you take the ass.

>> No.2179244

>>2179194
>>2179239
Nobody cares.

>> No.2179247

>>2179244
If mikufag was a girl I would, take her on a date and, give her a rough rape in an alley while whispering, "study the fundamentals."

>> No.2179248

>>2179239
I dont wanna share man. Thats gay.
Lemme me fuck her first you can use her all you want after i impregnate her with my cum for 1 week.

>> No.2179259

>>2179194
we already have a token female porn artist.
just go harass keppok.

>> No.2179262

>>2179248
deal

>> No.2179268

>>2179259
But mikufag is easier to rape.
Docile girls are the best.
I can tell from mikufag's posts shes gonna suck your dick if you just whip it out in front of her and tell her to suck it.

Mikufag best waifu

>> No.2179271

mikufag is a Malasian dude who works at a car emission center. How do you new newfags know this already.

>> No.2179272

nobody gives a shit.
get back to drawing.

>> No.2179274

>>2179271
But when he shitpost in /pol/ he has an American flag.

>> No.2179275
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2179275

I'm an amateur and I suck, pointers?

>> No.2179279

>>2179275
arms and dick look fucked up

chun-li worst girl

>> No.2179280

>>2179279
>Girl
>chun-li
that's lotus prince fuck boy, and all the arms?

>> No.2179282

>>2178833
The dithering is doing you no good. Add more flats, the dithering makes the highlights and some of the shading unreadable. You dont have to get rid of all of it, but remember that it's a tool to break up hard lines, not for just dark.

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2179285

www.patreon.com/laurenchai
Oil on canvas
30" x 40"

>> No.2179290
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2179290

So my bf said that this was lewd, not sexy
how do i make something sexy anyway?

>> No.2179294

>>2179290
Take away the semen?

>> No.2179295

>>2179290
Change the pose for something less shy/cutesy and remove the semen.

>> No.2179298

Thinking about making a porn comic, any tips?

>> No.2179301

>>2178822
There'll be a nude version.

>> No.2179302

>>2179298
Learn to panel.

>> No.2179306

>>2179302
Different anon, can't you just pull off "The Watchmen" panel style?

>> No.2179350

>>2177679
>stop whining
But I'm laughing

>> No.2179357

>>2178785
>tiny feet
>fat arms
>short forearms
get a trip so I can filter your ass

>> No.2179358

>>2179357
no

>> No.2179371

>>2179054
The rendering is kind of ok, but the anatomy...
Someone have that pic with home place face?

>> No.2179465
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2179465

Revised and colored

>> No.2179467

>>2179465
vagina, feet, and chin look weird.

The shading on the chest is all kinds of fucked up.

>> No.2179470

>>2179467
Chin looks alright to me. But yeah that chest shading. I thought she was a doll from the thumbnail.

>> No.2179476

>>2179470
>>2179467
Not him but is there any tips on foreshortening things like feet/hands?

>> No.2179478

>>2179476
Construction through blocks (Hampton etc.).

>> No.2179491
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2179491

>>2179465
>>2179467
>>2179470

Better? Still haven't messed with the feet.

>> No.2179493

>>2179491
Lighten the shadow under her ribcage, and fade it where her upmost abs are.
Also your hatching is awful, just shade those parts with a sharp-edged block of darker value.
AND FIX THOSE DISGUSTING HANDS

>> No.2179498

>>2177130
dude you posted your sketchbook a few weeks ago right? i think of you like really often

>> No.2179526
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2179526

in this picture she will be pooping.

>> No.2179532
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>>2179526
>Those lines
>those values
I want kill myself.

>> No.2179534

>>2179532
>>2179526
To be clear it looks good, just realizing this looks like a negative comment.

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>>2179532
um, are they that bad? sorry. I was just a fast commission ;-;

I wanted to experiment with a different color light instead of the go-to warm/yellow.

>> No.2179539

>>2179536
Lol, didn't reply fast enough. It looks great. I'm really shit and want to be in the position you are in.

>> No.2179540

>>2179532
O-oh, I see.

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2179549

I'll post some of mine

>> No.2179551
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>> No.2179552
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I submitted this to hentai foundry and was rejected for it being to low quality.

The standards on the site seem really inconsistent, any tips to get my stuff on par for there site?

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>> No.2179554

>>2179551
>>2179549
>a_world_without_loomis.png

>> No.2179556

>>2179552
clean up your shading

>> No.2179559

>>2179553
>>2179551
>>2179549
I suggest not coloring until you can grasp basic form.

>> No.2179561

>>2179552
Fix the teeth, lower the palette so it becomes more balanced, fix the guy's body (or chop the bottom of your pic off)

>> No.2179562 [DELETED] 

>>2179357
Jesus Christ. You really missed the mark with that one. Did you reply to the wrong post or something?

>> No.2179569

>>2179554
>>2179561

Thanks for the tips think I'll clean it up and resubmit, the guys body is literally traced but I can crop it out.

I've looked at the forums and seems the site is really anal about new work but allows old users to post almost anything.


seems dumb but what cha gonna do.

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>>2179493
Gunna leave it at this for now. As far as the hatching goes, I agree, but they were done quickly and sketchily, I'll keep it in mind next time.

>> No.2179594

>>2179586
kneecaps feet left hand

>> No.2179609

>>2179526
>in this picture she will be pooping.
>drawing scat

Times must be rough.

>> No.2179614
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>>2179609


If I get a commission I don't really mind. There's not much that disgusts me.

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2179615

Hey guys, VicTy here with another dick-girl pic, looking for feedback. Any advice or suggestions would be greatly appreciated, especially red-lines. Any anatomy issues I feel would be best addressed before I add color.

>> No.2179616
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2179616

>>2179614
I know it doesn't matter and it won't make me a better artist and all that shitposting but what are you using?

>> No.2179617
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>>2179615
>Any anatomy issues I feel would be best addressed before I add color.

>> No.2179618

>>2179615
Lose the name, faggot.

Character has no neck, the fingers are fucked up, and the lumbar area makes no sense.

>> No.2179625

It's sure nice to get an immediate response for once. I take that as a clue I need to make a fool of myself to get what I want. *Nod Nod*

Anyways, this faggot ain't going nowhere and he ain't changing his name. I drew some porn, it's got issues and I want to fix them. So give this dumb ass fucker some advice please?

>> No.2179626

>>2179625
Stop being a faggot.

>> No.2179627

>>2179626
Maybe later

>> No.2179635

Actually, I already see some of the issues I can fix myself.

>> No.2179636
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>> No.2179638

>>2179635
>some
>implying they're fixable

>> No.2179643

>>2179638
Welp, if I can't fix it, fuck it I'll finish it anyways and move on. Got more pics to draw.

>> No.2179655

>>2176619
lol this comic was pretty awesome C :

>> No.2179663
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2179663

>>2178822
ayy bb, here's the nsfw version

http://imgur.com/sozNYtA
I know loli isn't allowed on here, so external link.

>> No.2179665

>>2179663
>I know loli isn't allowed on here, so external link.
literally no one cares as long as you drew it yourself

>> No.2179667

>>2179665
That's what the last person said, then I had to rebuild my tumbum from the ground up and establish a new status on 4chun. Though the second part wasn't as hard because people knew my art style.

>> No.2179704

>>2179616
Manga Studio
Binary for lineart
Felt pen for shading
Paint-and-apply for blending.

Sai is probably better for binary, though.

>> No.2179715

>>2179618
No, shut up. this fucking anon-only garbage is total nonsense when the entire fucking point is recognizing progress and past work.

Fucking no talent faggots who cry when they're not at the center of attention.

>> No.2179734 [DELETED] 

>>2179663
Your main problem is that your drawing isn't homogeneous. Individual parts of her body/anatomy have their own perspectives and sizes. And the anatomy in general is broken and thus non-appealing.
You should go a step back and study perspective and how it affects the human body. What you are doing at the moment is polishing turds (adding broken anatomy symbols and coloring the whole thing).
Yeah, this still is coloring practice, but the finished illustration will look crappy no matter how polished the turd is.

>> No.2179740

>>2179663
Your main problem is that your drawing isn't homogeneous. Individual parts of her body/anatomy have their own perspectives and sizes. And the anatomy in general is broken and thus non-appealing.
You should go a step back and study perspective and how it affects the human body. What you are doing at the moment is polishing turds (adding symbols to broken anatomy and coloring the whole thing).
Yeah, this is still coloring practice, but the finished illustration will look crappy no matter how polished the turd is.

>> No.2179753

guys my farts are so bad i cant focus on drawing.

>> No.2179771

>>2179753
You are probably shit at it anyway.

>> No.2179796

>>2179771
*farts*

>> No.2179820
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2179820

rubber gimp yoshi

>> No.2179840

>>2179820
plz not again

>> No.2179853
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>> No.2179856

>>2179853
nice. did you use a ref?

>> No.2179863
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2179863

bad costume idea...hooked fish

>> No.2179917
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2179917

>>2179853
I like it, but here is a quick idea about the breasts, this kind of reminded me more of a man's chest
than loli breasts so i changed them up a bit, or if you wanted to go for the complete flat chest you seem to puffed the entire area like
a man's chest and it looks like she has muscles there instead of breasts or flat chest.
Also your art seems really familiar, do you post anywhere?

>> No.2179936

>>2179853
Redraw the pelvis area and give it some depth. Right now the anatomy on that region is totally broken.

>> No.2179937

>>2179917
Christ, that's so much worse anatomy wise. Why would you bother to post a correction if you clearly never dealt with real tits before?

>> No.2179947

>>2179937
are tits telling me tits don't naturally look like shite implants?

>> No.2179948
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2179948

>>2179853
her vagina is weird, it looks like it's on her pubic mound rather than between her legs

>>2179937
looks pretty realistic for what i assume is a subtype of tubular breasts

>> No.2179954

>>2179948
>Her vagina i weird
That vagina is almost at her belly button

>> No.2179960

>>2179948
HAHA based on that sha walks facing down at a 90° angle!! Like farnsworth in that futurama episode!!!

>> No.2179971

>>2179917
you didn't actually adress the problem though. it would have been enough to realign the breasts and reposition the nipples a bit.

>> No.2179974
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2179974

>>2179948
>>2179853
also that position is pretty similar to those generic female anatomy pics you see in school, you could just use them for reference
vaginas are generally pretty low and close to buttholes in girls, i was kinda surprised when i found out

>>2179954
yeah the one i posted is the same issue just exaggerated

>> No.2179981
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2179981

>>2179974
>realistic meat mittens

>> No.2180052
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>>2179937
I won't pretend that i demonstrated my idea flawlessly but i still think that my thinking isn't wrong. He clearly wants to go for the flat chested girl that just barely started growing breasts but
breasts start growing from behind the nipples and slowly the mammary gland gives them shape starting from there,
he on the other hand made a flat chest and just made it puffier all around as if it was muscles, how
does that make more sense? you could either go completely flat or add some shape to them, and i decided to do that.

>> No.2180094

>>2179948
lmao stomach vagina

>> No.2180105
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>>2176872
Please stop this now. This is a disgrace to the man you could have been.

>> No.2180107
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>> No.2180109
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>> No.2180143

>>2179614
women don't pee out of their vaginas

>> No.2180148
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>> No.2180159

>>2180148
>handkerchief
>not a stopwatch
4/10

>> No.2180169

>>2180159
any tips for someone who wants to start doing porn?

>> No.2180179

>>2180169
no

>> No.2180222

>>2180169
trace your fav hentai artist

>> No.2180224
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>>2180143
and they don't pee out of their clits either.

>> No.2180233

>>2180169
don't listen to >>2180222, trace your second favorite hentai artist so you don't get caught

>> No.2180245
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2180245

>>2180233
>>2180222
>>2180179

>> No.2180260

>>2179663
Too cute, needs to look more like a bitch.

>> No.2180282

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>>2180244
>>2180244
>>2180244

>> No.2181747

>>2177968
>Mexico
>Av. wage $250/month
>MC Threshold $800/month
>Government claims the country is thriving

>Spain
>Av. wage $710
>MC Threshold $850
>In recession since 2008

Yay Independence!