/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

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Anonymous Mon Jul 20 19:08:51 2015 No.2159532 [Reply] [Original]

"To any man who has slaved to acquire skill in his art, it is most irritating to have his ability referred to as a gift. Perhaps there is one genius in a hundred years or more who can achieve perfection by divine inspiration. I have never met such a man, and I do not know any successful artist who did not get there by the sweat of his brow."

Previous Thread: >>2149711

A general message to aspiring artists: "Lack of knowledge can be greater torture than the effort of acquiring it. When all is said and done, nature is your best instructor."

Submit your drawings, receive feedback or critique others! Share your knowledge and remember to thank those who've critiqued or red-lined your drawings. Most importantly, have fun.

This thread is meant for artists who might want to try to make stylized work in-between their studies. It is strongly recommended that you use this thread in conjunction with learning the elements and fundamentals of art. You can also discuss the visual elements of various professional artists as well if you keep it relatively articulate and civil.

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>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 20 19:09:34 2015 No.2159534 File: 387 KB, 600x601, bunnys.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 21 17:17:46 2015 No.2160462 File: 209 KB, 655x1157, gromplookinassdude.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Update on the little froggie from last thread, any pointers?

Anonymous Tue Jul 21 18:38:34 2015 No.2160558
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took me a little while to find this thread, i couldn't ctrl-f for "stylization" because the word was in the picture...

Anyways, I redid that cafe thing with the boobs from a few threads back

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 21 21:41:56 2015 No.2160723 >alt art/style not in the title or post what are you doin anon.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 21 22:32:58 2015 No.2160774 >>2160558 those arms look terrible anon

Anonymous Wed Jul 22 00:31:26 2015 No.2160861
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>>2160558
didn't try the lady with the flaming cup
but looks like you can do it urself if you google "leaning on hand" and ref ur own hand for the cup pose

also, u might want to sketch out the image a bit further to see if the deer lady's feet end up at the same level as the human lady's feet. i have a feeling that they won't and you'll need to adjust her position in the image accordingly

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 00:45:37 2015 No.2160869 >>2160774 oh god i see it, and i've posted it and shit too... >>2160861 Thank you for the (red?)line, but aren't those hands a little too big?

Anonymous Wed Jul 22 00:54:33 2015 No.2160873

>>2160869
i like big hands. i also like to make the features on the face larger than usual to compensate for unusually large hands.
that being said, i realize that your style doesn't necessarily mesh with mickey mouse hands, and the green one is too big anyway.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 01:05:38 2015 No.2160883 >>2160861 What a redline

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 01:07:17 2015 No.2160884 >>2160883 BY that do you mean bad? Because that is a baaad redline.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 01:11:33 2015 No.2160888 >>2160884 redline my redline teach me how to redline anon :(((

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 01:20:48 2015 No.2160892 >>2160888 You will be able to do it when you reach a higher level of knowledge, instead of this blind leading blind sit.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 01:24:47 2015 No.2160898 >>2160892 don't just shitpost man, post some redlines which redline the "correct way" or point out the visible mistakes in a textpost

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 01:30:30 2015 No.2160901 >>2160898 It's clear that you can't construct just copy reference, and can't even draw a non-scratchy line.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 01:46:14 2015 No.2160910 >>2160901 what's wrong with using references? i can draw without em, and i don't really see anything wrong with putting them in a redline to back up the critique. (citations)

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 05:32:44 2015 No.2161016 >>2160558 fucking make thumbnails before rendering what a waste of time

Anonymous Wed Jul 22 05:33:21 2015 No.2161017

>>2160884
>>2160892
>>2160901
the redline fixed plenty of shit. stop being fussy over lines and references. especially when it comes to the scratchy lines, it's just a redline. they don't have to outright redraw things for you. it's enough to give you an idea of what can be improved. i think that redline managed to do that.

>>2160901
stop making shit up. yes, there are some horrible chicken scratch areas, but there are also plenty of continuous lines. the right figure for example is mostly fluid.

>>2159534
i really like this. hair looks a little random though.

Anonymous Wed Jul 22 05:40:07 2015 No.2161020

>>2160462
still looks muddy and random. i don't get a sense of space from the area behind the frog. his hat is a wobbly looking piece of shit. composition could be better. is he holding the rod with one hand?
either way it looks way too random. i doubt you'll finish this.

Anonymous Wed Jul 22 07:03:17 2015 No.2161072

>>2161020
Could you maybe redline just the hat? Having a hard time figuring it out.
And yes hes Holding the rod in one hand. Just havnt really gotten around to rendering the other one.
i'll try to push the depth even more and start definging my edges more, thanks bud

Anonymous Wed Jul 22 07:55:16 2015 No.2161102
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>>2161072
not same anon
guessing you were probably going for a lily pad hat

I adjusted the type of lily pad so the form of the head is visible and the hat is more hat-like.

i think u should eliminate the pot thing entirely and just erase the fishing line, keeping the lure in the water so u can paint the ripples so the line won't distract u and just add the line in at the end

i like the textures
which brush u use?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 07:56:36 2015 No.2161104 File: 278 KB, 648x1131, frogs2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2161072 sure. not sure what kind of hat that is supposed to be though. remember the thing with ellipses when it comes to round things in perspective.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 08:09:16 2015 No.2161117 File: 208 KB, 1287x840, screencap.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2161102 >>2161104 big ups. I cant remember where i got it unfortunately, might be sergey kolosov? no idea >>2161102

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 08:42:40 2015 No.2161143 >>2161117 >>2161102 Yeah i was right >http://www.mediafire.com/download/nu5qs4kpb6dj8di/Sketch+Brushes.abr

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 09:47:58 2015 No.2161175 File: 340 KB, 1200x1587, ku.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] this look okay to you?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 10:30:19 2015 No.2161191 >>2160861 fucking blackline plebs

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 12:33:32 2015 No.2161334 >>2159534 Nice. It needs hewlett teeths tho.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 13:19:47 2015 No.2161374 >>2161175 Looks sexy. Out of curiosity, what do you use to ink?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 13:27:44 2015 No.2161389 >>2161175 Dem lines. Are they digital?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 13:36:49 2015 No.2161406 >>2161175 I hope that part on top of the deltoid and bicep isn't her breast. Also, odd angle and pose but ass and pussy look great.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 17:12:46 2015 No.2161588 File: 36 KB, 500x558, Untitled-1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] bump

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 17:15:02 2015 No.2161590 File: 17 KB, 720x720, 11665743_926140564104012_5266788736418847494_n.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] What does /ic/ think of tumblr aesthethics?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 17:29:26 2015 No.2161601 >>2161590 >anything remotely minimalist or similar to 60s cartooning is tumblr aesthetics

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 17:36:37 2015 No.2161612 >>2161590 this >>2161601 if we're not going to try and stop tumblr culture from ruining cartoons who will?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 17:44:45 2015 No.2161619 File: 351 KB, 720x1960, musulmane 2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Are the proportions right?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 17:50:16 2015 No.2161627 >>2161590 That looks more like Bruce Timm than tumblr.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 17:55:57 2015 No.2161633 >>2161619 Where is the skeleton? It looks flat, like a bad trace.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 18:04:32 2015 No.2161641 >>2161588 girl's left leg and arm are too long the skirt length is uneven as well flip the image horizontally and u'll see

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 18:05:38 2015 No.2161642 >>2161633 yeah it looks flat, it'll get better with the shading

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 18:08:16 2015 No.2161644 >>2161017 >hair looks a little random though. how do you mean exactly?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 18:26:20 2015 No.2161666 >>2161644 i mean the hairstyle. it's nothing inherently wrong though

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 19:33:33 2015 No.2161761 >>2161590 >tumblr aesthethics

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 20:27:24 2015 No.2161814 >>2161374 SAI >>2161389 Yes >>2161406 top of deltoid is shoulder, next to deltoid is the pectorals/upper torso havent even drawn the tits yet

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 20:31:48 2015 No.2161820 File: 151 KB, 1872x1188, Screen Shot 2015-07-22 at 2.31.57 AM.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] need critique on the figure, wouldn't mind some advice on the vehicle and composition though.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 21:09:12 2015 No.2161870 >>2161590 >aesthethics There's nothing aesthetic about pretentious minimalist work, and lazy 3d fractal animations.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 21:24:42 2015 No.2161888 >>2161870 what is pretentious about that picture? genuine question point to some example of what you think is non-pretentious minimalist work?

Anonymous Wed Jul 22 21:56:21 2015 No.2161931

>>2161870
you seem to have a terrible eye for aesthetics and shape design.

The figure has a nice flow. Expertly done curves vs straights contrast. Limbs and hair create very deliberate angularity in stark contrast to the breast. There is more effort and knowledge showing through in this figure than anything you have ever drawn.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 23 05:15:35 2015 No.2162220 File: 68 KB, 480x840, genericbirdlookinassdude.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] tried to paint something using a limited pallete, didnt quite work out

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 23 17:25:53 2015 No.2162774 File: 286 KB, 1468x1152, squidhoes.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 23 17:33:10 2015 No.2162786 File: 224 KB, 1062x791, Untitled-1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] not sure what im doing but its fun

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 23 17:46:29 2015 No.2162811 File: 8 KB, 193x217, 5088.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] r8

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 23 17:53:16 2015 No.2162817 >>2162811 wtf is this size

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 23 18:24:13 2015 No.2162862 >>2162817 it's pixel art bro of course its small

Anonymous Thu Jul 23 18:29:25 2015 No.2162864

>>2162811
legs?
torso is basically a cylinder
wrinkles on skirt/hips makes no sense. they should help define the form underneath them.
If you're choosing not to use lineart you should pick colors that contrast more (or use shadows), so that the edges are still defined. her skin+hair are blurring together in many places, particularly the left side of her face and shoulders.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 23 18:30:02 2015 No.2162867 >>2161820 Really love what you're trying to do with this piece, where can I find more of your work?

Anonymous Thu Jul 23 18:40:22 2015 No.2162882

>>2162786
if you're trying to give the image texture or a natural fell by putting it on top of a photo of shitty recycled paper, this isn't the way to do it. your lines are too dark, and very obviously done with a digital pen. To improve this I would suggest finding a better brush. Or put a mask on another texture and overlay your lines. But this could make it look like paper cut-outs if you're not careful. But most importantly you should lighten that black up. It can still be pretty dark, but hardly anything is ever pitch black. Not even india ink.

What is the deer's nose even doing? it looks like a 3/4 view when the rest of the head suggest a side view.

hands are too big, the perspective on the stick doesn't fit with the rest of the picture.

otherwise it seems fine, has potential.

Anonymous Thu Jul 23 18:47:52 2015 No.2162893

>>2161820
hmm, I'm not sure. But I think the weirdness is probably due to the positioning of the butt? We're being given a 3/4 view when it seems like a side view would make more sense.
Also the legs are out of proportion but it looks like that was done intentionally based on the style you've chosen.

This is an interesting setting+perspective and I'm looking forward to seeing it once its been polished a bit more.

Look up some poses of people doing back stretches/twists. Yoga or something.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 23 19:06:33 2015 No.2162917 >>2162774 How do you into perspective? I understand point perspective, but not for figures.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 23 19:52:02 2015 No.2162980 >>2162917 Simplify the figure into cylinders.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 23 22:01:48 2015 No.2163088 File: 158 KB, 1093x422, ja47h.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] i'm not too sure which one looks more correct

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 23 22:30:18 2015 No.2163102 >>2163088 First looks more correct, second gets the point across better.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 24 04:03:57 2015 No.2163392 >>2160558 whats your focus point m8 all three girls or just the ones in the front the green dress is calling way too much attention fix your values/saturation >everything is fucking glowing m8 >tone that shit down

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 24 14:42:08 2015 No.2163917 File: 156 KB, 690x872, ayylmaolookinassdude.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] testing some shit

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 24 22:29:25 2015 No.2164369 >>2163917 What brush did you use for the landscape?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 25 00:02:47 2015 No.2164426 File: 229 KB, 1500x868, head turn.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] trying to figure out a character.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 25 00:36:18 2015 No.2164446 >>2164426 >SJW Universe Into the trash

Anonymous Sat Jul 25 00:39:40 2015 No.2164451
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so I'm doing this comic and honestly I know it's kinda shitty, but I would appreciate some honest critique because I want to improve. I've finished 24 pages so far.
http://mothersaidgoodbye.thecomicseries.com/

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 25 01:06:08 2015 No.2164483 >>2164446 I know it's cool to hate tumblr and all, but It's not that.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 25 01:12:28 2015 No.2164487 >>2164483 Splatoon?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 25 01:27:24 2015 No.2164508 File: 470 KB, 960x1280, angel.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Did this little doodle based on a photo I took of a friend!

Anonymous Sat Jul 25 01:36:31 2015 No.2164517

>>2164451
You can wing the perspective if you like, but it's just not working. Iven the brick texture is not following the vanishing points... The girl looks like she is sitting on her knees and the guy has a different vanishing point then the rest of the scene.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 25 01:38:07 2015 No.2164520 >>2164487 it's OC, trying to get an animation portfolio together.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 25 03:42:45 2015 No.2164579 >>2164369 One of the brushes from sergey kolosov i believe see >>2161143

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 25 03:48:56 2015 No.2164582 File: 160 KB, 720x960, 11224334_10203739124672727_8310891671352732420_n.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] ron swanson

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 25 03:53:32 2015 No.2164583 >>2161102 >>2161104 >>2161117 liking this very much

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 25 04:02:45 2015 No.2164588 File: 1.16 MB, 999x1704, samus2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] A Samus drawing that was originally for some thread on /v/ that got deleted pretty much the moment I started.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 25 04:09:49 2015 No.2164592 >>2164582 Pretty sweet crosshatching. Did you use a pencil for the gray lines?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 25 04:31:04 2015 No.2164600 >>2164592 thank you, I used pencil and pen, pencil mostly because Im scared of fucking up, so I could erase it if needed

Anonymous Sat Jul 25 08:59:31 2015 No.2164751
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>>2164588
I really like your style but I don't know. I feel like your stuff used to be better. You are at a solid level but it feels kinda stale to me. Maybe you are playing it too safe these days.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 25 09:18:39 2015 No.2164763 File: 148 KB, 443x803, unfinishedlookinassdude.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] to whoever said i wouldnt finish this, you were right. Feel free to throw critics in my general direction if you wanna help me git gud

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 25 23:07:09 2015 No.2165481 File: 182 KB, 675x540, windy girl.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] thoughts on this before I paint over it?

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 26 02:58:06 2015 No.2165639 File: 175 KB, 800x600, 20150626e.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] hey /ic/

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 26 03:00:29 2015 No.2165641 File: 498 KB, 1350x1100, 20160625f.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 26 03:05:52 2015 No.2165646 File: 270 KB, 1049x1459, Im tired.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 26 03:55:43 2015 No.2165663 >>2165639 >>2165641 what did you reference for these? you need to pay more attention to the hands because you botched all of them big time. apart from that I like them.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 26 04:06:43 2015 No.2165670 >>2165639 left one- head seems overly big, but that could just be style. the bottom torso is too small even factoring in the foreshortening. arms are also too short i like the lines

Anonymous Sun Jul 26 04:09:10 2015 No.2165672
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>>2165481
I love the colors, but it kind of looks like she has a piece of hard candy trapped in her cheek. Try tweaking it a little bit and see for yourself what you like best.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 26 04:23:15 2015 No.2165679 >>2165641 she a damn t-rex in the left?

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 26 04:46:05 2015 No.2165690 File: 209 KB, 675x540, k.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2165672 Thanks for the tip man. I'm not sure why I sketch every face I draw with this issue but i keep doing it. Is this better?

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 26 05:11:06 2015 No.2165692 >>2165690 There's a bright pink light source right in front of her, yet her face and toros are in shadow.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 26 05:26:23 2015 No.2165706 >>2165692 it has not been rendered yet anon. Like I said I haven't flattened it yet so I can make tweaks where need be. Jesus I thought that was obvious.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 26 05:45:13 2015 No.2165718 >>2165706 Why did you start rendering before you decided on the light sources? That's very inefficient.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 26 07:06:46 2015 No.2165754 >>2165706 if someone mistakes something in your piece of art it is entierly your own fault. "Jesus" is such a 14 year old moody teenage bitch thing to say, grow the fuck out of it.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 26 08:01:32 2015 No.2165773 >>2165639 the shoulders don't need to be so high and tense

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 26 12:05:48 2015 No.2165900 File: 328 KB, 2503x884, ETC.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] helping a friend fix a pic (leftmost), but i don't think mine are very correct either (middle and right). help?

Anonymous Sun Jul 26 12:13:12 2015 No.2165908

>>2165718
I added that other light becuase the composition looked a little stale in grayscale. I originally didn't plan on having the pink. But yeah it is inefficient.

>>2165754
I over reacted. I'm normally a lot better about criticism. The painting is mostly flats at this point so I figured he'd be able to guess that I obviously don't have all the lighting effects rendered yet. But i5 didn't occur to me that everyone has a different work flow on here.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 26 12:17:24 2015 No.2165914 >>2165900 The far right one looks best to me because the action is clearest. I definitely would not go withe the middle one, it looks awkward.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 26 12:41:39 2015 No.2165931 File: 40 KB, 679x1027, buttwitch_polishesapolechastely.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] fotm on /co/ >>2165900 do the have to be so close? composition looks cramped.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 26 13:21:37 2015 No.2165965 >>2165914 The middle one is a more common pose for anime. Although that guy should fix the pose to make it look more natural.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 26 14:48:28 2015 No.2166018 File: 157 KB, 600x848, 1391026867381.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2162980 How does one go from cylinders to the figure in perspective? I'm kind of new to this but really want to learn.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 26 19:47:40 2015 No.2166234 File: 90 KB, 500x500, ekko.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] wip

>>	3DPD !!QBbzNWwIreJ Sun Jul 26 20:57:03 2015 No.2166302 >>2164508 I like it! But it looks like you were too lazy or didn't know how ti draw the second wing >inb4 edgy one-winged angel

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 26 21:31:26 2015 No.2166331 >>2166302 Thanks!! And yeah, I got lazy towards the end. Wings aren't fun to draw. >2edgy4u

Anonymous Sun Jul 26 22:03:03 2015 No.2166362
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Not sure if this is a good place to post this, but what can I do with my faces in terms of proportions, perspective and just overall aesthetic. I know a lot of stuff is off and they feel lifeless.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 26 23:07:28 2015 No.2166399 File: 369 KB, 1000x800, windy girl.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2165690 okay I lied. I watched southpaw and played destiny all weekend so this is all I did. Fuck I hate not finishing

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 26 23:28:09 2015 No.2166416 >>2166399 Looks good! I really like the colors. You've got a tangent going with the scarf and the waistband of the shorts, though, which makes the scarf kind of look like a suspender.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 26 23:50:57 2015 No.2166434 File: 248 KB, 742x915, warmuplel.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Warmup gone wild.

Anonymous Sun Jul 26 23:51:23 2015 No.2166435

>>2166399
Destiny sucks, completely under delivers. There are so many other fps that are better.

You should smash that disc and draw more. If you didn't show any potential I would be fine with you playing destiny all weekend. But seems like you could do stuff, so fuck that game and draw!

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 26 23:54:13 2015 No.2166439 >>2166434 Why is that child naked? Are you some kind of paedophile?

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 26 23:55:39 2015 No.2166440 >>2166439 Anon, are you attracted to a drawing?

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 26 23:56:37 2015 No.2166442 >>2166440 He is a closet pedo, what do you expect?

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 26 23:58:51 2015 No.2166445 File: 322 KB, 1000x800, windy girl2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2166416 I honestly have no idea how I missed that. Thank you. >>2166435 But, but...that's what my friends are playing.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 26 23:59:12 2015 No.2166446 >>2166442 H-how did you know...??? Am I that obvious?

Anonymous Mon Jul 27 00:03:54 2015 No.2166449
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>>2166445
Get your friends to start drawing, or limit your play time with them. Surely you can be friends and not waste an entire weekend on vidya? Or are your friends destined to be losers anon? Help them and yourself, limit your play time and get some shit done. You'll be great some day if you can do that, I know it.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 27 00:33:10 2015 No.2166464 >>2166449 Yeah you are right man. I honestly was having a good time on this one too until they messaged me. Don't get me wrong it's fun playing vidya but I fucking hate how many hours I pour into playing when I get started.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 27 00:42:36 2015 No.2166470 >>2166464 Only reason I'm busting your balls (or ovaries? I dunno, whatever) is cause I was like you once. I wish I had realized the errors of my ways sooner, hence I am attempting to shove you along.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 27 01:09:55 2015 No.2166492 File: 373 KB, 1500x1305, co02.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] trying loli, thoughts?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 27 01:13:22 2015 No.2166495 >>2166492 Pretty, cute. Pretty cute.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 27 01:17:13 2015 No.2166497 >>2166470 Thanks again. I could tell by your post that you were either in my shoes or were at one time. I appreciate the advise and can honestly say that it wont be the same way next weekend.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 27 01:19:44 2015 No.2166498 >>2166492 It's like you spend all your energy making a cute face, but completely forgot how to anatomy.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 27 01:20:27 2015 No.2166500 >>2166495 thanks! I will try to work the hands a little bit more.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 27 01:22:22 2015 No.2166501 >>2166498 I don't see any flaws, personally. Maybe you should redline.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 27 01:23:04 2015 No.2166502 File: 629 KB, 600x960, Untitled-1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] The kancolle bosses all have neat designs, so I tried drawing the anchorage water demon! Thoughts?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 27 01:24:20 2015 No.2166505 >>2166498 You're right. I usually don't draw loli, definitely need more practice. Thanks.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 27 01:29:03 2015 No.2166509 >>2166502 I like the colors, but I think the pose looks a little stiff.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 27 01:30:32 2015 No.2166512 >>2166501 He's right you know. But he forgot to mention how stiff your drawing is and full of hairy lines

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 27 01:33:57 2015 No.2166513 >>2166509 Thanks! And yeah, the pose IS really stiff now that I look at it, but I can't think of any ways to change it that wouldn't require redrawing the whole thing.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 27 01:36:39 2015 No.2166516 >>2166512 He din't draw it, was me, but thanks for your advice.

Anonymous Mon Jul 27 01:55:00 2015 No.2166531

>>2166449
>waste an entire weekend

There are 7 days in a fucking week and you're going to get on someone for playing on the weekend? How about not wasting your weekdays (which a lot of people do) so you can enjoy your weekends? That sounds like a much better idea. Even people with day jobs manage their time like shit and waste a LOT of it doing even worse hobbies, like watching TV.

Anonymous Mon Jul 27 02:20:03 2015 No.2166545

>>2166531
Yeah... because wasting time, if it's on the weekend, is ok. Right? Interesting logic there anon.

Do you want to git gud? It doesn't sound like it. It sounds like I triggered you by challenging another anon to choose what is truly important to them. If they want to play vidya with their friends their entire life more power to them. If they want to be an artist they need to grind until they get pro, then they can allocate their time as they see fit and "waste" time playing vidya. But they ain't pro yet. They themselves expressed shame at this and I simply decided to help push that shame to the next level and attempt to instigate change. Sorry it triggered you. I'll be more gentle in the future.

Anonymous Mon Jul 27 04:09:05 2015 No.2166600

>>2166545
>triggered

Hardly. My point is it's always the individual and never the hobby. Specially when said hobby can be a means of inspiration. Destiny isn't the problem, poor time management is. End of story.

If you're going to try and blame an alternate hobby, giving the amount of hours in a day and days in a week, you're refusing to take responsibility for having shit time management, something a lot of people love doing to make it seem like they, themselves, aren't the problem when they always are. It's always the individual at fault, never the hobby.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 27 05:02:57 2015 No.2166634 File: 631 KB, 2341x2036, co02.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2166492 adding lineart

Anonymous Mon Jul 27 05:24:56 2015 No.2166645
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>>2166502
watch your symetry! especially for the eyes. it's very nice otherwise.

>>2165646
the left of his hip looks womanly... you should move his leg the the right a bit more.

w-what do you think of yugocat, /ic/?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 27 05:45:42 2015 No.2166654 >>2166634 her form around the torso and shoulders make look quite a bit flat draw some perpective anon

Anonymous Mon Jul 27 10:51:22 2015 No.2166824

>>2166600
Yeah you are right dude. I know what you meant.

>>2166600
I get what yo7 are trying 5o say too. But I wasn't playing destiny as a means of inspiration. If I were then I'd have slowed down to admire the settings or studied the character design and lighting or something. Yesterday I literally was just playing it for fun and spent much longer than I originally intended to. That's were you are right though. That's on me for managing my time wrong.

At the end of the day all that matters is I won't be doing this again next weekend so I can focus on getting better so no need to bicker.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 27 11:54:11 2015 No.2166873 File: 768 KB, 900x900, squidfeet.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I wanted to draw one of those popular inkthings. any suggestions?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 27 12:08:25 2015 No.2166883 >>2166873 Face sitting

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 27 14:55:35 2015 No.2167010 >>2160861 Her shoulders are back for a reason. >Poster doesn't even understand expressive posture

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 27 15:17:37 2015 No.2167028 >>2166873 You're great at drawing feet man, but don't those squid girls wear sneakers?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 27 15:23:24 2015 No.2167037 >>2167028 that ruins the image/makes it boring, you would want to make it appealing plus it makes sense with the pose shes in.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 27 15:23:31 2015 No.2167038 File: 1.59 MB, 260x260, 1437350971647.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2166873 Piggybacking off of >>2166883, POV facesitting... >>2167028 QUIET YOU CRETIN

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 27 19:55:00 2015 No.2167287 >>2166883 >...and then she farts!

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 27 20:23:41 2015 No.2167300 File: 57 KB, 580x758, no.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2167287

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 27 21:45:07 2015 No.2167368 File: 308 KB, 852x1004, lel.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2166434 Fixed it a little bit.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 28 06:28:09 2015 No.2167765 File: 97 KB, 663x514, tea_tapir.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 28 06:45:45 2015 No.2167771 >>2167368 why the heck is her body straight like a board? seriously, looking up some ref can help here.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 28 06:55:28 2015 No.2167773 >>2167765 So cute :3

Anonymous Tue Jul 28 06:56:40 2015 No.2167777

>>2163088
left is correct too, it just needs different city topography as it would mean that her back and elbows are incrusted to the earth, that's why it's better, because it makes weight

the best thing you can do is to try that effect in the right pic, that would mean to make real volumes in the city, use lines on the bg

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 28 08:17:46 2015 No.2167818 File: 809 KB, 813x831, niggasirensinparis.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] using blurred out splatoon screenshot as placeholder, any guidelines on how to do real backgrounds of cities and the like?

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 28 17:54:40 2015 No.2168357 File: 701 KB, 1366x768, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] help, her suit is more convoluted than i thought

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 28 18:06:19 2015 No.2168371 File: 631 KB, 1500x2124, pg5.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] pls help

Anonymous Tue Jul 28 18:15:50 2015 No.2168382

>>2168371
Help with what? parts of this have already been inked so what the fuck are we supposed to help with exactly. If you want attention then just ask for it. Don't bullshit us and expect us not to notice.
I could tell you to study up on your fundamentals after a page or two of these but you wont do it anyway so "It looks fantastic, good job"

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 28 18:24:48 2015 No.2168391 >>2166018 not that Anon but: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eJWLaDSNBAI dude has a ton of interesting and helpful shit.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 28 18:32:22 2015 No.2168399 >>2168371 >did you found him Is that intentional? Otherwise it's "did you find him"

Anonymous Tue Jul 28 18:39:24 2015 No.2168408

>>2168382
You don't need to be an asshat, Anon. You can easily critique it for future reference, even if he can't fix the page itself.

>>2168371
1- Paneling starts out good, then got confusing at the bottom panels (at first glance); be careful with word bubbles, and always think about how you can omit panels without sacrificing pacing.

2- The inking leaves a lot to be desired. It's very inconsistent and lacks any kind of logic in line weight. Also, if you're not going to put the investment into good hatching, then don't hatch at all, just add in tones on the computer.

3- Check your grammar and spelling, and use a smaller, less intrusive font size.

Overall, it's not a bad page. You did okay with the perspective and composition, and I like some of little details you put in the clothing and faces. Be more careful about line quality and textures, and try to fix your word bubbles into something presentable instead of making them pixel messes.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 28 18:42:39 2015 No.2168415 >>2168371 be more orderly with your paneling. have clear horizontal/vertical margins and only break them when you need to.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 28 18:48:58 2015 No.2168427 >>2168371 grammar is shit perspective all wonky need more loomis pale expression typical edgy highschool project/read the sticky

Anonymous Tue Jul 28 18:51:38 2015 No.2168429

>>2168408
Yeah I did come a tad more dickish than I should have. It's not fair considering I have a lot of pages like these (if not worse) from when I was younger.

>>2168371
Do everything the other guy said and in addition to that do yourself a favor and practice drawing actual people with those pencils of yours in between comic pages okay. I know the comic is exciting but in like 4 weeks you will look at this page and see errors that you never noticed before and hate it.

I know you aren't painging digitally yet so save yourself the trouble and try to buckle down on as much figure/landscape/and perspective drawings as you can so that when you do go digital you wont have to learn the OS's and how to draw all at once.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 28 19:05:32 2015 No.2168442 File: 952 KB, 1500x2124, pg6.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2168429 k how about this one?

Anonymous Tue Jul 28 19:17:58 2015 No.2168459 [DELETED]

>>2168442
As I told the other guy, I did multiple sketchbooks just like this when I was your age so I know that you just copied other artists work to make these. The parts that you made up yourself look obvious and horrible. I don't like either of the pages. If you want me to help you then go into the beginner thread with a drawing from here. Otherwise all of these pages look, and will continue to look like garbage to anyone that isn't your mom or your playmates in school.
http://www.posemaniacs.com/

Anonymous Tue Jul 28 19:23:42 2015 No.2168467

>>2168442
>>2168442
As I told the other guy, I did multiple sketchbooks just like this when I was your age so I know that you just copied other artists work to make these. And i'm telling you you WILL realize how much time you wasted doing this crap exclusively one day. Just humor me and go do some life drawings even if you don't understand why.
The parts that you made up yourself look obvious and horrible. I don't like either of the pages. If you want me to help you then go into the beginner thread with a drawing from here.
http://www.posemaniacs.com/

Otherwise all of these pages look, and will continue to look like garbage to anyone that isn't your mom or your playmates in school.

Anonymous Tue Jul 28 19:33:58 2015 No.2168485

>>2168442
I agree with all of what >>2168467 says.

Stop copying other artists comic pages to do these, because they're a waste. Your linework is still sketchy (which is ruining the point of linework) and you're not understanding vital weights or movement in any of these poses you're trying to do. The hatching is still half-done, and the tones you put in are messily integrated, though I do suggest experimenting more with them.
I agree that you should try sketching some real people in real poses; watch videos of people swinging things or moving around and try to emulate it. Draw circles and boxes in felt pen to work on your line confidence; don't touch hatching until you can shade something convincingly with pencil.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 28 19:47:00 2015 No.2168499 >>2168442 YOU SUCK ASSHOLE stop spamming /pol/ with your fucking traced comics because they all look like shit Dont even bother learning from the guys here, they all make stuff 10 times better than you.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 28 19:55:11 2015 No.2168511 File: 624 KB, 1500x2129, pg7.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] k how bout this one

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 28 19:56:39 2015 No.2168512 >>2168511 dude, stop

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 28 20:03:33 2015 No.2168516 >>2168512 just flag and move on.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 28 20:04:33 2015 No.2168518 >>2161175 It's a good start, but her arms are way too short, and her legs are way too long. I would also recommend putting more emphasis on the foreshortening.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 28 20:06:17 2015 No.2168519 >>2168511 >>2168442 >>2168371 i would at least care if it wasn't for the /pol/ shit. fuck off. but one piece of advice, look at professional manga and see how they do their panels. see>>2168415

Anonymous Tue Jul 28 20:06:37 2015 No.2168520

>>2161590
You know Dasher, and Dancer, and
Prancer, and Vixen,
Comet, and Cupid, and
Donder and Blitzen
But do you recall
The most famous reindeer of all

Rudolph, the red-nosed reindeer
had a very shiny nose
and if you ever saw it
you would even say it glows.

All of the other reindeer
used to laugh and call him names
They never let poor Rudolph
play in any reindeer games.

Then one foggy Christmas eve
Santa came to say:
"Rudolph with your nose so bright,
won't you guide my sleigh tonight?"

Then all the reindeer loved him
as they shouted out with glee,
Rudolph the red-nosed reindeer,
you'll go down in history!

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 28 20:10:21 2015 No.2168526 >>2161820 The body is twisted a bit too much at the hips. Also, the legs are too short.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 28 20:11:31 2015 No.2168527 >>2168518 too late now >>2168357

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 28 21:20:39 2015 No.2168584 File: 115 KB, 700x700, Monk head.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Just doodled this up, crits?

Anonymous Tue Jul 28 21:40:31 2015 No.2168598
File: 212 KB, 500x588, satyr (July 2015).png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

a quick faun

>>2166645
this is amazing, you got a blog?

>>2168584
consider putting more thought and/or effort into your lines and construction!! it's hard to critique anything other than technique here because nothing feels tied down at all.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 29 02:45:52 2015 No.2168788 File: 166 KB, 1000x788, xx.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2167368 >>2167765 Thank you for drawing, I had practice by redrawing.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 29 03:58:55 2015 No.2168823 I've never drawn before, but I'm keen on learning. How should I go about this? It's all very foreign to me; I really don't know where to start.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 29 04:12:45 2015 No.2168827 >>2162220 It's not working because your palettes wrong. Start with 3-4 colors with broader varience and mix from there. All the colors your giving yourself to work with there are muddy to begin with.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 29 11:37:48 2015 No.2169163 File: 765 KB, 950x672, z.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2165639 >>2165641 pretty cool I changed the design of this guy so many times, it's not even funny anymore.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 29 11:44:01 2015 No.2169170 File: 615 KB, 1600x1131, 2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2169163 older designs, I think the new one is much better and refined.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 29 12:39:15 2015 No.2169216 File: 246 KB, 530x640, 14v4.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Anonymous Wed Jul 29 13:10:32 2015 No.2169246

>>2167818
You can... paint over it, or just use a reference. Use perspective lines and shit. But painting over it when you don't really care about the background and focus more on the characters can be a good way to save time.
You should work on your perspective, tho, it's just a temporary soloution.
also you should try to define your lightsource better.

>>2168598
t-thank you, h-here it is: http://loreleivonbork.deviantart.com/
your faun looks nice too

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 30 09:23:27 2015 No.2170317 >>2160861 Can you post that chart from the top left? That looks fairly handy.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 30 13:01:58 2015 No.2170448 File: 88 KB, 800x800, officewizard.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] thinking of calling this one done

Anonymous Thu Jul 30 13:08:33 2015 No.2170456

>>2170448
Pretty nice anon. Just a few nitpicks:
-neck could be a bit thinner
-hair can have more edge variety
-the bg doesn't reach the top of hte gold frame
-shirt has some weird things going on, like that one rectangular brushstroke on the shoulder on the left, the collar shadow cast shadow is weird, the back of the collar is covered in a shadow that is nearly the bg value and creates a pseudotangent with the back, the front edge of the shirt feels too hard and not like hte form is turning etc.
-the red wood border is ugly
-I like the play of warms and cools in the shirt, good variety of temperature and saturation in there. Would love to see some of that in the face as well, the face seems boring and plastic at the moment. Give some variety and life to it! It can be subtle, but it needs something.
-I don't like the simplifications in the ears

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 30 13:11:50 2015 No.2170457 >>2170456 super helpful, thx! :)

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 30 13:15:11 2015 No.2170460 >>2170448 aaaaaaaaw he looks so sad, i'd like to give him a hug well done anon

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 30 13:37:10 2015 No.2170480 >>2170448 Never thought I'd see the day tumblr invaded /ic/.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 30 13:45:48 2015 No.2170493 >>2170480 are you new?

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 30 13:54:45 2015 No.2170501 >>2170448 good work

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 30 13:58:56 2015 No.2170505 >>2170480 .... tumblr's been here for ages

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 30 14:56:10 2015 No.2170572 File: 220 KB, 800x1000, sadness.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] H-Hello guys. Are you doing something... fun? (I bet they won't even reply, suits me right, hah... Oh I hate being around people...)

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 30 14:58:09 2015 No.2170576 >>2170572 drapery makes no sense it's bad

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 30 15:02:33 2015 No.2170587 >>2170572 jesus just go crawl under some table or something you whiny shit.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 30 15:05:40 2015 No.2170592 >>2170572 EDGELORD D G E L O R D

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 30 15:10:44 2015 No.2170598 >>2170576 >>2170587 >>2170592 >>2170592 shit guys I was just trying to be in character

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 30 15:13:25 2015 No.2170600 >>2170598 In character for what?

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 30 15:14:35 2015 No.2170602 >>2170598 well shit me too! my character was trying to tell you that this isn't deviantart and that roleplaying can be done over at /tg/.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 30 15:17:00 2015 No.2170605 File: 39 KB, 680x478, sadness 2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2170600 As sadness, the character from inside out? The side character to the image attached to the OP? >>2170602 Sorry, I missed the no fun allowed sign. Clearly.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 30 15:19:23 2015 No.2170612 >>2170605 >inside out Completely forgot that existed.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 30 15:22:02 2015 No.2170620 >>2170605 >inside out i still need to see that. >roleplaying fuck off.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 30 15:24:10 2015 No.2170622 >>2170620 How about you shove your head further up your ass? I'm not going to fucking role-play and I wrote it as an offhand comment. You're taking this way too seriously, holy shit

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 30 15:26:07 2015 No.2170625 File: 172 KB, 1225x700, weabootrashlookinassdude.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Anonymous Thu Jul 30 15:30:49 2015 No.2170629

>>2170625
It has a good feel, but you could go much wilder and into foreign territory with it as far as sketches go. I recognize you as is but wouldn't spot you in a crowd.

More professionally, if it's for animation it works, but for an illustrative or comic style, it's dogshit.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 30 18:40:04 2015 No.2170911 File: 47 KB, 500x798, first-day-of-school.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] just finished blocking in colours

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 30 19:10:30 2015 No.2170932 >>2170911 i want to fuck this

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 30 19:22:04 2015 No.2170946 >>2169170 I really love your stuff. Have a tumblr?

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 30 19:58:19 2015 No.2170977 >>2170911 Looks really good! This is kind of nit-picky but the color you chose for the floor is a lot warmer than the rest of the background colors, it might be worth trying to cool it down a bit

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 30 20:03:41 2015 No.2170982 >>2170977 you're right, thanks!

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 30 20:05:27 2015 No.2170985 >>2170932 the porn thread is over there anon >>2170059

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 30 20:05:49 2015 No.2170986 >>2170911 i love this so cutttee <3

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 30 20:06:06 2015 No.2170987 >>2170932 I want /a/ to leave.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 30 21:22:25 2015 No.2171045 >>2170911 >>2170932 >>2170986 Jesus christ

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 30 22:34:31 2015 No.2171117 >>2168823 Drawing boxes. Also the sticky thread actually has a bunch of good links in it.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 31 05:45:42 2015 No.2171448 File: 248 KB, 1000x772, creaturebox_bot_study.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] back from a long vay-cay. Studied off some creaturebox robots to warm up. Markers are still the best

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 31 05:48:19 2015 No.2171452 >>2171448 You actually have talent. /Ic/ is not the place for you.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 31 05:49:28 2015 No.2171453 >>2171448 If you can make that from imagination then you must be a pro.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 31 05:52:53 2015 No.2171455 >>2171452 >>2171453 calm down - I was studying off some creaturebox artwork >>2171127 i'm coming off a long break and just needed to do some comfort zone drawing >not OC

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 31 06:07:36 2015 No.2171458 >>2171452 you got it backwards, you are the one that should leave since you seem think that this place is some kind of scrub heaven for people like yourself. and tablefag still has a long way to go.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 31 06:09:07 2015 No.2171459 >>2171455 You're still better than 99% of /ic/ and anyone in this thread.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 31 06:21:18 2015 No.2171466 >>2171459 He did a reference study,now claiming to be over 99% of ic, how shit are you to have that lack of criteria. gosh, it's summer

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 31 06:23:38 2015 No.2171467 >>2161590 I this isn't a "pic related" post. That is way too good to be considered typical tumblr aesthetic.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 31 06:39:17 2015 No.2171470 File: 393 KB, 1024x1280, 10small.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] A wip, what do you think + what can i improve? Also what general colors do you think will fit for the background stuff, i cant realy decide.

Anonymous Fri Jul 31 06:47:57 2015 No.2171474

>>2171466
>it's summer
this. i probably should just leave this shithole until summer is over. it's unbearable lately.

>>2171470
there is a lot to improve. the face, the legs, even the spheres, their 3D forms are inconsistent.
the design in general isn't too good. it feels more like you're trying to hide the body.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 31 06:58:47 2015 No.2171478 >>2171474 Thanks for the feedback! can you please elaborate on the stuff that you have mentioned? And while my intention wasnt to hide the body at all, I undersatnd what you mean, do you think i can do anything in order to salvage the overall desgin?

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 31 07:09:21 2015 No.2171480 >>2171470 she looks cute!!!

Anonymous Fri Jul 31 07:29:57 2015 No.2171492

>>2171478
for example, see the thruster thingy at the legs? even though we are seeing the legs from above, how can we still see its opening like that?
that kind of error is happening because you're not thinking in 3D enough.

the way the spheres are circling the character probably also didn't turn out the way you intended it to. the face is also wonky looking. work on your fundies too.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 31 07:33:29 2015 No.2171497 >>2171492 Thanks buddy, will post an updated version soon. >>2171480 also thex

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 31 07:37:58 2015 No.2171501 File: 87 KB, 564x800, chineselookinassdude.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 31 08:45:08 2015 No.2171542 File: 196 KB, 854x699, 1415529.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 31 08:50:10 2015 No.2171548 >>2171542 not my taste, but neat. >>2171501 lazy looking shite

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 31 10:45:45 2015 No.2171646 >>2171542 You have to do the rest of the cast like this!

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 31 10:48:05 2015 No.2171647 >>2171542 I really like this. Blog?

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 31 10:54:45 2015 No.2171651 File: 994 KB, 950x672, z.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2170946 thank you. yep it's http://slothyslothson.tumblr.com/

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 31 11:09:28 2015 No.2171664 >>2171497 >>2171492 Well, I did my best to improve it, although i didnt realy know what to do with the face and such, nothing in it realy looks off to me so i cant fix it only knowing it only needs to be less wonky. Soo what looks the most off now?

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 31 11:12:33 2015 No.2171671 File: 400 KB, 1024x1280, 10small.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2171664 Whoops

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 31 15:55:43 2015 No.2171940 >>2171497 >also thex was kidding blud. she look like the reception at my nearest chinky

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 31 17:14:23 2015 No.2172054 File: 549 KB, 600x857, exactlyexactly.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Anonymous Fri Jul 31 17:41:21 2015 No.2172092
File: 488 KB, 1600x1238, justhavingsomefun.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>2160462
>>2161588
>>2162220
>>2164588
>>2165481
>>2168584

Don't get me wrong.. I'm not trying to suggest you to correct/change your drawings! I'm just having some fun :)

keep on working and ENJOY!

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 31 17:43:16 2015 No.2172095 >>2172092 are you studying animation?

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 31 18:00:30 2015 No.2172120 >>2171548 >lazy looking shite Really accurate description tbh

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 31 18:46:31 2015 No.2172167 File: 96 KB, 540x651, Playboy Seppuku.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 31 18:48:32 2015 No.2172169 >>2164751 Holy shit that pic is fantastic

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 31 18:51:12 2015 No.2172174 >>2172054 Her left eyelash looks too low

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 31 18:52:30 2015 No.2172176 >>2171448 awesome, i love it

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 31 18:56:36 2015 No.2172187 >>2163088 cross your eyes

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 31 19:00:38 2015 No.2172195 >>2172174 You're right! I'll fix that.

>>	Anonymous Sat Aug 1 01:25:14 2015 No.2172622 File: 331 KB, 806x753, Screen Shot 2015-08-01 at 1.20.08 AM.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Player character finally getting some love

>>	Anonymous Sat Aug 1 02:40:55 2015 No.2172678 >>2172622 awesome, i like him

>>	Anonymous Sat Aug 1 02:43:05 2015 No.2172682 >>2171542 cool, inspiring thanks for sharing

>>	Anonymous Sat Aug 1 02:44:49 2015 No.2172684 >>2172622 maybe make him a bit more... diverse? too many games star a white male as the main.

>>	Anonymous Sat Aug 1 02:50:44 2015 No.2172690 >>2166645 holy fuck this is awesome.

>>	Anonymous Sat Aug 1 02:54:59 2015 No.2172693 >>2172684 Ya but he's jewish

Anonymous Sat Aug 1 02:56:04 2015 No.2172696

>>2172684
This! We need more overweight (read: Curvy) coloured WOMEN on the video game market, there is too much WHITE CIS SCUM out there. If you want a TRUE socially acceptable game that follows the modern standards of what's right, the MC of that game should be KILLING the WHITE CIS MALEs, instead of being one. I am so bored of seeing the same game being made over and over again. The colour and sex of the MC is all that matters, and we don't see any further than what sexual organ the MC has, and what color he has when we judge a game.

>>	Anonymous Sat Aug 1 03:00:49 2015 No.2172699 >>2172696 Yes!! Finally someone on 4chan that understands!! ^.^

>>	Anonymous Sat Aug 1 03:02:32 2015 No.2172700 >>2172092 I like what you did with her pose m8. cheers!

>>	Anonymous Sat Aug 1 03:26:37 2015 No.2172717 File: 511 KB, 866x1000, Untitled-1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] currently drawing this for a friend of mine.

>>	Anonymous Sat Aug 1 03:28:21 2015 No.2172718 File: 232 KB, 468x540, Untitled-1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] currently drawing this for a friend of mine.

Anonymous Sat Aug 1 06:04:29 2015 No.2172764
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how do I remove the orange pencil lines? I tried the color select, but it sucks. There are lots of artifacts. I feel like there should be an easy way to do this...

Also, I should study more flexy tubes

>>	Anonymous Sat Aug 1 07:01:27 2015 No.2172786 >>2172718 fucking gay, might as well draw of those gay ass blocky tumblr noses, some retarded ass non oc material there, fag.

>>	Anonymous Sat Aug 1 14:12:41 2015 No.2173044 File: 742 KB, 916x1000, bikedudeWIP.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Late night sketch.

>>	Anonymous Sat Aug 1 17:22:28 2015 No.2173194 >>2172718 TRASH, ITS FUCKING TRASH. GET THE FUCK OUT OF HERE>

>>	Anonymous Sat Aug 1 17:30:44 2015 No.2173202 >>2173194 whoa mate calm the fuck down

>>	Anonymous Sat Aug 1 17:49:18 2015 No.2173214 >>2172764 Usual procedure is to adjust the gamma. Look up some tutorials on scanning line art as there are multiple ways to go about it. Your problem is going to be those background greys.

>>	Anonymous Sat Aug 1 18:35:23 2015 No.2173237 >>2173194 Explain yourself

Anonymous Sun Aug 2 02:41:36 2015 No.2173572
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>>2173214
>gamma
mmm I think I might have got closer. I combined your advice with some tumblr advice. I am going to have to read up on the gamma curves...

> 1 was the original - i think my scanner sucks
> 2 i messed with the levels to darken the blacks - but this added a lot of black artifacts into the colored pencil
> 3 when I first tried to do the color removal, it took out the reds but left the blacks
> 4 fiddled with the gamma curves until all i could see was shades red for the pencil
> 5 iterated on the color removal 3 times until most of the colors were gone
> 6 tried to erase the extra artifacts that were missed

the edges on my scan are still pretty pixelated and jagged - any advice on how to smooth them out?

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 02:53:48 2015 No.2173582 File: 210 KB, 500x769, arisu.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] thoughts on this before i start rendering it?

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 02:57:33 2015 No.2173586 >>2173582 I think the neck would look better if you brought it in a little on the left, only slightly.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 03:01:56 2015 No.2173589 File: 249 KB, 700x446, Screen Shot 2015-08-02 at 12.01.02 AM.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2173586 Like this, you mean?

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 03:02:41 2015 No.2173591 >>2173589 Yep, perfect.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 03:13:04 2015 No.2173594 anything majorly wrong with this before I do the line art?

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 03:14:05 2015 No.2173595 File: 852 KB, 940x1438, lknlk.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2173594 dropped file

Anonymous Sun Aug 2 04:10:35 2015 No.2173617
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>>2173572
played around with a bunch of layers and shit in PS. Kinda feel like all these drawings are the same... It's like i'm just masturbating to a bunch of linework and not really making anything.

I would not classify today's work as productive.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 05:15:04 2015 No.2173632 >>2173194 Lol okay

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 05:23:51 2015 No.2173635 >>2173595 would fist her analy

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 05:46:23 2015 No.2173643 File: 100 KB, 1280x847, 1438457762.vexstacy_girafarig_wmd.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] What do you guys think of this furry trash I like it.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 06:13:32 2015 No.2173646 >>2173643 i like it. If the face was human i would fap.

Anonymous Sun Aug 2 06:51:51 2015 No.2173669
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originally posted in the wrong thread cuz im a filthy casual newfag but id appreciate it if someone would tell me what the fuck is wrong with this because i cant tell anymore. inb4 everything

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 06:54:24 2015 No.2173671 >>2173669 explain to me what is supposed to be happening here

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 07:21:14 2015 No.2173679 >>2173671 I was just about to ask that

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 07:34:17 2015 No.2173683 I've been working on this rendering for almost a whole week. When is it the time to give up the ghost?

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 07:39:17 2015 No.2173684 >>2173669 >4000x4000 have some decency you barbarian

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 08:05:02 2015 No.2173695 >>2173671 view from above, arm coming forward and upwards, right arm.... i dont know jsut wanted it to be energetic. actually just explainning it makes me realize the shoulder isnt going up. i think thats the problem.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 08:15:43 2015 No.2173701 File: 333 KB, 1091x1103, is this shougeki no soma.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2173695 ?

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 09:06:23 2015 No.2173727 >>2173701 thanks man, youre a god, love the line thickness.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 10:05:32 2015 No.2173761 File: 118 KB, 821x555, euh.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 10:28:36 2015 No.2173776 File: 520 KB, 1007x1398, donut .jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2173595 done for tonight,

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 11:35:16 2015 No.2173809 File: 1.42 MB, 2454x3475, 8.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] how can i improve

Anonymous Sun Aug 2 12:09:59 2015 No.2173840

>>2173809
need to study a tad of anatomy, especially abs. also play with line weight or something because your drawings are hard to read. and make it symmetrical, one side of his face is round, the other is not.... the ears arent the same size... Honestly i dont want to be a loomis fag, but go do some gesture.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 15:21:45 2015 No.2173983 Do any of you have the Hitokaku Index ripped? i was about to it myself but i won't hurt asking beforehand.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 15:27:11 2015 No.2173985 >>2173809 kill yourself

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 15:32:18 2015 No.2173989 >>2173809 u the pol comix guy ? where do u post dem raycis pages ?

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 17:27:31 2015 No.2174088 File: 624 KB, 1500x2124, 12.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2173840 k tq how about this one did i do good? can someone redline this 4 me thatll be cool requesting teal or kyle to redraw the whole page

Anonymous Sun Aug 2 17:32:52 2015 No.2174095
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>>2174088
>requesting teal or kyle to redraw the whole page

Oh boy. I should of mentioned that it's been a while since Teal has last been in these threads and you'll trigger /ic/'s autism if you keep mentioning him.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 17:52:07 2015 No.2174116 >>2174095 ok how about tehmeh and rinfag i need a redline on gore its frustating to draw to draw them whats the deal with teal anyways. I heard he got busted for drawing anti obama cartoons

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 18:26:31 2015 No.2174135 File: 191 KB, 894x888, Screen Shot 2015-08-02 at 5.40.52 PM.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2172622 Jump motions

Anonymous Sun Aug 2 18:41:00 2015 No.2174143

>>2174088
cant even be fucked to connect my tablet but if someone redlines this itll have to be basically everything, nothing is actually good, nothing is especially bad... the way the abs go out of pannel without closure doesnt really make me happy, the way the line for the face/helmet kinda looks like a neck line makes mad/ stop using your fucking lines as shading and toning though. or learn to shade/tone because readablity is just bad. no BIG mistakes this time, however, that hand. soo wave. do a hand study for me please

artists dot pixelovely dot com slash practice-tools slash hands-feet-practice

also look at what the chestplate muscles are supposed to look like. nice job on the sword holding though.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 19:02:09 2015 No.2174159 >>2174143 how do you draw hands holding things quickly i usually spend 2 hours on a page because i have to publish one chapter per week

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 20:09:09 2015 No.2174228 File: 558 KB, 1500x2100, Swimsuit Life.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Yoo look at my garbage. Sometimes I am not sure where to even start painting

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 20:27:09 2015 No.2174238 File: 159 KB, 1280x1154, 1436519882252.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2174228 Where's your lineart? I'd start with flat colors, figuring out where the light comes from, finding shadow shapes, then moving on to rendering

Anonymous Sun Aug 2 20:31:16 2015 No.2174242

>>2174159
just practice and youll get faster. honestly i personally cant do a decent hand under 2 minutes. Honestly though im not the best qualified artist for cs- hopefully someone will help you if there actually is a shortcut

Protip: there is not shortcut

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 20:31:43 2015 No.2174243 File: 787 KB, 1396x943, arimavskaneki.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I feel like I need to make the flowers stand out more. If so how should I do it?

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 20:33:17 2015 No.2174246 What's the difference between here and the regular draw thread? I see some of the same shit.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 20:33:25 2015 No.2174247 >>2174238 personally i would start with killing myself for being a furry

Anonymous Sun Aug 2 20:38:17 2015 No.2174249

>>2174247

>>2174238
is me
Drawing a furry doesn1t make you a furry anymore than drawing a loli makes you a loli.

Though I don't have problems with furries. I draw furry stuff but don't live the life.

Aside from the meme hate how is it any worse than loli or futa.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 20:42:32 2015 No.2174253 >>2174249 drawing a furrie every so often doesnt make you a furrie, sucking a dick once in a blew moon doesnt make you gay

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 20:44:27 2015 No.2174255 >>2174253 Cool, keep being the cool meme kid I guess.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 20:45:31 2015 No.2174256 >>2174253 It makes you bisexual.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 21:12:01 2015 No.2174274 >>2174253 >>2174249 >>2174247 I don't think I'm a furry, but I do appreciate anthromorphic characters. >>2174238 Did you draw this?

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 22:13:01 2015 No.2174341 File: 995 KB, 900x1169, 1411345774261.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2174274 No, just posting some good art as an example. This one for a different approach of rendering.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 22:32:49 2015 No.2174367 >>2174341 VeraMundis is my favorite furry artist --- favorite artist in general. I wish i knew how to render like he does, he has some kind of classical rendering flair he has involved in all of his paintings?

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 2 23:11:33 2015 No.2174406 File: 52 KB, 300x300, 1346824746470.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2174238 >>2174341 Stop posting lewd anthros I ain't no fucking furry

>>	Anonymous Mon Aug 3 00:09:29 2015 No.2174451 File: 251 KB, 700x980, swimsuit dog.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2174228 The tentacles aren't as rendered, but I wanted to add something fun to it.

>>	Anonymous Mon Aug 3 00:15:50 2015 No.2174458 File: 107 KB, 500x833, redprev.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Mon Aug 3 00:22:38 2015 No.2174462 File: 254 KB, 360x600, redprev.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] new thread when

>>	Anonymous Mon Aug 3 01:47:59 2015 No.2174524 >>2174406 Me neither. It's okay to like things. >>2174451 Whoa this is starting to look pretty cool I miss some blue reflected light maybe, not sure if im right about this one. and the red of the swimsuit reflected on limbs

Anonymous Mon Aug 3 03:28:38 2015 No.2174566
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This is an old piece, but I’m thinking of reworking it (or completely redrawing a new one in the same style).

Obviously the anatomy is less than literal with the floating cylinder arms and all, but if there's something particularly fucked up please let me know.

>>	Anonymous Mon Aug 3 04:00:25 2015 No.2174578 >>2174524 Thanks man, I think you're right about the color reflection, I forgot about it. I'm so worn out from this piece, I want to take a break.

>>	Anonymous Mon Aug 3 06:34:41 2015 No.2174634 >>2174462 i am not the anon that usually makes the new threads, but I feel bad for the lack of bumps you guys are getting new thread here - go wild! >>2174632 >>2174632 >>2174632

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