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[Anonymous No.2144438]

Previous thread >>2140334

Post your current drawing here and give constructive critiques to others!

Please make sure your posted image is clear, downsized to around 1000 pixels wide, rotated to the correct orientation, and that any unused space is cropped.
If you want critique on a drawing from the previous thread, you can delete it there and repost in this one.

>dA /ic/ group :
http://4chan-ic.deviantart.com

>/ic/ Resources/Reference/Downloads/Links:

>General resources :
http://sites.google.com/site/4chanic/
http://sites.google.com/site/artandwhatnot/
http://characterdesigns.com/
http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-3.html
http://finaltrinity.tumblr.com/post/13163064364/art-references-tumblr-accounts
http://fusroda.com/resources/

>fellowBro's books :
http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8

>Figure Drawing Tool:
http://pixelovely.com/gesture/figuredrawing.php
http://posemaniacs.com/

>Photoshop Brushes
http://cgsociety.org/index.php/CGSFeatures/CGSFeatureSpecial/tower_of_evil

[Anonymous No.2144441]

>>2144438
anon do you think is any better?

[Anonymous No.2144448]

quick doodle; started out as a test for some pens I just bought (they're bad) turned into shading practice. I can't even into shading, fuck this shit

[Anonymous No.2144449]

added some details

[Anonymous No.2144454]

[Anonymous No.2144455]

[Anonymous No.2144469]

anon, do you think is any better? anyway ,thanks for the advice you gave me

[Anonymous No.2144471]

>>2144455
Looking cool so far
Change the white background and get some more contrast in the color temp.
Please finish this anon!!

[Anonymous No.2144475]

>>2144471

some imaginative work, no reference, no cheating, testing my capability.

[Anonymous No.2144480]

>>2144475
Reference is not cheating. Anyways, looks kinda cool, I like the unorthidox method of rendering. The design is pretty weak though, just random unappealing shapes and not much functionality. Also the style and symmetry is well suited for a graphic approach, so I think you should continue the light background down behind him at the bottom as well rather than using dark values there. I'd also grab some reference for the face as right now the proportions and perspective of all the features are just a tiny bit off and it is throwing it off.

[Anonymous No.2144493]

>>2144480

Thanks a lot dude, yeah you're right i need to introduce some nice edges here and there and some more interesting values, as well as spend more time on the design. I think the pose is super stiff, not sure how to get rid of that habit but I guess gesture drawing will help me! Thanks again man.

Will use a face for reference next time, I might attempt a full piece, but I will push this one even further before I move on.

PS- Cheating as in, photobashing or textures or w/e :P

[Anonymous No.2144499]

finally finished this nasty fucker

[Anonymous No.2144501]

WIP

[Anonymous No.2144514]

Working on a portrait.

[Anonymous No.2144522]

[Anonymous No.2144529]

>>2144469
I tried doing this too. I don't know how you can stand it. It's like trying to learn how to play the guitar when it's out of tune.

You need to use something better. You are making it so much harder on yourself.

[Anonymous No.2144531]

>>2144529
You compressed her head and hair too much.

[Anonymous No.2144535]

>>2144529
oh, i see, i really can't provide an explanation for why i use ms paint, an, hey, other anon, do you think this one is any better? thank for the advice you gave me

[Anonymous No.2144536]

>>2144531
>her
>not hammer dick

[Anonymous No.2144547]

Thank you for the feedback.

>>2142368
Thanks. I like kronprinz.

>>2142371
That was somewhat intended. I was trying to to do a hard lighting on her chest, with the bounced light going to her face, as I was inspired by a chinese painter who uses a similar lighting situation long ago. I also intended to go way darker with her face, but I lighten it up anyway. Clearly it was not enough.

>>2142737
About the lighting, see above.
I'll concede about the cloth. I'll probably get to fixing it later probably.

>the way you rendered the tits and anatomy on the whole body
>also the head looks as if it doesnt belong to the body

Can you explain what you meant by these? Thank you.

>>2142901
I feel that you get good at rendering by spending some time on your painting and have a clear predicted outcome in your head. Then, you can learn to be more efficient with you work flow to create a more finished look in less strokes.

[Anonymous No.2144548]

>>2144535
No stick to the other one and fix the structure.

[Anonymous No.2144569]

>>2144535
fyi anon you can use the 1 pixel pencil tool in photoshop to draw just like in paint. On top of that you have much more options like layers and keyboard shortcuts.

Her eyes seem to be the most off. Their position (too close together), shape, and where they are looking are completely different from the photo. For starters look at the position of her left eye in relation to her nose. And I don't think the freckles are translating well. it looks like acne. Unless you wanted it to look like that.

[Anonymous No.2144574]

first time posting on /ic/. critique
I already see the upper arm on the left is to short.

[Anonymous No.2144607]

>>2144574
head too big

[Anonymous No.2144609]

>>2144574
why does he? have a vagina?

[Anonymous No.2144613]

>>2144501
I don't know which is better or when to use em. Hard lines or soft lines.

[Anonymous No.2144629]

>>2144607
ok thanks
>>2144609
funsies

[Anonymous No.2144633]

>>2144629
also I think he's too narrow even for a skinny guy

[Anonymous No.2144636]

Where do I learn to render.

[Anonymous No.2144637]

>>2144636
Bruhh, you could definitely create something horrible for the next dark souls.

[Anonymous No.2144638]

>>2144633
ah shit yeah, i gave him jesustorso but fucked it up.

[Anonymous No.2144639]

>>2144636
hot

[Anonymous No.2144667]

>>2144547
>you get good at rendering by spending some time
Yeah that seems to be the only answer. I'm doing my best with this one.
>>2144636
>Where do I learn to render.
Question of the hour. That creature looks awesome, anyway.

[Anonymous No.2144741]

what's the best layer mode to go from bw to colour?

[Anonymous No.2144776]

>>2144531
Yeah, it looks like I started to care less about proportion the further from her face I drew.

>>2144535
It's a step up from the one in the old thread. Your lines around the face are more concise and accurate, but they still lack the quality to make the picture any good. Honestly, if you're going to keep using msPaint, then you should do this drawing in a light gray, then use the curved line tool in black to get the clean lines you want.

Also the freckles are not reading at all as freckles. You lack any sort of line variation and it makes the rest of the picture very busy and labored. The eye has no place to rest. At least fill in the dark areas with a bigger brush and focus on making your lines with the least amount of strokes as possible.

the 1 px brush is kicking your ass.


>>2144741
Color mode.

[Anonymous No.2144781]

>>2144667
I think your main problem is that your values are to much all over the place. To much contrast when you should keep the values tighter and keep the contrast for where you want the eyes to go.

[Anonymous No.2144801]

>>2144781
more like this

[Anonymous No.2144807]

meh

[Anonymous No.2144821]

Screwing around. Testing Ray Frenden stuff for greyscale and experimenting with values and texture.

[Anonymous No.2144828]

>>2144636

Draw an egg, pick direction of light, grab a dark grey brush and experiment around. If it looks good you're on the right track. If not, delete layer and start over.

You can use reference for this.

[Anonymous No.2144866]

Trying to capture some ideas, but I lack the skill to make them seem interesting, Feels bad.

[Anonymous No.2144884]

>>2144866
You have to just push through until you get there.

There is a time when you like the stuff you draw, but you have to get through a thousand unsatisfactory drawings to get there.

[Anonymous No.2144902]

I have been trying to do like this painting about roadside picnic scene

[Anonymous No.2144923]

>>2144866
Holy mama!
Harry Potter returns!

[Anonymous No.2144963]

>>2144902
Still sketching out some ideas.
It's fun to paint after 7 month break. I've improved like 5x since I've forgotten bad habits and I can focus on learning good ones.

[Anonymous No.2144966]

>>2144884
True dat, its just so frustrating, want to git gud fast.
Back to studying shit.

>>2144923
Harry? Harry who?

[Anonymous No.2144975]

I'm trying so hard to draw this girl but it keeps coming out terribly... It's so frustrating to clearly see it in my mind and not be able to put it on paper. Can any anons with artistic talent help me draw her? I would be forever grateful

[Anonymous No.2144976]

>>2144975
Fuck off

[Anonymous No.2144977]

>>2144976
Lol thanks man

[Anonymous No.2144997]

Working on a commission and just, bleh, I dunno.
Crit, please!
Halp!

[Anonymous No.2144999]

>>2144975
>lack
Are u kidding me? I get that she's your crush but that necklace, those nose genetics and that fucking bullring, bet her jawline a shit too, tumblerina of/10

drop that shit, also its fucking easy to paint this, its even front view, any kid can do that

[Anonymous No.2145000]

>>2144975
das a super homely girl brah I hope you are nailing it

you sure you wana put forth the effort to draw her?

[Anonymous No.2145001]

>>2144997
tits sag more, lower leg is really weird

[Anonymous No.2145003]

[Anonymous No.2145004]

>>2144999
trips of truth

[Anonymous No.2145005]

>>2145001
Cheers. That leg is driving me nuts. Glad someone confirmed it looks wrong.

[Anonymous No.2145006]

>>2145005
Isn't there a porn thread here somewhere?

[Anonymous No.2145012]

[Anonymous No.2145013]

>>2145006
Didn't spot it. I'll have a look and skedaddle over there.

[Anonymous No.2145058]

[Anonymous No.2145068]

>>2145012
the mouth is wrong, look at your ref and youll see it, the colors are really lacking brightness too, unless you wanted to go for that look

[Anonymous No.2145077]

>>2144781
>>2144801
Bah ya couple of showoffs!
I see the differences although it's kinda hard for me to understand why they're different so when it comes to me changing it, I'll do the best I can. Right now I'm still trying to define the forms because I already have a hard enough time just doing that. Once I have that together I might be able to do some of the light and value corrections you guys are talking about.
Thanks!

[Anonymous No.2145102]

Am I the only one here who this happens to constantly?
>Have an annoying drawing problem that's crippling (Proportion issue, or misunderstanding, shit like that)
>Try to power through, get frustrated
>Eventually figure it out in a week
>Later find an old art book/something in Loomis I bought that teaches you how to solve that exact issue
>Thought this section was a pointless waste of time the first time and didn't pay attention
Like, I've got few dozen books and probably every video tutorial out there on drawing and so much shit that I went through and only now years later am I finally starting to understand how important it is. Or I just missed the solution entirely and could've saved myself years of trouble.

[Anonymous No.2145104]

>>2145058
nice markmaking
i know you're going for a 'style,' but i think you still need some indication of this plane change (pic related)
you probably could get away with de-emphasizing it a bit but ignoring it completely is a little strange imo

[Anonymous No.2145105]

>>2145102
Art books take on a whole new meaning when you have your own experience to base it off of. This is why they're often worth revisiting a year or two down the line - might reinforce what you learned, or you might find new gems of information that you missed the first time through.

[Anonymous No.2145106]

I have a problem, /ic/. Whenever I try to draw something from my own head instead of studying a reference, it always seems to come out uninteresting and uninspired.

I just started on this, but I'm not really sure how to take it to where I want it to be. The idea is that it would be a little "terrarium world" or something along those lines.

I'm not really sure what advice I'm asking for really, I'm just venting my frustration at my lack of ability I guess.

[Anonymous No.2145110]

really frustrated, don't like the angle.

[Anonymous No.2145112]

>>2144613
Missed opportunity to put a toobrush there.

[Anonymous No.2145123]

>>2145110
This shows how I can waste time and do better in 2 minutes.

[Anonymous No.2145124]

[Anonymous No.2145139]

[Anonymous No.2145140]

Doodling around.

[Anonymous No.2145154]

>>2144438
come draw with us on wall of fame
http://wall-of-fame.com/
many great artists

[Anonymous No.2145179]

how long does it take you guys to finish artwork? Like a commissioned one. How about the ones you post in here?

[Anonymous No.2145185]

>>2145179
Finished artwork should be around 10 to 20 hours of work for a full illustration. Characters should be less. Stuff people post in here is usually from 30 minutes to a couple hours of work.

[Anonymous No.2145212]

>>2145139
Characters don't feel grounded in the environment, and the lighting isn't consistent across characters and the background. I think you need to take more time in planning out your big value shapes compositionally, and in turn plan out and identify all of your light sources in the scene and their relative strength. It feels like you have a vague idea of what you want your lights to do, but you aren't consistent enough with it to really sell it.

Characters feel off balance. No real sense of weight or counterweight, everything is near massless. In fact, when I saw the initial drawing you posted I assumed the girl on the left was sitting on a counter or ledge. You also have the girl on the right lifting 100+lbs on only her lower back. A lot of this can be excused in pin-ups, but I do think you could take more care to sell it to the audience.

Lastly to throw in my two cents, I sincerely hope that this isn't the only type of content you draw and paint. Granted it's an anonymous board, or maybe you don't post anything but your WoW(?) lesbian pinups, but I want to make sure you're expanding beyond your clear comfort zone. Do you attend life drawing classes? Do you sketch people in the park? Do you draw vehicles and buildings on the street? Do you go outdoors and do some plein air studies of nature? Do you do master studies? I worry that you might be cycling in your own little circle, repeating the same content and dooming yourself to make the same mistakes because you aren't branching out, and you aren't observing life. If you do study from life already, then that's great and keep it up. Nothing wrong with having a niche you enjoy drawing either way.

[Anonymous No.2145214]

drew my parents house

[Anonymous No.2145218]

>>2145214
Use a variety of harnesses to achieve a greater range of values. The only thing I can really say is off is your value organization- it doesn't read very well. Pretty much everything else is sex. how long did this take?

[Anonymous No.2145221]

>>2145140
very nice brush economy, do you have a tumblr?

[Anonymous No.2145225]

>>2145212
thanks, I really didn't know what lights, background etc. I wanted, just made things up us I went.
>I sincerely hope that this isn't the only type of content you draw and paint.
yeah, I do photo studies, little bit life sketches and so on I just dont post it

[Anonymous No.2145228]

>>2145185
thanks. I usually work quick but i wanna set a time that I should finish my work so i don't take too little or too much time. I usually do 2 drawings a day

[Anonymous No.2145234]

>>2145218
2 hours. i tried using pencils up to 5B, guess i could go darker next time. i tried not to be precious with the markmaking. just get the job done.

[Anonymous No.2145240]

>>2145225
>thanks, I really didn't know what lights, background etc. I wanted, just made things up us I went.
There's your chance to play around with thumbnails to try out different lighting schemes very quickly, then pick the strongest and gather/shoot references if needed. If you don't have a strong idea of your lighting early on in the process, you run the risk of having confused/inconsistent lighting.

>yeah, I do photo studies, little bit life sketches and so on I just dont post it
That's fair. Be sure your doing still life paintings in addition to your sketches. Nothing teaches you more about painting realistic light than painting something that's lit in front of you where you can easily identify and control all the light sources to your liking. Grabbing a lamp and painting an apple on your desk will teach you a lot about light - more than the average photo study will. Right now I feel your ability to depict light is consistently weaker than your drawing ability from the stuff you've posted over the last while.

[Anonymous No.2145253]

[Anonymous No.2145321]

>>2145214
nice job, Brian!

[Anonymous No.2145327]

wip - basically practicing drawing using reference images. I used to think it was some sort of ''cheating'' but I'm trying really hard to get that idea out of my head.

[Anonymous No.2145351]

i feel like its too clustered and the lazers look bad. any tips?

[Anonymous No.2145377]

>>2145253
Maltan plz go back to 2ch

[Anonymous No.2145379]

>>2144438

[Anonymous No.2145486]

Some randomly generated NPC prompts

[Anonymous No.2145509]

Changed the legs position.
Let me know any other thing i can get fixed.
I'm not so happy with that knee though

[Anonymous No.2145515]

my folds need work, recently purchased Burne hogarths wrinkles and drapery. spend this weekend looking into it

[Anonymous No.2145517]

i dont even know wha the fuck em i doing anymore. ive recently realised that everything i have been doing till now is drawing with FINGERS and bit of a WRIST.
pic related is what happens when i force myels not to do it and just lock the fingers in place - million of sketchy lines everywhere. i just cant seem to get any precise lines down.

ever since the realisation few days ago, it feels like im doing something terribly terribly wrong

id be most thankful for any advice on how what to do in order to fix this

[Anonymous No.2145538]

>>2144499
I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Anonymous No.2145542]

>>2144866
i like them a lot. maybe the first one is lacking a more ecompassive atmosphere, like things are not working well with one another, but i love where you're heading to

[Anonymous No.2145546]

>>2145517
There are no tools, only rules.
If you draw nicely with your wrist, by all means do it. It's just suggested to draw with your arm because it distributes the stress better. Your arm and all its parts will not fail under the same stress that will damage your wrist. Also, if you train it, you get better line control. You don't need to draw with your arm.
It looks a lot like most of your lines are rushed guesses. Slow down and think of each line, practice each line before you put it down. Don't use erasers or ctrl+z, learn how to put a line where it belongs the first time through

[Anonymous No.2145556]

>>2144966

these are quite confusing I recommend learning to partition value ranges.

For example, stick a 3 separate value rangers for background, middle ground and foreground, that way your image reads a lot lot better. Here's an example of what Im talking about.

http://muddycolors.blogspotcouk/2012/08/composition-basics-value-structure.html

put a dot in between co and uk in the link ^

[Anonymous No.2145560]

>>2145327
read >>2144438
>downsized to around 1000 pixels wide

[Anonymous No.2145568]

Question is furry art allow in draw threads or is that gay as duck

[Anonymous No.2145574]

How do I make these colors work?
It's fan art for this video so it can't be changed.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ve1Xe9CZw-s

11:00

[Anonymous No.2145655]

>>2144449
gorgeous colours! composition is a little iffy for me because the pillar seems like it's not trying to be in the center or 2/3 of the way down. ya know what I mean?

>>2144499
Very very cool!!!

>>2144613
hard lines, up the contrast, left eye is unfocused.
right now those finger claws don't look very sharp because you've shaded it fuzzily.

>>2144636
love some of the elements on that creature!

>>2145106
that is because you need to start with thumbnails! trust me, they help so much. Also, it helps if you have a story or idea behind the things you are drawing.

>>2145509
the back leg is actually drawn like she is opening her legs. like more than 90 degrees. have the back leg come more towards us and draw a more rounded knee. A problem I see is that the legs also don't look like they are coming from the same pelvis.
draw the other arm. where is it?
the bun placement is not aligned. One bun is coming from the side while the other looks to be almost directly on top of her head.
The cloth on the back of her sailor fuku is to squiggly.
I get that the extremely curly hair is stylistic but maybe have the one tail closest to us be pointing more up since she is jumping down.
eye closest to us should be closer to the nose.
neck isn't really connecting to the base of the skull.
forehead is a little short.

I thinking you did a pretty good job! it looks good.

>>2145517
you have furry lines because you aren't committing to a line. once you put down your pen, don't lift it up until it's the curve you want it to be. Practice that and you'll be okay!!!

>>2145574
it's not working because that isn't a great color palate. there's a tangent on his hat and the darker line in the middle. If it can't be changed then let it be! I think it looks pretty good.

[Anonymous No.2145714]

>>2145221
Thanks!

http://h-draws.tumblr.com/

[Anonymous No.2145743]

Thoughts? Critiques?

[Anonymous No.2145746]

>>2145743

[Anonymous No.2145753]

>>2145743

I like your line quality. I see his left arm is shaking a bit from the line's coming from it.

What is it suppose to be? I see a low jaw and a flat nose.

[Anonymous No.2145757]

>>2145753
thanks. A made up skull

[Anonymous No.2145791]

How do I get more stable lines? I use Photoshop, is there a setting in there for a stabilizer?

[Cuestionador No.2145802]

Some shit i draw recently...

[Anonymous No.2145821]

>>2145791
There's tons of ways to do lines in PS, so look for lining tuts to see how other people do it. But this is what I do;

Sketch it out, then make new layer for lineart and use fast, confident strokes. Abuse the undo-hotkey until you get the right line laid down. Repeat until everything's lined. It's a bit tedious but I prefer it over other techniques I've seen.

Also, her clavicles are jacked up. They'd either be straight (shoulder to shoulder) or they'd dip down slightly at this angle. And the gap between them is too wide.

[Anonymous No.2145838]

>>2145556
I was not doing value studies

[Anonymous No.2145843]

[Anonymous No.2145844]

>>2145843
Apologies for the camera, it's the best I've got for the time being.

[Anonymous No.2145847]

[Anonymous No.2145862]

>>2145791
you need to learn to not depend on the stabilizer for doing lines, just do long confident lines and you'll be fine, godspeed

[Anonymous No.2145917]

Trying my hand at horses today, and ahaha jesus they look retarded. It's so damn hard to get them to look like they have a sense of motion without making them all dumb

[Anonymous No.2145918]

>>2145917
stop using fancy brushes and study some animation fundamentals. walk cycles and all that.

[Anonymous No.2145920]

>>2145917

horse on the right is good, horse on the left is the definition of HERPDERPHURRDURRRPERDERDERS

[Anonymous No.2145921]

>>2145917

Muybridge has frame by frame photographs of horse gaits. Go look them up, right now you misplaced their legs, its the most glaring on the one on the left. You can keep the one on the right as it is but bring one of the hindleg opposite of the foreleg thats being lifted the highest forward. Im not at home right now but otherwise i would have redlined for you.

[Anonymous No.2145926]

picked this one up again since I had no time for it. Should I add more women ?

[Anonymous No.2145932]

>>2145921
>>2145921

Welp my phone fucked up the order of my sentences... Sorry, this word spaghetti doesnt make sense, ill rewrite my crit when i get home.

[Anonymous No.2145933]

>>2145926

I've been following this and I love it so so much. Do you have a blog? Or where can I see more of your work?

[Anonymous No.2145935]

>>2145926
God damnit i want to fuck now

[Anonymous No.2145937]

>>2145926
add some witch imagery brah

[Anonymous No.2145940]

>>2145926
did you just copy the hand from the cover of a book of a hundred hands or Hogarth or whatever

[Anonymous No.2145944]

>>2145940

the entire guy is copy pasted from some hogarth book.

[Anonymous No.2145945]

>>2145933
nope sorry, I just created a deviant art, but it's still empty. I don't know when i'll upload all my stuff there.

>>2145935
I know that man has an effect on you :^)

>>2145937
maybe will. pretty empty right now.

>>2145940
Nope, literally everything in this is done from imagination or my hands. but I take it as a compliment, maybe ?

[Anonymous No.2145947]

>>2145945
how dare you accuse me of homosex, you fuck

[Anonymous No.2145950]

>>2145944
uhhh If you really think that's somewhat comparable to hogarth's work I'm honored, but it seems completely different to me and not even in the same style..

I personally don't really like his anatomy, find it too... round ? or something, never read his books for the previous reason either.

>>2145947
>ayyy

[Anonymous No.2145958]

>>2145944
Its not even fucking close tho you jelly cunt

[Anonymous No.2145965]

>>2145940
>>2145944
You gotta get your shit straight guys.

[Anonymous No.2146013]

3h sketch. Practicing more coloring from greyscale and composition

[Anonymous No.2146058]

>>2145655
Thank you a lot anon. Those are really helpfull!
Yes her other arm is missing, this was a pencil sketch and i've working on it digitally piece by piece. I'm gonna draw it later.
The leg at the back i was going to set it properly as you mentioned it, I was looking right now at the right position. I'll work on that and the pelvis!
I didn't notice the bums, I'll fix those.
The clothing will be the final step to fix.
Thank you again!

[Anonymous No.2146060]

>>2145746
how big of an influence is moebius to you?

[Anonymous No.2146096]

any gud?

[Anonymous No.2146102]

>>2146013
Love that, the colors are so nice and fresh.

Here's my idea generation sketch

[Anonymous No.2146113]

>>2145917
I worked on this a bit more, since what >>2145918
and >>2145921 made a lot of sense. Though I'm not dropping my brushes, it's just a hard round with a bit of texture to it and another one that's a bit softer, anyway.

The walk/gallop cycles thing is so fucking helpful, jesus christ, but still a couple of things I need to figure out.

>>2146013
Sweet colors, dude. Think you're overdoing the reflected light in the shadows.
>>2146102
why the low contrast?

[Anonymous No.2146115]

>>2146113
Cause I'm pretty bad with values. If you could tell me how to improve it, I would greatly appreciate it.

I love your horseymen, so dynamic

[Anonymous No.2146138]

>>2146115
Thanks, man, appreciated.

With your painting, just try to keep in mind that the closer you are to the camera the range of value will increase. You can still use brights in the foreground, but the darks will be darker. If for example 1 is darkest and 10 lightest then try to keep it so that in the background you'll use the range from 5-10 and in the foreground you'll use a 1-10 and so on.
It's pretty simple, I really only did a small value adjustment on the foreground.

[Anonymous No.2146139]

>>2146096
no

>>2146113
really good values, nice clean shapes, great composition and poses, good job.

[Anonymous No.2146153]

Starting to get a bit more serious with my drawings now and spent a couple of hours watching artists on youko and analyzing their work. Holy motherfucking shit the skill on these dudes has a way of sucking motivation out of me. But at the same time I kind of want to reach said heights. Inb4 not your personal blog. Homie pls

[Anonymous No.2146158]

>>2146058
>>2145655
>>2145509
I'm having troubles with the hips guys.
I've corrected the front and back legs, they seem to be better now. Also the neck now seems better attached to the skull.
I would love to have feedback on this minor corrections before going further.

[Anonymous No.2146162]

>>2146158
The back leg looks shorter now that i see it. Gonna fix that.

[Anonymous No.2146164]

thoughts on this one? be harsh.

[Anonymous No.2146165]

>>2145838

you are a fucking pleb. Its a rule of thumb, non-dependent on what goal you're going for turd.

[Anonymous No.2146196]

>>2146138
Thank you a lot, Good to finally have some concrete stuff on the value ranges, cause I for some reason always end up thinking something like 5-8 for background and 1-8 for foreground or something. Thanks agiain

[Anonymous No.2146201]

>>2146164
Harden those edges! Genereally soft can be used when the edge is in shadow or deep mist, but if edge is on something that is illuminated, especially when silhouetted by a lightsource like that, they should be supercrisp.

I like it otherwise, nice job.

[Gym Dog No.2146206]

>>2145821

So it's all about having the initial confident line put down first? Okay cool, I agree that's a skill I will have to force myself to learn. But what about line weight? Like, if I want a line to go from narrow to thick? I tried doing something like that with this picture, but to do that I zoomed in and carved out the lines using the Eraser tool.

Also, thanks about the clavicles I didn't have good reference. Dip down silghtly like this?
> \ /

or this?

> / \


>>2145862
Thank you!

[Anonymous No.2146213]

>>2146164

you can tell it's supposed to be a sun from the context, but it looks so much like an explosion.

[Anonymous No.2146225]

>>2146164
You have the coolest sketchbook on permanoobs. Just stumbled on it and I fucking love your style you have so much potential.

[Anonymous No.2146232]

>>2146213

>sun

I don't know about that anon. The mood suggests it's a moon.

[Anonymous No.2146234]

>>2146164
Do you have a blog?

[Anonymous No.2146238]

Japanese mask study

[Anonymous No.2146255]

[Anonymous No.2146257]

>>2146238
>>2146255
Fucking great

[Anonymous No.2146281]

>>2146096
I love the sun and the clouds, the color of the grass doesnt seem quite right compared to the rest of the picture

[Anonymous No.2146282]

>>2146164
Overall I really like it but the sky and the sun(?) look like something solid standing behind them and not like sky and sun.

[Anonymous No.2146285]

I have to say, the last few drawthreads (including this one) had some pretty good stuff.
What's happening /ic/?

[Anonymous No.2146286]

>>2146164
It's a bit ambiguous as to what is behind them--the sun? moon? explosion? The soft edges on it are kind of confusing, as is the massive size.

Also the image is really flat at the moment and the composition feels a bit too static/boring.

Maybe try to find some better ref, and see what makes them work. Pic related shows the colours of a sunset and makes the sun a stronger lightsource and really pushes the mood aspect to levels that yours doesn't. Figure out why you want to show that angle with the sun behind them, and how to show it well and what it would mean.

[Anonymous No.2146303]

>>2144535

[Anonymous No.2146313]

sketch
i kinda wanted to render it a bit more and turn it into something nice. feedback would be appreciated
i think the shape/shading on the shoulder area needs improvement tbh

[Anonymous No.2146319]

>>2146255
ds nostalgic and that small mushrooms made me laugh, good job

[Anonymous No.2146321]

>>2146164
dont blurr outer edges, we should see it clearer, our eyes cant adjust to see the moon texture, which is what you did, that moon pops up so badly, make it less contrasted with the sky, draw the air

colors workk really well, poses are readable even that blurry, don't blurr the most important thing of the image next time :P

[Anonymous No.2146336]

>>2146164
I like it

[Anonymous No.2146342]

>>2146164
You can make horses heads a bit more contrasted so they pop in front of riders heads. Like make them darker or something. I really dig how u made grass - nice depth. And I think you could even leave those figures blurry if u want but then you should make that sunmoonexplosion ball a bit more readable if you want it to be the main object. But overall i like how it looks cool mood and colours aaand textures.
>>2146257>>2146319
Thanks guys. Yeah i thought of ds while makin it.

[Anonymous No.2146367]

>>2146113

Much better!

[Anonymous No.2146437]

thumbnail i'm working on, i'm gonna use this to make a colored version.

[Anonymous No.2146454]

>>2146313
worked on i some more
gonna start blending/smudging/rendering now - any feedback?

[Anonymous No.2146466]

is pixel art allowed here?

[Anonymous No.2146467]

did some drawings today

[Anonymous No.2146469]

>>2146467
these are just measurements because i suck and can't into the subtle shadows the lighting makes during the day classes.

[Anonymous No.2146533]

Tear me apart so that I may rebuild.

[Anonymous No.2146534]

just finished this. i'm still beginner i think

[Anonymous No.2146537]

>>2146534
God awful

[Anonymous No.2146538]

>>2146534
>i'm still beginner
>i think

[Anonymous No.2146540]

>>2146534
>i think
being this humble only makes you a bigger asshole. you know what? you think you're too good for us? fuck you.

[Anonymous No.2146544]

>>2146534
> i think

You expect someone to come out and give you praise?

Bitch

[Anonymous No.2146545]

>>2146537
Good point. I'll work on that
>>2146538
>>2146540
I was just typing without thinking. It doesnt mean anything. I KNOW im a beginner.

[Anonymous No.2146547]

>>2146534
>>2146533

Interesting juxtaposition.

[Anonymous No.2146550]

>>2146533
That nose reminds of an anal prolapse

[Anonymous No.2146554]

>>2146534
Wow anon, that's awesome :D I wish I could draw like that! I'd def show it off to all my friends.

[Anonymous No.2146564]

>>2146545
listen buddy, we here at ic we value quality and mastery in art, most of us are taught by the great masters themselves, and you think you can just come in here and pollute our eyes? you need to get your reality checked my friend, have some RESPECT.

[Anonymous No.2146571]

>>2146534
ayy lmao

[Anonymous No.2146572]

The sketch for a Final Fantasy 7 print I'm going to sell at a con.

The actual print is a bit taller so I'm going to have the Highwind exploding above them (which is why Cid is miffed and everyone is falling.)
Any thoughts?

[Anonymous No.2146575]

>>2146454
this is it for now
the far side of the face feels kinda gross and crunchy atm. feedback on that part in particular would be appreciated

[Anonymous No.2146576]

>>2146572
Why do you tumblr people all have the same art style

[Anonymous No.2146581]

>>2146575
i feel like the bright background is taking away from the highlight of the face, but it also have the inverse effect on the darker values of the face. maybe you could try something like pic related.

[Anonymous No.2146582]

>>2146576
I like Don Bluth and Glen Keane, so you might see a lot of that in there. I also like Bengus and the Udon team from Capcom in the 90s.

Not sure what a tumblr style is though.

[Anonymous No.2146603]

>>2146572
looks really nice, man. you got anywhere you post your stuff?

[Anonymous No.2146611]

>>2146603
Thanks!
http://thepixelbuster.tumblr.com/

[Anonymous No.2146628]

[Anonymous No.2146638]

>>2146575
I find that far side is good. What i find strange is actually the other eye, seems it's lower than the other??

[Anonymous No.2146643]

>>2145940
are you talking about this one ? cause there's not a single similarity.

[Anonymous No.2146696]

>>2145327
You have a Deviantart?

[Anonymous No.2146699]

please crit, crits or advice about markmaking really appreciated

[Anonymous No.2146706]

>>2146437
For my taste the points of interest in your composition are too close together, my eyes don't really "wander" around the image. Maybe you separate those two points (the rock and the exposed sky between the mountains). The mountains should also be brighter in the distance.

[Anonymous No.2146730]

Never bin too great with color pallets, any pointers?

[Anonymous No.2146741]

>>2146466
of course it is, you don't need any permission to do anything in here.

[Anonymous No.2146754]

how do they look?

[Anonymous No.2146756]

>>2146754
wow, great shading and lines!
upper right looks spectacular.

[Anonymous No.2146757]

>>2146730
resize and people will pay attention

[Anonymous No.2146787]

[Anonymous No.2146792]

>>2146787
do you have a tumblr?

[Anonymous No.2146799]

>>2146730
Do you also have a Deviantart?

[Anonymous No.2146804]

>>2146792

DA, now that's it's summer I'm going to upload stuff more frequently

http://mikejordana.deviantart.com/gallery/52207253/I-LOVE-THESE

[Anonymous No.2146818]

>>2145509
I'm enjoining this.
Corrected legs, hips, bigger forehead, set eye closer to nose, buns, the skirt waist was the thing that was out of place, corrected that too. The ribbon, added boobs. Sketched new hair and the other arm.

Sorry for the messiness, It's just easy for me to keep track of changes like this.

[Anonymous No.2146844]

>>2144438
1 hour in, gonna finish today. Anything you like/dont like

[Anonymous No.2146851]

>>2146787

lolled so hard at the text. also awesome awesome pic. reminds me a bit of zedig. and it has that animation vibe where the plate is painted and the characters are soft of drawn ontop in a somewhat different look. extremely appealing work man.

[Anonymous No.2146853]

>>2146787
saved, made me laugh and also something i do when i go hiking, well done anon.

[Anonymous No.2146888]

does /ic/ like impressionistic work?

[Anonymous No.2146902]

>>2146699
it's really underrendered, if you had spent more time blending it would look better.

[Anonymous No.2146908]

>>2146281
it's not grass, it's a crop field, the steams were more blue than anything.

[Anonymous No.2146910]

Because I was bored.

[Anonymous No.2146917]

>>2146888

Is that the google artificial intelligence? I don't understand how it works or how it's intelligent at all, looks just like a photoshop filter.

Also why does everyone post that picture of the guy with the gun? Looks like shit, is it like a meme?

[Anonymous No.2146941]

from imagination

>>2146787
fuck this is really pretty. really nice texture separations

[Anonymous No.2146946]

Critique me please

[Anonymous No.2146950]

>>2146946
Nose looks way too broad.

[Anonymous No.2146954]

>>2146799
yeh, username is Anermik.

[Anonymous No.2146956]

>>2146941
god damn get some reference on that asap

[Anonymous No.2146960]

>>2146941
Dude, as much as I like your other stuff, this looks like utter garbage.

Scrap it, and get some basic practice from imagination, like doing faces from the front out of your head or something and facial features by themselves, just get a sense for how stuff looks.

[Anonymous No.2146966]

[Anonymous No.2146969]

>>2146941
dont tell me you are a second firez

[Anonymous No.2146981]

>>2146941
Form comes before values or rendering. You need to tighten up your drawing first before jumping into painting.

Her proportions are all over the place, for example, her head is terribly big for her torso. The skull also looks squished by her headband.

Another is the way you painted her face. Remember, when painting, you are actually sculpting a subject using light. How you apply values dictates how she exist in 3d space. Her facial features sink and protrudes in a funny way, especially around the eyebrow ridge and eye socket. Get a reference picture, or light yourself in front of a mirror.

Values are okay, but you might need to consider the bounce light coming from her surroundings. If your intention is to stylize, remember that when you approach the rendering in realism style, it would highlight the 'uncanny valley'-ness factor by a lot.

Anyway, when painting a young woman's face, one way to cheat is to use much softer rendering style, and to downplay the form shadows on her face.

[www.mountainpassdesign.com No.2146985]

Here is my latest painting Elder Komodo, featuring movement and cool warm contrast.

[Anonymous No.2146990]

>>2146985
No it doesn't

[Anonymous No.2146992]

mangs why's it look shit when I zoom in?

[Anonymous No.2147001]

>>2146985

you are in for a fun ride on /ic/ with that combination of skill level and confidence

[Anonymous No.2147004]

>>2147001
Considering he even started a new thread with such blatant wording, I'm guessing this is someone else trying to get /ic/ to hate on the original artist he hates for whatever reason.

[Anonymous No.2147007]

>>2146985
I don't think you know what those words mean.

[Anonymous No.2147032]

>>2146992
It already looks shit without zooming in friend.

[Anonymous No.2147039]

>>2146787
Looks nice, but you need to find your own artistic voice. This is just screaming "poor man's Zedig".

[Anonymous No.2147104]

>>2146981
Thanks for the crit fam i definitely jumped too fast to painting this time. What other proportional issues do you see? I feel like i struggle with that so much.

Also i cant respond to multiple people on mobile wtf

[Anonymous No.2147111]

>>2146787
Everybody here offering critique not realizing the dude is a lot more skilled than most people frequenting ic mfw :(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((

[Anonymous No.2147113]

>>2147111
>not realizing the dude is a lot more skilled than most people frequenting
People can see his skill level. And why would it make him immune to critique? Besides, if people just asspatted everyone who had a bit of skill then there would be no reason for them to post here.

[Anonymous No.2147126]

[Anonymous No.2147153]

>>2147113
>Being worse
>offering valuable critique
>okay.png

[Anonymous No.2147159]

>>2147126
What the fuck is this anon

[Anonymous No.2147164]

>>2147159
i think it is a bull

[Anonymous No.2147180]

>>2146238
>>2146255
Why doesn't anyone appreciate better standard of artworks on ic? Really beautiful

[Anonymous No.2147189]

>>2147180
because most people can't crit it and posting nothing but praise would look like circle jerking dick sucking like what you're doing right now.

[Anonymous No.2147196]

Red wici. Guys how do I into portrait drawing? Like the no bullshit types, seriously sick of drawing manga shit and leaving faces blank on my anatomy studies.

[Anonymous No.2147199]

>>2147196
Wrong thread to ask the question. But uh, it takes a long time to do good portraits. You need to study the skull, the planes of the face, some construction, the individual features etc. There are many books and videos that cover these to a greater or lesser degree.

[Anonymous No.2147201]

>>2147104
I won't list the proportion issues out since that would be too nitpicky and might not be as useful, but I'd advice to study the skull more. Vilppu has some really good lessons on it if you can find it. And also be sure to mirror your painting always, especially during the early stages. This is critical, to check the proportions, alignment, and general composition. I did a quick paintover, but it's far from perfect, especially with the proportions, but I try to iron out what I can.

Other things to point out, with that kind of lighting, you can play around with subsurface scattering. This is apparent usually on the edges of shadows, and if the light came from behind, the ears. The light bounces around inside the skin, against blood capillaries, reflecting the highly saturated reds.

You can also introduce more hues and colors. Even if you're aiming for something low key, some subtle hues can still be introduced.

About eyes, it's important to avoid giving her 'almond' shaped eyes. The curvature on the upper arc, and lower arc, if possible, not be in the same place.

About the design, the upper part of the corset thingy doesn't flatter her breasts in terms of shapes. It makes it look saggy. Try experimenting with shapes there.

Anyway, I can see that you have the general idea of the head down when you render her skin, but you still need to be careful with the forms.

[Anonymous No.2147206]

>>2147201
i dunno who you are anon but someday when claw my way out of the beginner thread i hope to get useful paintovers and tips from you.

[Anonymous No.2147207]

>>2147196
Have your read Keys to Drawing by Burt Dodson? Have you gotten passed symbol drawing? Do you draw from life often?

You should do all of these things if you haven't already.

[Anonymous No.2147211]

>>2147199
>>2147207
Thanks for the tips. Ill check out that book.

[Anonymous No.2147252]

>>2146754

>Middle right
>How many teeth does a skull have?
>Like a billion, right?
>I'll just draw a billion.

[Anonymous No.2147263]

Sketch gettin back into rap moosic
blap blap drive by with duh gat
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IIeSGUK-Lyo

[Anonymous No.2147264]

[Anonymous No.2147275]

>>2146581
>>2146638
still working.....

[Anonymous No.2147285]

rip me to pieces

[Anonymous No.2147297]

>>2147285
See
>>2145280

[Anonymous No.2147298]

>>2147264
that's dope man - u got a blog or somethin?

[Anonymous No.2147307]

>>2147298
thank you, yes, nonerandomdraw dot blogspot dot com

[Anonymous No.2147325]

>>2147263

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vmXBRviaWhE

great rendering so far, check this rap out tho

[Anonymous No.2147328]

drew these last night. used reference of another artist for the middle one.

[Anonymous No.2147380]

holy crap guys, didn't expect this much feedback and positive comments

>>2146201
noted!
>>2146213
>>2146232
it was meant to be the sun but i'll claim it's a moon from now on because i agree it looks more like one
>>2146225
man, thanks. too kind!
>>2146234
my tumblr is atmatmat.tumblr.com
>>2146282
good point, i agree. this is why initially i blurred the guys to sort unify the different layers of depth but it didn't work too well
>>2146286
thanks! good points. that ref would have helped a lot yeah.
>>2146321
noted for revision :<
>>2146336
lol
>>2146342
thanks anon, will try what you suggested with the horseheads

[Anonymous No.2147406]

unfinished stuff
light study kind of

[Anonymous No.2147415]

unfinished stuff i did for fun

[Anonymous No.2147433]

this is still very rough but please tear me a new one. how can I ditch stylizing my faces? art is hard.

[Anonymous No.2147435]

I'll be very grateful for any crits. this is still rough and I can't seem to ditch stylizing my faces and I hate it. pls halp

[Anonymous No.2147436]

>>2147201
I tried to do a bit of subsurface scattering on the ear but I suppose I couldve pushed it a bit more. Vilppu has so much shit to look through but I guess it's time to start digging. I definitely need to flip the canvas more I can instantly see all my problems now haha. Thank you so much for the paintover anon

[Anonymous No.2147446]

>>2147435
Face too big for head.
Unnatural pose. Pelvis probably needs more tilt.
Flat face.

[Anonymous No.2147447]

>>2146571
how can I morph the camera in the game to get this result?

[Anonymous No.2147453]

>>2147446
>Flat face.
don't think so, everything else pretty much fits hough

[Anonymous No.2147456]

Anyone know good video tutorial torrents? Videos are easier to follow.
Any subject is fine. Mostly interested in values though at the moment, but we can all improve all around I guess, so ill take deeper anatomy and whatever I can get my hands on pretty much. I can only find a couple myself because Im a scrub. Thanks guis

[Anonymous No.2147461]

>>2147453
>don't think so

hey man, your funeral. no skin off my teeth if you never learn.

[Anonymous No.2147471]

>>2147461
The face is distinctive and well drawn.
It has perspective and character, nothing much more to do in that early stage.
Explain what you find flat about it.

[Anonymous No.2147472]

>>2147275
>>2147275
the nose point it too high up, like REALLY FUCKIN HIGH UP, you need to bring it down, esp as it does not work with the nostrils at all. its just two different noses. the eye on the right is now weird, no ones eyes stick out that much. also what bothers me is that with all that blending you have lost any focus, no everything is a big blur and hard to look at.

[Anonymous No.2147473]

>Ask for critique
>"Nah"

[Anonymous No.2147476]

>>2147415
great, but if there's a light source shining on one side of her nose BUT the both sides of her cheeks... then it makes no sense. choose one - if both cheeks get light on them, so do both parts of the nose or the top of it.

[Anonymous No.2147478]

>>2147473
>ask for critique
>get critique with some shit on the side
>thanks for the critique, but i'll have to disregard this shit, I didn't really need it

[Anonymous No.2147482]

>>2147478
whatisdunning-kruger.tiff

[Anonymous No.2147486]

Critique?

[Anonymous No.2147487]

>>2147486
Wannabe Sinix

[Anonymous No.2147491]

>>2147476
Oh yeah i tried to make something in the middle but you are right :) ill fix it, thanks friend.

[Anonymous No.2147495]

>>2147473

I'm the one who drew it, and until now I didn't post again so the one you're arguing with isn't me. Thank you very mucb, I am going to look into it., I definitely agree about the pelvis and such, the gesutre I started with was a lot different and read better I think I always fuck up when I go in after that. I'm confused now about the face, if it is or isn't flat... I tried quite hard with constructing it properly and it's the one thing I spent the most time on so far. Anyway, thanks to both of you! I'm going to noodle with this again tomorrow with your crits noted.

[Anonymous No.2147497]

[Anonymous No.2147505]

>>2147495
>I'm confused now about the face, if it is or isn't flat
it isn't. that anon just made an unsophistcated comment

[Anonymous No.2147512]

>>2147472
>nose
>eye
alright, thanks
>blur
i'm going to pop in focal points with more clarity/hard-edged marks, don't worry

[Anonymous No.2147552]

>>2147497
nice :) I wish it was a bit crisper.
the loose inside of the car and the big brush strokes in the background bother me the most.
I would also check the door's bottom frame and its relation to the car's bottom frame.

[Anonymous No.2147570]

I feel like I'm getting a foothold on exteriors. This one felt a lot more natural.

Landscapes, on the other hand. Ugh. All the tutorials I've watched make it seem like you just have to brute force it. There is no method to it, you just have to know how to paint landscapes.

[Anonymous No.2147574]

>>2147570
I like it. It makes me feel cozy

[Anonymous No.2147592]

>>2147495
I like your attitude, so I'm going to spend the time to explain this to you. The face does read flat. The individual features are OK, but they're placed as if the face is flat.

Consider the nose and the mouth. They should both sit on (and therefore take on the perspective of) the denture sphere, which is like half an egg (cut lengthwise) glued on top of the lower half of the face.

The eyes as you drew them are in a straight line, whereas they should together form a slight curve (up or down, depending on head tilt... probably down like a smiley face in this drawing, because you see more the top of the head than the underside of the chin, so the head is tilted ever so slightly down). This is because the basic volume of the face is a cylinder.

Good luck.

[Anonymous No.2147601]

>>2147570
Nice box's, buildings don't tend to have flat faces though, unless its a glass-plane skyscraper and even then the joins aren't flush

[Anonymous No.2147612]

>>2147601
Well, this is my second exterior ever, so I'm still building my library/process. Makes sense that the buildings are generic looking.

Although, in old downtown areas, buildings often share walls, even if they are not the same height.

[Anonymous No.2147617]

>>2147612
keep sides and backsides of buildings flat, but go ham on the detail and perspective of frontal shots. It'l be a breeze for you

[Anonymous No.2147633]

>>2147617
That's a great piece of advice! Thanks

[Anonymous No.2147634]

>>2147633
Bruh you better post it once you're done

[Anonymous No.2147637]

drew my friend today. she is beautiful and im very lucky

[Anonymous No.2147651]

https://www.picarto.tv/live/channel.php?watch=pulseart

Come watch me doodle, doodle with me

doodle oodles of doodles

[Anonymous No.2147706]

>>2146113
Great values bruv. Front horse doesn't have to be the only dark thing, you can have hints of that perhaps under the other horse to bring it forward a bit more, but really nice anyway.

[Anonymous No.2147707]

>>2147275
>>2147472
yo, not sure if i addressed the problems, but more work in progress

[Anonymous No.2147711]

>>2147039
Seconded.

[Anonymous No.2147723]

>>2147707
IMO you just need some hard edges like this.

You're doing an awesome job by the way. Great style

[Anonymous No.2147725]

>>2147723
thanks. i was planning on hitting a lot of those edges on the right side anyways. i just hadnt got to it. been working on this off and on at work during downtime
i'll review the changes you made and apply the hard edges a bit more firmly in the spots you recommended :)

[Anonymous No.2147753]

Dead thred.

[Anonymous No.2147771]

Just finished this.

[Anonymous No.2147788]

1/2 Feels nice to have drawing time.

Crits welcome.

[Anonymous No.2147789]

2/2

[Anonymous No.2147800]

>>2147771
Looks like a photobashed mess. Anatomy is off and i cant tell if thats a male or a female.

[Anonymous No.2147814]

Chinese Beauty
Acrylic on canvas, 30 x 24 inches, 2015-07-09
C&C welcome!

[Anonymous No.2147849]

>>2147651
great stream if anyone was wondering. keep an eye on this guy

[Anonymous No.2147851]

Kill the thread!

[Anonymous No.2147855]

>>2147753
Dead board.

[Anonymous No.2147898]

this is called "Bone to Pick". gonna color it tomorrow

[Anonymous No.2147919]

>>2147898
nvm i colored it tonight

[Anonymous No.2147934]

>>2147552
Definitely gave me a kick to work more on this. Thank you. Current progress.

[Anonymous No.2147935]

>>2147919
Looks messy, but I like the idea. Might be cool if you went with a more graphic approach, or something akin to editorial illustrations.

[Anonymous No.2147936]

>>2147919
ooh, fun concept. love it.
if you're willing to revisit this, i would like to see it cleaner.

[Anonymous No.2147949]

>>2147415
Wellp, finished it kind of.

[Anonymous No.2147958]

>>2147934
Keep going, your rendering style gives me tingles
Watch the proportions of the tyres, they seem to be different sizes.

[Anonymous No.2147985]

>>2147934
Motherfucker i swear to god you are going to draw my yota now or going to die :/

[Anonymous No.2147986]

>>2147934
>>2147985
Because thats really cool yo

[Anonymous No.2147996]

>>2147592

Thank you fpr taking the time out of your day to write this. I get where you're coming from, lately I've been doing Reilley head abstractions studies and now I think I didn't apply those guidelines as well as I should have in this thing from imagination. I'm scared of samefacing I guess, don't want to use a mold too much out of that fear? Especially in the muzzle area I've foregone it. Again, thanks a bundle. I'm going to see if this is salvagable or if I just need to go and start over entirely.

[Anonymous No.2148058]

>>2147958
Any better?

>>2147986
Thanks.

[Anonymous No.2148113]

New Draw Thread!

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>>2144997
lemme see the finished version please. for research purposes.