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It's me again ; a while back I was asking for recommendations. I improved since then I want you to see my progress. 4 months apart
here's the first album this was 4 months
http://imgur.com/tIrDFh2,VALoQru,VcBTpw5,Lg4cZDq,zBYrfXK,gGKVahc,6tY1K5w,ssNn8EE,4wizHTI,1gm81Dx,TmprUrx#6


This was done within the last few weeks
http://imgur.com/4rUzgOJ,1djZUow,odTLwbD,ZnZpAYa,7Y2HtvP,lH3pcCY,rJhytDq#2

>> No.2139814

>>2139811
>muh views!
>muh upboats!

Just post the drawings here.

>> No.2139815

>>2139814
I don't use reddit; My computer is having problems opening photos

>> No.2139817

Draw lifeless objects like apples n shit.

>> No.2139820

>>2139817
My propose for drawing humans is to know them better. When I go to advance I want to draw uniforms. But I'll try new stuff

>> No.2139824

>>2139811
I don't really see any sort of significant improvement... the images in both links look like they could have all been done in the same month.

>> No.2139827

>>2139824
tell me the problems; What books should I read? Help. not even with the before and after pic of the girl's face?

>> No.2139829

>>2139815
Any barebones computer should have some kind of basic paint program. Open them up in there and make 2 columns: old / new

That will make it easier for people to view and compare.

>> No.2139831
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2139831

commence dumping

>> No.2139833

>>2139827
There is some Improvement in the face but the proportions of the face and general construction are still very off. Have you read the Loomis books in the sticky? If so I suggest still going back over head construction at least.
it looks like you're still symbol drawing a bit so work on that as well.
I hate to be one of the anons who just tells you to check the sticky, but I think the books it recommends would be most useful for you to practice still.
Good luck anon.

>> No.2139834

>>2139833
>symbol drawing
damn and I was reading a book about that and how to stop that. Guess it didn't work might as well look into Loomis

>> No.2139842

>>2139834
Reilly Method.