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Post your nsfw, critique work and so on.
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>> No.2136691
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>>2136687
I would totally love to knock up a woman like that, but her pussy looks like a fleshlight.

>> No.2136692

>>2136691
I think that's the audience he's going for

hah, gedit????

>> No.2136698

>>2136691
thats good casue real ones look like a fucking sea monsters.

>> No.2136713
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Tell me what you think about anatomy.

>> No.2136718

>>2136713
My mind says no to that snapped neck half-assed clavicles and trapizeus muscles but my dick says yes

>> No.2136724

>>2136691
The guy should just add more fluids and sweat to make her look a bit less like a sculpture.

I don't personally think it's a good idea to slap the ahegao "fucked silly" face on there when nothing is actually happening yet but whatevs.

>> No.2136777

>>2136713
I tell you you good at copying but you really bad at making stuff from memory.
That hand triggered all my sides.

>> No.2136812

>>2136724
>"fucked silly" face

well she's also clearly drunk

>> No.2136826

>>2136713
You're a retarded autistic person is what I get from this image

>> No.2136828
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2136828

>>2135973

Took the suggestions and tried to improve. Still seems off but can't put my finger on it. This perspective is harder than I thought.

>> No.2136837

>>2136828
the hand on the dick is still hilariously small, and it looks like you tried to emphasize the musculature of the shoulders but they just look lumpy as hell instead
additionally the torso is all fucked, you wouldn't see that little crease in the vagina from a top-down view in most cases
re: the hand on her thigh-- she seems pretty skinny, so i think it should be bigger in relation to the thigh. also the fingers are curved in an extremely unnatural direction.
also i imagine you know this already but just in case, the penis in her mouth is like. 2x as thick as an actual penis should be. it's always really hard to tell whether porn artists are intentionally exaggerating dick sizes or not.

>> No.2136838

>>2136828
goat/10

>hair is confusing all over, the locks on the side look like they're coming from the side of her eye
>face looks like a goat, it's like some features face down and some face foreward
>head is at a weird angle
>tits are uneven
>hand on the dick is way too small

Do yourself a favor and start over, get the basic shapes and posture down before even starting on the lines
I recommend looking at similar scenes and comparing the differences in composition, proportion, perspective, etc

>> No.2136843

>>2136837
>>2136838
Welp, shit is fucked, I'm throwing the towel. I'll try to do better next time.
Also, maybe I'm retarded but I don't really see the dick hand as being small in comparison. I see it as a "camera" being so up close that the face looks way bigger. But again I'll concede that I'm probably wrong, I need to sleep on it and get a fresher look on this fucking thing.
Also yeah dick is supposed to be over-the-top big.

>> No.2136848

>>2136843
Her hand gives the impression of being roughly at nipple height. The penis is going into her mouth. Hold your own hand in front of your mouth and compare.

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>>2136843
>Also, maybe I'm retarded but I don't really see the dick hand as being small in comparison.

Depends on your ref.
Now you can mix and match stuff with this pose. I know its 10% off, but you can fill in the gaps ya?

>> No.2136869
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2136869

Not porn but definitely fetish, how's my line art?

>> No.2136870

>>2136861
Wow that's actually a pretty great reference where it comes to the face and hand, it matches up greatly, thanks for going the extra mile in searching for that.
Yeah I can definitely see the hand is retarded now, and a lot of other problems. And specially the face, the eyes are not matching the perspective at all, they're way too frontal.
I guess I should really just work on some basic anatomy on weirder perspectives, I've been just doing pretty standard frontal perspectives for way too long, this was definitely quite a slap in the face.

Thanks a lot Anons, I really appreciate this feedback
Stay chilly, free willy

>> No.2136877

>>2136869
>that face

Linework is passable. Some of that anatomy is jank tho.

>> No.2136892

>>2136869
the perspective is off too.

>> No.2136894

>>2136877
face is fine weeb

>> No.2136898

>>2136877
>>2136892
Torso too short? Where's the perspective off?

What's really good line work in your opinion, then? Honest question.

>> No.2136926

>>2136718
Thanks anon. That's true, that neck sucks.

>> No.2136931

>>2136826
Lol

>> No.2136938

>>2136869
>...and then she farts!

>> No.2136964

>>2136869
I cracked a nut at this so

10/10
I could feel it

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>>2136828

>> No.2137021

>>2136898
The ass being so large suggests a sort of fisheye effect, but the perspective of the chimney completely ruins it

>> No.2137024

>>2136980
>>2136828
Thank this man, he just saved your shit.

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>>2137021
huh, fair enough. How's this?

>> No.2137042

>>2136713

where are their dicks

>> No.2137043

>>2137030
totally dig the face (she's hot!)
just fix the foreshortening of the arm and better construct the hand and it'll be gold

>> No.2137047

>>2137030
reminds me of adam warren

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>>2137043
nice, took another swing at the foreshortening,first time doing something this extreme.

>>2137047
Definitely an influence

>> No.2137057

>>2137050
Do you have a DeviantArt or a Tumblr?

>> No.2137084

How can I get some clean smooth lines like kr0npenis while inking? Is that some layer trick?

>> No.2137085

>>2137084
Chromatic abrasion x100

>> No.2137101

>>2137057
sundryaddams.tumblr

>> No.2137108

>>2137050
that's it! sweet.

>> No.2137142
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2137142

anybody got any useful tips, tricks an quips for boob shape? i find this shit tricky as hell (not so much for average/small sized ones, mostly just the bigger, floppier bubs)

>> No.2137145

>>2137142
to expand upon what i mean (HEH), when they start getting noticably larger than the ribcage, i kinda find myself at a bit of a loss, since my knowledge of boob shape an junk tends to have a lot to do with how it rests upon them bones

>> No.2137217

>>2137142
http://rittsrotts.tumblr.com/image/113113082481

>> No.2137219

>>2137142
That cow thing looks sexy even as a piece of shit made in mspaint, you may be on to something there at any rate.

>> No.2137226
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>>2137217
i made them smaller but more... dangly? they feel weightier now tho, i think it's that lil bit of fat above the main body of the boob that i gotta remember to put in there, so bigger boobs would droop even lower without support. danke for the link nwn

>>2137219
thanks. mspaint really forces me into a less is more kinna thing with the whole fixed line width/no rotation/shitty zoom options/no tablet/final destination

>> No.2137232

>>2137226
i like it.

>> No.2137253
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>>2136980
Aw sheit, thanks redline friend. I was blind but now I see

>> No.2137267
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2137267

trying this cell shading coloring thing.

>> No.2137270

>>2137267
stop post half assed art, you haven't even finished the other stuff on your tumblr

You said you were going to stop doing this shit

You're also avoiding drawing males again even though you know you need more practice

>> No.2137288
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>>2137270
I'm postin it on /ic/ since I got some helpful critique last time.
also I'm still drawing men.

>> No.2137293
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>>2137267
looks nice, but i worry you're gettin to ahead of yourself by focusing only on her instead of the overall piece. when you jus go straight ahead on one element in a work, such as you have in this one with the girl, refining the sketch and colors an lightin an all that jazz it makes the amount of work left to do on the rest seem much more immense than it really is. this leads to burnout ;-;

try attackin the whole piece in an order that goes kinna like
-thumb nail to nail down the composition
-undersketch
-color blobs to set the scheme/color comp (or greyscale)
-refining/cleanup
-inks if that's ya deal (or you could do that before the color stage, but i feel color is more impactful to the image an therefore it might cause you to want to change some of the linework)
-more refining, final cleanup, whatever "after effects" you feel like

she does look really cute tho, would cuddle/10 nwn~

>> No.2137316

>>2137226
Love all the stuff you posted so far. Do you have a tumblr or something, would instafollow.
Also, why the ms paint look? Style choice?

>> No.2137328

i don't understand how legs work. is it really difficult or am i retarded

>> No.2137336

>>2137328
based on your explanatory skills I'd say the second one.

>> No.2137347

>>2137328
Uhh, what do you mean?

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>>2137267
I think those shadows on her leg are too straight, makes it look like her leg is a block.

>> No.2137356
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2137356

>>2137328
this might help.
>>2137355
Thank you.

>> No.2137361

>>2137267
>cell shading
Is this really the proper term for it outside of 3D rendering lingo?
Not dissing, generally curious.

>> No.2137365

>>2137361
go google the term cel-shading, i'll wait

>> No.2137368

>>2137365
It only gives me results for that 3D rendering technique. That's why I'm asking.

>> No.2137371

>>2137368
and if you clicked the first link, a wikipedia article, it would've told you at the end of the first paragraph where that name came from
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cel

>> No.2137372

>>2137371
Yes I understand the etymology behind the word. I'm just asking if 2D artists actually called it back then.

>> No.2137373

>>2137372
I just call it slap slappity bapity baby doo shading.

>> No.2137375
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>start drawing
>start worrying about angles too much
>can't finish

Damn it I just wanted to draw a fat ass
This could take years

>> No.2137377

>>2137373
>ssbbds
You heard it here first folks, start spreading the acronym around

>> No.2137379

>>2137372
it was how they colored cels. if they were in animation production, they most likely called it coloring. if they had to clarify what type of coloring or/shading, they probably just said something along the lines of like flat colors or cel-shading possibly. it's used nowadays even for full 2d art with intentional flat shading because that's the style the name evokes, however, i am fully in favor of switching over to SSBBDS as >>2137377 and >>2137373 suggested, it really clears up a lotta the confusion you get in conversations like these.

>> No.2137385

>>2137379
SSBBDS has my full support

>> No.2137418

>>2137316
i draw in mspaint for the same reason mike ross plays shitty characters in street fighter
an oh yeah, i should get me one a them there tumblrs shouldn't i?
what's a good name for a tumblr, i'm bad a naming things

>> No.2137433

>>2137418
try Ihateniggers420

>> No.2137451
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>>2137418
Milking Canvas
Moo chan
Money Over Cows [MOC]
Cow.exe
Microshaft Paint
Muckles the precursor of Knuckles
Would You like to try our new Mozzella sticks sir?
No More Poo Tang
Circumsized Ghengas Khan
The Dark Bateman sleeps
No more Cheese
Wei shen fuck mother
Chappie gonna fuck you up

>> No.2137487

>>2137418
just leave that to /ic/
they gave me the best pseudonym ever lol

>> No.2137506

>>2137418
mspants.exe
mrs. paint
moolight sonata
less cow bell
moolesque
furries should not be allowed to vote

>> No.2137622

>>2137267

Are you using a brush to color or the selection tool to select the areas you want to cell shade?

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>> No.2137652

>>2137648
>threesome with 2 males

you are doing it wrong.

>> No.2137656
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>>2137622
I only selected the areas inside the lineart to block color.
I painted on the lines, now blending them.

first time I colored like this. hope it doesn't look too terrible.

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>> No.2137668

>>2137659
Excellent
A+
Extra credit for the spider socks

>> No.2137679

>>2137656
You are doing it right. You should absolutely finish this.

>> No.2137684

>>2137659
The left nipple placement of the one standing up seems far too close to the armpit

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>>2137656
I just have a quick question. In the parts that I've circled, is that more of a stylistic choice? I thought the skin tone got most intense on the edge of a shadow? It seems that you have put your most intense color IN the shadow as some sort of pseudo core shadow?

I'm not criticizing because I have no idea how to paint, I'm genuinely curious as to why you chose that color in that area.

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>>2137506
>less cow bell
You fool

>> No.2137703

>>2137684
How the hell did I miss that. Thanks!

>> No.2137728

>>2137699
you are doing gr8 keppok

>> No.2137745
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>>2137656

whats your tumblr?

>> No.2137756

>>2137745
just search keppok you silly

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>>2137699
I don't think I have a super in-depth grasp of color or how to render different things realistically.
Though I know that skin is semi-transparent and shows blood where the skin tapers or rounds off, coincidentally near where the shadows begin.
I used a bright pink in some areas... probably more than I should have but if t looks good I'll keep it.

here's some sloppy ass colorin'.

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>>2137451
>>2137506
there are some really good suggestions here
i'm really diggin moo-chan even tho it's a bit generic, it's cute as heck

>>2137659
butt felt a lil off, tried my hand at gently reshapin it

>> No.2137772

>>2137769
also the color of the light determines the "burn" on the edge of the shadow.
Purple/pink is a go-to color choice for me since it looks the best on girl's skin plus pink is my favorite color.

>> No.2137773

>>2137770
Well, I was aiming at his hand pushing her ass forward, but I guess I'm not selling it. I think your version is better. Thx.

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>>2137773
ah, gotta remember, unless you got a super chunky booty (she's rather thin), you got the like, these two lil hip bone things that jut out to create that iconic bent over butt shape. check the upper left one in the image i linked for a good example of how the hip bone is kinna jus there/how it means you can't really push that mass around too much

>> No.2137786

>>2137784
er, not linked, uploaded, haha. also don't forget the muscle mass as well, can't move it around too much either (i kno that's probably obvious but i gotta remind myself of that a lot so i throw this in there jus to be safe)

>> No.2137790

>>2137769
eyy bby want sum fuck ?

i got 1 inch cock

>> No.2137794

>>2137356
that's exactly what i needed, thanks

>> No.2137795

>>2137784
I see what you are saying, but I'm pretty sure you can achieve that kind of deformation of the soft tissues if you squish the ass cheek forward. If not 1:1 realistically at least in terms of stylization exageration.
Some of you people should think a bit more about what stylization is and stop fixating on absolute anatomical perfection. The drawings I do aren't meant to be photo-realistic and neither I want to achieve too much of a realistic anatomy feel. In fact I think I pushed realism too far in this illustration.

Anyway, as I've said before, I'm not selling it, so it's no good.

>> No.2137802

>>2137769
>>2137772
>skin is semi-transparent and shows blood where the skin tapers or rounds off, coincidentally near where the shadows begin.
Fuckin' genius, honestly never thought about that...makes sense if you think about it

>also the color of the light determines the "burn" on the edge of the shadow.
When you say burn you mean intensity of the color? So an intense yellow light would create an intense purple/pink that you tend to like?

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>>2137795
i draw as simple as i can possibly get away with while still making it come off... attractive i guess?

havin an ass squeeze in such a distant shot doesn't tend to read too well, even in real porn, that's more of a closeup of the dick goin in from above kinna shot i feel, but that's just me, i like simple simple simple

i tried to give you a more ass-cheek-bein-pushed look here. pretend the red line still there is like a shadow line to help give you more of an idea of how the mass would accumulate

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>>2137816
Thanks for the correction and explaination. I agree with what you are saying. However I went for your first suggestion. Wip pic related.

>> No.2137967

Where can I find more work by whoever did the OP image

>> No.2138002

>>2137967
Go away you know who you are I'm not saying because that's what you want; to shill your own tumblr for you.

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Progress

>> No.2138026

>>2138021
looks like hank venture getting sucked off by dean venture

>> No.2138030

>>2138026
I agree. It's like somebody did a faceswap. Botox lips look really creepy on dudes.

>> No.2138040

>>2138030
>>2138026
>>2138021
I also agree.
I'd harden the face of the dude. He looks like a woman right now with those lips and thin eyebrows

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Wip.

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>>2137802
>hen you say burn you mean intensity of the color? So an intense yellow light would create an intense purple/pink that you tend to like?
Nah.
Yellow light would make a yellowish burn (on skin I'd say more orange/red considering the blood on the surface)
However, a yellow light would produce a purple/pink shadow.


Take a look at this screenshot of Nero. Pink lighting and a pink burn around the shadows, even on the hard-edge shadows.

A lot of discretion is up to the artist's preference.

Some interesting color combinations to make the picture look more dynamic.
Also it's porn so making girl look more pink is usually an erotic thing. (if they have light skin)


For me, I pick a light color and choose the color of the shadow roughly at the opposite end of the spectrum. Usually you see yellow/purple, orange/blue, red/green. Of course don't take it super literally. Almost all of these colors are muted. It's subtlety.

Then you can get into stuff like bounce lighting, multiple light sources, and ambient occlusion.
Most of these can be stylized within reason, though.

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>>2138149
Also if you take a look at the shadow on his nose you'll notice the burn also effects the edge of the shadow that's the farthest from the light source.
Sometimes you gotta think in weird abstract 3d for even lighting.

As I said before with the rounding of the skin you get a pink burn, and that's because the flesh is three dimensional and... "folds in" on itself at some point depending on the angle you're looking at it.

I imagine shadows in the same way since they are transparent as well. It's like an impression of the 3d shape on the surface its casting on. It's obviously much more simple since it's pretty binary.

If light is obscured by an object then the point where the light hits the crest is going to be less "opaque"... and that's where you get the burn on the rim.

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2138170

how's the shine on the leotard?

>> No.2138181

>>2138066
dick is too high up. Right now it's on the lower belly.

>> No.2138183

>>2138170
Really good. Did you use a ref on it? I'm guessing you used a ref on it.
Also, I think those inner thigh tendons would be jutting out more at that position.. I can't be sure but I feel like they need more shading.

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Finished.

>> No.2138226

>>2138170
Noice. Did you use a reference for the pose or should I refer to you as god from now on?

>> No.2138233

>>2138226
I used a ref for the pose that the commissioner gave me. He said to copy the pose exactly. The leotard isn't refed though.

>> No.2138250

>>2138170
cute, how big is the original canvas?

also where did your skin rendering/painting tutorial go?

also make more tutorials faget

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>>2138233
>The leotard isn't refed though.
it shows.
This might help.
Kyle are any of your picture non-refed? How's your imagination drawing?

>> No.2138266

>>2138226
>worshiping McChiken leg

>>2138170
Kyle...

>> No.2138271
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2138271

a study. idk.

any crits would be cool.

>> No.2138276

>>2138266
why are you so jelly?
have something better to show me? I might start worshipping you.
yeah, I thought so.

>> No.2138281

>>2138271
it he fucking her on the edge of a bed? because I can't see the line or his legs

dick looks a bit small from this POV

pretty cool pic though

>> No.2138290

>>2138253
The op isn't refed.

>> No.2138310

>>2138253
>using anything other than a photograph/real life as reference
?????

>> No.2138318

>>2138271
dickvein is way too thick imo to the point that it just looks silly

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>>2138170
is a splits that wide even possible? It seems like you just jammed a pair of legs on a perspective grid. Otherwise everything else is working nicely.

I'm looking for some thoughts and opinions on some "tentacle" hairstyles.


just some rough sketch ins for the faces.

>> No.2138345

>>2138281

Does every dick have to be monster sized, gaylord?

>> No.2138346

>>2138339
Are these dicks on her head ?

>> No.2138347

>>2138346
Yup. Tentacle dicks for hair. Wanted to make a "tentacle girl" character.

>> No.2138359

>>2138170
does the slit of the pussy really go this high?

>> No.2138369
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2138369

wah lah

>> No.2138387

>>2138369
what am i looking at?

>> No.2138403

>>2138220
Those fuckbois still look like faggots. Seems im not the only one here that thinks their lips fuck up the whole otherwise nice image.
Also the rightside guys expression is stale and akward, seems like his left pupil is off.
And the lips are sooooo annoying i cant watch this anymore.

>> No.2138414

>>2138387
cancer

>> No.2138416

>>2137772
>pink is my favorite color

faaaaaaaaaaaaaggot

>> No.2138418
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2138418

>>2138416
I draw tiddies all day, that's way more gay than my favorite color.

>> No.2138422

>>2138345
It does if you want it to be proportionate shithead

>> No.2138423

>>2138345
You seems frustrated.

>> No.2138424

>>2138423
not him but i personally find huge dicks unattractive and they can totally ruin porn for me
fml

>> No.2138444

>>2138403
Preferences I guess. I'm really sorry I didn't manage to satisfy your alpha male heterosexual needs or something.

>> No.2138446

>>2138403
>And the lips are sooooo annoying i cant watch this anymore.

Not really, you're just autistic if they bother YOU that much.

>> No.2138452

>>2138220
I was so tired of working on this yesterday, that I forgot to ask you guys to criticize the coloring. I am aware that everything is overly saturated and the ambient color doesn't affect the character colors enough (at least I think this is the main problem here). Do you have any suggestions how could I fix these issues? Toning down the saturation doesn't really help the image. Are the values the problem?

>> No.2138465

>>2138418
I understand it's an uncut dick but at first glance I thought it was a prolapsed anus

>> No.2138477

>>2137042
Masturbated too much, they fell off from friction.

>> No.2138540
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2138540

Wip

you ever find it hard to achieve an interesting pose? all I can come up with is head to mid thigh with an s-curve most of the time.

>> No.2138553

>>2138149
>>2138161
>tfw I learn more on the porn thread than I would in the question or draw threads.

You're a good man. Is there a name I could call you?

>> No.2138557

>>2137267

finish that midna pic you ding dong

>> No.2138558

>>2138553
her name's pok
kep pok

>> No.2138560
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2138560

>>2138558
>her
There is no female hentai artists on the internets.

>> No.2138608

>>2138560
>hentai
your weeb is showing

>> No.2138609
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2138609

>>2138560
well, I'm a dog, so anything is possible.

>> No.2138643

>>2138608
>he thinks hentai is some dorky obscure word

kekekekekeke

>> No.2138647

>>2138643
No, I think you're a weeb who thinks what he's drawing is manga

>> No.2138649

>>2138647
>calling me a weeb on 4chan
>on a hentai thread

epic

>> No.2138651

>>2138643
It is a dorky obscure word, just like moe, shounen, etc. You should get out more.

>>2138649
Porn thread. Search the thread, you're literally the only person to use the word hentai.

>> No.2138652

>>2138651
my normalfag facebook female friend even knew whats hentai.

Its a hentai thread you fucking piece of shit cancer normalfag shit eating anus sniffing flaming homo faggot.

>> No.2138665

>>2138652
4chan is 18+

>> No.2138667

>>2138665
shit licker.

>> No.2138680

>>2138609
it's okay, i'm a dog too

>> No.2138683

>>2138560
dislodge your head from your ass

>> No.2138685

>>2138647
i always thought gettin all technical an specific about what is and isn't anime and/or manga was way more weebish than just using hentai as a synonym for drawn porn

>> No.2138686

Im surrounded by a cancer.

>> No.2138692

>>2138685
>oh wow are you watching anime, I love anime
>this isn't anime
>i always thought gettin all technical an specific about what is and isn't anime and/or manga was way more weebish than just using anime as a synonym for animation
something tells me you didn't spend too much time thinking about that

>> No.2138707

>>2138220
Can everybody here please stop getting triggered over irrelevant shit and give me some help with my illustration. T_T (yeah, I don't care if there is a smiley in my post).

Pretty please?

>> No.2138708

>>2138692
disregarding the false equivalency, when someone draws in a style that is purposefully reminiscent of anime and manga, i'm not gonna get my undies in a twist over someone saying it's anime or manga. if someone calls avatar/korra anime the only people i tend to see get angry about it are weaboos

>> No.2138710
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2138710

>samefag shitposter trolling porn and animu threads
>same method again and again
>works like a clock
Every fucking time

>> No.2138712

>>2138708
Or, you know... people who like avatar and dislike weaboos, and don't want to be associated with them... like, say, the entirety of /co/.

>> No.2138715

>>2138707
just make a new one and learn that dick sucking lips dont fit guys. Its still good but dsp lips.also threesome with two guys is fucking gay.

>> No.2138730

>>2137745
This thread is good and all but could someone please just take a second to explain this picture to me?
I am not able to process it

>> No.2138732

>>2138710
No, it's just /ic/ arguing with themselves like arguing with your echo after it reaches back with a muffled statement you get mad at and scream back at it to find yourself locked in a circular argument with your self.

>> No.2138739

>>2138715
this sounds like an opinion more than actual criticism
ignore him, anon

>> No.2138744

>>2138253
that ref looks like absolute shit. what he drew is leagues better than that 3d rendered garbage.

>>2138170
Kyle how much life drawing have you done? Just curious.

>> No.2138747

>>2138707
>>2138220
that bed is way too overdone, especially with line work to show soft folds??? come on dog, keep that shit simple (same problems with the pillow)

also that wall in the background is just a flesh toned void. the overall composition of the piece leaves a lotta awkward negative space (an often side effect of threesome illustrations where you try to include everybody's face in the shot)

there's very little interaction between anyone in this scene.
dude gettin the blow job is jus kinna layin there, he doesn't even have a good view of the blowjob. maybe have one of his hands brushing her hair aside or a hand on top of her head playing with her hair or something or even just a hand on her arm that's resting on his abdomen (i had a dude gently rub my upper arm/shoulder area while suckin him off once, was actually p nice, but what i'm trynna get at is there's a lotta subtle ways for one character to tell another that what they're doing feels good)
dude in the back is jus kinna... i can't even clearly tell where he's lookin? and he looks like he's tensing every single muscle in his body, very stiff. hand on the ass is a nice touch, but i feel like he could be doin more, maybe reaching around and playing with the girls clit or the other hand on her hip or somethin

i'm not sayin to go back and make all these major alterations but just keep em in mind for future works, over all it's pretty good, definitely achieves what it set out to do.

>> No.2138749

>>2138170
Blog please.

>> No.2138812

>>2138609
moar, link me pls.

>> No.2138820

>>2138170
Can I get a link to your other stuff, please? Ashamed as I am, I couldn't find it with just "Kyle" as a clue.

>> No.2138827
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2138827

>Kyle doesn't answer questions
Disgusting.

>> No.2138841

>>2138827
Yeah he's a cocky bitch with god complex

>> No.2138846

>>2138841
hes a god tho.

>> No.2138850

>>2138846
Whatever you say, Kyle.

>> No.2138852

>>2138850
Shut up faggot.

>> No.2138855

>>2138827
>>2138841
>>2138846
>>2138850
>>2138852
pls lets just talk about art we make.

>> No.2138864

>>2138715
I thought I've already stated how irrelevant this kind of critique is.

>>2138747
Great analysis. Thanks a lot anon! I basically agree about everything you mentioned.
Do you maybe have also some advice regarding the colors, which are really bugging me a lot?

>> No.2138867

>>2138864
DICK SUCKING LIPS ON GUYS YOU RETARD

>> No.2138882

>>2138867
Please feel free to redline my illustration and make the lips better. Then keep that redlined image to yourself.
Deal?

>> No.2138901
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2138901

>>2138369
>>2138827
>>2138560
>>2138652

Pure unadulterated cancer. Please stop posting here.

>> No.2138921
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2138921

ATTENTION
okay if anyone of you make money with this stuff please reply to this post with a one of your drawings and tell me how you went about selling it, where to look for customers, etc.

also could this be done with traditional mediums?

any answers would be much apprecitated

>> No.2138927
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2138927

More or less done.

>> No.2138936
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2138936

>>2138927
Also kinda colored it, but not sure if I'll finish it.

>> No.2138966
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2138966

>>2138864
>Do you maybe have also some advice regarding the colors, which are really bugging me a lot?
Not the other Anon, and I'm not exactly an expert on color theory but here's go my on it.

Everything is too saturated and there's no underlying color or lighting covering the whole image. Pic related isn't exactly ideal since I'm just fucking around with layers and colors, but the gist of it is less saturation/brightness on what's not important (background and darker areas), and contrasting it with what's important (characters, and special highlight to erogenous zones and faces).

But then again it's just a quick wip.

>> No.2138972

>>2138966
Your shadows look off, like he's rotting or something

>> No.2138975

>>2138972
I'm not being precise, really big strokes in selecting the areas.

>> No.2138982
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2138982

>>2138966
hOLY SHIT, HOMEBOY IN THE BACK BOUTA GO SUPER SAIYAN GOD

>> No.2138991

>>2138927
>>2138936

Why is it's dick coming out of it's stomach?

>> No.2138992

>>2138991
It's not ? the body is short, that's all. placed the pussy before so I'm pretty sure I didn't fuck up something like that.

>> No.2139002

>>2138992
>the body is short

That's irrelevant. The anatomy of the legs are generally fucked. Did you use ref for the pose? If not, you should. Or at least do more studies before trying to tackle this without any reference.

>> No.2139006

>>2139002
>That's irrelevant.

Well, yes, it is.

>> No.2139011

>>2138966
Cool. I see what you are saying and agree that the overall mood/tone in your version is much better than mine. Will absorb greedily all of this. Thanks anon!

>> No.2139012

>>2139002
>>2139006
More specifically, the feet are tucked underneath her butt-cheeks. Generally speaking: the knees and feet always face in the same direction. The knees feel like they should be facing towards the camera rather than splayed outwards.

>> No.2139019

>>2138927
>>2138936
I agree with the other anon, genitals are too high.

Also, The way their squatting makes them seem weightless, her feet are barely flexing under their weight.

>> No.2139020
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2139020

>>2139011
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/13547833/1435724618116.psd

Here's the project file if it helps.

Not sure if it's actually going to look like in the exported version since I didn't actually use photochop and some layer information might have been lost by exporting it to. But nonetheless there you go.

>> No.2139029

>>2139020
This color scheme suits their expressions oddly well, haha.

"A-am I... d-dead?"

>> No.2139039

>>2139020
Thanks! <3
If more anons were like you, this place would be heaven!

>> No.2139094
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2139094

>>2138921
>how do
Hentai Foundry
Tumblr
Furaffinity [if you are that]
Pixiv [if you're a cocksucking gook lover]
DeviantArt

>how do money do?
PayPal.
Just make sure you use invoices to like ya know not let paypal know you're selling porn or else your account is frozen and the money stops yo.

>what quality should it be do?
I dont know something I can shag it too

>> No.2139137

>>2139094
>not let paypal know you're selling porn
The fuck, what's that any of their business. Why the fuck are they against porn?

>> No.2139153

>>2139137
>Why the fuck are they against porn?
Hypocrisy.

>> No.2139172
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2139172

>>2138553
yeah, it's keppok.
If you have any other questions I'll try to help to the best of my ability
>>2138560
You'd be surprised.
>>2139137
I heard it's because people buy porn on paysites, bust a nut, and get insta-refunds. It happened so commonly so they just dropped pornos altogether. Who knows if that is the truth though.
I don't think it's an issue of moral relativity, just they don't want the extra hassle.

>> No.2139181
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2139181

Tear my anatomy apart and tell me what's wrong

>> No.2139185

How anonymous can you be with Paypal? How do you prevent your identity getting out / people connecting your sfw name with your nsfw name/ etc?

>> No.2139188

>>2139181
Literally everything.

>> No.2139195
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2139195

>>2138927
Tried to fix the problems. Also, cumming version.

>> No.2139202
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2139202

>>2139195
lower the cock loWER THE COCk
LOWER THE COCK LOWER THE COCK
LOWER THE COCK LOWER THE COCK
LOCEWR THE COCK LOWERSTHEC OCK

>> No.2139204

>>2139202
You've triggered him

>> No.2139207

>>2139202
COCK THE LOWER.

>> No.2139253
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2139253

>>2139202
Someone obsessed with cock. Coming out of the closet anon?

>> No.2139258

>>2139253
NO, I LOVE COCK, THE BIGGER THE BETTER, I DON'T CARE WHAT IT'S ATTACHED TO AS LONG AS IT'S HUMANOID, LET ME AT EM

>> No.2139259
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2139259

WIP

all my colors are too saturated

>> No.2139260

>>2139253
Correction, he is obsessed with feminine dick. Learn the difference faggot.

>> No.2139263

>>2139195
her left arm is wrong, fix that

>> No.2139266
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2139266

>>2139260
>feminine
Girls don't have penis's

>> No.2139268

>>2139266
>I have never seen a clitoris before.

>> No.2139269

>>2139268
>damage control this hard

>> No.2139270

>>2139260
NO, I LIKE BIG HUGE WHATEVER COCK, MANLY, FEMININE, ANDROGYNOUS, I DON'T CARE, I LIKE BIG COCK
also
>he
pfffff

>>2139266
0/100 real quick

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2139275

>>2139260
>Is obsessed with huge cocks
>Calls others a faggot
U wot m8

>> No.2139278

>>2139270
Shut up faggot.

>>2139269
It's the fact of the matter all Women have miniature penises and Futa idealizes this appeal with erect clits.

>> No.2139279
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2139279

>>2138744
I haven't done much honesty. I did take a drawing class in college a about 6 months ago. We only drew actual people for the last 3 weeks because it was a 101 class and the teacher never gave us enough time to do a full figure drawing when we had the model. we did a few portraits but I ended up giving most of mine away to classmates. I only have 2 portraits left. here's one of them.

>> No.2139280

>>2139278
HAHAHAHHAHAHA
>fact of the matter

NIGGA YOU GAY

>> No.2139281

>>2139280
Being a gay faggot means attracted to the same sex, Futa is not the same sex for either male or female. This isn't a difficult concept.

>> No.2139282
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2139282

>>2139278
Bro, your a faggot!

LOL
O
L

>> No.2139284

>>2139281
you
are
gay

This isn't a diffcult concept.

>> No.2139285

>>2139279
here's the other one. I want to do more but I need to get someone to model for me. I'll ask my roommate to night.

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2139287

>>2139285
forgot image

>> No.2139288

>>2139284
Does that look like a Man to you? No, hence the notion "feminine dick" there's a key word there.

>> No.2139289

>>2139285
you need to draw from life more, cuz.

>> No.2139290

>>2139278
nobody gets off to futa cause they like erect clits, they do it cause they like cock
an there ain't nothin wrong with likin cock, quit bein so laaaaaaaaaaaaaame

>> No.2139291

>>2139288
"feminine dick" is the key word here alright

oh man this guy is killing me

>> No.2139292

>>2139287
real nice work there, devin, why you postin life draws in the porn thread tho, hahahaha

>> No.2139293
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2139293

>>2139270
>I prefer Ȝer

>> No.2139294

>>2139278
Bro, if you like dicks then you like dicks, that's just who you are

I don't see what the big deal is

>> No.2139295

>>2139290
You are gay and a faggot.
>>2139291
There is absolutely nothing gay about Futa I do not understand what the appeal is in seeing an overweight hairy grisly man that is the epitome of faggotry.

>> No.2139299
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2139299

Why do people take bait so easily in the porn threads.
Everytime, every single time, there's a porn thread, people bait it like fishermen.

What is it about these threads? No other thread on /ic/ is as bad as this, and it only gets worse with every new thread.

>> No.2139301

>>2139299
i feel like 90% of it is the person(s???) replying to themselves to get meta responses like this

>> No.2139306

>>2139279
Oh cool, one of my friends said you render and draw anatomy so well because you've done tons of life drawing. I wasn't sure.

>> No.2139316
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2139316

>>2139202
redlined whatever else i could find
made her other hand a bit bigger because personal preference and also to be proportionate to other hand i redrew

>> No.2139317

>>2139316
the feet are still wonky but i wasn't gonna touch that with a mouse, lol

>> No.2139329
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2139329

>>2139317
just kiddin, i ain't got nothin better to do

>> No.2139330

>>2139329
>That dead monkey paw
what're you doin?

>> No.2139331

>>2139292
The girls name is Devin. My signature is below it but it's cropped out

>> No.2139338

>>2139330
i draw super angly, especially with a mouse, they can smooth it out if they wanna

>> No.2139346
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2139346

>>2138281
>>2138318
thanks

>> No.2139350

>>2139295
>there is absolutely nothing gay about futa
>implying

That's dependent on the dynamic. Because futa on male is definitely in the realm of gay. Futa on female is fair game.

>> No.2139365

>>2139282
You're on the wrong board and the wrong thread to be talking about this in such an immature manner.
>>2139259
Needs more contrast from the lights to darks, could also add some red hues for flushed skin.

>> No.2139366

>>2139346
shyguy9?

also animate this

>> No.2139376

>>2139346
>>2139346
hey, i like your work. you draw a lotta girls with cute bellies an i really dig that nwn~

(also female/bottom/the one gettin dicked POV is super underdone, keep it up, i'd offer a redline but i'm on phone)

>> No.2139401

>>2139350
Why is futa on woman not gay when strap-ons are a thing? Genuine question.

>> No.2139405

>>2139366
i'd rather do a vore animation.

>>2139376
thank you. a redline would be appreciated, if you still feel like it later

>> No.2139418

>>2139181
>Tear my anatomy apart
You already did that.

On a more serious note. You lack fundamentals for drawing good anatomy. It might not sound helpful advice, but I really don't want to lose time redlining this and explaining thoroughly what is wrong with this sketch, since I feel you won't learn anything useful. You need to learn your basics, and that's pretty much it.

>> No.2139492

>>2139401
Because it leads to more interesting play and plot, like so. http://g.e-hentai.org/g/418880/d12a3d7f5c/
If their dicks was a strapon it would be extremely boring, simple as that, i don't understand why people are so concerned over so simple things.

>> No.2139565
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2139565

>>2139195
pussy and dildo up the ass variation.

>> No.2139596

>>2139401
Futa aren't meant to be dudes with tits like they are in the real world.

>> No.2139602

>>2139565
i remember you. You are the dick in the acid guy.

>> No.2139612

>>2139301

This

>> No.2139619

>>2139602
> dick in the acid

What.

>> No.2139622

>>2139596
He's the guy that thinks anatomy is less important than linework.

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2139623

>>2139293
>dat perfectly chubby face

>> No.2139768

>>2139622

Nearly everyone in this thread is a "muh style" faggot. No one cares about correct anatomy here.

>> No.2139778 [DELETED] 
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2139778

not quite lewd but any suggestions?

>> No.2139785
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2139785

>>2139778

>> No.2139786
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>>2139785
I meant lewd but not nsfw, also slightly improved

>> No.2139791
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2139791

>>2139786
fuck me

>> No.2139860

>>2137084
>>2137085
>chromatic aberration
this is true, there is a tutorial straight from the artist
http://kr0npr1nz.deviantart.com/art/Chromatic-Aberration-Tutorial-497705149

>> No.2139906

>>2139860
>ctrl+alt+shift+n

what kind of shortcut is this. Is he officialy retarded ?

>> No.2139910

>>2139906
You're officially retarded.

>> No.2139916

>>2139910
nah u. I mean seriously you make a "shortcut" thats made from 4 fucking keys ? how stupid can he be ?

>> No.2139928

>>2139906
>>2139916
You do realize it's a shortcut in photoshop, and not something made by him?

>> No.2139937

>>2139928
>"I am using hotkeys ctr+alt+shift+n"

>> No.2139946

>>2139916
>>2139906
Is nitpicking like this fun to do? I need to try it out one day.

>> No.2140003

>>2139860
No, I mean with the cell shading pieces he does, the inking alone... Sorry, english is awful, I can't explain it very well.

>> No.2140235
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2140235

thoughts?

>> No.2140238

>>2140235
no stomach

>> No.2140243
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2140243

>>2140238
now?

>> No.2140254

>>2139786
Shes like 4 you sick bastard.

>> No.2140330

>>2139786
>>2139791
gr8 b8 m8

>> No.2140388

>>2140254
You would deny a 4 year old her milk?

It's like you want to stunt her development.

>> No.2140402

>>2140254
Isn't that a chibi character from Harvest Moon?

>> No.2140415

>>2140388
>You would deny a 40 year old his shitposting?

>It's like you draw that just for this joke.

>> No.2140430

>>2140415
Who are you quoting?

>> No.2140446

>>2140415
Has anyone posted toddlercon yet? i wonder how tumblrs would react.

>> No.2140458

>>2140446
Like any other normal human being, that is not a deviant I guess.

>> No.2140467

>>2140458
I am not convinced that the normal behavior is to get genuinely angry art drawings you don't like, a popular behavior maybe, not sure if its normal.
I visit 2chan a lot for the redlines and while there were threads where people where saying that they found some unpopular fetishes a turn off they
never get angry at them, it's only in the western web where you meet people who think that if they don't get angry at politically incorrect drawings the world will be destroyed.

>> No.2140468

>>2140388
Of course I want to stunt her development. She should be short and flat chested for as long as possible.

>> No.2140470

>>2140467
>I am not convinced that the normal behavior is to get genuinely angry art drawing

The anger comes from the people who don't want to be called what they are, pretending their affinity for that kind of thing isn't off base and degenerate behavior. It is normal behavior to call a duck a duck. It's the ducks who don't want to be labeled what they are that get pissed.

>> No.2140481

>>2140467
Pedophilia is not an unpopular fetish. It is a condemned sexual deviation. How can you even think about being tolerant towards something like this?

>> No.2140482

>>2140470
It's not an argument then since i agree with that, but i don't think that's the case, see >>2140481

>>2140481
I don't know, maybe because the argument against pedophilia is that children cannot consent and that drawings are not real.

>> No.2140484

>>2140235
I sense an influence from mizuryuu kei, if its true be careful since that guy had a serious proportion problem
and made very small torsos, mostly in his early works.

>> No.2140495
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2140495

I hope I'm pushing the perspective in the right way

>> No.2140500

>>2140495
These are some great faces, hahaha

>> No.2140504

>>2140495
I usually get confused by vore like things, as they are really silly but this kind of logical size difference works well.

>> No.2140506

>>2140495
My dick wants this finished asap

>> No.2140508

>>2140467
>2chan
how's the atmosphere over there? do they talk about dicks their dicks all the time as well?

>> No.2140525

>>2140508
No, they're more mature.

>> No.2140527
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2140527

>>2140508
People give redlines and if someone thinks the redline is not sufficient he gives his own, its really slow and i mean really fucking slow so
people don't rush to reply with halfassed things so there are many redlines and they don't argue about politics every time someone posts a loli.
I would suggest visiting even if you don't understand any japanese, there are useful things there.

>>2140525
In some cases maybe but its not at all no fun allowed if that's what you mean.

>> No.2140535

>>2140495
why is the pixie or whatever boobs flying upward?

doesn't matter you won't finish this pic anyway

>> No.2140571
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2140571

>>2140500
Thanks
>>2140504
vore is an excuse to draw detailed mouths.
>>2140506
>>2140535
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2140580

>>2140571
I'd make something like this for the body, I think legs should still be out of frame for that perspective.

More importantly I need to draw sexy lingerie for milf character, suggest me some nice white lingerie that you like pls.

>> No.2140596

>>2140580
The other drawing is trying to do a fish eye lense perspective though, you just made the perspective normal.

>> No.2140668

Leepictroll-chan.deviantart.com

>> No.2140691

>>2140482
>I don't know, maybe because the argument against pedophilia is that children cannot consent and that drawings are not real.

Drawing or not, it's degenerate behavior regardless because of the ideas they represent. It's tolerated because it's not real, thus harming no one, but the idea and fantasy is still a degenerate one. That doesn't change.

>> No.2140695

>>2140691
>but the idea and fantasy is still a degenerate one. That doesn't change.

Yet it would be wrong to police thoughts. But:

>actually arguing over lolis on 4chan

>> No.2140730

>>2140695

You can't lock someone up for thoughts, but you're still free to pass personal judgement if they get off to degenerate shit.

>> No.2140747

>>2139565
And the full set with the last tweaks, including futa and normal variations :
http://imgur.com/a/AwYeG

>> No.2140751

>>2140730
Of course yes but do you really think that writing angry comments when you see drawings you don't like here is a good thing?
I still remember the threads that got shit up because of race mixing porn, seriously? just link the thread to /pol/ or something if you cant take it and you have to argue about it.

>> No.2140761

>>2140747
I really like it. Especially with the fluids. But there's something about her left hand that looks off. Though I'm no expert whatsoever.

>> No.2140786
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2140786

Looking for general critique...other than that it is weird and obscene. <.<°

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/33844750/Liquid%20rubber%20suit%20progression%2B%2B%2B%2Bhr.jpg
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/33844750/Puffy%20Hole%20Butt-toy%2B%2B%2B.jpg
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/33844750/Insomnia%20demon%20786%20-%20welcoming%20the%20new%2B%2B%2B%2Bmr.jpg
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/33844750/Insomnia%20mutant%20809%20-%20Facehole%2Bhr.jpg
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/33844750/Insomnia%20bovines%20817%20-%20Musk%20Oxen%2B%2B-%2B.jpg
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/33844750/Insomnia%20bunnies%20723%20-%20fully%20corrupted%20freshlings%2B.jpg
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/33844750/Insomnia%20pet%20780%20-%20Happy%20Buttslurpershading.jpg

>> No.2140792

>>2140786
...is that seriously an anus on the chest of that thing? And is that a small "tail" below it?

>> No.2140793

>>2140792

yes on both questions.

>> No.2140799
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2140799

>>2140786
I have seen some shit.

>> No.2140809

>>2140786
Scat is my favorite fetish, i frequently masturbate to toddlercon and guro, but i can say this without feeling any hypocrisy, man those are some really weird shit.
This makes me genuinely interested thought, do you have a following? how many people are into those? Also what's up with this texture that you put over literally
everything? it makes everything look like a statue.

>> No.2140814
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2140814

can i put finnal lines or is there some fatal errors ?

>> No.2140817

>>2140786
This is like hell hentai
its from satans HDD
the end days are coming

>> No.2140819

>>2140814
Head shape, mostly the jaw, and the right hand looks strange to me.

>> No.2140820
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2140820

>>2140809

well, the textures are rock, concrete, paper, soil and rust textures for the most part.

maybe i should try looking for new ones.

And not many people are into it, but i love drawing it. not sure how many of the 5000 followers are into that specific series though.

<<-- this is the very first of the series from a couple of years ago.

>> No.2140824

>>2140820
dude.

>> No.2140828

>>2140820
Well your gesture and linework seems solid, but i really don't like that chalk/rock texture, if it's part of the fetish the i don't know but it makes
everything feel lifeless.

>> No.2140833

>>2140828

it isn't part of it, so i'll reconsider it and look for different ones.

>> No.2140841

>>2140833
do you have normal stuff ?

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2140843

>>2140786
>>2140820
T...there is a fetish for everything I guess, so weirdass hairy zombie animals with huge dicks and holes everywhere ? Did you masturbate to The Thing when you were a kid ?

I bet you would love Saya no Uta.

>> No.2140849
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2140849

>>2140786
>mfw

The rabbit hole never fucking ends. Jesus Christ.

>> No.2140855

>>2140833
Maybe show us something that you worked on and didn't use textures for?

>> No.2140868
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2140868

>>2140855

I had to go back a bit to find one.
but i use textures in all pictures that i go the traditional route of sketch-ink-flatcolor-shading. the the one without any textures are usually colored sketches.

on this the texture is a different one and the shading of the fur also overlaps it a lot.
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/33844750/Insomnia%20Pet%20%20515%20-%20almost%20pure%20quad%2B%2B%2B.jpg

>> No.2140875
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2140875

>>2140786
I was expecting the worst.
I was not expecting that.

Fucking hell.

>> No.2140883
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2140883

>>2140868
Don't tell me you masturbate to these. As some nightmarish abomination designs that's pretty well made and interesting (reminds of Giger's works) but for fap fuel ? Holy shit, that's just wrong.

>> No.2140910
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2140910

>>2140883

different folks, different strokes, i alway had a transformation fetish.

And funny you should mention Giger, i drew something when he passed away, that ramed up the detail to the most my pc could handle at the time:

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/5da6qskthxsovjx/AADMujxwrBdw0bqRUJRVtajga

>> No.2140930

>>2136828
Even for anime and hentai, use a reference picture. Drawing from memory results in guessing, which skews anatomy.

>> No.2140932

>>2136869
I think the head is where the perspective looks weird. It is impossible for her head to turn so much towards her back. Additionally I believe her head is too big for the proportions of the body. But her ass looks great

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2140934

>>2140484
True. But yeah, I know his anatomy problems and that he is the bigger sameface that I know, but I try to get the best of him, the freedom in his lines and the passion on his work. Thanks.

>> No.2140968
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2140968

Hows linework so far? I'm not planning to change except for hair. Please tell if anything looks odd.

>> No.2140978

>>2140930
I always assumed using a reference is a bad idea, at least for learning. As in, you'll always need the reference crutch. But what do I know, I don't really talk to artists and all of this shit is self-taught.
I probably have really bad drawing habits.

>> No.2140980

>>2140968
Tough life having blowfish for eyes

>> No.2140984
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2140984

>>2140980
I'm hoping its going to make sense in the end

>> No.2140989

>>2140984
I guess that's okay then

>> No.2140999

>>2140978
>using reference is bad
>for learning

Why in the fuck do people constantly think this? How the hell else are you going to learn? Magic? WTF. You use reference to fact check your mistakes. And you NEED references to preform any kind of real study.

>> No.2141000

>>2140999
I'm not a bright person

>> No.2141022

>>2140968
also does lines look too thin? should I make them bit thicker maybe?

>> No.2141167

>>2136687
New Thread:

>>2141166
>>2141166
>>2141166

>> No.2141229

>>2140243
The belly button is still too close to the crotch.

>> No.2141303
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2141303

Another study

>> No.2141439

>>2141022
On some parts yeah. Lines shouldn't be all the same thickness

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2141476

>>2141167
oh fuck no.

>> No.2141495 [DELETED] 

>>2136687
New Thread

>>2141492
>>2141492
>>2141492

>> No.2141505

>>2136687 (OP)
New Thread

>>2141492
>>2141492
>>2141492

>> No.2141603

>>2141476
I'm surprised /ic/ isn't inspired by this it takes quite a bit of creativity to do something like THAT

>> No.2141919

>>2140910

OH GOD MY EYES WHAT IS THIS

>> No.2142117
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2142117

Other than the mis-aligned breasts. What is wrong?

>> No.2142539

>>2142117
Body seems to be sideways, vagina isn't.
Perspective and anatomy is fucked all around.

>> No.2143420

>>2140786
Fucking normalfags in here, I swear...

Anyway, you can improve on everything, but I'd say work on values first, then perspective and later anatomy (because it's decent). Your values are too dynamic and hard to understand. Also I'm not sure about the texture, it seems like you use it a lot, but don't use it to cover mistakes/lack of skill. Have solid values first and then apply texture.
Do figure studies, maybe life drawing, it'll help. Seems like you're lacking basics, your work looks a bit childish.

>> No.2143884

>>2143420
heh...i sometimes though that i maybe should drop the "shading bit of the process where i darken the areas that are in shadow.

>> No.2144319

>>2139401
simple question, is man on woman gay? if not then how could futa on woman be gay?

>> No.2144895

>>2140910
This is so cool.

>> No.2145160

>>2136687
come here and draw some nice tits
http://wall-of-fame.com/