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"To any man who has slaved to acquire skill in his art, it is most irritating to have his ability referred to as a gift. Perhaps there is one genius in a hundred years or more who can achieve perfection by divine inspiration. I have never met such a man, and I do not know any successful artist who did not get there by the sweat of his brow."

Previous Thread: >>2117683

A general message to aspiring artists: "Lack of knowledge can be greater torture than the effort of acquiring it. When all is said and done, nature is your best instructor."

Submit your drawings, receive feedback or critique others! Share your knowledge and remember to thank those who've critiqued or red-lined your drawings. Most importantly, have fun.

This thread is meant for artists who might want to try to make stylized work in-between their studies. It is strongly recommended that you use this thread in conjunction with learning the elements and fundamentals of art. You can also discuss the visual elements of various professional artists as well if you keep it relatively articulate and civil.

>Fresh off the boat? Read the fucking sticky!
http://www.squidoo.com/how-to-draw-learn

https://sites.google.com/site/ourwici/
>Proko
http://www.proko.com/videos/
>Ctrl+Paint
http://ctrlpaint.com/
>Hitokaku Index
http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
>0033
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317
>List of active livestreams
http://livestreamstatuslist.appspot.com/
>fellowBro's books
http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
>Tutorial/Reference Collection
http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
>Japanese Animu Tutorials
http://iradukai.com/
>Figures
http://reference.sketchdaily.net/

Remember the words of our good friend Glen Vilppu: “No rules, just tools.”

/ic/: "Daily reminder that Artists can now make up to 20k biweekly"

>> No.2123227
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2123227

Working on this

>> No.2123228

>>2123227
i like the eyes. anatomy is horrible though

>> No.2123232

>>2123228
>>2123227
Anatomy's fine, except for long neck and fake boobs.

>> No.2123237
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2123237

Started with Chariot. Gave up on everyone else's face. Any tips/ suggestions/ insults?

>> No.2123241

>>2123232
>Anatomy's fine,
>except [insert reasons for why it's not]
is it your occupation to protect people from critique no matter the cost? or is it just low standards? you did this last time too and you were wrong that time too. pls stahp

>> No.2123248

>>2123241
Be specific when giving critique. Just saying "anatomy's horrible" includes ALL of it.

>> No.2123252
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2123252

panzer

>> No.2123254

>>2123248
well, yeah. i did mean all of it.
saying "Anatomy's fine" also includes all of it.

>> No.2123309

>>2123252
is it yours? nice

>> No.2123322
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2123322

>> No.2123323
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2123323

>>2123322

>> No.2123328
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>>2123083
My god

>> No.2123338

>>2123323
>>2123322
Are these referenced?

>> No.2123370

>>2123323
>>2123322
these are really good, very appealing to the eye

>> No.2123374
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>>2123338
This was my reference for hazuki, the falling girls wasn't ref'd.

>>2123370
t-thanks.

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>>2123323
Chuba?

>> No.2123384
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ok guys. Im finally taking the step from always sketching to try make something somewhat finalized, but i have no idea how to go about this process.

With pic related for example, its not done / final. but im wondering,
What kind of line size would you use for something you would color? With my thick lines i feel like it would look terrible.
Is it too detailed for semi "cutesy" style?
Do you draw on a huge canvas and zoom in doing every line?

I feel like i can keep it like this if im going for the manga look but i really dont know.
Im lost, help!

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>>2123375
It's odd how they now use the entire animation budget to make these cutesy faces.
Shit was more expressive and fun in the 90s.

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>>2123413
different studio for a different genre.
we still get series with plenty of faces.

>> No.2123420

>>2123322
Ive been sitting here thinking about why I like this pic and I think it's a combination of how the hair flows, the good line weight/lineart and the filled in pink

>> No.2123429
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>>2123413
because they changed their target from animation enthusiasts to perverted weaboos

>> No.2123436

>all these ideas to draw
>too tired and will quit after 10 min
fuck how do I finish something?

>> No.2123439

>>2123436
by not masturbating too much.

seriously, don't masturbate so much.

>> No.2123440

>>2123436
give up, you're not a fucking artist

>> No.2123468

>>2123436
Leave it open on one of monitors, procrastinate on the other. You will be coming back to it adding small changes.

>> No.2123547

i have the feeling that /ic/s opinions are stifling me a little. like "girls/little girls aren't worth drawing".
somewhere in the back of my head i feel like nothing is worth drawing. how do i get back some of my passion? taking it easy isn't really solving anything.

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>>2123547
Don't let the thought police tell you what you can and can't draw if you want to draw cute and innocent girls that's a form of art that is an ideal in the most supreme and fundamental sense because it signals purity, virginity, humility, and virtuous values that are now cast away and demonized by Feminazis, hence the backlash from what may seem like an Anon from /ic/ where infact it's a legbeard tumblretta as /ic/ echoes Tumblr unfortunately.

>> No.2123564

>>2123547
It's only okay when minorities do it. If you're a cis male prepare to get polearmed.

>> No.2123575

>>2123557
well, it's not like i need to draw little girls and /ic/ doesn't let me. it's more like my standards have become so high (partly due to this boards influence) that i have trouble expressing anything freely.
like why can't i just say "i'll draw a happy little girl and then call it a day!" and be done with it? other seem to be able to do it. or is it wishful thinking on my part?

>>2123564
i'm not worrying too much about feedback. i'm worrying about my own mental blocks.

>> No.2123576
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>>2123384
Have you seen poo-dkg? This might give you some inspiration on how to proceed (pic related).

It currently looks good but you might want to play with perspective next time.

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>>2123575
look at this smug brat.
it was probably drawn by some sweaty korean in a dark room after working for 18 hours straight. do you think he cares? no, its just lines on a piece of paper to him.

what you draw is meaningless no matter how good it is, they're just lines on a piece of paper (or pixels on a screen).
just draw whatever the fuck you want, I don't see the issue here other than you being peer pressured by what is probably the worst collection of artists on the web.

Draw the damn smug.

>> No.2123591
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2123591

>>2123557
I'm here to learn to draw in general, my goal is animu grills. Keep your goal in your head at all time.

>> No.2123612

>>2123384
Finalizing and polishing projects comes down to what style you want and like. You could keep the lineart as-is, or you could completely paint over it - it doesn't really matter what you do and you simply have to figure out how you go about it yourself by trying different things over and over and eventually you'll find a style you like. Either way however if you don't want to go for the easy block-in color manga-looking style, a nice start for painting is blocking in and adding greyscale values. Where you go from there is entirely up to you.

>> No.2123643

Reposting because I didn't realize the thread was ded.
>>2119736
Can you post process of one of you pieces, and what program do you use?
I really want to paint similar to this.

>> No.2123645

>>2123576
this is beautiful, will look him/her up!
yeah good perspective is definitely something i need to push harder, of many things.
>>2123612
Thats what gives me a blackout, i dont know what will potentially look good or if i even have the skill to execute it, ill have to stop being scared/lazy and try more things. Reading this calms me down a bit, thanks. I get too easily frustrated

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>>2123588
>do you think he cares?
well, you think he doesn't?
>what you draw is meaningless no matter how good it is, they're just lines on a piece of paper (or pixels on a screen).
>just draw whatever the fuck you want,
i guess i'm too autistic for that

>>2123591
animu girls, sure, but doing what exactly?

>> No.2123649
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>>2123647
Doing cute things, silly. Or just reference a nude model and have fun with that.

>> No.2123657
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>>2123429
He says, in reference to an ecchi OVA series.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Golden_Boy_(manga)

>>2123547
Don't give those rainbow-haired she-twinks any power over you.
Your dick is your only master. Follow him wherever he takes you.

>> No.2123662

>>2123657
Based Nippon

>> No.2123670
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2123670

>>2123649

>> No.2123676

>>2123237
You muted values and finished faces shows a lack of understanding for the planes of the face. Anime characters in general show like 0% of their facial geometry, so it's more important than anything else to internalize this geometry before going for something so stylistic, if you want it to turn out looking right.

>> No.2123701

>>2123670
who is this semen demon

>> No.2123728

>>2123413
What is this from?

>> No.2123730

>>2123728
Already been linked, read the replies.

>> No.2123733

>>2123728
Golden Boy. The animation is way above par, considering it's a comedy show with lots of titties.

>> No.2123780

>>2123252
Love Кaтю́шa at the top!

>> No.2123784

>>2123676
>Anime characters in general show like 0% of their facial geometry

Thats more of a modern anime thing, although all animation usually simplifies/omits features for a reduced workload.

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2123785

Seriously;

Is there any good book, video tutorial or even course that attempts to explain stylization? It feels like realist shit is all over the place, and you are all by yourself to learn about cartoon and other stylized stuff.

anyway, redlines tips and trick are much appreciated.

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2123787

I rarely do requests but the guy I did this for seemed to like it so it was a success I suppose.

>> No.2123790
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2123790

What did I miss, The guy seemed to like it but I thought it would look better while I was making it but now that it's done all the life seems gone somehow.

>> No.2123833
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2123833

That OP image is way too amusing.

>> No.2123834

Anyone else inspired by OP image to draw a chick being fucked by a tank gun?

>> No.2123837

>>2123833
How do you do your lines? It's always clean.

>> No.2123843

>>2123833
Is this the artist I think it is?

>> No.2123848

>>2123837
I do my lines on SAI, and pretty slowly.
>>2123843
Depends on who you think I am?

>> No.2123849

>>2123843
sure.

>> No.2123859
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>>2123083
>Mfw the op image

>> No.2123887

>>2123785
>stylization
it's kinda personal, especially with faces.
like, once you put it out there, you are basically instructing people to draw in your style. not that they will copy it to a tee, but the thought is still kinda bad.

that being said, generic moe and some old school styles are covered in some japanese books.

>> No.2123939

>>2123848
Do you have a tumblr?
I remember seeing an artist on tumblr draw in that style almost exactly.

>> No.2123957

>>2123939
Sure: thdark.tumblr.com

>> No.2123961

>>2123957
Aaaah, that's right, I remember now. You ARE the artist I thought you were.
>followed...again

>> No.2123963

>>2123785
My opinions:

>she looks sort of angry, give her a more youthful innocent look by raising the inner brow or whatever
>her ears stick out too much

>> No.2123970

>>2123657
A god-tier ecchi OVA series, m8

>> No.2123979

>>2123834
My inspiration for that left when I jerked off too it.
Whoops

>> No.2123983

>>2123676
Eh well I did that on purpose? I mean I understand what you mean, I do non-animu studies too but when I tried coloring/ shading their faces that way it just turned out awkward. Are you saying how I currently made them is bad/ wrong?

>> No.2124011

>>2123413
To be fair, The pacings of scenes Werke garbage

>> No.2124015 [DELETED] 

>>2123254
>saying "Anatomy's fine" also includes all of it.
Which is why "except" is there you mong.

>> No.2124017

>>2123970
No doubt, Golden Boy is hilarious and is one of the few anime where the dub is superior to the original voice acting. (I'd post webms, but 4chan doesn't support sound webms wink wink nudge nudge)
But still, it's ironic that >>2123429 said
>because they changed their target from animation enthusiasts to perverted weaboos
while replying to fucking Golden Boy of all things.
Especially since the original topic of discussion (>>2123375, Hibike! Euphonium) barely has any fanservice and is mostly about teenagers dealing with their personal issues, breaking down boundaries, and growing the fuck up.

>> No.2124023

>>2123785
I find it funny how /ic/ spent years saying stylization was something you didn't need to learn and that Loomis was all you ever needed, then they got minimally decent at naturalism and realized "shit, stylization is an actual thing you gotta learn".

Stylization has a lot to do with design, visual language, line economy and, when it comes to characters, storytelling.
Take out a notepad and write a brief on your character, who she is, what she does, what's the goal of the character and what you hope to communicate through her.
Then read about logo and brand design. A lot of it can be applied to character design and will help you envision and actually design your character before you start drawing.
Finally re-read "Fun with a Pencil". Jack Hamm's "Cartooning the Head and Body" and Ben Caldwell's "Fantasy Cartooning" are also useful for rediscovering the value of line economy and geometrical design in drawing.

Now practice.

By the way you girl looks like a shota.

>> No.2124040

>>2123785
>>>/3/
looks good enough

you're right though even bald I can tell she's female

>> No.2124289

Is it worth it to invest on a figurine or one of those wooden mannequins?

>> No.2124305

>>2124289
for art, I'd say no. there's an abundance of free software that allows you to the exact same thing (and more) wiithout having it take up space or needing a place to set up.

however, I do recommend getting a bjd for dress up purposes. who doesn't love dress up games?

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2124358

work's had me -extremely- burnt out recently, couldnt even pick up my stylus at home on monday, so i fell back on drawing smug lolis again...

b

>> No.2124365

>>2124358
drawing smug lolis is not acceptable anymore. space marines are the new hotness.

>> No.2124366

>>2124365
what about smug space marine lolis?

>> No.2124368

>>2124366
that's a good idea.
i'm inspired now~

>> No.2124371

>>2124366
draw it now!

>> No.2124375

>>2124358
it would be better if she didn't hold that object in quite such a horizontal way.

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>>2124366

>> No.2124380

>>2124377
gdi

>> No.2124389

>>2124365
>>2124366
there was a point where i was so overexposed to things like elves dragon space marines every 'generic western industry' thing under this sun for a good few months, working ~13 hours a day doing things that i don't like that i've grown to really dislike them. i try not to, but the trauma will live on in me forever.

>>2124375
i was thinking this too, but i had no idea how to fix it. it's supposed to be a pillar or something, i guess...

>> No.2124403

>>2124358
I'm really not liking that front leg. Maybe I'm just seeing it wrong but it looks like it takes up 2/3rds of her hips.

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>>2124366

>> No.2124467

>>2124445
body is actually somewhere in the vicinity of "acceptable" now, at least in terms of proportion. neck and head is still a mess though.
again, go simpler with the shapes. get the big shapes down before focusing on details.

the gesture: the neck is only a small part of the whole. ask yourself, was it really necessary to make her neck go that way? again, consider the bigger picture, the bigger flow.

>> No.2124471 [DELETED] 

>>2124467
Redline pls

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>>2124467
Thank you here's a better shot at the figure without all that stuff.
>>2124471
You redline it.

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2124476

gonna wait for a new draw thread to post it there, but here's this. whatcha think anime people

>> No.2124478

>>2123701

it's jenny from robot boy

>> No.2124488

>>2124305
Is there a software that stands above the rest or should i just pick whatever i find on google¡

>> No.2124495

>>2124289
I got one of the wood ones a while back when I was a noob and the mobility sucks. If you can't remember your proportions it might be handy but getting one for pose reference is a bad idea.

>> No.2124538

>>2123252
Where can I see more?

>> No.2124561

>>2124488
I like blender, but thats cause I do other shit with it as well.
but honestly just find a free one and they more or less do the same shit.

>> No.2124563

Where are those smug space marines at?

>> No.2124579

>>2124563
Draw them. You're an artist, aren't you?

>> No.2124581

>>2124579
I can't be the only one though.

>> No.2124583
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>>2124358
>>2124366
careful, you might trigger someone!

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>>2124583

>> No.2124587

>>2124583
The porn threads been fucked up with loli h8er alligators for a few months now. I literally want to know who spread /ic/ to tumblr whales

>> No.2124593

>>2124587
It's the same faggot that keeps shitposting, just like how it is the same faggot that threw a bitch fit before and the same faggot that has always been shitting up threads whenever Teal posted a redline.

>> No.2124603

>>2124583
>I can't keep looking at that shit
What the fuck is this shitposter saying? Nobody is getting forced to look at anything like we're in Clockwork Orange.

>>2124593
I really hope they leave, they are pretty much counter to some of the that are great about 4chan. Moralfaggotry of the censoring kind chokes content and culture.

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working on this. some print for a con later in the fall... my anatomy is so bad--was wondering if anyone could redline this? already going to make sora's eyes smaller and the heads maybe smaller too? thank you for any input!!

>> No.2124690

>>2124676
You should really construct the shapes for the form before you start laying in things, I think. You've got their necks connecting way too far down. Shoulders connect completely wrong as well. Look at some human torsos and compare/contrast.

Construct your forms more before laying in these flats, flip your image.

And that blue looks terrible with that skintone, Hopefully that's not final.

>> No.2124701

>>2124403
i think i can see it, thanks for pointing it out...

>>2124583
i'm not gonna let some tumblrina shit on my love for fit lolis.

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>>2124701
>i'm not gonna let some tumblrina shit on my love for fit lolis.

>> No.2124709

>>2124701
>I'm not gonna let some tumblrina shit on my love for fit lolis
good man. If only everyone stood up for their love of lolis life might not end up so bad.

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>>2124593
I miss Teal, He had some of the best advice I've seen on /ic/

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>>2124712

>> No.2124724

>>2124712
Do you know where can I find more of his stuff?

>> No.2124731

>>2124724
gooogle teal imgur gallery

>> No.2124736
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2124736

How many years has it been since we first saw Teal /ic/?

>> No.2124778

>>2124731
Beat me to it.

>>2124736
Why did people hate on him? He gave sound advice and wasn't a dick as far as I saw.

>> No.2124784

>>2123227
>Doronjo
>not a loli

into le trash

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>>2124784
View Image

>>2124731
That's a true gem.
I don't often find such tutorials web-wide.

>> No.2124793

>>2124778
Take one look at the porn thread and you'll know.

>> No.2124802

>>2124793
I did the op picture in that thread (and the previous one from a month ago, that turned to complete shit), though I didn't start it. See if you can chase me away.

Seriously though, aside from the tumblrites, I haven't had any negative experiences when posting my shit here. Maybe if I start posting more regularly.

>> No.2124846

>>2124802
Post more sketches, I like your style and wish to learn from it.

>> No.2124879

>>2124445
>>2124475
work on those ankles

>> No.2124880

>>2124719
Is this OC? Good job.

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2124904

>>2124563
Not smug though

>> No.2124920

>>2124904
cute

>> No.2124921

>>2124802
If you really haven't noticed by now, mikufag is the one making both this thread and the porn thread. You shouldn't ever be surprised if either turn to absolute shit, because its origin is inherently cancerous.

>> No.2124928

>>2124921
you can always think about making one yourself. i used to make these long ago.

>>2124802
teal wasn't very good at taking any critique. he was kind of special in this way, his horde of fanboys didn't help the cause either

>> No.2124929

>>2124928
>teal wasn't very good at taking critique
probably because there aren't very many people on this board who could actually provide him with useful critique... he's at that level where the argument "post your art to prove you have a right to say something to me" is actually valid. At least on an anon board like this.

>I'm a teal fanboi, if another /ic/ hero steps up I'll gladly become their fanboi instead. Teal taught a lot.

>> No.2124936

>>2123983
They're not bad! They're just a bit awkward. One of them is smiling but their mouth isn't affecting how the rest of the face changes - the cheek suggest a neutral expression. Also, maybe a mix of value issues, too? The color is nice, but the shadows feel muddy and the contrast isn't pushed enough for the shadow to read.

>> No.2124949

>>2124904
space lolis are best lolis no doubt

>> No.2124951

>>2124778
Because he was straight up pedo drawing risque 7 year olds and what not.

>> No.2124953

>>2124778
Actually, it was because he was replying to the trolls.

>> No.2124970

>>2124951
so?

>> No.2124978 [DELETED] 

>>2124778
>Why did people hate on him?
Trollchan. Just look >>/ic/thread/S2018338

>> No.2125062
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>> No.2125064

>>2124978

it was mikufag samefag trolling

>> No.2125066

>>2124475

The chin shouldn't be past the arm miku. That's just bad news bears.

>> No.2125071
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>>2125066
Ouch I didn't see that one thanks for the heads up
>>2124879
yes sir
>>2125064
Nice try Trollchan.

>> No.2125077
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>>2124445

>> No.2125081

>>2125077
It is very helpful thank you!

>> No.2125195
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2125195

Redrawing the originals OPM pages is pretty fun, should do more while waiting for the next chapter.

>> No.2125241
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2125241

>>2124690
more help, please? LOL... i really want to salvage this piece but it's true, i didn't lay down the whole thing before i started, and now i'm kind of ?_? about it.. i'm fine with moving anything anywhere but yea

been flipping the image back and forth this whole time, that's a good art habit i'm trying to get better at too lmao

and no, the blue is so jarring so it's not staying.

i know i'm still going wrong anatomy-wise, so if anyone would like to correct me please!!!

>> No.2125253

>>2125241
>anyone would like to correct me
sorry I can make you grow 8 years older.

>> No.2125269

>>2123252
Why bash though?

>> No.2125270

>>2125241
Ehh, your shoulders and necks are still wrong, even with the redraw. You're sticking them on instead of building them. It's a bit better than the first try though.

I know it's cliche and trite, but please look into the fundamentals, like how the musculature overlaps and attaches around the neck and shoulders, as well as how the neck and collarbones line up. Even a little bit of looking over some material and being thoughtful about how it applies will help you immensely. The OP has plenty of resources, take some time for them.

I can't really help you any more than that.

>> No.2125288

>>2125270
thank you for your advice again! i'll go over it with the fundamentals in mind and hope it turns out.

>> No.2125362

>>2125062
Suika doesn't have a blade don't trigger my autism please.

>> No.2125365

>>2125362
its not a blade, its just a really pointy tree.

>> No.2125445
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2125445

not completely finished yet , but i thought i would show it . steven universe is my favorite show !

>> No.2125462

>>2125445
That's more like almondcyst bro.

>> No.2125542

>>2125445
how horrifying

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I'm an artist who got a "real job" and has pretty much stopped drawing anything "serious" for the past few years. I'm trying to pick it back up and maybe make it some sort of side business?? i'm just kind of just drawing whatever comes to mind. this is something i've been working on this past week. what are your opinions?

>> No.2125591

>>2125445
tumblrcore is a bad dream

>> No.2125599

>>2125445

What is tumblr's fascination with making simple characters look as grotesque as possible?

>> No.2125602

>>2125599
Something about fighting the patriarchy and deconstructing traditional standards of beauty so uglies don't feel ugly.
It's actually just as stupid as it sounds.

>> No.2125731

>>2125195

No loli has a longass nose like that. Look at how murata does his and then come back

>>2125241
Right guy is making the dirtiest ahegao i've seen in awhile. Someone should add sticky white stuff on his face.

In other news, you're flying fucked. Redraw and repaint or go home.

>> No.2125787

>>2125731
The nose looks fine, style and shit.

>>2125195
Is this all digital or did you start with pencil?

The weirdass space around the ear looks fucked to me.

>> No.2125788

>>2125787
>style

Okie dokey mane, you think whatever you want to think.

>> No.2125790

>>2125731
Isn't she supposed to be 28?

>> No.2125813
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>>2125731
> Look at how murata does his and then come back

No shit, that's what I was doing while drawing it. Problem is Murata simply doesn't draw the outline of the nose, compared to here where I had to because of the shadows.
Anatomically speaking, the nose is in the same position as Murata's and it's not any longer. Tried some variations for the shape of it and this one ended up looking the most okay. If you can find a way to make it looks better then why not giving it a try.

>>2125787
I just cleaned and added some grey shades digitally, 95% is done with pencil. As for the space around the ear, those are just the hairs.

>> No.2125816

>>2125813
Are you blind? You drew the bridge of the nose over her eyes. In Murata's art, the bridge of her nose is below her eyes.
And by bridge, I'm referring to the part where the nose turns outwards.

>> No.2125817

>>2125813
That's one hot loli. Reminds me of that little witch from Berserk.

>> No.2125820
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2125820

>>2125817
That ain't no loli. She's 28.

This is her younger sister.

>> No.2125825

>>2125820
everything is rendered so nicely but the face isnt. what a waste

>> No.2125827
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>>2125813
I don't usually do this kind of thing, but what >>2125816
said is right. You drew the bridge almost straight from where it starts to the peak of her nose, along with the nose itself being crooked.

I don't read wanpanman, but you'll need to show me what panel you were looking at, because to me it looks like you were looking at a JoJo panel. She looks like Dio. Araki's girls aren't known for being soft of features, and that's all I could think the entire time I was redoing a lot of this. Your eyes are much too small in comparison to the proportions he's given her, and I think your head is probably too tall in general. You can see that the wanpan artist does not give her those full, pouty lips, because they look too adult.

If all of this is in the original and it really looks close to this, forgive me, but I draw a lot of loli faces and I feel I still could not make her look young enough without getting rid of lines and redrawing the entire thing.

>> No.2125832

>>2125813
no, yours is way longer, it also starts at a different place. altogether yours resembles the proportions of an adult realistic nose too much. basically this >>2125816

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2125837

>>2125816
Guess seeing it the day after helps seeing the problems more, I did felt there was a problem byt it was less obvious. Also, it somehow looks better on paper, nose wasn't suppose to be this straight. I'll try to see what I can do to improve it.

>>2125827
Yours is a bit exaggerated though, her face is longer than that. Should rather have posted some of her last panels in the manga where she looks way more mature.

Drawing loli type faces in serious mode and detailed is a bit tricky eh, I usually don't have these problems when I draw her.

>> No.2125839

>>2125837
Man, I wanna rip off his style.

>> No.2125842

>>2125077
it looks horrible and her neck is broken. and that 12 year old handwriting...

>> No.2125848

>>2125842
i tried it as well, and the pose is just too vague. if i could at least see the arms and whatever object she's holding then i would at least know what the pose is TRYING to do.
as it is it's a little hard to redline.

>> No.2125850

>>2125837
Doesn't look any longer than those references to me, and it certainly isn't as long as the original you drew. You can have a loli type face and be serious, but all those extra lines around the brow make a face look far older. From all the references I've seen so far don't have a single extra line on her face, and with good reason.

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>>2125850
> From all the references I've seen so far don't have a single extra line on her face, and with good reason.

The linework doesn't come out from nowhere obviously, it's supposed to be a redraw of a panel in the original serie.

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>>2125866
Besides, this panel made me think a lot of one by Murata which is more or less the same for her sister, and with the linework, so that's why I intended to combine both styles to redraw this panel of Tatsumaki.

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2125885

>>2125195
Anyway, the magic of Photoshop is kinda working.

>> No.2125886

>>2125885
Damn it, your original nose was way more sexy and fitted this brutish woman.
>wasn't the intent all along

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>>2125886
I would rather be more faithful to Murata's face since that was kinda the point. What's more this edited version has got a slightly better expression that looks more like the original's, I'm more satisfied of it.

>> No.2125936

>>2125885

Oh fucking hell I know what's wrong with the nose now.

It's fucking broken. The angle doesn't respect that of the face at all. Add the nostril and see what happens is what I'm going to suggest here.

>>2125790
>>2125820

Loli sized is still loli. I can dream damn you.

>> No.2125945

>>2125936
I don't see how it's "broken".

>> No.2126003

>>2124712
He is still doing some streams though.

>> No.2126004

>>2125602
this guy

>> No.2126014

>>2126004
he's right though.

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>>2125842
Can you explain more about what looks horrible? I unfortunately do not have enough knowledge to spot my mistakes.

This is how I visualized the neck. The head looks to the right and is also tilts towards the camera. How did the neck break? Placement on body, the twist, or something else?

Sorry for poor handwriting, it cannot be helped. Is it at least understandable?

>> No.2126087

>>2126083
I'm not the anon that complained, but that area does look a bit odd. I think that you have drawn things pretty well, but the way the forms sit in space does not make sense. Try holding the pose yourself, and see where your arm is in space compared to your head...when I do it my chin is hidden behind the arm, but in your drawing the chin is in front of the arm. It takes a lot of effort and is very uncomfortable to lift my chin over my shoulder like that (granted, I'm a dude and not a 12yo girl, but I think the point still stands). I also think the scapula can be further rotated towards the boob and away from the spinal column. The way you draw the spine of the scapula and the trapezius going into it also feels a bit awkward.

>> No.2126090
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2126090

Drawing people's OC's on Gaia Online so I can try out some stuff without feeling pressure.

>> No.2126097

>>2124712
You must have lived under a rock. His shit was cliche and he drew the same shit over and over and over. Only a retard would worship such mediocrity.

>> No.2126100

>>2124929
You don't know what criticism is. It just people like you that shouldn't be giving any critiques.

>> No.2126102

>>2126087
It was my sloppiness that made the chin look as if it was in front of the arm I had it visualized behind it until someone pointed it.

>> No.2126226

>>2124476
honestly feels soul-less

>> No.2126234

>>2126090
whats gaia's community like?

>> No.2126246
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2126246

I have literally no idea what im doing.

>> No.2126251

>>2125269
Who cares ?
Looks nice

>> No.2126253
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2126253

got bored half way

>> No.2126285

>>2126234
I don't do anything except for check on my thread, so the only thing I can tell you is: people love free drawings of their OC's no matter how shitty it is.

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>>2126087
Thank you for your response. I tried to fix the problems that you have mentioned. I think I have gained better understanding.

>> No.2126356

>>2126322
Your stuff always looks pieceameal and flat. It's like you know the parts but you don't understand the whole. It affects your contours making them rigid in some spots an thus flattening the whole drawing.

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>>2126356
His work is just fine he understands form and shape well enough for it to be convincing he clearly shows the directions in space I have no idea what you're talking about.

>> No.2126365

>>2126362
Nobody was talking to you. The shit don't flow and he just take parts of cliche poses and sticks them together. You can tell he just copies portfolios. It's dumbshit like you who are easily fooled by superficial shit and don't learn to do shit on your own.

And take your chibi crap and cram it up your ass.

>> No.2126370

>>2126356
He's got good structure and knowledge, but yeah they feel sorta laboured and the fluidity and naturalness/gesture is a bit lacking. I think though that stuff just comes with time though from repetition. He's done the hard learning stuff, now it's just doing the mileage to apply that knowledge more effectively.

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>>2126365
>copies off portfolios
>cliche poses and sticks them together

You have no idea what you're talking about however in terms of form and shape, and poses and flow I believe you can better demonstrate these on canvas if you know what I mean.

>> No.2126379

>>2126370
Degas and Goya have good structure this guy has a short vocabulary when it comes to the figure. He doesnt know how to fit it all together and can't invent on his own. That ruins structure. You can't see it because you don't know what makes a good drawing good, you only know your reaction to it. If it makes sappy shout outs to formula and exploitation you get your cookies tossed.

>> No.2126387

>>2126378
I know a brat that copies shit from weebabroo sites when he's bored when I see one. You got your head stuck up another man's ass you cant draw any other way. I know more about you as an artist than you do. And don't talk like you know art, youre just an internet brat.

>> No.2126388
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>>2126387
Here's the reference to better help you.

>> No.2126391

>>2126379
Eh, I don't usually come to the alt style thread, so that one drawing is the first I've seen of the guy. Can't say if he copies stock things or not or has a formula or whatever. I was just going by a single image, which seems pretty decent now that he fixed some of the issues I pointed out earlier. If you can link me more drawings of his I'd be able to get a better sense of what he can or cannot do.

Also, comparing some random dude on 4chan to old masters is hella silly, obviously that is not a fair comparison. Even comparing the best artists of today to the old masters is often a laughable comparison.

>> No.2126394

>>2126388
Help me prove my point? Why yes it does. And it shows how you distorted things as well. "good job"

>> No.2126399

>>2126387
>used a reference image of a 3d porn actress from the reference thread for an anime image
>brat that copies shit from weebabroo sites
what?

>> No.2126402

>>2126391
If you want to draw well you look to those who have surpassed others. What's silly is the belief you can get good looking at kitsch shit all day.

>> No.2126404

>>2126391
>comparing to old masters is laughable
there's plenty of amazing artists at their level or above today, they're just focused on other things and no one really cares that much because good art is common as dick to find.

>> No.2126405

>>2126399
That pose with that kneeknock stance is straight weeb shit. I may not know where exactly it came from but I can tell it's from something aimed at some Korean shut in who wants to draw weeb shit.

>> No.2126408

>>2126404
Not one of them is a weeb though

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>>2126405
Does it really look like I referenced off some random Animu artist? If so I guess I'm getting close to be able to take real models and turn them to something different which is exactly what I've been wanting to do.

>>2123303

>> No.2126421

>>2126356
>nice critique
>anon seems like decent guy

>>2126365
>>2126379
>>2126387
>>2126394
>>2126402
>shit-flinging
>hostile to everyone

nigga what are you doing, calm the fuck down. being mad at the posters here isn't going to help anyone. take a walk outside and smoke a cig or something.

>> No.2126422

>>2126405
the drawing itself is "weeb shit", but the reference was clearly not.

>> No.2126437
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2126437

Really trying to get back into my groove, focusing more on using shapes to construct my figures.

Inanimate objects elude me still..

rip me a new one please, I'd like to improve as much as I can before summer is over.

>> No.2126456

>>2126416
>I-I just draw from photos. I don't follow 0333 on pixiv or look at ashito doujinshi. I don't even know what those are. I'm totally self taught, h-honest.

>> No.2126457
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2126457

Is this chinese enough

>> No.2126492

>>2126456
i agree with your initial post but you really need to stop being so fucking autistic.
also stop being so obsessed with calling others weeb. most of the time it doesn't mean anything and it's just a random insult.

>> No.2126506

>>2126456
He admitted to using 3d reference and even gave the references he used. I don't know why you're bring in who he follows on pixiv or what he does on his free time.
Anime fans aren't some boogieman out to destroy your art skills.

>> No.2126525

>>2126456
But I don't know what those are and the only immersion in animu I get is from smug reaction posts.

>> No.2126651
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2126651

Any y'all know how to handle drawing tires? I tried replicating how they're done in Initial D but... well I failed.

>> No.2126683

>>2126456

Would you just chill the fuck out already, anon? You're acting extraordinarily butthurt here.

>> No.2126713

>>2126457
6/10

>> No.2126733

>>2126651
Remember that rims aren't just details on a flat surface. They have dimension to them.

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>>2126457
You got to "cheat" more and suck on another person's style. Weeb it up a bit, like this

>> No.2126741

>>2126740
I've missed you.

>> No.2126742

>>2126388
Those looks pretty good references, got any link where you found the torrent of this book ?

>> No.2126751

>>2126742
It's from Visual Nude Pose Book. Japanese publish books like this all the time. This series and Human Motion are popular right now. Why do think all the poses look similar between artists? They're copying from the same source!

Here's one of their dirty little secrets
blog.livedoor.jp/neomani/archives/51470509

>> No.2126755

>>2126751
Yes, found the name of the book by a reverse google search but couldn't find torrents.

Also, 404 not found.

>> No.2126762

>>2126755
Put http:// in front of it and you'll see something you won't forget.

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>>2126762
> Put http:// in front

>> No.2126765

>>2126762
> and you'll see something you won't forget.

like 404 ?

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>>2126762
>>2126765

>> No.2126796
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Was checking my old hard drive and apparently I've drawn quite a lot of nice stuff that I've completely forgotten about

>> No.2126821
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2126821

When you're stylizing, is it better to eliminate extra details entirely or to keep some (textures, coloring, patterns) when working with stuff like animals?

>> No.2126825

>>2126821
You keep the good details and throw away the unimportant ones.

>> No.2126831

>>2126821
I think when it comes to animals, simple is better. That would look better without all those extra lines.

>> No.2126865 [DELETED] 

>>2126740
Your shitpost quality is very bad now.

>> No.2126947

>>2126821
depends how how far you want to go. there aren't "rules" to stylization, you could even put more details in there than there are in reality if you so feel.

if you're talking anime cartoony art though, less is better because they're going for fast appealing forms.

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2126957

How to draw kawaii furry/pokemon shit like kids from furaffinity or good japanese artists? I don't get pokemons anatomy, muscle and bones structure. It's too simple.
>Mouth
>emotions
impossible tier

>> No.2126961

>>2126957
you have to feel it anon

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>>2126356
It is a result of my lack of knowledge, I still have much to learn about form and other things in my studies. I am a slow learner so the problem might persist a long time while steady progress builds up.

>>2126437

>> No.2126992

>>2126986
You got a link to your stuff? You've got some nice construction skills.

>> No.2126996

>>2126957
>I don't get pokemons anatomy
this so much

>> No.2127014
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2127014

which one?

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2127019

>>2127014
Right version with the left hand of the left version seems like a good idea to me.

The wip has got a good potential, looking forward to how you're gonna continue it, smug lolis are the best.

>> No.2127022 [DELETED] 

>>2127014
Right

>> No.2127112

>>2127014
this foking smug.

>> No.2127125

>>2127014
the right looks better constructed atm, but I don't like the pose. since she's leaning on her arm (I'm assuming) it doesn't make much sense for her body to be going the opposite direction. so in that case the left fits better. because when leaning on an arm your upper body would typically be leaning on the arm not away from it.

>> No.2127142

>>2127125
Not if her right leg is up on the throne like that

>> No.2127149

>>2127014
they are both lacking something

>> No.2127189

>>2127142
hm. fair enough, still feels awkward to me though, I was just assuming that was the reason.

>> No.2127201

>>2127019
Agreed.

>> No.2127279
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2127279

Painted some grey ass' animu before going to bed

>> No.2127304

>>2123083
I don't mind that much if people call it a gift. Being born with a lot of talent is praised in this society maybe even more than hard work. Although, everytime they say they don't have the talent and just couldn't do it, I try to convince them that anyone could do it if you just practice every day. But they always insist that they don't have the talent. Pitty.

>> No.2127312

>>2127304
To be fair, I have almost 0 artistic talent. I'm actually really good in my own field, but when it comes to art I'm just hopeless. Despite that I still try getting better, but being someone with no talent means even though I put in thousands upon thousands of hours into art, there's going to be 12 y/os that just surpass me.
and even if you try not to think about it too much, it really kills your confidence when you see it.

>> No.2127322

>>2127312
Don't try to care to much what others think. Just express yourself. If you never get that good then that's fine but in the end you will advance just a little bit. How much have you been practicing?

>> No.2127324

>>2126992
>nice construction skills

please be a troll

>> No.2127327

>>2123413
>comparing OVA's with TV anime

also
>4 days late reply

>> No.2127335

>>2126762
>Put http:// in front
*Put .html at the end
Where can I find scans of these books?

>>2127014
Right

>>2127279
Slightly reduce the cranium to fix head proportions

>> No.2127471
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>>2127279

>> No.2127480

>>2127471
Do you get a temporary high redlining stuff?

>> No.2127481

>>2127480
Do you get a temporary high insulting redlines?

>> No.2127492
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>>2127480
>shitting on redliners

>> No.2127496

>>2127480
It's still better than having someone critique you without showing their art.

That being said, teal a shit.

>> No.2127519

>>2127480

redliners are a best

>> No.2127521
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2127521

what other clutter should i add? I can't seem to fill the space well enough

>> No.2127543

>>2127496
Why? He was at a decent level, enough to teach beginners at the very least. I have yet to see a decent redliner after him.
And the people who bashed him provided no help at all after the shitstorm.

>> No.2127566

>>2127022
>>2127189
>>2127335
Thanks guys, I'll base it off the right one and go with this guy's suggestion... >>2127019

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>>2127521
plates
cups
stacks of papercups
napkin holder
other kitchenware objects (electric kettle, thermos, blender, etc)
assorted bottles (salt&pepper shaker, or decorative bottles if that's your thing)
maybe desserts, like cakes and such (to the right, make the counter longer)

If you find yourself struggling to think of clutter to fill a piece with, just google pictures of similar settings for inspiration. You should be able to find a few items to grab from various pics to suit your fancy.

>> No.2127655

>>2127471
>>2127335
Ty fam, Will keep that in mind

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2127682

halp how do i render tummies

>> No.2127702

>>2127521

Add a display cabinet for sweets

>> No.2127713

>>2127543
>And the people who bashed him provided no help at all after the shitstorm.
you wouldn't know that
>I have yet to see a decent redliner after him.
this is the reason i didn't like him. because of fanboys like you.

>> No.2127854

>>2127471
the only one in these threads worth a damn

>> No.2127859
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more shit

>> No.2127866

>>2127854
there are others giving advice too. but why am i even bothering.

>> No.2128025
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summer time

>> No.2128042

>>2127480
I am unsure what gives you that impression. I don't know what idea you have but redlines are difficult for me to create. I am still learning just like anyone else. The drawing is attempting to implement my critique so I can practice at the same time. The text is the the more important part. I think you might have a distorted image of why I post.

>>2127481
>>2127492
>>2127496
>>2127519
I'd prefer being able to engage in dialogue at my own discretion without others.

>>2127655
If you found it useful I am glad.

>>2127854
Calm down, you rate the image too highly.

>> No.2128121

>>2127859
girl spoted

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2128159

trying to get a handle on different materials

>> No.2128161

>>2128121
and how does that matter

>> No.2128164

>>2128161
Because girls matter

>> No.2128170

>>2128164
Why yes, just as guys do.
Yet you don't see anyone commenting a drawing of a (supposed) guy just to state the gender.
Why not just drop that, it isn't of any use to anyone.

>> No.2128172

>>2128159
>Raven

Y E S
E
S

>> No.2128174

>>2128025
Guy spotted.

>> No.2128175

>>2128174
oh come on.

>> No.2128217

>>2128042
surely did, thanks

>> No.2128231

>>2128170

I bet you like to explain the joke to people

Honestly it was just a pointless comment that did not need a pointless reply

>> No.2128255

>>2127521

coffee grinder stopped

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2128358

started this like a week ago, stopped, and now im not sure if i want to finish it??

i want the anatomy to look weird since thats the nature of the character, but i think i overstepped those boundaries. the legs look fucked up but not in the fucked up way im aiming for (as well as a lot of other things..)

any advice for salvaging?

>> No.2128417

>>2127713
Show me the better redlines then and prove your point.

>> No.2128508

>>2128417
what point? you think this is about "americas best redliner" you fanboy?
i can definitely not show you anyone that posted as many and dumps as much shit on the page as teal. if that's what you mean. but that alone doesn't make teal any better than he is.

and in any case that doesn't matter. because comparing redlines is something that only fanboys do. they have to be helpful and that's all. and teal is not the only person who ever contributed you shitter. it really isn't that hard to understand.
maybe YOU never contribute anything, which is why teal seems so special to you, but others do.

>> No.2128531

>>2128508
Show me your redlines.

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>>2128508
>""
You forgot your avatar, Riddler

>> No.2128626

>>2128025
So ham who are your inspiration?

>> No.2128645

>>2128508
personally I'm a newfag to this board so I'm not entirely sure who teal is, but you sound like a fucking retard.
regardless of whether his redlines were shit or not, this is a critiquing board, I fail to see the issue unless he's just completely wrong, and from what I've seen its not.
Even if you're a complete noobie and your only advice is "that left arm looks weird" its still far more helpful than what you're doing.

>> No.2128719

>>2128042
Id prefer you not to prefer buddy.
Its not about people running to your aid, its about newfags generally shitting on redliners.

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>>2128159
I think I will stop here. Critique?

>> No.2128786

>>2128774
I like everything but the weird fat fingers
Her left hand more so than the fist. Looking more like tentacles and placement of the digits is a little funky.

>> No.2128790

>>2128786
Hands are a big weakness for me.
There was a certain aesthetic I was going for but it looks like it didn't work out. Back to hand studies. I really like those chunky hands from rondo duo

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>>2123083
I'm sorry if this isn't in conjunction with the topic or style that OP has, but Here's some of my work that I could use some critique in.

It might not be anime or anything flashy, but it's what I do. If it looks like shit, don't flat out say so. Critique would be better. I'm not limited to this, but it's what I mostly do.

>> No.2128798

>>2128793
first take a proper picture of it
unless your art is photography and hopefully its not

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>>2123083
those captchas are making me houngry

>> No.2128806

>>2128798
>Proper Picture

Fuck. I'm on mobile and uploaded that picture from my phone. I didn't notice until now, and it's turned 180 degrees counterclockwise.
Meh, oh well. And no, I don't do photography.
Calligraphy. Crappy and sad calligraphy.

>> No.2128838

>>2128531
after you show your art.
really, people like you don't deserve to get shit. not from that teal faggot, not from anyone. the fact that he created entitled shitters like you makes me more mad than anything else.

>>2128645
>personally I'm a newfag to this board
yeah, then don't butt in. and learn to read the thread before replying.
as i said, it's not about teal, it's about his idiot fanboys.

>> No.2128840

>>2128838
Who is teal?

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I was really not trying to post this very much, but I just discovered luminosity and HOLY CRAP did I go overboard! I'm really on the fence on whether I like this or not. It's very much my style, but man that's a lot of layers.

Apologies for the size.

>> No.2128903

>>2128866
end yourself

>> No.2128906

>>2128903

I apologize for fucking up your eyes so much that you can't see to type a critique.
I also apologize that I can't take the credit for fucking up your face. Thank your mother for me.

>> No.2128908

>>2128866

are you a girl?
if so, where you from?

are you a boy?
kill yourself

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>>2128906
begone, evil spirit and never enter ic ever again!

>> No.2128926

>>2128866
Yeah, you went overboard alright.

Work on those values, I know you're going for the pastelspace soft grunge look or whatever, but you need more values to bring out the shape in that face. The white eyelashes look weird too, try a baby blue instead.


I mean, if you went with some sort of girl that has space for hair it'd be pretty neat. Change that white bg to a deep blue or something? So that the image pops more. You could go somewhere neat with this, but you're not there enough.

>> No.2128927

>>2128838

You're contributing nothing but drama. What's the point of getting butthurt over fanboys? Think it'll change anything? People are gonna like people who contribute, you can bitch and moan about it or learn from it. How is it hurting you in anyway? Unless...

Oh no... I'm...I'm so sorry! I didn't realize your ego was so fragile. Please forgive, everybody quick! Shut down all fans! They're hurting anon's feelings because they like things!

>> No.2128928

>>2127859
you just got me into watercolor, thank you!

>> No.2128938

>>2128927
i'd have no problem is you just worshipped teal on your own. but you keep putting others on your own level and teal above all others. just look at >>2127543
and i can't accept that. not when the artist in question is someone like teal.

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2128953

>>2128938
>i can't accept that
Are you fuckin princess of /ic/ or something?
Your grace, forgive us! :>

>> No.2128994

>>2128953
who made theseese >?

>> No.2129047

>>2128953
i don't need to be to disagree with shitty opinions. and what's that image supposed to be? is that yours?
it'd be pretty disappointing to know that someone who isn't a shitter would defend teal fanboys.

>> No.2129049

>>2128953
Source on those drawings?

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>> No.2129102

>>2129047
Show me your art now, don't be a pussy.

>> No.2129108

>>2129049
>>2128994
that's a pixiv file name, just go to a random picture on pixiv and replace the last number sequence with the one in the file name

>> No.2129119

New Thread:

>>2129118
>>2129118
>>2129118

>> No.2129125

>>2129108
i've seen people with similar lines here before, though it wasn't at this level the last time i saw those.

>> No.2129262

>>2127014
both

>> No.2129862

>>2128938
I'm not the anon you were talking to before. Looks like you just wanna keep shitting on people to make yourself feel better. It's ok, I know how it is, people like people who contribute things and we can't contrubite so no one will ever like us and that makes us feel super cruddy. It's ok, shh, I'll give you a hug, come're *hugs* there there i feel u