Alternative Art/Stylization General

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Alternative Art/Stylization General Anonymous Sat May 9 00:42:07 2015 No.2080784 [Reply] [Original]

"To any man who has slaved to acquire skill in his art, it is most irritating to have his ability referred to as a gift. Perhaps there is one genius in a hundred years or more who can achieve perfection by divine inspiration. I have never met such a man, and I do not know any successful artist who did not get there by the sweat of his brow."

Previous Thread: >>2073899

A general message to aspiring artists: "Lack of knowledge can be greater torture than the effort of acquiring it. When all is said and done, nature is your best instructor."

Submit your drawings, receive feedback or critique others! Share your knowledge and remember to thank those who've critiqued or red-lined your drawings. Most importantly, have fun.

This thread is meant for artists who might want to try to make stylized work in-between their studies. It is strongly recommended that you use this thread in conjunction with learning the elements and fundamentals of art. You can also discuss the visual elements of various professional artists as well if you keep it relatively articulate and civil.

>Fresh off the boat? Read the fucking sticky!
http://www.squidoo.com/how-to-draw-learn

https://sites.google.com/site/ourwici/
>Proko
http://www.proko.com/videos/
>Ctrl+Paint
http://ctrlpaint.com/
>Hitokaku Index
http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
>0033
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>List of active livestreams
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>fellowBro's books
http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
>Tutorial/Reference Collection
http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
>Japanese Animu Tutorials
http://iradukai.com/
>Figures
http://reference.sketchdaily.net/

Remember the words of our good friend Glen Vilppu: “No rules, just tools.”

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>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 01:32:39 2015 No.2080809 >>2080784 why do you gotta use my pic though?

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 02:05:47 2015 No.2080826 >>2080809 Because it's a good horror story to show what happens if you don't practise.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 02:36:26 2015 No.2080848 >>2080826 At least its good for something

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 03:08:47 2015 No.2080879 >>2080826 What's wrong with it?

Anonymous Sat May 9 03:15:38 2015 No.2080883

>>2080809
Whoever makes the animu threads tends to use an image from the previous thread in the OP. Don't know why it's done differently than the draw thread, but that's how it's been for quite some time.

For what it's worth I do like your image, and I think it has potential. The OP of the thread probably liked the image too, and hence it's here.

>>	FiRez !!tndrCZJHE+I Sat May 9 04:05:49 2015 No.2080912 File: 163 KB, 570x830, 1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I think I'm done with this.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 04:10:20 2015 No.2080913 >>2080879 I'm being an asshole.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 04:13:57 2015 No.2080915 >>2080912 Shrink the features and you are done

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 05:09:26 2015 No.2080950 >>2080912 Did you just give up on her arms?

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 05:10:21 2015 No.2080951 >>2080915 no hes done mate. no more

Anonymous Sat May 9 10:17:45 2015 No.2080963
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Should I fix the right shoulder and the feet, or does it look fine? I feel like I messed up the leg perspective a little bit, but I'm tired of fixing this pic, so if the mistake is not big enough I'll let it slide.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 10:23:35 2015 No.2080967 File: 170 KB, 923x375, image.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2080963 Bitch needs some meat on her

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 10:28:52 2015 No.2080970 >>2080967 it's a boy

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 10:41:05 2015 No.2080980 >>2080963 Overall I really like this, but it looks like all of her weight is in her legs, particularly her thighs.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 11:38:03 2015 No.2081009 Once again OP picks the most inappropriate, non-stylized image for the thread. I bet he's the same guy that makes shitty redlines with his shitty big brush.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 11:42:58 2015 No.2081014 >>2081009 this is why renaming it to "alternative/stylization" was a bad idea, too vague of a title.

Anonymous Sat May 9 11:51:30 2015 No.2081019

>>2081014
We've had this argument before, It was titled Anime/Manga before all you started to complain that it would attract the autists from /a/ and shit up /ic/ with bad drawings. The title is staying as is, it's not a big deal.

If you want to get technical about it, you can say that the proportions as well as the subject matter has been exaggerated to meet an alternative art criteria.

>>	Pleb Sat May 9 11:51:32 2015 No.2081020 >>2081009 why are you so angry?

Anonymous Sat May 9 11:57:41 2015 No.2081024

>>2081019

One thing I learned over the years is that people are going to fucking complain no matter what you do, so just do whatever makes the best thread possible. General threads work best when they're vague and all encompassing cause the more specific you get the more low effort circle-jerky bullshit you get, and this place is shitty enough as is.

Anonymous Sat May 9 12:03:55 2015 No.2081032

>>2081019
I never complained about that, but I remember it was because /co/ felt excluded. Not because of traffic from /a/, you just fucking made it up, fucking hater. If there was that complain, it was because of trolls who shit on anime to rustle our jimmies, cause it's sooo funny to watch our reactions hee-hee, fucking underage little shits, i hope they all die from an accident or become obese or penniless human trash.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 12:10:58 2015 No.2081034 >>2081024 then why do we have these threads if there isn't any real difference between alternative and the draw thread?

Anonymous Sat May 9 12:15:42 2015 No.2081036
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>>2081032
>because of trolls who shit on anime to rustle our jimmies, cause it's sooo funny to watch our reactions hee-hee, fucking underage little shits, i hope they all die from an accident or become obese or penniless human trash.

wow

Anonymous Sat May 9 12:19:57 2015 No.2081039

>>2081034
Because the regular draw threads shy away from stylization and exaggerating proportions since all they're interested in is copying a picture and getting it to as close to it as possible like a human xerox machine in the hopes they can learn something to eventually do what we do here.

Anonymous Sat May 9 12:52:29 2015 No.2081062

>>2081034

Draw threads from what I seen are generally more illustration focused, with a strong emphasis on realistic anatomy. Normally you would just combine both threads together and call it a day but you're forgetting this is 4chan and no one here is mature enough to deal with different tastes and opinions. Because of that you'll get "stop liking what I don't like" shitstorms and idiots who can't understand that people have different end goals with their art.

So that's why a separate draw thread and a stylization thread is required.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 13:37:32 2015 No.2081094 >>2081062 So choose a pic with stylization in it, damnit. I wouldn't be able to find the thread without the title.

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>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 14:42:12 2015 No.2081151 >be on one layer >need to be on another one >put stroke in >need to ctrl z it >photoshit turn you to a previous layer and fuck everything up if you are not careful how to turn this shitstain feature off ?

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 14:44:55 2015 No.2081153 File: 84 KB, 750x850, skrnbu3.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] kind of messed up towards the end >>2081151 i enable ctrl+click to select a layer i need to mitigate that problem

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 14:50:23 2015 No.2081160 >>2081153 you still have a problem with heads, its a bit loopsided. Also try making the connection for the head and the neck a bit more natural.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 15:10:00 2015 No.2081178 >>2081153 see >>2081160 you tend to hide details with hair. it'd be better to really learn these areas as well instead of guess working

Anonymous Sat May 9 15:33:02 2015 No.2081207

>>2081153
Learn how to draw the underside of the head. The downward facing plane under the jaw is often omitted in bad anime, and you're consistently doing the same.

If you really don't want to study real heads, at least purchase some quality anime figurines to study from, focusing on the underside of the head and the neck.

>>	FiRez !!tndrCZJHE+I Sat May 9 15:44:14 2015 No.2081215 File: 171 KB, 570x830, 1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2080915 >>2080951 >>2080950 Sorry, there were still many issues, particularly perspective and the contrast was too low.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 15:48:13 2015 No.2081218 >>2081215 I want to punch her.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 16:03:21 2015 No.2081235 Guys I have a picture thats high resolution like 4k and i want it to be a png thats not above 500kb when i scale it down to 900x 860 i still get it to weight 1.8 mb and it has jagged lines when zomed in a bit. wat do ?

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 16:09:42 2015 No.2081238 >>2081032 It's mainly that Brazilian kid that fucks up everything. I seriously think he is either autistic or has bipolar, maybe even retarded.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 16:59:20 2015 No.2081274 >>2080967 >>2080980 it's a boy :3 I'm glad he ended up looking like a girl though, I'm posting this where my normie friends might see it, and I don't want any uncomfortable questions.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 17:02:51 2015 No.2081275 >>2081215 What the fuck thats amazing is this what an artists plateau looks like? HOW CAN YOU GET BETTER THAN THIS?

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 17:05:01 2015 No.2081276 File: 620 KB, 240x236, 1394555900407.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2081275

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 17:08:00 2015 No.2081281 >>2081275 >HOW CAN YOU GET BETTER THAN THIS? There is always room for improvement.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 17:15:36 2015 No.2081285 >>2081281 >not understanding sarcasm

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 17:21:57 2015 No.2081287 >>2081276 >>2081281 >>2081285 i wasnt trying to be funny dipshits that is by far the best work ive seen around here i seen good stuff and bad stuff but this one is just sublime

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 17:26:04 2015 No.2081290 >>2081275 I can't even tell if people are baiting or just being stupid nowadays I feel old

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 17:36:45 2015 No.2081294 >>2081287 come on dude you're not supposed to follow up on your bait.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 17:37:17 2015 No.2081297 >>2081287 please.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 17:37:30 2015 No.2081298 >>2081287 Pirez please

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 17:49:02 2015 No.2081307 File: 166 KB, 570x830, 003_2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2081215

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 17:59:34 2015 No.2081319 >>2081307 You've been polishing this 3 weeks now, right?

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 18:09:33 2015 No.2081327 >>2081319 you must be new here.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 18:19:39 2015 No.2081336 >>2081319 Its clearly a paintover anon

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 18:45:49 2015 No.2081351 File: 190 KB, 1017x645, something came out.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Advice on this guys?

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 18:54:03 2015 No.2081357 >>2081215 I don't think the elbows go there m8

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 19:00:11 2015 No.2081362 >>2081336 I barely see any changes, and there's no description in the post. It is not clearly a paintover. :/

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 19:11:44 2015 No.2081371 >>2081351 wonderful work are you a professional illustrator of any kind?

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 19:14:03 2015 No.2081375 >>2081371 I wanted to get the advice while is easy to correct man. I'm not even good don't do that

Anonymous Sat May 9 19:24:04 2015 No.2081389
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>>2081215
My main concern is that the rib cage at her right side is not visible considering she is facing at an angle.
You can see it more clearly at what anon did here >>2081307

And her arm is kinda short. You can extend those a bit.

Anonymous Sat May 9 20:03:23 2015 No.2081440
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They say the best way to retain what you've learned is to teach so here I go.

There a lot of problems with your gesture and you don't seem to have a center line to guide where certain body parts are supposed to go. The figure in your drawing seems to have all of her features shoved to her right even though it's in 3/4 view. The head also looks like it's attached closer to her left shoulder.

I've read that every illustration is essentially made of four types of lines. Curves, counter curves, horizontal, and vertical. Pretty much straights vs curves. You might want to look into that along with perspective.
This isn't the best redline, but I hope it helps.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 20:04:24 2015 No.2081442 >>2081440 forgot to reply to >>2081351 sorry.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 20:30:41 2015 No.2081456 >>2081440 thank you very much, althoug I wanted to trick a bit anatomy for a more dinamic pose, I guess it would be like hiding behind a muh style.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 20:48:35 2015 No.2081471 >>2081375 im only saying that because ive seen pros making shittier things but got paid big bux i dont see anything wrong with your work other than it needs some mesh cleanings do you have a webcomic that i can follow?

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 20:50:02 2015 No.2081472 File: 176 KB, 1200x1704, 0011.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I'm doing this, can someone please tell or correct me if I'm doing something wrong? thanks a lot.

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>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 21:18:44 2015 No.2081500 File: 446 KB, 1267x1423, 0000000000013.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2080477

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 21:19:34 2015 No.2081502 >>2081487 seems kind of spooky >>2081472 clothes look like they are made out of cardboard.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 21:20:03 2015 No.2081504 >>2081487 there are some level of stylism when is really hard to add a correction, if is ok I would tell you to work your hand a bit they look average roughter than the resto of the draw.

>>	Pleb Sat May 9 21:57:04 2015 No.2081532 File: 197 KB, 558x869, IsnotphasedadWIP.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 22:03:26 2015 No.2081539 File: 213 KB, 1600x1000, sliceee.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] thoughts on fighting guys?

>>	Pleb Sat May 9 22:12:23 2015 No.2081549 >>2081539 You should totally give me your tumblr

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 22:15:41 2015 No.2081550 >>2081532 You work has a lot of appeal! Draw those feet.

>>	Pleb Sat May 9 22:18:26 2015 No.2081557 >>2081550 Thanks friendo, I will

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 22:18:37 2015 No.2081558 >>2081549 I don't have one... but it seems everyone has a tumblr, so i should probably make an account.

>>	Pleb Sat May 9 22:19:39 2015 No.2081560 >>2081558 Well if you ever make one give dem links yo!

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 22:27:14 2015 No.2081569 >>2081500 lol this looks terrible and i'm not just saying that cause i think your 0033 attempts are pathetic. those cute faces aren't distracting enough to overlook that shitty anatomy.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 22:28:22 2015 No.2081570 File: 690 KB, 800x900, Scarab2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Guess im going with another one of these think ill base this one off a scarab

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 22:46:31 2015 No.2081584 >>2081569 Then show them both what they did wrong instead of talking out of your ass. ;)

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 22:48:13 2015 No.2081586 >>2081500 your ribcages are too big and that area is not very petite. your armpits are also worse than in the original. >>2081569 rude

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 22:52:33 2015 No.2081593 >>2081504 Okay I'm working on it now thanks.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 23:27:20 2015 No.2081620 >>2081502 >clothes look like they are made out of cardboard. I'll try to fix it, thanks.

Anonymous Sat May 9 23:30:25 2015 No.2081621

>>2081569
Can you tell me what it is that you find wrong about the anatomy? I don't understand what you mean by 0033 attempt. When I make critique I try my best to redraw the entire picture, it is common to do for good practice. 0033 is a very good artist who does this a lot though, I am very far from his level.

>>2081586
Thank you, I still have much to study. If you can can, I would be very grateful if you could answer some questions of mine to help. Which part of the ribcage is too big, or is it the entire form? Can you explain to me more about an area not being very petite? Why are the armpits I drew are worse than the original, I don't have the knowledge to tell the difference? Were those the only areas drawn wrong?

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 23:40:51 2015 No.2081630 >>2080784 >/ic/: "Daily reminder that Artists can now make up to 20k biweekly" Is this for real?

FiRez !!tndrCZJHE+I Sat May 9 23:44:35 2015 No.2081632 [DELETED]

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>>2081218
I want to punch myself for being so shit

>>2081275
>>2081281
>>2081285
>>2081287
I actually got an irl moment similar to this. The guy even asked me for a photo.

>>2081307
>>2081389
Thank you guys, Don't worry I will not bother posting it again, I will just update it on my tumblr and da

>>2081319
Polishing would mean that I got it right at first and I have only been adding bells and whistles.

Anyway, I'm probably not as slow as many people think, heck, I could bet money I'm way busier than the average /ic/ goer and on top of that I work on too many pieces/exercises at once.

As for pic related I changed the semi-realistic original version and made a more stylized one

>>	Anonymous Sat May 9 23:48:06 2015 No.2081640 >>2081630 https://www.patreon.com/sakimichan

FiRez !!tndrCZJHE+I Sat May 9 23:56:03 2015 No.2081652
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>>2081218
I want to punch myself for being so shit

>>2081275
>>2081281
>>2081285
>>2081287
I actually got an irl moment similar to this. The guy even asked me for a photo.

>>2081307
>>2081389
Thank you guys, Don't worry I will not bother posting it again, I will just update it on my tumblr and da

>>2081319
Polishing would mean that I got it right at first and I have only been adding bells and whistles.

Anyway, I'm probably not as slow as many people think, heck, I could bet money I'm way busier than the average /ic/ goer and on top of that I work on too many pieces/exercises at once.

As for pic related: L/R?

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 00:01:35 2015 No.2081660 >>2081652 L , more common and easily excepted face looks "prettier" R, more "real" looks a bit off, still "pretty" in it's own way not as easily attractive as R WWSD what would sakimi do? go R FIGHT THE POWER

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 00:05:13 2015 No.2081665 >>2081652 The one on the right.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 00:09:42 2015 No.2081668 >>2081652 Am I wrong in thinking that the eyes on both look slightly misplaced?

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 00:18:49 2015 No.2081675 Pirez and Mikuchan best artists on /ic/. Prove me wrong.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 00:23:52 2015 No.2081684 >>2081652 L = deer in headlights look R = has more potential. Expression is much more natural, but still needs work

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 00:25:29 2015 No.2081685 File: 348 KB, 1249x847, something came out.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2081471 so it wasn't sarcasm? then thank you but I don't have any current projects sorry >>2081440 is this more correct? I wanted to kept the dynamism

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 00:32:11 2015 No.2081694 >>2081685 That looks a bit better. Practice practice practice. Try working on your line quality, too.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 00:33:31 2015 No.2081695 >>2081694 this is not the line art, is my sketch

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 01:26:54 2015 No.2081737 File: 165 KB, 1200x1704, 0021.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Better? help?

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 01:47:57 2015 No.2081752 File: 945 KB, 2316x3000, rei.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] kinda struggling with this. Advice is appreciated

Anonymous Sun May 10 02:34:18 2015 No.2081775
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>>2081737
Her left shoulder is a little bit far.

Even though her leg is straight, there should be an indication of her knee caps.
You should also express her calf muscle a bit. Be careful not to exaggerate it.

Regarding the feet, in this perspective we should be seeing the feet from above.
You can also use the ankle as a guide on how to connect the lower leg and feet together.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 02:50:57 2015 No.2081786 >>2081775 Thanks a lot.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 04:12:19 2015 No.2081813 File: 239 KB, 1200x789, zz.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2081737

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 06:10:01 2015 No.2081857 >>2081652 L one has some fucked up proportions. It's like you squished her head horizontally.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 06:13:13 2015 No.2081859 >>2081660 >>2081665 >>2081684 >>2081857 L is better you blind faggots

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 06:31:28 2015 No.2081871 File: 1.09 MB, 1164x1598, kumikov4.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2080477 how far i got from this rough tonight

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 06:35:59 2015 No.2081873 >>2081871 got site m8?

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 06:37:45 2015 No.2081874 >>2081873 godsh0t.tumblr.com

Anonymous Sun May 10 06:42:36 2015 No.2081875

>>2081621
remember that the ribcage is not an oval, it's egg shaped, which means it is narrow at the top. it being egg shaped helps make space for the shoulder and clavicles. try it out.

also for stylization, sometimes people will draw animu girls with thinner/smaller ribcages to make them look less sturdy than they need to be.
in your case, just compare the ribcage with the thin arms (they also may be a little too thin). anatomically, the arms barely have any space because the ribcage takes up so much space vertically.
as for the armpits, it's the same problem with the ribcage. your ribcage takes up so much space that you barely know where to place them. the whole thing needs to be placed lower, and as i mentioned before the arms are too thin.

also remember that this is all relative. the arms wouldn't look as thin if the ribcage wasn't this big and vice versa etc.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 06:53:01 2015 No.2081881 >>2081500 ah i'm sorry i didn't see this critique as i just found out there was a new thread. i'll keep this in mind next time.

Anonymous Sun May 10 06:55:37 2015 No.2081884

>>2081652
R: eyes are too close together. they need to be about 1 eye apart. the neck looks really thick, almost fat with a chin like that. a little less would've done the job.

L: looks weeb-ish
try to break down the lines more, especially when it comes to the eyes. it's fine to break the line at the corners or other places. keep it simpler.
making them completely round and googly looking like that doesn't work unless you're drawing a more cartoony style.

arm looks like a log in both cases

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 07:31:05 2015 No.2081896 File: 170 KB, 500x500, pet_bord.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Pretty proud of this, honestly. But as always, there is room for improvement.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 07:33:33 2015 No.2081897 >>2081896 nice cutie

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 07:49:34 2015 No.2081904 >>2081896 She needs bigger tits.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 07:55:54 2015 No.2081907 >>2081904 >She

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 08:00:08 2015 No.2081908 >>2081904 Give her a few years.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 08:00:11 2015 No.2081909 >>2081652 Why is her ear on the second girl attached to her neck?

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 08:20:23 2015 No.2081923 File: 449 KB, 1633x946, 004.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2081652 geez firez kun

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 08:28:29 2015 No.2081925 >>2081859 >>>/a/ loomis are talking here child

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 08:47:27 2015 No.2081936 >>2081871 I'd 練習 with her anytime.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 09:09:07 2015 No.2081945 >>2080784 How nice wow

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 09:18:01 2015 No.2081950 >>2081871 I don't know if this is a compliment or an insult, but I wish I could make that many mistakes, yet make the overall picture look better than the sum of its parts.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 10:26:17 2015 No.2082004 >>2081871 Head looks formuliac Arm and hand looks like one flat shape Legs and feet look rushed and flatly overlap Pelvis looks warped Sloppy painting on thigh and torso Perspective is in disconcert Poor framing Poor composition Lackluster subject

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 10:32:39 2015 No.2082015 >>2082004 your mother.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 10:36:09 2015 No.2082024 >>2082004 nice nitpicking

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 10:39:12 2015 No.2082028 >>2081871 Everything from her abdomen and down looks more detailed than the rest of her. It looks odd for me at least. Otherwise, great coloring.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 10:50:26 2015 No.2082041 >>2082004 >Lackluster subject U WOT M8

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 10:50:53 2015 No.2082043 >>2081871 comfy palette and style, could use a bit more polish though. also what >>2082004 said, it looks really nice on first impression but when you look at it for a while the faults start to come clear.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 11:19:56 2015 No.2082066 >>2081813 Impressive, thanks a lot.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 11:22:59 2015 No.2082068 >>2082004 >Lackluster subject Insulting the artist is ok, but insulting Euphoniums is not.

Anonymous Sun May 10 12:51:53 2015 No.2082120

>>2081875
Thank you for answering my questions, I think this has been a problem that I could not notice for a very long time. I will keep your advice in mind and try not to repeat my mistakes.

>>2081881
It is no problem, thank you for the opportunity to practice. I have learned much from doing so.

>>2082066
You are welcome, I hope that it was useful.

Anonymous Sun May 10 13:06:22 2015 No.2082132

>>2082120
to add something: the "small ribcage" is kind of a stylistic thing, you you need to be careful, as it's all relative. if you're not your heads will seem too big or your bodies too frail, or both. so feel free to dismiss this entirely.

the important part is the egg shape, and leaving space for the shoulder and clavicles. proko recently did a good video on the ribcage, check it out.

Anonymous Sun May 10 14:12:47 2015 No.2082193
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>>2081950
>>2082004
>>2082028
>>2082043
Thanks for the input guys. I don't think enough people hear it on this board but your input really helps me out (I only started painting in March so I'm a little nervous about posting).

Sorry about the sloppiness, total working time was about 8 hours-- I think I can definitely push myself harder and make more refined content.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 23:09:30 2015 No.2082615 >>2081923 Anon gets it right.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 10 23:43:15 2015 No.2082639 File: 45 KB, 350x400, 02.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Every time I try to locate some type of anime cute style, I find a specific style that looks real nice (like pic related) but it's always porn, or furry... or both.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 00:45:07 2015 No.2082672 I feel like something went terribly wrong with the shading.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 00:46:29 2015 No.2082674 >>2082639 That comic is really good though, ive fapped to it some time ago~

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 00:47:03 2015 No.2082675 File: 9 KB, 377x428, eepee2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I feel like something went terribly wrong with the shading.

>>	GreyDeath Mon May 11 02:14:58 2015 No.2082732 File: 2.37 MB, 3300x5100, Sketch 660v2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Another stab to salvage a piece from last thread. The concepts that I have are annoyingly simple, but took me forever to do.

>>	GreyDeath Mon May 11 02:22:44 2015 No.2082737 File: 222 KB, 776x1200, Sketch 660v2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Another stab at salvaging a piece from last thread. Annoyingly simple concept that just takes me so much time.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 02:29:10 2015 No.2082742 File: 202 KB, 864x1069, vamp.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I think i might be getting carpal tunnel synd. Fuck

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 05:32:27 2015 No.2082891 File: 814 KB, 2308x1210, cummyko.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2082193 i'm back with more cummyko

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 08:29:50 2015 No.2082959 >>2082891 headshape looks off

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 09:10:34 2015 No.2082993 >>2082891 Cumiko doesn't have sharp eyes. Btw i would totally play a fps like that.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 09:19:17 2015 No.2083006 >>2082993 First Person Semen?

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 09:22:21 2015 No.2083010 File: 1.72 MB, 2308x1210, 1431339707258.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2083006

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 09:33:23 2015 No.2083024 File: 1.13 MB, 1024x1994, 1431315548315.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] How is this for practice?

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 12:14:22 2015 No.2083186 >>2083024 Not bad, but remember that the muscles opposite the action have to be streeetched in extreme poses like this one; the pecs should be more akin to curved straight lines from the sternum to the shoulder insertion.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 12:18:46 2015 No.2083188 >>2083010 9/11

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 14:40:56 2015 No.2083281 File: 366 KB, 1469x879, stoysn.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Really need some help, please.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 15:10:21 2015 No.2083297 >>2083010 >1431339707258 >>2082891 05/11/1509:22:21 No.2083010 THE NUMBERS MASON

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 15:18:33 2015 No.2083304 guys is there a method to quick color fill in photoshop ? theres a doxy tut about this but its for sai. When i use bucket in PS it fills like retard.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 15:19:26 2015 No.2083305 >>2082737 What concept are you referring to? Looks pretty finished to me.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 16:36:05 2015 No.2083367 File: 359 KB, 1000x733, New canvas.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] pretty gun

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 16:39:34 2015 No.2083370 >>2080784 who did the pic related? tumblr?

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 16:52:45 2015 No.2083381 File: 16 KB, 293x331, 1429565327521.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2080826

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 16:55:18 2015 No.2083385 >>2081685 much better, is that thing on the bottom right drooling?

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 17:31:23 2015 No.2083412 File: 23 KB, 450x470, can-stock-photo_csp2538045.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2083186 >wat I get muscle contraction and relaxation, but what else do you mean? Redline to show the errors of my ways?

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 17:49:39 2015 No.2083432 >>2083412 Why not just do a study? you'll learn more that way instead of having someone redline a gesture drawing. You gotta put in the work, man

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 18:22:49 2015 No.2083455 >>2083432 No, I do study, I just have no clue what you said/meant here: >>2083186

GreyDeath Mon May 11 18:28:17 2015 No.2083460

>>2083305
Something that looks quick and slapdashed but with intent so it doesn't look completely cranked out and lazily done. Although if I could crank them out faster that would be helpful too. ;D

I spent a lot of time on the skin and messing with Manga Studio's Movement Blur tool. Not the most intuitive or easy thing to use and every adjustment had me waiting several seconds up to a minute to render. PitA!

But yes, I do consider it finished although I've gotten feedback that I need to put at least some features of Ryuko's face in there, even if it's just part of the mouth. However, the focus is Senketsu's eye and the rest is just gravy.

Anonymous Mon May 11 18:35:18 2015 No.2083467
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>>2083455
Not that anon, but if you do study, anatomy should be part of that study. As someone who understands anatomy it seemed pretty clear to me what the other anon was saying....

Also, what are you using for reference anon?

Here's an example similar to what you drew pulled from google in under a minute.... see how the pecs are stretched and flattened? Your drawing still has them with a somewhat squared off shape... that is incorrect for this pose.

GreyDeath Mon May 11 18:35:52 2015 No.2083468

>>2083281
what are you having problems with? I'd like to know what kind of image are you trying to make? What emotion is the character conveying because at the moment it's like someone just gave her a dildo, beads and told her to lie on the ground.

Does she want to entice you? Is she embarrassed? Does she want you to use them on her or do it herself? Important questions, the viewers want to know. :D

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 18:43:13 2015 No.2083473 >>2083455 To be frank, it's not good. You're better off reading Vilppu and watching him demo rather than getting redline on one of your gestures from /ic/. >>2083186 is not me.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 18:58:04 2015 No.2083482 File: 236 KB, 1600x1000, soeldiur.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] ready to smash some skulls.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 19:01:19 2015 No.2083485 File: 225 KB, 1600x1000, sulldier.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2083482

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 19:33:03 2015 No.2083512 >>2082193 Personally I like the unrefined brushstroke

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 19:34:55 2015 No.2083513 >>2083485 I like this a lot too

Anonymous Mon May 11 19:54:24 2015 No.2083529
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I barely draw any more, going to start getting into it again as soon as I finish school though. I just need to learn how to sketch and build up characters properly, at leat as a first step. Other than that, this is all I have to show right now.

Anonymous Mon May 11 20:52:00 2015 No.2083555

>>2083467
Ahh, I gotcha, you see, I'm a visual learner and having written instructions for something visual like this throws me off. I often learn through reference, illustrations, visual/live tutorials, trial and error, and people showing me what's wrong so I may improve later.

>>2083473
And like I said, I'm a visual learner that also learns by trial and error. Having others critique me and show/tell what's wrong really helps me learn.
Thanks for the feed back.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 21:04:02 2015 No.2083568 >>2083468 It's a dude, dumbass

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 21:41:13 2015 No.2083605 >>2083555 Why do you think I suggested you watch Vilppu. Don't make excuses, anon.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 21:59:24 2015 No.2083638 >>2083605 Oh, I was trying to say thanks, I've got someone else to study now. Well thanks.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 22:07:25 2015 No.2083647 File: 85 KB, 499x750, Mosh___Shoot_03___Navy_Ourfit_by_MickleDesignWerks.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Would you guys please help me to understand these feet?

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 22:09:58 2015 No.2083653 >>2083304 Use the lasso tool first anon.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 22:10:02 2015 No.2083654 >>2083647 Thats a pretty good drawing there.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 22:11:03 2015 No.2083655 >>2083529 I would like it more if you drew the rest of the body.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 22:11:32 2015 No.2083657 >>2083647 holy shit dude nice painting.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 22:12:04 2015 No.2083659 >>2083485 Go easy on the black outline. It's starting to look like something off of cartoon network.

>>	dogma Mon May 11 22:12:29 2015 No.2083661 >>2083385 >drooling she was supossed to eat something but I failed

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 22:24:04 2015 No.2083669 >>2083657 >>2083654 Ok my bad, is just those fucking shoes i hate them. I can't see how the feet work there.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 22:43:30 2015 No.2083692 >>2083647 tumblr?

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 23:05:05 2015 No.2083710 File: 143 KB, 1000x750, xx.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2083647

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 23:05:52 2015 No.2083712 File: 248 KB, 864x1069, vamp.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2082742

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 23:12:55 2015 No.2083717 >>2083712 is this.. m-m-mavis?

>>	Anonymous Mon May 11 23:32:48 2015 No.2083730 >>2083710 more of this

>>	Anonymous Tue May 12 00:16:25 2015 No.2083758 >>2083555 I'm the one who posted the ref pic, I'm glad it helped you anon. Keep studying

>>	Anonymous Tue May 12 00:58:25 2015 No.2083792 >>2083468 Emotion: Slutty Problems: Everything. Basically how the shoulders connect to the neck with the angle? The feet/leg placement with the slight foreshortening. >>2083568 Also, it's a dude. A feminine one, but a dude.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 12 00:59:57 2015 No.2083793 >>2083485 its really stiff, needs more gesture/weight.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 12 04:01:37 2015 No.2083914 >>2083655 Yeah one of my problems is structure. Basically I just started drawing without sketching it out first. Is nice at first, but I really need good plans to actually make whole, good drawings.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 12 04:26:58 2015 No.2083923 >>2083512 Well i'm usually going for the comic/cartoony look, that's just the way i've been drawing since i was a kid.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 12 04:50:40 2015 No.2083945 >>2083793 Yeah, started out as a doodle but then i kinda stuck with it so it's not very thought out.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 12 06:24:31 2015 No.2084000 >>2083710 Oh yes thank you very much anon.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 12 07:11:32 2015 No.2084020 File: 809 KB, 300x249, 1416642909513.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2083297 We COD Black Ops now

>>	Anonymous Tue May 12 08:13:40 2015 No.2084051 >>2083653 no, thats not what im looking for.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 12 08:53:07 2015 No.2084076 >>2083304 >>2084051 paint using solid colors and then use them as masks/selection layers

>>	Anonymous Tue May 12 09:07:46 2015 No.2084081 >>2084076 I do so.. But it takes eons sometimes. Im looking for something faster.

Anonymous Tue May 12 09:13:23 2015 No.2084083

>>2084081
>duplicate your linework on a different layer
>use the bucket tool
>adjust the bucket tool detection options to neatly fill the lineart (transparcency fuzzy should be fine )
>make new layer on top of filled lineart layer
>set to clipping mode
>color

???

It can't possibly take as long as rendering, I don't see why you're so keen on speeding up the process.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 12 09:20:41 2015 No.2084087 >>2084083 >transparcency fuzzy w-whats that theres no such option on my bucket.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 12 09:22:27 2015 No.2084089 File: 44 KB, 166x615, buckets.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2084087 ???

>>	Anonymous Tue May 12 09:32:38 2015 No.2084096 >>2084089 dude thats fucking sai i told you im photoshop

>>	Anonymous Tue May 12 09:33:48 2015 No.2084098 >>2084096 Oops my bad I misread your first post. Uh, maybe use the magic wand tool instead?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 12 10:13:31 2015 No.2084126 >>2084098 yeah might experiment with it. dont know how to set it up to be useful tho.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 12 12:00:41 2015 No.2084211 >>2083717 Since you're the second person to say that , I guess she's Mavis now

Anonymous Tue May 12 13:05:25 2015 No.2084258

>>2084126
Select either fill bucket or magic wand.
Look at top toolbar.
See where it says "Tolerance"
Set that to a high number to get more fuzzy areas.

You have to experiment with the numbers, it's different depending on the messiness of your initial lineart layer.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 12 13:15:29 2015 No.2084263 >>2084258 thank you.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 12 14:25:13 2015 No.2084318 File: 133 KB, 393x529, 1347416046589.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] These threads seem to be focused on anime What if I want to learn how to draw cartoons?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 12 14:28:02 2015 No.2084319 >>2084318 What's the difference?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 12 15:11:37 2015 No.2084354 >>2084319 cartoons are often caricatures of human beens anime is more of a perfect been. dats how I see it.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 12 15:13:00 2015 No.2084358 >>2084319 Western artists generally focus on form over design with characters that can be easly contructed, don't have much detail but are easy to tell apart. For a western artist anime characters are over detailed and a chore to draw

>>	Anonymous Tue May 12 15:18:08 2015 No.2084361 >>2084318 >What if I want to learn how to draw cartoons? Then you go post some where else.

Anonymous Tue May 12 16:02:48 2015 No.2084406

>>2084318
It's not necessarily a focus, you're just forgetting what website you're posting in. >>2084361 is half-right, the environment for cartooning is available but not many people draw them here. You could if you want though.

>>2084358
>form over design
Depending on what you mean by that, I might disagree since I believe form is a part of design. I would say that it's more like in cartooning, design is much more influenced by easy construction instead.

>>	FiRez !!tndrCZJHE+I Wed May 13 01:08:53 2015 No.2084931 File: 338 KB, 700x1050, Capture2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Thanks for the help. Besides the color I hope this is better.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 02:30:31 2015 No.2084993 File: 256 KB, 880x759, Afterschool-PaoloRivera.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] This is a quote from Paolo Rivera I found illuminating and think people ITT can appreciate it as well: "Style is where your aspirations meet your limitations."

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 03:40:22 2015 No.2085022 File: 92 KB, 654x648, ldg.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 04:13:01 2015 No.2085047 >>2084993 You must be some kind of chucklefuck if you got anything illuminating from that inane quotation

Anonymous Wed May 13 06:00:11 2015 No.2085116
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Tried to mix a bunch of tools today, colored pencils were not being friendly today, and brush pen ran out of ink
>Cruising my animu refs folder for 1-3
>browsing /fa/ for 4-6

Eh, I gotta take a break from drawing. Got about a month of vay cay coming up with family, and I've been neglecting several hobbies that need my attention

Thanks for all the tips - see you around!

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 06:59:42 2015 No.2085143 >>2085116 We'll be here, have fun on your trip Tableguy!

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 07:22:45 2015 No.2085153 >>2084993 So what he's saying is that style is created from your lack of ability

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 11:50:05 2015 No.2085268 >>2085153 then how those who have abilty often cant style.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 12:27:29 2015 No.2085297 >>2085153 What he's saying is that style comes naturally.

>>	Pleb Wed May 13 12:44:39 2015 No.2085310 File: 221 KB, 485x812, Deermanthingwip.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Anonymous Wed May 13 12:54:54 2015 No.2085317
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>>2085153
Good stylization requires ability.

Do you really think someone like Jin Kim or Glen Keane would actually like to draw more realistically, but they don't have the necessary ability to do so and the end result is their style? Seriously?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 12:56:03 2015 No.2085318 File: 202 KB, 815x617, marokuro.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 13:41:36 2015 No.2085348 >>2085317 I take you never really seen any of Keane's early life drawings?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 13:54:40 2015 No.2085357 File: 96 KB, 700x552, usakowip.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 14:06:58 2015 No.2085368 >>2085357 woah woah contain that head its too big

>>	FiRez !!tndrCZJHE+I Wed May 13 14:07:08 2015 No.2085369 File: 386 KB, 800x1200, Capture2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Thanks for the help. I hope this is better

Anonymous Wed May 13 14:21:03 2015 No.2085379

>>2085357
Whatup fellow sailor moon fan

Nice scene but the right side has nothing going on and the composition is a bit flat looking. But some nice work with details might overcome that. Think about some ways to spice up the bg

Luna is hard to see, color is too similar in bench.
Usagi seems made of tissue paper, if strong wind blows she will fall over. This is to say she doesnt seem to have solid form. Solidify her forn underneath her clothing.

Vales in general need pushing. Theres lots of discussion about values all over ic. Read up and try applying some ideas.

I think more unique touches like your choice of colors in usagis hair (pretty!) can help to make it stand out.

Very nice feeling overall, and not because im a biased moonie^^

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 14:22:08 2015 No.2085381 >>2085369 You chicken scratch like that because you're on your phone right?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 17:15:01 2015 No.2085518 >>2085348 Nope, sounds interesting. Link?

>>	FiRez !!tndrCZJHE+I Wed May 13 17:49:59 2015 No.2085556 >>2085381 I was on my phone but I thought I had cleaned it up quite decently since I transferred the PSD file to my PC. I know the line work still needs work, however I was not expecting it to be classified as a chicken scratch :/

Anonymous Wed May 13 19:03:21 2015 No.2085649

>>2085556
I wouldn't call it chicken scratch either. The lines do look kind of weird and wobbly though, especially in her sleeves. It looks like the fabric is crumpled up and doesn't look all that great.

The style reminds me of my best friend's art, so I like it.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 19:11:16 2015 No.2085657 >>2085318 nice. the front hairline can come down a little though

Anonymous Wed May 13 19:33:42 2015 No.2085676
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>>2085556
>>2085649
Some reason people have really dumb definitions of what chicken scratch is but the general consensus is that you're too "chicken" to draw a arc/wave/circle/ellipse with a single stroke that you end up scratching a bit at a time so that it looks wobbly as fuck or fuzzy (it will still show through even through copious erasing). Going on over the same line multiple times searching for the perfect line is not chicken scratch (pic related). Autistically separating your Is, Cs, and Ss (lines, arcs, waves) is not chicken scratch either.

Here's a video on exercises on how to gain speed and line confidence
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wgDNDOKnArk

With that being said, your lines for the most part still show signs of chicken scratching but you're getting there.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 20:11:09 2015 No.2085714 File: 3.76 MB, 4158x6331, Demon.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 20:14:03 2015 No.2085716 File: 281 KB, 2354x1600, D0N'T D1E-LO.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 20:14:05 2015 No.2085717 >>2085676 >chris sanders >peter han o hai accd illustration student

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 20:15:37 2015 No.2085718 File: 346 KB, 2294x3200, Shaman-LO.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 20:27:08 2015 No.2085722 File: 136 KB, 549x568, ee2sit.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Any feedback would be mostly welcome!

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 20:47:02 2015 No.2085734 >>2085722 I wanna die bu its cuteness

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 20:59:23 2015 No.2085738 >>2085734 thanks!~

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 21:13:12 2015 No.2085749 File: 673 KB, 891x1178, vampire princess.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Critique welcome, I think her rib cage has a problem but I can't figure out what it is exactly.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 21:25:06 2015 No.2085768 File: 1.09 MB, 830x742, 11.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] i can't seem to loose my animu shit mold.. please help..

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 21:30:59 2015 No.2085780 >>2085768 how did you do the bg?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 21:32:29 2015 No.2085782 >>2085780 paint tool sai, mix of different photo stocks shit ton of green color palettes from tumlr.cum

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 21:48:19 2015 No.2085819 File: 2 KB, 135x135, 1404767758824.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2085722 Oh gosh.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 21:48:27 2015 No.2085820 File: 80 KB, 235x264, deersappointment.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2085768

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 22:32:33 2015 No.2085898 >>2085782 so its painted after all, no filterbashing?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 23:37:57 2015 No.2086002 >>2085357 I hope to see this in its finished form anon.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 23:46:51 2015 No.2086012 >>2080784 character study from awhile back... trying to find motivation to draw again.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 23:49:08 2015 No.2086016 File: 70 KB, 960x692, 10929104_10152508349835881_6442735400253670616_n.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2086012 forgot pic.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 00:08:04 2015 No.2086030 >>2085820 lmao

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 00:59:18 2015 No.2086067 File: 767 KB, 1946x906, boobs.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 01:08:01 2015 No.2086075 >>2086067 fuck, your rendering is too good. but I know it should be between the underbreast and chest, but hestia's ribbon looks like it's slicing through the flesh of her left breast.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 01:46:52 2015 No.2086100 >>2086067 What's your blog again?

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 02:09:12 2015 No.2086110 >>2086067 Can you post that sai tut on rendering you did?

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 02:16:41 2015 No.2086113 >>2086110 >sai tut on rendering I need this

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 02:24:34 2015 No.2086118 >>2086067 Post ref

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 02:50:53 2015 No.2086134 >>2086067 kyle...

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 02:52:45 2015 No.2086135 >>2086067 fuck u kyle i want b good too

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 03:08:42 2015 No.2086148 >>2086067 Thanks god your cute faces are back.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 03:16:50 2015 No.2086153 >samefagging this hard And still nobody cares

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 03:24:46 2015 No.2086158 >>2086153 will you stop fucking saying it all the time ? shit tier troll.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 03:26:00 2015 No.2086160 >>2086158 stop samefagging

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 03:27:21 2015 No.2086161 >>2086067 hey does anyone have all the images posted by kyle here? i want to tudy his rendering

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 03:27:27 2015 No.2086162 >>2086158 >surely if I feed the troll, he will stop! Then again, you're probably samefagging and I'm feeding you too.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 03:49:54 2015 No.2086182 you must be new. kyle does this every time he posts. it's called muh cult of personality. you'll get use to it

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 04:14:17 2015 No.2086186 >>2086182 I don't buy that. Maybe people actually like his work. I swear, post IDs would stop all this bitching.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 06:05:36 2015 No.2086238 >>2086113 i would also need this

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 07:07:34 2015 No.2086257 >>2085368 yes, i thought somthing about the anatomy was off >>2085379 this was kind and constructive at the same time, thanks a lot for taking your time to write this

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 07:49:12 2015 No.2086268 File: 266 KB, 668x1111, tt.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2081108

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 08:07:26 2015 No.2086280 >>2086268 That's some nice coloring anon! Although the castle in the background could be a little bit darker along with the mountains

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 08:09:39 2015 No.2086282 >>2086268 I like it.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 08:19:19 2015 No.2086284 >>2086067 Ay brah are you ever going to finish that Faust's Dream drawing?

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 08:22:56 2015 No.2086286 >>2086268 Very sweet, nice style and composition. The colouring is quite charming too, do you have a blog or anything akin?

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 08:38:31 2015 No.2086289 >>2085749 Lower legs and feet look too small and lack volume. Crown is lazy.

Anonymous Thu May 14 08:43:38 2015 No.2086291

>>2086280
Thank you for the feedback!
I actually wanted the castle to stand out a bit of the background and the mountains to "fade" in the background (thats why they arent darker). So that the wall in the background is like a line, and on the top of that the rest of the background.

I did considere what you suggested, but in the end... I decided to keep it the way it was. Since I can't remove it if I messed up. ;_; But thank you, I will see if I do what you said in another artwork I do in the future with a similar setting (which will happen sooner or later)!

>>2086282
>>2086286
Thank you too! I have a blog >>2080305

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 09:27:27 2015 No.2086313 >>2086284 No

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 10:41:22 2015 No.2086355 >>2086186 Just look at the thread counters every time he posts, faggot. Samefagging 101

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 10:56:14 2015 No.2086369 >>2086355 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UI9t19V6fu8

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 10:58:27 2015 No.2086373 >>2086186 Fucking go on 4chan's irc page and start yelling at the mods who hang out there until someone does something about it.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 11:03:04 2015 No.2086377 >>2086369 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7xxgRUyzgs0

Anonymous Thu May 14 11:43:09 2015 No.2086405 [DELETED]

ID's can reveal so much.

What if that one anon your always agreeing with turns out to be Firez?
What if it turns out that he's the only one liking your stuff?
What if it turns out that the one anon you really do like is the one who shits on all your stuff?
What if it turns out that the trolls are really /ic/ celebrities?
What if it turns out that with the tumblr threads we can all finally see who the real assholes and trolls actually are?

And what would happen if everybody knew who that one anon was, that goes around on the entire board whining incessantly about trolls and shitposters and jellyfags?

Would we still want ID's then?

Anonymous Thu May 14 11:57:46 2015 No.2086421

>>2086405
>muh trolls!

There's no such thing as trolls, the only time you call out trolls is when there's something you don't like, when you don't agree with something or when someone hurts your fee-fees. I highly doubt that ID's would have any effect we would still have that one faggot, we would still have jellies and we will still have the same asspain when someone subtly posts photobashing money making Kron or Sakimi.

Anonymous Thu May 14 12:00:28 2015 No.2086426

>>2086405
>Would we still want ID's then?
because the majority of the people who post on /ic/ are really bitter amateurs who give bad advice and when theyre called out on it they get all insecure and pissy and try to defend their bad advice

if your work is shit and you're giving out advice, then it's much easier to call you out on it

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 12:02:51 2015 No.2086430 >>2086405 That'd be pretty fucking shit m8. ID's would BTFO everybody on /ic/. It's the purge this board needs. It'll never happen though, nobody gives a shit about /ic/.

Anonymous Thu May 14 12:03:31 2015 No.2086431
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I don't see how people can get mad at someone for liking someone's work.

If "too many" people do it, and its too much praise for someones liking, it becomes "samefagging"...

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 12:05:24 2015 No.2086432 >>2086426 It would be much easier and would make more sense if Anons just posted their work along with whatever form of advice or feedback or critique they're giving out and one can get an idea how knowledgeable they are in the topic.

Anonymous Thu May 14 12:07:06 2015 No.2086434

>>2086432
>It would be much easier and would make more sense if Anons just posted their work along with whatever form of advice or feedback or critique they're giving out and one can get an idea how knowledgeable they are in the topic.

it actually wouldn't be easier. not to mention you're expecting obedience from everyone who browses this board and it's much easier to just not do that.

Anonymous Thu May 14 12:22:23 2015 No.2086446

>>2086432
>>2086434
As an idea I can see where you are coming from but it will not make sense.
Some people are painters and can give valid critique on drawings.
Some people work in 3D and can give valid critique in 2D.
etc. etc..

The only thing is to encourage more paintovers/redlines or something to that effect

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 12:32:41 2015 No.2086452 >>2086446 you dont sound like you know what you're talking about. i never said that skills aren't cross disciplinary. not to mention red lines don't help very much in the long run.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 12:33:36 2015 No.2086453 >>2086431 >If "too many" people do it, and its too much praise for someones liking, it becomes "samefagging"... yeeeeaah sure buddy, that's what's really going on

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 12:38:40 2015 No.2086456 File: 243 KB, 673x583, test.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] there we go 100% from imagination, pose is kinda broken but somehow working

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 12:39:05 2015 No.2086458 >>2086453 You're just encouraging trolls to come give a dickriding train to every kyle drawing posted in this thread if you're going to keep being this butthurt over it. Hell I've done it once or twice myself for kicks.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 12:41:06 2015 No.2086465 >>2086456 blog?

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 12:42:10 2015 No.2086467 >>2086452 Yeah, I realized that after I posted that you did not mention that. Sorry. I think I was thinking that an artist's background does not necessarily invalidate his critique and it's hard to draw the line.

Anonymous Thu May 14 12:45:07 2015 No.2086471

>>2086432
>if Anons just posted their work
Some anons are tired and maybe just want to shoot the shit discussing art related stuff

>along with whatever form of advice or feedback or critique they're giving out
Not everything needs to be center around criticism. That would get old very fast.

>and one can get an idea how knowledgeable they are in the topic.
Whatever someone else says, if you don't like it, you will NEVER agree with them. That's how it goes on /ic/

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 12:46:18 2015 No.2086473 >>2086465 mostly no blog, I have tumblr but I dont update or use it at all

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 12:48:03 2015 No.2086475 >>2086458 Or maybe kyle is just that good and you're a buttblasted jellyfag?

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 12:55:11 2015 No.2086484 File: 162 KB, 330x308, 1384916217805.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >mfw you're so shit nobody bothers to accuse you for samefagging from all the praise and attention and start a conspiracy.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 12:55:39 2015 No.2086485 >>2086475 He's good, I like his shit but I've samefagged responses just to troll the easily butthurt here and to stir the hive. Its really easy to do and for some reason the butthurt never ends.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 12:58:00 2015 No.2086489 >>2086484 i know that feel bruh and im probably one of the best in these threads

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 13:03:03 2015 No.2086497 >>2086484 that sadblueballfag pops out again.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 13:19:45 2015 No.2086522 >>2086268 the buildings are warmer and have higher value contrast than the figures in front so it's fucking up the atmospheric perspective and making this a confusing read

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 13:26:16 2015 No.2086526 >>2086432 shitty artists can still give useful advice. in some cases someones personal taste and critical eye have advanced faster than their execution skills so it's still important to listen to their critique

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 13:27:01 2015 No.2086527 File: 61 KB, 317x481, semiselfi.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] this looks like a selfy :L not likely the character but w/e T-T

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 13:28:26 2015 No.2086529 >>2086405 but i would never do anything bad to you anon!

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 13:35:25 2015 No.2086535 >>2086529 shutup firez

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 13:39:28 2015 No.2086541 >>2086405 I think per thread ID's would be the best option.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 13:44:53 2015 No.2086543 >>2086541 >>2086541 so /dpd/?

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 13:48:33 2015 No.2086546 >>2086535 >everyone is firez

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 13:50:33 2015 No.2086548 >>2086546 hi Firez

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 13:53:45 2015 No.2086551 File: 405 KB, 1908x1758, 1431576203227.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] We all know Mikufag aka squidcunt aka nazi troll is the biggest shitposter all around

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 14:12:58 2015 No.2086574 >>2086548 stop

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 14:31:39 2015 No.2086586 >Jani defending kyle samefagging We hit a new low

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 14:47:08 2015 No.2086599 >>2086586 Ironic that the person crying samefag was the only one caught astroturfing itt.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 15:49:46 2015 No.2086636 >>2086522 this this this

Anonymous Thu May 14 16:32:11 2015 No.2086665 [DELETED]

>>2086599
The jani admitted she samefagged before >>2086431 so the irony surrounds a lot more anons than you would think. This isn't the first time the jani has lashed out in spite.

And all this should really put you on edge because now it's clear about who you can't talk out against. You can't criticize kyle or have your posts deleted.

Enjoy your thread.

Anonymous Thu May 14 16:35:37 2015 No.2086669

>>2086665
>You can't criticize kyle or have your posts deleted.

You sound like the same butthurt faggot each and everytime Teal posted and you had your way with derailing the thread and then commence to bitch and moan about the janitor deleting your posts and not being able to shitpost against god emperor king Teal like you are doing right now.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 16:43:00 2015 No.2086675 >>2086669 That's exactly what's happening. Just ignore him.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 16:45:25 2015 No.2086677 File: 367 KB, 2341x3200, Munk-LO.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Anonymous Thu May 14 16:53:43 2015 No.2086690 [DELETED]

>>2086669
>>2086675
Oh I'm sorry did I say jani? I meant MOD. You can cry butthurt all you want, but will see who's butthurt when you get banned for talking shit about cancer thread celeb. Kind of takes the fun out being able to speak your mind freely doesn't it?

Enjoy your threads

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 18:56:45 2015 No.2086827 New Thread: >>2086825 >>2086825 >>2086825

>>	Anonymous Sun May 17 01:01:57 2015 No.2089237 >>2085310 diggin it

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