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So far I've taken figure drawing, Drawing 1 +2, Painting 1, Design, Color and Comp, and 3d Design.

I'm going to try and start to assemble my portfolio soon and will be touching up the images from the last year's of work.
I'll be posting images here for some critique as I start to assemble my Portfolio. Comments and suggestions welcome as well.

I am a computer Art and Animation Major.

>> No.2056459
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'Sorrow' 1/4

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'Hope' 2/5

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'Terror' 3/5

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'Uncertainty' 4/5

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'Passion' 5/5

>> No.2056472

I can never tell with these threads

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Rough beginnings Mud box- Zetsumie head study

>> No.2056484

>>2056453
For the love of god values and studies

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Shield designs -Textures for 3d model)

>> No.2056486

>>2056470
>gay_wip

>> No.2056488

don't give names to beginner level stuff like it's works of art.

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>>2056488
Giving them names was part of the assignment.

Spherical Color Theory, color study. 1/3

>> No.2056500

>>2056453
Is this portfolio for getting work or for getting into an art school? Because the two will have very different things included in them. Also to be quite frank, these aren't yet near a professional level where you can make money off it. If you want to work professionally, work first on your skillset before worrying about your portfolio.

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Spherical Color Theory, color study. 2/3

>> No.2056504

>>2056501
Nice mud

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>>2056500
Art School

Spherical Color Theory, color study. 3/3

>> No.2056507

>>2056506
>comic sans

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Master study 1

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Master Study 2

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Master Study 3

>> No.2056513

>blurry rendering
>anime, but "different"
>yaoi
You're the deviantart poster child, OP.

>> No.2056516

>>2056511
This one is actually pretty good, but you made the shadow of that thing on his neck the focal point with your shadow value. Make it so the painting is more contrasted(is this a word?) closer to the focal point

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Light logic and studies from live model.

>> No.2056523 [DELETED] 

>>2056511
>>2056512
painting/smudging directly over a photo won't really benefit you.

>> No.2056524

>>2056511
>>2056512
Painting/smudging directly over a photo won't really benefit you and doesn't really count as a study

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>>2056524
Wip of facial studies similar to the master works only much less work involved as these are still wips.

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Failed Master Study

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Acrylic on Canvas

>> No.2056541

>>2056534
You can't fail a digital painting it is only ever unfinished

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perspective attempt - Acrilic on canvas.

>> No.2056547

>>2056500
what would you need to put in an art school portofolio compared to a work one ?

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>> No.2056551

Master studies in a portfolio? Are you trying to look for work or are you that devoid of anything of substance? I feel like im getting worse just looking at this thread so I'm gonna hide it now. 1/10 for making me reply

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Dress design

>> No.2056567

>>2056453
>Animation major
>cant even model with mudbox/no animated stuff in portfolio
>concept art is oetaki kawaii sexfantasy
>rest of stuff are basic beginner studys

who you think will pay you for this?
if bait 10/10 made my jimmies rustle

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>>2056567

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>>2056593

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>>2056595

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>>2056596

>> No.2056601

>>2056472
yeah I feel the same...

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>>2056567

When I go to sell or do art I generally make $50 an hour.

>> No.2056681

>>2056593
this is ok everything else is kinda shit i would recommend studying 2-3 years more

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>>2056472
Poe's Law

>> No.2056701

>>2056534
>>2056512
>>2056511
These look too fucking good compared to your other shit.
Smells like paint over.

>> No.2056717

>>2056472
it's legit but she usually draws spanking porn. It's been a while since she posted here

>> No.2056723

>>2056453
there used to threads at conceptart (or it was the defunct cghub?) where you posted your portfolio and eventually get a critique from real pros, or at least people you could check their kind of work

/ic/ seems like a terrible place for trying to do this.

>> No.2056731

>>2056701

You'd be surprised how much easier it is to copy a photo than it is to try something from imagination.

>> No.2056762

Animu stop it, art and animation major... You probably go to Cogswell or AI in which case you should do.solid.studies for a year or two then go to art school so you know what you are there for. You art is all over the place like you are undecided.

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>>2056762
I feel like I need direction: What sort of studies should I work towards? I've been told I'm terrible at expression and I'm starting a small project at stylizing and cartooning characters to practice some more 'expression' based art with body language and faces. Should I be working in stylized art or do more traditional studies and try to create master works and photo studies and light logic?

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I know these are awful but I'm told they sell exceedingly well. The original commissioner has been trying to hire me to create more. should I include this in my portfolio to show that I've done more professional based work in general?

I believe they are called Dakimakura?

>> No.2057325

These are definitely not professional quality OP. Sloppy values, edges, bad composition, bad color choices, hardly any sense of perspective or depth.

I would go into hermit mode for at least another couple of years and really grind the fundamentals and expand your visual library as well.

>> No.2057328

to b8 or not to b8

>> No.2057347

>>2057306
You want to put eroticized my little pony in your portfolio?

>> No.2057374

>>2057306
Holy shit OP. My sides. Yes. Put this in your portfolio. I also suggest you come to deliver it in person in a IWTCIRD-shirt.

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>>2056509
holy fuck kek
nice b8 op

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>>2057347
No they were commissioned work and they are sfw as in not 'anatomical'

My art professor said it was a good thing to add in to show what experience I have. Not sure if it's too risque though my self.

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Value study

>> No.2057411

>>2057407
>Pony porn
>Proff said it was ok
Proff is a dick and wants to fuck with you. when you have a portfolio, you want to show works similar to what your comfortable with, so you get hired to do them. putting pony porn cuts down your demographic, because 80% of people will see it, and call you a clopping faggot and then go

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Background page spread, warm color study, published work

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>>2057374

Praise be to the archive, for a moment I thought I'd never get to see it.

KEK

>> No.2057419

Mate, youre still shit
I hope youre not paying for your classes

>> No.2057421

>>2057418
Is it just me, or does this look more competent than the rest of his work?

Also, why are these censored when there's literally nothing there?

>> No.2057425

>>2057421

it's of a higher quality because it was clearly a labour of love...

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>>2057421
The commissioner asked I put a censor and flip the image for the reverse side of the image. They get printed on to pillow cases to my understanding. Professor said line quality was good with the overlapping. Not happy with Aj's color pallet. Though I have drawn worse for $ I would rather not draw adult content with such characters. I'd much rather move away from that and make art for the sake of enjoyment that can be a bit more age appropriate for such styles. I want to progress to where I can create content people enjoy and make some thing that will affect others in a positive manner. That said anything relating to that specific fandom well when I was a kid I only used to draw horses and ponies when I was 4-7. I still enjoy the style from the show and do things for personal light satire of it all... In all honestly all fan bases are not with out their disappointments. Pic relevant to text

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I like this. I'm not even going to Krompost. Infact, I encourage that people post their portfolios in their own thread. because this is fucking hilarious
the only interesting or good ones>
>>2057412
>>2056534
>>2056512
>>2056511
Everything else is shit op. how does it feel to know that your best work are paint-overs?

not to mention this gem
>>2057418
My fucking sides are gone. Pandering to Horsefuckers is selling your soul, sure you get money, but your work will never be the same again.

>> No.2057438

>>2057427
>I only used to draw horses and ponies when I was 4-7
A-aren't ponies a recent thing?

>> No.2057440

>>2057438

nah, the toys have been around for a while, kinda thing your sister might have played with as a kid. But it's only recently that autist neckbeards have started wanting to fuck them.

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>>2057435
I much prefer doing more innocent stuff like this.

>>2057440
yes It's been around for a long time...

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I will start doing face studies- should I start with attempting to create a face or work from references?

>> No.2057454

>>2057409
those values look terrible. how is even possile that you made thos decent sculpture studies?
>>2057445
both, of course. if you don't mix studies with imagination, it's almost useless

>> No.2057458

>>2057445

Honestly I think your biggest problem is your terrible taste in everything, you should work on that first and foremost otherwise it's kind of pointless giving you advice.
But I'll bite anyway, you should be doing anything and everything, no one exercise is better than another they are all important, so draw a face from imagination, get some refs, correct it. then try it the other way around, study a photograph, then try to recreate it from imagination, draw it upside down, draw it inside out, draw it with no skin on do TRY EVERYTHING.

also you need this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8kfK46nruKM

>> No.2057462

>>2057458
ok!

>> No.2057464

>>2057454
That value study was done before the master works and hardly has the same amount of work. I re did the bust on paper first at least 15 times before moving on. there are still mistakes in the nose that drive me nuts. I'll start doing more studies and post them when done.

>> No.2057499

>>2056488
oh fuck you

>> No.2057748

unappealing style

>> No.2057749

>>2057304
Just Draw

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>>2057407
He was being sarcastic

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>>205743
>>2057442

>going full pone
>expect to be respected professionally

>> No.2057948

>>2057499
Come get me

>> No.2057955

>>2057411
>80%
>implying 80% of people wouldn't ram their cock hard rocks into one of those sweet pieces of pony pussy

>>2057418
Muh dick

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>>2056459
hello
are you aware that horses have horizontal eyes?

Horse tails also actually have some meat in them too. I suggest seriously studying horses as you seem to like them so much. Maybe go to a farm or something.

Also, practice painting something without having to rely on outlining the form. The uniform edges in >>2056462 combined with the photobashing cheapens the entire piece. Learn about lost and found edges.

Your portfolio needs more life paintings too, especially still lives.

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>>2056509

>> No.2057974

>>2056488
I agree. I also find it extremely pretentious when people sign every little fucking drawing they do like it will eventually sell for millions. People are so pompous about their art it's sickening