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my first art. any toughts?

>> No.2050957

>>2050956
Good stuff bro. How old are you?

>> No.2050997 [DELETED] 

>>2050957
thanks :3 i'm 17

>> No.2050999

>>2050956
>>2050997
nice dude! I'm liking it just keep on drawing.

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>> No.2051011

>>2050956
Here's some advice, OP. This may just be a hobby but if you're serious I hope this will be helpful.

>Normally, manga-style art insists upon clean linework. Do not fear, use bolder lines. Going over the same lines over and over can cause you to lose the expression in your figures.
>Use darker shades. Don't go overboard as this will obscure your drawing but don't be afraid to make your darks REALLY dark. Grading from darker shades will give a huge boost in depth, it will make your drawing come alive.
>Use anatomical reference. Some artists will denounce reference in general, but it's an excellent tool to learn. Manga-style doesn't particularly stress "accurate" body anatomy (you should still learn it anyway), but an important thing to learn is facial muscle groups. Cheeks, jaws, brows, these all help realize your expressions fully, and expression is a big deal in comics in general.

Overall, decent for a first try. Be careful of using over-saturated colors in your palette. It's not really a problem here but I'm pretty sure the pinks and violets in your drawing won't be able to print. That is if printing is an issue for you. Either way, saturated colors work best as accents rather than bases.

Keep drawing, OP.

>> No.2051038

>>2050956
love it op <3 keep up the great work!

>> No.2051077

>>2051011
>>2051038
>>2050999
thanks a lot guys

>> No.2051082

>>2051077
n-no problem..

>> No.2051108

>>2051001
Seen this a few times now. What's the backstory on it?

>> No.2051121

>>2051108
Artist makes a thread, /ic/ gives critique, artist got defensive with muh style, Mikufag starts shitposting, /ic/ finds the Artist's fetish from his own comics, lewd drawings where made for shits and giggles, Artist goes back to DA and writes a blog about how traumatic and regretful he was from his experience on 4chan.

>> No.2051167

>>2051108
>>2051121
Artist also wrote about a transexual cyclops whoring himself out for money to buy laptops, full sexual intercourse followed with some other dude. Krom promptly deleted the writing when I mentioned it. Also in his journal he states he'd be a sex offender if not for his self control.

Thus no one should feel bad about the lewds, he's just as fucked as the rest of us, just in denial.

>> No.2051180

>>2051167
Don't forget he also personified himself as Evie and he made her cut herself and wrap electrical tape around her wrist and arm.

http://kromcompany.deviantart.com/journal/4chan-shit-is-serious-shit-523905105

>> No.2051182

>>2051167
lol hes pretty fucked. shame he wouldn't draw porn of evie when asked him. that would have been maximum keks

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>>2051182
You just want to have lewd drawings from a beginner Artist because it's your fetish and you can't do it yourself because you're already too good to not draw like a beginner to satisfy your own fetish admit it.

>> No.2051185

>>2051183
oh you got me champ ' ///// ' *blushies

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First thing I have drawn with a graphics tablet ever. What can I improve on with my anatomy?

>> No.2051737

>>2051264
I think the right arm is a bit to long, i the rest is pretty okay

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>>2050956
tbh this is not art OP but do not give up, practice more!

>> No.2051778

is this deviantart yet?

>> No.2051780

>>2051778
Not yet.
Give it another year.

We need some /ic/ based mod of justice that can delete these shitty threads.

>> No.2051785

>>2051778
>>2051780
Hi, I'm new to /ic/ (not OP). Your complaint is that the OP is taking up a whole thread just to show his or her poor drawing? What should /ic/ be in your eyes? Honest question.

>> No.2051798

>>2051785
Neither of these two but if you make an entire thread dedicated to one drawing you made that first of all is perceived as being pretentious, not only that but at the same time we have several draw threads that you may chose unless you feel like a special snowflake that deserves his own thread.

On top of that I personally do not want to see the same drawing over and over again each and everytime someone forgets to sage or bumps out of a subtle spite against those who hate seeing this shit; most of the times I just hide these kinds of threads and everyone else sort of does the same thing.

Finally you wont get much feedback since people would just hide your thread anyway.

>> No.2053129

>>2051798

i just discovered 4chan. i didn't knew how to use it, so i just posted my drawing. you don't need to offend me, or say it's shit. i just wanted some tips. if it's wrong to start a new thread, i'm sorry. i just didn't know.

>> No.2053133

>>2050956
>floating torsos

>> No.2053137

>>2050956
>>2053129
bait

>> No.2053182

>>2051264
Needs more details really, and the left leg is too long. Right forearm is a bit too long, as well as the left upper arm. Really you just need to keep some consistent bone lengths and you'll have something pretty nice.