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Post your current drawing here and give constructive critiques to others!

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>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 29 16:02:14 2015 No.2036461 File: 146 KB, 619x759, face1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Can a human look like this? Sorry for the bad resolution, started off as a thumbnail and didn't bother to resize and rerender it.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 29 16:07:37 2015 No.2036465 >>2036456 There's like a dozen more posts to go in the last thread. Don't be hasty.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 04:01:06 2015 No.2037055 File: 110 KB, 840x473, raptorfamily.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] thanks to the anons from a couple of thread ago still working on this

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 05:02:14 2015 No.2037094 File: 364 KB, 2448x3264, eAsvArr.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Was having trouble with a drawing so I screwed around with this instead to loosen up. Was wondering if I should expand on it and fix it up some more. ......space skeletons.....

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 05:33:51 2015 No.2037106 File: 79 KB, 960x1600, lady.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] stupid pose i know.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 05:41:05 2015 No.2037111 >>2037106 Then why you do it m8? If you want to just show the desing costume you could do so with a natural relaxed pose.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 05:53:28 2015 No.2037118 >>2037111 Just a doodle.I started with something defferent and then switched to this. Nevermind

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 05:53:35 2015 No.2037119 >>2036456 post link in the previous thread u faggot

>>	Mayo Mon Mar 30 06:29:06 2015 No.2037138 File: 209 KB, 787x327, cliche.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] trying my hand at environments for the first time

>>	Mayo Mon Mar 30 06:29:44 2015 No.2037139 File: 179 KB, 622x414, cliche2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 06:43:46 2015 No.2037145 >>2037138 >>2037139 beginner thread brah

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 07:31:36 2015 No.2037173 File: 357 KB, 616x707, Screen Shot 2015-03-30 at 6.25.07 AM.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] /shrug

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 07:32:10 2015 No.2037175 File: 883 KB, 1131x544, 2015-03-08-2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Crits welcome. Unfinished, breaking in OpenCanvas + a Cintiq 13HD, loving it.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 07:33:49 2015 No.2037176 >>2037175 color temperature % values brah

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 08:13:22 2015 No.2037193 File: 112 KB, 1000x377, tech goblins.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2036456 little shit scribble from after work.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 08:48:06 2015 No.2037208 File: 50 KB, 376x512, 114500257[1].jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2036461 yes, i think so.

Anonymous Mon Mar 30 09:21:33 2015 No.2037220

Wasnt sure where to post this and didnt want to start my own thread:
how the fuck do you draw with a tablet? Im fine when it come to painting, but I can't draw for my life. I'm fine when using a pencil, but when I use a stylus, my lines are shaky and ugly, and the whole picture becomes a mess, halp

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 09:36:18 2015 No.2037227 >>2037220 Show us what you're talking about. It could be a practice thing but it might be a driver problem.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 09:43:14 2015 No.2037231 File: 40 KB, 417x527, Cool_Cat.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I doodled Bob. :^y

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 09:43:44 2015 No.2037233 File: 48 KB, 902x520, z128.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Anonymous Mon Mar 30 09:46:45 2015 No.2037234
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>>2037220
This doesnt illustrate it too well, but to get these not-very-good heads, I had to keep redrawing lines, rubbing out chicken scratches, going back to old line to fix them etc - I basically feel like I have no control over the stylus like I do with a real pencil

Anonymous Mon Mar 30 09:48:15 2015 No.2037236
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hey guys, ive been working on this for a while and now all i have left is the background. any ideas on how to go about doing that?

I also think her left arm looks off, any idea how to fix it?

crits also welcome

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 10:03:03 2015 No.2037239 >>2036461 Something about your colors and brush strokes is really pleasing. Can you share your blog, and if possible, brushes? (assuming you use PS)

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 10:03:29 2015 No.2037240 File: 501 KB, 732x926, xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxyx-1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2036456 opinions? help me pinpoint the single biggest issue with this image. that is not the face.

Anonymous Mon Mar 30 10:07:07 2015 No.2037241

>>2037240
I feel like his feet are huge. And the tip of the sword feels off. Is it pointing straight down? then fix it. If it's on an angle, you're going to need to change the angle of the pommel and hilt to reflect that. You have two different angles going on there.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 10:27:20 2015 No.2037247 File: 160 KB, 1500x2500, odd.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Its seems like really odd.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 11:30:15 2015 No.2037278 >>2037247 Because you're symbol drawing

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 11:42:21 2015 No.2037285 >>2037241 it's supposed to be slightly angled towards the back. not sure what you mean with two different angles going on at the top, i don't think i see it.

Anonymous Mon Mar 30 12:24:16 2015 No.2037305
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6 months~a year of not drawing, i'm unrusting

I'm not really sure of my skill level though, should I stick to beginner threads? I'm trying to learn how to do angles, perspective, values, and shading since most of my old drawings were just of cute girls head-on with no color

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 12:30:49 2015 No.2037309 >>2037285 The hilt and pommel of the sword are facing straight on, not angled.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 12:41:38 2015 No.2037324 File: 132 KB, 1000x1000, Topless girl start.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2036456 Just started this, think the head is too big.

Anonymous Mon Mar 30 12:44:58 2015 No.2037328

>>2037305
Biggest issues are chicken scratch & balance. Your figure is toppling over. Do you do quick gesture drawings as well? Try drawing the action line of the figure with one stroke (from highest point to lowest point, alternatively from head till point upon which the weight rests)

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 12:58:24 2015 No.2037340 File: 58 KB, 330x311, bust.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] bored so i started this sculpture someone made on fb

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 13:03:38 2015 No.2037348 File: 461 KB, 1600x900, Untitled.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2037328 Helpful, thank you. About the chicken scratch, the only way to get rid of it is just by practice right? Or is there some exercise I can do?

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 13:11:52 2015 No.2037356 >>2037348 Being conscious of it & actively trying to not do it. Looking way better already! Chicken scratch is an old habit of mine & still wants to sneak back every now and then.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 13:15:53 2015 No.2037363 >>2037309 still don't see it. oh you are assuming the 'sticks' of the hilt have 4 sides right? in that case yeah, they actually have 8. the planes facing most upward aren't visible.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 13:18:18 2015 No.2037368 >>2037348 There's no specific exercise to stop doing it. It's a confidence thing. You have to know what your lines are doing and where you want 'em to go. Only "exercise" for that is just straight up drawing more. Get crackin'

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 13:25:04 2015 No.2037378 File: 384 KB, 1600x900, Untitled-1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2037348 pay closer attention to the shapes and spacing you're creating with your negative space.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 13:38:11 2015 No.2037381 >>2037378 Neat trick, thank you

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 13:43:16 2015 No.2037387 >>2036461 cool!

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 13:49:41 2015 No.2037391 File: 94 KB, 740x416, raptorfamily.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] composition how do you learn it?

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 14:28:37 2015 No.2037404 >>2037391 you take famous pictures and put you own elements with the same composition.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 14:37:00 2015 No.2037409 >>2037236 Hand needs to be smaller, the perspective is just a bit off, other than that its fine.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 15:44:55 2015 No.2037451 >>2037239 Thanks. Used sketchbook pen brush for lines and painting. Not able to keep up enough to have a blog, maybe sometime.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 16:03:44 2015 No.2037471 File: 24 KB, 902x518, z125b.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 16:09:43 2015 No.2037475 >>2037324 head too big, body all kinds of broken.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 16:12:47 2015 No.2037482 File: 847 KB, 1600x900, Untitled.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I went too dark didn't I

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 16:42:12 2015 No.2037499 File: 334 KB, 769x969, 342-1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] little update. plant looks dumb but i need something to put on that table else i might aswell remove the table but then the whole piece is so empty.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 16:57:40 2015 No.2037508 >>2037499 the plant was ok.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 17:08:26 2015 No.2037517 >>2037499 That giant dark brown chunk on the left side is sucking the most energy out of the pic for me.

Anonymous Mon Mar 30 17:19:06 2015 No.2037522

>>2037499
The sword's pommel is way to small for the size of the blade. With good head looking in the direction that it is, you shouldn't see that much of the left side of his face.
Also the angle of the tip of the sheath looks a bit off.
Although, I do really like the arms and hands.

Anonymous Mon Mar 30 17:53:21 2015 No.2037554

>>2037499

Do you flip canvas bro?

I think your skill level is high enough that a simple flip will allow you to see many glaring issues.

Lots of depth issues. Shield doesn't impact the ground. Sword looks out of place because its drawn on a 2d plane and has no perspective. Just skew it and paint over it. That layer style emboss looks terrible on it

don't forget us when you make it :^)

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 18:21:34 2015 No.2037577 File: 1.63 MB, 2448x3264, 1427754070091881688834.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2036456 Crit pls.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 18:29:58 2015 No.2037583 >>2037577 >beginner's thread

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 18:31:04 2015 No.2037585 >>2037577 beginner thread. learn what skulls look like, and learn basic shapes. it sounds harsh, but you actually really need to do that. everyone does.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 18:33:55 2015 No.2037588 >>2037585 Yes sir.I'm studying Loomis. Appreciate your criticism

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 19:04:31 2015 No.2037608 >>2037588 >I'm studying Loomis. it sure doesn't look like it.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 19:10:54 2015 No.2037615 >>2037482 Defintely lost a lot of the contrast of the photo. Be more daring, your values are all too close together

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 19:18:26 2015 No.2037625 >>2037391 For starters, don't put the focal point in the center of the pic. Rules of thirds, learn it and love it.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 19:37:08 2015 No.2037633 File: 797 KB, 771x750, tigers.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] 1/2

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 19:40:23 2015 No.2037636 File: 2.97 MB, 3000x3639, mokke.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] 2/2 blocking in, will do detailed version tomorrow

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 19:41:37 2015 No.2037638 File: 305 KB, 333x500, Jazz Horn small wip.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 19:43:44 2015 No.2037640 File: 2.93 MB, 2585x1934, 20150131_200237-1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Attempt at a still life. Any thoughts?

Anonymous Mon Mar 30 20:00:55 2015 No.2037649

>>2037482
Here's some things you missed
-the knee goes out past the elbow
-the bottom of the right breast is below the bottom of the right arm
-The very top of the right shoulder is visible above the left breast
-the crotch is almost level with the bottom of the right leg, your misplacement of that is why your left thigh is so thick and has such a steep angle along the top.
-your bum is shaped like a right angle, hers is a soft curve

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 20:09:25 2015 No.2037654 File: 21 KB, 300x450, shandi-5.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2037247 Cause the neck is crazy long and you need to look at reference.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 20:54:55 2015 No.2037683 File: 583 KB, 1400x1044, P3278302.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 21:19:55 2015 No.2037702 File: 234 KB, 333x500, Jazz Horn small.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2037638 Doneso

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 21:31:24 2015 No.2037714 >>2037702 disgusting

Anonymous Mon Mar 30 21:38:07 2015 No.2037720
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>>2037363
Not him, but hopefully this illustrates what the problem is, surprised you can't spot it honestly.
You said it's angled towards the back but the rest of the perspective in your piece says its straight on or leaning slightly forward.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 21:40:24 2015 No.2037724 >>2037714 Awww, well thanks for your honesty.

>>	Nobody No-One !GYqs/DrWho Mon Mar 30 21:52:03 2015 No.2037730 >>2037702 Sweet filtering, man.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 22:06:00 2015 No.2037739 >>2037724 just curious, what did you think you were doing? its a pretty obvious and poorly done photobash. it doesn't even make sense conceptually.

Anonymous Mon Mar 30 22:26:36 2015 No.2037748
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I saw this guy play a couple nights ago and the way he moved his horn stuck with me so I wanted to capture it. Initially I bashed the horns together to try to figure out how to make it look like a lot of movement, but then I was reminded of that Beksinski painting I really like, and so more or less kept it the way it was. Here's the ref. I just wanted to make something cool, and anyways I like it so, yeah... If you don't dig it that's cool too.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 22:51:34 2015 No.2037761 File: 290 KB, 2000x1307, Here Kitty.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I think this will help to add to her appeal. The tiger doodles were just for goofs.

Anonymous Mon Mar 30 23:00:15 2015 No.2037768
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>>2037748
ah, i gotcha. it makes more sense given context. I might suggest making the other horns more faint to give the impression of movement, or something similar. now that i see it in that light it reminds me of this painting. i would recommend choosing your own colors though, because it looks odd how it stands.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 23:25:54 2015 No.2037789 File: 1.62 MB, 3264x2448, image.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 23:27:32 2015 No.2037791 >>2037175 crank that saturation down

Anonymous Mon Mar 30 23:36:03 2015 No.2037805

>>2037482
nobody has mentioned that your ref has a black background and a nearly white figure, while in your picture you have a lighter background than the figure. of course the shadows need to be dark, but overall the figure is much lighter than the background. when you are doing a study like this I have no idea why you would use purple unless you are already very good with value (you aren't). the information is already in your ref so just use it.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 30 23:59:05 2015 No.2037823 File: 733 KB, 797x1000, march-30-2015.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] did this today. gonna go in and do some stippling on the flatter parts of the hill later when it dries.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 00:04:50 2015 No.2037828 >>2037636 getting a liiiiiittle fish-face there (wide spaced eyes, flat looking bridge of nose that's a little too parallel in terms of its shape)

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 00:48:54 2015 No.2037854 File: 570 KB, 1280x1070, march 31 2015.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2037823 i also did some figure drawing today

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 00:50:07 2015 No.2037857 File: 583 KB, 1050x1280, march 31 2015 2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2037854 and this one was good construction/measurement wise. even if the shading is lackluster. likeness isn't quite there in the face though

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 02:07:17 2015 No.2037903 >>2037857 I love your shading technique

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 02:55:59 2015 No.2037926 >>2037857 Very gewd 👍

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 03:26:21 2015 No.2037948 >>2037857 Painting is way too saturated, but that might only be personal taste. Your skill with paper and pen is way more developed and pleasing to look at. Good work.

Anonymous Tue Mar 31 04:30:11 2015 No.2037986

>>2037508
what's the alternative :o|

>>2037517
i think it might be necessary though

>>2037554
not anymore because i work at a resolution where flipping takes around a minute lol. good points though

>>2037522
>>2037720
woah... crazy how blind you get to your own work. would never have spotted those issues. thanks for pointing out!

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 05:16:51 2015 No.2038015 File: 3.56 MB, 2160x3840, DSC_0039.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] how's this? original is katsuya terada's

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 05:26:33 2015 No.2038019 File: 117 KB, 608x666, old man.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Ref from the last thread. >>2036507

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 08:16:14 2015 No.2038061 File: 729 KB, 1500x1665, sk5.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Some monsters/creatures/aliens/things. No ref.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 08:31:15 2015 No.2038072 File: 217 KB, 1000x1000, EstudioAngel.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I trying to learn how to render in photoshop. What do you think? I used reference of course.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 09:30:44 2015 No.2038097 >>2038061 Use refs.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 09:38:17 2015 No.2038099 >>2037615 >>2037649 >>2037805 Very helpful, thanks >>2038072 Are you using airbrush? It looks too soft imo.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 12:00:51 2015 No.2038194 Bunp

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 12:24:43 2015 No.2038204 File: 205 KB, 1134x500, Envsketch.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Tried sketching some environment only to realize how bad I am at it. Anybody who can link to environment related videos? Much appreciated.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 12:32:45 2015 No.2038209 >>2038204 Most important thing is to not have your environment look like a super mario level.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 12:52:13 2015 No.2038229 >>2038204 Too many clouds and they are way too close to the ground.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 13:02:34 2015 No.2038240 >>2036461 Yeah any man can look like that, but they'd have to be pretty muscular body type wise.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 13:05:25 2015 No.2038246 >>2038240 and ultrarussian

Anonymous Tue Mar 31 13:06:23 2015 No.2038249

>>2038204
Think about scaling. The building isn't tall enough to touch the clouds, I think. Tone them down to one or two of the larger clouds, and then make the people smaller. to reflect how high it is.

i like the composition though, and your brush strokes quite a lot. Do you have a blog or something

Anonymous Tue Mar 31 13:06:33 2015 No.2038251

>>2038204
I dig it. It's not realistic with the clouds (as others mentioned), but that's okay. It doesn't need to be completely grounded in realism.

Concerning the clouds though, I feel like it'd be great to have many more smaller, far off clouds subtly fading into the horizon. It looks like there is an unreasonably tight clump of clouds around the tower, but then it's clear skies behind them in the distance. Know what I mean?

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 14:00:04 2015 No.2038310 File: 293 KB, 760x796, Untitled.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Value study, how did I do

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 14:05:17 2015 No.2038316 File: 56 KB, 768x860, 1392747991338.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2038310 Reference

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 14:07:05 2015 No.2038321 >>2038310 Baby shoulders.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 14:09:39 2015 No.2038324 >>2038310 IF YOU'RE DOING A VALUE STUDY MAKE THE FUCKING BACKGROUND THE SAME VALUE AS THE PICTURE

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 14:13:49 2015 No.2038332 >>2038324 this.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 14:15:44 2015 No.2038339 File: 1.20 MB, 1920x1080, knight shading.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Critique please.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 14:17:08 2015 No.2038340 >>2038324 >>2038332 I might be retarded, I'll do another

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 14:23:24 2015 No.2038351 >>2038339 Use a solid brush and practice some more simple shapes, try shading cubes and shit. Try using some perspective. The values are a mess

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 14:26:44 2015 No.2038355 >>2038339 Harder brush, for sure. it's too soft and messy. And learn how shadows and highlights work, they make no sense here

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 14:33:23 2015 No.2038366 >>2038351 >>2038355 Got a nice brushset i can use?

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 15:48:39 2015 No.2038414 >>2038366 http://lilaccu.deviantart.com/art/Winter-2012-brushes-Happy-New-Year-345316587

Anonymous Tue Mar 31 15:50:23 2015 No.2038418

>>2038339
Symbol drawing and imaginary lines, without any sort of knowledge about perspective and value.
If you are a doodler, and does not want to study art, it is my recommendation that you should leave this board, but if you actually do want to learn and study, go read books written by Andrew Loomis. Study them, brand it in your brain, use them, and draw better forever.
Or, you can just draw like shit for your entire life and delude about how you are "decent" at drawing because your friends think it looks cool. Why? because I honestly find it so fucking horrible, and I would be ashamed to post it on online.
Now, don't take it personally. I'm only trying to help you, by telling you how bad you are at drawing.
Andrew Loomis.
Study, and learn.
Good luck.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 16:04:39 2015 No.2038435 >>2037640 More highlights and hard edges bruh if you've got a white pencil or something, use that to really bring in the shine on that bottle and jug thing Looking pretty good tho

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>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 18:22:16 2015 No.2038594 >>2038585 i always collect your art. who are you and why are you doing this ?

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 18:27:37 2015 No.2038597 >>2038594 what do you mean by who i am? and i do this because i wanna be an artist

Anonymous Tue Mar 31 18:49:45 2015 No.2038613
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Hey guys, Im gonna need your experteez

so this is what I have so far. I feel like the perspective is up to code but whats your perspective on my perspective?

also I admit I really have no idea how to texturize the rest of th facility. background (not going to go into too much detail but this is the basic back bones): this scene takes place inside of a future laboratory, hence the various mutations scattered here and there in stasis containers. in the other room there is a group of scientist experimenting on a mutation. so basically this is a futuristic laboratory environment. My visual library for this kind of set up is pretty blank, I cant seem to come up with anything else to add in terms of wall design/texture.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 18:53:29 2015 No.2038617 >>2038597 stop lying. we ll know you are an accomplished artist and doing these pieces in ms paint to make a statement.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 19:02:59 2015 No.2038627 >>2037633 It's a good start, finish it. >>2037761 Pic related. Also, I can't see her eyebrows in most of those sketches. >>2038061 I could work something out with the 3rd one. >>2038310 The neck is not straight in the ref.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 19:03:08 2015 No.2038628 File: 14 KB, 990x434, z134.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2038617 lol. no, im serious, this works are everything i can do. i believe in them sometimes.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 19:15:15 2015 No.2038639 >>2037247 give me your pen tablet, you obviously don't need it.

Anonymous Tue Mar 31 20:17:08 2015 No.2038686
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Last study of the night, probably. Also my first time painting without sketching or doing linework before... and it's much more fun this way

Nowhere near done with this of course

Anonymous Tue Mar 31 20:31:04 2015 No.2038701

>>2038686
wrong values, man
try to copy it exactly, if it's for study purpose.
like that glow on forehead and lack of shadow on the chin, you painted it out of your ass (sorry i really couldn't think of any polite way of saying this)
there are many other problems i see here, but i'm lazy
well, good luck on next one.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 20:31:30 2015 No.2038703 >>2038613 Your scientists look like manlets or midgets, using the door and table as a height reference unless the room they're in is lower than the first one.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 20:39:21 2015 No.2038708 >>2038703 Sheeeiitttttttttttt What would be some ways to fix this? I could lower the height of the door

Anonymous Tue Mar 31 20:40:56 2015 No.2038709

>>2038701
>sorry i really couldn't think of any polite way of saying this

No, you're right haha, they were 100% out of my ass lel. Some of it was because it's unfinished and it just 'felt right' to put it there for now before i fixed it, but most of it is just because I wasn't paying close enough attention

Thanks m8

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 20:41:40 2015 No.2038710 File: 472 KB, 1600x900, Untitled.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2038709 Whoops, forgot to put an update

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 20:50:21 2015 No.2038719 File: 1.17 MB, 720x1280, Screenshot_2015-04-01-01-47-58.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Help with how to perspective?

Anonymous Tue Mar 31 20:55:42 2015 No.2038727
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One question. Should I posting all of my stuff in the Beginner's thread? It seems like i can get more critics and advices here.
After my portraits I decide to do more environments hah >>2037247

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 20:57:29 2015 No.2038729 >>2038727 Your environments are loads better than your portraits, that's for sure. I'd say put your portraits in the beginner's thread though yes. What's that texture in the middle supposed to be? Looks strange and out of place.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 21:00:14 2015 No.2038735 File: 173 KB, 1440x813, Untitled-43.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Whoah. Sorry for resolution.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 21:01:29 2015 No.2038736 >>2038735 Still shit.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 21:05:28 2015 No.2038744 >>2038729 What texture? Building? >>2038736 I appreciate your constructive criticism

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 21:06:16 2015 No.2038745 >>2038736 That's not good criticism, anon. Tell him why it's shit.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 21:07:16 2015 No.2038746 >>2038744 >What texture? Building? No, the stuff on the floor that the building is on. Looks like a bunch of straight lines?

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 21:22:01 2015 No.2038769 File: 169 KB, 1440x813, fixfixfix.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2038746 Now I see where I miss. It's just a bunch of holes on the ground.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 21:25:36 2015 No.2038777 File: 39 KB, 400x200, enviroshit.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] any advice going forward?

>>	Wastoid Tue Mar 31 21:33:27 2015 No.2038784 File: 554 KB, 2202x3295, Ladders Cover page Ink.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Looking to start some kinda webcomic type thing in the future. Looking for any advice or criticisms. Pretty much on my own so anything is appreciated.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 21:41:56 2015 No.2038788 File: 417 KB, 700x1050, cleopatra.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Trying some stuff Mullins was showing on the weekend

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 21:48:05 2015 No.2038801 >>2038788 nice, feels a little muddy in some areas though

Anonymous Tue Mar 31 21:49:03 2015 No.2038802

>>2038710
Even though this is a value study, try doing a little bit of construction to help with accuracy. The face looks a bit small and it might help you map out the values better if it's closer to the original. That's just my opinion though and I'm pretty bad at values.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 21:50:23 2015 No.2038806 >>2037094 What I would say is make the stance more dramatic. it's a little non committal at this point

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 22:00:43 2015 No.2038832 >>2038788 elaborate? i think you can do better than that

Anonymous Tue Mar 31 22:27:31 2015 No.2038892
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>>2038708
The problem it's not the door size, reducing it would just turn it into a hobbit's hole, confirming the manletism of your scientists.

Or you redraw their torsos (we should be seeing ass and a bit of his leg, based on the window height) or you could expand the vertical lines down, making the bottom wall taller (remember to adjust the door and furniture) fixing the height problem.

>pic related

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 22:33:44 2015 No.2038913 File: 152 KB, 1532x1123, environment.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2037771 Done. Any advice and criticism for the next pictures?

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 22:41:51 2015 No.2038933 File: 92 KB, 1300x904, feo2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2038703 better?

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 22:52:22 2015 No.2038954 >>2038933 still a little too short. by the way, it looks like the guy in the back will be a fucking giant, might want to level him out in comparison to the others.

Anonymous Tue Mar 31 22:55:36 2015 No.2038964

>>2038913
the perspective on buildings isnt right, u should use vanishing points, it seems as if the buildings seem larger as it goes away from us which is not right, also the people(which i am assuming are people) is too big
i mean "the buildings away from us behing the mountains/landscape, so it gives me the feeling that the buildings are massive, but their propotion to people kills that feeling, i suggest not putting any people at all as they would be too insignificant

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 23:04:38 2015 No.2038984 File: 248 KB, 1532x1074, macefiaght.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] spaghetti sketch

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 23:05:42 2015 No.2038987 >>2038984 neat

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 23:12:30 2015 No.2039003 >>2038987 thx

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 23:13:22 2015 No.2039006 >>2038964 You are right. I go wrong cause I didn't use constructive lines and yes.. Have a huge problem with measuring. Thank you so much.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 23:15:06 2015 No.2039012 File: 1.47 MB, 1532x1074, Untitled.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2038984 i might be wrong but the only thing that came to mind was to put her leg closer to this line maybe. I might be wrong. Anyways this is really cool!!!

Anonymous Tue Mar 31 23:18:17 2015 No.2039022
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>>2039003
for something constructive, id say that the demon dudes right leg is making his pose kinda stiff, but tbh now that i look at it looks fine. just a suggestion though, feel free to disregard pic related.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 23:33:00 2015 No.2039051 File: 65 KB, 800x829, sJ9OEfM.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2038954 I made the close guy taller and the furthest guy shorter

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 23:36:28 2015 No.2039058 >>2038099 Thanks, I will try using more hard brush.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 23:37:10 2015 No.2039060 >>2039051 looks better, hard to tell about the height without a full view though.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 23:44:55 2015 No.2039075 >>2039060 okay. thanks for the help.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 31 23:45:42 2015 No.2039077 File: 81 KB, 400x200, eNVIRO (2).jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] still working on this.

Anonymous Tue Mar 31 23:54:58 2015 No.2039094

Hey you guys, I recently bough a Wacom Board and would like tips on how to use it. I'm having problems making straight lines (I know you can use Shift but they only go Vertically and Horizontally, not Diagonally) and just anything that can help me improve.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 00:17:16 2015 No.2039123 >>2039077 Nice, did you make other thumbs or just the one? Looks like it reads well, might want to do a few color thumbs to get the mood

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 00:21:22 2015 No.2039130 >>2039123 thanks, glad im getting somewhere with these. i didn't do any thumbs, i just laid down some shapes and went from there; thats a good idea for the color though, appreciate the advice.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 00:33:57 2015 No.2039150 File: 533 KB, 3300x3600, It Looks So Cute.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] First time posting here and I'm fairy new to digital painting. Critique please.

Anonymous Wed Apr 1 00:38:59 2015 No.2039154
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>last update ill post

what if women's vaginas closed when they weren't aroused like tight as a drum no opening them for anything but when they were aroused they opened into a gigantic hole.

And women took pills for keeping their vagina open like men do for erections.

And if your vagina was open for more than 4 hours you should see a doctor

And for size comparison your dick in an open vagina like this would be a straw in a jumbo sized Mcdonalds soda cup

also im thinking of sending this painting to my nieces ones 4 and ones 2 maybe they could put it in their room or something

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 01:06:04 2015 No.2039169 >>2038229 >doesn't know what fog is

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 01:14:19 2015 No.2039175 >>2039169 that's not fog moite..

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 02:03:31 2015 No.2039209 File: 454 KB, 1200x1200, creature-2015-03-29.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 02:59:08 2015 No.2039239 >>2039209 Avatar?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 03:00:13 2015 No.2039240 >>2038727 Vsync

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 03:01:31 2015 No.2039241 >>2038769 What is up with the horizontal jitter lines? Jittershitter

Anonymous Wed Apr 1 03:20:42 2015 No.2039248
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>>2038788
Hey, I really like that, did you use a ref?
In my opinion her shoulders are just a bit wide.
Also.... for some reason the whole time I couldn't figure out if she's supposed to be sitting or standing. Decided she's standing in the end.
I circled the areas I think you should define a bit cause they're a bit vague. And I saturated it here and there.
It also reads pretty well from the thumbnail. You did a good job. Hope you don't mind that a played around with it for a bit.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 03:52:49 2015 No.2039266 >>2036456 For once, I didn't offend Loomis with my drawing. At least, I think so...

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 04:14:12 2015 No.2039278 File: 155 KB, 1000x1039, 45.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2039266

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 06:02:56 2015 No.2039332 File: 88 KB, 1024x627, andrea_by_baskerus-d8n06zw.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2036456 New one here.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 07:32:19 2015 No.2039371 >>2039278 its still missing sideburns

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 08:06:33 2015 No.2039396 >>2039012 >>2039022 thx a lot guys, gonna play with that !

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 09:22:19 2015 No.2039431 >>2039278 Work on values and colour theory.

Anonymous Wed Apr 1 09:48:20 2015 No.2039459

>>2039248
Thanks a lot man! I used a pic from another thread as inspiration, >>2038309 but didn't look at it when painting really and you can see I didn't follow it closely. Mostly just liked a sort of ancient looking scene with jewelry.

And yeah, the saturation looks good. I was trying to keep it as neutral and grey as possible for a challenge rather than go the obvious route of warming up some areas, but then people say it is muddy and I do think your version looks good, so maybe I am just trying to be different for nothing.

And the areas you circled I agree are pretty vague. Maybe I should find some reference and clarify it more.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 10:10:32 2015 No.2039478 >>2038788 >>2039248 Both have an extremely unclear value statement, I think that's the biggest issue.

Anonymous Wed Apr 1 10:22:55 2015 No.2039485

>>2039478
Hmm, is it that unclear? It's a low key image without a lot of contrast, so the value setup is very intentional like that. One thing Mullins discussed quite a bit was about breaking the "rules" you learn in Lighting 101 or whatever that says you need to separate your lights and darks a ton. He argued you can use "wrong" values and so long as the drawing aspect is there it will still read.

Anonymous Wed Apr 1 10:46:16 2015 No.2039497

>>2039485

Was that something he said in the talk you saw recently or are you referring to his old gnomon masterclass? Because he says the exact same thing in the latter and it's the reason why I eventually started throwing everything I learned on /ic/ out the window lol. And I think it's extremely valuable to experiment and fail, but unkowingly I've been doing that for a long ass time, even way before hearing Mullins mention that.

Anyway yeah I think it's somewhat unclear but at the same time you manage to solve a lot of the issues that arise from that, imo. Then I'm somewhat hesitant to insist because I'm just a guy who loves making an overly bold value statement. That's clearly not your intention in this piece so It's hard to say where suboptimal painting ends and a simple difference in taste begins. Nomsayin?

Hang on let me give it a try just for the sake of it.

Anonymous Wed Apr 1 11:43:11 2015 No.2039521

>>2039497
Well it's something he said in the Gnomon vid but also he reiterated it in the talk this weekend, and expanded on stuff a bit more. It was a really interesting talk actually, a lot was the same as previous stuff he's said but there was some new stuff as well, and I get the impression his point of view on certain things is shifting a bit. But yeah I know what you mean about where does the line between unclear painting and taste lie? I want my image to work, but I also don't want to follow all the "rules" of things. And when I follow my own tastes, people often say my images are boring and stuff. So I dunno. Am I not being harsh enough on my tastes with whether I truly like stuff or not, or is it just I have tastes that bore others?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 11:43:25 2015 No.2039522 >>2039278 Nice job. I think the left eyebrow comes over to the middle too much though? But that could just be her face. It's kind of flat though so like the other anon said, work on values to give it life.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 11:57:26 2015 No.2039528 >>2039278 Is this girls name Katherine?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 12:00:22 2015 No.2039531 >>2039150 Eyes are missalinged for that angle.

Anonymous Wed Apr 1 12:03:30 2015 No.2039532

>>2039459
You know, I get what you were trying to achieve and it does look as intended on the thumb.
It's just that at places you can see the gray brushstrokes and that makes it look kind of muddy. You can use color in the shadows, make them a very dark value of purple/blue/green or something, not black and just a bit of warm colors in the light and in that way you can achieve this low-contrast kind of dark dusty look you're going for.
It's just that in most such pieces the use of color is like an optical illusion, the colors are relative to each other.
I think you're almost there though and it'd be nice if you continued in that direction.
I mean, yeah, break the rules.

Anonymous Wed Apr 1 12:24:44 2015 No.2039551
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>>2039371
Thanks, added it.

>>2039431
>>2039522
I bought James Gurney book, that should help. What am I doing wrong? Flat = broader value range needed?
Fixed the eyebrow!

>>2039528
Let's call her Katherine. :)
It's from imagination - does it look like someone you know?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 12:31:55 2015 No.2039561 File: 2.37 MB, 3500x4500, LUX_5.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] As i said to a friend, i'm trapped into a spiral of conformism and weeabness. I think it needs more depth, idk. Please critique and/or sugest. Be rough.

Anonymous Wed Apr 1 12:46:43 2015 No.2039574

>>2038019
nose is waaaayyyy off and the cheekbone hollows are too high up
>>2038072
torso looks too big when you compare it with the legs. mostly width-wise
>>2038686
mouth facing the wrong way, what the fuck is the chin? shoulders are in a wrong angle, everything is just fucking wonky. restart and mind the negative space. study the shapes.
>>2039332
is her nose that wonky irl? also mouth is weird
>>2039561
study actual human anatomy first, then you can stylise it to your liking. you will never achieve good looking semi realistic weeb shit when you dont know basic proportions and how a body works. good luck.

Anonymous Wed Apr 1 15:13:40 2015 No.2039680
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>>2038710
Getting pretty frustrated with this. The worst part is that i cant' get the construction right, I've barely even gotten to the values yet.

What's the point that you stop and say "This is taking way too long, fuck it, i'm moving on to something else"? Or do you never say that and just keep messing with it?

I'm frustrated

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 15:25:55 2015 No.2039689 File: 123 KB, 632x632, image.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Kendra Smith anyone??

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 15:50:20 2015 No.2039705 File: 22 KB, 842x563, z130.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 15:57:03 2015 No.2039710 File: 118 KB, 481x700, valuerange.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] how am i supposed to gauge this value range thing?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 15:58:48 2015 No.2039711 >>2039710 Too much blacks/near pure blacks, too much contrast. Get a reference for your value range until you're more comfortable, do more value studies, etc.

Anonymous Wed Apr 1 16:02:09 2015 No.2039713

>>2039680
Honestly, just move onto the values. Blocking in with values and shapes makes more complex construction a lot easier in painting. Remember, you're painting, not drawing. Painting is a lot easier to fix along the way than a drawing. After you get through those initial and intermediate ugly phases of a painting, the frustration will lessen.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 16:34:40 2015 No.2039734 File: 914 KB, 794x1412, 2015-04-01 16.33.55.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 16:54:20 2015 No.2039754 File: 127 KB, 592x904, study.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I found the reference in the reference thread. To be honest I have no idea what I am doing.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 17:16:04 2015 No.2039773 File: 172 KB, 1074x1100, stud01.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 17:16:22 2015 No.2039774 >>2039710 Do you do studies? Idk man but I swear I've seen you posting the exact same thing for like a year now. Maybe try setting up an apple and painting it with different light setups?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 17:41:54 2015 No.2039791 >>2039773 Angle of the face of the top statue is off, should be tilted down and to the right (statue's right).

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 18:18:01 2015 No.2039822 >>2039531 Could you do a draw over it for me? I've been staring at this for hours and I can't see it

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 19:51:50 2015 No.2039873 File: 763 KB, 1550x1139, Plane studies.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Ellipses are killing me when doing freehand perspective.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 20:29:06 2015 No.2039887 File: 109 KB, 400x200, eNVIRO (2) - Copy.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] realized i have no idea what im doing with color.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 20:55:52 2015 No.2039902 File: 83 KB, 1920x998, cubone.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Im just starting out with a tablet, I Sketched Cubone

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 20:56:47 2015 No.2039905 >>2039887 Where is your light coming from? Behind the dragon thing? Then you gotta make the opposite facing dragon thing a whole lot more dark to reflect that. Your color isn't the issue, your shading is

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 21:01:47 2015 No.2039909 File: 58 KB, 525x960, 11091576_1574988502779040_2127408639665968829_n.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2036456 my latest piece.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 21:02:58 2015 No.2039910 >>2039909 and yes lol, I know the arms are too long.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 21:19:49 2015 No.2039920 File: 26 KB, 990x442, z135c.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 21:20:42 2015 No.2039921 File: 114 KB, 400x200, eNVIRO (3) - Copy.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2039905 oh I gotcha. is this what you mean?

Anonymous Wed Apr 1 21:26:55 2015 No.2039924

>>2039909
some things
1.the design on the knife is boring as all fuck, looks like clip art
2.shoulders are low as shit mate
3.the shadow placement is very odd, I'm not sure at all where the light is coming from, for example his arm on her back is in shadow, yet her back is no in shadow

Anonymous Wed Apr 1 21:37:19 2015 No.2039928

>>2039924
1. You're right about the knife. the fortunate part is that it's black, so I can always add onto it later.

2. Not only are they low, but the arms are way too long. Something I realized the next morning after staying up super late to draw it lol. Where I muffed it here was drawing the front shoulder first. I wanted it to be relaxed so it's low, but then his other arm is out stretched and by then it was too late. I dun goofed it.

3. The shadow placement was actually on purpose. I wanted to shade the middle of them and the foreground more to draw emphasis towards the kiss, and their bodies embracing each other, leaving all the negative stuff hidden sort of in the back to be discovered. As for the source of light? They are on another planet. Call it sci-fi physics. I dunno. Shut up, nerd.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 21:47:28 2015 No.2039935 File: 60 KB, 491x803, dive.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] The background is placeholder. Critiques appreciated, thanks!

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 22:04:53 2015 No.2039946 File: 60 KB, 400x533, character.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] where should i go from here?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 22:04:56 2015 No.2039947 File: 446 KB, 613x1020, I'm Happy.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Did this recently.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 1 23:33:20 2015 No.2039999 File: 94 KB, 400x533, merchant prin.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 00:05:25 2015 No.2040028 File: 345 KB, 1061x595, wigglers.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Working on another still life, having lots of trouble with blending colors and painting liquid in class, any tips?

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 00:34:06 2015 No.2040083 File: 687 KB, 750x1053, sec13.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 00:49:54 2015 No.2040112 File: 120 KB, 1000x807, gggh.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] not sure if i should finish this or go work on something else??

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 01:28:01 2015 No.2040150 >>2039873 Hi Scott

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 01:29:40 2015 No.2040156 >>2040028 Good, but your perspective is way off. What is going on with that teapot?

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 01:31:59 2015 No.2040159 File: 847 KB, 1000x853, april-1-2015.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] heres a new painting. i should take a better picture but its late

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 01:34:45 2015 No.2040160 >>2040159 this one is nice. very good man.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 03:05:08 2015 No.2040199 >>2038628 I hope you know you have fans here, never stop posting.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 03:22:23 2015 No.2040204 >>2037240 jaw and face is a car wreck, start the head all over again. sword tip ruins the sword. foot stands out way too much, focus should not be on the floor. best part about this painting so far is the brass looking table that the plant is on.

Anonymous Thu Apr 2 03:33:19 2015 No.2040211

>>2039902
>>2039873
>>2039150
>>2038784
>>2038339
>>2038061
>>2038015
>>2037789
>>2037761
>>2037748
>>2037640
>>2037636
>>2037577
>>2037482
>>2037106
>>2037094
>resolution
>1500x1500 max
>anything over rarely gets clicked by anyone who will actualy give you good advice.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 04:50:59 2015 No.2040236 >>2038628 >>2038585 WISH THE PLEBS WOULD STOP SUCKING THIS GUY OFF FOR HIS SO "MUH INSIGHTFUL" SHIT MS PAINT ART

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 06:55:02 2015 No.2040281 File: 54 KB, 686x915, image.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Hey guys, i need some advice on her arm and pose in general. The arm should be limp, but I cant get it quite right. Something feels off. Any suggestions?

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 07:37:34 2015 No.2040293 File: 43 KB, 960x835, 1 GlowingThing2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Does the lightning here look correct?

>>	/IC/ department of data collec(...) Thu Apr 2 08:20:17 2015 No.2040306 File: 6 KB, 182x256, 0146203423.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2040204

Anonymous Thu Apr 2 09:11:03 2015 No.2040328

>>2037236
the length of her forearm on the arm that's raised looks like its longer than the width of her shoulders. and the elbow bulge seems a bit exagerrated. maybe just do some curtains, like if she were to be playing a venue, but a beach might be fit with what she's wearing better though

Anonymous Thu Apr 2 09:14:29 2015 No.2040331

>>2037499
holy fugging shit. make a new fucking layer. draw a line from the pummel through the fucking sword. straight through the fucking middle. the tip should be on that fucking line somewhere.

personally i like it without the plant although it did look nice

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 09:15:50 2015 No.2040332 File: 692 KB, 1600x1080, grandpappy.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] push me in the right direction painterpeeps

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 09:31:56 2015 No.2040342 >>2040332 Looks like a papa nurgle worshipper, wich would mean you are already heading into the right direction.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 09:35:04 2015 No.2040343 >>2040342 you bring tears to mine eyes

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 09:36:06 2015 No.2040344 File: 257 KB, 1000x675, wat.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2040332 I think this image could really benefit from a stronger lightsource.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 09:37:11 2015 No.2040347 >>2040344 well yeah i wanted to add in that stuff and make a cloud of flies kinda swarming with a pollen like mist

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 10:07:47 2015 No.2040366 File: 143 KB, 900x608, 689797.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2040347 create some interesting shapes with the stronger lightsource that anon mentioned. Don't hold back.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 10:09:13 2015 No.2040367 >>2037106 >>2037118 If the pose is stupid, change it.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 11:16:35 2015 No.2040441 >>2040236 calm down, i'll post a little less >>2038628 thank you

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 11:22:19 2015 No.2040448 >>2040236 clam down , i'll post a little less >>2040199 thank you

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 12:23:47 2015 No.2040499 File: 923 KB, 540x470, fefe.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2040293 Is this better?

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 13:37:11 2015 No.2040587 File: 416 KB, 656x1000, fggfgf.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] im working on this its a first normal picture ive done in eons.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 14:23:04 2015 No.2040639 File: 115 KB, 960x835, 1427974654896.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2040293

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 14:26:33 2015 No.2040647 >>2039947 Holy fuck this is awesome.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 14:41:02 2015 No.2040651 >>2040587 I like it a lot

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 15:13:32 2015 No.2040679 >>2040647 Not sure brah. Not sure.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 15:29:02 2015 No.2040694 File: 557 KB, 1252x1500, tres beaucoup.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] help first time wacom user please. Just keep at it till i get it or any good exercises to help me switch? was thinking just loomising all over again with wacom..

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 15:50:06 2015 No.2040708 File: 1.39 MB, 2000x2500, Mermaid.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] can someone help me with the face I can't get it to look right. I want her looking up at the orange ball

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 16:04:45 2015 No.2040718 >>2040639 Thanks

Anonymous Thu Apr 2 17:22:59 2015 No.2040778

>>2040694
You're doing okay. On the bottom one though it's kind of hard so see what's going on, it would be fixed if you bumped the opacity up some

If you're having trouble adjusting to the tablet, it might help if you use it in place of a mouse when you're browsing or something. These days I sometimes prefer to just browse with a tablet than a mouse, it's become so comfortable.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 17:50:44 2015 No.2040805 >>2040708 Move the orange ball down and closer to her face. You can't get the face to look right because a person wouldn't be looking at something in that angle, it's really uncomfortable.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 18:30:10 2015 No.2040838 im looking for a tutorial on how to choose colors. Mostly how to choose colors for background to fit the colors of character. plz no sycra plz no 10000 pgs long books.

Anonymous Thu Apr 2 18:36:07 2015 No.2040839
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>>2038251
Yeah, I get what you're trying to say. Having smaller clumps in the distance might also give an extra sense of depth.

>>2038209
Super Mario has a legit level design. The hills have eyes. But to be honest, I stylized the clouds just to give them a sense of volume, reminding myself that they're not a bunch of floating 2d cutboards.

>>2038229
I think the problem is more about scaling. Tried to make the towers super tall, but didn't come of that way. Maybe need more greebles and some scale indicator.

>>2038249
I agree.
I almost don't make any environments at all though, and I usually paint very clean. These sketches are a way for me to 'fail' purposely, practice to be looser, and see what I'm doing wrong. My perfectionist side always gets the better of me, which is always bad.

http://artofhkm.deviantart.com/
http://h-draws.tumblr.com/

Thanks a lot guys.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 18:54:29 2015 No.2040850 File: 476 KB, 480x1299, K91SY.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2040838 This is what I have, but really, watch some color theory videos on youtube or something. I'm sure someone can recommend you some, or perhaps just google for them.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 18:56:49 2015 No.2040852 >>2040839 I like your stuff. I feel that a lot of your figures are very stiff though, it would do you well to practice making them more loose and flowey

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 19:33:30 2015 No.2040881 >>2039734 The band bores the shit outta me, but they do have a cool image.

Anonymous Thu Apr 2 19:54:15 2015 No.2040901
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This is the first pixel art piece I've ever made, don't be too vicious.

Bonus points if you know what game the color scheme was inspired from. Double bonus if you can guess the ship.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 20:00:34 2015 No.2040911 File: 777 KB, 1500x2000, enviro.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 20:01:29 2015 No.2040914 File: 3.94 MB, 2776x3998, mokke1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2037240 nice >>2040366 wow suddenly so much better >>2037636 finished

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 20:02:55 2015 No.2040917 File: 108 KB, 400x533, Untitled-1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 20:12:27 2015 No.2040933 >>2039773 are you even watching. try doing it flipped ?

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 20:22:44 2015 No.2040943 >>2038777 don't lead my eye off the top of the page. Values are looking bretty gud tho

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 20:37:34 2015 No.2040960 File: 623 KB, 255x184, J50S208.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2040943

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 20:41:29 2015 No.2040963 >>2040960 i dont understand

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 20:47:34 2015 No.2040971 File: 177 KB, 465x817, bomgirl.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] What do you think about this 1 hour values study? Tell me how you would have done it better in 1 hour. gogogo

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 21:26:30 2015 No.2041015 >>2040914 What brush are you using?

Anonymous Thu Apr 2 21:33:15 2015 No.2041028

>>2036461
Yes, and I even saw someone who looked like this earlier today. It's more interesting to drawpeople like this who aren't conventionally handsome because you get this diversity of features, which can seem alien if you arent used to deawing them.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 21:34:09 2015 No.2041031 File: 167 KB, 2044x1114, 2015-04-02 19.25.49.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] A color experiment...

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 23:37:02 2015 No.2041126 File: 158 KB, 400x533, soldah.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] holy shit I'm proud of this right now even though I know I have so far to go. someone shit on me to bring me back to earth pls.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 23:44:11 2015 No.2041135 File: 465 KB, 612x899, satyr02 compressed (March 2015).png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] would appreciate crits/tips about focal points and whatnot! did i manage the focus well, or are the details too distracting? etc etc

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 23:46:05 2015 No.2041136 File: 166 KB, 1200x1500, landscape-mountain1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] A little landscape for practice. Any advice would be great.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 2 23:54:45 2015 No.2041144 >>2041031 nice. makes me feel sad and happy at the same time, somehow

Anonymous Thu Apr 2 23:58:46 2015 No.2041148

>>2041126
the rendering and shapes are playful enough.

i have some complaints

theres no room to breath. the top of the head is being cut off by the top of the canvas.

theres no fingers yet. i pray you are able to do fingers well but leaving them off is usually intentional so good luck.

it looks like he's doing reps with the chain. the pose is strange.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 00:02:23 2015 No.2041152 >>2041148 yeah, the chain was honestly just an afterthought, originally he was offering up a sword, but it just didn't look right. thanks for the advice, I'll keep working.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 00:07:24 2015 No.2041155 File: 50 KB, 750x1027, mal.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] his beard is cube

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 00:20:03 2015 No.2041163 >>2041155 gabriel?

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 00:31:58 2015 No.2041171 >>2041163 I am not he. Who is this Gabriel?

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 00:41:15 2015 No.2041175 >>2037636 >(2.97 MB, 3000x3639) will you fuck off

>>	nigga you aint even kawaii Fri Apr 3 02:14:05 2015 No.2041223 File: 311 KB, 1080x1920, Picture 32.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] cool gray scale piece I just finished

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 02:21:37 2015 No.2041230 >>2040204 >>2037240 hes right you know

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 02:22:00 2015 No.2041231 >>2041175 It took me less than a second to load it in my browser kek are you guys sure your comp is suitable for digital art?

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 02:22:37 2015 No.2041233 >>2041136 bob ross.. is..is that you?

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 02:26:21 2015 No.2041236 >>2040159 9/10

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 02:53:25 2015 No.2041261 >>2041233 hardly, just a fan of the guy.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 02:59:23 2015 No.2041264 File: 576 KB, 2000x3000, Satyr.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Satyr WIP

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 03:03:17 2015 No.2041266 File: 565 KB, 1031x1500, why the fuck are my colours so shit.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 03:05:49 2015 No.2041268 >>2041231 my PC is pretty elite but my connection is aids >>2040914 >(3.94 MB, 2776x3998) Seriously your shit portrait copy doesn't deserve that many pixels

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 03:15:54 2015 No.2041278 File: 143 KB, 1058x885, 2015-04-03 01.14.04.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] doobly doo

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 03:34:19 2015 No.2041292 >>2041266 Mostly due to the values being off. Second is you aren't considering the color temperature of the light sources (direct and ambient). Post the ref

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 05:01:19 2015 No.2041332 File: 63 KB, 800x500, sketch.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] too lazy to use a reference.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 05:12:27 2015 No.2041336 >>2041332 Too lazy to critique

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 05:51:52 2015 No.2041348 >>2041163 i am gabriel thats not my work i like it though

Anonymous Fri Apr 3 06:09:57 2015 No.2041354

>>2041135

works very well in terms of focalpoint. you create nice contrast arou the face and connect the bottom with the two little purple badges. then despite the bottom having a ton purple it's not dominant because you ease into it with a smooth gradient so the eye really shoots to the face, and then travels down the arm and drops easily into the flowers. where it can rest.

what i think you could do better:
-close the composition in a circular pattern (no idea how you would do that here)
- create more of a sense of direction towards the left so the figures pose has more narrative depth.
- some desaturated tones/colors so you make use of a broader spectrum (might just be personal taste though)

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 06:56:08 2015 No.2041366 File: 398 KB, 704x576, nope46.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] still figuring out how light works

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 07:41:41 2015 No.2041379 File: 761 KB, 1584x1224, Untitled-1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] i could use some other's perspective on how this is coming, could someone lend some wisdom?

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 08:34:23 2015 No.2041399 File: 519 KB, 1513x578, rippingoffallmechasyoucanprobablythinkoff.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Currently fixing a few things, took a few breaks and returned to it.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 08:41:30 2015 No.2041401 File: 1.84 MB, 2902x978, ruanjia.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2041366 study some ruan jia

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 08:54:46 2015 No.2041406 >>2041401 when you learn to paint something at your will, you should probably learn something else. ruan probably should paint some other faces and stuff that isn't armor. cool stuff though.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 09:06:20 2015 No.2041409 File: 335 KB, 700x889, Newhyyyyyy CanvasSS.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2037173 finished it

Anonymous Fri Apr 3 09:12:34 2015 No.2041416
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>>2041136
Pretty decent start, but you should probably start with doing the landscapes in black and white and paint with value only and then move onto coloring it. Since your biggest problem seems to be controlling values.
Try to put in as little of pure white as possible even snow isn't pure white most of the time even tough it looks like it. Watch couple really early FZD videos like episodes 1-5 since even tough he is design oriented in the early
videos he talks about painting with value a lot along with composition.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 09:15:32 2015 No.2041417 >>2041409 Wtf is going on with its ears and horns on its head, they the right ones just look like they were misplaced.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 09:17:08 2015 No.2041418 >>2041015 It's an oil brush

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 09:23:18 2015 No.2041420 >>2041409 hold the fuck up, I saw this like, months ago, asking for how to get cleaner lines. literally months. did you pause or something ?

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 09:23:33 2015 No.2041421 File: 205 KB, 636x900, bunny_2015_900.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Need to practise drawing animals more.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 10:02:07 2015 No.2041437 File: 46 KB, 400x566, 2353738.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Anonymous Fri Apr 3 10:33:49 2015 No.2041466

>>2041399
Pretty nice. The pink bot is too washed out by the atmosphere though imo, eventhough she is pretty near to the camera, so probably you can bump up some contrast there to show that. Or if you're worried that she's too prominent, you can maybe blur her to create a fake DoF.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 10:34:14 2015 No.2041467 >>2037633 Mmm nothing like a couple of wet exotic pussies

Anonymous Fri Apr 3 10:38:10 2015 No.2041474

>>2041421
Saw this on your dA page. Pretty nice. But I feel like you didn't spend as much time on her left calf and stilettos, and it is slightly jarring compared to her suit. Her hand is also a tad bit too small.

But I like the general idea of the illustration, and the execution is done nicely. Good job melon dude.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 10:40:03 2015 No.2041477 >>2041466 She is actually supposed to be far away, currently fixing her up and softening the edges up. Tried to keep the values limited as much as possible.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 10:50:32 2015 No.2041483 >>2041477 Then you should probably overlap the blue bot over the pink bot, even slightly. I thought she was standing and watching the blue bot from the side.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 10:55:09 2015 No.2041485 >>2041483 >she was standing and watching the blue bot from the side. >secretly hoping that senpai would notice her Dumb jokes aside, yeah I'll look into it. Can probably solve it by giving her something to hold to not move her around to much.

Anonymous Fri Apr 3 11:00:57 2015 No.2041492
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I feel like I've angled the jaw badly and as a result cant paint the left side of the face without it looking abnormal.

I also want to know what I need to do to improve my digital painting.

Any tips to help me complete the face?

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 11:20:09 2015 No.2041507 >>2041416 I'll look those up tonight after work. Thanks for the advice.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 11:27:04 2015 No.2041514 >>2041420 probably took months to do that because op doesnt know what hes doing

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 11:50:23 2015 No.2041533 File: 1.93 MB, 1300x1043, sketchbookpage.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] did some figure studies, might take one through to a painting.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 12:15:07 2015 No.2041553 >>2041533 i like the left one take more time to draw you know, you made the right one look like a man

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 12:22:02 2015 No.2041564 >>2041553 lol. the right one does look like a man, did not see that before. thanks

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 13:04:25 2015 No.2041610 Critique? Gonna try again with a different pose.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 13:05:44 2015 No.2041613 File: 190 KB, 612x816, vergil DT before scanning.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2041610 And I forgot to put in the picture because I'm an idiot.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 13:19:02 2015 No.2041624 >>2041354 hey, thanks dude! it's nice to have someone break down what works and what doesn't in your art. the composition and narrative quality of the drawing is definitely lacking, and looking at it now it really is pretty saturated. thanks again!

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 13:44:27 2015 No.2041656 >>2041613 pose is stiff

Anonymous Fri Apr 3 14:17:39 2015 No.2041697
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Gonna start colouring this
I plan on changing a few things like the way the swing chain in left hand is and the dudes face maybe
Also adding in a wall behind him probs
Critique would be great please

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 14:24:22 2015 No.2041706 >>2041697 Also this is just half of the page, only had a4 scanner for a3 paper

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 14:38:16 2015 No.2041714 >>2041706 maybe scan the other half and merge them in photoshop? it would be much clearer that way

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 14:39:19 2015 No.2041716 test

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 15:05:26 2015 No.2041758 >>2038788 could you please write down some of the things he talked about?

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 16:25:42 2015 No.2041851 File: 367 KB, 1015x942, cucaracha- terra formars.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2037577 close enough

Anonymous Fri Apr 3 19:42:20 2015 No.2041988
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>>2041417
yeah, i tried but i couldn't seem to get them right. it's more of a practice piece anyway to try out my new cintiq.

>>2041420
no??? i started and finished this on my cintiq, which got delivered to me like a week ago
but i have posted older drawings of the same character, so maybe that's what you're thinking about

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 3 20:56:17 2015 No.2042053 >>2041264 I like it. Try to be more confident with your lines, they're getting a little hairy. >>2041332 Too stiff. Use a reference. >>2041421 Nice. The cats face does look pretty ratchet though. >>2041467 nice joke, middle schooler

Anonymous Sat Apr 4 12:49:25 2015 No.2042597
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>>2037499
I've seen you post this now for a couple of months and the face and pose has always bothered me. This is my how i feel it would look better. Hope you finish it one day.

>>	Anonymous Sat Apr 4 17:31:15 2015 No.2042819 File: 44 KB, 469x834, womanwarrior.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2036456 just finished this one. Sorry for the shit quality on my pics. I am stuck with my stupid phone because my scanner broke last week

>>	Anonymous Sat Apr 4 23:03:48 2015 No.2043153 File: 405 KB, 1944x904, 3213.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Okay I guess I'm looking for a general feedback on these character designs. Any critique, be it for (the lack of) skill or style, is much appreciated. thanks

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 5 14:52:42 2015 No.2043798 >>2043153 Other than the noisy background, they look appealing to me. Are these for some kind of story?

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 5 17:02:46 2015 No.2043921 >>2042597 You just took his pose and made it stale AF

>>	Anonymous Sun Apr 5 17:08:48 2015 No.2043933 >>2039094 Tape a piece of textured paper on it.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 6 00:56:59 2015 No.2044472 File: 74 KB, 617x805, elsa lines.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Hey guys, I don't know how to draw hands, pls help

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 6 06:56:44 2015 No.2044635 File: 167 KB, 890x1500, bunny(small).png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] i just barely learned how to shade, what would be the next step to making this better?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 6 08:14:56 2015 No.2044666 >>2044635 do more studies

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 6 14:45:24 2015 No.2044887 File: 376 KB, 1600x1200, man.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] What's wrong with this head?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 6 15:03:00 2015 No.2044903 >>2037636 What brush is that?

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