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Did this in watercolor.

>> No.1915996
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1915996

Same watercolor.

>> No.1915997
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1915997

This is done in ink and is a masquerade version of beast. Beauty and the beast.

>> No.1915999

>>1915995
not too happy with the way the bust/image just abruptly ends before it reaches the bottom and we just see what looks like raw paper down there. I think you could've found a way to resolve that more successfully.

>> No.1916002

>>1915999
Good advice. I don't know if I consider it complete. Someone was talking about how storm troopers are terrible shot. So I was intoxicated and painted her getting hit with a lazer blast. Do you think a full background would look nice?

>> No.1916004

Can we make starting new threads for our own drawings against the rules?

>> No.1916011
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>>1915996
This one could've really done with better texture rendering. You made the facial hair and head hair the exact same color and texture. In general, beard hair is not the same as head hair, it doesn't come in long, silky strands. It is generally more wirey, rougher, and curlier. I think you could've broken up the bangs a little better, all the hairs there are more or less the same length and don't criss-cross over one another. You were actually much more successful in this on the left side of the painting,

Again I do not like this random bare patch in the painting on the bottom right. It doesn't do anything good for the composition.

>> No.1916015

>>1916004
Oh... I posted elsewhere and was referred to /ic/

>> No.1916017

>>1916011
Thanks for your feedback. It was my rendition of Bruenor Battlehammer. You're spot on about the beard. I didn't think about that.

>> No.1916018
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>>1915997
This one is a little cluttered and confusing. There's no natural focus point, a place for the eye to rest, making it hard to really take in the image as a whole.

>> No.1916021

>>1916018
Hmm. Interesting. I like that article very much. I'll keep that in mind. I've never been much of an artist, at least not on a physical medium. But the principle surely can be expressed in any medium.

>> No.1916025
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This is brown charcoal, graphite and textured paper.

>> No.1916028

>>1916025
Sorry not sure why it's so blurry around the edges. My friend took it with her camera.

>> No.1916031

>>1916028
looks like a blur vignette filer. That or something is funny with her lens.

I really like this piece actually, the texture of the paper looks like the texture of the rendered surface.

>> No.1916036

>>1916031
Thank you. I actually used a paper bag and found an interesting fold as a model. I exaggerated some of the texture with a 2b graphite pencil.

>> No.1916038
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Lastly. This was done with clay and leather. And I also put green LED lights in the eye holes. Borderlands mask.

>> No.1916084

>>1915995
Needs better anatomy m8, Mouth is horrible, like symbol drawing.

>> No.1916698

>>1916038
nooice man