Stylization General

[Anonymous No.1661989]

Stylization Thread

"Each step being broken down into even smaller steps, the impossible becomes possible." - Glenn Vilppu

Previous Thread: >>1659574

Try to keep calm, have a positive attitude and avoid making Kind Janitor-Ssi angry!

A general message to aspiring artists: Don't ever think that you should stop attempting to learn how to draw because "it takes too long" or "drawing is just a hobby." Being shitty at your hobby is definitely not better than doing your hobby well, no matter what your laziness tells you. Have some dedication in what you love to do, damn it!

Submit your drawings, receive feedback or critique others! Share your knowledge and remember to thank those who've critiqued or red-lined your drawings. Most importantly, have fun.

This thread is meant for artists who might want to try to make stylized work in-between their studies. It is strongly recommended that you use this thread in conjunction with learning the elements and fundamentals of art. You can also discuss the visual elements of various professional artists as well if you keep it relatively articulate and civil.

>Fresh off the boat? Read the sticky!
http://www.squidoo.com/how-to-draw-learn
http://www.squidoo.com/w-ic-i
>Proko
http://www.proko.com/videos/
>Ctrl+Paint
http://ctrlpaint.com/
>List of active livestreams
http://livestreamstatuslist.appspot.com/
>fellowBro's books
http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
>Tutorial/Reference Collection
http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
>Figures
http://artists.pixelovely.com/practice-tools/figure-drawing/
http://reference.sketchdaily.net/

Remember the words of our good friend Glen Vilppu: “No rules, just tools.”

/ic/: "Professionals use references."

[Anonymous No.1661994]

>>1661989

>This thread is meant for artists who might want to try to make stylized work in-between their studies. It is strongly recommended that you use this thread in conjunction with learning the elements and fundamentals of art.

Notice how so many people in these threads don't pay attention to this cuz "muh style".

[Anonymous No.1661995]

>>1661989
Bleh, was hoping I could finish inking this some more before you made the new thread.

Reposting.

[Anonymous No.1661998]

Can I learn from Kubo?

[Anonymous No.1662000]

>>1661995

Arms and elbows.

Fix them.

[Anonymous No.1662003]

anyone have a gude for fabric and clothing

[Anonymous No.1662005]

>>1661994
Nope, not really. Never heard anyone defend their work on the basis of "muh style" in these threads.

[Anonymous No.1662007]

>>1662003

http://punchandbrodie.com/leo/FamousArtistsCartoonCourse/facc_09.pdf

[Anonymous No.1662009]

>>1662005
yeah, it's just some faggot complaining about a stereotype of people who enjoy anime while he himself is just another stereotypical whiney anime hater.

it's still surprising how much people will go out of their way to complain about something that doesn't affect them just because they can.

or in other words: if you dont like a thread, hide it and dont post in it.

[Anonymous No.1662015]

>>1661994
I do studies.

[Anonymous No.1662019]

Any advice on color comp?

[Anonymous No.1662020]

>>1662007
Sick, not him but I'll use this. Thanks.

[Anonymous No.1662021]

>>1662019
Shitty anatomy

[Anonymous No.1662028]

>>1662009
>if you ignore an infection, it won't spread

[Anonymous No.1662040]

>>1662028
You are the infection of this board. The elitist wannabe artist who thinks he is the last bastion of realism and thus has to defend it at all cost or some crazy shit.

[Anonymous No.1662042]

>>1661995
Why didn't you fix the arms yet? Were you even listening last thread?

[Anonymous No.1662051]

>>1662040
i agree with this.

not to mention that he can post his shitty artwork in the drawthreads anyway.
what's the purpose of insulting people in a thread about something you dont like? it changes nothing.
you should be happy that there even is something like an anime general thread because a few months ago these kind of threads didnt exist. even if you dont like them, at least they are keeping most of the stuff you dont like in a single thread.
this guy(not the one i am replying to) is a fucking idiot

[Anonymous No.1662060]

Why is there an anime thread so often? I don't get it, you can still comment in the previous thread.

[Anonymous No.1662065]

>>1662060
Because most of these fags are from /a/ and /v/ where they create new threads for their "generals" right after the old one hits the bump limit due to the speed of their boards.

[Anonymous No.1662067]

>>1662065

You can also still post in the old draw thread, yet we still make a new one once it hit bump limit. Please stop trying so hard to shit up this thread. We get it, you're too cool for stylization, move on.

[Anonymous No.1662069]

>>1662042
Yeah, I am looking for arms to reference from and study them first I need to learn how they look like.

[Anonymous No.1662070]

Can you enjoy a manga even though its art is bad?

[Anonymous No.1662074]

>>1662069
Look in the mirror and take a picture of your own arms.

[Anonymous No.1662080]

>>1662070
Shingeki no Kyojin would be a lot less popular if you couldn't.

[Anonymous No.1662082]

>>1662067
>We get it, you're too cool for stylization
jesus fucking christ. keep thinking that the "realism bullies" are out to get your sorry ass.

>>1662070
it depends. if the flow and layout is good and the story is interesting i'll probably read it either way.
but then again there are manga like 7seeds that have weird art and messy layout but i read them anyway because of the story and writing.

i guess the most important factors are that it looks reasonably professional ,at the very least in terms of typesetting and paneling, and that it is interesting in content.

[Anonymous No.1662084]

>>1662080
I'll never understand why that dumb shit is popular to begin with.

[Anonymous No.1662086]

>>1662084
Me neither, anon, me neither.

M-muh edgy darkness.

[Anonymous No.1662088]

>>1662084
>>1662086
did you watch it yet?

[Anonymous No.1662095]

>>1662070
Yep. I can even fap to DA tier furry shit.

[Anonymous No.1662100]

>>1662095
>tfw
>used to like hentai
>start lurking ic
>notice tons of flaws in every picture I see
>nothing arouses me anymore ( not even 3dpd)

Whyy?

[Anonymous No.1662105]

>>1662100
Same happened to me. It's mentally unhealthy to constantly fap to this shit anyway so good riddance.

[Anonymous No.1662111]

>>1662100
The fact that you had to go to /ic/ to notice is frightening.

[Anonymous No.1662118]

>>1662100
Want well drawn hentie? Go to hentaifoundry.
I'll link you to my friend's profile if you want...

[Anonymous No.1662121]

>>1662100
What are you trying to fap to? random pixiv drawings? find better artist. How can you be involved
into art and not constantly searching for good artists to look up to and get inspiration?

[Anonymous No.1662122]

>>1662111
Good hentai exist ya know.

[Anonymous No.1662123]

>>1662122
>good
>hentai
pick one

[Anonymous No.1662128]

>>1662122
>western
>hentai

[Anonymous No.1662132]

Anyone got that link or pic on how center of gravity works on the body

[Anonymous No.1662137]

>>1662122
Please don't turn this thread into a hentai taste battle again. I am sure you all have great taste, just let it go.
There are people on this board that post things like, da vinci can't draw for shit, so why are you surprised?

[Anonymous No.1662141]

>>1662118
HF can't even ask artist for decent splash screens.

[Anonymous No.1662146]

>>1662100
If it satisfies your fetishes then where's the problem?

[Anonymous No.1662147]

>>1662100
Random wrong anatomy doesn't turn me off as long as the artist knows how to do it right most of the time. Wrong perspective is worse.

[Anonymous No.1662148]

>>1662141
HF > DA > pixiv

[Anonymous No.1662149]

>>1662141
Beggars can't be choosers

[Anonymous No.1662150]

When u niggas gonna art?

[Anonymous No.1662154]

>>1662148
pixiv > HF > DA

[Anonymous No.1662156]

>>1662150
If people didn't start random conversations that probably need a thread of their own, those threads would would probably be weekly.

[Anonymous No.1662155]

>>1662154
Anybody who puts pixiv above anything is a fucking clueless weeb.

[Anonymous No.1662161]

>>1662155
You need to polish your lurking skills, my nigger.

[Anonymous No.1662162]

>>1662155
Have you ever been past the front page? Most japanese professional and doujin artist post their art there.
I won't deny that hf has some good artist, but most of them are on pixiv. And also, pixiv chat. Watching professional
animu artists workflow is very nice.

[Anonymous No.1662167]

>>1662148
>that lack of perspective.
>that broken spine.
lel.

[Anonymous No.1662168]

>>1662161
>implying that's good.

[Anonymous No.1662170]

>>1662168
Post better?

[Anonymous No.1662171]

>>1662167
You can try to fix it, and it will look worse.

[Anonymous No.1662172]

>>1662161
Ilya kuvshinov is solo good.

[Anonymous No.1662177]

>>1662172
That is a really long forearm shes got. Is that an animu trope or something

[Anonymous No.1662183]

>>1662177
You see flaws because you search for it. Long limbs is common for every cartoon character.

[Anonymous No.1662191]

>>1662183
You miss flaws because you're incompetent. Having a pleasing and sensible design is also a common trait of cartoon characters.

[Anonymous No.1662194]

>>1662155
man, you have no idea about pixiv.

[Anonymous No.1662198]

>>1662194
>>1662161
>>1662162
You can say the exact same for dA you clueless faggot weeaboos who think dA is only inflation sonichu fanart.

[Anonymous No.1662200]

>>1662183
>but is muh style.
top lel.

[Anonymous No.1662202]

>>1662191
Show me art piece without flaws and i can find flaws in it. Realism != good.

[Anonymous No.1662203]

>>1662183
Yeah nah. The artist was either lazy or incompetent because he wanted her hand to reach the visor but either didn't want to bother correcting the angles of the hat/head/arm/hand or didn't notice his mistake at all.

[Anonymous No.1662205]

>>1662200
You should talk about "MUH STYLE" when somebody post his work, otherwise it will looks stupid, like you >>1662167

[Anonymous No.1662207]

>>1662198
This. I've seen nice animation and comic artists over there I, however, prefer to stay away from such sites.

[Anonymous No.1662208]

>>1662205
>proper critiques that aren't bullshit.
>somehow makes me stupid.
take off your weeb glasses weeb.

[Anonymous No.1662210]

>>1662203
Does this mistake ruins whole piece? Does this mistake is the first thing you see?

[Anonymous No.1662213]

>>1662208
>proper critiques
>green text without explanation how to fix problem

[Anonymous No.1662214]

>>1662210
Yes.

[Anonymous No.1662217]

>>1662198
no you retard, i know fairly well that DA has good artists.
you are the weeb since you play the expert even though you don't seem to know jack shit about pixiv.
much of the art you see on the boorus are ripped from pixiv.

[Anonymous No.1662215]

>>1662198
>Anybody who puts pixiv above anything is a fucking clueless weeb.
What you are making fun of is what this guy said in the first place so what are you even talking about?
There is nothing to compare, pixiv is the japanese deviantart, both have great professional artist and both have
an unrestricted shitty underage user base, i just prefer pixiv because it has artists that i am interested in.

[Anonymous No.1662216]

>>1662210
Let's see...

YES IT DOES, faggot. A work is as good as it's weakest link. This is why you're taught fundamentals before how to render a nose.

[Anonymous No.1662219]

>>1662213
>how to fix.
FUCKING READ LOOMIS FAGGET.
FUCKING LOOMIS EXPLAIN PERSPECTIVE.
IS THE FIRST FUCKING THING HE EXPLAINS IN SUCCESFULL DRAWING.
STOP MAKING EXCUSES AND READ FUCKING LOOMIS.
PRACTICE YOUR FOUNDAMENTALS FIRST.

[Anonymous No.1662220]

>>1662216
> A work is as good as it's weakest link.
That quotes philosophy. Ok, then Vangog is shitty artist.

[Anonymous No.1662221]

>>1662217
>much of the art you see on the boorus are ripped from pixiv.

No shit, asshole. Those boorus are for weebs like you. It sounds like you don't know shit about pixiv. You probably don't even search japanese tags.

Grass is greener on the other side am I right, weeb?

[Anonymous No.1662222]

>>1662210
yes.
Is pretty obvius when the drawing lack perspective.

[Anonymous No.1662223]

>>1662220
Could you point your glowing red ass away from me? Thanks.

[Anonymous No.1662224]

>>1662202
STOP FUCKING MAKING EXCUSES ABOUT SHIT ARTIST.
GET GUD.

[Anonymous No.1662226]

>>1662219
As i think, you can't, poor you.

[Anonymous No.1662227]

abolish muhstyl threads

[Anonymous No.1662228]

>>1662223
>AHHH, I'M LOST ARGUMENT FIGHT, GET AWAY FROM ME, I DON'T WANT TO FILL MISERABLE.

[Anonymous No.1662230]

>>1662228
Your mother is a bad artist. No proof, no argument, I'm just right.

Take that, loser.

[Anonymous No.1662232]

>>1661998
He's meh-tier at anatomy, his characters suffer from same-face and he's an awful character designer.

[Anonymous No.1662236]

>>1662235
Abolish muhstyl threads

[Anonymous No.1662234]

>>1662202
>Realism != good.
Never implied that. I said, "pleasing and sensible," meaning it's got to look good and make sense. I'm sure you can spot a flaw if you search for it, you said so yourself. But let's not try to conflate major flaws with minor ones. If something sticks out like a sore thumb, it's a flaw that should be remedied. And that forearm sticks out.

If you like having poor standards, ignore it. Or you can embrace it and learn form it. It's your choice.

[Anonymous No.1662235]

>>1662227
>>1662222
Start using shift

[Anonymous No.1662239]

>>1662227
yeah what's up with all these faggots getting in arguments over >muhstyle in a thread specifically for stylized drawings.

instead of having these useless arguments you faggots should all just shut the fuck up and draw more. stop being such a bunch of unproductive faggots and stop wasting your energy on this useless shit.

[Anonymous No.1662242]

>>1662226
ged gud fagget.
maybe if you spend the time to learn perspective you spot it when a drawing was made without it.
I'm not you nanny who has to spoonfed you.

[Anonymous No.1662243]

>>1662224
It's just super ugly traced crap.

[Anonymous No.1662246]

this thread really needs a clean up. so many shitposts even for /ic/'s standards...

[Anonymous No.1662247]

>>1662243
>u jelly because you haven't made a masterpiece yet.

[Anonymous No.1662245]

>>1662221
you're just gonna keep saying weeb to make yourself feel less like one huh?
i'm just stating the obvious: there is much better animu on pixiv than DA or HF.
it's really a joke that you would claim otherwise.
you have to be a special kind of retarded. it's like i'm talking to a retarded kid.

[Anonymous No.1662251]

>>1662239
It's the same hate driven doing it on purpose. They see their shit posting discourage contribution and degrade the quality of the thread hoping it'll destroy it. Not much to be done at this point.

[Anonymous No.1662254]

>>1662245
>there is much better animu on pixiv than DA or HF
Way to change the argument to better suit your position, twathole. Try to actually follow the original argument instead of jumping in with your arbitrary point, dumbass.

[Anonymous No.1662255]

>>1662239
>3 original drawings
>1 constructive critique (maybe)
>91 replies
Why is it so hard to just post art and critique original art? I hope with the new janitor applications, we can get someone to clean this shitposting.

[Anonymous No.1662256]

>>1662246
I'm sorry but there's nothing we can do. In the mean time I am studying arms while /ic/ is...being /ic/.

[Anonymous No.1662257]

>>1662242
Not him, but it is probably you who should study up on perspective because you are plain wrong. You are most likely confusing the tilt of the body with flawed perspective, as many noobs tend to do. Learn more instead of wasting your time "criticizing" artists who are your superiors.

[Anonymous No.1662261]

>>1662257
okay faggot, he's not that great.
second, look at his pelvic box, is smaller than his shoulder box.
wtf.

[Anonymous No.1662263]

I want to see original works but just can't stand all this "MUH STYLE" shit posting. If you hate anime and weebs, please leave this thread, we know that we are bad, but your pointless mocking can't help us.

[Anonymous No.1662265]

>>1662255
agreed.
the whole argument is especially stupid since this is the stylisation thread anyway. why are there faggots arguing about the typical "muh style" shit?

i for one enjoy the draw thread aswell as this one.
this shitposting is only gonna lower the quality of this thread aswell as the community because once some faggots see they can just bait everyone with the usual shit they will continue to drag us down to /b/'s level.

i used to say that people on /ic/ are assholes but at least there was a reason for that. now, they are just assholes because they can.

>>1662256
yeah i am also working on some loomis in the meantime

[Anonymous No.1662266]

>>1662261
Of course he's not that great, but you're so fucking terrible that you don't even understand basic perspective, so he IS way better than you are.

The size of the pelvis and shoulders has nothing whatsoever to do with perspective you fucking moron so why do you change the subject? Also a stylized, heavily sexualized female character having big hips and slender shoulders is seriously an unintentional mistakein your eyes?

Just stop embarassing yourself any further, please, I'm fucking cringing from second hand embarassment here.

[Anonymous No.1662268]

>>1662261
If you learn some anatomy(no loomis stylized shit, real one) you will know that shoulders is always wider than pelvis.

[Anonymous No.1662269]

>>1662224
wtf get this loli shit outta here

[Anonymous No.1662270]

>>1662268
>what are females

[Anonymous No.1662272]

this is why i can't fucking stand these H fags.
you idiots just fucking destroyed these threads.

all you faggots belong on /d/, you should make a drawthread there.

[Anonymous No.1662273]

YOU FUCKING NIGGERS TURDS SHITTING FUCK SHIT FAGGOTS TURDS FUCK

101 REPLIES NO ARTWORK

EAT SHIT

[Anonymous No.1662274]

>>1662266
>>1662268
>implying.

[Anonymous No.1662276]

>>1662273
>>1662272
STOP COMPLAINING AND POST YOUR SHIT.

[Anonymous No.1662278]

>>1662276
it's already too late anyway.
just delete this thread and make a new one.

[Anonymous No.1662280]

>>1662274
Nigger females have comical proportions. Not arguing, just observation.

[Anonymous No.1662282]

>>1662268
Way to prove you know absolutely nothing about anatomy, let alone stylization.

[Anonymous No.1662286]

>>1662274
>>1662270
Learn anatomy idiots.

[Anonymous No.1662285]

>>1662254
please tell me what the fuck the original arguement is supposed to be about?
i was just talking about pixiv in comparison to the other sites.
please don't tell me it's about hentai again?
just get lost you god damn faggots.

>>1662276
i did last thread.
what about you?
wait lemme guess, you just like to talk about hentai here.

[Anonymous No.1662289]

>>1662280
>not liking delicious black hips
you're an homosexual.

[Anonymous No.1662290]

>>1662285
Pixiv sucks and is a shallow wading pool for weeaboos.

[Anonymous No.1662292]

Is /ic/ officially dead?

>>1662274
>niggers
>people

[Anonymous No.1662296]

>>1662289
Those are borderline normal. I'm talking about REAL NIGGA ass

[Anonymous No.1662298]

>>1662296
She's just overweight.

[Anonymous No.1662299]

>>1662292
Not yet, but shitposters like you seem to be trying really hard today.

[Anonymous No.1662301]

>>1662290
you know you are comparing it to HF and DA, right?
just what the flying fuck is wrong with you. you seem awefully obsessed about weeaboos.

[Anonymous No.1662303]

>>1662301
And you're awfully obsessed with your shitty weeaboo site like it's the second coming of christ.

[Anonymous No.1662304]

Hentai proportions =/= realistic proportions

[Anonymous No.1662305]

I wish I was a fucking janitor.

I would clean this shit like robocop cleans a house full of niggers.

100 replies and like 3 drawings submitted, are you fucking serious? This is /v/ levels of shit posting.

[Anonymous No.1662307]

>>1662282
It's you learning anatomy from youtube. "Girls have widder hips caus they have widder pelvis", they have wider hips because of different femur angle, and shoulders is always wider than pelvis, it's just your stylized stereotypes.

[Anonymous No.1662308]

>>1662243
Hehehe, come on dude, I'm not even a huge fan of realism or Diego Velazquez, but you just said some fidgety shit right there.

There's no justification for mistakes, neither for stylized nor realistic stuff, and you need to learn your shit to be able to differentiate between mistakes and stylistical choices.

[Anonymous No.1662310]

>>1662305
I am applying this sunday, Anon. Hopefully one of us gets a Janitor position to clean up the house.

[Anonymous No.1662311]

>>1662304

[Anonymous No.1662312]

>>1662305
with the upcoming jan applications you would do me and others a huge favor by applying for /ic/.

fyi, janitors can't delete threads. they can report them to the mods and every single one of their reports will be saved to prevent them from abusing their position.
i think as a janitor you might be able to become a mod sooner or later.

[Anonymous No.1662313]

>>1662303
not really. it's just a reaction to these
>>1662148
>>1662155

talk about not being able to follow a conversation..

[Anonymous No.1662316]

Holy shit, all this off-topic garbage. These threads are always useless and none of you will ever improve if you continue making them. [-]

[Anonymous No.1662315]

>>1662305
I hope somebody come and clean it all, and will punish anyone who don't post original work. Me in first place, i should think about my behavior.

[Anonymous No.1662317]

>>1662308
It's ugly? Yes.
It's traced? Yes.

[Anonymous No.1662318]

>>1662315
And your grammar too lol

[Anonymous No.1662319]

>>1662304
That doesn't mean it's ok to draw fucked up shit, like the hand/gun of that drawing. it just doesn't make sense and is not even pleasing to look at.

Mistakes =/= style

[Anonymous No.1662320]

Why are naps so bud at droowing lol?

[Anonymous No.1662322]

>>1662317
And it doesnt have mistakes like that pokebitch and her 2 meters forearm.

[Anonymous No.1662323]

>>1662319

Pretty sure that the focus is on the panties and not on the gun.
Do you look at the cameraman when you watch 3dpd pron?

[Anonymous No.1662324]

>>1662322
The whole perspective is just fucked up, composition is bad and values is off.

[Anonymous No.1662327]

Hey guis
Wats ur fb? :3

[Anonymous No.1662328]

Guys, how about we pretend all this shit never happened and we stop shit posting about style.

[Anonymous No.1662329]

>>1662324
>composition

Wat

[Anonymous No.1662330]

Derailing a thread iz so easy xD

[Anonymous No.1662331]

holy fuck these style threads are probably the biggest waste of time. Inherently if you fucking clods would just draw you will develop your own goddamn style but all you people do is bicker about being looked down upon. You're just like the goddamn jews.

[Anonymous No.1662333]

>>1662329
not the other guy but yeah, bruh, composition, ever heard of that?

[Anonymous No.1662334]

IC LOGIC:

>EVERYONE DRAW ANIMU
>NOONE IS ORIGINAL
>HEY GUISE LOOK AT MY STYLE I EXAGERATED SOME STUFF
>LLLLOOOOOOLLLL GET SOME LLOOOOMIS
>KEEEEK UNCANNY VALLEY

[Anonymous No.1662335]

>>1662334
Ikr lel

[Anonymous No.1662338]

>>1662329
Didnt you know? in animu you are allowed to draw everything that isn't the focal point like shit.

[Anonymous No.1662341]

>>1662338
But DA pokegril is just on a white background lol

[Anonymous No.1662343]

>>1662338
This was meant for >>1662319

[Anonymous No.1662344]

I want to post something but now I'm afraid of being ripped to shreds just out of spite and malice rather than honest critique.

[Anonymous No.1662346]

>>1662344
Just do it I am about to post some arms for the sake of throwing in drawings anyway.

[Anonymous No.1662347]

>>1662344
post it i will be gentle.

[Anonymous No.1662351]

>>1662347
Kill this thread with fire, we should start new life.

[Anonymous No.1662352]

>>1662344
Better wait for the next thread.

[Anonymous No.1662354]

>>1662351
It's not these threads per se, it is the community in which unfortunately I am part of. And this type of behavior does not go uncommon I see this happen on other draw threads but for some reason these threads in particular are more volatile to derailment and trivial arguments.

>Filename

Did Firez draw that?

[Anonymous No.1662357]

Go back to /a/c/co/ or wherever the fuck you idiots came from.

Fuck you and these cancerous pieces of shit you call threads

[Anonymous No.1662358]

Style is not evil. Style is what makes you unique.

[Anonymous No.1662361]

>>1662358
Blindly copying stylization as a means to learn is what makes you suck. These threads are a testament to that fact.

[Anonymous No.1662362]

Less bullshitting more wip screenshots.

[Anonymous No.1662363]

[Anonymous No.1662366]

>>1662362
Yes, finally. Was off and on these because I can't dedicate time to study while I am at work. Everyone should take a screenshot right now and just post it.

[Anonymous No.1662369]

>>1662366
ok

[Anonymous No.1662376]

Continue original work combo.

[Anonymous No.1662389]

>>1662366
Ok Mikufag.

Also good job that you're practicing non-anime refs.

[Anonymous No.1662390]

>>1662362
>>1662366
>>1662369
>>1662376
holy shit lmfao

>mfw these people just made 100+ posts arguing like they were hot shit

you don't belong here, you belong in the drawing for babbies/beginners thread.

>>1662389
>that backwards foot

LOL

[Anonymous No.1662394]

>>1662390
oh god I didn't even see that. Thanks anon.

[Anonymous No.1662395]

>>1662390
Post your work or get out, oh, i forget, you don't have anything beside cubes.

[Anonymous No.1662399]

>>1662390
post your work you enormous retard, I can actually smell how bad you are at art.

[Anonymous No.1662401]

>>1662390
You missed me
>>1662352

[Anonymous No.1662402]

I make this thing as a break between studies.

wip

[Anonymous No.1662403]

>>1662390
lol why did you include >>1662369 in there? you are clueless as hell that guy atleast knows how to draw you scrub, and if you're gonna talk shit on the rest atleast tell them why, they're probably like 15 and you're what, wrong side of 20s? Trying to shit on art by kids?

[Anonymous No.1662411]

the animu threads have really started to make a lot of excuses.
we really need to stop talking about style, since style is usually not the issue.

>>1662403
he just grouped them together, don't get your panties in a bunch.
i'd also say miku is fine since she's somewhat diligent.

[Anonymous No.1662414]

>>1662411
And you should start using Shift, shit poster.

[Anonymous No.1662416]

>>1662390
post fit fuccboi

[Anonymous No.1662417]

>>1662395
i can draw some badass cubes and balls brah what the fuck are YOU doing?

>>1662399
>butthurt

>>1662403
>crushed crown and flattened forehead
>no ears

let me guess, your style right LOL

[Anonymous No.1662420]

>>1662417
ahahah wow you are a dumb, dumb motherfucker

[Anonymous No.1662421]

>>1662417
>>1662411
Same person

[Anonymous No.1662423]

>>1662420
>no counterargument

just finish your shit drawing brah here let me help you locate it
>>1662376

LMAO still makes me laugh

[Anonymous No.1662427]

>>1662423
>>1662417
>>1662411
Same person

[Anonymous No.1662431]

>>1662423
Keep posting.

[Anonymous No.1662432]

>>1662403
You need to be 18 or older to post on 4chan.

[Anonymous No.1662434]

>>1662423
I'm waiting for your works.

[Anonymous No.1662435]

>>1662421
>>1662427
no.
why do you even keep trying.

[Anonymous No.1662438]

>This thread

[Anonymous No.1662439]

>>1662434
posting my works won't make your art better, kid

nor would it make me any less wrong about your art

lel

[Anonymous No.1662441]

>My life

[Anonymous No.1662444]

>>1662439
>this troll still thinks that i'm mad
I'm just wasting your time

[Anonymous No.1662443]

>>1662439
So you're admittedly wrong about that anon's art?

[Anonymous No.1662445]

>>1662019
Orange

[Anonymous No.1662447]

Just report and don't respond.

[Anonymous No.1662449]

>>1662444
If you were the author of any of the drawings he linked you probably should just keep drawing instead "wasting his time". He's wasting yours.

[Anonymous No.1662450]

pls rate.
stop shitposting.

[Anonymous No.1662451]

>>1662447
Reported for announcing report

[Anonymous No.1662452]

>>1662450
0/10

[Anonymous No.1662454]

>>1661989
i have no fucking idea of what i'm doing

[Anonymous No.1662453]

hey guys

how are you ?

just wondering if you can help he with the waist legs ?

[Anonymous No.1662458]

>>1662084
>niggas goin fast in the sky and slashin on bustas.
>Mika or whatever gotta booty like whoa
>Levi makes girls cum instantly
>EDGE

[Anonymous No.1662459]

>>1662453
Looks right to me.

>>1662454
Looks awesome anon, keep at it.

[Anonymous No.1662460]

can you just delete this thread

[Anonymous No.1662461]

>>1662454
Her lower right leg is broken and both the lower legs are too small. Is she laying down or standing/jumping? Her boobies look like balloons.

And both of you stop chicken scratchiness lines.

[Anonymous No.1662462]

>>1662460
Why? Janitor-san will clean it up soon. Hide it if you don't want to see these threads.

[Anonymous No.1662464]

>>1662243
>traced
>back during Victorian era

Nigga ill stomp you

[Anonymous No.1662465]

>>1662461

i am
>>1662453
maybe is doing some painting so he dosent need line

[Anonymous No.1662468]

>>1662462
why the fuck are we keeping threads around that consistently need to be culled. stop forcing this bullshit.

[Anonymous No.1662469]

>>1662465
im talking about >>1662454

[Anonymous No.1662470]

>>1662468
Ok so we're just going to all dump our anime artwork in the draw threads and or make separate threads of our pieces. It's not our fault some asshurt people keep shitting them up.

Fuck off.

[Anonymous No.1662471]

>>1662361
>copying styles
I copy like 20+ styles and mash it with loomis

[Anonymous No.1662474]

>>1662470
do whatever you have to do idiot till you understand that some of us actually want people that come here to improve.

keep spinning your wheels.

[Anonymous No.1662479]

>>1662470
I think it's just awkward attempt to kill animu threads
1. Start shit posting
2. Call everybody muhstyles
3. Constantly posting "Why we need this threads"

[Anonymous No.1662483]

>>1662474
So destroying the anime threads because you think all of us are blindly being retarded and not properly studying alongside our animu. Mikufag even proved that wrong here >>1662366 and >>1662015 for that regular jewbrow guy.
And even if some people here aren't properly studying, who gives a fuck? Ignore their posts.

Complaining about anime on 4chan is retarded.

[Anonymous No.1662487]

>>1662483
>using mikufaggot as your posterboy
way to prove my point.

[Anonymous No.1662490]

>>1662461
she's lying on a bed
it's fucking impossible for me to not do chicken scratch lines on the tablet. i'm able to finish with a smooth contour on paper though.

>>1662459
thanks mate

[Anonymous No.1662493]

>>1662490
I figured she was laying on a bed, but it was a bit hard to tell since the feet are cut off. As for the tablet, I was exactly like that too, it just takes getting used to which comes with time. Keep practicing and use your elbow/shoulder to draw, not the wrists.

[Anonymous No.1662492]

You faggots act like this cancer has always been here.

[Anonymous No.1662495]

>>1662454
its a steaming pile of shit

go back to fundies.

[Anonymous No.1662496]

>>1662490
because of drag against the tooth of the paper, paper is somewhat self correcting. you can put a piece of paper on top of your tablet to get a similar surface if you like. but be forewarned, it's a crutch and you should really learn how to draw properly instead, otherwise brush and ink and the like will remain out of your reach.

[Anonymous No.1662498]

>>1662483
>Complaining about anime on 4chan is retarded.
complaining about shitty art on /ic/ is anything but retarded.
the real problem is that the noobs are starting to make way too many excuses.

like this guy for example >>1662490
you also need to realize that not all the critics are correct all the time. you need to take the criticism and try to understand it, make the best out of it.
you just need to know that if somebody complains about your art, there is likely SOME things wrong with it.

for example in this case: the guy probably wouldn't complain aboutt chickenscratches if the drawing was good.
if it comes down to it, having nice lines is important, but it's still pretty low on the list of priorities.

[Anonymous No.1662507]

Earth-tone-Pastel Anon here.
>>1662483
When I posted the drawing I did it to reply to the guy that said that people in this thread does not study real anatomy. I do study from pixelovely and from classic paintings, and from life whenever I can. I don't know who you think your are replying to.

[Anonymous No.1662506]

>>1662015
legs are a little short. is common issue iv'e heard.arm is also a bit wide leading into the shoulder.

[Anonymous No.1662509]

>>1662506
>short legs
Thanks, yeah I felt that as well. Is direct drawing by the way, if that makes any difference.

[Anonymous No.1662510]

>>1662507
I assume your the guy who made that jewbrow yuri feet licking image a few threads ago. Since that pixellovely drawing was similar to that guy's other pixellovely stuff on his tumblr. I only quoted it to prove some of us are drawing realistic shit as well as anime.

[Anonymous No.1662511]

>>1662498
Fight the good fight anon.

[Anonymous No.1662513]

>>1662510
>jewbrow yuri feet licking
Yeah, that's me. Thanks then, but you gotta make it more clear who you are replying to, I did felt like you were trying to imply I said something instead of using me as reference.
>jewbrow
You guys really don't like the way I draw noses/brows?

[Anonymous No.1662515]

>>1662498
But not all anime art is shitty, thats where the issue comes from. there is a lot of shit posted here on /ic/. And I agree some people here rely on much style too much as an excuse. But I don't think the stylized threads are cancerous.

>>1662513
No I myself draw thick eyebrows on both my men and girls as well as actual noses. I think it's cute. It's just a quick name I came up with, sorry if it offended.

[Anonymous No.1662516]

I really feel as though we should be forced to post wips at least every few posts if you get into an argument. And if you don't have notable progress, draw more, then post.

But then again, I might just be irritable from the trolls.

[Anonymous No.1662519]

>>1662515
>But not all anime art is shitty

But that's wrong.

[Anonymous No.1662525]

>>1662516
>be forced
>thread culling
why?

[Anonymous No.1662527]

>>1662516
this is garbage, funamentals, boxes in perspective.

[Anonymous No.1662532]

>>1662515
>But not all anime art is shitty
i didn't say that
>But I don't think the stylized threads are cancerous.
how cancerous they are really depends on the people in it. and right now, it's getting more cancerous by the day.

mainly because of how defensive these faggots have become.
like in my example before, the artist and critic could've continued to argue about chickenscratching, and it would never have lead to anything. because chickenscratching isn't really an issue.

people need to take critique much more vaguely (and not that literally). you just can't expect critics to solve your problems for you. they can only point you in a direction.

[Anonymous No.1662534]

>>1661989
stay strong anime people. you remind me of the nerds in high-school, bullies coming at you all the time and you just taking the bullshit and getting on with your nerdly ways.

much love.

here's an animu i made for you so i'm not just shit posting. not my thing usually.

how'd i do? looks a bit miyazaki-ish to me but that's presumptuous i know.

[Anonymous No.1662535]

>>1662534
look cute.

[Anonymous No.1662537]

>>1662534
Its nothing like the nerds in high school.

They are smart. They develop. They grow.

[Anonymous No.1662545]

>>1662534
Love it, really reminds me of miyazaki. Keep up the good work and fight the good fight.

[Anonymous No.1662550]

>>1662534
Rest assured these threads will continue despite a couple of Anons dedicated to disrupting these threads.

In order to learn one must be immersed in an environment where set examples are provided and be able to participate by discussing or sharing experiences on how to solve a problem.

The examples are there, look at the Sticky, look at Artists such as Greydeath and Teal line guy, deadhorseguy, and many others.

I strongly believe that these threads are necessary to provide the suitable environment especially if that environment does not exist in life as Anime is heavily stylized - instead it reflects and follows life by mimicking laws that govern proportion, perspective, forms, planes, etc.

It's up to the draftsman to translate the laws of life into the stylized genre and the same goes for any stylized genre not limited to Anime. I and hopefully the current OP are dedicated to continue creating these threads despite the disruptions.

If it is in the culture of /ic/ to disrupt, and argue over meaningless and trivial arguments so be it welcome to the new /ic/ you asked for this.

[Anonymous No.1662552]

>>1662550
How does it feel to be cancer personified?

[Anonymous No.1662555]

first post

[Anonymous No.1662556]

>>1662550
Are you bulbous with festering sores and gurgle loudly when you shift your bulk about?

[Anonymous No.1662557]

>>1662552
Point in case, take this Anon as an example. Instead of directly replying to this entity I will use it as an example and do what we should of done in the first place - ignore it.

It may reply again in the hopes to cause more disruptions but if you keep ignoring it for the sake of preserving order it will eventually get tired. Hopefully on the next threads this kind of derailment won't happen again.

[Anonymous No.1662558]

>>1662555
you cant even paint within the lines. trash.

[Anonymous No.1662559]

>>1662555
Cool stuff, but you might wanna do his whole head before throwing on the hat.

[Anonymous No.1662560]

>>1662557
Youre new is showing.

[Anonymous No.1662565]

>>1662515
I think it does looks better as cel shade.
inb4 I know I misspelled it (file name).

[Anonymous No.1662578]

>>1662513
The brows and noses are cute, but it wouldn't hurt to vary it up some.

[Anonymous No.1662585]

>>1662565
Their faces really bother me. Like, what is the girl in the back looking at?

[Anonymous No.1662584]

>>1662565
It does look better as celshade, but I might be biased on that since I personally do celshade only most of the time.

And yes I like her eyebrows. Not a fan of the one thin black line ones.

[Anonymous No.1662591]

>>1662585
if you look in someones butthole you can see out their mouths, so she's looking at her own feet.

[Anonymous No.1662598]

>>1662565
Ears dont work like that.
Figure is still, hair is flapping in the wind for some reason.
>anime
you couldn't get that eye right?

[Anonymous No.1662599]

reposting from /d/

trying to draw chubby short stacks, any tips on making their body types more distinct from each other even if they're all just chubby and short? Other feedback would be nice too

[Anonymous No.1662602]

>>1662599
draw their skeletons, musculature and fat deposits.

each step should offer something that makes them look different

[Anonymous No.1662603]

>>1661995
what did you use for the inks, a brush, a pin nib maru?
or maybe a brush pen?
please

[Anonymous No.1662604]

>>1662599

[Anonymous No.1662606]

>>1662565
Tongue looks like an uncircumcised penis

[Anonymous No.1662609]

>>1662585
>>1662598
>>1662606
samefag

[Anonymous No.1662611]

>>1662599

[Anonymous No.1662613]

>>1662609
Try again

[Anonymous No.1662614]

>>1662609
you don't want to start shit with me.

[Anonymous No.1662619]

>>1662614

[Anonymous No.1662632]

[Anonymous No.1662634]

>>1662611
>>1662604
Thanks for that

[Anonymous No.1662640]

>>1662565
great pic... nice perspective... one thing though... girl being submissive, her tongue looks strange and kind of disturbing.

[Anonymous No.1662642]

>>1662632
kawaii, pupils are misaligned, and i can't help but think i more rounded shape to them would suit the drawing better.

[Anonymous No.1662648]

>>1662614

[Anonymous No.1662652]

>>1662648
Cool

[Anonymous No.1662653]

>>1662648
ssshh don't let them know the secret.

[Anonymous No.1662664]

>>1662640
I know, I edited the siliva now. By the way, anyone knows how to post the same file twice?
>inb4 Yeah fucking noob

[Anonymous No.1662667]

>>1662664
just put a pixel on it in paint

[Anonymous No.1662669]

>>1662664
resize it at 95% the size.

[Anonymous No.1662671]

>>1662664
I think the tongue looks less weird now, the saliva is meh however.

[Anonymous No.1662672]

>>1662648
I only posted once and gave a legitimate critique. You think the shitposting and derailment is out of hand NOW?

[Anonymous No.1662674]

>>1662672

[Anonymous No.1662676]

>>1662565

[Anonymous No.1662678]

>>1662648
>/ic/ is one person
Kill yourself

[Anonymous No.1662681]

>>1662676
I'm sorry if this is common or something, but isn't it kind of fucked when he just paints over another person's drawing? Can't he just do his own shit?

[Anonymous No.1662684]

>>1662681
Depends on the person.
Personally, I can appreciate a good paintover of my stuff. Helps put things in perspective better than just being told.

[Anonymous No.1662685]

>>1662672

Don't you anything better to do?

[Anonymous No.1662686]

jewbrow anon here
>>1662676
I actually like the way you redrew the nose.

[Anonymous No.1662692]

>>1662671

make the saliva less bunched up/concentrated on the tip of the tongue. it should be a smooth drip and will also make the tongue look less lumpy. digging the cel shading.

[Anonymous No.1662694]

>>1662676

this paintover made it totally unfappable. thanks.

[Anonymous No.1662697]

>>1662692
I'm very fucking tired of this drawing. I'll keep your advice in mind next time I draw something involving saliva.
pick unrelated.

[Anonymous No.1662698]

>>1662527
I understand I need work on fundamentals, but what do you mean by boxes in perspective? Like breaking down his chest and stuff into boxes?

[Anonymous No.1662699]

>>1662698
not him, but
yes.

[Anonymous No.1662701]

>>1662681
wait what? it's a paint over?

[Anonymous No.1662703]

>>1662701
Go back to sleep, Anon.

[Anonymous No.1662704]

b8

[Anonymous No.1662711]

>>1662701
>>1662703

Sometimes /ic/ is unexpectedly cute.

[Anonymous No.1662732]

>>1662672
man you still post here? I thought you were long gone. The best thing about you is I just know, like, I can practically smell how edgey and totally puppetmaster you think you are but you're just so so not. It's really endearing that you keep trying though.

[Anonymous No.1662733]

>>1662732
Right, that's it I'm going to bed.

[Anonymous No.1662734]

>>1662676
THAT'S TOO MUCH SALIVA

[Anonymous No.1662737]

>>1662732
thanks for taking the bait

[Anonymous No.1662742]

i-i dont know how to draw nips or clits

[Anonymous No.1662751]

>>1662742
Just gotta practice.
I thought I had better pictures for you, but alas.

[Anonymous No.1662753]

>>1662742
for nipples just get reference

[Anonymous No.1662754]

>>1662742
heres more in case anyone finds it useful

[Anonymous No.1662757]

>>1662753
why does anyone post this? looks terrible

[Anonymous No.1662761]

>>1662757
that's relative. it looks a million times better than what a lot of people draw.

[Anonymous No.1662765]

>>1662671
This mouth has a lot of more motion

>>1662676
This one looks as if she is terrefined or disgusted.

[Anonymous No.1662798]

>>1662765
I agree. I prefer the softness of the first face

[Anonymous No.1662801]

>>1662754

if you are a gril, i want your babies right now

[Anonymous No.1662892]

>>1662402
mfw everyone ignored muh picture

[Anonymous No.1662894]

>>1662892
very good honey.

[Anonymous No.1662896]

>>1662894
thanks !

[Anonymous No.1662904]

>>1662402

I'd like to see this piece worked out abit more to be able to give beter feedback. for now i'd say try to use a greater range of contrast on the metal. Also the neck and her right elbow look odd and her left leg looks too long.

Other than that, I like where this is going.

[Anonymous No.1662905]

wip

and just asking if anyone has some refrence of ghost being cut

[Anonymous No.1662909]

>>1662904
alright, noted.

[Anonymous No.1662968]

>>1662402
The colours on the figure look really washed out. Needs more contrast, don't be scared of going dark.

[Anonymous No.1662977]

How is my animu anatomy?

[Anonymous No.1662982]

>>1662977
It's not all about Anatomy like /ic/ makes it seem, there are other things such as gesture that is just as equally if not more important. It's very stiff looking, and by the looks of it you seemed to be more focused on muh anatomy than anything else remember gesture comes first.

When you are drawing gesture, do not worry about bones or muscles or anatomy keep it very simple as it is an abstract form that you have to "feel" in other words there is the state of mind that is part of the process in which would directly influence your drawing.

[Anonymous No.1662983]

>>1662977
Legs are a tad long but otherwise bretty gud

[Anonymous No.1662988]

It's already a finished drawing, but I want a critique. I know the shading sucks, but I'd like a critique on anatomy and style and all that stuff.

[Anonymous No.1662989]

>>1662988
Where did his legs go?

[Anonymous No.1662992]

>>1662988
>his legs

[Anonymous No.1662995]

>>1662989
>>1662992
Yeah, about that... I did the whole legs without flipping the drawing, and when I did it I saw how bad the legs were, I ragequitted and deleted them after scanning the thing. They were short, the perspective wasn't working, and I didn't want to bother in doing them again.

I gotta get gud.

[Anonymous No.1662996]

>>1662992
>>1662989


you guys are retarded obviously it's a composition choice.

just look at vereemer for examples he did similar shit all the time.

[Anonymous No.1663000]

>>1662996
Nah dude, I actually fucked up the legs.

[Anonymous No.1663006]

>>1662982
Oh yes im aware of that and i usually do a gesture first. By the way am i doing it right?
I dont know why but i like gesture more
>>1662983
Thank you

[Anonymous No.1663007]

>>1662369
top of cranium is too low.

>>1662376
symbol eyes, belly vag.

>>1662450
long hand is looooooooong

[Anonymous No.1663009]

>>1662996
>muh style

[Anonymous No.1663012]

>>1663006
There is no "right way" of doing gestures so as long as it reads.

[Anonymous No.1663015]

>>1662699
I still think I'm doing it wrong?

[Anonymous No.1663048]

>>1663012
Oh ok im using the method hampton says.
Also any errors with this one?

[Anonymous No.1663073]

>>1662671

Unless a window is open and there's a tornado outside, or she uses glue instead of hair gel, her ponytail should not float like that either.

[Anonymous No.1663076]

>>1663073
can you guys forget this already, I'm not even working on this thing anymore.

[Anonymous No.1663078]

>>1663048
I feel a lack of confidence in your drawings, it seems like you're not enjoying enough the process of creation
Also, try to do more confident lines and draw bigger, chicken scrath isn't good

[Anonymous No.1663081]

Pls help. By following >>1662402 example as best I can and taking >>1662904 advice, I've been able to move a little forward rendering her armor. I'm still lost and I'd like some advice on how to do it. Especially about what color/value I should use for highlights.

A tutorial or good reference will suffice just as much.

[Anonymous No.1663080]

>>1663048

You're drawing too small.

That shit plagued me for years and it's why I don't work traditional anymore

[Anonymous No.1663088]

>>1663081

Those beam things are sources of light and that's not showing up on the figure at all

The rim lighting and reflected light should be much stronger on the figure

You should have designed your rendering with those 4 sources of light in mind.

[Anonymous No.1663089]

>>1663088
I will. I have plans on how to tackle that. However my color choices for them doesn't end well and I end up retrying. That's why I'd like advice on how to render her armor.

[Anonymous No.1663093]

>>1663088
I will. I have plans on how to tackle that. However my color choices for them doesn't end well and I end up retrying. Thanks for the feedback, I'll keep at it.

[Anonymous No.1663100]

>>1662977
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VIMLjz8rfgw

LOL

[Anonymous No.1663102]

>>1663076
Pf, quitter.

[Anonymous No.1663103]

>>1663100
That's pretty interesting how /ic/ seems to find the sources/references relatively quickly. So they referenced from a video, big whoop.

[Anonymous No.1663106]

>>1663103
watch the video, you dweeb, not just assume something

[Anonymous No.1663134]

[Anonymous No.1663137]

>>1663102
is not that I'm a quitter, is just that I realize there is so much wrong with that one drawing that continuing it will only result in turd polish. I'll do another one whenever I get the chance, it was fun practice anyways.

[Anonymous No.1663142]

>>1663137
Don't let it get to you. A single picture will always be a single picture. Grabbing all the experience you can from it and moving on is always legit. It's definitely better than never finishing it or running it into the ground.

[Anonymous No.1663143]

>>1663137
don't be a lazy ass and draw it again, anon

[Anonymous No.1663160]

>>1663142
>>1663143
Holy shit you guys are giant faggots.
He's right, it's time to let go. It's fucking shit.

[Anonymous No.1663192]

Can someone give me tips on getting into environment drawing? I've never really taken any art classes or "studied" art. Is it a good idea to learn anatomy and stuff first?

[Anonymous No.1663191]

>>1663160
>Calls my drawing shit
>somehow agree
>pic related self explanaroty

[Anonymous No.1663210]

>>1663192
Just think in 3d. If you're not used to it, you will get it after a few life drawings.
Think of it as sculpting on the surface. 'Feel' it.

Also yeah, why not. Reading Loomis is fun.
Draw from life though, that's 100% important.

[Anonymous No.1663213]

>>1663191
Conflicted, I guess? Just move on to something else, man.

>>1663192
I dunno how useful anatomy would be toward environment drawing. Find some appealing land and paint it. Neat bush, though.

[Anonymous No.1663229]

>>1663210
>>1663213
Alright, thanks. I guess I'll start with some life drawings and I'll read some loomis while I'm at it for the hell of it.

[Anonymous No.1663233]

>>1663229
>for the hell of it.

With that attitude you won't get anywhere. You got to want it. You got to want it bad. And I mean really bad.

[Anonymous No.1663238]

>>1663233
Mikufag, loomis got you nowhere, you've got no right to parrot it blindly.

[Anonymous No.1663262]

>>1663078
What do you mean by not enjoying the process of creation? And why is it bad to draw small? I mean those drawings were like 1/4 of an a4 paper.
Thanks for the feedback! Will try to draw bigger and improve my line confidence.

[Anonymous No.1663279]

Working on an older drawing that I've been sitting on for a while.
Mainly because I didn't want to actually design the spaceship, so I went and put some time into that.
Lots of things to fix, hand placements of the girl, some legs and feet issues, a few other things I didn't notice when I first started drawing this...

[Anonymous No.1663283]

>>1663279
why didn't you fix it before posting it?

[Anonymous No.1663285]

>>1663279
Are the suits and guns from imagination?

[Anonymous No.1663288]

>>1663279
Looks alright, but there are some problems with the silhouettes of the figures. The bottom left guy's gun arm is inside his silhouette so it isnt noticeable. The guy with the rifle has it running parallel to the lower leg causing some confusion. Other than that, good work.

[Anonymous No.1663289]

>>1663283
I'm going to work in 5 minutes, plan to when I get back. And if people notice any things that I haven't between then, I can fix it all in one go?
>>1663285
Yes.

[Anonymous No.1663294]

>>1663279
Really cool but I'd like to see some line weight separating those figures from each other and the details in the armor/guns.

[Anonymous No.1663296]

>>1663279
Looks good as always. Watch out for how the left 2 figures are placed and the perspective of some of the stuff like the box in the foreground. With your normal coloring style this might look a little bit too confusing finalized so make sure to pay close attention to your values. I'm looking forward to seeing it finished.

[Anonymous No.1663301]

>>1663288
I'll definitely adjust the girls rifle, didn't really notice that issue.
I see what you're getting at with the pistol guy, though I'm honestly fine with it.

[Anonymous No.1663457]

Made some more progress on this guy. Hopefully it looks better now?

[Anonymous No.1663459]

>>1663213
>move onto something else
I need to practice my "soft shading"

[Anonymous No.1663495]

pls rate my original character.
;_;

[Anonymous No.1663499]

>>1663457
What the hell is that in the back, remains of aoba?

[Anonymous No.1663504]

>>1661989
Asking one last time just in case.

[Anonymous No.1663506]

>>1663499
More or less.

[Anonymous No.1663523]

really don't understand gesture or pose.. all my efforts are pretty bad. What do I need to do? How do I draw poses from reference?

[Anonymous No.1663525]

>>1663506
10/10 I chuckled.

[Anonymous No.1663528]

>>1663459
Do you have somewhere where you post your stuf other than here?

[Anonymous No.1663530]

>>1663523
Read force by Mike Mattesi. Even if you just read the beginning, your vision should totally changed since you don't seem to understand those concepts yet.
Also try more daring pose. Make your characters do something.

[Anonymous No.1663531]

>>1663528
>yeah
http://blackdressmango.tumblr.com/
I have another account where I post mostly pixelovely studies and such.
shameless promotion aside, I thought you knew already.

[Anonymous No.1663533]

>>1663523

Don't paste-flip for one thing

Proko, Hampton or Vilppu cover gesture in-depth fairly well

Watch/Read however many times it takes until it makes sense

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8j39NqwL7s4

[Anonymous No.1663546]

>>1663523
Michael Hampton's Figure Drawing is good at explaining fluid and natural poses, you may also find Vilppu useful. The idea is to visualise the body as an abstraction of curves which flow in unity.

[FiRez !!tndrCZJHE+I No.1663553]

I started doodling this today.

If I get an idea about what to do with her arms and legs I think I might finish it.

[Anonymous No.1663559]

>>1663553
you should turn this into some kind of bizzare vore porn comic.

[Anonymous No.1663562]

>>1663559
Seconded

[Anonymous No.1663569]

>>1663553
You should figure out the pose when doing the gesture, but you didn't developed a gesture, so that's why you can't figure out what to do with the limbs.

I say that you place her right hand in the thumb and the other hand just laying in the palm, her right leg could be crossed, as the abductor muscles represent a bump that would certainly make unlikely the way she's sitting right now.(by the way, it looks like she's standing and you just drew the hand behind her, there's no signal of contact between both objects.

[Anonymous No.1663574]

>>1661989
wip. Cant seem to get the bird at all.

[Anonymous No.1663578]

>>1663574
Try looking at a bird, maybe.

[Anonymous No.1663579]

>>1663559
>>1663562
>>1663320
>>1663363

I want /d/ to leave.

[Anonymous No.1663581]

>>1663574
the extreme levels of scribbling going on here tell me you don't quite understand what you're doing or where you're going, so it's no surprise you're brickwalling on a particular element. I don't mean this aggressively, it's just simply a sign you need to alter your approach to your work.
Your fundamental construction skills are weak so when you start building your piece you're not getting enough vital information onto the page to keep progressing. Take a step back, identify all the basic shapes and elements and recompose on a new layer.

[Anonymous No.1663583]

god damn i wish i had more free time. Some quick pre work sketches. I'll be back later

[FiRez !!tndrCZJHE+I No.1663591]

>>1663559
>>1663562

I wish I was fast enough for drawing any comic but alas I'm obsessed with rendering and faces.

That's why I'm trying sketching with lines and little value maybe this way someday I will develop some wit and speed.

>>1663569

Thanks. I like the suggestion about putting her hand in the thumb, I thought about putting it right in the fingertip but I'm afraid the thumb is a bit too behind her for that .

As for the pose, you're right I should have done that beforehand but I've very little experience with those.

I was just practicing with my Note 2 during lunch drawing my hand, then I tried doing some figure drawing eventually both things lead me to this idea.

[Anonymous No.1663597]

>>1663553
>lrn2proportions

[Anonymous No.1663606]

>>1663553
cute, the modelling around the panties is quite nice, and the face is cute. certainly has potential

[Anonymous No.1663628]

>>1663583
i like it

[Anonymous No.1663740]

>>1661989

[Anonymous No.1663746]

What's the ratio proportions when you draw anime?

The anime characters I'm trying to draw look long and out of proportion, I keep using human standards for the body and face but it's not looking right.

[Anonymous No.1663750]

>>1663746
big eyes, big head, small nose

[Anonymous No.1663755]

>>1663750

Thanks.

Do you guys make up your own eyes or do you steal from other artists and use their anime eyes?

[Anonymous No.1663759]

>>1663746
it's long legs, short torso. often i see people doing long torsos too, maybe it's that?

[Anonymous No.1663760]

>>1663755
If you have no experience, go over to /a/ and look at some but generally either they're just simplified anatomical eyes or the giant eyes you're probably thinking of.

[Anonymous No.1663812]

>>1663746
Make your own through study of others. Not by just copying proportion, but by studying how each artist vary from realistic proportions and how it creates appeal.

[Anonymous No.1663813]

>>1663746
Make your own through study of others. Not by just copying proportion, but by studying how each artist vary from realistic proportions and how those variations create appeal.

[Anonymous No.1663830]

>>1662454
nearly giving up i'm seriously lost
i'm not used to painting like this. should i retry with a drawing with a solid linework?

[Anonymous No.1663836]

>>1663830
Keep the lines until the end, then merge with the color and paint over them.

[Anonymous No.1663842]

>>1663746
I used 3 same length for torso, upper & lower legs, the as for the head I vary size so it can go from normal anime to chibi looks, it's based on 90s anime.

[Anonymous No.1663844]

>>1663100
Is this "Let's Draw with Jesse Eisenberg"?

[Anonymous No.1663867]

>>1663830
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=manga&illust_id=39278159

Not sure how much help this will be but take a look at this guys procedure.

[Anonymous No.1663886]

>>1663867
>>1663830

This pixiv guy has a good understanding of gestures. Note how he sketches a simple gesture first to get the flow of each girl in the scenery, then he fleshes out the details afterwards. I love how he used a compressed mosaic for the ground, very creative way to get color.

In general, I feel that you should work on gestures and basic anatomy, and scrap this one. This pose looks too stiff and confusing to look at. Highly recommend you start/continue work on life drawing so you can understand basic construction. Proko's Youtube channel has step by step processes on doing gestures.

Right now, she just looks upright stiff, right leg looks fucked up. I didn't even know she was lying down until you said so in a previous post. You have good colorwork, but work on anatomy first. Stop with stylized work for a bit, build your basics by working on gestures.

[Anonymous No.1663913]

how do i get into animu hair guys?

[Anonymous No.1663917]

>>1663830
Have you ever seen an adult human female naked?

[Anonymous No.1663927]

>>1663913
>observe actual hair
>simplify
>make it shiny (optional)
There you go, it;s five bucks.

[Anonymous No.1663929]

>>1662454
I just started Vilppu and Hampton recently so I'm still shit-tier, but I hope this helps a bit

[Anonymous No.1663939]

More or less finished now.

[Anonymous No.1663942]

>>1663929
the face is too big and i liked the exagerated thights.

[Anonymous No.1663948]

Crits and advice :D

[Anonymous No.1663951]

>>1663939
Are you the same guy who did the mermaid and Makoto?

[Anonymous No.1663958]

>>1663939
the base of his neck is skewered at least 2-3 inches back. He should not be alive.

[Anonymous No.1663967]

>>1663948
got your crit right here

[Anonymous No.1663971]

>>1663958
What do you mean by skewered? And how do I go about fixing it? Paint more neck in on the left?
>>1663951
I did a merman Makoto, yep. (Did you mean tentacle girl and Makoto?)

[Anonymous No.1663972]

>>1663967
I feel like all your shadows look like reflected light.

[Anonymous No.1663973]

>>1663971
Yeah, the tentacle girl not a mermaid, my bad. Could you post your Tumblr again? I apparently have a lot in common with you.

[Anonymous No.1663976]

>>1663973
>a lot in common with you
Ma nigga.

Tarusu.tumblr.com.

[Anonymous No.1663978]

>>1663976
Teach me how to paint.

[Anonymous No.1663983]

>>1663886
but anon i'm fucking sick of practicing gesture. that's just one of my sketchbooks, i got a few dozens of other sheets with similar stuff.
i already drew spheres, boxes and pyramids until my hand fell off

>>1663917
dick

>>1663929
thanks m8

>>1663913
secret ribbon technique and never look back

>>1663867
pretty fucking amazing, kind of what i was trying to do, but how people paint without a well finished drawing with smooth linework is beyond me

[Anonymous No.1663984]

>>1663976
That demon is really nice, mang. I guess I should get over my fear of tags and start posting shit too.

[Anonymous No.1663987]

>>1663978
I would, but I have maybe 1/4 of an idea of what I'm doing. I just sketch, erase excess lines, block in colors, then blend and redefine more neatly.

>>1663984
Thanks man, and yeah, just go for it. Posting stuff helps motivate me to draw more as well, so that might be the same for you.

[Anonymous No.1663991]

>>1663983
>secret ribbon technique and never look back
i also dont wanna look back anymore

[Anonymous No.1664016]

>>1663967
Well fuck you too! :D

[Anonymous No.1664017]

>>1663867
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=manga&illust_id=39278159
this shit actually amazingly funny
there needs to be a western pixiv for good traditional art

[Anonymous No.1664040]

Hey, could someone please give me some feedback on this?

[Anonymous No.1664059]

>>1663976
Underage b&

[Anonymous No.1664065]

>>1663948
those are some bizarre proportions

[Anonymous No.1664074]

>>1664059
lol 16

[Anonymous No.1664080]

>janitor culls threads
> troll & tablet threads abound
>underage b&

Nice work fag

[Anonymous No.1664086]

>>1663459
Are you Korean, or were you the anon I asked about a month or two back about the Korean in his artwork?

[Anonymous No.1664095]

>>1664086
Not Korean, but I like artists from Korea, and how the Hangul (Korean script) looks. Is that bad or something?

[Anonymous No.1664099]

>>1664040
I like the drawing. The coloring is ok but nothing to write mom home about. Couldn't give any tips on that since my own coloring efforts aren't too hot. The only issue with the drawing is she feels a bit compressed in her face and her left eye looks squished maybe.

[Anonymous No.1664111]

>>1664099
Thanks very much :)
I'll try work on the colours a lot more, might even help with the face some.

[Miki !!vn9zepIZfVQ No.1664121]

I hope you guys don't mind, I'll be pouring out some honest critique here. Part 1.

>>1661995
Overall the lines are quite stiff. Loosen up a bit. Most of your efforts seem to go to the face, instead of the overall body. Work on your gestures and volume.

>>1662019
Try zooming really out while painting. If it doesn't look like a photograph in thumbnail size, it doesn't work. Be concerned about values first, perhaps make some value studies in small sizes. Right now, the bad value placements make it look like the head is floating in darkness because the body is too dark.

>>1662362
Looks promising but it feels like the butt/hip placement could use some help. Not sure about the approach you are going for at this stage, but the composition seems really bland despite having some interesting elements in it. Play around with space.

>>1662369
This may be subjective, but it looks like a mongoloid. Sorry for my rude vocabulary, there is no nice way to put this. Have you drawn the ears? Next time try drawing the ears before covering it with hair. Right now the connection of the chin towards the back of the head doesn't seem convincing. I can't believe if you say that she actually have ears.

>>1662376
The gesture is pretty weird, and everything seems off about the work. The colors are cancerous too. More practice, nothing much I can say.

>>1662389
I'm not even going to look at that; I hate it subjectively. Props on using references, though.

>>1662402
Feels like you're going with a George Kamitani approach, or possible inspired by that. The skin color looks really dead. It looks really lumpy when you paint it over the lines. Your painting does not have the same confidence as your line work. The shadows are not convincing enough- be more bold with you shadow and dark values. The armour is reflective and yet it doesn't seem to be reflecting any color at all.

[Anonymous No.1664123]

>>1664040
I squished her face in a little bit, then drew over it a bit. As for coloring, play around with your saturation/hues more.

[Anonymous No.1664126]

>>1664121
Hey, thanks Miki! Finally some quality critique. Take notes /ic/ this is how it is done.

[Miki !!vn9zepIZfVQ No.1664151]

Part 2

>>1664040
There is something about the structure of the face that makes her look like a black person. Try studying skulls and different facial structures. Try to focus on your value placements. Don't be afraid to apply shadows. Right now it looks really flat, like it doesn't have shadows at all. Try applying solid-edged shadows over flat colors. If it looks right, then proceed to blend it.

>>1663948
That's the head of a man on a midget body with a girl's legs. I'm not sure if that is the intention, pardon me. The perspective of that far-off leg doesn't connect well to the body. Some of the shadows feel too stiff- the hair looks like it doesn't flow at all.

>>1663939
The entire structure of the body doesn't seem solid enough. It looks like your abs are being plastered on a flat tray, in fact the entire body looks like weird 3D-modelled object that has been plastered with a mismatching texture. Your values could also use some work. The shadows present do not convince me that the figure belongs in a believable space at all. Don't attempt to fix this any more, but please keep this in mind when working on your next piece!

>>1663830
Use a solid linework. You could always paint on top of the lines later. The thighs look like they're about to burst as well. Be brave with the shadows, right now it looks extremely flat.

>>1663740
I think it's a good start with the simple flat light and shadows, as well as the composition. The gesture feels too stiff, though. I can't make up or decide what her expression is supposed to signify. Also try having a little subtle creases along the body costume, to reinforce the fact that it is hugging the figure.

>>1663574
There is no confidence in this at all. Some good manga artists start their drawings with a tone of scribbly lines, but they all contribute to the gesture and flow of the piece. Yours is trying to do that, but your understanding of anatomy and form and structure is too limited to do that. Study more gestures.

[Anonymous No.1664152]

>>1664151
Hey man, thanks for the trip.
> filtered

[Anonymous No.1664155]

>>1664121
>Hates Dwarfs.

Hey, the entire thread can't just be kawaii girls and bishounen now. I'm here to add diversity.

[Anonymous No.1664161]

>>1664123
>>1664151
Thanks very much :)

[Anonymous No.1664162]

>>1664161
>:)
stop doing that you faggot.

[Anonymous No.1664163]

>>1664162
Stop using emoticons faggot

[Miki !!vn9zepIZfVQ No.1664165]

Part 3
>>1663553
Don't even try to finish it. Always start with the initial overall gesture before adding details. If you attempt to add the limbs now, it's only going to turn out stiff, judging from the way the limbs are fading off.

>>1663523
A simple, good start. Work more on the subtle curves and gesture. I know it is supposed to be subtle, but I'm not convinced that there are muscles beneath the figure. I'm not sure if this intends to be poses for a character sheet or just a study.

>>1663495
The proportions and gesture seems off. The colors are cancerous as well- from a distance it looks like a cheesy, discoloured boutique of flowers. It feels like there is no concept of lighting in this world you drew.

>>1663459
"Soft shading" doesn't necessarily mean using soft brushes all the way. You could use hard brushes and then erase the stroke/shape with a soft brush for that ultimate soft-yet-solid impression. You could also try masking the figure, then using a bigger soft brush to render the shadows and stuff.

>>1663279
The first and foremost thing you should consider when painting environments is the simple perspective. Think about how one element relates/connects to another through the perspective. That's a nice bush, but no good environment starts with a well-rendered object over a white background. Paint the overall composition first!

I'm too tired for any further critique. ;)

[Anonymous No.1664169]

>>1664165
Hey, do the last thread too!

[Anonymous No.1664181]

>>1664165
>"Soft shading" doesn't necessarily mean using soft brushes all the way.
>You could use hard brushes and then erase the stroke/shape with a soft brush for that ultimate soft-yet-solid impression.
I actually tried to blend 'Kyle style' because I used to simply render everything with square brush, but my colors end up moody. Thanks for the critique anyways.

[Anonymous No.1664230]

>>1661989
yes i hid the arms and hands fuck you

[Anonymous No.1664233]

>>1663279
Am I seriously the only person who thinks that the man in the bottom left corner has a face that is just way too giant in comparison to the rest of his body?

I pointed it out in /co/ too.

[Anonymous No.1664240]

>>1664230
The only person you're fucking is yourself.

[Anonymous No.1664248]

>>1664230
9/10 nice work

[Anonymous No.1664252]

>>1664230
> balloon boobs
> tiny waist
> chickenscratch
> missing neck

Work on it a bit more.

[Anonymous No.1664254]

>>1664252
> missing neck
I think the artist wanted her leaning forward. The neck and shoulders follows that fine but the rest of the body doesn't.

[Anonymous No.1664276]

>>1663459
>>1664086
Jewbrow-Koreaboo anon here.
Anyways, I remember being told not to draw on top of stuff because that makes the figures stiff, I'm wondering, should I simply color atop of this sketch. I'm going to do it anyways, but I want to read your thoughts on colored pencil sketches.
>inb4
Original Image is at larger resolution.

[Anonymous No.1664295]

>>1664121
The critique... it's.... it's beautiful... Thank you so much! I love the zooming advice, I will use it on my paintings from now on. Small value studies is something I have never tried, I will take those up also.

I fear it is still too dark even after further work, so I'll keep at it!

[Anonymous No.1664300]

>>1664121
The critique... it's.... it's beautiful... Thank you so much! I love the zooming advice, I will use it on my paintings from now on. Small value studies is something I have never tried, I will take those up also.

I fear it is still too dark even after further work, so I'll keep at it!

[Anonymous No.1664304]

doing master studies of my favorite artist.
do you like them?

lower left is original, though.

sorry for the shitty phone camera.

[Anonymous No.1664307]

Could I get some critiques on the sketch before I lineart? It looks kind of wrong to me, but I can't pinpoint where.

[Anonymous No.1664317]

>>1664307
jesus christ how many chickens did that take

[Anonymous No.1664321]

>>1663134
is that R1??

[Anonymous No.1664322]

>>1664317
TOP

[Anonymous No.1664327]

>>1664300
It's still too dark. A good habit is to set your image to greyscale (or overlay a black and white filter) to check your values.

[Miki !!vn9zepIZfVQ No.1664338]

>>1664276
I think it'll work out fine. I would approach it by painting in a layer under the lines, which is set to multiply. When you have the desired values/impression, proceed to paint on top. You could also retrace the lines in digital for neater lines.

[Anonymous No.1664339]

>>1664338
are you gonna be the new teal guy?

[Anonymous No.1664346]

>>1664338
Can you tell me your process to convert black and white values to colour?

[Miki !!vn9zepIZfVQ No.1664349]

>>1664346
Pretty much an overlay layer, then refined with another normal layer of color. That's not the only approach though.

[Anonymous No.1664351]

>>1664338
Cool. I'm also using clipping mask and such, like another anon recommended. Nice texture on the leotard by the way.

[Anonymous No.1664353]

>>1664300
One leg is longer than the other. Why?

[Anonymous No.1664359]

>>1664339
Looks like you'll have to stop slacking off unless you wanna look shitty in front of the new teal guy.

[Anonymous No.1664367]

>>1664353
Because I can't see it. Redline or point out which leg is which and I'll fix it.

[Anonymous No.1664373]

>>1664353
Because I can't see it. Redline or point out which leg is which and I'll fix it.

>>1664327
I do try this in PS, but I don't know how to go about it in sai. I was told just setting saturation low is a bad method of checking values. Is there any other way than loading my picture into PS?

[Anonymous No.1664375]

>>1664339
Are you the new attention starved pedo faggot who craves validation from 13 year old weebs?

Fifyf

[Miki !!vn9zepIZfVQ No.1664381]

>>1664300
I think you need more greys or at least a better placement of greys. Don't dwell too long trying to fix a painting though. Move on if it starts to frustrate you; the next piece will definitely be better.

[Anonymous No.1664389]

>>1664381
That thumbnail is sick! I agree, there will always be more drawings!

>>1664353
Don't mind, I see it now. thanks a lot.

[Anonymous No.1664409]

>>1664151
Ty. OP for the last image you written on this page. I'll post the more solid sketchwork in a bit.

[Anonymous No.1664427]

>>1664351
I think I did improve in terms of rendering. The hair is gray right now but I'll make her a red head.

[Anonymous No.1664480]

>>1664338
Oh, so you WERE Miki, bitch-tan. I had a feeling you were.

[Anonymous No.1664486]

>>1664427
I'm actually liking where this is going! If you are wondering, yeah, is 2 am where I am... And I'm not even sleepy.

[Anonymous No.1664530]

>>1664486
clean up linework.

[Anonymous No.1664532]

>>1664254
You really need to find reference for that then and start off because you fucked that up Mr.Artist-san. The entire picture is not fine if that is the case.

[Anonymous No.1664535]

>>1664486
Boobies seemed shoved to one side of the chest. One eye looks like its starting to slide down. Is she suppose to have a cleft lip? Line work looks a little dirty. Nice coloring though.

[Anonymous No.1664536]

>>1664532
Are you implying that I'm the person who drew that picture? You'd be wrong.

[Anonymous No.1664541]

>>1664381
Wow Miki, you're the hero the stylization threads have needed

[Anonymous No.1664543]

>>1664541
Miki is a ban evading shitposter.

[Anonymous No.1664544]

>>1664536
Are you implying you have shit taste and a poor eye in picking other peoples work to play with?

[Anonymous No.1664548]

>>1664544
you're retarded.

[Anonymous No.1664549]

>>1664544
What does taste have to do with anything? Are you just pissed off for nothing? Fucking jackass.

All I fucking wanted to do was point out to the artist that either his gesture or perspective was inconsistent but here you are being a flaming faggot retard for no reason other than to derail the thread into another shitpost tornado. Kill yourself.

[Anonymous No.1664550]

>>1664548
>>1664549
>Weebs in chorus

[Anonymous No.1664551]

>>1664550
aren't you going to accuse them of samefagging again

[Anonymous No.1664552]

>>1664551
Chorus implies more than one. Are you going to post something dumb again?

[Anonymous No.1664553]

>>1664552
this implication thing really does go over your head.

[Anonymous No.1664554]

Why is there always just one or two or no good drawfags at all in these threads? Are these threads for the lowest common denominator? Shitty anime doodling kids and that one washed up semi-decent but still anime "artist" with no future or career in art seem to be all you find here.

>jus muh hobbuh

[Anonymous No.1664555]

>>1664554
Yes.

[Anonymous No.1664556]

>>1664543
Knowing that Miki and Sleepy/bitch-tan are one and the same makes a lot of things clearer. No wonder he was banned.

[Anonymous No.1664566]

>>1664486
>>1664530
>>1664535
Next time I'll ink it (traditionally) and maybe clean up a bit after coloring. This type of coloring is great for softer/cuter illustrations.

[Anonymous No.1664569]

>>1664554
仕方がない

[Anonymous No.1664573]

>>1664276
Mmm I see. I thought there was another anon from Korea besides me so I was excited. Thanks anyway.

[Anonymous No.1664585]

>>1664554
Because /ic/ is a very small board and not everyone can manage one drawing per thread and we can't
really post studies here because they got to the drawthread.

[Anonymous No.1664599]

panel from a comic im working on... comments and crits welcome :)

[Anonymous No.1664603]

>>1664599
I don't understand what view it is.

Looks like reflection in something but his thumbs are wrong??

Confusing

[Anonymous No.1664610]

>>1664603
ive been looking back at my image after reading your post a couple times, and im honestly not sure what youre confused about. the guy and his hands are not a reflection on anything, and his thumbs are not even relevant in this image... his hands are anatomically correct (regardless of minor form errors that you may point out if you see something else).

[Anonymous No.1664614]

>>1664610
Is he wearing a hoodie with a glass screen infront then? show his shoulders then

[Anonymous No.1664616]

>>1664614
hes wearing a hazmat suit... and yeah, come to think of it, his shoulders should be visible... i left em out, cuz the panel is gonna be more vertical and cut off at the edges of his hands... ill put something in tho

[Anonymous No.1664618]

>>1664553
oblivious much?

[Anonymous No.1664619]

>>1664616
that other guy is just autistic.
personally i realized what it was right away. but still, it just meant that your drawing isn's clear enough.
you should work out that reflection on the screen. use some references.

[Anonymous No.1664620]

>>1664616
it's not clear enough. people don't know what a hazmat suit looks like from that angle, if you're establishing the whole suit in another panel in a comic or something it's fine but as it is it's confusing. case in point: >>1664614 >>1664603

[Anonymous No.1664636]

>>1664619
kk
>>1664620
there are very many panels that show his whole form, so in context, i dont think that will be too much of a problem

[Anonymous No.1664664]

>>1664636
So you decide to show a single panel that relies on the entire page to understand and expect people to give a valid critique? I hope you're not going through the comic the same way you're asking for a critique.

[Anonymous No.1664668]

heres the front/back cover for my comic... still a few things to work on in it, but for the most part im finished with it.

[Anonymous No.1664671]

>>1664664
meh, i dont think its that big a deal... so chill out. theres plenty in that single illustration to give a valid crit.

[Anonymous No.1664676]

>>1664671
"Meh," if you didn't think it was such a big deal why make excuse for the discrepancies?

[Anonymous No.1664678]

>>1664671
>there is plenty
Except for the context of course.

[Anonymous No.1664679]

>>1664676
Why does this thread always get so worked up over nothing? Either critique and leave it at that or don't say anything rather than passive-aggressively attacking someone. This is why most of the threads have more shitposting/arguments than actual art and crit.

To be fair he DID correct that there was proper context for the hazmat suit. Yes, it caused some problems initially, but it's sorted out now, right? I think he was just specifically asking for technical critique on that particular panel.

[Anonymous No.1664684]

>>1664543
>>1664556
I can't believe /jp/ chased her out. They are literally jealous autists and so are the mods and janny.

[Anonymous No.1664685]

>>1664684
Last night I heard from /a/ that she got permabanned because people started shitposting and derailing the threads when she posted. Did she even do anything against the rules?

[Anonymous No.1664687]

>>1664685
What does /a/ have to do with this? Link to thread pls.

[Anonymous No.1664691]

>>1664684
>>1664685

Well it's a better case than what happened to magister

[Anonymous No.1664696]

>>1664679
>I think he was just specifically asking for technical critique on that particular panel.
this. thanks anon

[Anonymous No.1664697]

So all the derails on shitposting in these threads are because of /jp/?

[Anonymous No.1664698]

>>1664687
Nothing, really. It was just mentioned in the drawfag thread.

https://archive.foolz.us/a/thread/102421901/#102465684

[Anonymous No.1664699]

>>1664684
now even the tripfags from jaypee are invading us. well, let's see how this goes.

>>1664687
i imagine it's the same shit as teal. some people get way too full of themselves.

[Anonymous No.1664706]

[Anonymous No.1664709]

>>1664706
I think his nose is a bit high up. Try loomis

[Anonymous No.1664722]

Yeah, I've reached my limit painting this. Thanks again for all the help I got in this thread.

[Anonymous No.1664730]

>>1664722
looks goofy

[Anonymous No.1664736]

>>1664706
10/10 Great form, great composition, great lineweight.

Do you do commissions?

[Anon No.1664779]

>>1664706
Tfw this is better than most sonic fan pics

[Anonymous No.1664780]

>>1664778
>dat mouth

WHY.

[Anonymous No.1664783]

>>1664722
sum suggestions*

[Anonymous No.1664790]

>>1664684
More like Miki was the one doing the shitposting.

[Anonymous No.1664792]

>>1664783
HAHA that's awesome. I'm feeling the lighting improvement too. Will take note, thanks.

[Anonymous No.1664794]

>>1664790
I miss Troll-Chan.

[Anonymous No.1664799]

>>1662454
the legs you drew kinda like like the front legs of a horse

[Anonymous No.1664801]

Great now we have a girl shitposter from /jp/. This surely will be fantastic for these threads.

[Anonymous No.1664802]

>>1664799
forgot pic

[Anonymous No.1664810]

>>1664801
>muh secret cool kidz clubhouse!
>n-no girls allowed!

[Anonymous No.1664814]

>>1664810
Girls are fine, it's just the hoard of shitposting that comes with it (see above) since they're female they get more attention. We don't need other board drama here.

[Anonymous No.1664816]

>>1664814
Miki isn't even female, just a shitposter. You're the only one spreading around that female rumor to make him seem like one.

[Anonymous No.1664819]

>>1664814
Where do you think you are? /ic/ has had so much drama for as long as I can remember and come to think of it there was one thread where an Anon was putting a graph chart together to show the age and gender of /ic/ and it was mostly 20 something year olds and mostly female.

Not that it matters since we're all Anonymous but come on now, I mean really.

[Anonymous No.1664821]

>>1664819
>and it was mostly 20 something year olds and mostly female.
what.
no fucking wonder. everything makes sense now

[Anonymous No.1664823]

>>1664816
>her >she

>>1664819
No problems with he/she being whatever gender, it's more the other board drama. I can tell some people in this very thread are female just based on their artwork anyways.

[Anonymous No.1664826]

>>1664821
>and it was mostly 20 something year olds and mostly female.
>what.
>no fucking wonder. everything makes sense now

>tfw you might have had your soul crushed and art stomped on by a grill.

[Anonymous No.1664833]

>>1664790
She wasn't. All she did was post her art.

[Anonymous No.1664838]

>>1664684
Well, guess what? I was on irc with her last night, and she said she got a permaban for ban evasion twice. A mod recognized her stuff in this thread and she got the ban hammer. She doesn't intend to appeal for the ban, so we'll never see her again that's for sure. ;_;

[Anonymous No.1664847]

>>1664838
Nobody cares.

[Anonymous No.1664851]

>>1661989
>>1664849
NEW THREAD
>>1664849

[Anonymous No.1664881]

>>1664838
eh, she didn't even do anything yet.

[Anonymous No.1665112]

>>1664794
I've never left, and I don't even know you.

[Anonymous No.1665550]

I am having a lot of trouble trying to copy a character.
My basic goal is to be able to draw the character in a bunch of scene's and poses. So I figure I will need to draw the base pose and figure out how to get every detail exact on her. I keep making it feel disproportioned and too thin of legs/arms, too tall, face seems emotionless, and hair is flat. I can't seem to capture the character in my drawing. Can anyone give me advice?

[Anonymous No.1665551]

>>1665550
I feel like even if I can manage to get the lines in the right place, with the right angle, I can't get the curves exactly right, or the besier curve or whatever. And my line weights are shit. But basically everything just end up a bit off making it seem like shit.

[Anonymous No.1667159]

>>1665551
Proportions are wrong.

The only way you're going to get it correct is if you keep looking at your reference. It seems like you only glance at the ref for a second, and spend the rest 90% of the time trying to make a pretty curve.

Look at the lines, see where it is diagonally, laterally and horizontally in relation to other lines.