[ 3 / biz / cgl / ck / diy / fa / ic / jp / lit / sci / vr / vt ] [ index / top / reports ] [ become a patron ] [ status ]

2023-11: Warosu is now out of extended maintenance.

/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

File: 2.22 MB, 2000x3008, womanportrait.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

1605586

Critique me Anonymous Sun Dec 8 19:10:19 2013 No.1605586 [Reply] [Original]

Did this portrait. How can i improve?

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 8 19:26:51 2013 No.1605603 Work on proportion, the 'triangle' of the face IE the nose, eyes and lips region. Notice the size of the nose is too small, creating a large distance between the lip and the septum of the nose.

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 8 20:11:37 2013 No.1605629 File: 2.21 MB, 2000x3008, womanportraitfix.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>1605603 Thanks for the advice! I will definitely work on my proportions, it's something i struggle with.

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 8 20:13:37 2013 No.1605630 >>1605629 It never ceases to amaze me how subtle fixes like this make the image 10000x better

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 8 20:19:37 2013 No.1605634 File: 2.20 MB, 2000x3008, womanportraitinpain.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>1605630 Now that i look at the original again, she looks like she has gotten her jaw dislocated.

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 8 20:20:08 2013 No.1605636 >>1605635 What?

>>	shy Sun Dec 8 20:20:37 2013 No.1605635 Frances McDormand?

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 8 20:23:37 2013 No.1605637 >>1605635 Oh...nope, just some random model

>>	Anonymous Sun Dec 8 21:32:43 2013 No.1605662 >>1605629 Yes, that's lovely, yes. Good good.