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Hi /ic/.

I was working on this rather clichey piece of little red with ink on paper, but decided to scan it and get it "done" in PS before I print it and finishing by stripling on paper.

What I was wondering was if you'd be so kind as to share some thoughts on the general composition, the posing and the gun.. I have very little experience with guns, so I might be coming back for more help in that regard.

I already see that her shoulder would have to be very wide for her to be holding the gun like that, will fix after dinner!

>> No.1582465

>>1582463
I'm also going to add her left arm supporting the gun.

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>>1582463
please add eyebrows, she looks like a cancer patient without them (no offense).

>> No.1582563

>>1582478
Maybe, I kind of like the look, I'm going for eerie.. Then again, maybe I should be able to get that through even with eyebrows...

As for cropping, any thoughts?