Lilo

[illastrat No.1531364]

new style.

[Anonymous No.1531368]

new style
>boobs are wrong
>face looks decent
>SPAGETTI ARMS

[c.dot aka illastrat No.1531372]

>>1531368
Thanks

[Anonymous No.1531397]

you're not improving illstrat.

you need to make art that challenges your abilities.

[Anonymous No.1531421]

Same old same old man. Try doing something that isn't a girl dead center on the canvas just looking at the viewer. There's just nothing going on here but "experimentation", and while that might be meaningful to you, this is just plain boring.

Seriously, I yawned at this. Boring composition, boring subject, boring paint application. Usually you can get away with one or two of those if you're REALLY strong in another area, but this is just mediocre. Push yourself, try to do something, anything.

[Anonymous No.1531507]

You've done worse. I'm sure you're learning something, as you're young and you practice a lot.

Eyes are a bit googly. That's one of those things that's so fundamentlly important that you could do everything else perfectly and you'd still be fucked if you painted googly eyes.

The body is too goofy to go with the face. You can get away with rendering the body and/or clothes really loosely, but the proportions should still match what you' e got going on with the head/face.