/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

whats lower than a permapresubbegwhitevoidsketchcel but higher than a nodrawcrab?

>>7328046
I liked the drawing of jacki chung

I redrew that one guy's pink-haired catgirl oc. I used that one pose generator site and some obscure doujinshi as reference. What do you think?

This is what I used as reference as well as a pose.

daily timed figures

>Copying art to practice
>Replicating each individual part going great
>Take a look at the final product
>Parts are asymmetrical or out of proportion
How can I get better at copying...? I have no problems drawing ONE eye or whatever, it's drawing the other in relation to it that's the problem.

Inked some poses/gestures.

>>7328059
Cool
>>7328061
The pelvis/legs look odd, the face is cute
>>7328063
Nice. Did you do different time intervals

>>7328072
Try a big to small approach, like enclosing the whole drawing in a geometric shape and then building from there

Finally finished this, might even look better if i cut off the right side... Started off way too dark in the foreground

>>7328084
retarded

>>7328072
Ill often use the negative space to gauge distance from things as well. This honestly just takes a lot of practice and learning to notice subtle angles and positions of things and their relationship to others. You do get better at it. You can also put the original over yours and see where you went wrong. Ill make little dots for positions of things and try to correct mine for practice.

>>7328075
>The pelvis/legs look odd, the face is cute

It's those form intersections in the lower body that get me. I find them hard to visualize because I really haven't studied them. A face is a bit easier to draw.

>>7328085
Captured the center piece very well, clouds are bit different though, still nice overall.


I still need to dedicate a sunday or two to learning skin shading.

It's supposed to be hard
If it wasn't hard, everyone would do it
The hard is what makes it great
Now get drawing. We're all gonna make it.

>>7328085
very nice, i think you can start playing with some hue variation to make the illustration more dynamic. for example, add some green to the cool blue, some fucsia to the skybox, make the darkest values a little warmer by adding some red, just an idea. color temperature and hue variation can add some life to a landscape.

>>7328124
I expected it to be hard. I didn't expect it to be this fucking boring.

>>7328124
But it's REALLY fucking hard, man. I get so goddamn wound up trying to do even the baby bitch turbo-/beg/ fun-with-a-pencil type shit that I become incapable of taking a step back and refocusing with a different approach. It takes hours to calm down, and when I do, it flares right back up again if I try again that day. I'm just out here trying not to break shit, man. Nothing makes me as mad as this, nothing. This can't be the normal experience, right?

>>7328063


>>7328075
>Did you do different time intervals
Always.

Can someone please help me figure out how many heads tall is she? Is she 5.5 heads tall or 6?

>>7328179
room temp iq moment

>7328181
No (you) for you anon.
It really is a wonder why lots of /beg/s make threads outside of this general. If you're not gonna contribute anything why post at all?

wip

>>7328159
another one

>>7328179
post book pls

>>7328184
looks great, anon!

>>7328187
Whats that leg doing? Shouldnt it be shorter or foreshortned?
This is giving uncanny valley

>>7328179
wtf, can't you measure it

sketches 1/3

>>7328189
Just got it from an /a/ thread.

>>7328193
I did. I got around 5.5 to 6, I just want to know what other anons estimate is.

>>7328197
sketches 2/3

>>7328200
sketches 3/3

>>7328191
doesnt matter, im just sketching

>>7328197
>>7328200
>>7328201
i admire and respect your continued drawing of fat asses, anon

>>7328199
just go with whatever is easier.

>>7328040
Yay!
Finally done. I had to postpose this because of a commission.

Gonna upload now

>>7328206
it is my holy mission

I drew a bunny for a comic I want to make. Backgrounds are hard. I wanted it to be a worms eye view, but i fucked up. The bunny also doesn't look like a Disney character that much like i was attempting.

bro, cleaning the sketch is so much better and satisfying than creating new layer for lineart, like i can fix anything within moment, and every line is under my control, full power

I spent more time on this that I should have painting it was fun

>>7328257
That's exactly the way I feel about that and I see many artists doing the same on yewtube

I like most of Eleeza stuff just donno whats with the "IM SO QUIRKY" random squiggles everywhere, looks like leprosy.

>>7328040

I drew this lil scene from a book. Ill post the color next

>>7328335

A gif I made

>>7328330
>Eleeza
they don't look that random,
https://www.instagram.com/eleeza/reel/DAqxR64v8Xy/
probably guides of where to do gradients, pockets of shadow etc. or ask her directly.

>>7328344
https://www.instagram.com/p/C_8eHsOPtpd/

Many of them are done after the fact, so not guides. It ruins the whole thing for me a lot of the time.

wip

>>7328340
I love the vibes, would play a game with this aesthetic.

Gotta grind pears
Gotta grind pears
Gotta grind pears

>>7328330
Looking at her art she can draw whatever squiggles she wants unironic muh style but it doesnt affect her art quality

>>7328190
thanks!

Athens? Holy Hades only philosophers and queers come from Athens, and you don't look very wise so I guess that kinda narrows it down

>>7328348
in that example many of those lines look anatomical or structural, probably a warm up or study.

>>7328351
based pearchad

>>7328349
I get what you were going with mouth but i think it's a bit too much of an angle.

>>7328340
Reminds me of Majula from Dark Souls II. Comfy art.

>>7328353
I do this

>>7328369
I take it you know all the names of those muscles from memory, bones and draw them every angle then?

>>7328382
what is that ear placement

lllines

>>7328385
No, but you can take this, today I learned about the masseter, the risorious and the depressors.

>>7328397
>No
So why are you posting this picture?

>>7328388
Yeah i forgot how to draw i guess. Back to basics tommorow.

>>7328085
Looking good!
>>7328159
Cool
>>7328184
Cute!
>>7328237
The large file size makes it hard to take the whole thing in on 4chan, but I like your line work, vectors?
>>7328340
Cool! I love the classic vibes. What program did you use?

This is a character I sketched up from a random word generator, I liked the design so I made a more polished version. [The words were: glasses, wiry, red, grey, and cat]

>>7328179
five and a half

>>7328404
>The large file size makes it hard to take the whole thing in
What have I done

>>7328404
I used Krita

>>7328338
Average aspiring artist fighting against crabs.

>>7328351
you are forgetting the blending, pull out qtip and blend the edges so it looks like round pears
>>7328350
soul. Btw be aware that horizon is always at the same height as the camera. The mountain in the distance is way way too high
>>7328340
it is missing princes, dragon and bicycles since it is obviously scene from Holland
>>7328335
how come your trad version is so precise while the digital one is so rough? did you draw it twice?

Hello beg, since i saw a few posts with many yous, i got an idea that i am getting spam filtered because i put my ramble at the start of post. Lets see if it helps if i ramble at the end instead! (It did not help, still hardcapped to 4 yous).

>>7328338
Kino

>>7328338
For some reason I imagined the chasmfiends as big centipedes. This is good though anon

Is it over?

>>7328470
>>7328470

I did the digital version when i got my first tablet. Just trying out some brushes. I think I used procreates oil paint brush for the colors? I did redo the lineart but didnt care much about precision - my bad. I appreciate your feedback tho i didnt notice i was bein lazy

I really like a 1px brush so far. At a hi resolution you can kind of do etching style rendering. Ive dreamed about having a drawing tablet for years so im stoked to try it all out. I work retail hope to make it one day but I am afraid of failure and pretty socially withdrawn

>>7328504
oops that is too low res sorry

>>7328021
Repostan
Still the same thoughts, was thinking top left's right arm (our left) looks a bit undefined, but not sure how to go about it without using too many lines

>>7328505
holy shit anon

>>7328350
Added colours

>>7328513

Hey anon u should try to make the mountain appear less like a perfect triangle.

The minds eye see’s more triangle at that perfection level than it does mountain.

Vary the silhouette and imply a little enviro erosion

>>7328040

>>7328518
Yeha I see what you mean, but for some reason I am drawn to the big triangle mountains, they feel relaxing to me.

>>7328511
With clothing, you can definitely get away with way fewer lines than you'd think. try finding anime you like and pausing, counting how many wrinkles they're using. Since they have to animate the wrinkles, animators will only draw the least amount they have to to make something look convincing. I think that can be a good place to start for study

>>7328522
In that case you should express as much from your style. Lean into it.

If there is a potential flaw in your work that is inseparable from your psyche - integrate it via stylistic attention.

>>7328511
Eyes seemed a little close together, and if she is pulling her hair back you should be seeing her hairline. Adjusted her chin so it doesn't go as far back, and edited her sweater a bit. As a general rule, there will be creases where there are bends, not where the fabric is being pulled flat. If you remember that you're like 50% there with clothing.

>>7328382
>Reminds me of Majula from Dark Souls II. Comfy art.
Yeah I thought the same...

>>7328505
Fuck me... looks obscenely good

>>7328545

Draws for today. Don't like the one on the left but oh well

>>7328505
Wonderful work, looks like some shit out of a manga

>try to draw any pose with significant overlapping
>immediately forget how to draw and botch it
how to i fix this

>>7328536
That looks a bit too far apart, no? Maybe it's the ear

>>7328559
Never looked at a manga in person but I have heard internet strangers say these pixel art etchings reminds them of the berserk series

But I think I must check out some anime and ink anime stuff. They do interesting effects with dot matrix looking shading and seem to value a little mid tone or grey gradients in their illustrations

I have been discovering that recently. I want to come to know this berserk epic and other aesthetic offerings to the world of ink printing that the manga people have made.

I mostly grew up with the ink works of Bernie Wrightson, frazetta, Moebius, Etc. Comic stuff you could achieve on the etching table but manga has incorporated extra-drawing technique

here is another if u all like

>>7328565
Simplify the overlaps into basic shapes

>>7328565
I did this on my phone but try to think of it this way

>>7328505
Oh, baby, that's the ticket.

>>7328040
Day #244 of asking if this anon could post his NG because i really liked this drawing.

>>7328040
Finish.
First time fucking around with full body shading, not entirely convinced by the end result bu it was a fun experiment.
I'm considering making a social network account for documenting my art journey, is xitter alright? I have been adverse to social networks for like one and a half decade so I don't really know which one is the supposed best.

Drawing hands is a bitch!!!!!

Idk if this is anatomically correct

>>7328505
now, THAT is fucking amazing.

>>7328640
Titty looks kind of suspended and compressed for no reason I think it should hang looser

>>7328640
I like your art anon, do you use an art program with a replay feature? I'd like to see your process.

I haven't made a full piece in atleast 3 months so I decided to just make some quick chibis of the protags of my favorite movie, Zero Day. It's very different from my usual style but I've always been fond of that early 2000s anime style and I wanted to try it out for myself. Missed you, /ic/.

How do I trace the clip studio models without it looking like shit? Yeah muh tracing whatever but I feel like with the right perspective it should work.

>>7328679
I mean the character models that you can pose.

>>7328640
Horns look misplaced.

>>7328552
Great coom potential, saved

>>7328382
youre right, adjusting the mouth is better. i definitely pushed it too far. Thank you.

Pls critique.

It's lazy I know but I needed to draw anything at all.

Idk why I don't like it. Maybe the lines. Colours and zero blending. Head/face. Dogshit background.

Any help is really appreciated!

>>7328557
So much sovl! How do you draw so well?

>>7328713
>>7328714
Anatomy is fucked, everything is lazily drawn (what is that ear? looks like a tumor)
There's almost no line variety
Weak value range
Perspective is off
Flat and tiny grass strands
Unappealing shape design

2/10, apply yourself before asking for critique again, you only get this one for free from me

>>7328505
holy hell this looks like its from Beserk

>>7328726
Lol. Gave me some more ideas and direction.
I spent a lot of time drawing that turd so I didn't want to work on the wrong things.

>>7328576
>>7328505
dude what the are you even doing here?
this is way too good to be in /begint/, let alone /ic/

which websites/sources do you use to screenshot sex poses
probably pornhub right? I guess it should be professionally made else the camera angles suck (i don't watch 3d porn)

I'm getting into digital art

>>7328740
This is such a weird fucking question
Don't you watch porn nigga? Don't you know what porn you watch and like? Why are you asking something like that from anonymous people online, your thought process is an enigma

>>7328763
no i literally said that i don't watch 3d porn but since you asked now i have to elaborate. i only watch man on man foot tickling porn (although i'm not gay) and that won't help me draw penis in vagina sex. i've never watched normal sex porn in my life and frankly find it disgusting. why i want to draw it is irrelevant.

Pretty stupid question
I'm a newbie learning how to draw and bought a drawing tablet.
how long it takes to stop looking at the tablet when trying to draw someting

>>7328768
like you're not drawing and just looking at it? I got mine a couple months ago and have barely drawn on it. Trying to commit now starting with:

Does he look dynamic enough?

Also he goes in the bg. I will draw chuuni Zelda in the foreground.

I'm getting to the point where I can sit down and draw something in 20 minutes that doesn't look absolutely terrible.

I feel like I could make something good if I spent the time (let's say a few hours) on a piece, but I'm finding it hard to commit. I'm stuck in a quantity not quality mindset of grinding mileage.

I even have dozens of painting ideas noted down, but in the end I always end up making "just another portrait" or drawing "just another nude figure".

How to get past this?

>>7328792
Draw different stuff
Just draw nigger how hard is it? Don't draw portraits or figures just draw

>>7328793
That's the point. When I sit down to "just draw" I have a default program I fall back on just from habit

>>7328720
She looks like Dana Scully (Gillian Anderson)

>>7328774
instead of looking at the screen, i shift my attention into the tablet and ruin everything lmao

>>7328792
1)Pomodoro technique. Human concentration lasts for about 25 mins. Then you become bored and distracted. Get an online timer and work in intervals
https://pomofocus.io/

2) Humans become bored or stressed when a task is too hard or too easy. The right task will let you enter a state of flow, which allows you to concentrate harder

Choose an image that lets you think "I could do that in a few hours" and try to recreate it.

3)Third, you don't have to really change the things you draw. If you want to churn portraits and hands, etc. Just do that. You are used to it, so it will be easier to keep doing it. But instead of doing just drawings of 20 mins, start doing of 1, 2 hours, then more. Good art takes time. Just take a day and work on a single piece. It will get easier.

>>7328792
Force of will, I'm afraid. Once you've grinded enough studies, then you're mentally used to practicing. It's the safe option, it's relatively easier. You can rely on your reference to have solved everything that the end result should contain. Look at it like a competition of sorts. This is your time to test yourself, how good you have gotten.

How bad did I fuck up proportions?

>>7328740
There's that, /hc/, and pornpics. The /sex/ general also has other resources too

>>7328040
what is a crab a nodraw and a howie? im new to here
>>7328139
sometimes i get so mad i slam onnthe desk and shit i get scared the neighbours are gonna get mad
but when i push past that and get in the flow or whatever and start to draw something i enjoy it feels so good
if youre not normal im not either
what type of stuff do u wanna draw

>>7328812
also the glasses are a cope cus i cant draw eyes yet

>>7328280
The vibrant color makes it pop more than the reference. Nice
>>7328557
I like how the calves are exaggerated, good flow
>>7328640
It's probably not, but look fine on a small screen

>>7328640
It is fucking awesome, that what it is.

I don't understand how Vilppu does forms...

>>7328837
It's all about the flow. It ain't rocked science.

Is there a single online drawing course that isn't overpriced as hell? I want to be able to send my art/homework and get critique from a teacher.

>>7328842
What courses can you give as an example, for being over priced?

Cats!

>>7328843
Everything over 100 dollars which is every single course I've come across. Yeah I'm a poorfag.

>>7328838
>It ain't rocked science.
It is to me.

>>7328845
Yarr m8 join some telegrams

>>7328845
If you want feedback from a teacher then I wouldn't expect less. Time costs a lot.

>>7328845
Go to a local art class?

>>7328845
Pick the cheapest one because you are not going to escape getting away from anatomy any way.
You of course have to like the person doing the teaching as well of course.

>>7328851
I've only gone out of my house like 5 times and when it was absolutely necessary. This won't force me to now,
>>7328849
Yeah I guess that's true. I just wonder what the cheapest option is currently.

How's this looking so far?

>>7328861
HOT

>>7328842
No one worthwhile will critique your work unless you fork over some serious cash. Sorry.

>>7328842
No. Anyone worth a damn will charge for teaching+critiques

>>7328883
No random Chinese girls in student debt doing courses for a few balls of rice? I'm not trying to become a master.

>>7328888
>I'm not trying to become a master.
And yet you feel you require their teaching and critique. Curious.

>>7328881
Fair enough. Back to drawing tilted boxes it is.

>>7328889
Been drawing for 5 years and still can't do a readable figure from memory. I've tried, clearly I'm not going to get anywhere by myself.

>>7328892
If you keep telling yourself that you can not do something, then, that is the way that you will be.

>>7328894
I don't know, it's starting to look pretty hopeless. If only someone could teach me how to change this mindset.

>>7328892
And what they'll tell you is to incorporate figures/gestures into your daily warmups because that's what you need

>>7328898
I know you're right and yet I'm not doing that. Being enrolled in a course though would make drawing feel like an obligation and push me to do those boring stuff. But I just don't feel like that's worth 500 dollars.

>>7328897
Just keep on going while taking stabs that you can't do well, that's what everybody else is doing but advertising that fact.

>>7328930
Still doing the ugly faces I see

>>7328918
But NOT advertising I meant

>>7328340
Soul

>>7328934
i really try hard to get something appealing

>>7328948
Its not tho
It's been so long bro

>>7328948
>>7328930
the appeal blackpill is brutal
no matter how much one grinds...if one has no soul then its basically over before it even began

>>7328948
The nose looks like it's been operated on, doesn't help appeal.
I'd also redesign the eyes and put them higher on the face.
Your figures are pretty appealing, you can get there

I know the shadows are wrong in the body part, but I do not know the extent
>>7328335
>>7328338
Really nice stuff anon, I think in this one the figure of the man somehow feels more detailed in the Black and white than when colored
>>7328505
>>7328576
Incredible pieces

>>7328965
Is the sun behind him? Hows the shadow to the right? Its impossible anon

>>7328972
NTA. Think of any medieval painting of saints. They have halos around their heads. Anon drew Saint George the Dragonslayer. The halo denotes he's Based and Redpilled.

>>7328948
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Iose66nV8zM

>>7328844
independent thought alarm! this guy is drawing non-humanoid characters.

>>7328955
for real, genetic shit is 100% right. if you wasn't born with right genes you can't draw

>>7328980
i've watched EVERY video and course on portraits and i've read all books i could find

>>7328991
what artists do you like? what anime do you like? games, cartoons? copy their faces

>>7328988
if you master human bone structure you can apply to other animals as well.

>>7328993
The weird pseudo-anime symbol face is the hallmark of a pre-beg who has neither studied anime faces nor real faces in depth.

>>7328993
i really like this dude, he has great curved figures and nice simple faces

>>7329003
so you don't actually like any?? even that guy blatantly likes konosuba, chainsaw man, cyberpunk edgerunners, whatever. learn from those

>>7329006
>learn from those
i don't think studying chainsaw man is a good idea...

>>7329010
if you want to be flippant and ignore the point of my post then stay beg with fucked faces forever

>>7328991
Don't waste your time on this guy as he just wants to moan and harp on about "drawing genetics"
That was the give away

>>7329011
no need to get so defensive after giving shit advice

>>7329017

>>7329017
>after giving shit advice
What? He literally gave you good advice. People have been calling your faces ugly for weeks and you decided to do nothing.
Why the fuck do you even post here if it's not to get any advice? Post on reddit if you want people to only praise you, you fucking nigger

>>7328470
>since i saw a few posts with many yous, i got an idea that i am getting spam filtered
yeah that’s it.

>>7329010
whats wrong with chainsaw man?

>>7329021
>after giving good advice
You've been found out to be a gaslighter

>>7329033
Hello schizoanon, glad to see your back, every time you post I realize you did not kill yourself because of the voices yet

Is this a good way to dissect/understand this image?
it kinda messed with me due to not understanding how far the circle I start with the head with should be as the veil and hair seem to extend the "head"

Not my character

>>7329006
desu i consider to go through some book like pawell does and just copy everything i can, then do million copies and maybe i'll get appeal some day

i'm not that aggresive, posts above are not mine

>>7329036
It sucks dick, you're trying to understand the head so don't measure anything about the hair. The hair is just a helmet you add later don't care about it when trying to understand faces

I realized after I finished that the left arm going behind doesn't make sense with the hair and that the elbow on the right arm is still messed up

>>7329036
No. Also stop using colors and use thinner lines.

is it safe to assume that the further the object gets it's size will shrink linearly?

>>7328579
>>7328596
Unironically good advice
Thanks

>>7329034
You got that every time you post thing from me and I'm here to tell you that every time YOU post, you go to prove me right about being a gaslighter

>>7329060
anon is this some feud you have with another anon? This is the first time you call me specifically a gaslighter. I think I missed the lore update last thread

>>7329045
That's why I used red lines to outline the head. Should I first sketch the form of the head and then add the rest of the parts?
>>7329051
I thought colors were good to distinguish each parts, what would you recommend?
For reference the original image of this is>>7329036 pic related

>>7329066
idk I'd do something like this myself

He just uses a stock anime head + a lot of noodling around with hard round brush for the details.

What's most important is getting the form of the head exactly right; everything else depends on getting the head right.

The tighter / more accurate a copy is, the more information / features / forms you can retain (from any given artist of your choosing) and eventually use in your own work without reference.

>>7329068
Sir, did you just name that file..."loomels"?

>>7329075
A-anon I, when I say loomis in my head it turns into loomels and I sometimes forget which one is the real one

>>7329078
kek cute

>>7329040
Nice drawing but where's her tummy?

>>7329068
Thanks anon, guess I need to more flexible with drawing circles at first.
You've really helped me, thanks!

>>7329078
Ahhhhhhhhhhh, I sea.
Was just wonder ring.

>>7328809
>How bad did I fuck up proportions?
I fucked them up pretty badly but I fixed them. Hopefully.
Any tips before I start inking it or does it look alright?

>>7328350
this look very nice

>>7328801
Just focus on the screen. Remember you can hover the pen nearly over the tablet to move the cursor without drawing.

>Art got ignored again

>>7329112
Being ignored is a critique. Youre not good enough to be worth adknowledging yet, or people can tell youre posting very low effort stuff. Keep grinding your fundamentals, do the shit in the sticky.

Or you can give people something to work with - tell us what you like about your drawing and what you are struggling with, ask questions, ask how you can improve it, thats more likely to get a response.

>2 weeks in and i still cannot draw circles

I knew i was too retarded to draw

>>7329134
Isn't there a tool for that? Why are you wasting time on this?

>>7329112
95% of the time I post here my art is ignored

I don't feel like working on this anymore so I'll just call this done.
I don't like how I did the face, ignoring the anatomical side, feels very same facey for what I usually draw.

>>7329127
it's off.

>>7329136
Every tutorial i watch has the guy drawing the circle himself in 10s

>>7329140
I like your art anon, although I admit I have a soft spot for creepycute artwork. Do you have socials?

>>7329068
Just as you noticed the eye is larger, anime also places ears low for a cute look. Perhaps it's also because hair is important for characters while ears are not.

>>7329143
Nice circles, now you can draw dems anime titties.

>>7329144
I don't have any socials unfortunately, I don't usually make creepycute artwork, I just had some references I wanted to use. I'm trying to use them more liberally and more often to improve my visual library.
Glad you like it though

>>7329078
I write bridgeman instead of bridgman

>>7329134
Buddy I'm 2 months in and I still can't draw a circle

>>7329178
I'm 2 years in and I settle for "round enough"

>>7329134
Instead of drawing 1 line, draw 4 arcs.

DRAW YOU STUPID FUCKING WORTHLESS FAGGOTS!

>>7329193
I'm doing my daily loomer sesh.

>>7329088
you should rotate the screen when drawing heads at odd angles

>>7329154
If i use those as base all I'd get is tumor titties

Think I've finally adjusted to digital, tweaked everything to my liking

>>7329193
Based post.

>>7329193
how do i procrastination proof my setup? do i draw traditional only and use magazines as reference so i don't have to turn my computer on?

>>7329197
What's wrong with the heads?

>>7329217
Just constanstly remind yourself that if you're not getting better, you are wasting your life.

Big question. I've been using Vilppu for quite a while now and I was wondering "how" I'm supposed to actually watch these lectures. As it stands now, I watch them in increments and follow along with whatever he's drawing, trying to replicate his techniques and whatnot. Should I instead put the pencil away and just absorb everything he's saying and doing? I think the main reason I've been so frustrated with drawing lately is because I've been too focused on "getting it right" and not actually understanding the process. How do you guys usually go about watching lectures or reading books?

Is it over?

Here is a sample of my OC's design and coloring.
I would like a rating on the design and coloring.
Here´s the Dead End Kids.

In image order:
-Pete Bators
-Gene Chrome
-Derby Harry
-Robd Hudson & Jason Nolan

I did all the drawings by hand and colored them in photoshop, so there may be mistakes.
Anyway, I'm trying to improve.

>>7329234
You actually do a good job in terms of anatomy, but your presentation is a bit sloppy. Try cleaning up your lines, working on values and simple forms, and continuing to draw figures. Like I said the anatomy here is solid but the fundamental knowledge is lacking

>>7329216
hard angle and i got lazy (still had fun)

I tried using the symmetry tool for a front face and it definitively help a ton like goddamn

>>7329266
Nice one.

>>7329305
Riiight

>>7329310
W-what

>>7329307
Could you give me some feedback?
Mine are the OCs above.

>>7329242
>>7329316
Don't suppose you have a tinge of the 'tism right?

>>7329320
"tism" like "autism?"
No, I think...

>>7329234
reminds me of the Beast Titan

>>7329234
>>7329266
Looks pretty decent, just need to polish and finish them up.

>>7329316
That's not me by the way it's someone else replying to you.

Not a lot of time to practice but got paid by a buddy who wants to png tube.

>>7327498
>>7327680
>>7327735
>>7327765
Anons you are witnessed, thanks for the feedback

>>7329338
That's so goofy, I love it

>>7329259
I see. It may stem from me always trying to go for anatomy from when I first picked up the pencil. I definitely need better edge control with values.
>>7329325
Kek

Is Krita 1:1 with adobe? Does anyone use adobe/tablet through wine?

I drew this for Inktober Sun
I felt good about this one since I didn't heavily rely on reference this time and used shapes for body construction

>>7329377
Good.

>>7328812
>what is a crab a nodraw and a howie? im new to here
normally i'd tell you to lurk for 2 more years before posting buuuuuuuuuuut
>crab
troll in simple terms, often offers actively harmful advice to /beg/s and refuses to post his own work, term comes from "crab bucket mentality"
>nodraw
faggot that doesnt draw yet thinks their opinions are worth anything
>howie
faggot that doesn't draw and instead just "asks for advice" repeatedly without ever attempting to implement whatever was mentioned, instead just asking "How" repeatedly to a point where you have to explain to him how to grasp his pen like he's 5. Acts like an emotional vampire, makes same threads and gets the same replies, down to people telling others to not interact with him and showing screenshots of his 9999 threads

Haven't drawn in a while, please crit

>>7329054
yeah approximately, it's also called linear perspective for that reason

>>7329193
yes sir!!

>>7329193
here's your drawing cocksucker

>>7329418
Threw some color on it

>>7328513
>>7328350
Nice anon. Love the vibes.


>>7328604
That is a nice drawing. Love the colours and tone.

>>7328640
Will like on Twitter later.

>>7328187
>>7328159
These look like they were done by two different people.

>>7329209
i'm envisioning this as an enemy in a racist earthbound romhack

Tired, gonna take a break. Feeling pretty creatively bankrupt. At least drawing girls is always fun.

>>7328775

Alright sketch done. Will spend the next days rendering until I'm satisfied.

If anyone has any criticism it's more than welcome!

>>7329465
めっちゃ素晴らしい絵と思う。キャラの滑稽姿勢を大好き!

>>7329468
Thank you mr cat

Studying expressions.

id probably be a much better artist by now if my retarded brain could focus for more than 15 minutes at a time

how does this look?

>>7329220
rotate, not flip

Foot-faggotry

>>7329494
can you give ref photo? It looks like her front foot is way too tall because you can see so much of the top and bottom

>>7329509
>>7329494
This is what I mean btw. I erased the top of the left and the bottom on the right and they both look for like a a normal foot

Linework pretty much done.
I don't feel ready to do lineweight so this will do for now. Will try to color and shade it tomorrow. It was done with reference, just some cute little artwork I found laying around on while browsing /v/.
This way of doing hands was a lot easier to me, I think I'm liking this style. Also doing front facing drawings feels like cheating! I only had to do half the work most of the time.

I will keep you posted!

>>7329512
A little bit of the process.
I like doing some changes from the pic I'm referencing because a plain copy would be too boring. In this case I decided to make her boobs not gigantic, I prefer them on the still realistic side to be quite honest. Also her eyes are a little open because I like drawing eyes.
Tell me what you think.

>>7329088
I like the pose and the dude on the right's facial expression.
>>7329140
Very nice. Reminds me a bit of "slay the princess".

>>7329494
My crit for you anon is to focus on learning how to simplify real shapes into the anime style you want. If you focus too much on getting every angle correct to life without focusing on the overall style it looks odd

>>7329499
Hmm indeed. Thanks

>>7329559
borgie

>>7328351
>t.

sketch

I wanna draw furry/feral girls like Dagasi, I still need to find a role model to draw human men like.

>>7329088
>>7329197
Finished it, tried to improve the face a little bit as well. done with this now

>>7329598
it looks very professional. good job.

My only nitpick is the thumb and the finger kinda bleed into eachother here, i would remove the the thumb or find a way to seperate them with value a tiny bit more.

This is the most nitpick of nitpick comment i will ever make.

>>7329612
Sir...
What is he holding in his hand?
Is that a remote control?

>>7329612
Agree. Was a pain to draw. Next time I encounter such a pose I will leave it out

>>7329616
Kek

>>7329617
honestly it is extremely nitpicky and i hesitated to even write it. I really love the artwork. Do you use any social media? If so, what is your username?

>>7329619
Not yet, still too /beg/
Once I get a bit better I'll make a twitter or something.
This was mostly a copy/study of a ref so don't give me too much credit

>>7329612
See whenever you are drawing the hand holding a remote control like that.
Would you draw the fingerinos FOYIST, or the hand?
It's just that the hand is such a difficult angle.

>>7328505
Great line work and composition. But faces need some work. The most right hobbit looks straight up like a slav alcoholic.

>>7326944
the finished product

>>7329661
next one

Trying to do intentionally bad proportions because this guy is a genetically modified freak from the Liefeld colony in my setting. Also nonsense gun.
Making bad proportions that don't read as mere mistakes is tricky

>>7329491
Cool

>>7329583
i know its just a sketch but being the ear the "centerpiece" I'd give it more detail as you gave the rest of the face

>>7329661
fuck that looks really good anon

>>7329688
well, its just a bargue plate copy

Donno what else to draw

Do you think i could get into the craft at age 20 and get good enough ti make money off of it, eventually?

I don't have any talent or predisposition but i have tons of time and am willing to work hard.
I just don't believe it'd be realistic to expect anything out of it

>>7328737
Honestly I dont have much of a following or anything and I am not involved in the art world… Never went to school. Work in customer service

I told my wife Id post on here cause I figured 4chan wouldn’t sugar coat anything and I wanted to know if my stuff was good or if people are being nice

>>7329733
unless you start at like 5months old you are ngmi sorry bwo

>>7329751
Too bad. I guess there's nothing that can be done about it, then. Nothing at all whatsoever.

Too bad.

>>7329673
Thanks.

>>7329672
I think you did good. Doesn't read as a mistake to me at least, clearly stylisation.

just a little sketch to get myself drawing. I think his head is too thin but I'm not sure

>>7329871
looks like you not even trying anon. Also resize your pics ffs.

>>7329688
more faces i forgot to post before i left

>>7329956
Gaslighter

I think his mouth might be a little too low but I don't feel like redrawing it

>>7329964
What you could do is erase some of the cigar, get your lasso tool and select the mouth that you want to move it to, then draw the rest of the cigar after you have it position that you want.

>>7329569
This actually made me really crave a pear... It's working

>>7329956
evil crabba but you are right about him not resizing pics
>>7329672
SOVL, for me its the shoulder grenade launchers

>>7329968
lasso tool? I've never heard of that. I think I'll go check in krita right now

>>7329971
iirc its called freehand selection tool in krita, feel free to correct me if i'm wrong

>>7329972
oh wow that's super useful, I've just been duplicating layers and erasing what I'm trying to fix. Thanks anon

>>7329971
>>7329972
I couldn't remember the right name for it, but now I know that it's called freehand.
Thank you.

Struggled wtih rolling hills but my landscapes are getting better

>>7329980
Just like almost every feature in that godforsaken app they don't follow established industry practices like calling a fucking lasso tool a lasso tool, wait til you learn about clipping masks

>>7329977
Did you sort out the mouth then?

>>7330017
I think it looks better now. I'll redraw the cigar later

>>7330016
I know what I've done now.
It's called "Lasso" in Clip Studio Paint and "Freehand" in Krita, so I was right enough in it's proper name.

>>7330022
Yeah, it does look better with you moving it like that.

>>7329984
Looks good

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mzO5MbCJZZ4

>>7330038
Using a Pentel pocket brush but it leans toward a thick line.

did you get your daily dose of saturday morning cartoons today?

>>7329733
20 is fine but not 21
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xt2qsqsXefY

Anyone reading Ivan BRunetti's Cartooning, or doing the course?

>>7330051
No.
Are you?

>>7330056
...Why yes, how did you know? I had downloaded a PDF before I bought it outright, he recommends doing some graph-based sketches. Apparently Week 3 and 8 are the most important parts of the course, where they get a sense of what your propensities are.

>>7330061
Too busy to look into it maybe someone else will..

>>7330074
And it never will cuz u were never gonna do it anyway. You'll push it into memory and then zone out in your Barcalounger, being hypnotized by daytime TV for the rest of your life. Don't you talk to me about murder. All it ever took was a downpayment on a Lincoln town car. Or that girl, you can't even call that girl. What the fuck are you doing still driving a cab?

>>7329871
>>7329963
Yeah this sound like gaslighting, so i will elaborate. I think you are able to draw better, it's clear that you got some fundies done.
So just take more time on your sketches and then post it so we can actually give constructive critique.

>>7330124
>so we can actually give constructive critique.

>>7329871
The big bug eyes and clown lips are not doing your head drawings any favors.

>>7330143
>>7330143
>>7330143
>>7330143

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