/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>7116666
>those digits
r8 kot

here you go, still work in progress.

>>7116666
Can't argue with those quads.

>>7116668
The face shoes alot of emotion which is good
The cat is at the more chunkier side of things that plus the short limbs make it feel like a amateurish
You should use a little more reference or ty to get closer to the reference used
Also your like work leaves much to be desired. It fes like you were not sure how to approach It since you draw a million lines for every inch.
The rendering goes also against the volume that the cats shape dictates

You get there

>>7116669
It's a very nice piece. Your skill is way beyond mine and I struggle finding something to really criticizes. Well I don't like the face of the guy but I think that's just personal preference
It almost looks like a sdd for some rainbow 6 clone
Good job anon

>>7116671
Face is a bit flat but like that you try out difficult angles
There is not much else to say aside from that mikus hair should be greener and maybe part of the neck is missing light since the face is so brightly shined on. But that's anime style I guess

Reminds me I have to do some light work myself
Good job guys

Shoot.

>>7116666

>>7116705
Did rosalina always had so long hair? I genuinely don't remember
Aside from that I like chalk style. You are good showing how bright stuff gets and the space background is good as well. Very dreamy
Rosalina her self looks more on the chubbier side since you really put emphasis on her hips without giving her the hight she normally has
Pretty good drawing

>>7116715
I see you are trying to get into clothing so I wonder if it was worth it to draw her body in as much detail as you did.
I know it's still work in progress but shouldn't the corset thin her waist a little more and shouldn't the Vail go more along her hairline?
You also have the typical way of drawing hands that's used by people who are afraid of drawing them. You should study them more
But over all you show promise

>>7116666
fuck me up

>>7116735
I probably should've shown u a piece I finished coloring
thnks i'll keep in mind iur adviced when I lineart it

>>7116805
Cute snail Moe blob. Hands have no detail but that comes with the style but even than I believe you can aim for more detail. Maybe even a different pose.
All in all good work anon

>>7116811
your rendering now shows quite a few mistakes you make. First of the very big one with her arms
The shadow and light make no sense. It really destroys how the piece looks. The way the shadows go from hand to elbow make it look like her arm is twisted backwards
You should shade objects that are next to object like some parts of the fingers and the inside of the elbow that points inwards (but take this with a grain of salt because I myself have not made the jump to colors and shading yet)
I also think the way her waist and right leg are positioned look awkward, I would advice you to look up reference for that
The position of her left foot Is also a little unnatural I feel. Just position your feet in the same position and you will know what I mean.
Also the necklace shines in a bright light so the surrounding chest should be a little brighter i feel to really make it feel like the necklace lolls bright
But credit where credit is due. Her face looks really good ans i liek her hair as well.
Your choice of color is also great I might add. You have a eye for things but still long to go

>>7116826
thank you again anon and I know now that I need to be drawing on a big canvas, i'm going toredo that drawing given what you had said and now I draw on a 8000*8000 canvas and I can already see the difference.
thankyou for your honesty

>>7116666
Here is a sketch (thumbnail sketch) for piece i want to make
I looking to see if composition is interesting enough and what can i do to possibly fix it or make it look more interesting

Let's hear it

Why is he evil? How do I make a pikachu that’s not evil?

>>7116886
What is all this stuff on the background? It's like a schizo rambling but visualized
The tanks can use more detail, I know they are not even half done but the shapes are just too vague you should look at some machinery. Also delete the stickmen and try to make humans properly even if it takes great effort with the size of things
The big akira guy is missing a thumb and his spine dosent line up to his shoulders but im not sure if this is on purpose
But else I dig it

>>7116888
You didnt draw th...
>Clicks on thumbnail
Ohhh
It's a very good copy but I fell like that the leaf that the frog is sitting on could look less than a background asset. Not sure how to put this but where the feet are touching the leaf, this makes kinda makes the frog stand out a little too much, but honestly i could just be retarded here
Otherwise the right leg of the fog is very bright. Was it like this in the photo as well like this? Because it does not totally fit with the rest of the body.
But else this is a really good copy. Good job

>>7116905
Its just the coloring of the eyes. How much black you use instead of gray. You should probably look at how Pikachu is drawn in the official manga for pointers

>>7116909
Thanks for feedback
I'll just clear thing for the schizo ramblings in back
It is supposted to be like another one rising above taking down helicopter shining light on it
Second yes i'll try and draw more real looking humans and i'm working on machinery, like how to draw a tank
I'll take me a bit
For monster he is even to me kinda confusing, he is like centipede monster with arms upper and bug feet but one in back is with elephant like two variations
For spine thing is 100% unintentional
Even in his side profile his spine is still more human like despite appearance
I just don't get what to do to fix
Do i lover the shoulders to match the spine?

>>7116909
here's the base colored I redrew thought ud like to see

>>7116916
Ahhhhh I see now. It's just super confusing because there is another layer behind that just cluttering the sketch but yeah now I see it
About the spine I would say to adjust the spine instead of the upper body but if you feel really freaky you could twist the body and the spine to make it even more weird
Also draw what the other hands are going to do before you finish sketching because this will be a pain when you go into linework

>>7116927
Its really nice but I now actually think you redo the arm. Your shading at first hid it for me but I think the whole position of it could be better
Maybe try pointing the hand more to the pov

>>7116666
Had to crop it for reasons but here you go.

I'm curious now

>>7117136
It's just testicles
You have a good feeling for the weird, the choice of colors is easy on the eyes as well and the way you drew the appendages make it appear like it's moving
Pretty good

>>7117154
It's a nice doodle, you have a eye for beauty without making it all sex sex porn porn porn
Sorry
I always liked the no nose style of anime desu.
The way you drew her breasts in the left shows me that you know where they start and end but the bra(?) The thing that holds the dress is just too symmetrical for that angle
You know what you want but this drawing makes me also think that you are afraid of drawing hands and feet. You should try that, it will only serve to make it look better

>>7117156
Thank you, that's what I like to think my strengths are too. I never like when a drawing feels too grating to look at, unless by intention. I haven't drawn the backside yet but it's supposed to be like a skull with an ass for a mouth where the neck would be, thus the eyeballs.

>>7117158
lol you're right I need some more work on that, I'll try my best critic anon

>>7117167
There are eyeballs?
Maybe you should do the backside

>>7117177
Ohh I didn't realize you posted in one of my other threads before
Glad I can bring you to be the best artist you can though. Keep it up

>>7116666
Go anon go

>>7117182
You can draw and color clothing better than you can draw hands. Try drafting hands in segments first
>ball, cylinder, ball, cylinder
And try to avoid blending in the hand with the arm too seamlessly
Other wise good job

>>7116666
Checked

>>7117187
>>7117214
Thanks guys but reply with drawings next time

its me again
here's a drawing I linearted
>>7116927

I just finished this and posted this to my new art meme account

>>7117266
I don't get the last half of this image since I only watched nardo
There is one criticism and one only(for now)
Construct bodies. You need to do this

>>7117271
The meme is that this is a "puppet master boxing competition", and the scary opponent in blue is the AIPAC. A Jewish political lobby in the US whose candidates win almost every election. If you're not chosen by AIPAC, you simply don't win in American elections.

And I agree about the body. This was meant as a funny meme drawing. Got inspired from an account that makes funny stuff from mspaint and its beloved because if it's poor art skills but loving meme quality.

Okay.

>>7117256
Sorry for the late reply I tried drawing what I wna to tell you but I'm quite bad so uhh you dont get to see it
But basically you need to angle the arm differently that holds the hat. Either the elbow goes farther away from the head your it gets closer in the upper arm shortens because the angle the arm that we see changes

>>7117277
I see

>>7117289
Puppets have more defined knuckles and I fell like the legs are too thin unless you were going for a chris-chan kinda body build

>>7117310
I wasn't going for that, but yea I can see that the legs are too thin. It's the thighs mostly, and I should've emphasized them and the calves more when sketching the dress.

>>7117319
Exactly, I've been lurking around fatfags for better or worse so I know what they like

Okay guys, thread is closed.
I will no longer critique a thing. You have been wonderful today /ic/ but tomorrow or the day after I simply have no time
Good night

>>7116698
R8 my emperor penguin

>>7117344
Threads closed
The head sticks out and dosent blend into the body

>>7117347
>Threads closed
Didn't see that sorry
I see what you mean about the head sticking out, not sure how to fix that really but I did try

>>7116698
newfag

>threads open again
I have some massive time on my hands so post your work my guys
>Threads open

>>7119168
haha you're a clown apu

>>7119168
rate me fellow clown

>>7116666

>>7119174
You certainly have a type
From sketch to painting you are very well trained. You are not the best but you have some very respectable skill as a artist
I say that because I see a lot more room for you to grow, as in making more dynamic pieces practicing poses and angles you struggle with
>very good

>>7119177
Sword an sorcery, check em
Very well trained in muscle and pose. Your inking is also substantial but there is still some white here and there
You also messed up a few lines going over the sketch but inking on paper is something only perfectionists do so I expect you fully to eventually make a piece with zero mistake
>metal
I like it

>>7116666
>>7119168
pretend I posted a drawing of a huge pile of shit.

>>7119192
thanks for the criticism on >>7119177 mine. I think I just need to draw more because I go long periods of time without drawing and then my hands get shaky.
I also sometimes scan my inked arts and colour them on Clip Studio PAINT like this one.

>>7119210
>its a turd / 10

>>7119216
Very cool anon. You definitely should draw since you are very good at it I would say. It will only improve you more until you can call yourself a pro

You need to work on your painting techniques. The sky is going into different shades in very clear intervals, should go over it with your brush more once or twice so it will look softer
You also should work on drawing mire structures to give them a more defined shape in the future. I know the castle is a little obscured from the fire and and smoke but I'm not until sure where the structure starts and where thr mountain ends it was erected on
>Comfy art

douzo

>>7119723
Stop using the bucket tool, I can see the white borders. That is why layers are a thing when you draw digitally
Also give him some pupils, he looks soulless (unless that's what your going for than fuck me I guess)
On the other hand Id say pose and clothing is decent but still rough around the edges
Also his left foot is bigger than the right foot but with that pose it should be the other way around
>decent work

>>7119728
Heavily stylized feet, makes her toes seem very small (or the shoes very pointy) but it's the style of the drawing so I give it a pass
You have good eye for detail and know what belongs where. I especially like the hair clothing amd the nad thingy on her leg. Her lips also look nice
She sits in a void but the tail is under her. It's kinda weird how it's positioned
>very good drawing

>>7119742
Thanks for the critique. I'm still fairly new to digital art and I still haven't found my footing when it comes to coloring my drawings. Why refrain from using the fill tool tho? Doesn't it lay down the base colors faster?

>>7119788
My thinking is because of the white boarders. Or at least fill in and then go around every line to get rid of all of that white. But it's very annoying so I personally dont use the bucket tool

>>7116669
Impressive piece in general, and the textures are lovely. However, his forehead and ears appear to be at a different angle compared to his face, and they look kinda skewed too. Also, the angle of his belt and groin makes his penis look like an innie.

i'm not a coomer artist i prommie i'm just really proud of this atm

>>7119847
>i'm not a coomer artist i prommie
Kek sure bud
Anyway not OP or a beg and I'm not going to critique you either but you need to seriously consider gravity before jumping into illustrations. Her tits are floating as if they have their own gravitational pull.

>>7119868
>>i'm not a coomer artist i prommie
>Kek sure bud
are you saying my drawing is that sensual? :^) i'll take it.
>you need to seriously consider gravity before jumping into illustrations. Her tits are floating as if they have their own gravitational pull.
yeah lowkey i didn't know what to do with her tits.... is it very jarring?

>>7119847
>>7119878
OP here, Im not sure mainly because I don't watch poledancers that much but don't they wear a tighter top like a sport bra of sorts because otherwise the tits will flop out?
Aside from that my first point of critic is the skirt. I ant tell what part is the "skirt" part and where the underwear starts and ends also wouldn't the more lose parts be dragged down by gravity?
The lower legs I feel are a bit thin as well as the knees, they look so far away compared to the rest of the body
Her jaw is very cubical, a slight curve downwards (in that case) would do wonders to make her look a little more feminine
Also I think the shoulders should be a little lower (higher towards her arms)
You have a nice choice of colors, it's easy on the eyes yet striking. Lighting is also decent
>Good job

>>7116666
alright

>>7119936
Rein, I hate to be that guy but you have better drawings than this. I guess you really do like Kluri, huh?

>>7119952
she's my fav toon and I love dark elves...

>>7116666
>satanic doubs

>>7119936
Someone really took anime studies to heart
Over all it's a very good piece but from that angle your one thing makes itself clear, you are not perfect in having her symmetric where it counts
Left ear seems to be lower and bigger than the right one, the golden thing on her bra is slim on the right side and big the left
Also her right hand looks biggert than the left
I'm sorry for the nitpicking but this a really well but together image that the only issues I could find where miniscule.
It's some solid coom bait

>>7120036
You should try to draw on a bigger canvas if you want pixel count to be not visible
The bise is shaded but doesn't cast a shadow on his cheek and left eye hass more light than his right. Nothing is necessarily wrong with that but I can't help to notice
Overall funny

>>7116666
I welcome all criticism

>>7120162
Looks like someone I know

>>7120070
thanks bro, I'm not sure if you really are a beg because your observation is very accurate
but you managed to mention things that no one had before, pretty nice feedback

>>7120162
You have grinded drawing woman well. And your attempt at painting is very decent but I think you can go further.
I mean that you should put more time into rendering the piece to see how far you can take detail and get more accustomed to it
Good job anon

>>7120167
Trust me i am, everything I draw is pretty mediocre and leaves much to desire. That's why Im so observant because I hate my own short comings and want to be better
But alas, it's a fucking step climb

>>7116666
hmm

>>7120201
He looks like the angles egg guy but older and blond, at least thats what i thought
Very good work. You have a good understanding of the basics overall and not anything I dislike in this image
You seem to dip or practice or currently are making comics. Very anime inspired. Reminds me of these French cartoons
I'm almost comfortable to even claim that you have already made it (as long as you are being discovered)
Great job, I have high hopes for your future as an artist