/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>7072523
i would reposition the head so her chin is raised and direct the eyes so she doesn’t look lost/sad. adjust the ponytail so it has weight and flows with the composition. not sure a thigh gap should be visible from this angle unless you exaggerate the twist of the torso. her palm should rest on her hip rather than her fingertips

>>7072523
She looks super super flat

>>7072548
So you think bigger tits would be better?
>>7072535
I was thinking the legs looked off yeah

adventure quest vibes

just fix any errors you can find and finish the picture by tracing it

>>7072582
which ai is that?

ffs gael >>7071459

>>7072523
Soul
>>7072582
Soulless

>>7072583
SD 1.5

>>7072590
seems like they're just arguing about thread users

>>7072523
i would draw miku

>>7072523
I think her arms look kind of fucked up

>>7072582
lol

>>7072523
can you describe what you are drawing and what's your goal with this piece?

>>7072523
I wouldn't.

You're still too early in your learning to delve into rendering. Your anatomy, gesture, and linework are weak, so focus on simpler finishing techniques that allow you to quickly finish work while still making it look good. Focus more on your linework too.

For the next figure, I suggest you copy/study a photo of a nude figure, and then draw your character over the mannequin.

In fact, do that from now on.

>>7072582
Terrible advice. AI can't actually draw properly and is prone to anatomy mistakes. If you're going to trace something to study it, it should be a photograph first, and another artist's work second.

>>7072706
i just want to thank you on behalf of OP for drawing MIKU for me, anon. you have enriched my life and the lives of everyone else here by sharing her she is so precious and her boobs are so very large large.

>>7072706
>>7072523
this proves that rendering and actual drawing skills are the least important part of drawing
OPs design skills are great. the only thing this anon did was take his design and draw/render it (far better then the AI clown did)
Well done

>>7072523
looks nice anon, would like to see you finish it

>>7072706
random pro entering the thread. Blog?

>>7072582
while I am not a fan of AI, I can see a use here, do the opposite of what the AI did. It shows you the most generic end result possible, so you can steer clear from this.

>>7072561
Yea it feels a bit flat, and your right about the leg. Is the right leg a bit behind her? Becuase if it is even with the other leg, it is longer than the left.
Id suggest also putting more weight onto her right arm, she is supporting thw weight of the sword, but currently it looks a bit weightless.
Ask yourself
> if i was holding something like thos swprd with one hand, how would i need to hold it?
If it was me, my left elbo would be pressing against my body to support the weight, as well as the left shoulder would be raised abit.
Right leg should be flat behind in order to better brace the weight.
Try and remember each part of the body will respond to weight in order to support itself

Just my 2 cents.

>>7072561
no, he means that the drawing itself looks flat, not the character. That means there is no 3d form to it, and it looks like she's made of cardboard. It's specially noticeable in her shorts because they look like they were just plastered on top of her instead of being around her.

There's really not a lot to be said about this, it's a boring drawing, with a boring pose, and no storytelling in it. >>7072706 already enhanced it immensely by giving her a different angle and more expressive posing. You can go ahead and render it to your heart's content if you'd like, but I would personally drop this here and take a look into how to draw more 3d looking forms and study gesture/figure drawing.

>>7072535
>>7073007
more like this?
>>7072995
I like the sword design so I'm stealing it

>>7072535
>>7073007
more like this?
>>7072995
I like the sword design so I'm stealing it

forgot the image

>>7072523
try and place the main volumes of the body in a more 3d pose

>>7073047
The sword design is fucking retarded

>>7072929
>OPs design skills are great.
Jesus christ

>>7073129
Post your designs.

what about with some shading on it

>>7073130
nta but you literally can't have anything more generic

>>7073140
You too, post your ground breaking designs.

>>7073047
it's more fucked now go back

>>7073047
>removed butt-fang
racist

>>7073142
I might do in about 8 hours

>>7072582

>>7073142
>>7073130
There's absolutely nothing remotely original about this design.
Op I assume is beginner and its completely fine, but there's no need to blow smoke up his ass acting like fantasy sword woman #3 is groundbreaking.

>>7072992
here's a flat colour, I'll probably finish it tomorrow

>>7073404
very based, work it anon

>>7073424
okay no more tonight for real this time

>>7073546
Why are you polishing a turd?

>>7072523
Make more overlaps, hide part of the sword behind the thighs, hair behind the shoulders, left thigh in front of right thigh, hide the right arm more, things like that. Also match the heels height.

>>7072523
give him a more interesting pose, take

>>7073546
already better than shad

>>7073629
>him

>>7072523
Post in the beg/int general and stop making your own threads for just one drawing.

>>7074431
it's not mentioned in either the stick or the rules that you have to do that, therefore, no

>>7072523
the fact she's just holding a sword doesn't mean anything. why does she have her sword out? is she looking at something dangerous offscreen? fucking think about the things you draw anon, if the character is just striking a pose your art is fucking shit, try to convey character or action through the pose
if you wanna keep that nonsense pose then use contrapposto to make it nicer

>>7073629
really going for that retro 90s anime aesthetic huh

>>7074439
Then keep being cringe af, your call.

>>7074439
>retarded /vt/ranny has no understanding nor respect for generals
how unsurprising

>>7072706
Blog?

>>7072582
Good going, Shad.
>>7073289
Looks like you traced over another shitty AI variant

>>7073139
fellow beginner, but here's how I'd nudge the shading to emphasize the 3d shape
the legs especially were giving me shad vibes, they looked like empty pants to me

remember that objects cast shadows on themselves, and that highlights on round surfaces don't go on the edge unless the light is practically behind the object

>>7074397
use harsher shading
flat surfaces shouldn't have smooth blending

>>7076706
I don't really care enough to go back and fix it but I'll remember that for next time

>>7073011
is this redline a fucking joke? Holy shit, the dunning kruger on this site sometimes, I fucking can't, holy shit, FUCK /ic/

>>7072706

>>7072706
>everyone kneeled out of respect

Absolutely mogged

>>7074431
This thread has created far more content than a fucking post in a general you autistic spaz

>>7077289
you mean the 3 drawings?

>>7077092
why are you so mad anon
did nobody give (You)r redline a reply so you're doing it yourself?