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I wanted to draw someone with interesting appearance but after i finished shading his skin i realized the face rurned out completely different. I suppose i'll learn more i finish it but i already know i won't be satisfied with the result
Also critique please

>> No.7045445

His eyes are not in the same line
Try to use construction to make the skull and make sure the features are alligned properly

>> No.7045452

looks great so far

>> No.7047153

>>7045440
The anatomy is all wrong. Mainly the eyes not being aligned, the ear is too high, and the arm looks like it has three joints and is too small.

Also the shading is a bit weird, but maybe you just aren't finished. If you are going for some type of cel shading, I would recomend that you use a hard edge. If you are going for more real lighting you need to develop it much more.

>> No.7047154

>>7047153
Oh another thing about the arm, seems like your issue is probably that the elbow isnt actually in frame. What I would recomend is that you either commit and draw the whole arm so you can see the proper anatomy and forshortening, or you add a bounding box on another layer on top so you can see what is actually in or out of the frame.

>> No.7047175

>>7045440
A polished turf will still be a turd. It looks nothing like the original, try harder dumb beg

>> No.7047185

>>7045440
>be a beginner artist
>jump right into drawing human
>make a bunch of mistakes, especialy the eyes
>the final drawing result is completely different person from the ref
Why not? do it and then post here.

>> No.7048321

>>7045440
symbol drawing

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7048357

>>7045440
im sorry you are way off with your face.

>> No.7048378

more of a browbone
nose should be closer to edge of face
eyes not on same line
try to start on dark side eye