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Just asking out of curiosity really

>> No.6993856
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>>6993850
consider using clothing to help tell the story/personality of the character

>> No.6993857

use shapes such as but not limited to cubes, cylinders, triangles and once you're more experienced you may even want to try some hedrons
in addition colors

>> No.6993859

>>6993856
based

>> No.6993882

>>6993850
Steven silver courses are good for this and most of the concept he teaches can be applied beyond his own art style.

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>>6993850

>> No.6993885

>>6993850
It's already better than the monstrosities in the OC threads.

>> No.6993886

>>6993883
Kek

>> No.6993912

>>6993856
>>6993883
combine these for a winner.

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>>6993883
>>6993850

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6994199

As a beg, I can't help much with design.

So I inflated ur oc and slapped on a cock.

>> No.6994240

>>6993883
improved.

>> No.6994516

>>6993912
>>6993883
>>6993856
Wheres the nazi with boobs bunny?

>> No.6994749

I suppose that’s coming soon someday

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>> No.6994953

>>6994772
Kys retard

>> No.6995057

>>6994199
SEXO

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I added very little,wanting to preserve the minimalist style. Draw him doing things.

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Alright, here’s my character doing something.

Did you ask this so you can give me critique on how I can improve some poses or facial expression or something else?

>> No.6997152

>>6997065
i suppose you could try to make him a bit more dynamic in his pose, he seems a bit stiff in your example.

>> No.6997154

Can you show me an example of a good dynamic pose?

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>>6997154
This guide looks like it has a lot of overlap with your style. Try something like this out.

>> No.6997627

>>6997065
"Doing Things" means interacting with objects. So not only do you have to draw the character in a specific pose,you have to design the props as well.

1. Sitting at a table drinking a beer.

2. Fishing by a pond.

3. At a barbecue.

4. Jumping into a pool.

Choose one,or all.

>> No.6997638

>>6997065
a nazi and makes rude jokes? my kind of bnuy

>> No.6997728

>>6997614
there's nothing wrong with left

>> No.6998056

Thanks for the example! I’ll try it out, appreciate the help

>> No.6999995

Use AI, ignore the seething autists, just fast track your way to art via machine learning

>> No.7000669

But what soul would you get outta AI?

I mean sure the end results can be amazing at times but it’s kinda a bad route to go in my eyes

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>>7000711
Anon, please tell me more about that small one

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>>7000776

>> No.7000927

>>7000915
She's cute, would have a tea party with her
Good job, anon

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>> No.7002009

>>7001626
What's wrong about Clair, anon?

>> No.7002010

>>7000915
AAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWW

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>>7000915
You know what you have to do next anon

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>>7002015
Not him but I understood.

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>>7000915

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>>6994199
consider using clothing to tell the story of teh character

>> No.7003547

>>6993850
>>6997065
>>7001626
Wait, does that bunny boy even have a name?

>> No.7003553

Yea, it does
However it’s just a joke on my real name

>> No.7003564

>>7003553
So, what the name?

>> No.7003611

I just picked “Jason Bunny” out of anything else in my mind for whatever reason lol

Could’ve had a better name for the character though

>> No.7003628

Add massivve milkers

>> No.7003647

>>7003611
>“Jason Bunny”
Dunno, that doesn't sound right.

>> No.7003661

>>6997728
Many artists tend to compose with that view because that's their first and only option or they can't be bothered to deal with perspective beyond 1pp, it's more of a guide to venture into different POV.
>>7000915
Would let her have my lettuce and carrot salad while she begrudgingly accepts it

>> No.7003664

most unhinged thread on the catalog

>> No.7003668

>>7003664
That just /i/ with high effort

>> No.7004263

>>6997728
True, it's very safe standard pose and angle, that will present your character in "ok" sort of video game customisation menu. The right one simply put more fly. ..just tastier.

>> No.7005122

Use Oc redraw thread next time, anon.

>> No.7005170

Will do lol

>> No.7007565

bump

>> No.7007591

>>7007565
Why you bump nigger?

>> No.7007608

>>7007591
Itt is fun beg

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Is this the thread?
(yeah i know i'm late)

>> No.7010405

>>7010231
very nice

>> No.7010433

>>7010231
>bunny lore gets deeper

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I'm disappointed.

He still hasn't been interacting with anything. Pointing at things doesn't count:objects reflect the culture that has produced them ,so even "sitting at a table drinking a beer" can suggest all kinds of things about the world the characters inhabit. Not to mention portraying the 3d environment through a 2d medium.

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>>6993856
Nice

>> No.7012858

bump