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I decided to give ibis x paint a try for my first digital peice. Any critique?

>> No.6953467

>>6953459
Nice, how old are you?

>> No.6953483

>>6953459
It's cute but try to draw from life or human photos, figure drawing will help you a long ways if you start now and of course continue to draw for fun along side practice. Also I feel like you're too young to be on this board so assuming this isn't bait try to find constructive critique somewhere else until you're older

>> No.6953501

>>6953459
I like her simple blushy anime face, it's charming.

I'd say you chose pretty good colors here, you really cannot go wrong with purple and pink. Though, I would suggest changing the hues of the shading a bit. It seems like you are shading by simply darkening the colors, which can result in some muddiness. Make sure your shaded areas have nice colors as well. In this instance, I would make the shading a bit pinker, to match with your overall color scheme.

Small detail, but her choker does not seem to follow the shape of her neck. I suggest fixing that.

Also, I think it's good that you consistently put the hearts and stars into various areas, it makes the picture a bit more cohesive.

>> No.6953514

For all you /beg/s who are wondering what talent looks like in its early stages: here it is. If you can't make something appealing despite not having advanced fundamentals, it's kind of over, sorry

>> No.6953520

>>6953514
drawing like that won’t allow me to quit my job at Starcucks

>> No.6953529

>>6953520
>wanting to draw as a career
>in 2023
anon...

>> No.6953533

>>6953520
The key word was "early stages"
If this person draws for at least 2 hours a day everyday while sharpening their techniques for the next 5 years they'll be pretty good

>> No.6953536

That looks exactly like how japanese artists used to draw at the beginning before they made it, so I'd say you're on the right track.

>> No.6953606

>>6953459
mid 2000s SOVL in 2023, you don't see that everyday.

Keep it up anon. I recommend studying artists you like and learning fundamentals.

>> No.6953684

>>6953514
pyw or fuck off

>> No.6953746

>>6953684
sure it’s @d***d***

>> No.6953803

>>6953459
GMI, keep going

>> No.6953846

>>6953459
Holy sovl, just don’t hide the hands next time and try to draw them.

>> No.6953856

>>6953459
A lot of soul and lots of skill for being early stages. Don’t listen to the crabs you got a lot of potential.

>> No.6953859

It’s nice to see icfags being nice sometimes.

>> No.6953885

>>6953459
tits or gtfo

>> No.6953921

>>6953459
this is the type of drawing where almost every fundie is already present and from there on all you need to do is polish if anyone understands. keep going

>> No.6953925

>>6953459
zoul...

>> No.6954003

>>6953459
Cute