/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Legs could be more rhythmic, one leg looks stiff and has a smaller foot? Otherwise I like it. Idk why you ask about moe szyslak.

It's a nice pixel art but I think the robotic arm looks a bit strange. I think it's too short and 'stiff' compared to the girl's anatomy.

>>6937467
she's tiny thats for sure. CUTE

>>6937467
She cute, not sure about moe.

>>6937526
This, I'd exaggerate the arm more OP especially for you're doing pixel art.

>>6937821
I love TT so much it's unreal.

>>6937526
>>6937472
>>6937821

I exaggerated the arm more.I thought to give her a hand too that can change features, but that seemed like too much for the concept of "cute girl shoot"

>>6937910
forgot image

>>6937912
It looks better! Are you developing a game?

>>6937467
Samus Aran looking ass.

>>6937912
Looking much better. Just to nitpick but I would see about experimenting with making the shoulder portion of the robot arm much bigger. Asymmetry would help the design stand out from a glance even further.

>>6937923
I've tried. Coding is so fucking difficult . >>6937924
She never leaves my head

>>6937950
>She never leaves my head
Based. Keep her in there.

Let me give you some actual critiques now.
1. Your design has a good start, like the one piece suit and the hair shapes are good, but you should probably give her more to her "cyborg" element and not just the arm, think of something like a light metallic armor like shoulder pads and boots. Give her more elements that visually tell she is a cyborg.
2. Dont be afraid to use Samus as inspiration, you have plenty to work with when it comes to her suitless variants (Zero Suit, Justin Bailey, Ending shots, the mangas, etc...). Pick elements you see that could fit your character well.
3. That said, try to find inspiration from other places as well, or come up with your own workarounds, I only made the Samus comment because I wanted to be silly, but be careful with using her too much as inspiration because people will unironically draw parallels to your character and Samus at this rate.
>>6937912
The arm is an improvement, but dont make the cannon/hand such a small square, shape language makes it look like a sort of mace/mallet and it's kind of disruptive to the overall shape. You may want to use something like a pen shape (large cylindrer with a trapezium at it's tip). Kind of like Samus's own arm cannon lol

Cheers, anon, hope it helps.

>>6937998
This is good advice!

Gave her a more detailed arm

>>6937950
There are a lot of game engines now that use "visual scripting", that's essentially just drag and dropping and linking different scripts. Probably still isn't easy, but isn't as dependent on you knowing anything about coding.
That said, you probably won't be able to make anything TRULY original by programming a game like that, but if you're just making a platformer or something, it should be more than enough.

>>6937467
very moe

>>6938742
Not sure why in gods name I saved as a jpg

>>6938743
Fuck this is incredibly cute! Thank you! <3

>>6938719
I've been using godot which is somewhat easier since its based on python.

>>6938862
Glad you liked in anon!